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Afilia Saga - S.M.L (TV size ver.)

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Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[General]
  1. I find your set of colours too bright. Can you set some less bright colours as your current ones may hurt players' eyes?
[Easy]
  1. As the BPM is really intense, I'd drop OD to 1. So, beginners could survive it. fixed
  2. The kiai part feels easier than the rhythm in the first part of the diff. It makes the diff sorta unbalanced. Consider making the beginning (untill -00:33:636) easier. Have changed some rhythm for the first part
    Note: having consistent 1/1 rhythm in a 200 BPM Easy is too hard, try to make your rhythm easier.
  3. 00:04:236 (1,2) - 1/2 slliders in a 200 BPM Easy is too much. the diff is hard enough and 1/2s make it too hard, in my opinion. ^
  4. 00:25:236 (5) - haven't you missed a new combo here? I feel like you really need one here to make your comboing more consistent and to follow the song better. fixed
  5. 00:42:336 (2) - the tail of this slider is too close to the previous hitobject and players may mistakenly hit (2)'s tail. Try to move it somewhere else to prevent the misunderstanding. Rough examplechangedNote: 01:17:136 (1,2) - kinda similar thing. Newbies can hit the reverse-arrow by mistake. ^

    Generally, I'd say that your Easy needs more work on the rhythm (mostly the beginning) and the patterns can get neater. Not bad for a beginner-mapper, but you still have a lot to improve!
[Normal]
  1. I'd increase HP by one tick as the diff is supposed to be quite challenging. fixed
  2. 00:04:686 - this is the only SV change in the whole diff. Is it really necessary to have it here? I would rather keep the velocity the same here. I removed the SV change :3
  3. 00:09:186 (2,3) - the BPM is too intense, try to replace these two with an 1/2 slider to make the pattern more playable.
  4. 00:23:136 (3) - try to add a repeat to this slider? The 3/2 gap before the next hitobject is confusing. ok ~Example
  5. 00:42:336 (3) - minor - there is a little overlap with the HP Bar on 4:3 displays. The overlap. It is not a big problem, but you can make it look neater. :( done :3

    Quite a decent diff. Not too much to complain about. :)
[PU's Hard]
  1. 00:18:786 (2,3) - the sudden spacing change here feels rather tricky. I highly suggest you to avoid it.
    Note: 00:25:386 (2,3) - kinda similar thing here. Try to avoid random jumps and make sure that all antijumps and jumps are reasonable and represent the song.
  2. 00:36:336 (1,2) - personally, I find these sliders quite uncomfortable to play. The second-reverse is unexpected and appears quite late, so, these sliders can cnfuse players. :(
  3. 00:39:186 (3,6) - try removing these two circles to stress the vocals on 00:39:336 - and 00:39:936. It will also make the diff a bit easier as it feels too hard for a 200 BPM Hard.
    Note: 00:48:786 (3,6) - same.
  4. 00:42:336 (1,3) - the shape does not represent anything and looks rather tricky. Why don't you just keep these sliders straight? It would make them more readable and
  5. 01:05:436 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the BPM is just too intense, so I'd highly recommend you to avoid any 1/4 patterns in this diff. Moreover, there are two Insane diffs, so 1/4s in Hard seem quite exaggerated and don't fit well.

    The diff looks quite untidy and the rhythm gets a bit too intense. I'd recommend you to make the diff a bit easier and to clean it up a bit.
[Yuzuriha's Insane]
  1. 00:09:636 (3) - the tail of the slider does not fit with the song as there is a beat being ignored at 00:09:786 - try something like this to follow the drums closer.
    Note: I am also quite sure that 00:18:786 (4) - is supposed to be finished at 00:18:936 - since the "echo" sound fades here.
  2. 00:28:236 (1,1,1) - these new cmbos are extra. They do not really fit and give players too much extra HP. I highly uggest you to remove the NCs.
    Note: 00:37:736 (1,1,1) - same.
  3. 00:29:661 (4) - sounds overmapped. Try to remove the circle? It would help you to represent the actual music better and to improve your rhythm.
  4. 00:36:336 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - the music gets faster and faster in this part, and to emphasize it, you could gadually increase the difficulty of the pattern. Basically, this.

    I do not really agree with your jumps, I feel like most of them are quite random and exaggerated. I also think that your rhythm could use more work, there are a few overmapped patterns and some 3/4s sound unnatural.
[Insane]
  1. Discussed it with the mapper in-game and suggestd to work more on the spacing. Nothing else to say for now, as the jumps make the dif look weird while playing.
fixed~

Not bad, but you can make it better. :)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
Forgot to response it
Thanks for mod~~~~ ;D
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
[General]
  1. Title: S・M・L☆ (TV size ver.)
  2. Romanised Title: S.M.L (TV size ver.)

    Here is the reference from official site: http://afiliasaga.jp/page/pageDiscoDetailSml/
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:936 (3) –finish on sliderhead to emphasize the cymbal
  2. 00:19:236 (2,3,4,5) –the stream feels a little overmapped and forced, I recommend you remove 00:19:311 (3) –
  3. 00:25:386 (5) –starting 1/2 slider at red tick is not natual because there is not any beat at 00:25:386 -. Try this: http://puu.sh/cbLjO/cf4a7d140a.jpg
  4. 00:28:986 –how about adding a circle? 这里感觉太空了，增加连续感
  5. 00:38:436 (3) –I recommend you move this to (164, 368). This is a heavy beat, so you can consider using a jump to emphasize it.
  6. 00:38:736 (1) –same as above, add a finish to emphasize the cymbal.
  7. 01:04:986 –how about put a triplet here? Like http://puu.sh/cbLzy/85935b44c5.jpg
  8. 01:25:536 (1,2) –Too many finishes feel too noisy here, try removing finish from (1)’s tail and (2)’s head.
  9. 01:26:736 (1) –switch sampleset into soft on the spinner, normal sounds a noisy.
[Yuzuriha's Insane]
  1. 00:05:136 (1) –missing finish on head
  2. 00:09:561 (2) –try add clap on this note, this triplet requires a snare-drum hitsound which sounds better.
  3. 00:18:261 (6) –same,^
  4. 00:31:386 (6,7) –same too, also this can be consistent with 00:33:111 (3,4,5) –
  5. 00:31:536 (1) –missing finish on head..
  6. 00:36:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –add clap on the streams? It sounds much better imo, if it’s too noisy you can try to reduce the volume. But it can increase the sense of hit.
  7. 00:40:461 (5) –missing clap, due to the snare drum in music
  8. 00:41:286 –tick hitsound wrongly used. There is not any “kick drum” beat in muic while you use it. just remove the tick hitsound, don’t abuse it, it sounds bad.
  9. 00:43:386 (4,5) –add clap. There are “snare-drum beats” in music
  10. 00:45:936 (1) –missing finish again.. better to emphasize the cymbal.
  11. 00:55:536 (1) -^
  12. 00:50:061 –triplet can be set here for the consistent with 00:40:386 (4,5,6) -.
  13. 01:06:936 (6,7) –sliderend should be snapped to 1/3 ticks. http://puu.sh/cbMij/86646f769c.jpg
  14. 01:08:136 (3) - 01:09:336 (3) –01:10:536 (3) - you miss an important hitsounds on their head. Try add finish then shift+W、ctrl+E on their sliderhead
  15. 01:11:436 (5) - 01:11:736 (1,2) ‘s head –need normal sampleset to emphasize the snare drums, just use shift+w and ctrl+e
  16. 01:14:736 (1) –missing finish on head again, I am really too tired to point them out
  17. 01:18:186 (4) –remove the clap, it sounds really odd and bad
  18. 01:19:386 (2) –remove too, don’t abuse hitsounds
[PU's Hard]
  1. 00:01:236 (3) –try to remove the reverse like http://puu.sh/cbMOf/3328a611a6.jpg, which fits music more
  2. 00:09:936 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) –can you use 2,4 white tick clap please? Your histounds sound very very very bad on the part
  3. 00:20:736 (1) –missing clap on reverse arrow
  4. 00:29:136 (1,2,3) –can you please don’t abuse hitsouns? Firstly this note 00:29:286 (2) –need be removed,there is nothing in music, it’s overmapped. Secondly, 00:29:136 (1) –I don’t know why you add clap at here, it doesn’t really fit the song well. just remove them.
  5. 00:31:536 (1,2) –same.
  6. 00:33:936 (1,2,1,3) –remove all the clap on head
  7. about the rest of the diff, please try 2,4 white tick clap hitsound pattern, don’t use any other weird hitsound, I don’t want to point all of them out. If you are not sure, check insane diff for reference.
  8. 01:03:636 (5) –inaccurancy rhythm, try http://puu.sh/cbNbq/5af5f424b1.jpg, to follow the vocal better.
  9. 01:26:286 (1) –missing finish on tail, just like you did at 01:21:486 (5) –
This diff’s hitsounds need more work.

[Normal]
  1. OD+1 to balance the difficulty spread
  2. 00:12:036 (4) –missing clap
  3. 00:45:036 - 00:54:636 - ^
  4. 00:42:336 (3) –remove clap from tail and add it at 00:43:836 (1) –‘s head
  5. 00:51:936 (3,2) -^
  6. 01:26:736 (1) –same as insane
[Easy]
  1. OD+1 to balance difficulty.
  2. 00:08:886 (1) -1/2 slider is too hard for easy diff, try thishttp://puu.sh/cbND0/cb4101fc4c.jpg
  3. 00:21:936 (5,1) –swap nc of them, like 00:11:736 (4,1) –
  4. 00:36:336 (1) –the spinner is too short in easy, try change it too a slider and add a circle at 00:38:136 -http://puu.sh/cbNMX/81fa69be4e.jpg
  5. 01:26:736 (1) –same as insane
先留个星标，目前来看hard的音效有待加强，等所有diff全reply了再喊我来看看是否能继续进行下去。
PuttyoU
172 posts
Joined October 2011
PuttyoU

Fycho wrote:

[General]
  1. Title: S・M・L☆ (TV size ver.)
  2. Romanised Title: S.M.L (TV size ver.)

    Here is the reference from official site: http://afiliasaga.jp/page/pageDiscoDetailSml/
[PU's Hard]
  1. 00:01:236 (3) –try to remove the reverse like http://puu.sh/cbMOf/3328a611a6.jpg, which fits music more
    change it
  2. 00:09:936 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) –can you use 2,4 white tick clap please? Your histounds sound very very very bad on the part
    change your suggestion
  3. 00:20:736 (1) –missing clap on reverse arrow
    remove clap
  4. 00:29:136 (1,2,3) –can you please don’t abuse hitsouns? Firstly this note 00:29:286 (2) –need be removed,there is nothing in music, it’s overmapped. Secondly, 00:29:136 (1) –I don’t know why you add clap at here, it doesn’t really fit the song well. just remove them.
    all change
  5. 00:31:536 (1,2) –same.
    ^
  6. 00:33:936 (1,2,1,3) –remove all the clap on head
    all remove
  7. about the rest of the diff, please try 2,4 white tick clap hitsound pattern, don’t use any other weird hitsound, I don’t want to point all of them out. If you are not sure, check insane diff for reference.
    OK,try it.
  8. 01:03:636 (5) –inaccurancy rhythm, try http://puu.sh/cbNbq/5af5f424b1.jpg, to follow the vocal better.
    change your suggestion
  9. 01:26:286 (1) –missing finish on tail, just like you did at 01:21:486 (5) –
    add
This diff’s hitsounds need more work.

先留个星标，目前来看hard的音效有待加强，等所有diff全reply了再喊我来看看是否能继续进行下去。
Thank you for modding!
I work to hitsounds.

Chaoslitz : please change normal-hitwhistle7.wav and diff.
http://puu.sh/cbUiC/fcac40c540.zip
-Yuzuriha
574 posts
Joined March 2012
-Yuzuriha

Fycho wrote:

[General]
  1. Title: S・M・L☆ (TV size ver.)
  2. Romanised Title: S.M.L (TV size ver.)

    Here is the reference from official site: http://afiliasaga.jp/page/pageDiscoDetailSml/
[Yuzuriha's Insane]
  1. 00:05:136 (1) –missing finish on head OK
  2. 00:09:561 (2) –try add clap on this note, this triplet requires a snare-drum hitsound which sounds better.
  3. 00:18:261 (6) –same,^
  4. 00:31:386 (6,7) –same too, also this can be consistent with 00:33:111 (3,4,5) – OK
  5. 00:31:536 (1) –missing finish on head.. OK
  6. 00:36:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –add clap on the streams? It sounds much better imo, if it’s too noisy you can try to reduce the volume. But it can increase the sense of hit. OK
  7. 00:40:461 (5) –missing clap, due to the snare drum in music OK
  8. 00:41:286 –tick hitsound wrongly used. There is not any “kick drum” beat in muic while you use it. just remove the tick hitsound, don’t abuse it, it sounds bad. OK
  9. 00:43:386 (4,5) –add clap. There are “snare-drum beats” in music
  10. 00:45:936 (1) –missing finish again.. better to emphasize the cymbal. OK
  11. 00:55:536 (1) -^
  12. 00:50:061 –triplet can be set here for the consistent with 00:40:386 (4,5,6) -. OK
  13. 01:06:936 (6,7) –sliderend should be snapped to 1/3 ticks. http://puu.sh/cbMij/86646f769c.jpg OK
  14. 01:08:136 (3) - 01:09:336 (3) –01:10:536 (3) - you miss an important hitsounds on their head. Try add finish then shift+W、ctrl+E on their sliderhead OK
  15. 01:11:436 (5) - 01:11:736 (1,2) ‘s head –need normal sampleset to emphasize the snare drums, just use shift+w and ctrl+e
  16. 01:14:736 (1) –missing finish on head again, I am really too tired to point them out OK
  17. 01:18:186 (4) –remove the clap, it sounds really odd and bad OK
  18. 01:19:386 (2) –remove too, don’t abuse hitsounds
OK

先留个星标，目前来看hard的音效有待加强，等所有diff全reply了再喊我来看看是否能继续进行下去。
mod thanks! :)
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Fycho wrote:

[General]
  1. Title: S・M・L☆ (TV size ver.) fixed~
  2. Romanised Title: S.M.L (TV size ver.) fixed~


    Here is the reference from official site: http://afiliasaga.jp/page/pageDiscoDetailSml/
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:936 (3) –finish on sliderhead to emphasize the cymbal added
  2. 00:19:236 (2,3,4,5) –the stream feels a little overmapped and forced, I recommend you remove 00:19:311 (3) –
  3. 00:25:386 (5) –starting 1/2 slider at red tick is not natual because there is not any beat at 00:25:386 -. Try this: http://puu.sh/cbLjO/cf4a7d140a.jpg I used a slider to replace http://puu.sh/cd4uK/b44e539763.jpg
  4. 00:28:986 –how about adding a circle? 这里感觉太空了，增加连续感 added~
  5. 00:38:436 (3) –I recommend you move this to (164, 368). This is a heavy beat, so you can consider using a jump to emphasize it.
  6. 00:38:736 (1) –same as above, add a finish to emphasize the cymbal. 164,368 seems a bit outside from the screen, I placed here instead http://puu.sh/cd4xm/88ada1e983.jpg
  7. 01:04:986 –how about put a triplet here? Like http://puu.sh/cbLzy/85935b44c5.jpg added
  8. 01:25:536 (1,2) –Too many finishes feel too noisy here, try removing finish from (1)’s tail and (2)’s head. fixed
  9. 01:26:736 (1) –switch sampleset into soft on the spinner, normal sounds a noisy. fixed
[Yuzuriha's Insane]
  1. 00:05:136 (1) –missing finish on head
  2. 00:09:561 (2) –try add clap on this note, this triplet requires a snare-drum hitsound which sounds better.
  3. 00:18:261 (6) –same,^
  4. 00:31:386 (6,7) –same too, also this can be consistent with 00:33:111 (3,4,5) –
  5. 00:31:536 (1) –missing finish on head..
  6. 00:36:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –add clap on the streams? It sounds much better imo, if it’s too noisy you can try to reduce the volume. But it can increase the sense of hit.
  7. 00:40:461 (5) –missing clap, due to the snare drum in music
  8. 00:41:286 –tick hitsound wrongly used. There is not any “kick drum” beat in muic while you use it. just remove the tick hitsound, don’t abuse it, it sounds bad.
  9. 00:43:386 (4,5) –add clap. There are “snare-drum beats” in music
  10. 00:45:936 (1) –missing finish again.. better to emphasize the cymbal.
  11. 00:55:536 (1) -^
  12. 00:50:061 –triplet can be set here for the consistent with 00:40:386 (4,5,6) -.
  13. 01:06:936 (6,7) –sliderend should be snapped to 1/3 ticks. http://puu.sh/cbMij/86646f769c.jpg
  14. 01:08:136 (3) - 01:09:336 (3) –01:10:536 (3) - you miss an important hitsounds on their head. Try add finish then shift+W、ctrl+E on their sliderhead
  15. 01:11:436 (5) - 01:11:736 (1,2) ‘s head –need normal sampleset to emphasize the snare drums, just use shift+w and ctrl+e
  16. 01:14:736 (1) –missing finish on head again, I am really too tired to point them out
  17. 01:18:186 (4) –remove the clap, it sounds really odd and bad
  18. 01:19:386 (2) –remove too, don’t abuse hitsounds
[PU's Hard]
  1. 00:01:236 (3) –try to remove the reverse like http://puu.sh/cbMOf/3328a611a6.jpg, which fits music more
  2. 00:09:936 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) –can you use 2,4 white tick clap please? Your histounds sound very very very bad on the part
  3. 00:20:736 (1) –missing clap on reverse arrow
  4. 00:29:136 (1,2,3) –can you please don’t abuse hitsouns? Firstly this note 00:29:286 (2) –need be removed,there is nothing in music, it’s overmapped. Secondly, 00:29:136 (1) –I don’t know why you add clap at here, it doesn’t really fit the song well. just remove them.
  5. 00:31:536 (1,2) –same.
  6. 00:33:936 (1,2,1,3) –remove all the clap on head
  7. about the rest of the diff, please try 2,4 white tick clap hitsound pattern, don’t use any other weird hitsound, I don’t want to point all of them out. If you are not sure, check insane diff for reference.
  8. 01:03:636 (5) –inaccurancy rhythm, try http://puu.sh/cbNbq/5af5f424b1.jpg, to follow the vocal better.
  9. 01:26:286 (1) –missing finish on tail, just like you did at 01:21:486 (5) –
This diff’s hitsounds need more work.

[Normal]
  1. OD+1 to balance the difficulty spread fixed
  2. 00:12:036 (4) –missing clap fixed
  3. 00:45:036 - 00:54:636 - ^ fixed
  4. 00:42:336 (3) –remove clap from tail and add it at 00:43:836 (1) –‘s head fixed
  5. 00:51:936 (3,2) -^ fixed
  6. 01:26:736 (1) –same as insane fixed
[Easy]
  1. OD+1 to balance difficulty. fixed
  2. 00:08:886 (1) -1/2 slider is too hard for easy diff, try thishttp://puu.sh/cbND0/cb4101fc4c.jpg I changed like this http://puu.sh/cd4Co/b200c8b55c.jpg
  3. 00:21:936 (5,1) –swap nc of them, like 00:11:736 (4,1) –
  4. 00:36:336 (1) –the spinner is too short in easy, try change it too a slider and add a circle at 00:38:136 -http://puu.sh/cbNMX/81fa69be4e.jpg fixed
  5. 01:26:736 (1) –same as insane fixed
先留个星标，目前来看hard的音效有待加强，等所有diff全reply了再喊我来看看是否能继续进行下去。
Thanks for mod :3
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
Recheck nokd
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:936 (3) –按照统一性，这个应该要加NC，因为是在大白线上
  2. 00:20:736 (5) -^
  3. 00:21:786 (1,2) –这俩交换NC，同样是NC加在大白线上
  4. 00:24:186 (1,2) -^
  5. 00:36:936 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) –这个串子摆的有点难看，弧度不要太大，试试这样, http://puu.sh/ce2XF/38b84865fe.jpg
    code
    385,61,36936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    411,87,37011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    427,120,37086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    433,156,37161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    435,193,37236,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    433,230,37311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    425,266,37386,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    408,299,37461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    380,318,37536,6,0,P|330:340|279:327,1,89.999997253418,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Yuzuriha's Insane]
  1. 00:05:136 (1) –add finish, why did you write “ok” while didn't fix it
  2. 00:31:386 (6,7) –add clap
  3. 00:36:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –volume from 30% to 50% to 70% is too sharp, try 30% to 40 % to 50%
  4. 00:40:461 (5,6) –add clap
  5. 00:50:061 (5,6) -^
  6. 01:11:436 (5) –why not set sampleset to normal and addition to soft? It’s snare drum same as 01:11:736 –
[PU's Hard]
  1. 00:43:536 (5,1) –swap nc of them, 00:43:536 (5) –is at big white tick
  2. 00:53:136 (7,1) -^
  3. 01:07:236 (4) –missing clap on sliderhead
  4. 01:26:736 (1) –set sampleset to soft on the spinner like other diffs.
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:636 (3,1) –这些normal whistle不是很合曲，全都去掉，像insane那样？
  2. 00:08:286 (3) –^
  3. 01:24:936 (3,4,5) –这里的flow有点尖锐，不是很好，试试这种，http://puu.sh/ce41i/f2a0e88f9b.jpg
Call me back when all diffs are replied.
PuttyoU
172 posts
Joined October 2011
PuttyoU

Fycho wrote:

Recheck nokd

[PU's Hard]
  1. 00:43:536 (5,1) –swap nc of them, 00:43:536 (5) –is at big white tick
    OK~ fix
  2. 00:53:136 (7,1) -^
    ^
  3. 01:07:236 (4) –missing clap on sliderhead
    add Clap
  4. 01:26:736 (1) –set sampleset to soft on the spinner like other diffs.
    change soft sampleset!
Call me back when all diffs are replied.
Thank you for modding :)


PU's Hard
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: SML (TV size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38661
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:S.M.L (TV size ver.)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV size ver.)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:Chaoslitz
Version:PU's Hard
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags:Noucome Opening PuttyoU -Yuzuriha-inori- Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru My Mental Choices are Completely Interfering with my School Romantic Comedy
BeatmapID:500007
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-Yuzuriha
574 posts
Joined March 2012
-Yuzuriha
[Yuzuriha's Insane]
  1. 00:05:136 (1) –add finish, why did you write “ok” while didn't fix it
  2. 00:31:386 (6,7) –add clap
  3. 00:36:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –volume from 30% to 50% to 70% is too sharp, try 30% to 40 % to 50%
  4. 00:40:461 (5,6) –add clap
  5. 00:50:061 (5,6) -^
  6. 01:11:436 (5) –why not set sampleset to normal and addition to soft? It’s snare drum same as 01:11:736 –
    All ok
again thanks! :)
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Fycho wrote:

Recheck nokd
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:936 (3) –按照统一性，这个应该要加NC，因为是在大白线上 加了
  2. 00:20:736 (5) -^ 加了
  3. 00:21:786 (1,2) –这俩交换NC，同样是NC加在大白线上 換了
  4. 00:24:186 (1,2) -^ 也換了
  5. 00:36:936 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) –这个串子摆的有点难看，弧度不要太大，试试这样, http://puu.sh/ce2XF/38b84865fe.jpg 改了~
    code
    385,61,36936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    411,87,37011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    427,120,37086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    433,156,37161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    435,193,37236,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    433,230,37311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    425,266,37386,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    408,299,37461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    380,318,37536,6,0,P|330:340|279:327,1,89.999997253418,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Yuzuriha's Insane]
  1. 00:05:136 (1) –add finish, why did you write “ok” while didn't fix it
  2. 00:31:386 (6,7) –add clap
  3. 00:36:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –volume from 30% to 50% to 70% is too sharp, try 30% to 40 % to 50%
  4. 00:40:461 (5,6) –add clap
  5. 00:50:061 (5,6) -^
  6. 01:11:436 (5) –why not set sampleset to normal and addition to soft? It’s snare drum same as 01:11:736 –
[PU's Hard]
  1. 00:43:536 (5,1) –swap nc of them, 00:43:536 (5) –is at big white tick
  2. 00:53:136 (7,1) -^
  3. 01:07:236 (4) –missing clap on sliderhead
  4. 01:26:736 (1) –set sampleset to soft on the spinner like other diffs.
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:636 (3,1) –这些normal whistle不是很合曲，全都去掉，像insane那样？去掉了
  2. 00:08:286 (3) –^ 去掉了
  3. 01:24:936 (3,4,5) –这里的flow有点尖锐，不是很好，试试这种，http://puu.sh/ce41i/f2a0e88f9b.jpg
我改成這樣:3 http://puu.sh/cevES/590ff915d7.jpg
Call me back when all diffs are replied.
Thanks again~
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
Good luck on your first map, bubbled.

title source: http://afiliasaga.jp/page/pageDiscoDetailSml/
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Fycho wrote:

Good luck on your first map, bubbled.

title source: http://afiliasaga.jp/page/pageDiscoDetailSml/
Thanks :3
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
[General]
  1. Please set Video offset to -750 for each as it's obviously off-sync now. 其實你宜家個Video cut得太快 首歌未完Video已經完左 最好就cut過個
  2. Audio-leadin 1500 ms please.
  3. skin果d @2x有咩用 仲有唔記得加行sliderborder http://puu.sh/ckvZw.png 講真呢個skin睇到我紅眼症 隻豬可唔可以透明d
  4. Normal-hitwhistle7.wav 短過100ms unrankable 搵人搞搞佢 http://puu.sh/ckw52.png
[Insane]
  1. 01:16:536 - del左呢條多餘綠線
  2. 00:15:186 (2) - Why drum whistle? Intentional? http://puu.sh/cky95.png
  3. 00:19:086 (5) - 唔加速?
  4. 00:24:336 - Finish 背景有cymbal 00:31:536 - Same
  5. 01:02:286 (5,6) - 前圈後滑條舒服d
  6. 01:23:886 (1,2) - Swap NC like 01:21:486 (5)
[Yuzuriha]
  1. 00:42:336 (1,2) - These drum hitsounds don't really fit without basic support of the instruments in the background like 00:38:436 - Also, if u are planing to emphasize the high pitch vocal, drum samples aren't suitable as they are of low pitch. Consider replacing them by soft samples. Same goes for 00:51:936 and 00:52:236.
[Hard]
  1. 00:39:336 (3) - This spacing is really misleading, the placement implies no rhythm gap instead of a 1/1 one as they are too close. Due to the annoying skin and high AR, it distracts players a lot, so please try to boost it using the distance snap. Something like 00:39:636 (4,1) would be great enough. Same applies on 00:48:636 (2,3) and 00:49:236 (4,1).
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:436 - 漏clap? 00:24:036 好似都漏
  2. 00:21:336 (4,5) - Clap放錯位?
  3. 00:19:536 - Finish. 00:24:336 - 00:31:536 - Same
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:436 - 漏clap?
  2. 00:20:436 (2,3,4) - 點解無clap
  3. 00:22:536 - NM有clap EZ無clap?
  4. 00:27:936 - Finish 後面個折返slider都要finish 好似NM咁
  5. 00:33:936 (1,2,3,4) - Finish
總體黎講 EZ同NM既hitsounds好混亂 我唔清楚你究竟根據d咩去加 最基本既kiai都漏finish 亂加clap 有時間最好自己review/重做一次 benchmark我覺得用你自己既Insane就可以 比起我逐個打出黎快好多
PuttyoU
172 posts
Joined October 2011
PuttyoU

IamKwaN wrote:

[General]
  1. Please set Video offset to -750 for each as it's obviously off-sync now. 其實你宜家個Video cut得太快 首歌未完Video已經完左 最好就cut過個
  2. Audio-leadin 1500 ms please.
  3. skin果d @2x有咩用 仲有唔記得加行sliderborder http://puu.sh/ckvZw.png 講真呢個skin睇到我紅眼症 隻豬可唔可以透明d
  4. Normal-hitwhistle7.wav 短過100ms unrankable 搵人搞搞佢 http://puu.sh/ckw52.png
    I fix normal-hitwhistle7.wav 089ms→109ms.
    Please use it~ http://puu.sh/ckzKC/e86bc8cabb.wav
[Hard]
  1. 00:39:336 (3) - This spacing is really misleading, the placement implies no rhythm gap instead of a 1/1 one as they are too close. Due to the annoying skin and high AR, it distracts players a lot, so please try to boost it using the distance snap. Something like 00:39:636 (4,1) would be great enough. Same applies on 00:48:636 (2,3) and 00:49:236 (4,1).
    OK, fix
總體黎講 EZ同NM既hitsounds好混亂 我唔清楚你究竟根據d咩去加 最基本既kiai都漏finish 亂加clap 有時間最好自己review/重做一次 benchmark我覺得用你自己既Insane就可以 比起我逐個打出黎快好多
Thank you for modding!


PU's Hard
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TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV size ver.)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:Chaoslitz
Version:PU's Hard
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags:Noucome Opening PuttyoU -Yuzuriha-inori- Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru My Mental Choices are Completely Interfering with my School Romantic Comedy
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Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
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Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

IamKwaN wrote:

[General]
  1. Please set Video offset to -750 for each as it's obviously off-sync now. 其實你宜家個Video cut得太快 首歌未完Video已經完左 最好就cut過個 offset set to -750
  2. Audio-leadin 1500 ms please. fixed
  3. skin果d @2x有咩用 仲有唔記得加行sliderborder http://puu.sh/ckvZw.png 講真呢個skin睇到我紅眼症 隻豬可唔可以透明d fixed
  4. Normal-hitwhistle7.wav 短過100ms unrankable 搵人搞搞佢 http://puu.sh/ckw52.png PuttyoU改了:3
[Insane]
  1. 01:16:536 - del左呢條多餘綠線 removed
  2. 00:15:186 (2) - Why drum whistle? Intentional? http://puu.sh/cky95.png my mistake ;w;
  3. 00:19:086 (5) - 唔加速? 改加1.5x了
  4. 00:24:336 - Finish 背景有cymbal 00:31:536 - Same fixed
  5. 01:02:286 (5,6) - 前圈後滑條舒服d 改成這樣:3 http://puu.sh/ckOxI/6e7044dcfe.jpg
  6. 01:23:886 (1,2) - Swap NC like 01:21:486 (5) fixed
[Yuzuriha]
  1. 00:42:336 (1,2) - These drum hitsounds don't really fit without basic support of the instruments in the background like 00:38:436 - Also, if u are planing to emphasize the high pitch vocal, drum samples aren't suitable as they are of low pitch. Consider replacing them by soft samples. Same goes for 00:51:936 and 00:52:236.
[Hard]
  1. 00:39:336 (3) - This spacing is really misleading, the placement implies no rhythm gap instead of a 1/1 one as they are too close. Due to the annoying skin and high AR, it distracts players a lot, so please try to boost it using the distance snap. Something like 00:39:636 (4,1) would be great enough. Same applies on 00:48:636 (2,3) and 00:49:236 (4,1).
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:436 - 漏clap? 00:24:036 好似都漏
  2. 00:21:336 (4,5) - Clap放錯位?
  3. 00:19:536 - Finish. 00:24:336 - 00:31:536 - Same
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:436 - 漏clap?
  2. 00:20:436 (2,3,4) - 點解無clap
  3. 00:22:536 - NM有clap EZ無clap?
  4. 00:27:936 - Finish 後面個折返slider都要finish 好似NM咁
  5. 00:33:936 (1,2,3,4) - Finish
Normal同Easy都照Insane大致加番finish & clap

總體黎講 EZ同NM既hitsounds好混亂 我唔清楚你究竟根據d咩去加 最基本既kiai都漏finish 亂加clap 有時間最好自己review/重做一次 benchmark我覺得用你自己既Insane就可以 比起我逐個打出黎快好多
Thanks for mod ;3
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Gz, litz! :3/

/me sad
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IamKwaN wrote:

Sexy・Magical・Lovely☆ (TV size ver.)
Thanks >w<

Gray Veyron wrote:

Gz, litz! :3/

/me sad
thanks veyron ;3
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sml again~
gratz
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gratz！
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Grats!
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Chaoslitz Good job!
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congrats !! :)
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Well done!
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~Thanks to all~
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damn, 2 months that was fast

grats!
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congratz!! :)
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I noticed that the video offest is late D:
Anyways, congrats for rank :)
IamKwaN
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In fact the video is being cut way too early D:
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Congratz~~! (> w <)
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