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Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei
okay, thanks :D
I'll update it when I have time
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Ringating
from my queue:
I actually had this done a couple days ago but forgot to post >.>

I smoothed the edges of the text/kana/stuff, since it was somewhat jagged and unsightly. the background behind the characters seemed like it had been upscaled from something else, as it was pretty artifact-heavy. In order to lessen that, I extracted the characters and blurred the layer beneath them, so the background would appear out of focus in order to hide the crap. I also softened the characters slightly in order to have them better blend in with the editing background. Here is the new image:no kudosu
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:
I actually had this done a couple days ago but forgot to post >.> np lol

I smoothed the edges of the text/kana/stuff, since it was somewhat jagged and unsightly. the background behind the characters seemed like it had been upscaled from something else, as it was pretty artifact-heavy. In order to lessen that, I extracted the characters and blurred the layer beneath them, so the background would appear out of focus in order to hide the crap. I also softened the characters slightly in order to have them better blend in with the editing background. Here is the new image:no kudosu
it looks much better now
yea i kinda force the background to upscale cuz i can't find a hq one orz
thanks a lot :)

edit: updated the background
Fushimi Rio
Sorry for delay. From queue.

[Insane]

00:13:527 (8) - delete?
00:17:534 (2,3,4,1) - I don't understand this flow...

Good diff 0 0

[Hard]

00:18:767 (2,3,4) - keep the ds same
00:24:932 (5) - too close to 3
01:10:753 (5) - ^

[Aika]

00:58:014 (1) - x208 y300?

[Normal]

00:42:397 (5) - stack to 3

[Easy]

00:21:849 (3,4) - fix the blanket

Not much to say._. star and good luck
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei

imoutosan wrote:

Sorry for delay. From queue.
[Hard]

00:18:767 (2,3,4) - keep the ds same didn't realize the distance, fixed
00:24:932 (5) - too close to 3 moved a bit
01:10:753 (5) - ^ ^

[Normal]

00:42:397 (5) - stack to 3 i think you mean 4, but keep

[Easy]

00:21:849 (3,4) - fix the blanket don't think there was a problem with the blanket, fixed it a bit tho

Not much to say._. star and good luck
thanks for mod and star

modified a bit on easy on my own
Iceskulls
Hi

[General]
  1. I see you don't have any SB so uncheck wide screen support maybe
  2. Maybe you need to remove TV size at title because I think the album of this song is released and the actual song name doesn't has tv size in it
  3. offset=474 pretty nice for me
[Kibbleru's Insane]
  1. 00:00:480 (1) - I see that you didn't intend to emphasis 2nd white tick but I think it plays a bit awkward because you ending at red tick which is somehow feel emphasized to be maybe you can try these
  2. 00:08:699 (1) - Finish at the head sound nice for me here
  3. 00:04:589 (1,2,3,4) - Aesthetic-wise make this curve beautiful like 00:03:767 (1,2,3,4) - and this should flow pretty nicier
  4. 00:41:575 - I see this part here you try to emphasis vocal here maybe this rhythm might make this play better
  5. 00:46:301 (1) - Don't know why you skip downbeat here 00:46:507 - but it might sound nice if you map that downbeat this might make this play better
  6. 01:02:945 (1,2) - Notice that (1) you put emphasis in vocal so why not do the same for (2) too? Overall this maps play pretty well for me some 1/4 notes actually feel a bit weird for me but I guess that fine
    wow such GD , so quallity GD ;)

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:274 (1) - I suggest to delete this it a bit too confusing for Hard since players would be too late to click the next note after this and it pretty overmapped tho
  2. 00:00:480 (2,3) - Blanket a bit off here
  3. 00:01:712 (4) - Small inconsistent in spacing here use DS 1.2x
  4. 00:02:945 (6) - ^ I don't know why you change DS suddenly here but try not to change it a lots in Hard or it may not look like Hard
  5. 00:05:000 - Don't know why you skip this beat here but it might play better if you add a note here
  6. 00:09:110 (2,3) - Aesthetic-wise stack properly at tail
  7. 00:09:521 (3) - I prefer to end this on red tick it play much better
  8. 00:16:096 (4) - Ctrl+G and this might flow better imo
  9. 00:21:233 (5) - ^
  10. 00:27:192 (2) - ^
  11. 01:01:301 (1,2) - This overlap pretty bad for me since you overlap (2)'s tail make it a bit hard to looks at it
  12. 01:09:726 (2) - I would delete this note so it play nicier for Hard and also see that you emphasis vocal here make the rhythm much more consistent imo
  13. 01:12:192 (4) - Small inconsistent in spacing here use DS 1.2x
    You probably need to work on rhythm more because I find that some are a bit too complex for Hard if you find some place good to place slider don't hesitate to put it because I find that some part really suit well for slider in Hard but you didn't use sliders there and try to not changing DS too much here too or it might not a Hard diff
[Aika's Normal]
  • You probably need to nerf this because it exceed Normal star limit a lots http://puu.sh/c9eWz/4c193f6e91.png the way to nerf this is
    1.Decrease the number of the notes
    2.Extend some sliders
    I think you overmapped Normal a bit tho you need to put notes only on the emphasized beat that you think everyone can hear it at 100% speed and I think DS 1.4x is bit too high for Normal I would use only 1.0x DS for Normal I recommend you read the article about Normal here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal it might help you a lots
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:699 (4) - I would curve this like this so it will flow better for Normal
    You can make flow a bit easier but I guess that fine so overall this diff pretty solid for me
[Easy]
  1. 00:18:973 (4,5) - Line up this better so it form a basic flow for Easy
  2. 00:20:206 (1,2) - A bit complex flow for beginners I would make the flow here basic like this
  3. 00:26:781 (1,2) - I would make the flow basic like this
  4. 00:40:753 (2,3) - Too complex for beginner imo try this
  5. 00:54:726 (1,2) -
  6. 01:02:534 (2,3,4) -
  7. 01:06:233 (3,4) - Prefer to line up for better flow for beginner
  8. 01:07:877 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off also you would need to curve (2)'s tail to the left so it flow with (3) better for beginners
  9. 01:19:384 (3) - What kind of shape do you intend to make here, I think you try to make it looks like this? Make sure you keep everything basic here as much as possible because the players who play Easy are still new to this game
Okay that's all
Nice song :D I like this a lots ><

Good luck <3 :)
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi

[General]
  1. I see you don't have any SB so uncheck wide screen support maybe ok
  2. Maybe you need to remove TV size at title because I think the album of this song is released and the actual song name doesn't has tv size in it yf's has tv size in his/her beatmap, idk if it hasn't been checked or not but i'll see later
  3. offset=474 pretty nice for me i think i'll keep
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:274 (1) - I suggest to delete this it a bit too confusing for Hard since players would be too late to click the next note after this and it pretty overmapped tho yep as i thought, ok
  2. 00:00:480 (2,3) - Blanket a bit off here wasn't suppose to be a blanket
  3. 00:01:712 (4) - Small inconsistent in spacing here use DS 1.2x ok
  4. 00:02:945 (6) - ^ I don't know why you change DS suddenly here but try not to change it a lots in Hard or it may not look like Hard ok
  5. 00:05:000 - Don't know why you skip this beat here but it might play better if you add a note here used a slider
  6. 00:09:110 (2,3) - Aesthetic-wise stack properly at tail
  7. 00:09:521 (3) - I prefer to end this on red tick it play much better okay
  8. 00:16:096 (4) - Ctrl+G and this might flow better imo ok
  9. 00:21:233 (5) - ^ ^
  10. 00:27:192 (2) - ^ ^
  11. 01:01:301 (1,2) - This overlap pretty bad for me since you overlap (2)'s tail make it a bit hard to looks at it thought so. fixed
  12. 01:09:726 (2) - I would delete this note so it play nicier for Hard and also see that you emphasis vocal here make the rhythm much more consistent imo okay
  13. 01:12:192 (4) - Small inconsistent in spacing here use DS 1.2x ^
    You probably need to work on rhythm more because I find that some are a bit too complex for Hard if you find some place good to place slider don't hesitate to put it because I find that some part really suit well for slider in Hard but you didn't use sliders there and try to not changing DS too much here too or it might not a Hard diff
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:699 (4) - I would curve this like this so it will flow better for Normal okay
    You can make flow a bit easier but I guess that fine so overall this diff pretty solid for me
[Easy]
  1. 00:18:973 (4,5) - Line up this better so it form a basic flow for Easy ok
  2. 00:20:206 (1,2) - A bit complex flow for beginners I would make the flow here basic like this mm okay
  3. 00:26:781 (1,2) - I would make the flow basic like this ok
  4. 00:40:753 (2,3) - Too complex for beginner imo try this ^
  5. 00:54:726 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:02:534 (2,3,4) - ^
  7. 01:06:233 (3,4) - Prefer to line up for better flow for beginner ^
  8. 01:07:877 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off also you would need to curve (2)'s tail to the left so it flow with (3) better for beginners didn't notice the blanket, fixed shouldn't it be to the right for the flow? or is it really left
  9. 01:19:384 (3) - What kind of shape do you intend to make here, I think you try to make it looks like this? yeah tats what i wanted, was confused how to make it tho lol, fixed
    Make sure you keep everything basic here as much as possible because the players who play Easy are still new to this game
Okay that's all
Nice song :D I like this a lots ><

Good luck <3 :)
thanks a lot ^^ really like how you focus on the flow

and it's really funny how I use both my laptop and my phone to fix this cuz stupid chrome suddenly can't open the pictures and I need to see it from my phone orz
Moeri_old_1

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi

[General]
  1. I see you don't have any SB so uncheck wide screen support maybe
  2. Maybe you need to remove TV size at title because I think the album of this song is released and the actual song name doesn't has tv size in it
  3. offset=474 pretty nice for me
[Aika's Normal]
  • You probably need to nerf this because it exceed Normal star limit a lots http://puu.sh/c9eWz/4c193f6e91.png the way to nerf this is
    1.Decrease the number of the notes
    2.Extend some sliders
    I think you overmapped Normal a bit tho you need to put notes only on the emphasized beat that you think everyone can hear it at 100% speed and I think DS 1.4x is bit too high for Normal I would use only 1.0x DS for Normal I recommend you read the article about Normal here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal it might help you a lots
Okay that's all
Nice song :D I like this a lots ><

Good luck <3 :)
To be honest the difficulty was fine for a Normal, but I nerfed it to below 2.25 as you wanted.
DS 1.4x is not too high for normal for 146 BPM. And the article about Normal was not that useful.

There are many ranked Normals above 2.25 stars if you search "Normal" and sort your beatmaps by difficulty.

Thanks for modding. I will send .osu via PM to OP.
Kibbleru

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi

[Kibbleru's Insane]
  1. 00:00:480 (1) - I see that you didn't intend to emphasis 2nd white tick but I think it plays a bit awkward because you ending at red tick which is somehow feel emphasized to be maybe you can try these i don't think the red tick is that strong, also ur suggestion will give polarity issues
  2. 00:08:699 (1) - Finish at the head sound nice for me here whoop added
  3. 00:04:589 (1,2,3,4) - Aesthetic-wise make this curve beautiful like 00:03:767 (1,2,3,4) - and this should flow pretty nicier nah don't like that
  4. 00:41:575 - I see this part here you try to emphasis vocal here maybe this rhythm might make this play better there isn't anything on that blue tick to map.
  5. 00:46:301 (1) - Don't know why you skip downbeat here 00:46:507 - but it might sound nice if you map that downbeat this might make this play better at this part i was focusing on the drums and insturments
  6. 01:02:945 (1,2) - Notice that (1) you put emphasis in vocal so why not do the same for (2) too? what i have works Overall this maps play pretty well for me some 1/4 notes actually feel a bit weird for me but I guess that fine
    wow such GD , so quallity GD ;)
    the rhythm itself for the song is a bit weird, has alot of 1/4s and ty :D
Okay that's all
Nice song :D I like this a lots ><

Good luck <3 :)
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244,340,29247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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72,176,29863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,29966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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148,172,30685,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,128,32021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,128,32123,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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440,248,32534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,120,32740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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A i k a wrote:

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi

[General]
  1. I see you don't have any SB so uncheck wide screen support maybe
  2. Maybe you need to remove TV size at title because I think the album of this song is released and the actual song name doesn't has tv size in it
  3. offset=474 pretty nice for me
[Aika's Normal]
  • You probably need to nerf this because it exceed Normal star limit a lots http://puu.sh/c9eWz/4c193f6e91.png the way to nerf this is
    1.Decrease the number of the notes
    2.Extend some sliders
    I think you overmapped Normal a bit tho you need to put notes only on the emphasized beat that you think everyone can hear it at 100% speed and I think DS 1.4x is bit too high for Normal I would use only 1.0x DS for Normal I recommend you read the article about Normal here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal it might help you a lots
Okay that's all
Nice song :D I like this a lots ><

Good luck <3 :)
To be honest the difficulty was fine for a Normal, but I nerfed it to below 2.25 as you wanted.
DS 1.4x is not too high for normal for 146 BPM. And the article about Normal was not that useful.

There are many ranked Normals above 2.25 stars if you search "Normal" and sort your beatmaps by difficulty.

Thanks for modding. I will send .osu via PM to OP.

star limit doesn't matter, from what i see this is another normal intended to make the spread better. since we already have a normal, we can make this one harder.

maybe we can rename this to normal + though
Iceskulls

A i k a wrote:

CelsiusLK wrote:

To be honest the difficulty was fine for a Normal, but I nerfed it to below 2.25 as you wanted.
DS 1.4x is not too high for normal for 146 BPM. And the article about Normal was not that useful.

There are many ranked Normals above 2.25 stars if you search "Normal" and sort your beatmaps by difficulty.
Hmm...Okay I'm just see that most of ranked Normal seems to be around 2.0-2.25 star
maybe just like kibbleru said Normal+ would be better name for this

Not sure tho do you still using the old Normal or the new one?
when it get update I will comeback and recheck it

Sorry, If I say anything bad there
Moeri_old_1

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hmm...Okay I'm just see that most of ranked Normal seems to be around 2.0-2.25 star
maybe just like kibbleru said Normal+ would be better name for this

Not sure tho do you still using the old Normal or the new one?
when it get update I will comeback and recheck it

Sorry, If I say anything bad there
I have sent the old version(2.48 stars) to Kazu, good that I backed it up.

Will probably do as Kibbleru said, rename it to Normal+ for better difficulty spread. I also thought it would be better to have it unchanged to have better spread but I almost never trust myself ;_; Altho diffname change I didn't think of, but it's a good idea
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei
okay, updated
Iceskulls
Recheck Aika's Normal+
no kds

[Aika's Normal+]
  1. 00:47:329 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+J so this will flow better with (1)
  2. 00:53:082 (1) - Not sure. Is this blue tick will make the player confuse?
  3. 00:56:370 (5,6) - Aesthetic-wise line up better maybe
  4. 00:57:192 (7,8) - ^
  5. 01:02:945 (5,6) - Blanket is a bit off
  6. 01:03:562 (6,1) - ^
  7. 01:11:164 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off
  8. 01:15:069 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+J to avoid overlap with (4)
    A little bit problems in blanket but the others seems to be fine for me
Good luck :)
neonat
General

Add 2000 to AudioLeadIn for all difficulties, do so in the .osu in Notepad

Easy

00:21:027 (2,3) - spacing error, you have to keep a constant spacing throughout the difficulty
00:32:945 (4,1) - I have been told before, so I shall advice now, that stacking in Easy or any of the simpler difficulties is not good and unless there is really a very special feeling in that section of the song, you should not stack
00:49:795 (1) - finish
00:53:904 - you don't need this green inheriting section
01:13:630 (2,1) - could you blanket better here
01:17:329 (4,1) - avoid stacking these

Normal

00:18:973 (4) - slider touches the health bar, you have to fix this
00:51:438 (1) - spinner should start at 00:51:233 with the vocals
01:02:740 (4,5) - 3/4 rhythm in Normal that people require to click, it's quite tough considering the diffculty that this map should be
01:19:384 (4,5) - blanket them

A i k a's Normal+

00:00:480 (1,2) - you immediately immerse players in 3/4 rhythm, you should at least use a 3/4 repeat slider of some sort instead to allow player to familiarise with the rhythm, same with 00:02:123 (1,2)
00:09:932 (1) - touches the health bar, please fix this
00:13:425 (3,1,2) - let the end of 00:14:452 (2) be equal spacing away from the other 2 objects to look better
00:49:384 (3) - finish on start of slider
00:53:082 (1,2) - such rhythms in the song would be expressed better with just 1 3/4 repeat slider
01:02:945 (5,6) - blanket them
01:11:164 (1) - finish on start of slider

It would be better if this difficulty ended at the same time as the others, which is 01:24:390

Hard

00:09:110 (2,3) - unstack, a stack doesn't fit the music here
00:22:466 (4,5,6) - make the triplet look better, use constant spacing, so either 0.3 or 0.4x
00:31:301 (5) - you overlook the beat at 00:31:507 which is very crucial, the rhythm of the song here is lost
00:57:603 (4,5,1) - equal spacing to look better
01:02:945 (1,2) - use just 1 repeat slider here instead of 2 objects, this pattern just looks and feels weird
01:12:603 (5,2) - stack them
01:15:685 (4,5,1) - a straight line looks better, don't curve the triplet

Appearance of the map can be much better than what it is now


Just modding these difficulties
Good luck
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei

neonat wrote:

General

Add 2000 to AudioLeadIn for all difficulties, do so in the .osu in Notepad ok

Easy

00:21:027 (2,3) - spacing error, you have to keep a constant spacing throughout the difficulty probably happened when i was fixing and didn't notice, fixed
00:32:945 (4,1) - I have been told before, so I shall advice now, that stacking in Easy or any of the simpler difficulties is not good and unless there is really a very special feeling in that section of the song, you should not stack ok
00:49:795 (1) - finish ok
00:53:904 - you don't need this green inheriting section forgot to delete, fixed
01:13:630 (2,1) - could you blanket better here should be better
01:17:329 (4,1) - avoid stacking these ok

Normal

00:18:973 (4) - slider touches the health bar, you have to fix this didn't notice, fixed
00:51:438 (1) - spinner should start at 00:51:233 with the vocals ok
01:02:740 (4,5) - 3/4 rhythm in Normal that people require to click, it's quite tough considering the diffculty that this map should be fixed
01:19:384 (4,5) - blanket them i did blanket them, fixed it a bit

Hard

00:09:110 (2,3) - unstack, a stack doesn't fit the music here k
00:22:466 (4,5,6) - make the triplet look better, use constant spacing, so either 0.3 or 0.4x ok
00:31:301 (5) - you overlook the beat at 00:31:507 which is very crucial, the rhythm of the song here is lost did consider it, changed
00:57:603 (4,5,1) - equal spacing to look better ok
01:02:945 (1,2) - use just 1 repeat slider here instead of 2 objects, this pattern just looks and feels weird changed
01:12:603 (5,2) - stack them didn't realize, fixed
01:15:685 (4,5,1) - a straight line looks better, don't curve the triplet ok

Appearance of the map can be much better than what it is now


Just modding these difficulties
Good luck
thankyou
wcx19911123
due to some reasons, aika can't reply to this topic.. I'm requested to do this for her

SPOILER

CelsiusLK wrote:

Recheck Aika's Normal+
no kds

[Aika's Normal+]
  1. 00:47:329 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+J so this will flow better with (1) fixed
  2. 00:53:082 (1) - Not sure. Is this blue tick will make the player confuse? no, the music is too strong for them to confuse(I think)
  3. 00:56:370 (5,6) - Aesthetic-wise line up better maybe what does that mean?
  4. 00:57:192 (7,8) - ^
  5. 01:02:945 (5,6) - Blanket is a bit off fixed
  6. 01:03:562 (6,1) - ^ fixed
  7. 01:11:164 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off fixed
  8. 01:15:069 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+J to avoid overlap with (4) fixed
    A little bit problems in blanket but the others seems to be fine for me
Good luck :)
thanks for modding!

here is the update:
SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: hanayuki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54110
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Hanayuki (TV size)
TitleUnicode:花雪 (TV size)
Artist:smileY inc.
ArtistUnicode:smileY inc.
Creator:KazuhikoRei
Version:A i k a's Normal+
Source:ハナヤマタ
Tags:hanayamata ending tv size madhouse yosakoi sekiya naru hana n fountainstand sasame yaya nishimikado tami tokiwa machi Kibbleru A_i_k_a
BeatmapID:506760
BeatmapSetID:211595

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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei
updated
Ozato Fumika
I love this song q.q

I just think AR should be 6.5 or something on A i k a's normal

it's impossible for me to read
Kibbleru
pls rank :>
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei
will be trying

wish my mapping skill's better than this *cries*
Everything
Hi from my mod queue (sorry for late mod!!! )
Easy:
00:03:767 (1,2) - Curve combo 2 a little more for better blanket(makes it flow better too)
00:09:932 (1,2) - same as above

Normal:
00:14:452 (2) - curve the first tick a bit for better blanket
00:54:315 (3) - Hm.. I think it would sound good if you took this out, and then fix 00:54:726 (1,2) position so there wont be a DS problem, just my preference though

Sorry for short mod ; ~ ; I liked your mapset thought, best of luck to you!
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei

trammiexo wrote:

Hi from my mod queue (sorry for late mod!!! )
Easy:
00:03:767 (1,2) - Curve combo 2 a little more for better blanket(makes it flow better too) should be better now
00:09:932 (1,2) - same as above ^

Normal:
00:14:452 (2) - curve the first tick a bit for better blanket fixed
00:54:315 (3) - Hm.. I think it would sound good if you took this out, and then fix 00:54:726 (1,2) position so there wont be a DS problem, just my preference though

Sorry for short mod ; ~ ; I liked your mapset thought, best of luck to you!
thanks for the mods~
Fryz3
Hi! modder came from: p/3583378#p3583378

General
  1. im sorry that i have to say this, but i don't have much time left to mod everything.
    instead, i will mod everything that 'the maker' has made.
Easy
  1. couldn't find something here. the hitsound don't work by me, but that could be my fault.
    I think it's just a great map!
normal
  1. 00:59:658 (1,2,3) - maybe you can line this a bit better up for a better flow.
    for instance, place the first slider a bit higher to the right and the third a bot lower to the right.
  2. 01:07:055 (5) - try placing this note a bit higher for a better flow.
  3. 01:11:781 (2) - try to angle the end of this slider a bit more upwards for a better flow.
Aika's normal+
  1. I know it has been said before, but the star rating doesn't match with the proper difficulty.
    either you change the name of the diff or you 'nerf' the map.
Hard
  1. 00:39:932 (1,2,3,4) - try moving the 2 and 4 a bit higher and the 3 a bit lower to the left.
    the 3 doesn't have to be on line with the 1, but a bit closer should be fine.
  2. 00:48:973 (4) - try moving this note a bit more down to the left. for better flow.
  3. 00:47:945 (1) - personally, i dont like to wait on this note(overlap) it isn't particulary bad,
    but i don't like it for some reason (I can't say how). you don't have to change it, just wanted to point that out.
I really think you are a good mapper! all three diffs seems to be fine. hope it will get ranked soon! :)
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei

Fryz3 wrote:

Hi! modder came from: p/3583378#p3583378

General
  1. im sorry that i have to say this, but i don't have much time left to mod everything.
    instead, i will mod everything that 'the maker' has made.
Easy
  1. couldn't find something here. the hitsound don't work by me, but that could be my fault.
    I think it's just a great map!
normal
  1. 00:59:658 (1,2,3) - maybe you can line this a bit better up for a better flow.
    for instance, place the first slider a bit higher to the right and the third a bot lower to the right. tweaked a bit
  2. 01:07:055 (5) - try placing this note a bit higher for a better flow. ok
  3. 01:11:781 (2) - try to angle the end of this slider a bit more upwards for a better flow. ^
Hard
  1. 00:39:932 (1,2,3,4) - try moving the 2 and 4 a bit higher and the 3 a bit lower to the left.
    the 3 doesn't have to be on line with the 1, but a bit closer should be fine. modified
  2. 00:48:973 (4) - try moving this note a bit more down to the left. for better flow. k
  3. 00:47:945 (1) - personally, i dont like to wait on this note(overlap) it isn't particulary bad,
    but i don't like it for some reason (I can't say how). you don't have to change it, just wanted to point that out. I'll keep it in the meantime
I really think you are a good mapper! all three diffs seems to be fine. hope it will get ranked soon! :)
thankies :D
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei
removed A i k a's normal+ due to some circumstances
Bara-
From Lordraika's modding Party

[Easy]
00:03:767 (1,2) - Blanket needs a little more improvement
00:05:411 (3,4) - Improve blanket, move the end of (3) 1 grid to the right
00:05:411 (3,1) - Stack please
00:16:918 (1,2) - Flows kinda bad, because of 'sudden' movement to the right
00:18:562 (3) - Too high (Hits HP bar, which is unrankable afaik)
00:21:027 (2,3) - Needs a lot of improvement, the blanket is pretty bad
00:21:849 (3,4) - Improve blanket, look at 00:22:774 to make it perfect
00:29:247 (3) - Feels kinda weird. You go down from (2), and then go up for (4) and then go down with the slider. IMO it's better to have (3) above the (2), so it flow better (Ctrl J the slider, and move to 292:68 (Just a example, do do this, as this looks ugly (Blanket)))
00:41:575 (3,4) - Blanket, move end of (3) down a little
01:02:534 (2,3) - Improve blanket
01:04:589 (1,3) - Ugly overlap
01:17:740 (1,3) - ^^

[Normal]
00:13:630 (1,2) - Can't really see, but blanket feels a little off
00:25:343 (4) - NC
00:39:932 (1) - This is 1/2, not 3/4
00:41:164 (3,5) - Ugly overlap, you can make them stack
00:47:945 (3,4,6) - Ugly overlap
00:53:082 (1) - Too fast after a spinner, keep at least 2 beat between it
00:57:603 (6,7,1) - Try not to stack in normal difficulty
01:02:534 (3,4) - Ugly overlap, and it doesn't flow well, change this, (3) can stay, but change location&shape of (4)
01:13:630 (3) - To high - HpBar
01:19:384 (4) - NC
01:19:384 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved (a lot)

[Hard]
00:01:712 (3,4,5) - They are all terrible blankets, please look carefully when applying
00:04:589 (3,4,5,6) - Improve blanket
00:07:055 (3,4) - Improve blanket
00:13:014 (6,2) - Ugly overlap
00:14:041 (2) - Looks ugly, copy 00:13:630 (1) - and rotate it 180 degrees (and ctrl G and move to correct place)
00:15:480 (2) - Too high (Hpbar)
00:20:616 (3,4,5) - Improve blanket
00:39:932 (1) - It's 1/2, not 3/4
00:43:219 (1) - ^^
01:22:099 (2,3,4,5) - NC (ALL due to BPM change)

[Kibbleru's Insane]
All move to xxx:yyy are suggestions, choose something near there, I'm not saying this is correct, but x+1 is not.
00:02:123 (1) - Looks kinda ugly, becuase it's so curvy
00:07:055 (4) - NC
00:13:014 (7) - NC
00:13:527 (8) - Move to 172:260, it feels like 1/2, and due to making it like this, it feels like 1/4
00:26:267 (6) - Move to 136:152, reason above
00:28:014 (5,1) - Ugly overlap
00:33:253 (6) - Move to 200:180, reason above
00:53:904 (1,2,3,4) - Looks kinda ugly, due to low distance
01:00:788 (2) - Move to 116:180
01:01:199 (4) - Move to 248:240
01:06:541 (2) - Move to 92:180
01:11:062 (5) - Move to 248:176
01:17:637 (4) - Move to 400:112
01:22:030 (4) - Delete. I don't hear any 1/8 here
01:23:307 (1,1) - Unnecessary, circles would be good (Just 1), Also, is 1/16 rankable?

Good luck
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei

baraatje123 wrote:

From Lordraika's modding Party

[Easy]
00:03:767 (1,2) - Blanket needs a little more improvement adjusted
00:05:411 (3,4) - Improve blanket, move the end of (3) 1 grid to the right ^
00:05:411 (3,1) - Stack please thought I already did, re stacked back though due to ^
00:16:918 (1,2) - Flows kinda bad, because of 'sudden' movement to the right changed
00:18:562 (3) - Too high (Hits HP bar, which is unrankable afaik) didn't noticed. moved
00:21:027 (2,3) - Needs a lot of improvement, the blanket is pretty bad modified
00:21:849 (3,4) - Improve blanket, look at 00:22:774 to make it perfect
00:29:247 (3) - Feels kinda weird. You go down from (2), and then go up for (4) and then go down with the slider. IMO it's better to have (3) above the (2), so it flow better (Ctrl J the slider, and move to 292:68 (Just a example, do do this, as this looks ugly (Blanket))) modified
00:41:575 (3,4) - Blanket, move end of (3) down a little ok
01:02:534 (2,3) - Improve blanket ^
01:04:589 (1,3) - Ugly overlap didn't noticed, moved
01:17:740 (1,3) - ^^ changed

[Normal]
00:13:630 (1,2) - Can't really see, but blanket feels a little off should be better
00:25:343 (4) - NC ok
00:39:932 (1) - This is 1/2, not 3/4 emphasizing the music
00:41:164 (3,5) - Ugly overlap, you can make them stack okay
00:47:945 (3,4,6) - Ugly overlap moved
00:53:082 (1) - Too fast after a spinner, keep at least 2 beat between it shortened
00:57:603 (6,7,1) - Try not to stack in normal difficultyok
01:02:534 (3,4) - Ugly overlap, and it doesn't flow well, change this, (3) can stay, but change location&shape of (4) changed
01:13:630 (3) - To high - HpBar didn't noticed, fixed
01:19:384 (4) - NC k
01:19:384 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved (a lot)

[Hard]
00:01:712 (3,4,5) - They are all terrible blankets, please look carefully when applying fixed
00:04:589 (3,4,5,6) - Improve blanket ^
00:07:055 (3,4) - Improve blanket ^
00:13:014 (6,2) - Ugly overlap ^
00:14:041 (2) - Looks ugly, copy 00:13:630 (1) - and rotate it 180 degrees (and ctrl G and move to correct place) ^
00:15:480 (2) - Too high (Hpbar) fixed
00:20:616 (3,4,5) - Improve blanket ok
00:39:932 (1) - It's 1/2, not 3/4
00:43:219 (1) - ^^
01:22:099 (2,3,4,5) - NC (ALL due to BPM change) forgot about that, fixed

Good luck
thanks for the mods
Ozato Fumika
just fyi

00:42:808 - ~ 00:43:014 - is 1/6
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei

No Dap wrote:

just fyi

00:42:808 - ~ 00:43:014 - is 1/6
oh okay, didn't notice, thx
O-Moei
Hi !, 🌀NM request

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

Here we go...

General
💧Beberapa Clap ga ada pada tempatnya uwu coba periksa sendiri ya XDXD
Easy
✨00:10:343 - Point ini penting banget kak, dengerin deh. Harus kena klik nih XDXD Soalnya 00:09:932 - beda banget ritmenya sama yang tadi. Harusnya di map mirip kayak gini 00:19:795 (5,1) -

✨01:10:753 (2) - ^ . Ini salah banget deh kyknya uwu . Kalo aku sih bakal ngebuat 01:09:932 (1) - jadi reverse slider, trus ada NC'ed circle disini 01:11:164 - . Trus jadi ada NC yg salah, 01:12:808 (1) - ini harusnya remove NC

✨00:33:356 (1,2) - Bagus nya ini (1) slidertail ngarah pas ke (2) tadi

✨Coba deh kaka bikin sliderend yg ngarah ke downbeat disini 00:38:082 - vokalnya tinggi banget soalnya. Bisa dengan manjangin ini 00:36:644 (1) - sampai 00:37:671 - atau cara lain juga boleh. Masih expectable kok buat newbies

✨01:24:389 (1) - Punya ending circle buat Easy diff kyknya ga perlu deh XDXD. Mending panjangin aja 01:21:027 (1) - spinner nya
Normal
✨00:29:247 (5) - ini kalo bisa angkat dikit, kliatan kyk yg offscreen disini jadinya :?

✨00:49:795 (1,2) - Pola yang ga enak dimainkan pemula-berpengalaman :V

✨00:51:233 (1) - ga kecepetan ni spinner ? ;w; . klo aku sih 00:53:082 (1,2,3) - ini didelete trus spinnernya sampe 00:53:082 -

✨00:59:658 (1) - Remove NC, karna kaka dari awalnya juga bikin NC setiap 2 measure
01:12:808 (1) - ^
01:19:384 (1) - ^

✨01:01:301 (1,2) - Ritmenya kurang enak. Paling enggak kyk gini 00:54:726 (1,2) - lebih pas
Hard
✨00:09:932 (1,3) - Swap NC
00:38:082 (4,1) - ^ karna ada downbeat

✨01:00:685 (1) - Unnecessary NC
01:04:178 (1) - ^

Oke that's all from me. All e best C:
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei
kaga nyadar ada mod OwO maap telat balesnya
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !, 🌀NM request

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

Here we go...

General
💧Beberapa Clap ga ada pada tempatnya uwu coba periksa sendiri ya XDXD oke entar akan diperiksa kalau ga males bcos hitsounding takes a lot of energy orz
Easy
✨00:10:343 - Point ini penting banget kak, dengerin deh. Harus kena klik nih XDXD Soalnya 00:09:932 - beda banget ritmenya sama yang tadi. Harusnya di map mirip kayak gini 00:19:795 (5,1) - sebenarnya saya bikin 2 slider karena nada nya sama, tapi dipikir lagi karena nada pertama itu awalan dan kalo pake slider jadi weak, oke saya ganti jadi circle

✨01:10:753 (2) - ^ . Ini salah banget deh kyknya uwu . Kalo aku sih bakal ngebuat 01:09:932 (1) - jadi reverse slider, trus ada NC'ed circle disini 01:11:164 - . Trus jadi ada NC yg salah, 01:12:808 (1) - ini harusnya remove NC ups, emang salah banget keanya XD ga kepikiran (males) buat recheck easy sama normal, beatmapnya uda lama haha, oke

✨00:33:356 (1,2) - Bagus nya ini (1) slidertail ngarah pas ke (2) tadi miring dikit haha oke

✨Coba deh kaka bikin sliderend yg ngarah ke downbeat disini 00:38:082 - vokalnya tinggi banget soalnya. Bisa dengan manjangin ini 00:36:644 (1) - sampai 00:37:671 - atau cara lain juga boleh. Masih expectable kok buat newbies diubah buat ngikutin vokal

✨01:24:389 (1) - Punya ending circle buat Easy diff kyknya ga perlu deh XDXD. Mending panjangin aja 01:21:027 (1) - spinner nya hmm oke
Normal
✨00:29:247 (5) - ini kalo bisa angkat dikit, kliatan kyk yg offscreen disini jadinya :? ok

✨00:49:795 (1,2) - Pola yang ga enak dimainkan pemula-berpengalaman :V ups

✨00:51:233 (1) - ga kecepetan ni spinner ? ;w; . klo aku sih 00:53:082 (1,2,3) - ini didelete trus spinnernya sampe 00:53:082 - oke

✨00:59:658 (1) - Remove NC, karna kaka dari awalnya juga bikin NC setiap 2 measure okie
01:12:808 (1) - ^ ^
01:19:384 (1) - ^ ^

✨01:01:301 (1,2) - Ritmenya kurang enak. Paling enggak kyk gini 00:54:726 (1,2) - lebih pas okai
Hard
✨00:09:932 (1,3) - Swap NC oke
00:38:082 (4,1) - ^ karna ada downbeat 4 mengakhiri vocal, 1 mulai drum beat, NC buat misahin 2 hal ini jadi keep

✨01:00:685 (1) - Unnecessary NC hm oke
01:04:178 (1) - ^ ^

Oke that's all from me. All e best C:
thankies :D really appreciate it
saya tau ini map uda lama jadi mungkin agak kacau ;-;
Topic Starter
KazuhikoRei
updated for now, will check the hitsound again tmr bcos It's already late now and my eyes are almost giving up lol
checked HS and fixed it a bit, updated
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