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congrats LNP- \:D/

udah ranked aja lu bangke :^)
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\o/ HYPE \o/
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Gratz LNP-!~
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Hype
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Nicee fast rank owo

Hypee /o/
Grats el en pe!
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Kyousuke- wrote:

Nicee fast rank owo

Hypee /o/
Grats el en pe!
sep 7 -> may 20 = fast rank :V
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I had some time to kill so here's some more specifics.. Take this however you wish, mod or not, I don't mind either way. This is just my personal opinion with some suggestions. I think it could use some work before getting ranked.


00:14:521 (14521|1,14521|6,14671|6,14671|1,15121|5,15121|1) -
These should be singles instead of doubles.

00:15:271 (15271|6) -
If this LN is mapped to the background synth, it sounds like it breaks at 00:15:871 and 00:16:171 (example)

00:16:771 (16771|6) - , 00:17:521 (17521|5) - , 00:18:271 (18271|4) - , 00:18:571 (18571|2) -
Are these really LNs when all the previous notes of this instrument are mapped as singles?

00:17:671 (17671|0) -
Same as before, if this is the background synth it breaks at multiple points. (example)

00:17:971
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:19:321 (19321|2,19321|1,19471|2,19471|1,19921|5,19921|4) -
These should be single notes instead of doubles.

00:20:071 (20071|6) -
Same reason as above referring to the background synth.

00:20:671
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:21:571 (21571|6) - and 00:22:321 (22321|6,22471|0,22621|6,22771|0,22921|6) -
Should be single notes for consistency with earlier mapping. The last note 00:22:921 (22921|6) - sounds like its being extended all the way to 00:23:671 as a potential LN.

00:23:146 (23146|3,23296|4) -
Remove these, no drum hit there.

00:23:971
Add a note for the main synth.

00:24:121
Should be 1 note. If the 2nd note is mapped to hi-hats a note should be added to 00:23:821 and 00:24:421 for consistency.

00:24:571
Add a note for the main synth.

00:24:871 (24871|0,25171|4,25471|5,25771|2) -
If these are mapped to the background synth, an additional LN could be added from 00:23:671 to 00:24:871 for consistency.

00:25:021 (25021|2,25321|1,25621|4,25921|1) -
These should be singles, as the main synth has been mapped as such.

00:25:021
Remove 1 note.

00:25:321
Remove 1 note.

00:25:621
Remove 1 note.

00:25:921
Remove 1 note.

00:26:221 - 00:26:521 - 00:26:821 and 00:27:121
Maybe add 1 note for hi-hats for consistency?

00:26:071 (26071|5,26371|3,26671|1) -
Sounds like it breaks like this.

00:26:971
Add a note for the main synth.

00:27:421
Remove either left or right stair, there's still only 1 synth.

00:27:871 (27871|4,28171|2) -
Should be singles if these are mapped as the main synth. If these are mapped as background synth it should be more like this, and 2 more LN should be added between 00:27:271 and 00:27:571 for consistency.

00:28:621
Add a note.

00:28:771
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:29:221
Add a note.

00:29:371
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:29:671 (29671|0,29971|3,30271|6) -
These should be 1 long LN, the synth doesnt break at 00:29:971 or 00:30:271.

00:29:821 (29821|1,30121|4,30421|5,30721|2) -
These should be singles for consistency with earlier mapping.

00:29:821
Remove 1 note.

00:30:121
Remove 1 note.

00:30:421
Remove 1 note.

00:30:721
Remove 1 note.

00:30:871 (30871|4,31471|6) -
If these are background synth, this is how they break.

00:31:171 (31171|2,31921|2) -
These should be singles for consistency with earlier mapping.

00:31:696
Remove 1 note.

00:31:921
Remove 1 note.

00:32:071 (32071|3,32071|4) -
Add drum hitsound to 1 of these.

00:32:971 (32971|1,33046|5,33121|1,33196|4) -
Add drum hitsound to these.

00:33:421 (33421|4,33571|6,33721|2,33871|0) -
These should be singles for consistency with earlier mapping.

00:34:471 (34471|6,34621|5,34771|3,34921|2,35071|5,35221|4,35371|2) -
These should all be singles, or at least not staggered LNs to artificially inflate difficulty here.

00:36:721 (36721|0,36796|1,36871|2,36946|3,37021|4,37096|5,37171|6,37321|0,37396|1,37471|2,37546|3,37621|4,37696|5) -
These should also be singles, it doesn't make much sense to make half of these LNs when the instrument has been mapped as singles earlier.

00:37:921
Add 1 note for consistency, the main instrument is mapped as doubles.

00:38:071
Same as above.

00:38:971 (38971|4,39121|0) -
These should be singles, no reason to suddenly have LN when its the same instrument.

00:39:121 (39121|6) -
Wrong hit sound.

00:40:771 (40771|0,40921|2) -
These should be singles, still the same instrument.

00:41:071 (41071|4,41146|5,41221|6,41296|4,41371|0,41446|1,41521|3,41596|2,41671|5,41746|4,41821|3,41896|2) -
These should be singles, same as above. No reason to artificially inflate difficulty when its still the same instrument.

00:42:121 (42121|2,42121|0,42421|6,42421|4) -
These should be singles, same as above.

00:44:671 (44671|5) -
This LN breaks at 00:45:121. Suggestion

00:46:471 (46471|0,46771|1,47071|6,47371|5,47521|2) -
These shouldn't be multiple LN's, its still 1 instrument. It breaks like this, but not specifically in those lanes of course.

00:46:771
Add 1 note.

00:47:071
Add 1 note.

00:47:446
Add 1 note.

00:47:596
Add 1 note.

00:50:371
Add 1 note.

00:50:671
Add 1 note.

00:50:971
Add 1 note.

00:51:271
Add 1 note.

00:51:571
Add 1 note.

00:51:871 (51871|2) -
This LN should stop at 00:52:021.

00:52:171 (52171|5,52246|1,52321|5,52396|2) -
Add drum hit sound?

00:54:271 (54271|6) -
This LN breaks the same as the one before, same suggestion.

00:57:271 (57271|6) -
This LN breaks here. Maybe continue the stair pattern as well instead of the 3 repeated doubles?

00:59:971
Same as above, maybe continue stairs instead of 3 doubles?

01:02:896
Remove 1 note.

01:03:271 (63271|0,63571|6) -
This is 1 long LN, it doesn't break at 01:03:571.

01:03:421 (63421|1,63721|5,64021|3,64321|2) -
These should be singles.

01:03:421
Remove 1 note.

01:03:721
Remove 1 note.

01:04:021
Remove 1 note.

01:04:321
Remove 1 note.

01:04:621 and 01:04:921
Add 1 note to both for hi-hat?

01:05:071 (65071|4,65371|2) -
These should be 1 long LN, it doesn't break at 01:05:371.

01:05:374
Add 1 note.

01:05:521 (65521|4,65671|0,65671|6,65971|2,66121|4) -
These should be singles for consistency.

01:06:271 (66271|1,66571|3) -
If these are mapped as main synth, they should be singles. If they're background synth they should also be added between 01:05:671 and 01:06:271.

01:08:071 (68071|3,68221|6,68371|4,68521|2,68671|5,68821|3,68971|1,69121|4,69271|2,69571|4,69871|0,70171|6,70321|4) -
These should all be singles, or at least not staggered LNs to artificially inflate difficulty.

01:09:421 and 01:09:721
Add 1 note for hi-hat?

01:11:371 (71371|6,71446|0,71521|6,71596|0) -
Add drum hit sound?

01:14:071
Suggestion

01:15:271
Suggestion

01:20:971 (80971|0,80971|6) -
I'd recommend swapping positions on these two to make the little 1/12 stair more fluent, or make the 1/12 stair singles maybe?

01:23:671
Same suggestion as 01:14:071.

01:25:471 (85471|0,85621|4) -
These 2 LNs should be a 4 small LN stair instead.

01:28:171 (88171|2,88246|3,88321|4,88396|1) -
These are 1/12 stairs, not 1/4. Suggestion

01:30:871 to 01:34:471
All these tiny LN's do nothing but artificially inflate the difficulty, because its still the same instrument as the section before where it was mapped as entirely singles.

01:34:471 (94471|1,94546|2,94621|3,94696|4,95071|5,95146|4,95221|3,95296|2) -
Same as before, this sudden change to staggered stairs just feels out of place to inflate the difficulty.

01:35:671 to 01:38:071
This section is weird. A drastic shift in patterns when the song does not change. Really feels out of place. Plus those LNs sound like this, they are not held down after the pitch changes. Falls into the inflated difficulty category again in my opinion.

Just as a final note starting from the final KIAI time part of the map at 01:40:771 onwards. This part is basically a culmination of everything i have tried to point out up to this point, if you want specifics on that part as well i can go into it more after i wake up.
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LNP- wrote:

Kyousuke- wrote:

Nicee fast rank owo

Hypee /o/
Grats el en pe!
sep 7 -> may 20 = fast rank :V
lmao :V
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Tifyron wrote:

I had some time to kill so here's some more specifics.. Take this however you wish, mod or not, I don't mind either way. This is just my personal opinion with some suggestions. I think it could use some work before getting ranked.


00:14:521 (14521|1,14521|6,14671|6,14671|1,15121|5,15121|1) -
These should be singles instead of doubles.

00:15:271 (15271|6) -
If this LN is mapped to the background synth, it sounds like it breaks at 00:15:871 and 00:16:171 (example)

00:16:771 (16771|6) - , 00:17:521 (17521|5) - , 00:18:271 (18271|4) - , 00:18:571 (18571|2) -
Are these really LNs when all the previous notes of this instrument are mapped as singles?

00:17:671 (17671|0) -
Same as before, if this is the background synth it breaks at multiple points. (example)

00:17:971
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:19:321 (19321|2,19321|1,19471|2,19471|1,19921|5,19921|4) -
These should be single notes instead of doubles.

00:20:071 (20071|6) -
Same reason as above referring to the background synth.

00:20:671
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:21:571 (21571|6) - and 00:22:321 (22321|6,22471|0,22621|6,22771|0,22921|6) -
Should be single notes for consistency with earlier mapping. The last note 00:22:921 (22921|6) - sounds like its being extended all the way to 00:23:671 as a potential LN.

00:23:146 (23146|3,23296|4) -
Remove these, no drum hit there.

00:23:971
Add a note for the main synth.

00:24:121
Should be 1 note. If the 2nd note is mapped to hi-hats a note should be added to 00:23:821 and 00:24:421 for consistency.

00:24:571
Add a note for the main synth.

00:24:871 (24871|0,25171|4,25471|5,25771|2) -
If these are mapped to the background synth, an additional LN could be added from 00:23:671 to 00:24:871 for consistency.

00:25:021 (25021|2,25321|1,25621|4,25921|1) -
These should be singles, as the main synth has been mapped as such.

00:25:021
Remove 1 note.

00:25:321
Remove 1 note.

00:25:621
Remove 1 note.

00:25:921
Remove 1 note.

00:26:221, 00:26:521, 00:26:821 and 00:27:121
Maybe add 1 note for hi-hats for consistency?

00:26:071 (26071|5,26371|3,26671|1) -
Sounds like it breaks like this.

00:26:971
Add a note for the main synth.

00:27:421
Remove either left or right stair, there's still only 1 synth.

00:27:871 (27871|4,28171|2) -
Should be singles if these are mapped as the main synth. If these are mapped as background synth it should be more like this, and 2 more LN should be added between 00:27:271 and 00:27:571 for consistency.

00:28:621
Add a note.

00:28:771
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:29:221
Add a note.

00:29:371
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:29:671 (29671|0,29971|3,30271|6) -
These should be 1 long LN, the synth doesnt break at 00:29:971 or 00:30:271.

00:29:821 (29821|1,30121|4,30421|5,30721|2) -
These should be singles for consistency with earlier mapping.

00:29:821
Remove 1 note.

00:30:121
Remove 1 note.

00:30:421
Remove 1 note.

00:30:721
Remove 1 note.

00:30:871 (30871|4,31471|6) -
If these are background synth, this is how they break.

00:31:171 (31171|2,31921|2) -
These should be singles for consistency with earlier mapping.

00:31:696
Remove 1 note.

00:31:921
Remove 1 note.

00:32:071 (32071|3,32071|4) -
Add drum hitsound to 1 of these.

00:32:971 (32971|1,33046|5,33121|1,33196|4) -
Add drum hitsound to these.

00:33:421 (33421|4,33571|6,33721|2,33871|0) -
These should be singles for consistency with earlier mapping.

00:34:471 (34471|6,34621|5,34771|3,34921|2,35071|5,35221|4,35371|2) -
These should all be singles, or at least not staggered LNs to artificially inflate difficulty here.

00:36:721 (36721|0,36796|1,36871|2,36946|3,37021|4,37096|5,37171|6,37321|0,37396|1,37471|2,37546|3,37621|4,37696|5) -
These should also be singles, it doesn't make much sense to make half of these LNs when the instrument has been mapped as singles earlier.

00:37:921
Add 1 note for consistency, the main instrument is mapped as doubles.

00:38:071
Same as above.

00:38:971 (38971|4,39121|0) -
These should be singles, no reason to suddenly have LN when its the same instrument.

00:39:121 (39121|6) -
Wrong hit sound.

00:40:771 (40771|0,40921|2) -
These should be singles, still the same instrument.

00:41:071 (41071|4,41146|5,41221|6,41296|4,41371|0,41446|1,41521|3,41596|2,41671|5,41746|4,41821|3,41896|2) -
These should be singles, same as above. No reason to artificially inflate difficulty when its still the same instrument.

00:42:121 (42121|2,42121|0,42421|6,42421|4) -
These should be singles, same as above.

00:44:671 (44671|5) -
This LN breaks at 00:45:121. Suggestion

00:46:471 (46471|0,46771|1,47071|6,47371|5,47521|2) -
These shouldn't be multiple LN's, its still 1 instrument. It breaks like this, but not specifically in those lanes of course.

00:46:771
Add 1 note.

00:47:071
Add 1 note.

00:47:446
Add 1 note.

00:47:596
Add 1 note.

00:50:371
Add 1 note.

00:50:671
Add 1 note.

00:50:971
Add 1 note.

00:51:271
Add 1 note.

00:51:571
Add 1 note.

00:51:871 (51871|2) -
This LN should stop at 00:52:021.

00:52:171 (52171|5,52246|1,52321|5,52396|2) -
Add drum hit sound?

00:54:271 (54271|6) -
This LN breaks the same as the one before, same suggestion.

00:57:271 (57271|6) -
This LN breaks here. Maybe continue the stair pattern as well instead of the 3 repeated doubles?

00:59:971
Same as above, maybe continue stairs instead of 3 doubles?

01:02:896
Remove 1 note.

01:03:271 (63271|0,63571|6) -
This is 1 long LN, it doesn't break at 01:03:571.

01:03:421 (63421|1,63721|5,64021|3,64321|2) -
These should be singles.

01:03:421
Remove 1 note.

01:03:721
Remove 1 note.

01:04:021
Remove 1 note.

01:04:321
Remove 1 note.

01:04:621, 01:04:921
Add 1 note to both for hi-hat?

01:05:071 (65071|4,65371|2) -
These should be 1 long LN, it doesn't break at 01:05:371.

01:05:374
Add 1 note.

01:05:521 (65521|4,65671|0,65671|6,65971|2,66121|4) -
These should be singles for consistency.

01:06:271 (66271|1,66571|3) -
If these are mapped as main synth, they should be singles. If they're background synth they should also be added between 01:05:671 and 01:06:271.

01:08:071 (68071|3,68221|6,68371|4,68521|2,68671|5,68821|3,68971|1,69121|4,69271|2,69571|4,69871|0,70171|6,70321|4) -
These should all be singles, or at least not staggered LNs to artificially inflate difficulty.

01:09:421 and 01:09:721
Add 1 note for hi-hat?

01:11:371 (71371|6,71446|0,71521|6,71596|0) -
Add drum hit sound?

01:14:071
Suggestion

01:15:271
Suggestion

01:20:971 (80971|0,80971|6) -
I'd recommend swapping positions on these two to make the little 1/12 stair more fluent, or make the 1/12 stair singles maybe?

01:23:671
Same suggestion as 01:14:071.

01:25:471 (85471|0,85621|4) -
These 2 LNs should be a 4 small LN stair instead.

01:28:171 (88171|2,88246|3,88321|4,88396|1) -
These are 1/12 stairs, not 1/4. Suggestion

01:30:871 to 01:34:471
All these tiny LN's do nothing but artificially inflate the difficulty, because its still the same instrument as the section before where it was mapped as entirely singles.

01:34:471 (94471|1,94546|2,94621|3,94696|4,95071|5,95146|4,95221|3,95296|2) -
Same as before, this sudden change to staggered stairs just feels out of place to inflate the difficulty.

01:35:671 to 01:38:071
This section is weird. A drastic shift in patterns when the song does not change. Really feels out of place. Plus those LNs sound like this, they are not held down after the pitch changes. Falls into the inflated difficulty category again in my opinion.

Just as a final note starting from the final KIAI time part of the map at 01:40:771 onwards. This part is basically a culmination of everything i have tried to point out up to this point, if you want specifics on that part as well i can go into it more after i wake up.
i will ask Remillion Cross about this :)
Thanks before :D
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Tifyron wrote:

I had some time to kill so here's some more specifics.. Take this however you wish, mod or not, I don't mind either way. This is just my personal opinion with some suggestions. I think it could use some work before getting ranked.


00:14:521 (14521|1,14521|6,14671|6,14671|1,15121|5,15121|1) -
These should be singles instead of doubles.

00:15:271 (15271|6) -
If this LN is mapped to the background synth, it sounds like it breaks at 00:15:871 and 00:16:171 (example)

00:16:771 (16771|6) - , 00:17:521 (17521|5) - , 00:18:271 (18271|4) - , 00:18:571 (18571|2) -
Are these really LNs when all the previous notes of this instrument are mapped as singles?

00:17:671 (17671|0) -
Same as before, if this is the background synth it breaks at multiple points. (example)

00:17:971
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:19:321 (19321|2,19321|1,19471|2,19471|1,19921|5,19921|4) -
These should be single notes instead of doubles.

00:20:071 (20071|6) -
Same reason as above referring to the background synth.

00:20:671
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:21:571 (21571|6) - and 00:22:321 (22321|6,22471|0,22621|6,22771|0,22921|6) -
Should be single notes for consistency with earlier mapping. The last note 00:22:921 (22921|6) - sounds like its being extended all the way to 00:23:671 as a potential LN.

00:23:146 (23146|3,23296|4) -
Remove these, no drum hit there.

00:23:971
Add a note for the main synth.

00:24:121
Should be 1 note. If the 2nd note is mapped to hi-hats a note should be added to 00:23:821 and 00:24:421 for consistency.

00:24:571
Add a note for the main synth.

00:24:871 (24871|0,25171|4,25471|5,25771|2) -
If these are mapped to the background synth, an additional LN could be added from 00:23:671 to 00:24:871 for consistency.

00:25:021 (25021|2,25321|1,25621|4,25921|1) -
These should be singles, as the main synth has been mapped as such.

00:25:021
Remove 1 note.

00:25:321
Remove 1 note.

00:25:621
Remove 1 note.

00:25:921
Remove 1 note.

00:26:221, 00:26:521, 00:26:821 and 00:27:121
Maybe add 1 note for hi-hats for consistency?

00:26:071 (26071|5,26371|3,26671|1) -
Sounds like it breaks like this.

00:26:971
Add a note for the main synth.

00:27:421
Remove either left or right stair, there's still only 1 synth.

00:27:871 (27871|4,28171|2) -
Should be singles if these are mapped as the main synth. If these are mapped as background synth it should be more like this, and 2 more LN should be added between 00:27:271 and 00:27:571 for consistency.

00:28:621
Add a note.

00:28:771
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:29:221
Add a note.

00:29:371
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:29:671 (29671|0,29971|3,30271|6) -
These should be 1 long LN, the synth doesnt break at 00:29:971 or 00:30:271.

00:29:821 (29821|1,30121|4,30421|5,30721|2) -
These should be singles for consistency with earlier mapping.

00:29:821
Remove 1 note.

00:30:121
Remove 1 note.

00:30:421
Remove 1 note.

00:30:721
Remove 1 note.

00:30:871 (30871|4,31471|6) -
If these are background synth, this is how they break.

00:31:171 (31171|2,31921|2) -
These should be singles for consistency with earlier mapping.

00:31:696
Remove 1 note.

00:31:921
Remove 1 note.

00:32:071 (32071|3,32071|4) -
Add drum hitsound to 1 of these.

00:32:971 (32971|1,33046|5,33121|1,33196|4) -
Add drum hitsound to these.

00:33:421 (33421|4,33571|6,33721|2,33871|0) -
These should be singles for consistency with earlier mapping.

00:34:471 (34471|6,34621|5,34771|3,34921|2,35071|5,35221|4,35371|2) -
These should all be singles, or at least not staggered LNs to artificially inflate difficulty here.

00:36:721 (36721|0,36796|1,36871|2,36946|3,37021|4,37096|5,37171|6,37321|0,37396|1,37471|2,37546|3,37621|4,37696|5) -
These should also be singles, it doesn't make much sense to make half of these LNs when the instrument has been mapped as singles earlier.

00:37:921
Add 1 note for consistency, the main instrument is mapped as doubles.

00:38:071
Same as above.

00:38:971 (38971|4,39121|0) -
These should be singles, no reason to suddenly have LN when its the same instrument.

00:39:121 (39121|6) -
Wrong hit sound.

00:40:771 (40771|0,40921|2) -
These should be singles, still the same instrument.

00:41:071 (41071|4,41146|5,41221|6,41296|4,41371|0,41446|1,41521|3,41596|2,41671|5,41746|4,41821|3,41896|2) -
These should be singles, same as above. No reason to artificially inflate difficulty when its still the same instrument.

00:42:121 (42121|2,42121|0,42421|6,42421|4) -
These should be singles, same as above.

00:44:671 (44671|5) -
This LN breaks at 00:45:121. Suggestion

00:46:471 (46471|0,46771|1,47071|6,47371|5,47521|2) -
These shouldn't be multiple LN's, its still 1 instrument. It breaks like this, but not specifically in those lanes of course.

00:46:771
Add 1 note.

00:47:071
Add 1 note.

00:47:446
Add 1 note.

00:47:596
Add 1 note.

00:50:371
Add 1 note.

00:50:671
Add 1 note.

00:50:971
Add 1 note.

00:51:271
Add 1 note.

00:51:571
Add 1 note.

00:51:871 (51871|2) -
This LN should stop at 00:52:021.

00:52:171 (52171|5,52246|1,52321|5,52396|2) -
Add drum hit sound?

00:54:271 (54271|6) -
This LN breaks the same as the one before, same suggestion.

00:57:271 (57271|6) -
This LN breaks here. Maybe continue the stair pattern as well instead of the 3 repeated doubles?

00:59:971
Same as above, maybe continue stairs instead of 3 doubles?

01:02:896
Remove 1 note.

01:03:271 (63271|0,63571|6) -
This is 1 long LN, it doesn't break at 01:03:571.

01:03:421 (63421|1,63721|5,64021|3,64321|2) -
These should be singles.

01:03:421
Remove 1 note.

01:03:721
Remove 1 note.

01:04:021
Remove 1 note.

01:04:321
Remove 1 note.

01:04:621, 01:04:921
Add 1 note to both for hi-hat?

01:05:071 (65071|4,65371|2) -
These should be 1 long LN, it doesn't break at 01:05:371.

01:05:374
Add 1 note.

01:05:521 (65521|4,65671|0,65671|6,65971|2,66121|4) -
These should be singles for consistency.

01:06:271 (66271|1,66571|3) -
If these are mapped as main synth, they should be singles. If they're background synth they should also be added between 01:05:671 and 01:06:271.

01:08:071 (68071|3,68221|6,68371|4,68521|2,68671|5,68821|3,68971|1,69121|4,69271|2,69571|4,69871|0,70171|6,70321|4) -
These should all be singles, or at least not staggered LNs to artificially inflate difficulty.

01:09:421 and 01:09:721
Add 1 note for hi-hat?

01:11:371 (71371|6,71446|0,71521|6,71596|0) -
Add drum hit sound?

01:14:071
Suggestion

01:15:271
Suggestion

01:20:971 (80971|0,80971|6) -
I'd recommend swapping positions on these two to make the little 1/12 stair more fluent, or make the 1/12 stair singles maybe?

01:23:671
Same suggestion as 01:14:071.

01:25:471 (85471|0,85621|4) -
These 2 LNs should be a 4 small LN stair instead.

01:28:171 (88171|2,88246|3,88321|4,88396|1) -
These are 1/12 stairs, not 1/4. Suggestion

01:30:871 to 01:34:471
All these tiny LN's do nothing but artificially inflate the difficulty, because its still the same instrument as the section before where it was mapped as entirely singles.

01:34:471 (94471|1,94546|2,94621|3,94696|4,95071|5,95146|4,95221|3,95296|2) -
Same as before, this sudden change to staggered stairs just feels out of place to inflate the difficulty.

01:35:671 to 01:38:071
This section is weird. A drastic shift in patterns when the song does not change. Really feels out of place. Plus those LNs sound like this, they are not held down after the pitch changes. Falls into the inflated difficulty category again in my opinion.

Just as a final note starting from the final KIAI time part of the map at 01:40:771 onwards. This part is basically a culmination of everything i have tried to point out up to this point, if you want specifics on that part as well i can go into it more after i wake up.
pls someone call QAT or anything who can DQ this map, it might be useful if QAT also check this stuff so we can fixed both ur mod and QAT's mod

before i fix this, do you think if it's a major problems that should be fixed ? if you say yes, so yeah.. will fixed as soon as i can
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Tifyron wrote:

I had some time to kill so here's some more specifics.. Take this however you wish, mod or not, I don't mind either way. This is just my personal opinion with some suggestions. I think it could use some work before getting ranked.


00:14:521 (14521|1,14521|6,14671|6,14671|1,15121|5,15121|1) -
These should be singles instead of doubles.

00:15:271 (15271|6) -
If this LN is mapped to the background synth, it sounds like it breaks at 00:15:871 and 00:16:171 (example)

00:16:771 (16771|6) - , 00:17:521 (17521|5) - , 00:18:271 (18271|4) - , 00:18:571 (18571|2) -
Are these really LNs when all the previous notes of this instrument are mapped as singles?

00:17:671 (17671|0) -
Same as before, if this is the background synth it breaks at multiple points. (example)

00:17:971
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:19:321 (19321|2,19321|1,19471|2,19471|1,19921|5,19921|4) -
These should be single notes instead of doubles.

00:20:071 (20071|6) -
Same reason as above referring to the background synth.

00:20:671
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:21:571 (21571|6) - and 00:22:321 (22321|6,22471|0,22621|6,22771|0,22921|6) -
Should be single notes for consistency with earlier mapping. The last note 00:22:921 (22921|6) - sounds like its being extended all the way to 00:23:671 as a potential LN.

00:23:146 (23146|3,23296|4) -
Remove these, no drum hit there.

00:23:971
Add a note for the main synth.

00:24:121
Should be 1 note. If the 2nd note is mapped to hi-hats a note should be added to 00:23:821 and 00:24:421 for consistency.

00:24:571
Add a note for the main synth.

00:24:871 (24871|0,25171|4,25471|5,25771|2) -
If these are mapped to the background synth, an additional LN could be added from 00:23:671 to 00:24:871 for consistency.

00:25:021 (25021|2,25321|1,25621|4,25921|1) -
These should be singles, as the main synth has been mapped as such.

00:25:021
Remove 1 note.

00:25:321
Remove 1 note.

00:25:621
Remove 1 note.

00:25:921
Remove 1 note.

00:26:221, 00:26:521, 00:26:821 and 00:27:121
Maybe add 1 note for hi-hats for consistency?

00:26:071 (26071|5,26371|3,26671|1) -
Sounds like it breaks like this.

00:26:971
Add a note for the main synth.

00:27:421
Remove either left or right stair, there's still only 1 synth.

00:27:871 (27871|4,28171|2) -
Should be singles if these are mapped as the main synth. If these are mapped as background synth it should be more like this, and 2 more LN should be added between 00:27:271 and 00:27:571 for consistency.

00:28:621
Add a note.

00:28:771
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:29:221
Add a note.

00:29:371
Add a note for a drum hit.

00:29:671 (29671|0,29971|3,30271|6) -
These should be 1 long LN, the synth doesnt break at 00:29:971 or 00:30:271.

00:29:821 (29821|1,30121|4,30421|5,30721|2) -
These should be singles for consistency with earlier mapping.

00:29:821
Remove 1 note.

00:30:121
Remove 1 note.

00:30:421
Remove 1 note.

00:30:721
Remove 1 note.

00:30:871 (30871|4,31471|6) -
If these are background synth, this is how they break.

00:31:171 (31171|2,31921|2) -
These should be singles for consistency with earlier mapping.

00:31:696
Remove 1 note.

00:31:921
Remove 1 note.

00:32:071 (32071|3,32071|4) -
Add drum hitsound to 1 of these.

00:32:971 (32971|1,33046|5,33121|1,33196|4) -
Add drum hitsound to these.

00:33:421 (33421|4,33571|6,33721|2,33871|0) -
These should be singles for consistency with earlier mapping.

00:34:471 (34471|6,34621|5,34771|3,34921|2,35071|5,35221|4,35371|2) -
These should all be singles, or at least not staggered LNs to artificially inflate difficulty here.

00:36:721 (36721|0,36796|1,36871|2,36946|3,37021|4,37096|5,37171|6,37321|0,37396|1,37471|2,37546|3,37621|4,37696|5) -
These should also be singles, it doesn't make much sense to make half of these LNs when the instrument has been mapped as singles earlier.

00:37:921
Add 1 note for consistency, the main instrument is mapped as doubles.

00:38:071
Same as above.

00:38:971 (38971|4,39121|0) -
These should be singles, no reason to suddenly have LN when its the same instrument.

00:39:121 (39121|6) -
Wrong hit sound.

00:40:771 (40771|0,40921|2) -
These should be singles, still the same instrument.

00:41:071 (41071|4,41146|5,41221|6,41296|4,41371|0,41446|1,41521|3,41596|2,41671|5,41746|4,41821|3,41896|2) -
These should be singles, same as above. No reason to artificially inflate difficulty when its still the same instrument.

00:42:121 (42121|2,42121|0,42421|6,42421|4) -
These should be singles, same as above.

00:44:671 (44671|5) -
This LN breaks at 00:45:121. Suggestion

00:46:471 (46471|0,46771|1,47071|6,47371|5,47521|2) -
These shouldn't be multiple LN's, its still 1 instrument. It breaks like this, but not specifically in those lanes of course.

00:46:771
Add 1 note.

00:47:071
Add 1 note.

00:47:446
Add 1 note.

00:47:596
Add 1 note.

00:50:371
Add 1 note.

00:50:671
Add 1 note.

00:50:971
Add 1 note.

00:51:271
Add 1 note.

00:51:571
Add 1 note.

00:51:871 (51871|2) -
This LN should stop at 00:52:021.

00:52:171 (52171|5,52246|1,52321|5,52396|2) -
Add drum hit sound?

00:54:271 (54271|6) -
This LN breaks the same as the one before, same suggestion.

00:57:271 (57271|6) -
This LN breaks here. Maybe continue the stair pattern as well instead of the 3 repeated doubles?

00:59:971
Same as above, maybe continue stairs instead of 3 doubles?

01:02:896
Remove 1 note.

01:03:271 (63271|0,63571|6) -
This is 1 long LN, it doesn't break at 01:03:571.

01:03:421 (63421|1,63721|5,64021|3,64321|2) -
These should be singles.

01:03:421
Remove 1 note.

01:03:721
Remove 1 note.

01:04:021
Remove 1 note.

01:04:321
Remove 1 note.

01:04:621, 01:04:921
Add 1 note to both for hi-hat?

01:05:071 (65071|4,65371|2) -
These should be 1 long LN, it doesn't break at 01:05:371.

01:05:374
Add 1 note.

01:05:521 (65521|4,65671|0,65671|6,65971|2,66121|4) -
These should be singles for consistency.

01:06:271 (66271|1,66571|3) -
If these are mapped as main synth, they should be singles. If they're background synth they should also be added between 01:05:671 and 01:06:271.

01:08:071 (68071|3,68221|6,68371|4,68521|2,68671|5,68821|3,68971|1,69121|4,69271|2,69571|4,69871|0,70171|6,70321|4) -
These should all be singles, or at least not staggered LNs to artificially inflate difficulty.

01:09:421 and 01:09:721
Add 1 note for hi-hat?

01:11:371 (71371|6,71446|0,71521|6,71596|0) -
Add drum hit sound?

01:14:071
Suggestion

01:15:271
Suggestion

01:20:971 (80971|0,80971|6) -
I'd recommend swapping positions on these two to make the little 1/12 stair more fluent, or make the 1/12 stair singles maybe?

01:23:671
Same suggestion as 01:14:071.

01:25:471 (85471|0,85621|4) -
These 2 LNs should be a 4 small LN stair instead.

01:28:171 (88171|2,88246|3,88321|4,88396|1) -
These are 1/12 stairs, not 1/4. Suggestion

01:30:871 to 01:34:471
All these tiny LN's do nothing but artificially inflate the difficulty, because its still the same instrument as the section before where it was mapped as entirely singles.

01:34:471 (94471|1,94546|2,94621|3,94696|4,95071|5,95146|4,95221|3,95296|2) -
Same as before, this sudden change to staggered stairs just feels out of place to inflate the difficulty.

01:35:671 to 01:38:071
This section is weird. A drastic shift in patterns when the song does not change. Really feels out of place. Plus those LNs sound like this, they are not held down after the pitch changes. Falls into the inflated difficulty category again in my opinion.

Just as a final note starting from the final KIAI time part of the map at 01:40:771 onwards. This part is basically a culmination of everything i have tried to point out up to this point, if you want specifics on that part as well i can go into it more after i wake up.
ripperino million style Xd


Remillion Cross wrote:

pls someone call QAT or anything who can DQ this map, it might be useful if QAT also check this stuff so we can fixed both ur mod and QAT's mod

before i fix this, do you think if it's a major problems that should be fixed ? if you say yes, so yeah.. will fixed as soon as i can
eh waiting for qat good luck xD


EDIT: i'll try to call Roxas for this
posted
Fixed some editor links in previous post, they don't seem to like commas.

00:26:221 - 00:26:521 - 00:26:821 and 00:27:121
Maybe add 1 note for hi-hats for consistency?

Harbyter wrote:

ripperino million style Xd
That really wasn't the intention. Maps like this don't come around too often so i figured it was a good chance for some feedback.
posted

Tifyron wrote:

Fixed some editor links in previous post, they don't seem to like commas.

00:26:221 - 00:26:521 - 00:26:821 and 00:27:121
Maybe add 1 note for hi-hats for consistency?

Harbyter wrote:

ripperino million style Xd
That really wasn't the intention. Maps like this don't come around too often so i figured it was a good chance for some feedback.
mine was just a ironic sentence don't worry xD i've checked the mod too and is good, nothing to complain

EDIT: and seems like million wanted to apply those mod too so it's fine
posted
grats map yg di tunggu" >w< :v
posted
someone pls give him a medal kudosu...
posted
Isnt that all just a subjective? I dont see any unrankable issue. You just stated your opinion and you pointed out things that isnt that worth dq-ing for example add note here remove notes here, change the patterns here, this ln is somewhat weird mlg 430 kill it. Would probably rethink before posting or making a check.

As for what remi said, i think it should be fine to call out some qats. The thing is it isnt bad to be dq-ed you shouldnt be embarassed about it as it improves the quality of your map. Looking forward for this one to get rerank fast if theres any trouble.
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YunoFanatic wrote:

Isnt that all just a subjective? I dont see any unrankable issue. You just stated your opinion and you pointed out things that isnt that worth dq-ing for example add note here remove notes here, change the patterns here, this ln is somewhat weird mlg 430 kill it. Would probably rethink before posting or making a check.
Isn't the entire point of this to provide suggestions/feedback? Of course a lot of it is subjective, its just my opinions at the end of the day. In a map like this I think it is critical that the LN are mapped correctly, especially the LN release timings. I don't think you can just extend an LN to make harder patterns when audibly the LN clearly ends.

As for the remove/add 1 note lines, those specifically are when the main synth is mapped like a stair of singles. Take this screenshot for example.

The blue parts are mapped as drum hits, with hitsound. Most of the "add a note" comments are for areas where a hitsounded drum hit is missing.

All of that said, there are some parts in there which are not subjective.
posted
this rhythm rookie should be a qat
posted

Tifyron wrote:

YunoFanatic wrote:

Isnt that all just a subjective? I dont see any unrankable issue. You just stated your opinion and you pointed out things that isnt that worth dq-ing for example add note here remove notes here, change the patterns here, this ln is somewhat weird mlg 430 kill it. Would probably rethink before posting or making a check.
Isn't the entire point of this to provide suggestions/feedback? Of course a lot of it is subjective, its just my opinions at the end of the day. In a map like this I think it is critical that the LN are mapped correctly, especially the LN release timings. I don't think you can just extend an LN to make harder patterns when audibly the LN clearly ends.

As for the remove/add 1 note lines, those specifically are when the main synth is mapped like a stair of singles. Take this screenshot for example.

The blue parts are mapped as drum hits, with hitsound. Most of the "add a note" comments are for areas where a hitsounded drum hit is missing.

All of that said, there are some parts in there which are not subjective.
could you give me more details mod for my quest diff (MX too) ? it's okay even if you change everything, i do this for PERFECT sake, and lesson, of course.

And, QAT where are you

anyway.. if you have a time, you should check my valhalla too. i will consider to re-rank it because it got DQ 1 months ago.
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