This has been sitting around for quite awhile
[Oni]
[Oni]
- 00:34:919 (157,158,159,160,161) - This play here was a bit awkward and didn't really flow well in regards to the previous pattern. I suggest changing it to dkd ddk. Fit and played much better IMO. Another good alternative would be ddk ddk
- 01:15:913 (240,241,242) - I know you are going for a bit of variety here but I think it would be a better idea to stick with what you had at 01:09:950 (215,216,217) - . Sounds nicer to the music and plays better.
- 00:49:453 (90) - big d would be nice here, like you did in the muzu and oni
- 00:36:223 (38) - Perhaps it would be better to have it at 00:36:037 - to keep consistency with the rest of your other patterns and rhythms. Also follows the music more closely imo
- 01:25:416 (32,1) - tbh this is a bit too close to eachother. When I was a newer player I had struggles figuring out what the sliders were even for, and with a big D at the end I think this will be a hard pattern to have in a Kantan