ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Keep Going! · forum

Sakaue Nachi

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-09-14T16:47:07+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年11月5日 at 7:27:38

Artist: ALiCE'S EMOTiON
Title: Keep Going!
Source: Touhou
Tags: kirisame marisa redalice nomiya ayumi sharlo 恋色マスタースパーク Eiyashou Imperishable Night th08 Heart of Eternity 野宮あゆみ love-colored master spark
BPM: 175
Filesize: 4433kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.46 stars, 70 notes)
Hard (3.5 stars, 245 notes)
LUNATiC (4.72 stars, 380 notes)
Sharlo's Normal (2.23 stars, 136 notes)

Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Keep Going!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1 ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Keep Going!
Click here to download Narcissu's Hard
Next to do: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Dark Flight Dreamer

Easy by me

Normal by Sharlo

Hard by me

LUNATiC by me

Thanks

lkx_Shore
okdesu
CelsiusLK
Ayakura Mei helps me a lot
[Twinkle]
[CSGA]Ar3sgice 年度最佳骗kd233
supersbj
Sellenite
-Nya-
Knotts
KaedekaShizuru
xxdeathx
streeteelf
Number5
Mei
-[Hikari]-
Kazamastar11
Leorda
Momochikun
imoutosan
Nvirjskly
Tarrasky
Flandre_ErMei
Narcissu >,
Sharlo 帮了我最多的，没有瞎萝菊苣，这图不可能rank这么快:3
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Last edited by Sakaue Nachi 2015-04-27T10:50:58+00:00, edited 76 times in total.

Lust

osu! Alumni

2,667 posts

Joined January 2013

Lust 2014-09-19T00:23:24+00:00

orz why cut the mp3 ;w;

beautiful song, neat map!

sjoy

1,024 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2014-09-19T01:29:41+00:00

Lust wrote:
orz why cut the mp3 ;w;

你知道我为什么不做了吗

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-09-19T04:16:21+00:00

Lust wrote:
orz why cut the mp3 ;w;

beautiful song, neat map!

It's hard for me to finish a full size song and keep the quality ;w;

sjoy wrote:
你知道我为什么不做了吗

http://puu.sh/bEVgm/27a894ca1d.jpg

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2014-09-20T05:33:41+00:00

General

Cancel widescreen support if you don't want add storyboard.
Remove Letterbox,Cuz there is no Breaktime.

LUNATIC

Why used 85% volume?...I think it is too noisy,75% volume is enough.

00:07:772 (6) - add clap?feel better.
00:07:943 (1) - add Finish.
00:09:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feel noisy here,Change into Normal-sampleset soft-additions and add whistle.
00:10:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird stream,Change into spinner better imo.
00:44:800 (1) - Change into 1/2 slider is better.
00:51:143 (4,5,6,7,8) - Em,You can try 5hit stream or three 1/2 notes.Sometime,Try different rhythm will have a better effect.
01:03:315 (3) - Change into two 1/2 sliders.
01:05:372 (4) - Remove Finish and use normal-sampleset,add finish in 01:05:543 (1) -
01:05:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Perhaps,You can use sampleset here,ofc 65% volume.
01:06:743 (1) - Change into 1/2 slider,like 00:44:800 (1) - point of view.
01:18:658 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try this?
img
- Goodwork.

Narcissu's Hard

[list:1337]
You have escess green line in 34086.

00:08:016 - Add note here?Will have a better effect imo.
00:33:829 (3) - I know you isn't follow vocal,But start in white line is better imo...

Sharlo's Normal

Nothing,Goodwork.

Other

Maybe you must add easy diff,Normal diff isn't easily..
Goodluck

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-09-20T07:52:08+00:00

sjoy wrote:
Lust wrote:
orz why cut the mp3 ;w;
你知道我为什么不做了吗

我也很討厭剪輯，感覺不尊重作者。考慮一下做滿4分鐘吧。

lkx_Shore wrote:
Narcissu's Hard

You have escess green line in 34086.……fix~
00:08:016 - Add note here?Will have a better effect imo.……額……我覺得二連挺坑的……先放放
00:33:829 (3) - I know you isn't follow vocal,But start in white line is better imo...……ok

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Creator:Sakaue Nachi
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Source:Touhou
Tags:kirisame marisa redalice nomiya ayumi
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okdesu_old

76 posts

Joined November 2012

okdesu_old 2014-09-20T22:23:27+00:00

from Endless modding queue~

sorry for late mod

suggestion
should fix
must fix

[General]

good song
good combo color
BAD MP3
silent hitsound？ヽ(｀Д´#)ﾉ

[Insane]
Rhythm

00:30:486 - add note
00:31:258 - add
00:31:943 (6) - end red tick, add note after
00:37:341 - add
00:38:972 (4,5,1) -
01:04:858 (3) - half size repeat slider
01:05:458 - add
01:09:315 (5,1) -
01:10:686 (6,1) - ↑　similar
01:15:743 - add

Arrange

00:35:886 (4) - move
i think too many note are stacked. maybe better flow if move and use more jump
00:19:429 (2,3,4,1) - example ↑

gl (｀・ω・´)ｼｬｷｰﾝ

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-09-21T03:57:45+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
General
Cancel widescreen support if you don't want add storyboard. fixed
Remove Letterbox,Cuz there is no Breaktime.fixed

LUNATIC
Why used 85% volume?...I think it is too noisy,75% volume is enough. changed to 80%
00:07:772 (6) - add clap?feel better. fixed
00:07:943 (1) - add Finish.
00:09:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feel noisy here,Change into Normal-sampleset soft-additions and add whistle. lower volume
00:10:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird stream,Change into spinner better imo.
00:44:800 (1) - Change into 1/2 slider is better.
00:51:143 (4,5,6,7,8) - Em,You can try 5hit stream or three 1/2 notes.Sometime,Try different rhythm will have a better effect. changed to 2 circles
01:03:315 (3) - Change into two 1/2 sliders. fixed
01:05:372 (4) - Remove Finish and use normal-sampleset,add finish in 01:05:543 (1) -
01:05:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Perhaps,You can use sampleset here,ofc 65% volume. fixed
01:06:743 (1) - Change into 1/2 slider,like 00:44:800 (1) - point of view.
01:18:658 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try this? I deleted the stream
img
Goodwork.

Other
Maybe you must add easy diff,Normal diff isn't easily.. ask BAT later
Goodluck

Thank you for modding

okdesu wrote:
from Endless modding queue~

sorry for late mod

suggestion
should fix
must fix

[General]
good song
good combo color
BAD MP3
silent hitsound？ヽ(｀Д´#)ﾉ yup，I lowered the volume
[Insane]
Rhythm
01:15:743 - add I added in 01:16:086

gl (｀・ω・´)ｼｬｷｰﾝ

other no changed Thanks (｀・ω・´)

Last edited by Sakaue Nachi 2014-09-21T04:44:01+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2014-09-21T04:41:18+00:00

Hello there from my queue

[Lunatic]

00:09:658 (3,4,5) - You can use high spacing here
00:20:629 (2,3,4,5,6,5) - Fix little overlap there and this should looks nice
00:35:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ctrl+G and you will get more nice rhythm since I find that these beat 00:35:543 - 00:35:886 - aren't emphasized but these 00:36:229 - 00:36:572 - do emphasized it good to end slider at unemphasize beat
00:38:286 - 00:38:629 - should use circles here if you intend to follow vocal but the vocal sound strong so it nice to follow vocal here
00:54:743 (2,3) - DS 1.5 is enough , I guess the beat at (3) isn't that strong
01:09:143 (4,2) - Stack fro better cosmetic
Seems like rhythm can be better just listen to the music closely and try to think what type of pattern suit for the beat there
Strong beat does really nice for using clickable note while weak beat fit for low spacing and slider end

[Narcissu's Hard]

00:10:858 (2,3) - Should combine into one repeat slider http://puu.sh/bHwtO/4172227b63.png
00:12:743 (3,4,5,6) - 1/4 slider are somehow a bit challenge for Hard , I guess
01:14:800 (4) - Ctrl+G I think spacing is a litte bit too high
This diff is fine for me

[Sharlo's Normal]

00:40:172 - Add a note here
00:47:029 (2,3) - Blanket
01:01:429 - Add a note here
I'm not sure that is DS 1.4 too high for Normal but I see that the star diff is 2.24 so I guess it fine

If you want this to get ranked
From ranking criteria:The difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order. If your mapset has two difficulties, one of them cannot be an Insane or Expert. The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.
You need one more diff that <2.00 star diff to get this ranked, I guess

That's all
Good luck

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-09-21T07:15:06+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
Hello there from my queue

[Lunatic]
00:09:658 (3,4,5) - You can use high spacing here changed a little
00:20:629 (2,3,4,5,6,5) - Fix little overlap there and this should looks nice fixed
00:35:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ctrl+G and you will get more nice rhythm since I find that these beat 00:35:543 - 00:35:886 - aren't emphasized but these 00:36:229 - 00:36:572 - do emphasized it good to end slider at unemphasize beat fixed
00:38:286 - 00:38:629 - should use circles here if you intend to follow vocal but the vocal sound strong so it nice to follow vocal here
00:54:743 (2,3) - DS 1.5 is enough , I guess the beat at (3) isn't that strong
01:09:143 (4,2) - Stack fro better cosmetic fixed
Seems like rhythm can be better just listen to the music closely and try to think what type of pattern suit for the beat there
Strong beat does really nice for using clickable note while weak beat fit for low spacing and slider end
That's all
Good luck

Thank you :3

Ayakura Mei

156 posts

Joined September 2011

Ayakura Mei 2014-09-26T07:47:27+00:00

Good luck for first rank

EDIT：刚才看了下LUNATiC发现了一个问题：
就是你00:13:424 (1) - 到00:35:367 (1) - 这一段用镲作为普通击打音效表现的是在inst方面然而你的节奏却是跟着vocal来的
这样就会出现一个问题就是节奏会混乱比如00:26:110 (2,3,4,5) - 这种连打你放慢来听得话就会感觉节奏有问题
还有这种00:33:310 (6) - 这个地方其实是没任何音的如果是用你这个镲音你应该加在00:33:224 (6) - 这个位置
00:23:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 像这种的用镲就比较合适
所以这里建议你就是把除了00:23:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 像这类连打的地方保留镲的音效其他地方还是用默认音效作为普通击打音效会比较好
或者如果想要镲的音效全程覆盖的话那么有些pattern要改下才行完全按照inst去走才不会出现问题不过那样工作量肯定没有上面那种方法大

00:38:795 (3,4) - 这个这样的话接后面的slider感觉不顺改成这样好点

SPOILER

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-09-26T13:41:55+00:00

Ayakura Mei wrote:
Good luck for first rank

EDIT：刚才看了下LUNATiC发现了一个问题：
就是你00:13:424 (1) - 到00:35:367 (1) - 这一段用镲作为普通击打音效表现的是在inst方面然而你的节奏却是跟着vocal来的
这样就会出现一个问题就是节奏会混乱比如00:26:110 (2,3,4,5) - 这种连打你放慢来听得话就会感觉节奏有问题
还有这种00:33:310 (6) - 这个地方其实是没任何音的如果是用你这个镲音你应该加在00:33:224 (6) - 这个位置
00:23:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 像这种的用镲就比较合适
所以这里建议你就是把除了00:23:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 像这类连打的地方保留镲的音效其他地方还是用默认音效作为普通击打音效会比较好
或者如果想要镲的音效全程覆盖的话那么有些pattern要改下才行完全按照inst去走才不会出现问题不过那样工作量肯定没有上面那种方法大

00:38:795 (3,4) - 这个这样的话接后面的slider感觉不顺改成这样好点
SPOILER

fixed & thx for providing me the hitsound

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

[Twinkle] 2014-09-28T13:27:38+00:00

[Normal]
OK

[Hard]
音量有点小，特别是00:13:424 (1) - 开始其他没什么问题

[Lunatic]
总体上来说排列上没有什么可以说的，但是想要到能rank的水平梗还是少了一点，比方说这个难度里单点的摆放比较单一，偶尔一需要一些位置变化不是很大的单点或者是在原地的单点。还有就是回转滑条除了1/4的有用到以外，难度里比较长的滑条都没有使用回转。虽然有00:47:710 (1,2) - 这样的3/4滑条+一个note的梗，但是却完全没有3/4滑条+1/2滑条或者是1/2滑条+1/4拍note+1/2滑条。另外难度上起伏也不是太大，比如从这里开始的低沉部分使用较小的间距多使用滑条，或者回转滑条，然后到KIAI的时候再加大一些间距，把要强调的节拍提现出来。滑条造型上也可以多样化一点。。。。

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-09-28T16:57:54+00:00

[Twinkle] wrote:
[Lunatic]
总体上来说排列上没有什么可以说的，但是想要到能rank的水平梗还是少了一点，比方说这个难度里单点的摆放比较单一，偶尔一需要一些位置变化不是很大的单点或者是在原地的单点。还有就是回转滑条除了1/4的有用到以外，难度里比较长的滑条都没有使用回转。虽然有00:47:710 (1,2) - 这样的3/4滑条+一个note的梗，但是却完全没有3/4滑条+1/2滑条或者是1/2滑条+1/4拍note+1/2滑条。另外难度上起伏也不是太大，比如从这里开始的低沉部分使用较小的间距多使用滑条，或者回转滑条，然后到KIAI的时候再加大一些间距，把要强调的节拍提现出来。滑条造型上也可以多样化一点。。。。

感谢方向性建议，修改中(´･ω･`)

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-09-29T11:52:50+00:00

lunatic:
01:18:053 (1,2) - 这里感觉反过来比较好

Narcissu's Hard:
一个hard 我觉得每段结尾那两个跳有点大
od6吧

我看了半天觉得挺好的没啥能挑的蜡烛

edit:
lunatic
00:24:395 (1) - blanket没做好
00:29:881 (1) - blanket的和前面的太近了, 放远一点滑条显得软一些
00:50:453 (1) - blanket没走好
01:00:910 (4,5) - 建议放在这里 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2083828
01:07:081 (2) - 上面的串blanket没做好

其实我觉得blanket什么的没多大的影响啊除了特别难看的..

还有01:06:707 (1) - 这个折返看不清

supersbj

5 posts

Joined October 2010

supersbj 2014-09-29T14:20:03+00:00

irc mod

22:07 supersbj: 00:04:853 (5) -
22:07 Sakaue Nachi: 现在是不是3/4滑条经常被un
22:07 supersbj: bushi
22:08 supersbj: 00:07:767 (6) -
22:08 supersbj: stack with 00:05:710 (2) -
22:08 supersbj: 00:10:338 (7) -
22:10 supersbj: 00:10:338 (7) - 128,172
22:13 supersbj: 00:16:167 (1) - 352,264
22:14 supersbj: 00:23:710 (7,8) - 改成四个单点
22:15 Sakaue Nachi: 卧槽这么丧病
22:15 Sakaue Nachi: 00:10:338 (7) - 
22:15 Sakaue Nachi: pre2.7 next 3.27
22:15 Sakaue Nachi: 现在我都觉得大
22:16 supersbj: 才4.7星
22:16 Sakaue Nachi: 之前就是有个h 和 i难度差太大
22:16 Sakaue Nachi: 被un了
22:17 Sakaue Nachi: 3.5 5.1
22:17 supersbj: 放心 你这个不会
22:17 Sakaue Nachi: 最好不要过4.9
22:18 supersbj: 00:27:995 (6) - 252，92
22:19 supersbj: 00:27:653 (5) - 108 128
22:19 supersbj: 00:34:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 你这个能不能做好看点
22:20 Sakaue Nachi:   怎样算好看。。
22:20 Sakaue Nachi: 现在感觉还行啊
22:20 Sakaue Nachi: _(:3」∠)_
22:20 supersbj: 还行≠漂亮
22:20 supersbj: 用slider拉
22:20 Sakaue Nachi: 我就是用slider转换的
22:20 supersbj: 00:40:510 (7) -
22:22 supersbj: 那敢问00:34:681 (1) - 在不在你拉的slider上
22:22 Sakaue Nachi: 这个就不是啊
22:22 supersbj: 00:44:624 (1) - NC
22:23 supersbj: 所以丑
22:23 Sakaue Nachi: 这种很正常啊最后那个滑条不和前面成弧线
22:23 Sakaue Nachi: 我看很多图都有
22:26 Sakaue Nachi: 00:27:995 (6) - 这个摆哪里太远了 我先试下 等下你打下看看感觉
22:26 Sakaue Nachi: 和原来有后文
22:26 Sakaue Nachi: 哦
22:27 supersbj: 00:53:538 (2,4) - Ctrl+G
22:27 supersbj: 啥后文
22:27 Sakaue Nachi: 还改了前面一个
22:28 supersbj: 觉得太远可以近一点 那个2 4的
22:28 supersbj: 00:56:795 (1) - NC
22:28 supersbj: 01:01:767 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
22:29 Sakaue Nachi: 2 4那里换了感觉flow不太好啊 我test看上去
22:29 Sakaue Nachi: 先改等下打打吧orz
22:30 supersbj: 01:11:710 (3,4,5,6,7) - 老实说这种排列真的用太多了 很新手很捞
22:30 Sakaue Nachi: 求推荐
22:30 Sakaue Nachi: 好像是多了点
22:30 Sakaue Nachi: _(:3」∠)_
22:31 supersbj: 01:05:710 (2) - 440 84
22:31 supersbj: 01:06:053 (4) - 460 8
22:32 supersbj: 01:10:510 (4) - 87 267
22:33 supersbj: 01:10:338 (3) - 192 176
22:33 Sakaue Nachi: 对了 你发第一个图是哪里的
22:34 supersbj: 01:12:224 (7) - 232 212
22:34 supersbj: 00:23:710 (1) -
22:34 supersbj: 第一个图

Sellenite

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Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-09-30T11:27:46+00:00

[General]

白色太瞎眼，默认皮肤对着这个bg根本读不了图，换一个
再做个easy

[LUNATiC]

00:10:307 (7) - 放在163、107，这个和56不是同一类梗就不要放在一起了
00:11:336 (1) - 这个NC取消吧，没什么必要
00:11:679 (5) - NC
00:12:793 (3) - NC
00:17:336 (8,1) - 这个连打前面有拖音，我觉得滑条在这里比较适合，节奏不像这个00:22:822 (8) -
SPOILER
00:18:193 (7) - NC，你后面的也NC了，统一一下
00:28:307 (8,1) - 同理
00:38:079 (1) - 头加finish比较好听，这段finish整段起不错
00:39:450 (1) - 同上
01:17:507 (2) - NC

[Narcissu's Hard]

00:02:421 (1) - 头加finish
00:20:079 (3) - ctrl+g？多爽
00:38:079 (1) - 头加finish，整段起才好听
00:39:450 (1) - 同上
00:44:250 (3,1) - 弄开点，变成像00:11:250 (3,1) - 一样，才爽
00:46:993 (3) - 268,68
01:06:193 (3,1) - 也是跳吧
01:12:022 (4) - 这个前面没说，我觉得ctrl+g更适合。顺便我建议你，01:08:250到最后直接全部ctrl+h，现在看上去几乎完全复制，很不爽的

[Sharlo's Normal]

00:35:336 这条绿线的vol提到60，现在几乎听不出clap
00:40:822 这条绿线的vol提到65
01:00:536 (2,3) - 跟完鼓又跟人声非常别扭，改为这样
SPOILER
01:06:536 (3) - NC

都做得很好的

Sharlo

667 posts

Joined May 2012

Sharlo 2014-09-30T13:01:42+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
[General]
再做个easy 最低难度2.0stars以下不需要Easy
[Sharlo's Normal]
00:35:336 这条绿线的vol提到60，现在几乎听不出clap √
00:40:822 这条绿线的vol提到65 √
01:00:536 (2,3) - 跟完鼓又跟人声非常别扭，改为这样保留
SPOILER
01:06:536 (3) - NC √

Thx

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-09-30T14:42:07+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
lunatic:
01:18:053 (1,2) - 这里感觉反过来比较好现在还行啊

Narcissu's Hard:
一个hard 我觉得每段结尾那两个跳有点大改小了
od6吧猴

我看了半天觉得挺好的没啥能挑的蜡烛

edit:
lunatic
00:24:395 (1) - blanket没做好
00:29:881 (1) - blanket的和前面的太近了, 放远一点滑条显得软一些
00:50:453 (1) - blanket没走好
01:00:910 (4,5) - 建议放在这里 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2083828 现在也行啊，其他都改了
01:07:081 (2) - 上面的串blanket没做好

其实我觉得blanket什么的没多大的影响啊除了特别难看的..

还有01:06:707 (1) - 这个折返看不清

Sellenite wrote:
[General]
白色太瞎眼，默认皮肤对着这个bg根本读不了图，换一个之后再想想重新选色
再做个easy 问过bat不用了
[LUNATiC]
00:10:307 (7) - 放在163、107，这个和56不是同一类梗就不要放在一起了 fixed
00:11:336 (1) - 这个NC取消吧，没什么必要 fixed
00:11:679 (5) - NC fixed
00:12:793 (3) - NC fixed
00:17:336 (8,1) - 这个连打前面有拖音，我觉得滑条在这里比较适合，节奏不像这个00:22:822 (8) - 这里不想跟人声
SPOILER
00:18:193 (7) - NC，你后面的也NC了，统一一下 fixed
00:28:307 (8,1) - 同理
00:38:079 (1) - 头加finish比较好听，这段finish整段起不错 fixed
00:39:450 (1) - 同上 fixed
01:17:507 (2) - NC fixed
[Narcissu's Hard]
00:02:421 (1) - 头加finish fixed
00:20:079 (3) - ctrl+g？多爽保留
00:38:079 (1) - 头加finish，整段起才好听 fixed
00:39:450 (1) - 同上 fixed
00:44:250 (3,1) - 弄开点，变成像00:11:250 (3,1) - 一样，才爽时间间隔不同
00:46:993 (3) - 268,68 fixed
01:06:193 (3,1) - 也是跳吧没改
01:12:022 (4) - 这个前面没说，我觉得ctrl+g更适合。顺便我建议你，01:08:250到最后直接全部ctrl+h，现在看上去几乎完全复制，很不爽的这都被你发现。。。fixed

都做得很好的

感谢mod和射星

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-09-30T16:17:05+00:00

一開始你自作主張把音效下了我就覺得很無語了……我一般都是不跟原曲的……我覺得和原曲寫一樣有點沙比……就像女孩子穿了兩件一樣的外套出門。我更傾向一套額外的……標準而規範的音效。你下的也辛辛苦苦的而且我覺得也不錯就沒說啥……音效方面你幫我改我也沒意見……排版你動了我就覺得不能忍……這樣你直接把前綴去掉當你自己做的好了……每段結尾的兩個3.0DS的note跳我都是右上往左下讓用數位板的玩家打的爽用的，你一個ctrl+h就直接反人類了啊少年……

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