[Mastication]
00:01:477 (1477|0,2295|3) - LNs are pointless here
00:03:249 (3249|1) - ghost, should be placed at 00:03:318 -
00:03:113 (3113|3) - LN should not end there since you have the normal notes
00:04:681 (4681|2) - remove ghost note
00:05:499 (5499|1) - ^
00:06:318 (6318|2) - ^
00:06:590 - add note, same sound as 00:06:522 (6522|2) -
00:06:386 (6386|0) - same as before
00:07:954 (7954|1) - ghost
00:08:772 (8772|2) - ^
00:09:590 (9590|1) - ^
00:09:659 (9659|2) - same as I mentioned before
00:09:863 - add
00:11:227 (11227|1) - remove
00:13:204 (13204|3) - pointless
remove all ghost notes
same problem keeps coming up, suggest to re-arrange notes and reconsider about placement
[Usagi]
00:37:749 (37749|0,37886|0) - something like this may be too hard, try reduce some but also keep some for challenge
00:39:659 (39659|3,39659|0,39795|0,39795|2) - is same as 00:39:522 - because they are same kind of sound with different pitch only, theres more, something same showed up before.
00:39:795 - is even same pitch as 00:39:522 -
00:47:295 (47295|3,47295|2,47568|3,48113|3) - suggest to switch columns
00:53:568 (53568|3,53704|0,53772|1) - suggest to use normal notes since it is 1/4 short
00:54:795 (54795|3,55068|1) - switch column ,different sound
01:07:477 (67477|3,67545|1,67613|3,67681|1) - I think this pattern is too hard for hard
01:07:886 (67886|2,68159|0,68431|2) - switch column, different pitch
01:12:386 (72386|3,72454|2,72522|3,72590|2) - came really sudden for right hand
01:13:477 - wat
01:20:022 (80022|2,80159|1,80295|2,80431|1,80568|2,80704|1) - why LNs here?
01:26:568 (86568|3,86704|0,86840|3,86977|0,87113|3,87249|0,87386|3,87522|0) - same
01:47:749 - add
01:54:590 (114590|3,114863|1) - suggest to change to normal ntoes
[Normal]
This diff looks like putting note on every 1/4 without making difference betweent different sound
00:12:113 - something like this should be the same as 00:10:477 -
00:27:931 (27931|1,28204|2,28477|3) -00:28:749 (28749|2,29022|1) - why are these added when others aren't
There are a lot of missing notes, you should focus on one instrument instead of switching around
00:50:295 (50295|0) - should be 1/4 at 00:50:431 - 00:50:499 -
00:51:931 (51931|1) - ^
00:59:568 (59568|3) - ^
01:00:386 (60386|0,60659|3,60931|0) - why are these even there, you should remove them and add note at 01:00:522 - 01:00:795 -