Kristine Sa + DJ Jinnai - Dearest (Remix)

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Topic Starter
spboxer3
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月16日 at 下午 05:35:45

Artist: Kristine Sa + DJ Jinnai
Title: Dearest (Remix)
Source: Inuyasha
Tags: ayumi hamasaki
BPM: 170.4
Filesize: 3012kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.73 stars, 217 notes)
  2. Normal (2.92 stars, 93 notes)
  3. Spinboxer (4.9 stars, 333 notes)
  4. Taiko (4.83 stars, 505 notes)


Download: Kristine Sa + DJ Jinnai - Dearest (Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 4th Rank map~
yeah~this 犬夜叉 right \:D/
Hope you like this song~

Edit: change name at 2011/12/16 17:31 (GMT+8)
Please redownload after this time >"<
Alace
back to WIP
Uan
加油~
Star!!
Topic Starter
spboxer3

Uan wrote:

加油~
Star!!
thanks mod in IRC
KanaRin
加油~
Irc modde (?)
-[ ix Ishida xi ]-
taiko難度好像快了1/4拍?
Topic Starter
spboxer3
bakabaka
:) mod in irc
20:22 <bakabaka> : 01:28:261- :O
20:22 <bakabaka> : 要不要補個note:3
20:22 <bakabaka> : 還有這:O 01:29:670-
20:23 <bakabaka> : 感覺這邊突然變稀好寂寞:3
20:24 <spboxer3> : lol
20:24 <bakabaka> : 而且是重音地方~加了感覺很爽:D
20:25 <bakabaka> : 00:45:128-這裡要不要加個Note放finish :O
20:25 <spboxer3> : loool
20:25 <bakabaka> : 然後spin往後拉到藍線上:O?
20:25 <spboxer3> : 等等 我音效全無阿
20:25 <bakabaka> : 咱不會MOD~桑新:3
20:25 <bakabaka> : 恩
20:25 <bakabaka> : 所以看要不要補個note >u<
20:27 <bakabaka> : 看這 01:16:642-要不要移到前面白線01:16:466-上ww
20:27 <bakabaka> : 這樣也可以呢:D
20:27 <bakabaka> : 然後01:16:466-跳:3
EvianBubble
Hi~ Sorry for the super super late mod >_<

General
Hitsounds are too loud, I'd say 70% works nicely
Check ALL your diffs and RESNAP where needed
MOVE FIRST TIMING SECTION TO 00:09:916. Very important! Your "downbeats" are now currently on beat 3 so it feels funky D:
Can you find a different mp3? This one is fading out at the end and is a bit strange ...
00:47:240 - Kind of feeling a 0.5 / slowdown section here but your choice I suppose
01:09:071 - Remove kiai time? I don't think it fits starting here
01:20:339 - I think here would be a better place for Kiai

Normal
Your claps are kind of in weird places lol
00:10:613 (1) - Would change this to finish
00:16:597 (2) - Whistle
Until 00:21:888 - I'd recommend changing your claps so they all land on beat 3
00:22:582 (1) - Finish
00:23:638 (2) - Clap
00:24:697 (1) - Whistle
00:28:215 (1) - Finish
00:29:271 (2) - Clap on beginning, whistle on end
00:33:848 (1) - Finish
00:34:904 (2) - Clap on beginning and end and end of (3)
00:39:481 (1) - Finish
00:45:114 (1) - Finish
(Sorry I'm lazy. Try to do the clap thing and add more hitsounds where appropriate ... I can see a lot of them haha XD)
00:49:345 (3) - Make into a slider 2 beats long and repeat (delete (4) obviously)? I feel it fitting better
00:51:451 (5) - Remove clap
00:57:788 (1) - Finish
From here on I would recommend starting the clap pattern again but lower volume maybe 50% or 60%
01:14:686 (1) - Finish
01:22:796 (3) - Clap (do the clap thing again lol)
01:25:952 (1) - Finish

Hard
Unfortunately I am a poor player so please keep this in mind you don't have to follow everything I say here :3
00:39:494 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - May be poor sightreading skills but I found this very confusing D:
00:51:642 (9) - Delete
00:56:923 (9) - I would delete this and extend (8) to where it is
00:58:332 (2) - Delete
01:00:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like this combo a lot XD ('Cos it's easy LOL)
01:04:670 (4) - Extend half a beat longer and delete (5)
01:14:705 (3) - Finish
01:16:466 - Maybe add note here?
01:17:522 (1) - This combo as well, I like it :)
01:37:240 (5) - New combo
01:36:184 (2, 3) - Delete them both and put a slider starting at 01:36:360 for half a beat. I think this works really well :D
01:41:466 (1,2,3) - Meh, not too sure how I feel about this last combo :S Don't really think the jumps are that necessary~

Sorry I am too noob to pass spinboxer T_T

Overall, I think the mapping is solid, but hitsounds need a lot more work in Normal IMO. They were much better in Hard (at least, to my ears). Important things to do are listed in general but RESNAP and CHANGE FIRST TIMING SECTION!!!

Again, sorry for delays T_T

Good luck! :3
Topic Starter
spboxer3
ok~that's done :3
AoiX
给姐笑个先~

(´._.`)\('́⌣'̀ )Aoi's Mod


General
  1. 能再懒一点咯!分明是这么能发挥绿线作用的曲子却只有这么几根线!帮你做了份音量调节设定
    [TimingPoints]
    10621,352.112676056338,4,2,1,50,1,0
    12029,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
    14846,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
    17663,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
    20480,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
    22592,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
    26113,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
    26818,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
    27522,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
    28226,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
    31747,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
    33156,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
    33860,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
    37381,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
    38085,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
    38790,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
    39494,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
    43015,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
    44423,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
    46536,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
    69071,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
    80339,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
    97240,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
    98649,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
    100057,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
    101466,-100,4,2,1,30,0,1
    102874,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
  2. 鸡肋的osb文件而且还是两份这是闹哪样?

Spinboxer
  1. 00:28:402 (2)&00:29:987 (2) - 这两个做个叠加吧
  2. 00:41:959 (3) - 左移两格
  3. 01:31:606 (1) - 开头finish

Hard
  1. 保持Kiai时间一致(继续粘贴代码吧~
  2. clap效果好怪。。。

Normal
  1. 滚轮滚下来没什么问题
喵~卖个萌
Ulysses
Awesome!
Great Job Sp3~
Keep on going!
This is the best map you mapped until now.
SiU_LeAf
盒子加油~~
小葉modding和mapping也很弱, 有錯的話就無視吧~
不給kd也可以的

[normal]
00:38:085 (2) - 不要NC?因為小葉看著這兩個note應該是一組的
01:07:663 (1,1) - 小葉有點擔心作為這個map最簡單的diff, 這樣能不能rank
01:42:874 (1) - 不要NC, 據說這樣的NC會被說無意義的!

[Hard]
kiai time和其他diff不一樣
01:06:782 (1,1) - 不要NC?然後
01:08:015 (2) - add NC?
01:22:275 (6) - 弄平滑一點?

[Spinboxer]
00:29:987 (2) - 感覺這個的軌道有點被太擋住了
00:58:508 (3) - 多加一點在紅點後?
kioukiou
Taiko's timing and tag is different from other diffs.
Fix it plz.
Others are fine to me.
Topic Starter
spboxer3

kioukiou wrote:

Taiko's timing and tag is different from other diffs.
Fix it plz.
Others are fine to me.
12:31 <kioukiou> : Taiko跟其他diff的timing不一樣
12:31 <kioukiou> : 還有tag也是
12:31 <spboxer3> : 嗯嗯好的!
12:31 <kioukiou> : 感覺沒什麼問題
12:33 <spboxer3> : 話說QQ 你知道犬夜叉該怎麼翻嗎?
12:34 <kioukiou> : 照音翻吧
12:34 <spboxer3> : 幫我貼個post~>"< 用savelog 然後貼一下 我給個KD
12:34 <kioukiou> : Inuyasha
12:34 <spboxer3> : 麻煩你了>"<!!
12:35 <spboxer3> : 我缺mod的post...
12:35 <kioukiou> : 噗
12:35 <kioukiou> : 等等喔
12:36 <spboxer3> : 感謝了>"<!!!
12:39 <kioukiou> : 好了
12:39 <spboxer3> : 謝謝!!給kd了
12:39 <spboxer3> : 我savelog一下~
Breeze
Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

Timing

  1. Offset : 10710 (-15), yours are too late

Spinboxer

  1. 00:30:076 (2) - Hard to see the slider path while playing, might be confusing
  2. 00:30:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part confuse me :/ (1,2,3,4) are fine, from (5) on, it become confusing IMO maybe just for me

Rest are fine, call me back for a recheck when you done changes
Topic Starter
spboxer3

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

Timing

  1. Offset : 10710 (-15), yours are too late
  2. ok

Spinboxer

  1. 00:30:076 (2) - Hard to see the slider path while playing, might be confusing
  2. ok
  3. 00:30:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part confuse me :/ (1,2,3,4) are fine, from (5) on, it become confusing IMO maybe just for me
  4. sorry~I think this fine!


Rest are fine, call me back for a recheck when you done changes
oh~thx 微風>"<
Breeze
Fun map
have fun with your bubble
Garven
[General]
Offset should be at 11413 or 10005 to have the downbeat on the correct time. This shouldn't unsnap anything.
mp3 fadeout feels really early. It'd be better if you started the fadeout at 01:42:962 -

[Normal]
00:33:245 (1) - Remove new combo
00:44:512 (1) - ^
01:09:512 (1) - Too soon after a spinner.

[Hard]
00:37:822 (4,1) - This jump is kinda large
01:06:871 (1,1) - Remove new combo
01:16:555 - Feels really empty here
01:32:400 (2) - I was expecting this to be at 01:32:224 - heh. If you do this, add a beat at 01:32:752 -
01:35:921 (1,2,3,4) - Rather sudden and huge jumps for this kind of difficulty. Tone 'em down a it please.

[Taiko]
Having a decrescendo as the song fades out would be neat, but otherwise this is fine.
Garven
Set Normal's offset to 10005, not 10004. =P

Check to be sure nothing is unsnapped after you change before uploading please.

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