Highly recommending you change anything highlighted in blue.
The break delays on all difficulties end a tick early, should be on the downbeat.
Preview time still unsnapped.
Use something like AR4, HP3 or 4, OD3 or 4. The current settings are too high for the easiest difficulty and don't make for a nice balance in the mapset.
01:00:734 (5) - Rhythm feels incomplete. I would avoid skipping 01:00:922 - and follow the music with a 1/1 rhythm similar to the other kiai sections.
01:53:797 (4) - Spacing can be evened out here.
02:18:172 (4) - I think this is supposed to have a finish, not a clap.
02:54:172 (2) - A normal sample on the tail sounds more fitting to me.
02:54:547 (7) - Here on the tail too.
03:24:172 (2) - Sounds like this should just be a soft-clap, I would remove the normal sample.
03:39:547 (3) - Missed a normal sample on the repeat for consistency.
04:05:047 (2,3) - Listening to what (3) is mapped to this rhythm sounds like filler. Try something this so you can bring out what (4) is mapped to:
Parts like 00:07:297 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:14:797 (3,4) - were a bit strange since you're mapping weak background music over predominant vocals. I would personally keep the rhythm on white ticks for these parts, vocals are generally easier to follow for players of this level of course. [Hard]
00:28:859 (2) - Consider removing the whistle on the head, it accentuates nothing.
00:34:859 (2,3,4,5) - I hope you can consider rearranging this combo to make it flow more nicely, I'm finding I need to make awkward cursor motions just to land these sharp direction changes.
00:41:422 (3) - Should be a clap on the head.
01:16:859 (2) - Clap on head instead of whistle.
02:00:359 (6) - Did you mean to stack this on the tail of 01:59:797 (5) - ? Looks a bit strange.
03:24:172 (7) - I don't know if you want to have a normal sample on the head haha.
00:50:422 (4) - Missed a clap on the head.
01:05:609 (6) - Remove clap.
02:18:172 (9) - On the tail.
02:30:547 (1,1,1) - Cool idea here but unlike 02:29:797 (1,1,1) this part is left quite undermapped as you can hear the drums go, I would consider adding notes between these.
02:45:172 (6,7) - Four consecutive claps, something doesn't sound right here. Remove the clap on the head of (7) and add a normal sample to its tail.
03:24:172 (6) - It's that darn normal sample again.
03:25:297 (1) - Aw man, you should really follow the background music instead of cover it with this slider. I think you could do something to follow the violin action at this part, it would be really cool.
03:50:797 (6,7,8,9) - Hitsounding in this combo sounds messed up and doesn't reflect the music properly. Remove clap on the head of (6), remove the normal sample on the head of (7), replace the clap with a whistle on the head of (8), and remove the claps on the tails of (8) and (9) to fix.
04:07:297 (1) - You may want to reduce the volume of the spin to at least 20% so a loud spin isn't playing over the fade. Apply to other diffs if you do.
Not much to say here. Plays awesome as you already know!
00:12:359 (6,7,8) - I don't think this jump fits this part since it seems the circles have been placed somehow ignored the song, I would like to make the rhythm easier or easier jump. example:
01:44:422 (4,6) - This pattern will be hard to read on HR or DT T_t
01:48:734 (9) - is the drum clap necessary thing? this sounds kinda weird for me
01:59:422 (4) - I prefer straight one like 01:59:047 (3) - ww
02:12:547 (7,8) - this is my personal preference, I would remake a square to jump at 02:12:922 (9) - the jump currently feels kinda strange? for this diff because there are always mini jumps in the diff (NO IDEA WHAT I WANNA SAY) well I meant current pattern doesn't fit there with the slider form imo
03:33:359 (6) - remove clap? feels like out of place to me
Thanks for the mod Delis! Did everything except for the clap at 03:33:359 (6) on the Insane, since that's how the clap patterns work in the song. I know, it's weird how it works but I can't do anything about it T_T
23:39 Giralda: p/3502277 23:52 jonathanlfj: 00:39:734 (9) - did you forget normal sample here 23:52 Giralda: yes 23:55 jonathanlfj: 01:03:172 (6,7,8) - whoa this angle can be better 23:55 jonathanlfj: you know what i mean 23:56 Giralda: fk overlap 23:56 Giralda: wait nvm 23:56 Giralda: not too big of a deal 23:56 jonathanlfj: haha yeah 23:56 jonathanlfj: 01:34:297 (1) - WHERE IS YOUR DRUM CLAP 23:57 Giralda: OH NO 23:58 jonathanlfj: 02:10:297 (1) - i would prefer ctrl+g on this 23:59 Giralda: sure 23:59 jonathanlfj: 02:30:547 (1,1) - did you intentionally miss the claps on this 23:59 jonathanlfj: i would use them with decreasing volume 23:59 Giralda: No this was a fix and I forgot to add them 00:00 jonathanlfj: rip hitsounds 00:00 jonathanlfj: pro tip: run through your diff at 50% music volume and 100% hitsound volume when modding 00:00 jonathanlfj: gotta catch them all 00:01 Giralda: oh yeah 00:01 Giralda: i do like 00:01 Giralda: 100% and 30% sfx 00:01 jonathanlfj: yesterday i ran through my map at 0% volume to find missing claps xD 00:01 Giralda: 00:01 Giralda: LOL 00:01 jonathanlfj: 0% music 00:01 Giralda: woah 00:01 jonathanlfj: it sounded pretty retarded but i found what i needed to find 00:02 Giralda: yeah makes sense 00:02 Giralda: it's been a while since you actually had to go through a map of mines 00:02 jonathanlfj: 02:47:047 (3) - is this normal sample intentional 00:02 jonathanlfj: going through so people dont sht on my face again for ranking a map and not throughly checking it 00:02 Giralda: changed to whistle instead 00:02 jonathanlfj: cool 00:03 Giralda: well I didn't go through it properly myself as you can already tell 00:03 jonathanlfj: rip 00:03 jonathanlfj: 03:23:047 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i had a massive deja vu here 00:04 jonathanlfj: 03:26:234 (5) - normal sample sir 00:04 Giralda: deja vu is from neophobia 00:05 jonathanlfj: i recall something similar in a ranked map i played in the past though 00:05 Giralda: oh idk then 00:05 jonathanlfj: 03:39:734 (11) - which hitsound would you like here 00:05 jonathanlfj: 03:51:547 (8) - end 00:06 Giralda: NORMAL CLAP WHISTLE FINISH! 00:06 Giralda: ~ 00:06 jonathanlfj: NUKE YOUR FACE 00:06 Giralda: OMG NO SPARE ME 00:06 jonathanlfj: ok lets do hard now 00:06 jonathanlfj: did you use the hitsound copier 00:07 Giralda: yes and no 00:07 jonathanlfj: oh no that means i need to catch hitsounds again 00:07 Giralda: probably yeah 00:08 jonathanlfj: well lets start with 00:30:734 (6) - 00:08 jonathanlfj: 00:35:047 (3,4) - what 00:08 Giralda: mhm 00:08 jonathanlfj: delisssssss 00:08 jonathanlfj: why you do this to me 00:09 Giralda: LOOOOL 00:09 jonathanlfj: 00:45:734 (7) - i have a feeling a lot of hard players will click this the other way around 00:09 jonathanlfj: might want ctrl+g 00:10 Giralda: done 00:11 jonathanlfj: 00:57:547 (7) - normal sample on end? 00:11 Giralda: done 00:11 Giralda: ignore the ones you mentioned above on insane, I already did those when we moved to hard 00:12 jonathanlfj: 01:30:547 (7) - 00:12 jonathanlfj: 01:34:297 (1) - NOOOOOOOOOOO 00:12 Giralda: ~ 00:12 Giralda: I DID IT ALREADY DON'T WORRY 00:12 jonathanlfj: i need to do this like nyquill 00:13 jonathanlfj: make you feel sorry for everything you do 00:13 Giralda: I was forseeing that 00:13 Giralda: already 00:13 jonathanlfj: no suprise there 00:13 Giralda: hahaha 00:13 jonathanlfj: dont make me break anything 00:13 jonathanlfj: 01:53:797 (4) - OH NO 00:13 Giralda: LOL 00:14 jonathanlfj: 01:57:922 (7,8) - poor hidden players are gonna misread this so hard 00:14 jonathanlfj: 01:57:922 (7) - i would move this out of stack 00:14 jonathanlfj: 02:13:859 (2) - CLAP GOOD SIR 00:15 jonathanlfj: 02:19:297 (1) - asdf 00:16 Giralda: what if I made 01:57:922 - into a 1/2 slider stacked on the end of the 1/1 before it? 00:16 jonathanlfj: that should be fine 00:16 jonathanlfj: 02:48:359 (6) - clap 00:16 Giralda: done done donee 00:18 jonathanlfj: 03:51:547 (6,7,8,9) - you just successfully trolled all DT players 00:18 jonathanlfj: 03:57:547 (7) - clap 00:19 jonathanlfj: or normal sample 00:19 Giralda: you know how i roll 00:19 jonathanlfj: i do that too gg 00:20 jonathanlfj: 04:07:109 (8) - you had a NC on insane but not on this... 00:20 Giralda: oh oops 00:20 jonathanlfj: your hard had a 1:2 circle to slider ratio 00:20 jonathanlfj: chin will be mad at you 00:20 Giralda: whatever LOL 00:20 jonathanlfj: yolo 00:20 Giralda: i know he will be 00:21 jonathanlfj: i love your normal's star rating 00:22 jonathanlfj: i've been abusing this since day 1 00:22 Giralda: hehehe 00:23 jonathanlfj: oh boy tari is modding this as well 00:23 jonathanlfj: let me discuss this with him 00:23 Giralda: oh no LOL 00:24 jonathanlfj: 00:16:859 (3,4,5) - this positioning bugs my OCD alot 00:25 Giralda: oh 00:25 Giralda: let me fix 00:25 Giralda: for the OCD impaired 00:25 jonathanlfj: please 00:25 Giralda: http://puu.sh/cSHZB/6a955e62f6.jpg better? 00:25 Giralda: owo 00:26 jonathanlfj: i can live with that 00:27 Giralda: :3 00:27 jonathanlfj: tari said he will run through a misc check to ensure there is nothing unrankable 00:27 jonathanlfj: 00:30:172 (5) - the end 00:28 jonathanlfj: 00:53:797 (3,4,5,6,1) - what did you do to this poor star that looks like it starved for 3 days 00:29 Giralda: idk 00:30 jonathanlfj: 01:34:297 (1) - WOW YOU DIDNT FORGET IM PROUD 00:30 Giralda: i can't see this stuff 00:30 Giralda: !! 00:30 jonathanlfj: 01:35:984 (1) - and did you unstack this intentionally... 00:30 Giralda: maybe.. 00:31 jonathanlfj: gg 00:31 Giralda: gg 00:32 jonathanlfj: i just realized you have no tags 00:32 jonathanlfj: was this a single 00:32 Giralda: yeah 00:32 jonathanlfj: 01:53:797 (3) - asdf 00:32 Giralda: hahaha 00:33 jonathanlfj: 02:12:547 (5) - clap? 00:33 Giralda: nono 00:34 jonathanlfj: or whistle for that "ding" sound i dunno 00:34 Giralda: sure w 00:35 jonathanlfj: 03:25:859 (2,3,4,5) - OCD complex 00:35 Giralda: max level 00:36 jonathanlfj: 03:57:547 (6) - do whistle to this too 00:36 Giralda: I know ways to increase people's mental frustration little by little hehe 00:37 jonathanlfj: well thats all from me 00:37 jonathanlfj: lets see what tari says... 00:37 Giralda: alright cool 00:37 Giralda: i'll update and wait for tari 00:37 jonathanlfj: yeah 00:38 jonathanlfj: i need to redl the map since i have like v1 of the mapset and it was derping AIBAT 00:38 Giralda: LOL 00:38 Giralda: haha my god 00:39 jonathanlfj: everytime i look at nishiro kana 00:39 jonathanlfj: it reminds me of my day 7 hard guest that will never see the light of day again 00:39 Giralda: rip jonathanlfj's Hard 00:42 Giralda: inb4 Tari snakes your rank 00:43 jonathanlfj: nah he let me took over 00:43 Giralda: alright 00:43 Giralda: okay 00:43 Giralda: before 00:43 Giralda: you 00:43 Giralda: rank 00:43 Giralda: let me add tags 00:43 Giralda: because nishino kana announced new album 00:43 Giralda: so it's perfect timing 00:44 jonathanlfj: kk 00:45 Giralda: romanji for artist doesn't need to be in tags right 00:46 Giralda: romaji* 00:46 jonathanlfj: no its part of your artist field 00:46 Giralda: cool 00:46 jonathanlfj: everything that appears in your metadata doesnt need to be in tags 00:47 Giralda: updated