okay, thanks
I'll update it when I have time
updated
updated
it looks much better nowRingating wrote:
from my queue:
I actually had this done a couple days ago but forgot to post >.> np lol
I smoothed the edges of the text/kana/stuff, since it was somewhat jagged and unsightly. the background behind the characters seemed like it had been upscaled from something else, as it was pretty artifact-heavy. In order to lessen that, I extracted the characters and blurred the layer beneath them, so the background would appear out of focus in order to hide the crap. I also softened the characters slightly in order to have them better blend in with the editing background. Here is the new image:no kudosu
thanks for mod and starimoutosan wrote:
Sorry for delay. From queue.
[Hard]
00:18:767 (2,3,4) - keep the ds same didn't realize the distance, fixed
00:24:932 (5) - too close to 3 moved a bit
01:10:753 (5) - ^ ^
[Normal]
00:42:397 (5) - stack to 3 i think you mean 4, but keep
[Easy]
00:21:849 (3,4) - fix the blanket don't think there was a problem with the blanket, fixed it a bit tho
Not much to say._. star and good luck
thanks a lot ^^ really like how you focus on the flowCelsiusLK wrote:
Hi
[General][Hard]
- I see you don't have any SB so uncheck wide screen support maybe ok
- Maybe you need to remove TV size at title because I think the album of this song is released and the actual song name doesn't has tv size in it yf's has tv size in his/her beatmap, idk if it hasn't been checked or not but i'll see later
- offset=474 pretty nice for me i think i'll keep
[Normal]
- 00:00:274 (1) - I suggest to delete this it a bit too confusing for Hard since players would be too late to click the next note after this and it pretty overmapped tho yep as i thought, ok
- 00:00:480 (2,3) - Blanket a bit off here wasn't suppose to be a blanket
- 00:01:712 (4) - Small inconsistent in spacing here use DS 1.2x ok
- 00:02:945 (6) - ^ I don't know why you change DS suddenly here but try not to change it a lots in Hard or it may not look like Hard ok
- 00:05:000 - Don't know why you skip this beat here but it might play better if you add a note here used a slider
- 00:09:110 (2,3) - Aesthetic-wise stack properly at tail
- 00:09:521 (3) - I prefer to end this on red tick it play much better okay
- 00:16:096 (4) - Ctrl+G and this might flow better imo ok
- 00:21:233 (5) - ^ ^
- 00:27:192 (2) - ^ ^
- 01:01:301 (1,2) - This overlap pretty bad for me since you overlap (2)'s tail make it a bit hard to looks at it thought so. fixed
- 01:09:726 (2) - I would delete this note so it play nicier for Hard and also see that you emphasis vocal here make the rhythm much more consistent imo okay
- 01:12:192 (4) - Small inconsistent in spacing here use DS 1.2x ^
You probably need to work on rhythm more because I find that some are a bit too complex for Hard if you find some place good to place slider don't hesitate to put it because I find that some part really suit well for slider in Hard but you didn't use sliders there and try to not changing DS too much here too or it might not a Hard diff[Easy]
- 00:08:699 (4) - I would curve this like this so it will flow better for Normal okay
You can make flow a bit easier but I guess that fine so overall this diff pretty solid for meOkay that's all
- 00:18:973 (4,5) - Line up this better so it form a basic flow for Easy ok
- 00:20:206 (1,2) - A bit complex flow for beginners I would make the flow here basic like this mm okay
- 00:26:781 (1,2) - I would make the flow basic like this ok
- 00:40:753 (2,3) - Too complex for beginner imo try this ^
- 00:54:726 (1,2) - ^
- 01:02:534 (2,3,4) - ^
- 01:06:233 (3,4) - Prefer to line up for better flow for beginner ^
- 01:07:877 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off also you would need to curve (2)'s tail to the left so it flow with (3) better for beginners didn't notice the blanket, fixed shouldn't it be to the right for the flow? or is it really left
- 01:19:384 (3) - What kind of shape do you intend to make here, I think you try to make it looks like this? yeah tats what i wanted, was confused how to make it tho lol, fixed
Make sure you keep everything basic here as much as possible because the players who play Easy are still new to this game
Nice song I like this a lots ><
Good luck <3
To be honest the difficulty was fine for a Normal, but I nerfed it to below 2.25 as you wanted.CelsiusLK wrote:
Hi
[General][Aika's Normal]
- I see you don't have any SB so uncheck wide screen support maybe
- Maybe you need to remove TV size at title because I think the album of this song is released and the actual song name doesn't has tv size in it
- offset=474 pretty nice for me
Okay that's all
- You probably need to nerf this because it exceed Normal star limit a lots http://puu.sh/c9eWz/4c193f6e91.png the way to nerf this is
1.Decrease the number of the notes
2.Extend some sliders
I think you overmapped Normal a bit tho you need to put notes only on the emphasized beat that you think everyone can hear it at 100% speed and I think DS 1.4x is bit too high for Normal I would use only 1.0x DS for Normal I recommend you read the article about Normal here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal it might help you a lots
Nice song I like this a lots ><
Good luck <3
CelsiusLK wrote:
Hi
[Kibbleru's Insane]Okay that's all
- 00:00:480 (1) - I see that you didn't intend to emphasis 2nd white tick but I think it plays a bit awkward because you ending at red tick which is somehow feel emphasized to be maybe you can try these i don't think the red tick is that strong, also ur suggestion will give polarity issues
- 00:08:699 (1) - Finish at the head sound nice for me here whoop added
- 00:04:589 (1,2,3,4) - Aesthetic-wise make this curve beautiful like 00:03:767 (1,2,3,4) - and this should flow pretty nicier nah don't like that
- 00:41:575 - I see this part here you try to emphasis vocal here maybe this rhythm might make this play better there isn't anything on that blue tick to map.
- 00:46:301 (1) - Don't know why you skip downbeat here 00:46:507 - but it might sound nice if you map that downbeat this might make this play better at this part i was focusing on the drums and insturments
- 01:02:945 (1,2) - Notice that (1) you put emphasis in vocal so why not do the same for (2) too? what i have works Overall this maps play pretty well for me some 1/4 notes actually feel a bit weird for me but I guess that fine
wow such GD , so quallity GD the rhythm itself for the song is a bit weird, has alot of 1/4s and ty
Nice song I like this a lots ><
Good luck <3
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A i k a wrote:
To be honest the difficulty was fine for a Normal, but I nerfed it to below 2.25 as you wanted.CelsiusLK wrote:
Hi
[General][Aika's Normal]
- I see you don't have any SB so uncheck wide screen support maybe
- Maybe you need to remove TV size at title because I think the album of this song is released and the actual song name doesn't has tv size in it
- offset=474 pretty nice for me
Okay that's all
- You probably need to nerf this because it exceed Normal star limit a lots http://puu.sh/c9eWz/4c193f6e91.png the way to nerf this is
1.Decrease the number of the notes
2.Extend some sliders
I think you overmapped Normal a bit tho you need to put notes only on the emphasized beat that you think everyone can hear it at 100% speed and I think DS 1.4x is bit too high for Normal I would use only 1.0x DS for Normal I recommend you read the article about Normal here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal it might help you a lots
Nice song I like this a lots ><
Good luck <3
DS 1.4x is not too high for normal for 146 BPM. And the article about Normal was not that useful.
There are many ranked Normals above 2.25 stars if you search "Normal" and sort your beatmaps by difficulty.
Thanks for modding. I will send .osu via PM to OP.
Hmm...Okay I'm just see that most of ranked Normal seems to be around 2.0-2.25 starA i k a wrote:
CelsiusLK wrote:
To be honest the difficulty was fine for a Normal, but I nerfed it to below 2.25 as you wanted.
DS 1.4x is not too high for normal for 146 BPM. And the article about Normal was not that useful.
There are many ranked Normals above 2.25 stars if you search "Normal" and sort your beatmaps by difficulty.
I have sent the old version(2.48 stars) to Kazu, good that I backed it up.CelsiusLK wrote:
Hmm...Okay I'm just see that most of ranked Normal seems to be around 2.0-2.25 star
maybe just like kibbleru said Normal+ would be better name for this
Not sure tho do you still using the old Normal or the new one?
when it get update I will comeback and recheck it
Sorry, If I say anything bad there
thankyouneonat wrote:
General
Add 2000 to AudioLeadIn for all difficulties, do so in the .osu in Notepad ok
Easy
00:21:027 (2,3) - spacing error, you have to keep a constant spacing throughout the difficulty probably happened when i was fixing and didn't notice, fixed
00:32:945 (4,1) - I have been told before, so I shall advice now, that stacking in Easy or any of the simpler difficulties is not good and unless there is really a very special feeling in that section of the song, you should not stack ok
00:49:795 (1) - finish ok
00:53:904 - you don't need this green inheriting section forgot to delete, fixed
01:13:630 (2,1) - could you blanket better here should be better
01:17:329 (4,1) - avoid stacking these ok
Normal
00:18:973 (4) - slider touches the health bar, you have to fix this didn't notice, fixed
00:51:438 (1) - spinner should start at 00:51:233 with the vocals ok
01:02:740 (4,5) - 3/4 rhythm in Normal that people require to click, it's quite tough considering the diffculty that this map should be fixed
01:19:384 (4,5) - blanket them i did blanket them, fixed it a bit
Hard
00:09:110 (2,3) - unstack, a stack doesn't fit the music here k
00:22:466 (4,5,6) - make the triplet look better, use constant spacing, so either 0.3 or 0.4x ok
00:31:301 (5) - you overlook the beat at 00:31:507 which is very crucial, the rhythm of the song here is lost did consider it, changed
00:57:603 (4,5,1) - equal spacing to look better ok
01:02:945 (1,2) - use just 1 repeat slider here instead of 2 objects, this pattern just looks and feels weird changed
01:12:603 (5,2) - stack them didn't realize, fixed
01:15:685 (4,5,1) - a straight line looks better, don't curve the triplet ok
Appearance of the map can be much better than what it is now
Just modding these difficulties
Good luck
thanks for modding!CelsiusLK wrote:
Recheck Aika's Normal+
no kds
[Aika's Normal+]Good luck
- 00:47:329 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+J so this will flow better with (1) fixed
- 00:53:082 (1) - Not sure. Is this blue tick will make the player confuse? no, the music is too strong for them to confuse(I think)
- 00:56:370 (5,6) - Aesthetic-wise line up better maybe what does that mean?
- 00:57:192 (7,8) - ^
- 01:02:945 (5,6) - Blanket is a bit off fixed
- 01:03:562 (6,1) - ^ fixed
- 01:11:164 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off fixed
- 01:15:069 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+J to avoid overlap with (4) fixed
A little bit problems in blanket but the others seems to be fine for me
osu file format v13
[General]
AudioFilename: hanayuki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54110
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:花雪 (TV size)
Artist:smileY inc.
ArtistUnicode:smileY inc.
Creator:KazuhikoRei
Version:A i k a's Normal+
Source:ハナヤマタ
Tags:hanayamata ending tv size madhouse yosakoi sekiya naru hana n fountainstand sasame yaya nishimikado tami tokiwa machi Kibbleru A_i_k_a
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thanks for the mods~trammiexo wrote:
Hi from my mod queue (sorry for late mod!!! )
Easy:
00:03:767 (1,2) - Curve combo 2 a little more for better blanket(makes it flow better too) should be better now
00:09:932 (1,2) - same as above ^
Normal:
00:14:452 (2) - curve the first tick a bit for better blanket fixed
00:54:315 (3) - Hm.. I think it would sound good if you took this out, and then fix 00:54:726 (1,2) position so there wont be a DS problem, just my preference though
Sorry for short mod ; ~ ; I liked your mapset thought, best of luck to you!
thankiesFryz3 wrote:
Hi! modder came from: p/3583378#p3583378
GeneralEasy
- im sorry that i have to say this, but i don't have much time left to mod everything.
instead, i will mod everything that 'the maker' has made.normal
- couldn't find something here. the hitsound don't work by me, but that could be my fault.
I think it's just a great map!Hard
- 00:59:658 (1,2,3) - maybe you can line this a bit better up for a better flow.
for instance, place the first slider a bit higher to the right and the third a bot lower to the right. tweaked a bit- 01:07:055 (5) - try placing this note a bit higher for a better flow. ok
- 01:11:781 (2) - try to angle the end of this slider a bit more upwards for a better flow. ^
I really think you are a good mapper! all three diffs seems to be fine. hope it will get ranked soon!
- 00:39:932 (1,2,3,4) - try moving the 2 and 4 a bit higher and the 3 a bit lower to the left.
the 3 doesn't have to be on line with the 1, but a bit closer should be fine. modified- 00:48:973 (4) - try moving this note a bit more down to the left. for better flow. k
- 00:47:945 (1) - personally, i dont like to wait on this note(overlap) it isn't particulary bad,
but i don't like it for some reason (I can't say how). you don't have to change it, just wanted to point that out. I'll keep it in the meantime
thanks for the modsbaraatje123 wrote:
From Lordraika's modding Party
[Easy]
00:03:767 (1,2) - Blanket needs a little more improvement adjusted
00:05:411 (3,4) - Improve blanket, move the end of (3) 1 grid to the right ^
00:05:411 (3,1) - Stack please thought I already did, re stacked back though due to ^
00:16:918 (1,2) - Flows kinda bad, because of 'sudden' movement to the right changed
00:18:562 (3) - Too high (Hits HP bar, which is unrankable afaik) didn't noticed. moved
00:21:027 (2,3) - Needs a lot of improvement, the blanket is pretty bad modified
00:21:849 (3,4) - Improve blanket, look at 00:22:774 to make it perfect
00:29:247 (3) - Feels kinda weird. You go down from (2), and then go up for (4) and then go down with the slider. IMO it's better to have (3) above the (2), so it flow better (Ctrl J the slider, and move to 292:68 (Just a example, do do this, as this looks ugly (Blanket))) modified
00:41:575 (3,4) - Blanket, move end of (3) down a little ok
01:02:534 (2,3) - Improve blanket ^
01:04:589 (1,3) - Ugly overlap didn't noticed, moved
01:17:740 (1,3) - ^^ changed
[Normal]
00:13:630 (1,2) - Can't really see, but blanket feels a little off should be better
00:25:343 (4) - NC ok
00:39:932 (1) - This is 1/2, not 3/4 emphasizing the music
00:41:164 (3,5) - Ugly overlap, you can make them stack okay
00:47:945 (3,4,6) - Ugly overlap moved
00:53:082 (1) - Too fast after a spinner, keep at least 2 beat between it shortened
00:57:603 (6,7,1) - Try not to stack in normal difficultyok
01:02:534 (3,4) - Ugly overlap, and it doesn't flow well, change this, (3) can stay, but change location&shape of (4) changed
01:13:630 (3) - To high - HpBar didn't noticed, fixed
01:19:384 (4) - NC k
01:19:384 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved (a lot)
[Hard]
00:01:712 (3,4,5) - They are all terrible blankets, please look carefully when applying fixed
00:04:589 (3,4,5,6) - Improve blanket ^
00:07:055 (3,4) - Improve blanket ^
00:13:014 (6,2) - Ugly overlap ^
00:14:041 (2) - Looks ugly, copy 00:13:630 (1) - and rotate it 180 degrees (and ctrl G and move to correct place) ^
00:15:480 (2) - Too high (Hpbar) fixed
00:20:616 (3,4,5) - Improve blanket ok
00:39:932 (1) - It's 1/2, not 3/4
00:43:219 (1) - ^^
01:22:099 (2,3,4,5) - NC (ALL due to BPM change) forgot about that, fixed
Good luck
oh okay, didn't notice, thxNo Dap wrote:
just fyi
00:42:808 - ~ 00:43:014 - is 1/6
thankies really appreciate itO-Moei wrote:
Hi !, 🌀NM request
✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )
Here we go...General💧Beberapa Clap ga ada pada tempatnya uwu coba periksa sendiri ya XDXD oke entar akan diperiksakalau ga males bcos hitsounding takes a lot of energy orzEasy✨00:10:343 - Point ini penting banget kak, dengerin deh. Harus kena klik nih XDXD Soalnya 00:09:932 - beda banget ritmenya sama yang tadi. Harusnya di map mirip kayak gini 00:19:795 (5,1) - sebenarnya saya bikin 2 slider karena nada nya sama, tapi dipikir lagi karena nada pertama itu awalan dan kalo pake slider jadi weak, oke saya ganti jadi circle
✨01:10:753 (2) - ^ . Ini salah banget deh kyknya uwu . Kalo aku sih bakal ngebuat 01:09:932 (1) - jadi reverse slider, trus ada NC'ed circle disini 01:11:164 - . Trus jadi ada NC yg salah, 01:12:808 (1) - ini harusnya remove NC ups, emang salah banget keanya XD ga kepikiran (males) buat recheck easy sama normal, beatmapnya uda lama haha, oke
✨00:33:356 (1,2) - Bagus nya ini (1) slidertail ngarah pas ke (2) tadi miring dikit haha oke
✨Coba deh kaka bikin sliderend yg ngarah ke downbeat disini 00:38:082 - vokalnya tinggi banget soalnya. Bisa dengan manjangin ini 00:36:644 (1) - sampai 00:37:671 - atau cara lain juga boleh. Masih expectable kok buat newbies diubah buat ngikutin vokal
✨01:24:389 (1) - Punya ending circle buat Easy diff kyknya ga perlu deh XDXD. Mending panjangin aja 01:21:027 (1) - spinner nya hmm okeNormal✨00:29:247 (5) - ini kalo bisa angkat dikit, kliatan kyk yg offscreen disini jadinya ok
✨00:49:795 (1,2) - Pola yang ga enak dimainkan pemula-berpengalaman :V ups
✨00:51:233 (1) - ga kecepetan ni spinner ? ;w; . klo aku sih 00:53:082 (1,2,3) - ini didelete trus spinnernya sampe 00:53:082 - oke
✨00:59:658 (1) - Remove NC, karna kaka dari awalnya juga bikin NC setiap 2 measure okie
01:12:808 (1) - ^ ^
01:19:384 (1) - ^ ^
✨01:01:301 (1,2) - Ritmenya kurang enak. Paling enggak kyk gini 00:54:726 (1,2) - lebih pas okaiHard✨00:09:932 (1,3) - Swap NC oke
00:38:082 (4,1) - ^ karna ada downbeat 4 mengakhiri vocal, 1 mulai drum beat, NC buat misahin 2 hal ini jadi keep
✨01:00:685 (1) - Unnecessary NC hm oke
01:04:178 (1) - ^ ^
Oke that's all from me. All e best C: