i'm lazy bum
General
I recommend you to use normal because soft hitsound isn't really good with this song imo
WHERE'S
WALDO? PREVIEW TIME? My recommendation : 74120
The title seems to be FIRST, following
happy30's mapset.
Kantan
OD +1. OD2 may be low, SV 1.2, 1.5 is quite a bit strange
00:19:014 (1) - K - It's to keep consistency with 00:24:067 (9) -
00:34:172 (25) - D or K - Again, it is odd not to make finisher here, because hey other parts do have finishers and why not here? :<
00:44:278 (1) - D - Because it follows the drum well
00:54:383 (13) - ^
01:01:962 (22) - k - Vocal pitch goes up here, and it gradually goes down so k d d would really fit
01:14:593 (36) - How about placing on 01:14:436 - ? Because it just breaks rhythm, since the hook part actually starts on 01:14:436 - . Also I recommend you to use D because it follow the drum, and song's emphasis.
01:34:172 (61) - k - To follow the drum
01:34:804 (62) - D - ^
01:36:067 - Why is here no notes? It is not good for consistency, so is the rhythm :<
01:55:015 (84) - K - To follow the song (including the drums and here is like before the hook part starts and the song's mood goes up, it would be nice
), and also to keep consistency with 01:57:541 (87) -
02:05:120 (95) - Same as 01:14:593 (36) - . It is just that you have to place it on 02:04:962 - . xD
02:35:278 (8) - K - To follow the drum. ALSO, THE KIAI SHOULD START HERE. *caps lock'd sry
02:55:646 (34) - D - ^
Futsuu
OD, HP -1. This make the gap between Kantan and Futsuu. Actually, the map itself already has quite big gap that there must be some deletion on Futsuu or addition on Kantan. I recommend the former
At first, the way of mapping is becoming confusing for me... You used the finisher on 00:24:067 (10) - on Kantan so I modded that way, and the Futsuu seems to have the different way of mapping as Kantan. So I'm not going to mod them in this diff, it's on your will. But still, it needs editing to make the consistency between the diffs. (At least for the diff made by you.)
00:44:278 (49) - Same as Kantan
00:55:962 (78) - k - Suddenly having different rhythm feels odd
01:04:488 (99) - D - Following the drum.
01:23:751 (154) - k - This part is kind of high-pitched and following the rhythm, k would be better
01:55:015 (247) - D - Following the drum.
01:57:541 (254) - ^
02:10:015 - Having no note here is not good for consistency, and it feels odd
02:16:330 - ^
02:34:488 (14) - k - Following the drum
02:55:646 (85) - D - Following the drum, and this map has some d d k k D patterns so I see no problem
Cheese's Muzu
Concerning about SV changes, I know you use a lot of 'em but this is lower diff, and it kind of breaks the diff. Especially
94957,-90.9090909090909,4,1,0,100,0,0 - 01:34:957 -
115167,-86.9565217391304,4,1,0,100,0,0 - 01:55:167 -
145325,-90.9090909090909,4,1,0,100,0,0 - 02:25:325 -
175799,-83.3333333333333,4,3,0,100,0,0 - 02:55:799 -
176431,-83.3333333333333,4,1,0,100,0,0 - 02:56:431 -
179115,-83.3333333333333,4,1,0,100,0,0 - 02:59:115 -
I don't really get it. SV is still on like 1.1x ~ 1.2x even though the kiai time is already done and now it becomes the quiet part. This just doesn't fit
Aaaaalso D(drum) hitsounds are completely not audible. It should be fixed to N(normal) hitsounds, because it's (probably)
unrankable, going same with that 5% volume is unrankable.
Also there's a problem about its difficulty, 00:44:273 ~ 01:04:483 - This part is just too easy. I mean, someone would believe that it's Futsuu if someone looks at it. I highly recommend to add more notes
00:46:799 (61,62) - d d k follows the rhythm better I think
00:49:325 (67) - D - Following the drum.
00:54:536 ~ 00:55:325 - No note for almost one second in the song which gives many opportunities to put notes x_x
00:54:378 (80) - Same as second line
00:59:431 (93) - ^
01:01:957 (99,100) - Same as first line.. and many more I didn't mention
01:04:483 (107) - K - Having finisher keeps consistency and follows the drum
01:31:483 - How about making a note? (k) The vocal is clearly audible here, so it would fit
02:00:299 (385,386) - Hmmmm?
02:01:957 (395,396) - Reverse, it fits the rhythm well
Muzukashii
Some patterns are hard and long, and it breaks the diff spread in the 'one' difficulty 'itself'. I think it kinda needs some remap.
00:33:541 (28,29,30,31) - This part doesn't follow the song and breaks the song's rhythm. It's more like k d k d k
00:48:541 (84,85,86,87,88) - 5lets on high bpm Muzukashii.. has to be reconsidered, so are other same patterns.
It's kind of Oni patterns01:11:751 (206,207) - Here are no crashes to make reasonable reason (lol) to put finishers here.. at least i don't really see reasons
01:12:699 (210) - k - Finisher is more like to follow the crash on the drum, and here is just snare
01:44:278 ~ 01:44:593 - d d k fits the rhythm well
01:54:383 (408,409,410,411,412,413) - Overmapped, there is no certain rhythm or drum to fit this pattern. Following the drums it is d d kkk
01:57:699 (428) - No finisher here, pls
02:06:541 (469,470,471) - ddk would more fit the drum. kdk pattern is not really good for Muzukashii too
02:19:646 (540,541,542,543) - D d k K - following the drums
02:41:909 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74) - This pattern is out of the rhythm whhhyyyy ;_;
CheeseOni - Inconsistent diff name with Cheese's Muzu
00:43:483 (59,60,61,62,63,64) - ddkkkk - following the drum.
01:19:799 (228,229) - d k - following the drum and vocal
01:34:167 (306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314) - ddkkkkkkd - ^ and current pattern doesn't fit the song
01:35:904 - How about adding a note here? Having no note after stream feels empty
01:45:378 (364,365,366,367,368,369,370) - This stream doesn't fit the quiet part
02:10:325 (517,518) - Same as 01:19:799 (228,229) -
02:30:378 (621,622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636,637,638,639,640,641,642,643,644,645,646,647,648,649,650,651,652,653,654,655,656,657,658,659,660,661,662,663,664,665,666,667,668,669,670,671,672,673,674,675,676,677) - dafuq, ARE YOU SERIOUS? This is like Inner Oni D: Yes it fits the song, okayish but this is too hard. WAY TOO hard.
(So I found out that if you delete the notes as I told, star rating increases lol wtf)Here is the suggestion:
02:40:641 (31,32) - same as 01:19:799 (228,229) -
02:55:010 (109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - ddkkddkkd pls, sadly this pattern is now unrankable
02:58:167 (131,132,133,134,135,136,1) - D k k D k k D - It fits the song well
The problem of this diff is pretty much the same as your Muzukashii diff
AudioBC's Oni
OD5 HP5~6, current setting is like what the actual mekadon
SV 1.4
I felt odd on the patterns like ddddk on the quiet part. They should be reconsidered because they are overmapped and doesn't fit the song
00:16:173 (23,25) - Finishers aren't really good for quiet part
01:03:857 (107) - ^ and here's no crash too
01:08:751 (128) - ^ and many more
I think you have to improve on mapping skills, and make map that actually 'fits' the song. My actual thoughts on this map may sound really rude.. So I'd like to skip >_>
Defused Oni
00:29:751 (23,25,27,29,31,33,35) - I recommend you to delete these notes, it break the consitency and just feels really odd.
00:49:015 (57,58,59,60,61) - kkddd - Because current one doesn't fit the rhythm :<
00:53:751 (85,86) - I don't really see reason to put finishers here, there is no crash on drums
01:04:488 (156,157) - Reverse.
01:17:278 (223,232) - Other parts don't have finishers like here, it breaks the consistency
01:22:330 (260,261,262,263,264,265,266) - Suddenly here is no stream -_-;
01:24:857 (273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283) - pls this is overmapped
01:38:909 (367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375) - Bad mono-coloured pattern.
02:06:383 (522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531,532,533,534) - same as above^2
02:15:383 (577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587) - ^ and probably many more. You just don't have to make overmapped patterns to make difference of difficulty to make it harder than other Onis. It just makes the map bad.
02:43:172 (71,72,73,74,75,76) - Please
sry for late modding