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Giralda
谢谢 star!!
Trust
Girraflda!

Highly recommending you change anything highlighted in blue.

[General]

  1. The break delays on all difficulties end a tick early, should be on the downbeat.
  2. Preview time still unsnapped.

[Normal]

  1. Use something like AR4, HP3 or 4, OD3 or 4. The current settings are too high for the easiest difficulty and don't make for a nice balance in the mapset.
  2. 01:00:734 (5) - Rhythm feels incomplete. I would avoid skipping 01:00:922 - and follow the music with a 1/1 rhythm similar to the other kiai sections.
  3. 01:53:797 (4) - Spacing can be evened out here.
  4. 02:18:172 (4) - I think this is supposed to have a finish, not a clap.
  5. 02:54:172 (2) - A normal sample on the tail sounds more fitting to me.
  6. 02:54:547 (7) - Here on the tail too.
  7. 03:24:172 (2) - Sounds like this should just be a soft-clap, I would remove the normal sample.
  8. 03:39:547 (3) - Missed a normal sample on the repeat for consistency.
  9. 04:05:047 (2,3) - Listening to what (3) is mapped to this rhythm sounds like filler. Try something this so you can bring out what (4) is mapped to:


Parts like 00:07:297 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:14:797 (3,4) - were a bit strange since you're mapping weak background music over predominant vocals. I would personally keep the rhythm on white ticks for these parts, vocals are generally easier to follow for players of this level of course.
[Hard]

  1. 00:28:859 (2) - Consider removing the whistle on the head, it accentuates nothing.
  2. 00:34:859 (2,3,4,5) - I hope you can consider rearranging this combo to make it flow more nicely, I'm finding I need to make awkward cursor motions just to land these sharp direction changes.
  3. 00:41:422 (3) - Should be a clap on the head.
  4. 01:16:859 (2) - Clap on head instead of whistle.
  5. 02:00:359 (6) - Did you mean to stack this on the tail of 01:59:797 (5) - ? Looks a bit strange.
  6. 03:24:172 (7) - I don't know if you want to have a normal sample on the head haha.

[Insane]

  1. 00:50:422 (4) - Missed a clap on the head.
  2. 01:05:609 (6) - Remove clap.
  3. 02:18:172 (9) - On the tail.
  4. 02:30:547 (1,1,1) - Cool idea here but unlike 02:29:797 (1,1,1) this part is left quite undermapped as you can hear the drums go, I would consider adding notes between these.
  5. 02:45:172 (6,7) - Four consecutive claps, something doesn't sound right here. Remove the clap on the head of (7) and add a normal sample to its tail.
  6. 03:24:172 (6) - It's that darn normal sample again.
  7. 03:25:297 (1) - Aw man, you should really follow the background music instead of cover it with this slider. I think you could do something to follow the violin action at this part, it would be really cool.
  8. 03:50:797 (6,7,8,9) - Hitsounding in this combo sounds messed up and doesn't reflect the music properly. Remove clap on the head of (6), remove the normal sample on the head of (7), replace the clap with a whistle on the head of (8), and remove the claps on the tails of (8) and (9) to fix.
  9. 04:07:297 (1) - You may want to reduce the volume of the spin to at least 20% so a loud spin isn't playing over the fade. Apply to other diffs if you do.


Not much to say here. Plays awesome as you already know!
Topic Starter
Giralda
Thanks Trust! Applied everything~
ShirohaMyMommy
[■ General]
  1. AR8.5 is kinda fast for my eyes nvm
  2. Where are combo colors?


[■ Insane]
  1. 00:12:359 (6,7,8) - I don't think this jump fits this part :( since it seems the circles have been placed somehow ignored the song, I would like to make the rhythm easier or easier jump. example:
  2. 01:44:422 (4,6) - This pattern will be hard to read on HR or DT T_t
  3. 01:48:734 (9) - is the drum clap necessary thing? this sounds kinda weird for me
  4. 01:59:422 (4) - I prefer straight one like 01:59:047 (3) - ww
  5. 02:12:547 (7,8) - this is my personal preference, I would remake a square to jump at 02:12:922 (9) - the jump currently feels kinda strange? for this diff because there are always mini jumps in the diff (NO IDEA WHAT I WANNA SAY) well I meant current pattern doesn't fit there with the slider form imo
  6. 03:33:359 (6) - remove clap? feels like out of place to me


[■ Hard]

  • HP-1? for spread like 3-5-7 ww no one cares

  1. 02:19:297 break start at here must be betterrrrrr


[■ Normal]
  1. 01:37:859 (2) - clap on head?
Maruyu
inb4 Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Giralda
Thanks for the mod Delis! Did everything except for the clap at 03:33:359 (6) on the Insane, since that's how the clap patterns work in the song. I know, it's weird how it works but I can't do anything about it T_T
ShirohaMyMommy
w0w
Topic Starter
Giralda
DELIS IS MOE
captin1

Giralda wrote:

DELIS IS MOE
jonathanlfj

Giralda wrote:

DELIS IS MOE
23:39 Giralda: p/3502277
23:52 jonathanlfj: 00:39:734 (9) - did you forget normal sample here
23:52 Giralda: yes
23:55 jonathanlfj: 01:03:172 (6,7,8) - whoa this angle can be better
23:55 jonathanlfj: you know what i mean
23:56 Giralda: fk overlap
23:56 Giralda: wait nvm
23:56 Giralda: not too big of a deal
23:56 jonathanlfj: haha yeah
23:56 jonathanlfj: 01:34:297 (1) - WHERE IS YOUR DRUM CLAP
23:57 Giralda: OH NO
23:58 jonathanlfj: 02:10:297 (1) - i would prefer ctrl+g on this
23:59 Giralda: sure
23:59 jonathanlfj: 02:30:547 (1,1) - did you intentionally miss the claps on this
23:59 jonathanlfj: i would use them with decreasing volume
23:59 Giralda: No this was a fix and I forgot to add them
00:00 jonathanlfj: rip hitsounds
00:00 jonathanlfj: pro tip: run through your diff at 50% music volume and 100% hitsound volume when modding
00:00 jonathanlfj: gotta catch them all
00:01 Giralda: oh yeah
00:01 Giralda: i do like
00:01 Giralda: 100% and 30% sfx
00:01 jonathanlfj: yesterday i ran through my map at 0% volume to find missing claps xD
00:01 Giralda: :P
00:01 Giralda: LOL
00:01 jonathanlfj: 0% music
00:01 Giralda: woah
00:01 jonathanlfj: it sounded pretty retarded but i found what i needed to find
00:02 Giralda: yeah makes sense
00:02 Giralda: it's been a while since you actually had to go through a map of mines
00:02 jonathanlfj: 02:47:047 (3) - is this normal sample intentional
00:02 jonathanlfj: going through so people dont sht on my face again for ranking a map and not throughly checking it
00:02 Giralda: changed to whistle instead
00:02 jonathanlfj: cool
00:03 Giralda: well I didn't go through it properly myself as you can already tell
00:03 jonathanlfj: rip
00:03 jonathanlfj: 03:23:047 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i had a massive deja vu here
00:04 jonathanlfj: 03:26:234 (5) - normal sample sir
00:04 Giralda: deja vu is from neophobia
00:05 jonathanlfj: i recall something similar in a ranked map i played in the past though
00:05 Giralda: oh idk then
00:05 jonathanlfj: 03:39:734 (11) - which hitsound would you like here
00:05 jonathanlfj: 03:51:547 (8) - end
00:06 Giralda: NORMAL CLAP WHISTLE FINISH!
00:06 Giralda: ~
00:06 jonathanlfj: NUKE YOUR FACE
00:06 Giralda: OMG NO SPARE ME
00:06 jonathanlfj: ok lets do hard now
00:06 jonathanlfj: did you use the hitsound copier
00:07 Giralda: yes and no
00:07 jonathanlfj: oh no that means i need to catch hitsounds again
00:07 Giralda: probably yeah
00:08 jonathanlfj: well lets start with 00:30:734 (6) -
00:08 jonathanlfj: 00:35:047 (3,4) - what
00:08 Giralda: mhm
00:08 jonathanlfj: delisssssss
00:08 jonathanlfj: why you do this to me
00:09 Giralda: LOOOOL
00:09 jonathanlfj: 00:45:734 (7) - i have a feeling a lot of hard players will click this the other way around
00:09 jonathanlfj: might want ctrl+g
00:10 Giralda: done
00:11 jonathanlfj: 00:57:547 (7) - normal sample on end?
00:11 Giralda: done
00:11 Giralda: ignore the ones you mentioned above on insane, I already did those when we moved to hard
00:12 jonathanlfj: 01:30:547 (7) -
00:12 jonathanlfj: 01:34:297 (1) - NOOOOOOOOOOO
00:12 Giralda: ~
00:12 Giralda: I DID IT ALREADY DON'T WORRY
00:12 jonathanlfj: i need to do this like nyquill
00:13 jonathanlfj: make you feel sorry for everything you do
00:13 Giralda: I was forseeing that
00:13 Giralda: already
00:13 jonathanlfj: no suprise there
00:13 Giralda: hahaha
00:13 jonathanlfj: dont make me break anything
00:13 jonathanlfj: 01:53:797 (4) - OH NO
00:13 Giralda: LOL
00:14 jonathanlfj: 01:57:922 (7,8) - poor hidden players are gonna misread this so hard
00:14 jonathanlfj: 01:57:922 (7) - i would move this out of stack
00:14 jonathanlfj: 02:13:859 (2) - CLAP GOOD SIR
00:15 jonathanlfj: 02:19:297 (1) - asdf
00:16 Giralda: what if I made 01:57:922 - into a 1/2 slider stacked on the end of the 1/1 before it?
00:16 jonathanlfj: that should be fine
00:16 jonathanlfj: 02:48:359 (6) - clap
00:16 Giralda: done done donee
00:18 jonathanlfj: 03:51:547 (6,7,8,9) - you just successfully trolled all DT players
00:18 jonathanlfj: 03:57:547 (7) - clap
00:19 jonathanlfj: or normal sample
00:19 Giralda: you know how i roll
00:19 jonathanlfj: i do that too gg
00:20 jonathanlfj: 04:07:109 (8) - you had a NC on insane but not on this...
00:20 Giralda: oh oops
00:20 jonathanlfj: your hard had a 1:2 circle to slider ratio
00:20 jonathanlfj: chin will be mad at you
00:20 Giralda: whatever LOL
00:20 jonathanlfj: yolo
00:20 Giralda: i know he will be
00:21 jonathanlfj: i love your normal's star rating
00:22 jonathanlfj: i've been abusing this since day 1
00:22 Giralda: hehehe
00:23 jonathanlfj: oh boy tari is modding this as well
00:23 jonathanlfj: let me discuss this with him
00:23 Giralda: oh no LOL
00:24 jonathanlfj: 00:16:859 (3,4,5) - this positioning bugs my OCD alot
00:25 Giralda: oh
00:25 Giralda: let me fix
00:25 Giralda: for the OCD impaired
00:25 jonathanlfj: please
00:25 Giralda: http://puu.sh/cSHZB/6a955e62f6.jpg better?
00:25 Giralda: owo
00:26 jonathanlfj: i can live with that
00:27 Giralda: :3
00:27 jonathanlfj: tari said he will run through a misc check to ensure there is nothing unrankable
00:27 jonathanlfj: 00:30:172 (5) - the end
00:28 jonathanlfj: 00:53:797 (3,4,5,6,1) - what did you do to this poor star that looks like it starved for 3 days
00:29 Giralda: idk
00:30 jonathanlfj: 01:34:297 (1) - WOW YOU DIDNT FORGET IM PROUD
00:30 Giralda: i can't see this stuff
00:30 Giralda: !!
00:30 jonathanlfj: 01:35:984 (1) - and did you unstack this intentionally...
00:30 Giralda: maybe..
00:31 jonathanlfj: gg
00:31 Giralda: gg
00:32 jonathanlfj: i just realized you have no tags
00:32 jonathanlfj: was this a single
00:32 Giralda: yeah
00:32 jonathanlfj: 01:53:797 (3) - asdf
00:32 Giralda: hahaha
00:33 jonathanlfj: 02:12:547 (5) - clap?
00:33 Giralda: nono
00:34 jonathanlfj: or whistle for that "ding" sound i dunno
00:34 Giralda: sure w
00:35 jonathanlfj: 03:25:859 (2,3,4,5) - OCD complex
00:35 Giralda: max level
00:36 jonathanlfj: 03:57:547 (6) - do whistle to this too
00:36 Giralda: I know ways to increase people's mental frustration little by little hehe
00:37 jonathanlfj: well thats all from me
00:37 jonathanlfj: lets see what tari says...
00:37 Giralda: alright cool
00:37 Giralda: i'll update and wait for tari
00:37 jonathanlfj: yeah
00:38 jonathanlfj: i need to redl the map since i have like v1 of the mapset and it was derping AIBAT
00:38 Giralda: LOL
00:38 Giralda: haha my god
00:39 jonathanlfj: everytime i look at nishiro kana
00:39 jonathanlfj: it reminds me of my day 7 hard guest that will never see the light of day again
00:39 Giralda: rip jonathanlfj's Hard
00:42 Giralda: inb4 Tari snakes your rank
00:43 jonathanlfj: nah he let me took over
00:43 Giralda: alright
00:43 Giralda: okay
00:43 Giralda: before
00:43 Giralda: you
00:43 Giralda: rank
00:43 Giralda: let me add tags
00:43 Giralda: because nishino kana announced new album
00:43 Giralda: so it's perfect timing
00:44 jonathanlfj: kk
00:45 Giralda: romanji for artist doesn't need to be in tags right
00:46 Giralda: romaji*
00:46 jonathanlfj: no its part of your artist field
00:46 Giralda: cool
00:46 jonathanlfj: everything that appears in your metadata doesnt need to be in tags
00:47 Giralda: updated
blissfulyoshi
Congratz
captin1
00:06 jonathanlfj: NUKE YOUR FACE
00:06 Giralda: OMG NO SPARE ME
grats!
Natsu

Raose wrote:

Kinshara
Congratulations Giralda~!
Trust
lol grats
Oyatsu
Gratz!
Unsfamiliar
Best.

Congrats ;3
Rakuen
:) Grats :)
Myxo
Beautiful Song <3 Congratz!
Lust
whoa I am late

Congrats!
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