Otokaze - KaeriMichi

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Topic Starter
Narcissu

axschiming wrote:

粪MOD
XD…… XD


[Easy]
00:29:608 (7,1) - 包一下
01:10:784 (3,4) - 4包一下3
00:33:725 (3) - 弧度可以大一点

這個diff會大改orz

[Normal]
00:19:606 (7) - 试着向左凹可能flow更顺……一直順的太死板啦>,


实际上咱也摸不出什么,就是感觉音效可以做的仔细些,比如在01:23:136 (1)这类的地方可以换个比较亮的Finish之类的……唔……音效是太懶orz……有機會我去找找

[Hard]

00:37:254 (3,4) - 可以把4拆成一个散点和一个一拍的滑条……這個一改就是十來個啊>,
00:45:489 (1,2,3) - 感觉不好看……唔……換了一下
01:32:548 (1,2) - 节奏改成散点跟一个半拍的折返滑条试试……也是一改就是一堆啊>,
01:42:548 (2,3) - 纯建议……我這裡看不了Puu啊orz
http://puu.sh/cfnWN/5be42546c3.jpg

[Hyper]
01:05:489 (5) - 0 0……放不下了>,
http://puu.sh/cfoc4/6367688783.jpg
01:28:136 (2,3) - 换个位置……

这个难度跃进的有点大……但是只多了一星 >,



[Sharlo's Insane]

神麻婆,摸不动Orz

[Eternal]

抱歉感觉高难度实在有点看不懂;w;……是啊是啊>,



很喜欢这张图哦,祝早日rank……喵~
感謝摸圖~
PinkHeart
From your request

[Easy]

01:06:665 (3) - aimod显示end unsnapped
00:16:666 (6) - Easy上1.6x有点过了吧 其他的不列了

[Normal]

none.

[Hard]

Aimod还是说有unsnapped的note 试了一下应该是头没对齐

01:36:666 (6,7,1) - 67从左边过来更好

[Hyper]

Aimod还是说有unsnapped的note
kiai和别的难度设置不一样

00:26:077 (7,8,9,10) - 其实这里右左右左的安排会更舒服 这样第一下就要折返 现在是第二下才开始折返 感觉还不如把10放到7上

[Sharlo]

widescreen不知道为什么开着

00:41:078 (2) - 左半屏把y开到0的话一定会顶到血条 往下移一点
01:41:519 (2,3) - 感觉不该在这减小间距 之前都是重拍之后间距缩小 我个人觉得这么摆更好


[Eternal]

我不知道Eternal是梗还是什么的啊 个人不喜欢没有原因随便拉个帅气的词就拿来做最高难度名

00:25:195 (4,5,6,7) - 这个梗感觉怪怪的 和后面也接不上
00:31:372 - 从这到kiai感觉一直都是跳啊跳 我不知道现在的高水平玩家是不是多大跳都无所谓 正常人还是从间距变化上来感受的吧 全是大间距跳有点无聊了

音效下的挺好 没什么好讲 就这样吧
Topic Starter
Narcissu

PinkHeart wrote:

From your request

[Easy]

01:06:665 (3) - aimod显示end unsnapped……fix~
00:16:666 (6) - Easy上1.6x有点过了吧 其他的不列了……因為不是1/1所以放開一點……

[Normal]

none.

[Hard]

Aimod还是说有unsnapped的note 试了一下应该是头没对齐……fix~

01:36:666 (6,7,1) - 67从左边过来更好……那就擺不下了啦

[Hyper]

Aimod还是说有unsnapped的note……fix
kiai和别的难度设置不一样……fix

00:26:077 (7,8,9,10) - 其实这里右左右左的安排会更舒服 这样第一下就要折返 现在是第二下才开始折返 感觉还不如把10放到7上……那就變成跳了……

[Eternal]

我不知道Eternal是梗还是什么的啊 个人不喜欢没有原因随便拉个帅气的词就拿来做最高难度名……那用什麼呢……思考……

00:25:195 (4,5,6,7) - 这个梗感觉怪怪的 和后面也接不上……唔……但是不知道怎麼改
00:31:372 - 从这到kiai感觉一直都是跳啊跳 我不知道现在的高水平玩家是不是多大跳都无所谓 正常人还是从间距变化上来感受的吧 全是大间距跳有点无聊了……雖然比正常值高很多,但是我覺得還是有近有遠的啊……並不是全部大跳而是大跳,特大跳和超級跳【喂

音效下的挺好 没什么好讲 就这样吧
感謝摸圖~
Sharlo

PinkHeart wrote:

[Sharlo]

widescreen不知道为什么开着 关了

00:41:078 (2) - 左半屏把y开到0的话一定会顶到血条 往下移一点 我现在这样进test看还好
01:41:519 (2,3) - 感觉不该在这减小间距 之前都是重拍之后间距缩小 我个人觉得这么摆更好
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258,287,105784,2,0,L|288:216,1,76.9999971046448,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,160,106078,5,8,0:0:0:0:
201,177,106225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,192,106372,1,4,0:0:0:0:
124,124,106519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,216,106666,1,4,0:1:0:0:
lsahi
[General]
曲子呢很不错,基本上我很喜欢,尤其是sharlo(喂,
其他的都没什么问题


下面问题来了
[Eternal]
音效部分
首先,整体建议减小到50%吧,本来就是比较安静的音乐,(还真别说66声音也不小,,,)
有些拍子略微有点凌乱
00:31:078 (1) -
01:27:548 (1) -
以上,去掉clap,换成finish

00:35:195 (7) -
00:39:901 (7) -
00:44:607 (7) -
00:49:313 (7) -
等等还有好多
这种尾音放在这歌里听着有些奇妙,可以选择把这种音调低(5%?)

排版部分
先来个总起,就是flow会有些生硬
00:08:872 (5) - 加个锚点,右下凹
00:12:548 (1) - 可以稍微拧一下,然后后面的①和2构成一个椭圆型flow
00:54:607 (9) - 虽然跟后面不对称了不过这里顺时针旋转10~15度试试
01:09:019 (1) - 加个锚点吧,让他向左凹一点,,,
整体还是挺漂亮的,不过看起来有复制粘贴啊,,,幸好本身图没那么规整
Sharlo

lsahi wrote:

曲子呢很不错,基本上我很喜欢,尤其是sharlo(喂
是喜欢sharlo的难度还是sharlo >////<
TtmnZk
这么久才来po,说真的我想拍死自己

[General]
Eternal od9的话, ar可以往上调调?

以及除了IN都没Kiai,是不加么?

Tag add Sharlo(GDer,太鼓你保留的话也是,以及太鼓DIff名有问题) 帰路(原先怎么是简体?233)彩る四季、風と音色(专辑)

[Eternal]
都是些flow向的建议,不用太重视>w0

00:13:578 (4) - Ctrl+g 可能对flow有帮助(?

00:14:019 (5) - 上面改了的话这里也要 Ctrl+g呦~

00:12:401 (11,1) - 跳之后突然停顿的感觉,我觉得还是分开好

00:16:813 (9,10) - ctrl+g,感觉会爽点

00:25:342 (5) - 跟前面接略卡手,强烈建议ctrl+g

00:35:195 (7) - ^

01:17:107 (5) - ^

01:40:931 (6,9) - 尾部叠一下?

01:42:548 (3,5) - 5尾部貌似没叠好

整体好棒好棒的~

[Sharlo]
00:56:225 (2) - 和00:56:960 没叠好?

摸不出什么了额,很整齐很棒的sharlo姐姐!

[Hard]
01:45:195 (4) - add clap

[Normal]
00:08:725 (3) - 红点滑条,打起来怪怪的

[Easy]
fine

Hai Owarimashita!
ps 整个set星数超超超超超整齐!star star!
lsahi

Sharlo wrote:

lsahi wrote:

曲子呢很不错,基本上我很喜欢,尤其是sharlo(喂
是喜欢sharlo的难度还是sharlo >////<
都喜欢o///o
Topic Starter
Narcissu

TT Mouse wrote:

这么久才来po,说真的我想拍死自己……沒關係的沒關係的,窩被很多人放過鴿子>,

[General]
Eternal od9的话, ar可以往上调调?……不喜歡用小數……我自己打也不習慣……

以及除了IN都没Kiai,是不加么?……其實有>,

Tag add Sharlo(GDer,太鼓你保留的话也是,以及太鼓DIff名有问题) 帰路(原先怎么是简体?233)彩る四季、風と音色(专辑)……都加了~那個歸路因為標題又來所以tag用一個簡體

[Eternal]
都是些flow向的建议,不用太重视>w0

00:13:578 (4) - Ctrl+g 可能对flow有帮助(?……那就4.25的DS啦太遠了……

00:14:019 (5) - 上面改了的话这里也要 Ctrl+g呦~

00:12:401 (11,1) - 跳之后突然停顿的感觉,我觉得还是分开好……分開了~

00:16:813 (9,10) - ctrl+g,感觉会爽点……我不懂flow啊……而且不想都轉圈跳>,

00:25:342 (5) - 跟前面接略卡手,强烈建议ctrl+g……強烈建議的話就改好了orz

00:35:195 (7) - ^……這個換了就沒地方接下一個滑條了惹

01:17:107 (5) - ^……這個地方的滑條全部是同向的……

01:40:931 (6,9) - 尾部叠一下?……fix~

01:42:548 (3,5) - 5尾部貌似没叠好……fix~

整体好棒好棒的~……喵>,

[Hard]
01:45:195 (4) - add clap……加了>,

[Normal]
00:08:725 (3) - 红点滑条,打起来怪怪的…………該了

[Easy]
fine

Hai Owarimashita!
ps 整个set星数超超超超超整齐!star star!……喜歡就好喜歡就好~

lsahi wrote:

[Eternal]
音效部分
首先,整体建议减小到50%吧,本来就是比较安静的音乐,(还真别说66声音也不小,,,)……唔……我覺得66挺好……
有些拍子略微有点凌乱
00:31:078 (1) -
01:27:548 (1) -
以上,去掉clap,换成finish……這是外加的停頓……不然就兩拍沒東西了惹

00:35:195 (7) -
00:39:901 (7) -
00:44:607 (7) -
00:49:313 (7) -
等等还有好多
这种尾音放在这歌里听着有些奇妙,可以选择把这种音调低(5%?)……我覺得消音滑條尾會讓玩家有沒按到的錯覺……

排版部分
先来个总起,就是flow会有些生硬
00:08:872 (5) - 加个锚点,右下凹 ……窩是想弄平行梗啊啊啊啊>,
00:12:548 (1) - 可以稍微拧一下,然后后面的①和2构成一个椭圆型flow……改了~
00:54:607 (9) - 虽然跟后面不对称了不过这里顺时针旋转10~15度试试……我想弄平行梗啊>,
01:09:019 (1) - 加个锚点吧,让他向左凹一点,,,……平行梗啊>,
整体还是挺漂亮的,不过看起来有复制粘贴啊,,,幸好本身图没那么规整……複製粘貼我的愛>,

Gaia wrote:

haai as requested~

puush 用不了好痛苦 T^T……233
[General]
taiko 需要兩個diffs, muzu 跟 oni 不然是unrankable 喔……太鼓已經刪了>,

Hyper = Insane? 通常 hyper 是 hard [Beginner/Standard/Hyper/Another] 但 你之前都用 [Easy/Normal/Hard] 我建議你改名為Insane……畢竟沒到In圖標……保留……

easy remap 了惹>,

[normal]
NC 建議跟Easy 一樣……換成2節一次了……
00:07:254 (7) - 如果是 " \ " 的形狀會比較順?……
00:10:195 (7) - 灣多一點會比較好? ……看不到看不到><

00:13:136 (2,3) - (好挑剔) 可以包更好……fix~
00:20:342 (8) - 灣另一邊?

00:22:548 (2,3) - 又來了……fix~
00:35:489 (8) - (312, 244) 三角形好像比較順?……唔……三角有點擠
00:52:548 (5,6) - 包起來……fix~
00:54:312 (8) - 跟00:35:489 (8) - 一樣……其實不一樣吧……
01:19:019 (2,3) - 好像太挑剔了所以不講了……fix~
01:30:195 (5,6) - 但這個就差蠻大了……fix~

[hard]
00:21:960 (1,2) - 00:32:842 (4,1) - 00:41:372 (2,3) - (還有蠻多其他的.... 我就不講了)
00:29:607 - 00:48:431 (2) - 01:07:254 (2) - 01:08:431 (6) - 音樂裡沒鼓聲喔, clap 去掉……
00:20:489 - 00:25:195 (2) - -00:34:607 - 00:39:313 - 00:44:019 - 00:53:431 - 00:58:136 - 但這裡可以加clap .... 剩下的給你找 -3-
非常感謝~一個個找真的辛苦了……全改了>,

00:11:372 - 蠻大的鼓聲建議你放個什麼在這……全程單音軌啊>,
00:53:725 (3,4,5) - 這flow ;w;……不懂flow……orz
00:59:607 (1,2) - 複製?……是啊……
01:29:018 (3) - 一只跟鋼琴, 因該把這放在 01:28:872 ……這段是管絃主導了……
01:33:724 (3) - ^ .. 還有其他但看你改不改
01:34:901 (1,2) - 複製?……是……啊…………
01:40:195 (2) - clap……嗯嗯
01:46:077 (6) - ^……嗯嗯

[Hyper]
204 bpm? 因該要跟其他diffs一樣喔……大失敗啊>,
AIMod裡有很多unsnapped objects……fix~
00:03:872 - 沒音阿, 建議把 00:03:725 (2,3) - 改成 1/1 滑條……兩個高難度窩是無視滑條尾只計算點擊的做法……
00:31:078 (1) - 別clap……外加的停頓……
01:32:842 (2) - 01:33:136 (3) - 用同一個形狀 類似這樣

01:38:137 (4) - 改成圓圈, 把 01:38:284 (5) - 移到 01:38:284……唔……
01:42:842 (4,5) - ^

blanket 的問題我就沒講了


[Eternal]
為什麼102bpm 做得出來5星 extra = ="
其實sharlo insane 就有點太難了 竟然還做得出來一個更難的 .. 有點神

覺得flow 有點怪, 像 00:04:166 (5) - 00:18:284 (5) - 00:19:313 (8,1) -

跳也有點太大了, 像 00:07:254 (8,9,10,11,1) - 00:11:960 (8,9,10,11,1) - 00:14:313 (6,7,1) -

感覺你做得太難, 不適合這首歌……我覺得難度不重要啊……

阿阿阿阿阿 先就這樣啦 之後就加油瞜~

……這麼久才回覆對不起了orz……
Sharlo
水仙喊来的modder都跟水仙一样软软哒萌萌哒~
莫非这就是物以类聚0.0
Streliteela
Still need some changes from the origin.

A good map not only depends on how challenging the map is, but also how impressive your map is. When playing a map, players will longing for the feelings that their actions (Click those notes and sliders) synchonize with the rhythm. They need maps that let them feel that they become a performer playing music they like, and that feeling is called 'Sense of Immersion' (代入感).

So, it's the time to try a new mapping style. Pay less attention on the difficulty stars, just touch the melody by your heart and melt your feelings in your mapping process. Hope next time I play this map, I felt like I was playing the piano, not just 'Rush-Rush-Rush' & 'Jump-Jump-Jump' everywhere dazedly and exhaustedly.

Longing for your masterpiece~ :)

顺便练练三脚猫英语lol
Topic Starter
Narcissu
唔……至少我能說這還是有鬆緊的……如果你打的了的話,會發現弦樂段落比鋼琴段落輕鬆的多……
Sharlo
no kd.

  • General

  1. Title: 帰路 - KaeriMichi - (Short Ver.)
  2. Romanised Title: KaeriMichi (Short Ver.)
  3. Tags: Remove "Otokaze", "karen", "saigetsu" and "音风".
    Add "Jazz", "Instrumental" and "Sharlo".
  • Eternal

  1. 01:22:842 (10) - Change Additions to Soft
  2. 01:28:136 (2) - ^
Echoy
考完试来mod!><
Neil Watts
Hi!

I'll try my best even if I'm a noob modder~

Otokaze - KaeriMichi (Short Ver.)


Great skin!
- 00:12:548 - kiai just for the fireworks? I dunno if it's rankable
- 01:46:666 - maybe you should find a hitsound for the end
[Easy]
- HP 2-3 should be fine too.
- 00:15:489 (5,6) - 00:20:489 (5,6) - 00:24:901 (4,5) - [...] - Jumps unrankables on an Easy diff, you should keep the same spacing in the whole map.
- 01:38:543 - well, this is a little and nazi detail, but....please fix this blanket ;w;

[Normal]
- 00:34:901 (7) - the whole map is mapped in 1/2, why are you using it now? If you wanna use 1/4, so use it for these notes too 00:08:725 (3) -
Nothing else.

[Hard]
- HP6 minimum
- Try OD7 ?
- 00:22:842 (2,3,4) - a bit overmapped imo
- 01:13:136 (6,7,1) - slider on slider, hard to read.
- 01:19:312 (2,3,4) - overmapped too
- 01:27:842 - > end - hard to guess what you're mapping

The next diffs are too hard to mod for me...

Good luck, rank this :D
Xinely
from ticket




  • General
  1. remove instrumental from tags since it will set in genre

  • Easy
  1. 00:03:137 - until 00:10:195 - you should add whistle on 3rd whiteticks too imo since they have piano sounds that become important on calm musics like this
  2. 00:10:784 (4) - hmm just my taste but i feel the flow become more natural when you move the tail to 4,88
  3. 00:12:548 (1) - use default soft finish for this circle. the custom hitfinish can't emphasize the crash cymbal sound
  4. 00:16:666 (6) - fix the inconsistency spacing (1,60x), that isnt allowed for Easy diff
  5. 00:21:372 (6) - ^
  6. 00:26:078 (5) - ^
  7. 00:35:489 (5) - ^
  8. 00:29:607 (5) - how about make a blanket from this slider to next slider? at least it can improve the design here http://puu.sh/cyq9D.jpg
  9. 00:47:842 (3) - add whistle on repeat to emphasize the flute's sound here? also add whistle in 00:47:842 - ? i saw you used whistle on every stanza here
  10. 00:45:489 (1,2) - aa the blanket can improve a lot here. looks kinda off for me https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192130
  11. 01:06:666 (3) - same as 00:47:842 (3) -
  12. 01:09:019 (1) - crash cymbal here so use soft default finish for emphasize it
  13. 01:18:431 (1) - inconsistency spacing (1,34x) here, it should be have 1,20x
  14. i smell copy paste here ---/runs , well the placements are fine. just you must fix inconsistency spacings (i didnt mention all coz it repetitively and so many)

  • Normal
  1. 00:03:725 (2) - hmm imo the slider a little bit plain for flow here, also for design when you can see 00:03:725 (2,5) - at same time, try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192733 ?
  2. 00:07:254 (7,1) - just nazi thing but imo the flow a little bit plain and could be more natural with try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192744 ?
  3. 00:11:078 (8,9,1) - nazi again but imo flow can improved here if you tweak the (9) slider to has a curve on it, i mean something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192750
  4. 00:11:960 (9) - add clap on this slider's head to emphasize the drum sound
  5. 00:12:548 (1) - same as Easy
  6. 00:15:783 (6) - hmm imo the flow a little bit rigid here since the curve on this slider should be on upward if you following the current flow, hmm try make something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194650 (straight one is fine too)
  7. 00:19:606 (7,8) - just my taste but i will try to make the flow more natural here, maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194673
  8. 00:26:077 (7) - nazi thing but the tail should be at 32,140 for keep the flow here
  9. 00:29:901 (8) - aaa yep same issue as 00:15:783 (6) - , try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194692
  10. 00:47:842 (6) - nazi but blanket kinda off here. drag the 2nd curve 140,128
  11. 01:05:489 (3,4) - aa you can improve the flow again here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194702
  12. 01:06:665 (6) - same as previous, you can improve the blanket here 368,264 for 2nd node
  13. 01:09:019 (1) - use soft default finish because the music is crash cymbal here?
  14. 01:14:607 (3,4,5,6) - hmm kinda nazi but a little bit hard to read for the slider by newbies, also the flow a little bit too rigid for me here. i would say something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194720
  15. 01:26:372 (8) - it has kinda rigid flow (because suddenly to upward) here, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194723 would be work nicely
  16. 01:40:489 (7) - make the slider has a little curve same as 01:41:371 (8) - 's curve to improve both design and flow here http://puu.sh/czaLU.jpg
  17. hmm are you forget to add claps on this map? 00:13:136 - until end doesnt have any claps sound when Easy diff has claps on every 2nd 4th whiteticks and several red ticks here

  • Hard
  1. 00:21:960 (1,2) - the blanket is really off here. drag (1) slider's center node to 128,52
  2. 00:25:636 (4,5) - im sure the patterns become easier to read when you ctrl+G these circles
  3. 00:26:078 (6,7,8,9,1) - try make them become slider repeat or http://puu.sh/czftU.jpg, new guideline says that Hard should avoid stream, i know this is low bpm but better to avoid it imo
  4. 00:34:901 (3,4,5) - hmm forgive me im sure flow can improved here but i dont find a nice way to fix it lol
  5. 01:09:019 (1) - same as Easy
  6. 01:15:195 (4,1) - im sure you can improve the blanket here
  7. 01:16:077 (1) -drag 2nd node to 184,200 to make better blanket with 01:16:077 (1,2) -
  8. 01:20:195 (5) - if you are going to make blanket with next slider, move this slider to 496,256
  9. 01:22:106 (4,5) - same as 00:25:636 (4,5) -
  10. 01:22:548 (6,7,8,9,1) - same as 00:26:078 (6,7,8,9,1) -
  11. 01:32:401 - maybe you can add note here for emphasize the melody of music (more specific is piano)
  12. Generally placement looks fine for me

  • Sharlo's Insane
  1. AR 9 feels too fast here. i would suggest around AR 8,5. Also OD too, 7 or 7,5 would be nice
  2. 00:17:181 (5) - overmap
  3. 00:12:475 (5) - ,00:14:828 (6) - , 00:25:710 (3) - , 00:43:063 (5) - , 01:01:886 (5) - , 01:11:299 (6) - ,01:13:651 (5) - ,01:22:181 (3) - ,01:30:122 (6) - , 01:32:475 (5) - , 01:41:004 (3) - i can't hear any music for these circles. i guess overmapped
  4. 01:27:842 - maybe end the kiai time here since i feel the musics on this part arent epic as previous
  5. Placements are fine

  • Hyper
  1. hmm i know you make harder diff coz already have Hard diff but imo this diff is quite hard. if you make this diff a little bit easier, it would have nice spread here

  • Eternal
  1. OD 8 please. you dont want to kill players right?
  2. 00:04:901 (7,8) - the flow being weird when in previous you make the tail of slider become a little bit left and for 00:04:901 (7) - being almost straight one and on next slider it turning back like 00:04:607 (6) - , do consistency shape of slider would be nice here
  3. 00:07:548 (10,11) - i guess you need to fix this since with your skin, 10 and 11 combos looked as "0" and "1" , fix for this and rest of that issue on diff
  4. oh damn cool <3

i still see many improvement for this map but this map is cool so i would leave my star icon first :3
Good luck o/
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Neil Watts wrote:

Hi!

I'll try my best even if I'm a noob modder~……i'm noob too >,

Otokaze - KaeriMichi (Short Ver.)


Great skin!
- 00:12:548 - kiai just for the fireworks? I dunno if it's rankable……no problem~
- 01:46:666 - maybe you should find a hitsound for the end……i add a finish ~
[Easy]
- HP 2-3 should be fine too.……ok……HP 2 now
- 00:15:489 (5,6) - 00:20:489 (5,6) - 00:24:901 (4,5) - [...] - Jumps unrankables on an Easy diff, you should keep the same spacing in the whole map.……i think 1.2 DS too close …… play maybe will think it's 1/2 ……
- 01:38:543 - well, this is a little and nazi detail, but....please fix this blanket ;w;……fix~

[Normal]
- 00:34:901 (7) - the whole map is mapped in 1/2, why are you using it now? If you wanna use 1/4, so use it for these notes too 00:08:725 (3) - ……i think is ok ……
Nothing else.

[Hard]
- HP6 minimum……ok~
- Try OD7 ?……i think hard diff should low OD……
- 00:22:842 (2,3,4) - a bit overmapped imo……delete note now~
- 01:13:136 (6,7,1) - slider on slider, hard to read.…… yes it's hard to read …… but i think it's easy to play when second play ……
- 01:19:312 (2,3,4) - overmapped too……^
- 01:27:842 - > end - hard to guess what you're mapping……

The next diffs are too hard to mod for me...

Good luck, rank this :D……thx ><

Xinely wrote:

from ticket




  • General
  1. remove instrumental from tags since it will set in genre……fix~

  • Easy
  1. 00:03:137 - until 00:10:195 - you should add whistle on 3rd whiteticks too imo since they have piano sounds that become important on calm musics like this……ok~
  2. 00:10:784 (4) - hmm just my taste but i feel the flow become more natural when you move the tail to 4,88……ok~
  3. 00:12:548 (1) - use default soft finish for this circle. the custom hitfinish can't emphasize the crash cymbal sound……i forget it …… orz
  4. 00:16:666 (6) - fix the inconsistency spacing (1,60x), that isnt allowed for Easy diff……i think 1.2 DS too close …… maybe play will think it's 1/1 …… 1.6 DS better than 1.2 DS imo
  5. 00:21:372 (6) - ^
  6. 00:26:078 (5) - ^
  7. 00:35:489 (5) - ^
  8. 00:29:607 (5) - how about make a blanket from this slider to next slider? at least it can improve the design here …… ok ~
  9. 00:47:842 (3) - add whistle on repeat to emphasize the flute's sound here? also add whistle in 00:47:842 - ? i saw you used whistle on every stanza here……i forget it orz ……
  10. 00:45:489 (1,2) - aa the blanket can improve a lot here. looks kinda off for me …… e …… i dislike blanket all time ……
  11. 01:06:666 (3) - same as 00:47:842 (3) -……fix~
  12. 01:09:019 (1) - crash cymbal here so use soft default finish for emphasize it……fix~
  13. 01:18:431 (1) - inconsistency spacing (1,34x) here, it should be have 1,20x
  14. i smell copy paste here ---/runs , well the placements are fine. just you must fix inconsistency spacings (i didnt mention all coz it repetitively and so many)……::>_<::

  • Normal
  1. 00:03:725 (2) - hmm imo the slider a little bit plain for flow here, also for design when you can see 00:03:725 (2,5) - at same time, try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192733 ?
  2. 00:07:254 (7,1) - just nazi thing but imo the flow a little bit plain and could be more natural with try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192744 ?
  3. 00:11:078 (8,9,1) - nazi again but imo flow can improved here if you tweak the (9) slider to has a curve on it, i mean something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192750
  4. 00:11:960 (9) - add clap on this slider's head to emphasize the drum sound……fix~
  5. 00:12:548 (1) - same as Easy……fix~
  6. 00:15:783 (6) - hmm imo the flow a little bit rigid here since the curve on this slider should be on upward if you following the current flow, hmm try make something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194650 (straight one is fine too)
  7. 00:19:606 (7,8) - just my taste but i will try to make the flow more natural here, maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194673
  8. 00:26:077 (7) - nazi thing but the tail should be at 32,140 for keep the flow here……e……i dislike slider and note in line …… it too rigid
  9. 00:29:901 (8) - aaa yep same issue as 00:15:783 (6) - , try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194692
  10. 00:47:842 (6) - nazi but blanket kinda off here. drag the 2nd curve 140,128……fix~
  11. 01:05:489 (3,4) - aa you can improve the flow again here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194702
  12. 01:06:665 (6) - same as previous, you can improve the blanket here 368,264 for 2nd node
  13. 01:09:019 (1) - use soft default finish because the music is crash cymbal here?……fix~
  14. 01:14:607 (3,4,5,6) - hmm kinda nazi but a little bit hard to read for the slider by newbies, also the flow a little bit too rigid for me here. i would say something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194720
  15. 01:26:372 (8) - it has kinda rigid flow (because suddenly to upward) here, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194723 would be work nicely
  16. 01:40:489 (7) - make the slider has a little curve same as 01:41:371 (8) - 's curve to improve both design and flow here http://puu.sh/czaLU.jpg
  17. hmm are you forget to add claps on this map? 00:13:136 - until end doesnt have any claps sound when Easy diff has claps on every 2nd 4th whiteticks and several red ticks here……sorry i forget it …… i work hitsound but forget saved …… orz

  • Hard
  1. 00:21:960 (1,2) - the blanket is really off here. drag (1) slider's center node to 128,52 ……
  2. 00:25:636 (4,5) - im sure the patterns become easier to read when you ctrl+G these circles……i think same direction is good ……and hard read is my style
  3. 00:26:078 (6,7,8,9,1) - try make them become slider repeat or http://puu.sh/czftU.jpg, new guideline says that Hard should avoid stream, i know this is low bpm but better to avoid it imo……it's hard to play …… but i wish player miss here …… because i'm wicked LOL
  4. 00:34:901 (3,4,5) - hmm forgive me im sure flow can improved here but i dont find a nice way to fix it lol…… 唔……
  5. 01:09:019 (1) - same as Easy……fix~
  6. 01:15:195 (4,1) - im sure you can improve the blanket here……fix~
  7. 01:16:077 (1) -drag 2nd node to 184,200 to make better blanket with 01:16:077 (1,2) - ……all blanket same is boring …… imo
  8. 01:20:195 (5) - if you are going to make blanket with next slider, move this slider to 496,256……moved 01:20:783 (1) - ……
  9. 01:22:106 (4,5) - same as 00:25:636 (4,5) - ……
  10. 01:22:548 (6,7,8,9,1) - same as 00:26:078 (6,7,8,9,1) -……
  11. 01:32:401 - maybe you can add note here for emphasize the melody of music (more specific is piano)……ok~
  12. Generally placement looks fine for me……>,

  • Sharlo's Insane
  1. AR 9 feels too fast here. i would suggest around AR 8,5. Also OD too, 7 or 7,5 would be nice……AR8.5 too slow when i play ,and i can't adapt AR8.5 ……OD 7 …… will too many SS imo ……
  2. 00:17:181 (5) - overmap……when i play …… i think it's no problem ……

  • Hyper
  1. hmm i know you make harder diff coz already have Hard diff but imo this diff is quite hard. if you make this diff a little bit easier, it would have nice spread here……orz……but i tired to remap it ……

  • Eternal
  1. OD 8 please. you dont want to kill players right?……OD9 is my love >, < …… change to 8.5……
  2. 00:04:901 (7,8) - the flow being weird when in previous you make the tail of slider become a little bit left and for 00:04:901 (7) - being almost straight one and on next slider it turning back like 00:04:607 (6) - , do consistency shape of slider would be nice here……consistency shape too rigid imo …… and …… i don‘t know what is flow……
  3. 00:07:548 (10,11) - i guess you need to fix this since with your skin, 10 and 11 combos looked as "0" and "1" , fix for this and rest of that issue on diff……i add more NC in Eternal & Hyper Diff orz……
  4. oh damn cool <3…… >,

sorry use blue color orz , and my network very bad …… i can't look some “Puu” …… orz

i still see many improvement for this map but this map is cool so i would leave my star icon first :3
Good luck o/ …… thx ><
Echoy
音乐很好听 :oops:
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不同难度Kiai time 不一致
Hyper难度的名字让人觉得很不舒服…但是Hyper做的很棒
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Normal
00:20:489 (8) - 这样的地方做折返滑条怎么样?
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Hard
00:04:019 (2,3) - 和00:15:784 (2,3,4,5) - 在更高难度都是短滑条的情况下Hard却…
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Sharlo’s Insane
00:36:372 (2,3,1,2) - 几个硬硬的笔直滑条,感觉和音乐分离开来了
01:09:019 (1) - 虽然是变速,但无法感受到变速
00:31:372 (1) - 和01:27:842 (1) - 一样的节奏,完全不同的下法,感觉很不和谐
01:38:284 (1,2,3) - 和01:42:843 (4,1,2,3) - 不理解的节奏,长笛的声音如此明显却似乎在跟低音鼓,而01:39:607 (1) - 这里的长笛被削弱了,又跟了长笛
01:41:960 (1,2,3) - 和01:44:313 (1,2,3) - 处悠扬的长笛变成了一个点,前面却是一个长条
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Eternal
00:31:372 (1) - 到00:49:901 (9) - 初次加入长笛的部分,无论相对于前面还是后面,音乐都是比较舒缓的,可是全程的跳却是差不多一样幅度的大小,如果这部分的跳稍微减缓,或许更能突出其他部分的欢快
00:41:960 (5) - 01:00:784 (5) - 01:25:489 (1) - 这几处的音给人一种上扬的感觉,如果滑条也上扬或许会更舒服
00:46:666 (5) - 这里的音似乎是加入长笛的舒缓部分开始要逐渐变得欢快的过度,坡度感觉有点儿太大了
01:43:136 (5) - 下滑的音
00:43:725 (3) - 01:26:519 (5) -01:45:342 (5) - 这几处的音很清脆特别,或许可以相对其他的地方更跳,且位置更加与众不同?
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Narcissu

Echoy wrote:

音乐很好听 :oops: ……喜歡就好喜歡就好
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不同难度Kiai time 不一致
Hyper难度的名字让人觉得很不舒服…但是Hyper做的很棒……這個命名是業界習慣啊我也不喜歡這個orz……
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Normal
00:20:489 (8) - 这样的地方做折返滑条怎么样?……唔……沒什麼特別的原因我還是不喜歡折返……
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Hard
00:04:019 (2,3) - 和00:15:784 (2,3,4,5) - 在更高难度都是短滑条的情况下Hard却………高難度都是把後面那個圈換成滑條……節奏上是加了……
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Eternal
00:31:372 (1) - 到00:49:901 (9) - 初次加入长笛的部分,无论相对于前面还是后面,音乐都是比较舒缓的,可是全程的跳却是差不多一样幅度的大小,如果这部分的跳稍微减缓,或许更能突出其他部分的欢快……這部分節奏稀滑條多而且沒有連單點……難度已經遠遠低於鋼琴段落了……再減DS只會讓能打這個難度的玩家感覺無聊……
00:41:960 (5) - 01:00:784 (5) - 01:25:489 (1) - 这几处的音给人一种上扬的感觉,如果滑条也上扬或许会更舒服……我還沒辦法同時讓排版既能好看有表現音高orz
00:46:666 (5) - 这里的音似乎是加入长笛的舒缓部分开始要逐渐变得欢快的过度,坡度感觉有点儿太大了……坡度是什麼……唔……
01:43:136 (5) - 下滑的音
00:43:725 (3) - 01:26:519 (5) -01:45:342 (5) - 这几处的音很清脆特别,或许可以相对其他的地方更跳,且位置更加与众不同?……唔……
Chloe
01:04:313 (1,2,3) - 这种考虑一下用旋转120度来做吧 现在这样看起来比较乱 打起来当然是没什么问题
00:39:607 (1,2,3,4) - 关于这种我有2个建议 1:http://puu.sh/cJ07Y/4a73bf5fa0.jpg 停顿要么完全重叠要么间距小点 放在中间很难看而且意义不明 2: NC后面这个00:40:195 (4) - 增加可读性
00:32:254 (1) - 类似这个滑条的节奏至少漏了2个音 其实这边可下1/8也可一堆1/4单点带过 打起来很不错

节奏和音效都不错
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