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Otokaze - KaeriMichi

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Narcissu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年4月2日 at 14:59:52

Artist: Otokaze
Title: KaeriMichi
Tags: Sharlo 归路 彩る四季、風と音色。 Jazz
BPM: 102
Filesize: 4743kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.33 stars, 109 notes)
  2. Eternal (4.99 stars, 377 notes)
  3. Hard (2.41 stars, 228 notes)
  4. Hyper (3.67 stars, 349 notes)
  5. Normal (2.17 stars, 175 notes)
  6. Sharlo's Insane (4.61 stars, 384 notes)
Download: Otokaze - KaeriMichi
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Insane diff , storyboard , hitsound , skin and bat's mod by Sharlo >,
bubble by Loneight & Fycho
i just add some diff ?
SPOILER
Sharlo:数字组要写from LKs,我只是做了个hitcircle而已
sjoy:一圈打包CUT狗
Streliteela
抢啊抢啊抢沙发,天天卖萌笑哈哈lol
Sellenite
lol
Colourful
加油啊~
Neil Watts
I loved Refrain - and now I love this song.

I'll be back to mod this map someday.

Here's some little motivation~★
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Neil Watts wrote:

I loved Refrain - and now I love this song.

I'll be back to mod this map someday.

Here's some little motivation~★
very thx >< …… it's so surprise

Colourful wrote:

加油啊~
夏萝太忙太懒……我加的油都冻成块了…………
lkx_Shore
:? 你真的要带太鼓diff?
Topic Starter
Narcissu

lkx_Shore wrote:

:? 你真的要带太鼓diff?
我不懂太鼓……不過他都做了幾十張太鼓了……我想看看業界人士對gentle heart這種徹徹底底的自閉党的圖有什麼看法……能rank最好不能就只能放棄了……不管怎麼樣……要邁出第一步><
ts8zs
太鼓最少两个难度以上……
Topic Starter
Narcissu

ts8zs wrote:

太鼓最少两个难度以上……
嗯嗯~

我只是想看看這個太鼓是不是正常啦 :)
ts8zs

Narcissu wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

太鼓最少两个难度以上……
嗯嗯~

我只是想看看這個太鼓是不是正常啦 :)
怎么说呢……如果是第一次做的那种就正常……如果是rank向的就不太正常
Wing My Way
赞一个 送一分 :)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
irc
16:06 Narcissu: 喵><
16:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 汪
16:06 Narcissu: 嗷~
16:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 咩!
16:07 Narcissu: 額……
16:07 Narcissu: 沒詞了……
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 吱!
16:07 Narcissu: #¥%……&*(
16:07 *Narcissu 失敗了!
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 咩!
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 哞!
16:07 Narcissu: 額……咳咳……正經正經……
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:07 Narcissu: 有個曲子我感覺有小數BPM……
16:08 Narcissu: 姐姐能幫忙測一下麼><
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 放小数啊 怕什么
16:08 Narcissu: 但是小數就不知道到底准不准啊>,
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 打着准就行了
16:08 Narcissu: 也許是0.04也許是0.06
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 小数挺正常
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 那就0.05啊
16:09 Narcissu: 說是這樣說……這個有人要是mod寫了就很麻煩orz
16:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 没问题的只要准就行了
16:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 重要的是打的准
16:09 Narcissu: 額……好吧……那我就用自己測的√
16:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:10 Narcissu: 然後其實我又來求mod了【喂
16:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:10 Narcissu: 一直a很嚇人啊……
16:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: b
16:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 不对
16:11 Narcissu: .
16:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: s
16:11 Narcissu: 額……少女能接麼……@@
16:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 发图呀 我找板子去
16:12 Narcissu: 哦哦哦哦!
16:12 *Narcissu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/512188 Otokaze - KaeriMichi]
16:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这不是那个
16:12 Narcissu: 這就是那個?
16:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这个我做了5秒坑了233
16:13 Narcissu: XD
16:13 Narcissu: 原曲是4分鐘的重複的逆天我剪輯了><
16:13 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:13 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 果然我不该拿4分钟的做
16:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 还行啊不是5秒 做了47秒
16:14 Narcissu: 嗯嗯,4分鐘的交給guu了【喂
16:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 于是guu坑了
16:14 Narcissu: %%**
16:14 Narcissu: √
16:14 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/493810 Otokaze - KaeriMichi]
16:16 Narcissu: 怎麼變強了這麼多……我記得之前我們是一個水平的rank……
16:16 Narcissu: 這瞎眼的ACC……
16:16 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
16:19 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 夏萝的前面那里掉血太高了吧
16:21 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: fc啦(
16:21 Narcissu: 才3.5星啊……
16:21 Narcissu: #¥%……&*()——
16:22 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 太鼓不是要两个吗
16:22 Narcissu: 思考
16:22 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233 不会打
16:22 Narcissu: 沒……這個是帶我入坑的mapper
16:22 Narcissu: 他是渣^^
16:23 Narcissu: 只是放進去……如果可以rank就補全,不行就deleted……sad
16:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:40:931 (6) - 这个不要叠在那里
16:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 容易断
16:26 Narcissu: 額……這個有點麻煩……我回去試試
16:26 Narcissu: 我放01:39:607 (1) - 上面了哦
16:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:27 Narcissu: 我想試試到處疊來著orz
16:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你到处都没叠啊..
16:28 Narcissu: 不過打起來完全沒感覺sad
16:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这个歌不适合叠着
16:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 感觉上
16:28 Narcissu: 嗚嗚嗚……見面就讓人remap
16:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 呜呜呜...见面就让人remap
16:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 挺好的呀
16:29 Narcissu: 人家明明到處疊的說
16:32 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 挺好的啊 不会mod
16:33 Narcissu: @#¥%……&
16:33 Narcissu: 納尼商~!
16:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 1
16:35 Narcissu: 主公求摸啊><
16:35 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:03:136 (5) - 把这个放到3和7中垂线(?)上
16:35 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 内奸再不跳, 后面还怎么玩儿啊
16:36 Narcissu: 偶草我還是念數學的但是中垂線是什麼居然忘記了!
16:36 *Narcissu 跪
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 224:132
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这里
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你念数学啊 蜡烛
16:37 Narcissu: 哦哦哦……
16:37 Narcissu: 這也點蠟燭有點過分吧……
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 也是..
16:38 Narcissu: 全班50多人可以煉油了都
16:38 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:16:666 (8) - 这里加个new combo
16:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我真的觉得没什么能改了啊
16:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我看sharlo diff
16:41 Narcissu: 額%……&*
16:41 Narcissu: 夏蘿那個就沒辦法irc了……思考
16:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对啊
16:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: int *p
16:43 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我发现个问题啊 你那个diff怎么没有kiai
16:44 Narcissu: 有啊有啊~
16:44 Narcissu: 瞎眼一秒鐘耶
16:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:44 Narcissu: 我感覺那麼長的kiai有點土啊%&
16:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 还真的有啊!
16:44 Narcissu: 既然全程都是kiai那和全程不是kiai沒什麼區別吧……√
16:45 Narcissu: ...
16:45 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: √
16:45 Narcissu: 很鬼畜的1.25*啊!
16:45 Narcissu: 為了那個白色跳顏色很辛苦的啊啊啊啊
16:45 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: wwwwww
16:46 Narcissu: 這裡面都是心血啊!!居然沒發現……豈可修……好感度↓
16:46 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: ↓→↓→○

sharlo's insane
00:21:813 (4) - 这个来回我觉得不好 因为这里第4个音要小一点 我觉得可以放在192:292 或者200:240
00:49:019 (1) - 这个看不清 建议取缔
01:27:254 (1) - 不好看啊 你对比一下别的 完全不一样
01:33:872 (2) - 往右移上4格左右

hard
00:16:372 (5) - 复制下面那个转过去啊 这不对称
00:25:195 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
01:21:665 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 改成正常间距吧 感觉和别的地方style差好多..

hyper
fc了 不看了

这首歌要是把1/2都改成3/4 一定会很带感 (X
Topic Starter
Narcissu

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

irc
16:06 Narcissu: 喵><
16:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 汪
16:06 Narcissu: 嗷~
16:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 咩!
16:07 Narcissu: 額……
16:07 Narcissu: 沒詞了……
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 吱!
16:07 Narcissu: #¥%……&*(
16:07 *Narcissu 失敗了!
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 咩!
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 哞!
16:07 Narcissu: 額……咳咳……正經正經……
16:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:07 Narcissu: 有個曲子我感覺有小數BPM……
16:08 Narcissu: 姐姐能幫忙測一下麼><
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 放小数啊 怕什么
16:08 Narcissu: 但是小數就不知道到底准不准啊>,
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 打着准就行了
16:08 Narcissu: 也許是0.04也許是0.06
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 小数挺正常
16:08 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 那就0.05啊
16:09 Narcissu: 說是這樣說……這個有人要是mod寫了就很麻煩orz
16:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 没问题的只要准就行了
16:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 重要的是打的准
16:09 Narcissu: 額……好吧……那我就用自己測的√
16:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:10 Narcissu: 然後其實我又來求mod了【喂
16:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:10 Narcissu: 一直a很嚇人啊……
16:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: b
16:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 不对
16:11 Narcissu: .
16:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: s
16:11 Narcissu: 額……少女能接麼……@@
16:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 发图呀 我找板子去
16:12 Narcissu: 哦哦哦哦!
16:12 *Narcissu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/512188 Otokaze - KaeriMichi]
16:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这不是那个
16:12 Narcissu: 這就是那個?
16:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这个我做了5秒坑了233
16:13 Narcissu: XD
16:13 Narcissu: 原曲是4分鐘的重複的逆天我剪輯了><
16:13 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:13 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 果然我不该拿4分钟的做
16:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 还行啊不是5秒 做了47秒
16:14 Narcissu: 嗯嗯,4分鐘的交給guu了【喂
16:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 于是guu坑了
16:14 Narcissu: %%**
16:14 Narcissu: √
16:14 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/493810 Otokaze - KaeriMichi]
16:16 Narcissu: 怎麼變強了這麼多……我記得之前我們是一個水平的rank……
16:16 Narcissu: 這瞎眼的ACC……
16:16 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
16:19 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 夏萝的前面那里掉血太高了吧
16:21 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: fc啦(
16:21 Narcissu: 才3.5星啊……
16:21 Narcissu: #¥%……&*()——
16:22 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 太鼓不是要两个吗
16:22 Narcissu: 思考
16:22 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233 不会打
16:22 Narcissu: 沒……這個是帶我入坑的mapper
16:22 Narcissu: 他是渣^^
16:23 Narcissu: 只是放進去……如果可以rank就補全,不行就deleted……sad
16:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:40:931 (6) - 这个不要叠在那里
16:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 容易断
16:26 Narcissu: 額……這個有點麻煩……我回去試試
16:26 Narcissu: 我放01:39:607 (1) - 上面了哦
16:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:27 Narcissu: 我想試試到處疊來著orz
16:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你到处都没叠啊..
16:28 Narcissu: 不過打起來完全沒感覺sad
16:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这个歌不适合叠着
16:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 感觉上
16:28 Narcissu: 嗚嗚嗚……見面就讓人remap
16:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 呜呜呜...见面就让人remap
16:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 挺好的呀
16:29 Narcissu: 人家明明到處疊的說
16:32 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 挺好的啊 不会mod
16:33 Narcissu: @#¥%……&
16:33 Narcissu: 納尼商~!
16:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 1
16:35 Narcissu: 主公求摸啊><
16:35 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:03:136 (5) - 把这个放到3和7中垂线(?)上
16:35 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 内奸再不跳, 后面还怎么玩儿啊
16:36 Narcissu: 偶草我還是念數學的但是中垂線是什麼居然忘記了!
16:36 *Narcissu 跪
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 224:132
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这里
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你念数学啊 蜡烛
16:37 Narcissu: 哦哦哦……
16:37 Narcissu: 這也點蠟燭有點過分吧……
16:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 也是..
16:38 Narcissu: 全班50多人可以煉油了都
16:38 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
16:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:16:666 (8) - 这里加个new combo
16:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我真的觉得没什么能改了啊
16:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我看sharlo diff
16:41 Narcissu: 額%……&*
16:41 Narcissu: 夏蘿那個就沒辦法irc了……思考
16:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对啊
16:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: int *p
16:43 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我发现个问题啊 你那个diff怎么没有kiai
16:44 Narcissu: 有啊有啊~
16:44 Narcissu: 瞎眼一秒鐘耶
16:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
16:44 Narcissu: 我感覺那麼長的kiai有點土啊%&
16:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 还真的有啊!
16:44 Narcissu: 既然全程都是kiai那和全程不是kiai沒什麼區別吧……√
16:45 Narcissu: ...
16:45 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: √
16:45 Narcissu: 很鬼畜的1.25*啊!
16:45 Narcissu: 為了那個白色跳顏色很辛苦的啊啊啊啊
16:45 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: wwwwww
16:46 Narcissu: 這裡面都是心血啊!!居然沒發現……豈可修……好感度↓
16:46 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: ↓→↓→○

hard
00:16:372 (5) - 复制下面那个转过去啊 这不对称……fix~
00:25:195 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
01:21:665 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 改成正常间距吧 感觉和别的地方style差好多..……額……我怕DS太大會太難……

这首歌要是把1/2都改成3/4 一定会很带感 (X …… 會很揪心的……吧

Wing My Way wrote:

赞一个 送一分 :) …… thx ><
moonlightleaf
怎么有花花雨道的感觉

[General]

太鼓需要2难度 大概是这样,

[Normal]

00:09:607 (5,6) - 可以改滑条 和前面23对应

00:19:018 (5,6) - ^

01:15:489 (5,6) - ^

01:24:901 (5,6) - ^

00:11:960 (9) - 我觉得折返比较贴音乐

00:16:665 (15) - ^

00:27:548 (3,4) - 可以换换排版 改反折试试

[Hard]

00:45:489 (1) -

00:49:313 (5) - 改短滑条

01:08:136 (5) - ^

[Sharlo]

00:29:460 (2) - delete

01:46:225 (2) - 叠好

俩kika中间那段没kika段好玩...

↓好疼...和fuwa fuwa最高难度一样没ss掉

不要吐槽relax ,我一样有zx戳,目前来说我只玩relax+hd组合
Gaia
haai as requested~

puush 用不了好痛苦 T^T
[General]
taiko 需要兩個diffs, muzu 跟 oni 不然是unrankable 喔

Hyper = Insane? 通常 hyper 是 hard [Beginner/Standard/Hyper/Another] 但 你之前都用 [Easy/Normal/Hard] 我建議你改名為Insane

[Easy]
你每4結NC一次? 我覺得每兩節NC比較好 .. 比如 00:08:431 (5) - 00:17:843 (5) - 00:27:255 (5) -

00:10:784 (7) - 這節奏... 鼓的聲音是在 00:11:372 - 00:11:519 - 跟 00:11:960 , 00:11:666 - 沒有聲音!! 縮短成 1/1 reverse 然後放個圓圈吧 更何況 00:12:548 是個蠻大的一拍, 有個可點的東西比較好 (記得NC)
00:20:195 (7) - 00:29:608 (7) - (還有更多)^
00:41:960 (2) - 1/1 reverse 所以有一拍在鼓上 00:42:548
01:00:783 (2) - ^
01:02:549 (3,4) - easy 嘛, 別疊
01:06:666 (7) - 包的可以更好?
01:16:666 (8,1) - 跟 00:10:784 (7) - 一樣, 包也可以加強
01:26:079 (7,1) - ^
01:35:489 (8,9) - 疊
01:38:431 (2) - 好像都在講同樣3個東西
01:40:195 (3,4) - 一樣

[normal]
NC 建議跟Easy 一樣
00:07:254 (7) - 如果是 " \ " 的形狀會比較順?
00:10:195 (7) - 灣多一點會比較好?
00:13:136 (2,3) - (好挑剔) 可以包更好
00:20:342 (8) - 灣另一邊? 00:22:548 (2,3) - 又來了
00:35:489 (8) - (312, 244) 三角形好像比較順?
00:52:548 (5,6) - 包起來
00:54:312 (8) - 跟00:35:489 (8) - 一樣
01:19:019 (2,3) - 好像太挑剔了所以不講了
01:30:195 (5,6) - 但這個就差蠻大了

[hard]
00:21:960 (1,2) - 00:32:842 (4,1) - 00:41:372 (2,3) - (還有蠻多其他的.... 我就不講了)
00:29:607 - 00:48:431 (2) - 01:07:254 (2) - 01:08:431 (6) - 音樂裡沒鼓聲喔, clap 去掉
00:20:489 - 00:25:195 (2) - -00:34:607 - 00:39:313 - 00:44:019 - 00:53:431 - 00:58:136 - 但這裡可以加clap .... 剩下的給你找 -3-

00:11:372 - 蠻大的鼓聲建議你放個什麼在這
00:53:725 (3,4,5) - 這flow ;w;
00:59:607 (1,2) - 複製?
01:29:018 (3) - 一只跟鋼琴, 因該把這放在 01:28:872
01:33:724 (3) - ^ .. 還有其他但看你改不改
01:34:901 (1,2) - 複製?
01:40:195 (2) - clap
01:46:077 (6) - ^

[Hyper]
204 bpm? 因該要跟其他diffs一樣喔
AIMod裡有很多unsnapped objects
00:03:872 - 沒音阿, 建議把 00:03:725 (2,3) - 改成 1/1 滑條
00:31:078 (1) - 別clap
01:32:842 (2) - 01:33:136 (3) - 用同一個形狀 類似這樣 01:38:137 (4) - 改成圓圈, 把 01:38:284 (5) - 移到 01:38:284
01:42:842 (4,5) - ^

blanket 的問題我就沒講了

[Sharlo]
沒什麼大問題.. 只是覺得 用1/8的時候最好不要用圈, 用 1/8 reverse 比較合適
畢竟還是個 102 bpm 歌嘛

[Eternal]
為什麼102bpm 做得出來5星 extra = ="
其實sharlo insane 就有點太難了 竟然還做得出來一個更難的 .. 有點神

覺得flow 有點怪, 像 00:04:166 (5) - 00:18:284 (5) - 00:19:313 (8,1) -

跳也有點太大了, 像 00:07:254 (8,9,10,11,1) - 00:11:960 (8,9,10,11,1) - 00:14:313 (6,7,1) -

感覺你做得太難, 不適合這首歌

阿阿阿阿阿 先就這樣啦 之後就加油瞜~
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[Eternal]

00:07:254 (8,9,10,11) - http://puu.sh/c9lBt/91933f8c40.png这样可能好些
00:14:901 (1) - 这里滑条头应该是drum,后面几个也是
00:16:225 (6) - 觉得放在256,144更好
00:17:107 (11) - 往左下移一点
00:21:372 (8,9,10,11) - http://puu.sh/c9mqg/fb608d9cbe.png建议这么放
00:13:578 (4) - 鉴于这种长滑条中间还有个鼓声,可以在00:14:019 (5) - 补一个
00:35:195 (7) - 这种地方音乐里没有鼓但是我觉得加一个也无所谓
01:17:842 (8,9,10,11) - bad flow http://puu.sh/c9mRX/289284e7f1.png
01:25:931 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里可以圆圈那边不变然后滑条转
01:46:372 (9) - http://puu.sh/c9mUl/c30ceb382d.png好看点
其实总的来说节奏有些单一,可以尝试变换下

[Sharlo's Insane]

00:29:901 (1) - 不太喜欢绕的...http://puu.sh/c9noj/fcc12c9a00.png
00:56:077 (1) - 280,152
01:41:372 (1,2,3,4) - 2和4换下

[Hard]

音效还没施工完就不挑了
00:20:931 (3) - 往下挪一点
00:46:078 (2) - 听到的时候笑出声...改成soft additon(不是说好不挑的么)
00:53:725 (3,4,5) - 不要弄成和2平行,稍微再有点角度
01:06:666 (1) - 一样的..和4一条直线不太好看其实
01:41:959 (1,2) - 这两个可以拉直

[Normal]

00:15:784 (6) - 这种地方感觉这个节奏http://puu.sh/c9ovz/2acbb301ff.png更好点
00:50:195 (1) - 有点眼熟(
wantuol
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[General]
修aimod
整体音效缺少clap样子
[Easy]
00:15:784这里有个重音 不漏好
NC间隔有点长哦 不过hp2还好
00:20:195 (7) - 进hp条了
01:16:666 (8) - 这个音盖过去太多了
01:26:078 (7) - ^
[Normal]
00:13:136 (2) - 进hp
00:37:842 (4) - ^
[hard]
00:46:078 (2) - durm很怪
01:11:371 (1) - 进hp
01:29:312 (4) - ^
01:42:548 (2) - 依旧觉得很怪
easy nor 缺强力clap还好 hard开始音效突出点好
[Hyper]
00:06:960 (6,7) - 合并成一个slider
01:05:489 (5) - 个人感觉这种好丑
风格和前面都不同样子- -
[Eternal]
00:14:019 (5) - 尾巴叠在1上
00:21:960 (1) - 擦到hp了
00:30:489 (7) - 挺好的nc梗 不要rep啊 00:30:784这里加个note 凑三个111
跳的好乱 :? 拉远看还是眼太花 需要些地方让右手停一停

就这些 很干净的图 加油
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Flandre_ErMei wrote:

怎么有花花雨道的感觉……一定是错觉!我最近才刚刚打过雨道!

[General]

太鼓需要2难度 大概是这样,……太鼓看情况可能会删……orz

[Normal]

00:09:607 (5,6) - 可以改滑条 和前面23对应……额……对应是什么意思?

00:19:018 (5,6) - ^

01:15:489 (5,6) - ^

01:24:901 (5,6) - ^

00:11:960 (9) - 我觉得折返比较贴音乐……额……我觉得单个滑条比较好

00:16:665 (15) - ^

00:27:548 (3,4) - 可以换换排版 改反折试试……那是换节奏了吧……既然曲子是重复的那我也应该重复才对……

[Hard]

00:45:489 (1) -……ok~
00:49:313 (5) - 改短滑条……那太坑了吧……
thx your mod ~

Gaia wrote:

haai as requested~……baobao><

puush 用不了好痛苦 T^T……其实我这一次在学校机房……可以看puu……>,
[General]
taiko 需要兩個diffs, muzu 跟 oni 不然是unrankable 喔……其实只是看看能不能rank啦……不能就删掉的sad

Hyper = Insane? 通常 hyper 是 hard [Beginner/Standard/Hyper/Another] 但 你之前都用 [Easy/Normal/Hard] 我建議你改名為Insane……那就一个3.5星和4.5都叫insane啦~

easy的NC打算换成两节一次了……迟一点回复论文……>,
fuck your 论文 ><

liuyiqiangbu wrote:

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[Eternal]

00:07:254 (8,9,10,11) - http://puu.sh/c9lBt/91933f8c40.png这样可能好些……我想用横平竖直的排版表现单调……
00:14:901 (1) - 这里滑条头应该是drum,后面几个也是……这是我额外补的长白线重音……
00:16:225 (6) - 觉得放在256,144更好……好~
00:17:107 (11) - 往左下移一点……额……不想和00:16:372 (7) - 占用一个位置来着……
00:21:372 (8,9,10,11) - http://puu.sh/c9mqg/fb608d9cbe.png建议这么放……我比较惯用锐角跳……
00:13:578 (4) - 鉴于这种长滑条中间还有个鼓声,可以在00:14:019 (5) - 补一个……窝所有diff程都没跟鼓啊><
00:35:195 (7) - 这种地方音乐里没有鼓但是我觉得加一个也无所谓……窝不要写鼓啦orz
01:17:842 (8,9,10,11) - bad flow http://puu.sh/c9mRX/289284e7f1.png……钝角大跳才反人类啊orz,锐角会有对原位置的记忆所以容易跳……
01:25:931 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里可以圆圈那边不变然后滑条转……唔……我还是觉得一起转比较好……
01:46:372 (9) - http://puu.sh/c9mUl/c30ceb382d.png好看点……横平竖直我的爱【喂
其实总的来说节奏有些单一,可以尝试变换下……但是原曲就是这么单调……我觉得一样单调的节奏会合理一点

[Hard]

音效还没施工完就不挑了……纳尼……我应该下完了啊……思考……
00:20:931 (3) - 往下挪一点……DS用的1.6额……我觉得没什么问题
00:46:078 (2) - 听到的时候笑出声...改成soft additon(不是说好不挑的么)……><
00:53:725 (3,4,5) - 不要弄成和2平行,稍微再有点角度……横平竖直我的爱啊>,
01:06:666 (1) - 一样的..和4一条直线不太好看其实……思考……01:41:959 (1,2) - 这两个可以拉直

[Normal]

00:15:784 (6) - 这种地方感觉这个节奏http://puu.sh/c9ovz/2acbb301ff.png更好点……窝全程没跟鼓啊orz
00:50:195 (1) - 有点眼熟(……千万不要说出去>,
thx your mod ~

huafenshaonv wrote:

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[General]
修aimod……修了~不过有几个没办法改只能先放着orz
整体音效缺少clap样子……没地方可以下orz
[Easy]
00:15:784这里有个重音 不漏好……跟了的话……后面怎么办……
NC间隔有点长哦 不过hp2还好……额……打算换成2节一次了
00:20:195 (7) - 进hp条了……我觉得插不深不会怀孕的【喂
01:16:666 (8) - 这个音盖过去太多了……不然就不是easy啦>,
01:26:078 (7) - ^
[Normal]
00:13:136 (2) - 进hp……XD
00:37:842 (4) - ^
[hard]
00:46:078 (2) - durm很怪……不小心按错了>,
01:11:371 (1) - 进hp……只是插一下不会射的啦啦啦~
01:29:312 (4) - ^
01:42:548 (2) - 依旧觉得很怪……依旧是不小心按错了>,
easy nor 缺强力clap还好 hard开始音效突出点好……但是没什么合适的位置按orz
[Hyper]
00:06:960 (6,7) - 合并成一个slider……窝设置是有音就按下去……
01:05:489 (5) - 个人感觉这种好丑……我也觉得不好看……但是太长了orz……又不能和最高难度一样直接单锚点
风格和前面都不同样子- -……思考……
[Eternal]
00:14:019 (5) - 尾巴叠在1上……好~
00:21:960 (1) - 擦到hp了……擦啊……真的不会怀孕的啊【那个跪地上哭的表情……
00:30:489 (7) - 挺好的nc梗 不要rep啊 00:30:784这里加个note 凑三个111……本来就是三个111的……但是没有颜色用了才这样的><跳的好乱 :? 拉远看还是眼太花 需要些地方让右手停一停……额……的确全程都是乱飞orz

就这些 很干净的图 加油……喵>,
感谢摸图~
Gaia
fuck my 論文 D:
Sharlo

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

sharlo's insane
00:21:813 (4) - 这个来回我觉得不好 因为这里第4个音要小一点 我觉得可以放在192:292 或者200:240 fixed 我今晚自己打了之后也跟你一样的想法:3
00:49:019 (1) - 这个看不清 建议取缔 Editor里看不清楚 实际上还好阿
01:27:254 (1) - 不好看啊 你对比一下别的 完全不一样 诶 在看mod之前正好也改了lol
01:33:872 (2) - 往右移上4格左右

Flandre_ErMei wrote:

怎么有花花雨道的感觉 看我怒抄一波 xD

[Sharlo]

00:29:460 (2) - delete lol 这里我大改了一波w 感觉这个circle还是不要去掉比较好

01:46:225 (2) - 叠好 fixed

俩kika中间那段没kika段好玩... kiai哟~

↓好疼...和fuwa fuwa最高难度一样没ss掉 十分感人;w;

不要吐槽relax ,我一样有zx戳,目前来说我只玩relax+hd组合

Gaia wrote:

[Sharlo]
沒什麼大問題.. 只是覺得 用1/8的時候最好不要用圈, 用 1/8 reverse 比較合適
畢竟還是個 102 bpm 歌嘛 其实…也就204的连打 而且不是串 只有3连...

[Eternal]
為什麼102bpm 做得出來5星 extra = ="
其實sharlo insane 就有點太難了 竟然還做得出來一個更難的 .. 有點神 不难阿 只是有点跳嘛:3

感覺你做得太難, 不適合這首歌 窝觉得爽爽爽XDD

liuyiqiangbu wrote:

[Sharlo's Insane]

00:29:901 (1) - 不太喜欢绕的...http://puu.sh/c9noj/fcc12c9a00.png 这里我改了
00:56:077 (1) - 280,152 放了一下别的位置w
01:41:372 (1,2,3,4) - 2和4换下 破坏FLOW
@huafenshaonv: 啊啊啊我的难度呢??? 被吃了吗!
axschiming
粪MOD
XD


[Easy]
00:29:608 (7,1) - 包一下
01:10:784 (3,4) - 4包一下3
00:33:725 (3) - 弧度可以大一点


[Normal]
00:19:606 (7) - 试着向左凹可能flow更顺


实际上咱也摸不出什么,就是感觉音效可以做的仔细些,比如在01:23:136 (1)这类的地方可以换个比较亮的Finish之类的

[Hard]

00:37:254 (3,4) - 可以把4拆成一个散点和一个一拍的滑条
00:45:489 (1,2,3) - 感觉不好看……
01:32:548 (1,2) - 节奏改成散点跟一个半拍的折返滑条试试
01:42:548 (2,3) - 纯建议
http://puu.sh/cfnWN/5be42546c3.jpg

[Hyper]
01:05:489 (5) - 0 0
http://puu.sh/cfoc4/6367688783.jpg
01:28:136 (2,3) - 换个位置

这个难度跃进的有点大



[Sharlo's Insane]

神麻婆,摸不动Orz

[Eternal]

抱歉感觉高难度实在有点看不懂;w;



很喜欢这张图哦,祝早日rank
Topic Starter
Narcissu

axschiming wrote:

粪MOD
XD…… XD


[Easy]
00:29:608 (7,1) - 包一下
01:10:784 (3,4) - 4包一下3
00:33:725 (3) - 弧度可以大一点

這個diff會大改orz

[Normal]
00:19:606 (7) - 试着向左凹可能flow更顺……一直順的太死板啦>,


实际上咱也摸不出什么,就是感觉音效可以做的仔细些,比如在01:23:136 (1)这类的地方可以换个比较亮的Finish之类的……唔……音效是太懶orz……有機會我去找找

[Hard]

00:37:254 (3,4) - 可以把4拆成一个散点和一个一拍的滑条……這個一改就是十來個啊>,
00:45:489 (1,2,3) - 感觉不好看……唔……換了一下
01:32:548 (1,2) - 节奏改成散点跟一个半拍的折返滑条试试……也是一改就是一堆啊>,
01:42:548 (2,3) - 纯建议……我這裡看不了Puu啊orz
http://puu.sh/cfnWN/5be42546c3.jpg

[Hyper]
01:05:489 (5) - 0 0……放不下了>,
http://puu.sh/cfoc4/6367688783.jpg
01:28:136 (2,3) - 换个位置……

这个难度跃进的有点大……但是只多了一星 >,



[Sharlo's Insane]

神麻婆,摸不动Orz

[Eternal]

抱歉感觉高难度实在有点看不懂;w;……是啊是啊>,



很喜欢这张图哦,祝早日rank……喵~
感謝摸圖~
Fia
From your request

[Easy]

01:06:665 (3) - aimod显示end unsnapped
00:16:666 (6) - Easy上1.6x有点过了吧 其他的不列了

[Normal]

none.

[Hard]

Aimod还是说有unsnapped的note 试了一下应该是头没对齐

01:36:666 (6,7,1) - 67从左边过来更好

[Hyper]

Aimod还是说有unsnapped的note
kiai和别的难度设置不一样

00:26:077 (7,8,9,10) - 其实这里右左右左的安排会更舒服 这样第一下就要折返 现在是第二下才开始折返 感觉还不如把10放到7上

[Sharlo]

widescreen不知道为什么开着

00:41:078 (2) - 左半屏把y开到0的话一定会顶到血条 往下移一点
01:41:519 (2,3) - 感觉不该在这减小间距 之前都是重拍之后间距缩小 我个人觉得这么摆更好

[Eternal]

我不知道Eternal是梗还是什么的啊 个人不喜欢没有原因随便拉个帅气的词就拿来做最高难度名

00:25:195 (4,5,6,7) - 这个梗感觉怪怪的 和后面也接不上
00:31:372 - 从这到kiai感觉一直都是跳啊跳 我不知道现在的高水平玩家是不是多大跳都无所谓 正常人还是从间距变化上来感受的吧 全是大间距跳有点无聊了

音效下的挺好 没什么好讲 就这样吧
Topic Starter
Narcissu

PinkHeart wrote:

From your request

[Easy]

01:06:665 (3) - aimod显示end unsnapped……fix~
00:16:666 (6) - Easy上1.6x有点过了吧 其他的不列了……因為不是1/1所以放開一點……

[Normal]

none.

[Hard]

Aimod还是说有unsnapped的note 试了一下应该是头没对齐……fix~

01:36:666 (6,7,1) - 67从左边过来更好……那就擺不下了啦

[Hyper]

Aimod还是说有unsnapped的note……fix
kiai和别的难度设置不一样……fix

00:26:077 (7,8,9,10) - 其实这里右左右左的安排会更舒服 这样第一下就要折返 现在是第二下才开始折返 感觉还不如把10放到7上……那就變成跳了……

[Eternal]

我不知道Eternal是梗还是什么的啊 个人不喜欢没有原因随便拉个帅气的词就拿来做最高难度名……那用什麼呢……思考……

00:25:195 (4,5,6,7) - 这个梗感觉怪怪的 和后面也接不上……唔……但是不知道怎麼改
00:31:372 - 从这到kiai感觉一直都是跳啊跳 我不知道现在的高水平玩家是不是多大跳都无所谓 正常人还是从间距变化上来感受的吧 全是大间距跳有点无聊了……雖然比正常值高很多,但是我覺得還是有近有遠的啊……並不是全部大跳而是大跳,特大跳和超級跳【喂

音效下的挺好 没什么好讲 就这样吧
感謝摸圖~
Sharlo

PinkHeart wrote:

[Sharlo]

widescreen不知道为什么开着 关了

00:41:078 (2) - 左半屏把y开到0的话一定会顶到血条 往下移一点 我现在这样进test看还好
01:41:519 (2,3) - 感觉不该在这减小间距 之前都是重拍之后间距缩小 我个人觉得这么摆更好
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292,208,67842,6,0,L|300:244,2,27.9999980926514,6|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,168,68136,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,244,68430,2,0,P|165:240|125:202,1,111.999992370606,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,100,69019,6,0,P|444:160|420:228,1,139.999990463257,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,284,69460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,308,69608,2,0,L|208:324,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,220,69902,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,244,70048,6,0,L|168:192,1,69.9999952316285,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,196,70343,1,4,0:0:0:0:
412,100,70489,2,0,L|428:32,1,69.9999952316285,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,196,70784,2,0,L|436:242,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,120,71078,2,0,L|249:140,1,69.9999952316285,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,128,71299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,112,71372,6,0,P|144:132|88:104,1,139.999990463257,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,71813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,112,71960,2,0,L|212:184,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,44,72255,1,10,0:0:0:0:
429,51,72402,6,0,L|360:48,1,69.9999952316285,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,120,72696,1,6,0:0:0:0:
445,183,72843,2,0,L|376:180,1,69.9999952316285,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,204,73137,5,10,0:0:0:0:
260,280,73284,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,112,73431,1,6,0:0:0:0:
180,188,73578,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,188,73651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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140,296,74608,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,204,74754,6,0,L|284:134,1,69.9999952316285,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,252,75049,1,4,0:0:0:0:
392,172,75196,2,0,L|380:100,1,69.9999952316285,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,264,75490,2,0,L|436:338,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,156,76519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,108,76666,2,0,L|332:92,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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476,156,77108,6,0,L|460:87,1,69.9999952316285,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,40,77402,1,6,0:0:0:0:
260,108,77549,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,108,77843,5,10,0:0:0:0:
200,48,77989,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,72,78137,1,6,0:0:0:0:
104,156,78284,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,192,78431,6,0,B|264:240|240:284|240:284|200:324,1,139.999990463257,4|4,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,308,78872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,372,79019,2,0,L|324:324,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,308,79314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,248,79461,6,0,L|336:180,1,69.9999952316285,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,79755,1,4,0:0:0:0:
248,192,79902,2,0,P|212:204|180:204,1,69.9999952316285,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,80196,2,0,P|312:96|352:96,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,248,80490,2,0,L|331:180,1,69.9999952316285,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,120,80784,6,0,P|128:120|80:72,1,139.999990463257,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,40,81225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,30,81372,2,0,L|364:100,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,81667,1,10,0:0:0:0:
447,74,81813,6,0,L|440:144,1,69.9999952316285,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,248,82108,1,6,0:0:0:0:
348,248,82181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,248,82255,2,0,P|312:240|272:248,1,69.9999952316285,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,228,82549,5,10,0:0:0:0:
108,255,82696,1,2,0:0:0:0:
194,136,82843,1,6,0:0:0:0:
53,181,82990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,50,83137,2,0,P|152:55|108:107,1,139.999990463257,4|4,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,136,83578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,120,83725,2,0,P|313:114|345:119,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,184,84020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,316,84166,6,0,P|343:282|347:247,1,69.9999952316285,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,152,84461,1,4,0:0:0:0:
400,184,84607,2,0,P|364:180|336:160,1,69.9999952316285,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,136,84901,2,0,P|230:132|258:112,1,69.9999952316285,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,48,85195,2,0,P|304:44|276:24,1,69.9999952316285,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,52,85490,6,0,B|120:84|120:84|96:132|116:176,1,139.999990463257,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,220,85931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,92,86078,1,10,0:0:0:0:
268,92,86372,5,10,0:0:0:0:
336,224,86519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,136,86666,1,6,0:0:0:0:
260,260,86814,1,6,0:0:0:0:
264,176,86960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,176,87254,6,0,B|208:200|160:176|160:176|140:204|140:240,1,167.999994277954,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,232,87842,6,0,P|52:160|24:92,1,153.99999420929,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,88284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,88431,2,0,L|140:120,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,68,88725,1,2,0:0:0:0:
338,195,88872,6,0,L|264:175,1,76.9999971046448,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,276,89166,1,4,0:0:0:0:
428,220,89313,2,0,L|448:144,1,76.9999971046448,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,276,89607,2,0,L|264:352,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,89901,2,0,L|92:208,1,76.9999971046448,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,228,90122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,248,90195,6,0,P|16:192|28:120,1,153.99999420929,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,90636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,55,90783,2,0,L|276:44,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,184,91078,1,10,0:0:0:0:
316,264,91225,6,0,L|392:272,1,76.9999971046448,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,324,91519,1,6,0:0:0:0:
260,184,91666,2,0,L|184:176,1,76.9999971046448,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,316,91960,5,10,0:0:0:0:
344,132,92107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,264,92254,1,6,0:0:0:0:
208,104,92401,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,104,92475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,92548,6,0,B|140:112|140:112|88:120|68:156,1,153.999999454498,4|4,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,240,92989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,93136,2,0,L|224:28,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,236,93431,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,108,93578,6,0,L|308:28,1,76.9999971046448,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,260,93872,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,340,94019,2,0,L|316:263,1,76.9999971046448,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,188,94313,2,0,P|200:184|164:200,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,168,94607,2,0,P|382:128|380:88,1,76.9999971046448,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,64,94901,6,0,P|133:112|208:104,1,153.99999420929,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,24,95342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,160,95489,2,0,L|96:236,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,264,95783,1,10,0:0:0:0:
220,100,95931,6,0,L|216:180,1,76.9999971046448,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,168,96225,1,6,0:0:0:0:
501,119,96372,2,0,P|466:105|428:104,1,76.9999971046448,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,260,96666,5,10,0:0:0:0:
216,176,96813,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,316,96960,1,6,0:0:0:0:
364,168,97107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,112,97254,6,0,P|124:184|164:252,1,153.99999420929,4|4,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,116,97695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,44,97842,2,0,L|4:52,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,176,98137,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,116,98284,6,0,L|300:40,1,76.9999971046448,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,98578,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,112,98725,2,0,L|136:28,1,76.9999971046448,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,231,99019,2,0,P|117:248|156:247,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,220,99313,2,0,P|376:260|356:296,1,76.9999971046448,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,248,99607,6,0,B|120:232|112:188|112:188|68:180|40:212,1,153.999999454498,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,100048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,100195,2,0,L|292:160,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,312,100490,1,10,0:0:0:0:
216,104,100636,6,0,L|208:28,1,76.9999971046448,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,144,100931,1,6,0:0:0:0:
384,144,101004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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284,240,101372,5,10,0:0:0:0:
308,76,101519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,220,101666,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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308,76,102401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,102548,2,0,P|408:240|444:224,1,76.9999971046448,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,172,102843,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,156,102989,6,0,L|48:148,1,76.9999971046448,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,103284,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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Harubi Lira
[General]
曲子呢很不错,基本上我很喜欢,尤其是sharlo(喂,
其他的都没什么问题


下面问题来了
[Eternal]
音效部分
首先,整体建议减小到50%吧,本来就是比较安静的音乐,(还真别说66声音也不小,,,)
有些拍子略微有点凌乱
00:31:078 (1) -
01:27:548 (1) -
以上,去掉clap,换成finish

00:35:195 (7) -
00:39:901 (7) -
00:44:607 (7) -
00:49:313 (7) -
等等还有好多
这种尾音放在这歌里听着有些奇妙,可以选择把这种音调低(5%?)

排版部分
先来个总起,就是flow会有些生硬
00:08:872 (5) - 加个锚点,右下凹
00:12:548 (1) - 可以稍微拧一下,然后后面的①和2构成一个椭圆型flow
00:54:607 (9) - 虽然跟后面不对称了不过这里顺时针旋转10~15度试试
01:09:019 (1) - 加个锚点吧,让他向左凹一点,,,
整体还是挺漂亮的,不过看起来有复制粘贴啊,,,幸好本身图没那么规整
Sharlo

lsahi wrote:

曲子呢很不错,基本上我很喜欢,尤其是sharlo(喂
是喜欢sharlo的难度还是sharlo >////<
TtmnZk
这么久才来po,说真的我想拍死自己

[General]
Eternal od9的话, ar可以往上调调?

以及除了IN都没Kiai,是不加么?

Tag add Sharlo(GDer,太鼓你保留的话也是,以及太鼓DIff名有问题) 帰路(原先怎么是简体?233)彩る四季、風と音色(专辑)

[Eternal]
都是些flow向的建议,不用太重视>w0

00:13:578 (4) - Ctrl+g 可能对flow有帮助(?

00:14:019 (5) - 上面改了的话这里也要 Ctrl+g呦~

00:12:401 (11,1) - 跳之后突然停顿的感觉,我觉得还是分开好

00:16:813 (9,10) - ctrl+g,感觉会爽点

00:25:342 (5) - 跟前面接略卡手,强烈建议ctrl+g

00:35:195 (7) - ^

01:17:107 (5) - ^

01:40:931 (6,9) - 尾部叠一下?

01:42:548 (3,5) - 5尾部貌似没叠好

整体好棒好棒的~

[Sharlo]
00:56:225 (2) - 和00:56:960 没叠好?

摸不出什么了额,很整齐很棒的sharlo姐姐!

[Hard]
01:45:195 (4) - add clap

[Normal]
00:08:725 (3) - 红点滑条,打起来怪怪的

[Easy]
fine

Hai Owarimashita!
ps 整个set星数超超超超超整齐!star star!
Harubi Lira

Sharlo wrote:

lsahi wrote:

曲子呢很不错,基本上我很喜欢,尤其是sharlo(喂
是喜欢sharlo的难度还是sharlo >////<
都喜欢o///o
Topic Starter
Narcissu

TT Mouse wrote:

这么久才来po,说真的我想拍死自己……沒關係的沒關係的,窩被很多人放過鴿子>,

[General]
Eternal od9的话, ar可以往上调调?……不喜歡用小數……我自己打也不習慣……

以及除了IN都没Kiai,是不加么?……其實有>,

Tag add Sharlo(GDer,太鼓你保留的话也是,以及太鼓DIff名有问题) 帰路(原先怎么是简体?233)彩る四季、風と音色(专辑)……都加了~那個歸路因為標題又來所以tag用一個簡體

[Eternal]
都是些flow向的建议,不用太重视>w0

00:13:578 (4) - Ctrl+g 可能对flow有帮助(?……那就4.25的DS啦太遠了……

00:14:019 (5) - 上面改了的话这里也要 Ctrl+g呦~

00:12:401 (11,1) - 跳之后突然停顿的感觉,我觉得还是分开好……分開了~

00:16:813 (9,10) - ctrl+g,感觉会爽点……我不懂flow啊……而且不想都轉圈跳>,

00:25:342 (5) - 跟前面接略卡手,强烈建议ctrl+g……強烈建議的話就改好了orz

00:35:195 (7) - ^……這個換了就沒地方接下一個滑條了惹

01:17:107 (5) - ^……這個地方的滑條全部是同向的……

01:40:931 (6,9) - 尾部叠一下?……fix~

01:42:548 (3,5) - 5尾部貌似没叠好……fix~

整体好棒好棒的~……喵>,

[Hard]
01:45:195 (4) - add clap……加了>,

[Normal]
00:08:725 (3) - 红点滑条,打起来怪怪的…………該了

[Easy]
fine

Hai Owarimashita!
ps 整个set星数超超超超超整齐!star star!……喜歡就好喜歡就好~

lsahi wrote:

[Eternal]
音效部分
首先,整体建议减小到50%吧,本来就是比较安静的音乐,(还真别说66声音也不小,,,)……唔……我覺得66挺好……
有些拍子略微有点凌乱
00:31:078 (1) -
01:27:548 (1) -
以上,去掉clap,换成finish……這是外加的停頓……不然就兩拍沒東西了惹

00:35:195 (7) -
00:39:901 (7) -
00:44:607 (7) -
00:49:313 (7) -
等等还有好多
这种尾音放在这歌里听着有些奇妙,可以选择把这种音调低(5%?)……我覺得消音滑條尾會讓玩家有沒按到的錯覺……

排版部分
先来个总起,就是flow会有些生硬
00:08:872 (5) - 加个锚点,右下凹 ……窩是想弄平行梗啊啊啊啊>,
00:12:548 (1) - 可以稍微拧一下,然后后面的①和2构成一个椭圆型flow……改了~
00:54:607 (9) - 虽然跟后面不对称了不过这里顺时针旋转10~15度试试……我想弄平行梗啊>,
01:09:019 (1) - 加个锚点吧,让他向左凹一点,,,……平行梗啊>,
整体还是挺漂亮的,不过看起来有复制粘贴啊,,,幸好本身图没那么规整……複製粘貼我的愛>,

Gaia wrote:

haai as requested~

puush 用不了好痛苦 T^T……233
[General]
taiko 需要兩個diffs, muzu 跟 oni 不然是unrankable 喔……太鼓已經刪了>,

Hyper = Insane? 通常 hyper 是 hard [Beginner/Standard/Hyper/Another] 但 你之前都用 [Easy/Normal/Hard] 我建議你改名為Insane……畢竟沒到In圖標……保留……

easy remap 了惹>,

[normal]
NC 建議跟Easy 一樣……換成2節一次了……
00:07:254 (7) - 如果是 " \ " 的形狀會比較順?……
00:10:195 (7) - 灣多一點會比較好? ……看不到看不到><
00:13:136 (2,3) - (好挑剔) 可以包更好……fix~
00:20:342 (8) - 灣另一邊? 00:22:548 (2,3) - 又來了……fix~
00:35:489 (8) - (312, 244) 三角形好像比較順?……唔……三角有點擠
00:52:548 (5,6) - 包起來……fix~
00:54:312 (8) - 跟00:35:489 (8) - 一樣……其實不一樣吧……
01:19:019 (2,3) - 好像太挑剔了所以不講了……fix~
01:30:195 (5,6) - 但這個就差蠻大了……fix~

[hard]
00:21:960 (1,2) - 00:32:842 (4,1) - 00:41:372 (2,3) - (還有蠻多其他的.... 我就不講了)
00:29:607 - 00:48:431 (2) - 01:07:254 (2) - 01:08:431 (6) - 音樂裡沒鼓聲喔, clap 去掉……
00:20:489 - 00:25:195 (2) - -00:34:607 - 00:39:313 - 00:44:019 - 00:53:431 - 00:58:136 - 但這裡可以加clap .... 剩下的給你找 -3-
非常感謝~一個個找真的辛苦了……全改了>,

00:11:372 - 蠻大的鼓聲建議你放個什麼在這……全程單音軌啊>,
00:53:725 (3,4,5) - 這flow ;w;……不懂flow……orz
00:59:607 (1,2) - 複製?……是啊……
01:29:018 (3) - 一只跟鋼琴, 因該把這放在 01:28:872 ……這段是管絃主導了……
01:33:724 (3) - ^ .. 還有其他但看你改不改
01:34:901 (1,2) - 複製?……是……啊…………
01:40:195 (2) - clap……嗯嗯
01:46:077 (6) - ^……嗯嗯

[Hyper]
204 bpm? 因該要跟其他diffs一樣喔……大失敗啊>,
AIMod裡有很多unsnapped objects……fix~
00:03:872 - 沒音阿, 建議把 00:03:725 (2,3) - 改成 1/1 滑條……兩個高難度窩是無視滑條尾只計算點擊的做法……
00:31:078 (1) - 別clap……外加的停頓……
01:32:842 (2) - 01:33:136 (3) - 用同一個形狀 類似這樣 01:38:137 (4) - 改成圓圈, 把 01:38:284 (5) - 移到 01:38:284……唔……
01:42:842 (4,5) - ^

blanket 的問題我就沒講了


[Eternal]
為什麼102bpm 做得出來5星 extra = ="
其實sharlo insane 就有點太難了 竟然還做得出來一個更難的 .. 有點神

覺得flow 有點怪, 像 00:04:166 (5) - 00:18:284 (5) - 00:19:313 (8,1) -

跳也有點太大了, 像 00:07:254 (8,9,10,11,1) - 00:11:960 (8,9,10,11,1) - 00:14:313 (6,7,1) -

感覺你做得太難, 不適合這首歌……我覺得難度不重要啊……

阿阿阿阿阿 先就這樣啦 之後就加油瞜~

……這麼久才回覆對不起了orz……
Sharlo
水仙喊来的modder都跟水仙一样软软哒萌萌哒~
莫非这就是物以类聚0.0
Streliteela
Still need some changes from the origin.

A good map not only depends on how challenging the map is, but also how impressive your map is. When playing a map, players will longing for the feelings that their actions (Click those notes and sliders) synchonize with the rhythm. They need maps that let them feel that they become a performer playing music they like, and that feeling is called 'Sense of Immersion' (代入感).

So, it's the time to try a new mapping style. Pay less attention on the difficulty stars, just touch the melody by your heart and melt your feelings in your mapping process. Hope next time I play this map, I felt like I was playing the piano, not just 'Rush-Rush-Rush' & 'Jump-Jump-Jump' everywhere dazedly and exhaustedly.

Longing for your masterpiece~ :)

顺便练练三脚猫英语lol
Topic Starter
Narcissu
唔……至少我能說這還是有鬆緊的……如果你打的了的話,會發現弦樂段落比鋼琴段落輕鬆的多……
Sharlo
no kd.

  • General

  1. Title: 帰路 - KaeriMichi - (Short Ver.)
  2. Romanised Title: KaeriMichi (Short Ver.)
  3. Tags: Remove "Otokaze", "karen", "saigetsu" and "音风".
    Add "Jazz", "Instrumental" and "Sharlo".
  • Eternal

  1. 01:22:842 (10) - Change Additions to Soft
  2. 01:28:136 (2) - ^
Echoy
考完试来mod!><
Neil Watts
Hi!

I'll try my best even if I'm a noob modder~

Otokaze - KaeriMichi (Short Ver.)

Great skin!
- 00:12:548 - kiai just for the fireworks? I dunno if it's rankable
- 01:46:666 - maybe you should find a hitsound for the end
[Easy]
- HP 2-3 should be fine too.
- 00:15:489 (5,6) - 00:20:489 (5,6) - 00:24:901 (4,5) - [...] - Jumps unrankables on an Easy diff, you should keep the same spacing in the whole map.
- 01:38:543 - well, this is a little and nazi detail, but....please fix this blanket ;w;

[Normal]
- 00:34:901 (7) - the whole map is mapped in 1/2, why are you using it now? If you wanna use 1/4, so use it for these notes too 00:08:725 (3) -
Nothing else.

[Hard]
- HP6 minimum
- Try OD7 ?
- 00:22:842 (2,3,4) - a bit overmapped imo
- 01:13:136 (6,7,1) - slider on slider, hard to read.
- 01:19:312 (2,3,4) - overmapped too
- 01:27:842 - > end - hard to guess what you're mapping

The next diffs are too hard to mod for me...

Good luck, rank this :D
Xinely
from ticket




  • General
  1. remove instrumental from tags since it will set in genre


  • Easy
  1. 00:03:137 - until 00:10:195 - you should add whistle on 3rd whiteticks too imo since they have piano sounds that become important on calm musics like this
  2. 00:10:784 (4) - hmm just my taste but i feel the flow become more natural when you move the tail to 4,88
  3. 00:12:548 (1) - use default soft finish for this circle. the custom hitfinish can't emphasize the crash cymbal sound
  4. 00:16:666 (6) - fix the inconsistency spacing (1,60x), that isnt allowed for Easy diff
  5. 00:21:372 (6) - ^
  6. 00:26:078 (5) - ^
  7. 00:35:489 (5) - ^
  8. 00:29:607 (5) - how about make a blanket from this slider to next slider? at least it can improve the design here http://puu.sh/cyq9D.jpg
  9. 00:47:842 (3) - add whistle on repeat to emphasize the flute's sound here? also add whistle in 00:47:842 - ? i saw you used whistle on every stanza here
  10. 00:45:489 (1,2) - aa the blanket can improve a lot here. looks kinda off for me https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192130
  11. 01:06:666 (3) - same as 00:47:842 (3) -
  12. 01:09:019 (1) - crash cymbal here so use soft default finish for emphasize it
  13. 01:18:431 (1) - inconsistency spacing (1,34x) here, it should be have 1,20x
  14. i smell copy paste here ---/runs , well the placements are fine. just you must fix inconsistency spacings (i didnt mention all coz it repetitively and so many)


  • Normal
  1. 00:03:725 (2) - hmm imo the slider a little bit plain for flow here, also for design when you can see 00:03:725 (2,5) - at same time, try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192733 ?
  2. 00:07:254 (7,1) - just nazi thing but imo the flow a little bit plain and could be more natural with try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192744 ?
  3. 00:11:078 (8,9,1) - nazi again but imo flow can improved here if you tweak the (9) slider to has a curve on it, i mean something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192750
  4. 00:11:960 (9) - add clap on this slider's head to emphasize the drum sound
  5. 00:12:548 (1) - same as Easy
  6. 00:15:783 (6) - hmm imo the flow a little bit rigid here since the curve on this slider should be on upward if you following the current flow, hmm try make something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194650 (straight one is fine too)
  7. 00:19:606 (7,8) - just my taste but i will try to make the flow more natural here, maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194673
  8. 00:26:077 (7) - nazi thing but the tail should be at 32,140 for keep the flow here
  9. 00:29:901 (8) - aaa yep same issue as 00:15:783 (6) - , try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194692
  10. 00:47:842 (6) - nazi but blanket kinda off here. drag the 2nd curve 140,128
  11. 01:05:489 (3,4) - aa you can improve the flow again here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194702
  12. 01:06:665 (6) - same as previous, you can improve the blanket here 368,264 for 2nd node
  13. 01:09:019 (1) - use soft default finish because the music is crash cymbal here?
  14. 01:14:607 (3,4,5,6) - hmm kinda nazi but a little bit hard to read for the slider by newbies, also the flow a little bit too rigid for me here. i would say something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194720
  15. 01:26:372 (8) - it has kinda rigid flow (because suddenly to upward) here, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194723 would be work nicely
  16. 01:40:489 (7) - make the slider has a little curve same as 01:41:371 (8) - 's curve to improve both design and flow here http://puu.sh/czaLU.jpg
  17. hmm are you forget to add claps on this map? 00:13:136 - until end doesnt have any claps sound when Easy diff has claps on every 2nd 4th whiteticks and several red ticks here


  • Hard
  1. 00:21:960 (1,2) - the blanket is really off here. drag (1) slider's center node to 128,52
  2. 00:25:636 (4,5) - im sure the patterns become easier to read when you ctrl+G these circles
  3. 00:26:078 (6,7,8,9,1) - try make them become slider repeat or http://puu.sh/czftU.jpg, new guideline says that Hard should avoid stream, i know this is low bpm but better to avoid it imo
  4. 00:34:901 (3,4,5) - hmm forgive me im sure flow can improved here but i dont find a nice way to fix it lol
  5. 01:09:019 (1) - same as Easy
  6. 01:15:195 (4,1) - im sure you can improve the blanket here
  7. 01:16:077 (1) -drag 2nd node to 184,200 to make better blanket with 01:16:077 (1,2) -
  8. 01:20:195 (5) - if you are going to make blanket with next slider, move this slider to 496,256
  9. 01:22:106 (4,5) - same as 00:25:636 (4,5) -
  10. 01:22:548 (6,7,8,9,1) - same as 00:26:078 (6,7,8,9,1) -
  11. 01:32:401 - maybe you can add note here for emphasize the melody of music (more specific is piano)
  12. Generally placement looks fine for me


  • Sharlo's Insane
  1. AR 9 feels too fast here. i would suggest around AR 8,5. Also OD too, 7 or 7,5 would be nice
  2. 00:17:181 (5) - overmap
  3. 00:12:475 (5) - ,00:14:828 (6) - , 00:25:710 (3) - , 00:43:063 (5) - , 01:01:886 (5) - , 01:11:299 (6) - ,01:13:651 (5) - ,01:22:181 (3) - ,01:30:122 (6) - , 01:32:475 (5) - , 01:41:004 (3) - i can't hear any music for these circles. i guess overmapped
  4. 01:27:842 - maybe end the kiai time here since i feel the musics on this part arent epic as previous
  5. Placements are fine


  • Hyper
  1. hmm i know you make harder diff coz already have Hard diff but imo this diff is quite hard. if you make this diff a little bit easier, it would have nice spread here


  • Eternal
  1. OD 8 please. you dont want to kill players right?
  2. 00:04:901 (7,8) - the flow being weird when in previous you make the tail of slider become a little bit left and for 00:04:901 (7) - being almost straight one and on next slider it turning back like 00:04:607 (6) - , do consistency shape of slider would be nice here
  3. 00:07:548 (10,11) - i guess you need to fix this since with your skin, 10 and 11 combos looked as "0" and "1" , fix for this and rest of that issue on diff
  4. oh damn cool <3

i still see many improvement for this map but this map is cool so i would leave my star icon first :3
Good luck o/
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Neil Watts wrote:

Hi!

I'll try my best even if I'm a noob modder~……i'm noob too >,

Otokaze - KaeriMichi (Short Ver.)

Great skin!
- 00:12:548 - kiai just for the fireworks? I dunno if it's rankable……no problem~
- 01:46:666 - maybe you should find a hitsound for the end……i add a finish ~
[Easy]
- HP 2-3 should be fine too.……ok……HP 2 now
- 00:15:489 (5,6) - 00:20:489 (5,6) - 00:24:901 (4,5) - [...] - Jumps unrankables on an Easy diff, you should keep the same spacing in the whole map.……i think 1.2 DS too close …… play maybe will think it's 1/2 ……
- 01:38:543 - well, this is a little and nazi detail, but....please fix this blanket ;w;……fix~

[Normal]
- 00:34:901 (7) - the whole map is mapped in 1/2, why are you using it now? If you wanna use 1/4, so use it for these notes too 00:08:725 (3) - ……i think is ok ……
Nothing else.

[Hard]
- HP6 minimum……ok~
- Try OD7 ?……i think hard diff should low OD……
- 00:22:842 (2,3,4) - a bit overmapped imo……delete note now~
- 01:13:136 (6,7,1) - slider on slider, hard to read.…… yes it's hard to read …… but i think it's easy to play when second play ……
- 01:19:312 (2,3,4) - overmapped too……^
- 01:27:842 - > end - hard to guess what you're mapping……

The next diffs are too hard to mod for me...

Good luck, rank this :D……thx ><

Xinely wrote:

from ticket




  • General
  1. remove instrumental from tags since it will set in genre……fix~


  • Easy
  1. 00:03:137 - until 00:10:195 - you should add whistle on 3rd whiteticks too imo since they have piano sounds that become important on calm musics like this……ok~
  2. 00:10:784 (4) - hmm just my taste but i feel the flow become more natural when you move the tail to 4,88……ok~
  3. 00:12:548 (1) - use default soft finish for this circle. the custom hitfinish can't emphasize the crash cymbal sound……i forget it …… orz
  4. 00:16:666 (6) - fix the inconsistency spacing (1,60x), that isnt allowed for Easy diff……i think 1.2 DS too close …… maybe play will think it's 1/1 …… 1.6 DS better than 1.2 DS imo
  5. 00:21:372 (6) - ^
  6. 00:26:078 (5) - ^
  7. 00:35:489 (5) - ^
  8. 00:29:607 (5) - how about make a blanket from this slider to next slider? at least it can improve the design here …… ok ~
  9. 00:47:842 (3) - add whistle on repeat to emphasize the flute's sound here? also add whistle in 00:47:842 - ? i saw you used whistle on every stanza here……i forget it orz ……
  10. 00:45:489 (1,2) - aa the blanket can improve a lot here. looks kinda off for me …… e …… i dislike blanket all time ……
  11. 01:06:666 (3) - same as 00:47:842 (3) -……fix~
  12. 01:09:019 (1) - crash cymbal here so use soft default finish for emphasize it……fix~
  13. 01:18:431 (1) - inconsistency spacing (1,34x) here, it should be have 1,20x
  14. i smell copy paste here ---/runs , well the placements are fine. just you must fix inconsistency spacings (i didnt mention all coz it repetitively and so many)……::>_<::


  • Normal
  1. 00:03:725 (2) - hmm imo the slider a little bit plain for flow here, also for design when you can see 00:03:725 (2,5) - at same time, try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192733 ?
  2. 00:07:254 (7,1) - just nazi thing but imo the flow a little bit plain and could be more natural with try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192744 ?
  3. 00:11:078 (8,9,1) - nazi again but imo flow can improved here if you tweak the (9) slider to has a curve on it, i mean something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192750
  4. 00:11:960 (9) - add clap on this slider's head to emphasize the drum sound……fix~
  5. 00:12:548 (1) - same as Easy……fix~
  6. 00:15:783 (6) - hmm imo the flow a little bit rigid here since the curve on this slider should be on upward if you following the current flow, hmm try make something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194650 (straight one is fine too)
  7. 00:19:606 (7,8) - just my taste but i will try to make the flow more natural here, maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194673
  8. 00:26:077 (7) - nazi thing but the tail should be at 32,140 for keep the flow here……e……i dislike slider and note in line …… it too rigid
  9. 00:29:901 (8) - aaa yep same issue as 00:15:783 (6) - , try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194692
  10. 00:47:842 (6) - nazi but blanket kinda off here. drag the 2nd curve 140,128……fix~
  11. 01:05:489 (3,4) - aa you can improve the flow again here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194702
  12. 01:06:665 (6) - same as previous, you can improve the blanket here 368,264 for 2nd node
  13. 01:09:019 (1) - use soft default finish because the music is crash cymbal here?……fix~
  14. 01:14:607 (3,4,5,6) - hmm kinda nazi but a little bit hard to read for the slider by newbies, also the flow a little bit too rigid for me here. i would say something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194720
  15. 01:26:372 (8) - it has kinda rigid flow (because suddenly to upward) here, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2194723 would be work nicely
  16. 01:40:489 (7) - make the slider has a little curve same as 01:41:371 (8) - 's curve to improve both design and flow here http://puu.sh/czaLU.jpg
  17. hmm are you forget to add claps on this map? 00:13:136 - until end doesnt have any claps sound when Easy diff has claps on every 2nd 4th whiteticks and several red ticks here……sorry i forget it …… i work hitsound but forget saved …… orz


  • Hard
  1. 00:21:960 (1,2) - the blanket is really off here. drag (1) slider's center node to 128,52 ……
  2. 00:25:636 (4,5) - im sure the patterns become easier to read when you ctrl+G these circles……i think same direction is good ……and hard read is my style
  3. 00:26:078 (6,7,8,9,1) - try make them become slider repeat or http://puu.sh/czftU.jpg, new guideline says that Hard should avoid stream, i know this is low bpm but better to avoid it imo……it's hard to play …… but i wish player miss here …… because i'm wicked LOL
  4. 00:34:901 (3,4,5) - hmm forgive me im sure flow can improved here but i dont find a nice way to fix it lol…… 唔……
  5. 01:09:019 (1) - same as Easy……fix~
  6. 01:15:195 (4,1) - im sure you can improve the blanket here……fix~
  7. 01:16:077 (1) -drag 2nd node to 184,200 to make better blanket with 01:16:077 (1,2) - ……all blanket same is boring …… imo
  8. 01:20:195 (5) - if you are going to make blanket with next slider, move this slider to 496,256……moved 01:20:783 (1) - ……
  9. 01:22:106 (4,5) - same as 00:25:636 (4,5) - ……
  10. 01:22:548 (6,7,8,9,1) - same as 00:26:078 (6,7,8,9,1) -……
  11. 01:32:401 - maybe you can add note here for emphasize the melody of music (more specific is piano)……ok~
  12. Generally placement looks fine for me……>,


  • Sharlo's Insane
  1. AR 9 feels too fast here. i would suggest around AR 8,5. Also OD too, 7 or 7,5 would be nice……AR8.5 too slow when i play ,and i can't adapt AR8.5 ……OD 7 …… will too many SS imo ……
  2. 00:17:181 (5) - overmap……when i play …… i think it's no problem ……


  • Hyper
  1. hmm i know you make harder diff coz already have Hard diff but imo this diff is quite hard. if you make this diff a little bit easier, it would have nice spread here……orz……but i tired to remap it ……


  • Eternal
  1. OD 8 please. you dont want to kill players right?……OD9 is my love >, < …… change to 8.5……
  2. 00:04:901 (7,8) - the flow being weird when in previous you make the tail of slider become a little bit left and for 00:04:901 (7) - being almost straight one and on next slider it turning back like 00:04:607 (6) - , do consistency shape of slider would be nice here……consistency shape too rigid imo …… and …… i don‘t know what is flow……
  3. 00:07:548 (10,11) - i guess you need to fix this since with your skin, 10 and 11 combos looked as "0" and "1" , fix for this and rest of that issue on diff……i add more NC in Eternal & Hyper Diff orz……
  4. oh damn cool <3…… >,

sorry use blue color orz , and my network very bad …… i can't look some “Puu” …… orz

i still see many improvement for this map but this map is cool so i would leave my star icon first :3
Good luck o/ …… thx ><
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