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u's - Mermaid festa vol.1

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年11月11日星期二 at 12:29:45

Artist: u's
Title: Mermaid festa vol.1
Source: Love Live! School idol project
Tags: LL lovelive mf1 cool muse
BPM: 127
Filesize: 6371kb
Play Time: 03:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Expert (4.36 stars, 723 notes)
  2. Hard (3.01 stars, 554 notes)
  3. Normal (1.75 stars, 299 notes)
Download: u's - Mermaid festa vol.1
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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http://puu.sh/cSpWb/dd3f76871e.jpg

要找更多Love Live!的图的可以看我主页, 虽然都是unrank, 但是已经做了十几张啦
Last edited by [CSGA]Ar3sgice , edited 36 times in total.
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
RL_Tibbar
LL大法好
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

OSUtoto wrote:

LL大法好
兔兔好
Kvantuma Rozo
70 posts
Joined April 2014
Kvantuma Rozo
房顶失败
Mei_coN
372 posts
Joined March 2009
Mei_coN
best MF1‘s map！！ :) :)
多做点LL图嘛~~ :) :) :)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Mei_coN wrote:

best MF1‘s map！！ :) :)
多做点LL图嘛~~ :) :) :)
啦啦啦啦
ZZHBOY
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2014-09-14 18:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对了 来试试我图
2014-09-14 18:12 ZZHBOY: 好!
2014-09-14 18:13 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/493332 u's - Mermaid festa vol.1]
2014-09-14 18:13 ZZHBOY: 尾杀失败
2014-09-14 18:13 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯
2014-09-14 18:13 ZZHBOY: 下图有一点点慢x.x
2014-09-14 18:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这图不会尾杀的 请放心
2014-09-14 18:14 ZZHBOY: 大概一分钟
2014-09-14 18:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯
2014-09-14 18:15 ZZHBOY: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/493332 u's - Mermaid festa vol.1]
2014-09-14 18:16 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 1111
2014-09-14 18:20 ZZHBOY: 好像有点难读啊
2014-09-14 18:20 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
2014-09-14 18:20 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 都是1/4的跳
2014-09-14 18:20 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 确实不好读
2014-09-14 18:20 ZZHBOY: 对
2014-09-14 18:21 ZZHBOY: 00:25:885 (5) - 像这种
2014-09-14 18:22 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这个 思考
2014-09-14 18:22 ZZHBOY: 至少nc下被
2014-09-14 18:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 也是
2014-09-14 18:24 ZZHBOY: 00:35:925 - 还有为什么要漏这些比较重的音呀
2014-09-14 18:24 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 跟歌词做呀
2014-09-14 18:24 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这种节奏 为啥要塞二分拍去
2014-09-14 18:25 ZZHBOY: 00:35:334 - 感觉那样的话这里也能加个圈/oo.
2014-09-14 18:26 ZZHBOY: 唔
2014-09-14 18:26 ZZHBOY: 00:56:712 - 看排列然后又听到那音效瞬间想到了hw..........
2014-09-14 18:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
2014-09-14 18:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 哪有hw那么丧心病狂嘛
2014-09-14 18:28 ZZHBOY: .-.
2014-09-14 18:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: hw是整首歌都那么做的
2014-09-14 18:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你这么一说我忽然想做多几个难度找hw mod去了
2014-09-14 18:29 ZZHBOY: 01:08:523 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2034156 炫酷吗
2014-09-14 18:29 ZZHBOY: 唔
2014-09-14 18:29 ZZHBOY: 我之前也把我那个坠毁图拿给hw惹
2014-09-14 18:29 ZZHBOY: 然后被批评排列太aji ;w;
2014-09-14 18:30 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 哎这个好
2014-09-14 18:30 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这个梗好*
2014-09-14 18:31 ZZHBOY: haha
2014-09-14 18:31 ZZHBOY: 我可是hw的粉丝
2014-09-14 18:31 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考 hw的粉丝
2014-09-14 18:33 ZZHBOY: 完了 脑洞打开了
2014-09-14 18:33 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 然后成为了ZZHW
2014-09-14 18:33 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊!
2014-09-14 18:33 ZZHBOY: 01:09:704 (2,3,4,5) -
2014-09-14 18:33 ZZHBOY: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2034171
2014-09-14 18:34 ZZHBOY: ._.-._.-.
2014-09-14 18:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这太难了吧！
2014-09-14 18:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我又不是hw啊！
2014-09-14 18:34 ZZHBOY: x.x
2014-09-14 18:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我弄成短滑条的吧
2014-09-14 18:34 ZZHBOY: ar3sgings
2014-09-14 18:35 ZZHBOY: 不对
2014-09-14 18:35 ZZHBOY: 我真是zz
2014-09-14 18:35 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: zz
2014-09-14 18:36 ZZHBOY: 01:17:145 (4,5) - 对了这里 前面的都放得很开这里割了半拍却放得则呢君
2014-09-14 18:36 ZZHBOY: 这么近*
2014-09-14 18:36 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
2014-09-14 18:36 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我喜欢这个把滑条拉回去的梗啊
2014-09-14 18:36 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 111111
2014-09-14 18:37 ZZHBOY: 滑条拉回去?o.o
2014-09-14 18:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嘛
2014-09-14 18:38 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 就是喜欢这种梗啦
2014-09-14 18:38 ZZHBOY: haowww
2014-09-14 18:38 ZZHBOY: 01:20:452 - 这里没跟歌词呀
2014-09-14 18:38 ZZHBOY: 01:18:562 (5) - 这里却跟惹x.x
2014-09-14 18:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你书的对
2014-09-14 18:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我改一下
2014-09-14 18:40 ZZHBOY: 01:27:657 - 则呢偷懒!
2014-09-14 18:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 哈哈
2014-09-14 18:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 不过还是放着break吧(
2014-09-14 18:41 ZZHBOY: hao
2014-09-14 18:44 ZZHBOY: 02:09:350 (4) - 你试试反向下这个 有种飞的感觉.-.
2014-09-14 18:45 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好
2014-09-14 18:46 ZZHBOY: 02:27:539 (4,5) - 这个也和前面一样 妮可嗯02:26:948 (2,3) - 这两个相差1/4都那么远 这两个都相差1/2惹
2014-09-14 18:46 ZZHBOY: 你看*
2014-09-14 18:46 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我再拉远点233
2014-09-14 18:46 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 妮可嗯
2014-09-14 18:46 ZZHBOY: dabao
2014-09-14 18:47 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这个..我加个nc算了
2014-09-14 18:47 ZZHBOY: 之前有人给我这么建议
2014-09-14 18:47 ZZHBOY: 这种要么放的很远要么就antijump .-.
2014-09-14 18:47 ZZHBOY: 我觉得还挺有道理
2014-09-14 18:47 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯
2014-09-14 18:49 ZZHBOY: 02:43:720 (4,5,1) - 你试试让这个往上面凸起 感觉这一块的flow会好一点?
2014-09-14 18:50 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这个啊
2014-09-14 18:50 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: blanket后面5的吧 不能凸
2014-09-14 18:50 ZZHBOY: 唔
2014-09-14 18:50 ZZHBOY: 也对
2014-09-14 18:51 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我去 停电丽
2014-09-14 18:51 ZZHBOY: 02:50:866 (1,2) - 这种既然要放八分线上为啥不用1/8滑条代替啊 打起来也好一点
2014-09-14 18:51 ZZHBOY: 唔
2014-09-14 18:51 ZZHBOY: ...........
2014-09-14 18:52 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: ........
2014-09-14 18:52 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 为啥在八分线上
2014-09-14 18:52 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: ...
2014-09-14 18:52 ZZHBOY: 因为你放在八分线上的啊o.o
2014-09-14 18:52 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 还真的在八分线上
2014-09-14 18:52 ZZHBOY: 嘻嘻
2014-09-14 18:52 ZZHBOY: zzzzzz
2014-09-14 18:53 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: zzzzzzz
2014-09-14 18:53 ZZHBOY: 03:07:578 (2) - 这个也建议向左凸起不然一直flow是顺时针在旋感觉有点憋屈x.x
2014-09-14 18:54 ZZHBOY: (?
2014-09-14 18:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: o.o
2014-09-14 18:55 ZZHBOY: 03:11:830 (4,3) - 感觉这两个好重的音没表现出来啊.-.
2014-09-14 18:55 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我觉得还是blanket比较好吧 flow无所谓..
2014-09-14 18:56 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
2014-09-14 18:57 ZZHBOY: 03:11:594 (3,4,5,3) - 你看这三个一组类似的slider 但是03:11:830 (4) - 明显音和其他的不一样
2014-09-14 18:58 ZZHBOY: 唔 大概就这些 要po,./啊
2014-09-14 18:58 ZZHBOY: 吗
2014-09-14 18:58 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯
2014-09-14 18:58 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice

ZZHBOY wrote:

irc
请看楼上
thanks 11111

我去多做几个难度去
EndlessShadow
EndlessShadow
From Endless modding queue

Red = Big Problem?

00:51:505 - Add Whistle
00:51:978 - Add Whistle
00:53:395 - Reverse Slider
00:53:631 - Add Whistle
00:54:340 - Reverse Slider
00:54:576 - Add Whistle
01:18:907 - Slider end here.
01:20:796 - Slider end here.
02:36:151 - Add spiner.
02:37:096 - End here.
03:27:647 - Add spiner
03:29:773 - End Spiner.

~ 已完成 Mod ~

By EndlessShadow
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
缪斯万岁！

我叒唧唧摸不出啥东西（完全不会打这类图），凑活着看吧
推荐加点ar
aji
01:06:623 (1) - 这个滑条好像跟错重音了
01:07:332 (3) - ↑
01:18:316 (4) - 空一个太不人性了，十分难读
03:08:513 (1) - 难读，后面那个滑条换个位置吧
03:19:261 (4) - 偶数连还空一个，太难了T.T
03:26:820 (4) - 容易读成往下的._.
02:43:946 (1) - 这几个单点好变态owo
02:46:308 (7) - 滑条跟这个音舒服一点
02:46:426 (8) - ↑
02:46:781 (1) - ↑
02:47:135 (2) - ↑（都在滑条尾我是觉得不太好）
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
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Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Kagamine Ren wrote:

缪斯万岁！

我叒唧唧摸不出啥东西（完全不会打这类图），凑活着看吧
推荐加点ar 别啊！那样我就打不了啦！
aji
01:06:623 (1) - 这个滑条好像跟错重音了 嗯, 我也这么觉得, 改了改
01:07:332 (3) - ↑ 233
01:18:316 (4) - 空一个太不人性了，十分难读 不改！！111
03:08:513 (1) - 难读，后面那个滑条换个位置吧
03:19:261 (4) - 偶数连还空一个，太难了T.T 我就喜欢四连叠一个单点233
03:26:820 (4) - 容易读成往下的._. 往外面又移了一点点
02:43:946 (1) - 这几个单点好变态owo 三分拍嘛ww 好像只能这么放
02:46:308 (7) - 滑条跟这个音舒服一点
02:46:426 (8) - ↑
02:46:781 (1) - ↑
02:47:135 (2) - ↑（都在滑条尾我是觉得不太好） 0.0不是二连音吗, 你说的是哪个
谢mod233

缪斯万岁！
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[General]
“Kiai时间短于15秒。”(复读10次中)
加个空的sliderslide.wav吧？话说soft的底音用在这曲轻了点。
另外开头那一小段用85%音量是不是大声了点?
自己编曲+唱把时间拖到5分钟就可以app了耶

[Expert]
  1. 00:08:277 (1,2) - 大间距然后瞬间减速？...有点违和，虽然玩起也不难。
  2. 00:36:623 - 漏音感觉莫名(
  3. 00:58:119 (3) - Nc?
  4. 01:08:513 (1) - 漏Finish啦
  5. 02:11:820 (3) - Nc?
  6. 02:43:946 (1,2,3,4) - 迷惑性有点大...但不改也没什么所谓
  7. 02:59:064 (3) - Nc?
  8. 03:23:041 (3) - 这个滑条看起来好奇怪呀...
  9. 03:50:560 (1) - 有点莫名，我觉得不加然后让03:50:875 (1) - 稍微再03:50:560 (1) - 下面偏移一点也好
所以是不扯淡就挑不出东西的情况233

[Hard]
  1. 00:36:387 (2) - 嗯，00:36:623 - 漏音
  2. 01:08:513 (2) - 漏Finish,为啥都漏这个地方...
  3. 01:22:096 (1) - 嗯我觉得这个sv用0.5x变速特别慢...

[Normal]
  1. 00:58:119 (4) - 头加whistle
  2. 01:05:678 (1) - 尾巴补finish
  3. 01:08:513 (1) - 头补finish，尾巴加whistle
  4. 01:10:403 (1) - finish
  5. 01:11:820 (3) - 尾巴whistle
  6. 02:18:434 (1) - whistle
  7. 02:20:324 (1) - finish
  8. 02:22:214 (1) - finish
  9. 02:27:883 (1) - finish
  10. 03:02:844 (2) - 连着用clap还不如换成whistle
Goodluck?
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
as ur req

Expert

  2. 00:09:694 (1,3) - swap nc setting to emphasis the beat at 00:09:930 (3) - . it'll also help players catch the rhythm and read the sudden jumping pattern easier
  3. 00:22:096 (4) - remove this note or shorter the ds from 00:21:623 (3) - , otherwise this jump is not that necessary for there's no heat beats in the song tracks, that'll play awkward, just try stuff like 00:25:875 (1,2) -
  4. 00:34:340 (1) - here're 1/8 bell beats, change this to 1/8 repeating slider here
  5. 00:43:001 (2,3) - and 00:44:891 (4,5) - r all 1/8 beats, change rhythm style and patterns here. same places in the whole map sets
  6. 02:39:576 (3) - maybe unrankble for cannot read that overlap slider style
  7. 02:44:419 (4) - nc, really
  8. 03:26:820 (4) - pretty sure this is unrankble, spread the slider's head and end without any bit of overlap plz
  9. 03:39:694 (1,2) - maybe overlap a bit more to give a better version here
  10. 03:41:584 (5,1) - swap nc setting for there's sudden rhythm shift behind, ur set plays not that well
  11. 03:48:907 (1,2) - swap nc setting and set nc at 03:49:615 (5) - , and also remove nc at 03:50:875 (1) - . these 1/3 solo melody is really special, so u really need to give a clear nc notice
  12. 03:53:041 (1,1,1) - remove these nc, unnecessary nc spam
  13. baka ar3 sama

Hard

  1. 00:28:710 (1,2) - swap nc setting
  2. 00:34:261 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:36:269 (1,2) - ^, fix others by urself
  4. 02:56:584 (4,6) - maybe avoid this overlap
  5. 03:53:041 (1,1,1) - remove nc

Normal

  1. 00:36:387 (1) - the slider's track's a bit offscreen
  2. 02:56:230 (2) - offscreen
  3. 03:33:552 (3,1) - swap nc setting to follow the vocal track
  4. 03:53:159 (1) - remove nc
ranked!

good luck
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
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Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
original floor content

lkx_Shore wrote:

[General]
“Kiai时间短于15秒。”(复读10次中) kiai fountain
加个空的sliderslide.wav吧？话说soft的底音用在这曲轻了点。 强迫症 至于吗..
另外开头那一小段用85%音量是不是大声了点? 开头那一声no tomenaide..
自己编曲+唱把时间拖到5分钟就可以app了耶 说的对啊

[Expert]
  1. 00:08:277 (1,2) - 大间距然后瞬间减速？...有点违和，虽然玩起也不难。 不难就不改了啊
  2. 00:36:623 - 漏音感觉莫名( 233
  3. 00:58:119 (3) - Nc? 哈皮
  4. 01:08:513 (1) - 漏Finish啦 加了
  5. 02:11:820 (3) - Nc? 哈皮
  6. 02:43:946 (1,2,3,4) - 迷惑性有点大...但不改也没什么所谓 三分拍嘛, 除非放滑条, 都是那样的
  7. 02:59:064 (3) - Nc? 哈皮
  8. 03:23:041 (3) - 这个滑条看起来好奇怪呀... 233
  9. 03:50:560 (1) - 有点莫名，我觉得不加然后让03:50:875 (1) - 稍微再03:50:560 (1) - 下面偏移一点也好 有点莫名 这是啥
所以是不扯淡就挑不出东西的情况233 candel

[Hard]
  1. 00:36:387 (2) - 嗯，00:36:623 - 漏音 啊 不改丽还是
  2. 01:08:513 (2) - 漏Finish,为啥都漏这个地方... 当然是因为我的音效是复制的啊
  3. 01:22:096 (1) - 嗯我觉得这个sv用0.5x变速特别慢... 本来是0.75的 想了想 0.5算了

[Normal]
  1. 00:58:119 (4) - 头加whistle
  2. 01:05:678 (1) - 尾巴补finish
  3. 01:08:513 (1) - 头补finish，尾巴加whistle
  4. 01:10:403 (1) - finish
  5. 01:11:820 (3) - 尾巴whistle
  6. 02:18:434 (1) - whistle
  7. 02:20:324 (1) - finish
  8. 02:22:214 (1) - finish
  9. 02:27:883 (1) - finish
  10. 03:02:844 (2) - 连着用clap还不如换成whistle
Goodluck?
thx_shore

Hollow Wings wrote:

as ur req

Expert

  2. 00:09:694 (1,3) - swap nc setting to emphasis the beat at 00:09:930 (3) - . it'll also help players catch the rhythm and read the sudden jumping pattern easier 不好
  3. 00:22:096 (4) - remove this note or shorter the ds from 00:21:623 (3) - , otherwise this jump is not that necessary for there's no heat beats in the song tracks, that'll play awkward, just try stuff like 00:25:875 (1,2) - 有下滑音的
  4. 00:34:340 (1) - here're 1/8 bell beats, change this to 1/8 repeating slider here you are right
  5. 00:43:001 (2,3) - and 00:44:891 (4,5) - r all 1/8 beats, change rhythm style and patterns here. same places in the whole map sets k
  6. 02:39:576 (3) - maybe unrankble for cannot read that overlap slider style this is not hard to read at all..
  7. 02:44:419 (4) - nc, really added
  8. 03:26:820 (4) - pretty sure this is unrankble, spread the slider's head and end without any bit of overlap plz 233 我放成0.63了
  9. 03:39:694 (1,2) - maybe overlap a bit more to give a better version here this is duo hao wo bu gai
  10. 03:41:584 (5,1) - swap nc setting for there's sudden rhythm shift behind, ur set plays not that well added one more nc
  11. 03:48:907 (1,2) - swap nc setting and set nc at 03:49:615 (5) - , and also remove nc at 03:50:875 (1) - . these 1/3 solo melody is really special, so u really need to give a clear nc notice added some
  12. 03:53:041 (1,1,1) - remove these nc, unnecessary nc spam buhao
  13. baka ar3 sama

Hard

  1. 00:28:710 (1,2) - swap nc setting i think it's better to show the stream beginning, so i put it here
  2. 00:34:261 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:36:269 (1,2) - ^, fix others by urself
  4. 02:56:584 (4,6) - maybe avoid this overlap done
  5. 03:53:041 (1,1,1) - remove nc a, no

Normal

  1. 00:36:387 (1) - the slider's track's a bit offscreen in play mode it comes back
  2. 02:56:230 (2) - offscreen y:500 is offscreen, y:384 is not
  3. 03:33:552 (3,1) - swap nc setting to follow the vocal track ok
  4. 03:53:159 (1) - remove nc a
ranked!

good luck
thanks hw 11111

话说那折线滑条你们都不挑吗 我就先放着了 蜡烛

a
rank了一圈图才明白, 不, 应该是想起来吧, 为啥我一直都不想rank图
因为找人太麻烦啊
普通的找些mod, 然后找bat, 点泡, 再找人rabk, 对于别的mapper可能无所谓
可是每次我这么做, 三次元的那些事情就不可避免的浮上心头
最难受的是心中无法抑止的对于别人点rabk的期待
每天看一看但是也不会rank.. 但是又不能催别人.. 实在是太矛盾
再加上会卡床位...
虽然自己心里也清楚不可能真的卡住的...
其实说起来都怪我的心态不好吧
为什么玩个游戏都这么麻烦
又不是三次元
又不是12年
又不是..我还是不想那些了
这么好的歌
做了图又怎么样
还不如开着音乐玩玩别的 又不是没游戏玩了
真是的
总之
不要再rank别的图就好了吧
...
...
备忘
反正也会忘掉在哪里备过忘的

哈哈哈哈反正放在这里你们就看不到了吧
Last edited by [CSGA]Ar3sgice , edited 3 times in total.
okdesu_old
76 posts
Joined November 2012
okdesu_old
from Endless modding queue!~

suggestion
should fix
must fix

[Expert]
  1. 00:18:670 (6) - make 1/2
  2. 00:22:450 (6) -
  3. 00:25:403 (3) - make 1/2
  4. 00:26:938 (1,2) - replace with slider
  5. 00:33:552 (6) - move 00:33:670 -
  6. 00:44:537 (3) - move 00:44:655 -
  7. 00:49:143 (2) - move 00:49:261 -
  8. 01:01:544 - add note
  9. 01:18:552 (5,6) -
  10. 01:25:875 (1) - try something else
  11. 02:07:096 (1,2,3,4) - unequal spacing
  12. 02:27:411 - add note
  13. 02:39:576 (3) - 8-) please change
  14. 02:56:230 (1,2,3,4) - it's too harddddddddd please bring (2) closer
  15. 02:57:647 (1,2,3,4) - i like it
  16. 03:03:198 (6) - move 03:03:434 -
  17. 03:11:348 (2) - make 1/2
  18. 03:26:820 (4) - ☆
  19. 03:34:379 (1) - please change (；・∀・)
  20. 03:41:289 - add note
  21. 03:50:088 (1,2,3) - keep same rotation as previous
  22. 03:53:041 (1) - bring a little down
  23. 03:53:277 (1) - move a little up
gl (｀・ω・´)ｼｬｷｰﾝ
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
thanks! fixed a little patterns.

as for "please change", please give some good slider pattern(s) in your opinion, i do think 03:34:379 (1) - is not very good style, but have no idea what it should be..

233
GGFFQQ55
121 posts
Joined March 2013
GGFFQQ55
from M4M

general

od-1？

combo color的颜色怎么这么奇怪。。。ll难道不应该是鲜艳的颜色么233

我能说整体滑条拉的不好看么orz

节奏

最开始那段快节奏的音轨真的不跟么。。。感觉只跟vocal不爽啊

00:18:434 (5,6,7,1) - 同上

00:26:348 (2,3,4,1) - 继续同上

01:25:875 (1) - 跟背景的吉他比较好吧，长滑条总觉得怪怪的；后面的break可以试试跟吉他？

03:52:923 (1,1,1,1) - 这里跟vocal有点怪啊

节奏看不出什么毛病。。。

排列

00:04:025 (3) - 红点后加一个白点，做成先直后弯的样子会不会好看一点？

00:10:757 (6,1) - 柑橘太紧了，可以摆开一点的

00:22:804 (1,2,3,4) - flow好直啊，做成稍微弯的试试？

00:25:875 (1) - 不好看啊1111

00:43:001 (2,3,4) - 好难读清orz 虽然打起来好像还好

00:53:395 (1,2,3,4) - 突然变距有点坑，建议间距小一点

01:14:182 (1) - 和四秒那里的滑条一样。。

01:25:875 (1) - 这滑条orz 试试把点竖直方向上调开一点试试？

02:07:096 (1,2,3,4) - 突然摆跳有点坑

02:28:356 (2) - 外婆草，这是什么。。没必要捏这根吧，就普通的弧度就好了啊

02:39:576 (3) - 爷爷再捏一下吧，这实在是没法说好看啊

02:57:647 (1,2,3,4) - 也是突然开始跳，不太舒服

03:02:253 (3) - 试试把滑条尾朝向左侧向上的角度？这样flow不太顺

03:23:041 (3) - 捏捏捏，不捏还是人

03:26:820 (4) - 你看，这个多好;w;

03:34:379 (1) - 捏捏捏

03:43:237 (3) - 滑条尾可以往上钩一些

03:52:923 (1,1,1,1) - 妈呀这尾杀，我终于知道user's word啥意思了

conclusion

节奏挺好，排列大部分都很不错，球捏捏捏捏捏捏捏捏捏捏

1111111111111111111
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

GGFFQQ55 wrote:

from M4M

general

od-1？不好 od8多好玩

combo color的颜色怎么这么奇怪。。。ll难道不应该是鲜艳的颜色么233 这是蓝歌啊 当然要用蓝色的 (LL梗233

我能说整体滑条拉的不好看么orz 233来拉个好看的, 我也觉得好几个不好看啊

节奏

最开始那段快节奏的音轨真的不跟么。。。感觉只跟vocal不爽啊 那个听不清 不好跟 也不好打

00:18:434 (5,6,7,1) - 同上

00:26:348 (2,3,4,1) - 继续同上

01:25:875 (1) - 跟背景的吉他比较好吧，长滑条总觉得怪怪的；后面的break可以试试跟吉他？那后面还怎么break！！！

03:52:923 (1,1,1,1) - 这里跟vocal有点怪啊

节奏看不出什么毛病。。。

排列

00:04:025 (3) - 红点后加一个白点，做成先直后弯的样子会不会好看一点？改了一点

00:10:757 (6,1) - 柑橘太紧了，可以摆开一点的 为什么不把它放在滑条6的怀抱里呢

00:22:804 (1,2,3,4) - flow好直啊，做成稍微弯的试试？往下拉了点

00:25:875 (1) - 不好看啊1111 我觉得这个还好啊22222

00:43:001 (2,3,4) - 好难读清orz 虽然打起来好像还好 主要是觉得不好看, 我还是放中间算了

00:53:395 (1,2,3,4) - 突然变距有点坑，建议间距小一点 不好, 这里正是节奏起来的地方, 怎么能不拉大点

01:14:182 (1) - 和四秒那里的滑条一样。。 这个没法改orz

01:25:875 (1) - 这滑条orz 试试把点竖直方向上调开一点试试？ 0.0

02:07:096 (1,2,3,4) - 突然摆跳有点坑 啦啦啦

02:28:356 (2) - 外婆草，这是什么。。没必要捏这根吧，就普通的弧度就好了啊 我在跟随歌词的意境制造紧张气氛啊, 难道你听不出来

02:39:576 (3) - 爷爷再捏一下吧，这实在是没法说好看啊 啊 那我再捏捏

02:57:647 (1,2,3,4) - 也是突然开始跳，不太舒服 11111

03:02:253 (3) - 试试把滑条尾朝向左侧向上的角度？这样flow不太顺 会吗 滑条不就是调整flow用的 怎么会不顺

03:23:041 (3) - 捏捏捏，不捏还是人 不做人啦

03:26:820 (4) - 你看，这个多好;w; 111111

03:34:379 (1) - 捏捏捏 都捏啦

03:43:237 (3) - 滑条尾可以往上钩一些 不好 钓不到鱼

03:52:923 (1,1,1,1) - 妈呀这尾杀，我终于知道user's word啥意思了 尾杀失败

conclusion

节奏挺好，排列大部分都很不错，球捏捏捏捏捏捏捏捏捏捏

1111111111111111111

感谢摸图1111111
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,361 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
Hi! AR3! There is Regraz's mod! :)
There is a few points of my mod:
  1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
  2. Mod is just suggestions, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  3. I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
  4. Bond means highly suggest.
  5. This is the 7th map I mod since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)

General

  1. You can uncheck the wide screen support if you dont want to put a storyboard in this mapset.

Normal


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:06:151 (1,2) - Personally speaking, it is better to replace this with a reverse 3/4 slider, since 3/4 single note is hard for newbie players.
  2. 00:45:836 (1,2,3) - 3 single notes seem a little hard for newbies.
  3. 00:49:143 Seems that adding a note will make the rhythm consisitent.
  4. 00:59:064 (1,2,3) - A rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/bFjmq/6dbf7c45fe.jpg
  5. 01:00:718 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Also these 4 single notes seems too hard for newbies, they cannot react well coz the rhythm changes.
  6. 01:09:930 Seems missing a note here?
  7. 01:57:174^
  8. 02:08:985 (1) - Also a rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/bFjG5/04e3dbaee8.jpg , I guess this can provide more hit feel.
  9. 02:23:631 Add a note here to make the rhythm consistent
  10. 03:08:867 (3) - Oh this slider is a little weird with starting at neither the whiteline nor the red line! I highly recomend you use 3/4 reverse slider: http://puu.sh/bFkYF/8bdb61113d.jpg .
  11. 03:34:733 (1) - lengthen to 03:37:332
  12. 03:52:922 (1,2) - Oops!

    Structure:
  13. 00:57:174 (3,4) - Not a good pattern imo, trying to make more effort on blanket?
  14. 03:37:804 (1,2,3) - Why not make a perfect triangle with 1 2 and the head of 3?
  15. 01:16:544 (1,2,1) - ^

    Hitsounds
  16. 00:20:324 (2) - Weird clap imo.
  17. 00:25:048 (1) - trying use claps instead of the slidertick here (by adding greenlines.)
  18. 00:46:781 (4) - whistle
  19. 01:25:048 (1) - Maybe you can add a drum hitsound here.
  20. 02:58:592 (1) - Silence the sliderslide! It sounds noisy here!
  21. 03:31:190 (3) - same as the 1st point.

    Others:
  22. None

Hard

  1. -0.5 AR?

    Rhythm:
  2. 00:15:245 (5,6) - Why not continue using the triplets?

    Structure:
  3. 00:36:387 (2,3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/bFWzZ/20dfc0c9d0.jpg
  4. 00:44:891 (4) - Improve this blanket
  5. 01:12:647 (6,1,2) - ^
  6. 03:52:922 (1,1,1,1) - 妈呀这啥排列

    Hitsounds
  7. 00:18:434 (5) - remove whistle on the tail?
    Others:
  8. None

Expert


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:40:875 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Personally, I guess stream should start at 00:41:111
  2. 03:11:348 (2,3,4,5) - Better if you follow vocal here.
  3. 03:30:245 (1,2) - Guess it should be: http://puu.sh/bGhzV/0cf3bd112b.jpg
    Structure:
  4. 00:43:356 (3) - Adjust DS to make players know this special rhythm
  5. 00:45:245 (5) - ^
  6. 00:53:395 (1,2,3,4) - DS too large imo.
  7. 01:15:245 (4,6) - A perfect stack wont hurt.
  8. 01:16:899 (3,6) - Adjust this stack, now it is not perfect.
  9. 01:21:978 (2,3) - DS so large!!!!
  10. 01:23:631 (1,2,1,2) - 这DS太残忍了啊
  11. 02:07:096 (1,2,3,4) - Oh God
  12. 02:57:883 (3) - 4.6x DS, Extra 也不能这样啊
    Hitsounds
  13. None
    Others:
  14. 02:12:588 (2) - NC coz SV changes here.
  15. 02:35:796 (5) - ^

Finally, good luck on your ranking!
Thanks for reading this! :D If you have something that you dont understand, feel free to send me a forum-pm and I will try my best to explain it to you clearly!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Regraz wrote:

Hi! AR3! There is Regraz's mod! :)
There is a few points of my mod:
  1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
  2. Mod is just suggestions, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  3. I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
  4. Bond means highly suggest.
  5. This is the 7th map I mod since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)

General

  1. You can uncheck the wide screen support if you dont want to put a storyboard in this mapset.

Normal


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:06:151 (1,2) - Personally speaking, it is better to replace this with a reverse 3/4 slider, since 3/4 single note is hard for newbie players. there is no judgment at slider ends, even at slider heads it's very loose, so i think 3/4 sliders are fine if is single
  2. 00:45:836 (1,2,3) - 3 single notes seem a little hard for newbies. 127 至于吗
  3. 00:49:143 Seems that adding a note will make the rhythm consisitent. add a little rest(?)
  4. 00:59:064 (1,2,3) - A rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/bFjmq/6dbf7c45fe.jpg 滑条判定那么松 没事的 而且你看LL那N的难度..
  5. 01:00:718 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Also these 4 single notes seems too hard for newbies, they cannot react well coz the rhythm changes. i changed this into a short 1/2 slider
  6. 01:09:930 Seems missing a note here? hmm, this is intended(?)
  7. 01:57:174^ indeed
  8. 02:08:985 (1) - Also a rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/bFjG5/04e3dbaee8.jpg , I guess this can provide more hit feel. then i will have to remap many notes after this, so no change 1111
  9. 02:23:631 Add a note here to make the rhythm consistent
  10. 03:08:867 (3) - Oh this slider is a little weird with starting at neither the whiteline nor the red line! I highly recomend you use 3/4 reverse slider: http://puu.sh/bFkYF/8bdb61113d.jpg . a 我先看看
  11. 03:34:733 (1) - lengthen to 03:37:332 lengthened
  12. 03:52:922 (1,2) - Oops!

    Structure:
  13. 00:57:174 (3,4) - Not a good pattern imo, trying to make more effort on blanket? i changed for a pattern that doesn't need blanketing
  14. 03:37:804 (1,2,3) - Why not make a perfect triangle with 1 2 and the head of 3?
  15. 01:16:544 (1,2,1) - ^ if it's a perfect/equilateral triangle, the flow feels balanced into all three sides. but at this part it should back o first 2 notes and go through the slider, this feels better in playing

    Hitsounds
  16. 00:20:324 (2) - Weird clap imo. hmm
  17. 00:25:048 (1) - trying use claps instead of the slidertick here (by adding greenlines.) buhao
  18. 00:46:781 (4) - whistle ok
  19. 01:25:048 (1) - Maybe you can add a drum hitsound here. 233 the thinking bear
  20. 02:58:592 (1) - Silence the sliderslide! It sounds noisy here! 强迫症.. 至于吗 不删
  21. 03:31:190 (3) - same as the 1st point.

    Others:
  22. None

Hard

  1. -0.5 AR? good 我都忘了可以开0.5了, 感觉ar7不科学才放的8

    Rhythm:
  2. 00:15:245 (5,6) - Why not continue using the triplets? because that is too sxbk

    Structure:
  3. 00:36:387 (2,3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/bFWzZ/20dfc0c9d0.jpg good job
  4. 00:44:891 (4) - Improve this blanket a 好啊
  5. 01:12:647 (6,1,2) - ^
  6. 03:52:922 (1,1,1,1) - 妈呀这啥排列 打中间就行了啊 不难

    Hitsounds
  7. 00:18:434 (5) - remove whistle on the tail?
    Others:
  8. None

Expert


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:40:875 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Personally, I guess stream should start at 00:41:111 i think it feels better to put a slider there, 233
  2. 03:11:348 (2,3,4,5) - Better if you follow vocal here. i think that is not good
  3. 03:30:245 (1,2) - Guess it should be: http://puu.sh/bGhzV/0cf3bd112b.jpg you're right, fixed
    Structure:
  4. 00:43:356 (3) - Adjust DS to make players know this special rhythm i made a slider
  5. 00:45:245 (5) - ^
  6. 00:53:395 (1,2,3,4) - DS too large imo. this song is only 127 bpm, 2x sv, although ds multiplier is large, this is very playable, and i can do 700+c myself
  7. 01:15:245 (4,6) - A perfect stack wont hurt. this is intentionally made to stack ingame
  8. 01:16:899 (3,6) - Adjust this stack, now it is not perfect. this is weird, can't do a perfect one since it doesn't auto snap
  9. 01:21:978 (2,3) - DS so large!!!!
  10. 01:23:631 (1,2,1,2) - 这DS太残忍了啊
  11. 02:07:096 (1,2,3,4) - Oh God 233
  12. 02:57:883 (3) - 4.6x DS, Extra 也不能这样啊 这里是x0.75啊 不要只看ds啊 那个要算绿线的 我绿线要是0.5就是6.93x ds啦233
    Hitsounds
  13. None
    Others:
  14. 02:12:588 (2) - NC coz SV changes here. added both
  15. 02:35:796 (5) - ^

Finally, good luck on your ranking!
Thanks for reading this! :D If you have something that you dont understand, feel free to send me a forum-pm and I will try my best to explain it to you clearly!
thanks for modding 111111
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
自挽
Sakaue Nachi
558 posts
Joined September 2012
Sakaue Nachi
[General]
LL大法猴
建议HP-1 打了次差点挂了 这bpm这od不科学建议od-1
怎么不用下你发明的新梗233
[Expert]
00:05:915 (1) - 这个如果是跟人声的话调到1/8放
00:26:938 (1) - 这个放下一点 离下个远点更适合
00:43:001 (2,3,4) - 建议分开一点看清楚点，后面还有同理
01:02:844 (2,1) - 01:03:789 (2,1) - 这两组是相同的节奏建议间距保持一致
01:15:245 (4) - 不stack一下吗，其实也行不过我是强迫症
01:18:552 (5) - NC
01:58:907 (5) - 这个折返算不算遮挡了？
02:12:588 (1) - 这个很难看清楚
02:50:856 (1) - 这个貌似没对上音
[hard]
00:09:930 (1,2) - 直接1个折返好点？
03:52:922 (1,1,1,1) - hard来说好像略坑。。。
其他貌似没什么问题
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

建议HP-1 打了次差点挂了 这bpm这od不科学建议od-1 hp改啦, 我喜欢od8的感觉, 不改, 体会一下LL出good就断的感觉
怎么不用下你发明的新梗233 233我要用在另一张图里
[Expert]
00:05:915 (1) - 这个如果是跟人声的话调到1/8放 啊 我还是觉得不好
00:26:938 (1) - 这个放下一点 离下个远点更适合 好啊
00:43:001 (2,3,4) - 建议分开一点看清楚点，后面还有同理 不好
01:02:844 (2,1) - 01:03:789 (2,1) - 这两组是相同的节奏建议间距保持一致 你看, 歌词里唱的是二度とこない切ない, 所以我觉得应该每个都不一样才对
01:15:245 (4) - 不stack一下吗，其实也行不过我是强迫症 啊好
01:18:552 (5) - NC 好, nightcore
01:58:907 (5) - 这个折返算不算遮挡了？ 能看出来啊 先放着
02:12:588 (1) - 这个很难看清楚 挺明显的啊 不改
02:50:856 (1) - 这个貌似没对上音 有啊 1/8嘛
[hard]
00:09:930 (1,2) - 直接1个折返好点？ 好
03:52:922 (1,1,1,1) - hard来说好像略坑。。。 点中间就行了啊 哪里坑了
其他貌似没什么问题
谢摸图111
Kuuhaku
104 posts
Joined October 2011
Kuuhaku
哇，Ar3终于又要出手啦，赶紧顶一个
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Princess God
太dio，让我先射五个星星
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

太dio，让我先射五个星星
wa 祝你抽到ur(
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
RL_Tibbar
写在前面——我不会附魔摸图

[?????]

-Expert-
00:33:552 (6,7) - 换成两个二连 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107527
01:57:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样既美观又实用 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107622
01:59:773 (2) - 这一段节奏比较慢，不应该出现这种短条条
02:26:348 (3) - 换成两个圈圈，这样衔接比较圆滑 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107566
02:30:836 (4) - 移到(168,272)打着舒服
02:28:356 (2) - 不好看！ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107633
02:42:174 (6,7) - 为了烘托两声啪啪（好像是咔咔）， https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107637
03:11:348 (2,3,4,5) - 不合节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107592
03:47:489 (2,3) - finish放在3上
03:48:907 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1) - 可以根据音乐的“噔噔”、“噔噔”来适当改变间距
03:51:859 (2,1,2,3,4) - 二倍速绿线，交换2、3的位置和滑条方向之后会更刺激 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107602

00:36:387 (2) - 为何加速
01:25:875 (1) - 不好看，拉长点摆成花花或其他什么



-其他-
我要作GD

-其他2-
niconiconi

-其他3-
滑条不好看！！

-其他4-
圈的颜色不好看

-其他8-
音效懒得摸

-其他6-
其他难度懒得摸

-其他8-
我会数数
Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Ulysses
We discussed via IRC,
fixed:
  1. Various of weird rhythm in [Expert]
  2. Various of weird rhythm in [Hard]
  3. Patterns in [Hard]
It's flawless to go now.Good luck!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

OSUtoto wrote:

写在前面——我不会附魔摸图

[?????]

-Expert-
00:33:552 (6,7) - 换成两个二连 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107527 。。这里这么散
01:57:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样既美观又实用 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107622 :arrow: 后来改成1/8了
01:59:773 (2) - 这一段节奏比较慢，不应该出现这种短条条 不好 这个鼓点多好啊
02:26:348 (3) - 换成两个圈圈，这样衔接比较圆滑 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107566
02:30:836 (4) - 移到(168,272)打着舒服 这里的歌词是紧张所以不可以拉开啦
02:28:356 (2) - 不好看！ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107633 这里要放一个动摇的滑条(
02:42:174 (6,7) - 为了烘托两声啪啪（好像是咔咔）， https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107637 不想改丽(
03:11:348 (2,3,4,5) - 不合节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107592 人声->鼓点的转换
03:47:489 (2,3) - finish放在3上 这里的音调和别的不一样啊 所以才放在前面
03:48:907 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1) - 可以根据音乐的“噔噔”、“噔噔”来适当改变间距 那样感觉会造成跟1/4还是1/3的混乱233
03:51:859 (2,1,2,3,4) - 二倍速绿线，交换2、3的位置和滑条方向之后会更刺激 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107602

00:36:387 (2) - 为何加速 啊 我发现没加new combo啊 概率
01:25:875 (1) - 不好看，拉长点摆成花花或其他什么 花花lovelove



-其他-
我要作GD

-其他2-
niconiconi

-其他3-
滑条不好看！！

-其他4-
圈的颜色不好看

-其他8-
音效懒得摸

-其他6-
其他难度懒得摸

-其他8-
我会数数
啊 我改啦
Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Ulysses
Rebubble
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

nold_1702 wrote:

Rebubble
ok thanks~
pw384
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Joined January 2012
pw384
ar3也要rank辣
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

384059043 wrote:

ar3也要rank辣
ar3也要rank辣
Sellenite
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Sellenite
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我 要 单 抽 UR ！
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