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Breeze

S i R i R u wrote:

神曲 ∑(゚Д゚)
:roll:
gdeath
Overall :
把全部音量给降低,调成volume~85%~

[Easy]
01:22:996 (4,1) - spacing拉大些
02:03:423 (1) - volume~70%~

[Normal+]
01:01:295 (5) - volume~70%~
01:08:104 (7,9) - ^
01:09:806 (2,2) - ^
02:01:508 (4,1) - 下成01:59:167 (3,4,1)这种间隔,整体会美观些
02:03:423 (5) - volume~70%~(接下来所有的soft-finish都用70%,我就不再重复指出了)

[Hard]
fine

[taiko]
sorry,i dont mod taiko's diff.

nice.star~
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

gdeath wrote:

Overall :
把全部音量给降低,调成volume~85%~

[Easy]
01:22:996 (4,1) - spacing拉大些
02:03:423 (1) - volume~70%~

[Normal+]
01:01:295 (5) - volume~70%~
01:08:104 (7,9) - ^
01:09:806 (2,2) - ^
02:01:508 (4,1) - 下成01:59:167 (3,4,1)这种间隔,整体会美观些
02:03:423 (5) - volume~70%~(接下来所有的soft-finish都用70%,我就不再重复指出了)

[Hard]
fine

[taiko]
sorry,i dont mod taiko's diff.

nice.star~
fixed~
Tonoko
YAYAYA~~~
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Tonoko wrote:

YAYAYA~~~
thanks for your irc modding~~ really helps!!
tsuka
没什么大毛病

音效我稍微加了点 要看看?

Download: Whiteberry - Natsu Matsuri (NatsumeRin) [Hard].osu
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

tsukamaete wrote:

没什么大毛病

音效我稍微加了点 要看看?
谢谢触卡~
但因为这个是有太鼓谱的主干的,所以我不会将主节奏变更为 o o x o,或是 o x o x,细微的地方还会有些调整,但不会有大动。
JamesLeao
Insane:
00:57:891 (1,2,3) - 00:58:529 (1,2,3) - 这几个间距我总感觉远了点,而且不是直线我觉得有点难打
01:08:529 (9) - new combo
01:14:912 (3,4,5) - 01:15:338 (6,7,8) - 这几个间距貌似太远了吧……
还有后面一些3连击、我不列出来了……

其他难度倒没什么很大的问题,还有就是circle颜色,我觉得那个灰色换了比较好(failed……)
AngelHoney
All

combo color感覺很奇怪
kiai time 太多...(幾乎占歌曲的一半了吧
還有就是note別太淡..要不然配合kiaitime就....
BG color 統一成黑色吧

Insane

開頭幾個note有必要改成slider ?
00:30:657 (5) - 改成slider ?(結束在00:30:870
00:52:678 (6) - 往下一格(LV3
00:52:146 (2,3,5,6) - 往前1/4拍 ?
00:53:635 (11) - 結束在00:54:487 ?
01:12:359 (1) to 01:16:614 (7) - - 這之間的note再好好排列下 太隨意了...(順便把握好間距)
01:32:784 (6,1) - 覆蓋的不夠完整
01:44:593 (2) - 刪除 (3)new combo
01:45:125 (1) - 移除new combo 然後重新排列下
01:49:806 (5) - 太突然了..
最後一部份雖然排列是不錯..但是感覺很怪..

感覺這歌難度要么note尺寸大一寸 note速度加+1 (重新排列)
感覺很多note都聚在中間
大概注意到的就這些

Hard

note速度+1
00:34:487 (1,5,6) - 往右一格(lv3
01:21:508 (2,3) - 覆蓋的不夠完整
01:22:040 (5) - 爲什麽不與之前的重疊 ?
01:30:657 (6) - new combo ?
01:31:082 (1) - 移除new combo ?
01:24:274 (1) to 01:32:359 (5) 整體排列感覺很彆扭...


Normal+

01:36:189 (3,4) - 重疊的不夠完整

Easy

00:59:167 (1,2,3,4) - 間距不同 ?
Slider Velocity 1.0左右(或者更低)
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

jamesleao wrote:

Insane:
00:57:891 (1,2,3) - 00:58:529 (1,2,3) - 这几个间距我总感觉远了点,而且不是直线我觉得有点难打 因为和后面的测过距就偷懒不改了。。。
01:08:529 (9) - new combo fixed
01:14:912 (3,4,5) - 01:15:338 (6,7,8) - 这几个间距貌似太远了吧…… 偶尔我也想鬼畜一点,反正insane是给触手们而不是给我打的:3
还有后面一些3连击、我不列出来了……

其他难度倒没什么很大的问题,还有就是circle颜色,我觉得那个灰色换了比较好(failed……) fixed. 不过我怎么觉得换浅点的更像failed XD


thanks for modding 教练~
Matma Rex
That's a pretty great map.

[Easy]
Great.
Only thing that bothered me: 00:38:316 (1,2,3) and 01:24:273 (1,2,3) - space them a little bit further?

[Normal+]
Why the plus? Using pluses to tell this is harder than regular normal is unnecessary, the star system is enough.
00:44:699 (1,2,3) - I suggest to stack these notes.
01:03:848 (8) - 1 repeat less?
01:49:806 (6) - I dont like this shape :/
01:58:316 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - space the 4's further?

[Hard]
Please, respace streams like 00:44:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) with grid snap disabled. They look bad, because there are slight spacing differences between notes.

Because of spacing at 00:29:806 (1,2,3,4) I though that next (1) is only 1/2 away from (4). Adding note at 00:30:870 (x) makes it less ambiguous. Or you can respace previous part.
01:21:508 (2,3,4,5,6) - wtf spacing.

[Insane (also Taiko Oni~!)]
What's up with that diff name? Call it either "Insane" or "Oni", please.
The beginning is awfully boring.
WTF @ combos - some are 3-notes long, some at 15-notes long.
00:53:635 (11) - sooo ugly D:
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

AngelHoney wrote:

All

combo color感覺很奇怪 美术白痴泪目,在考虑更好的配色
kiai time 太多...(幾乎占歌曲的一半了吧 有些是用做加速提示的,我看看能不能砍些= =
還有就是note別太淡..要不然配合kiaitime就....
BG color 統一成黑色吧 fixed.

Insane

開頭幾個note有必要改成slider ?
00:30:657 (5) - 改成slider ?(結束在00:30:870 会影响taiko谱多出一个circle
00:52:678 (6) - 往下一格(LV3 fixed.
00:52:146 (2,3,5,6) - 往前1/4拍 ? 不符合原谱面
00:53:635 (11) - 結束在00:54:487 ? 会造成黄条变成3note的窘事。。迫不得已,请见谅。。
01:12:359 (1) to 01:16:614 (7) - - 這之間的note再好好排列下 太隨意了...(順便把握好間距) fixed.
01:32:784 (6,1) - 覆蓋的不夠完整 fixed.
01:44:593 (2) - 刪除 (3)new combo 不符合原谱面,并且由3开始new combo总觉得和后面的连贯性上有差异
01:45:125 (1) - 移除new combo 然後重新排列下 ^
01:49:806 (5) - 太突然了.. 换了个多次往返的1/2 直线slider,大概好些~?
最後一部份雖然排列是不錯..但是感覺很怪..

感覺這歌難度要么note尺寸大一寸 note速度加+1 (重新排列) 快圈会泪目
感覺很多note都聚在中間 尝试调整中
大概注意到的就這些

Hard

note速度+1
00:34:487 (1,5,6) - 往右一格(lv3 fixed
01:21:508 (2,3) - 覆蓋的不夠完整 fixed
01:22:040 (5) - 爲什麽不與之前的重疊 ? 我根本就不知道那什么时候多出了个的233...fixed.
01:30:657 (6) - new combo ? 按现有就好:3
01:31:082 (1) - 移除new combo ? ^
01:24:274 (1) to 01:32:359 (5) 整體排列感覺很彆扭... 在考虑是不是要remap这个部分……


Normal+

01:36:189 (3,4) - 重疊的不夠完整 fixed

Easy

00:59:167 (1,2,3,4) - 間距不同 ? fixed
Slider Velocity 1.0左右(或者更低)
对谱面整体会悲剧。。。所以不采用过低的SV.


AH好人= =~~咪~
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Matma Rex wrote:

That's a pretty great map.

[Easy]
Great.
Only thing that bothered me: 00:38:316 (1,2,3) and 01:24:273 (1,2,3) - space them a little bit further? it's just the usual spacing XD

[Normal+]
Why the plus? Using pluses to tell this is harder than regular normal is unnecessary, the star system is enough. people don't notice the system much so i still think it's needed.
00:44:699 (1,2,3) - I suggest to stack these notes. fixed.
01:03:848 (8) - 1 repeat less? maybe not. i think i need this beat.
01:49:806 (6) - I dont like this shape :/ fixed.
01:58:316 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - space the 4's further? i put the second(1,2,3,4) 1 grid right to solvef this problem

[Hard]
Please, respace streams like 00:44:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) with grid snap disabled. They look bad, because there are slight spacing differences between notes. already have it off x(

Because of spacing at 00:29:806 (1,2,3,4) I though that next (1) is only 1/2 away from (4). Adding note at 00:30:870 (x) makes it less ambiguous. Or you can respace previous part. respaced the (4), now it is stack with (3) to make it easier to read.
01:21:508 (2,3,4,5,6) - wtf spacing. space is increasing at this part.

[Insane (also Taiko Oni~!)]
What's up with that diff name? Call it either "Insane" or "Oni", please. still confused. in fact it's a TaikOsu diff, but i think most people don't like to see it.
The beginning is awfully boring. just the neccessary part of original taiko map
WTF @ combos - some are 3-notes long, some at 15-notes long. new combos are just for reading notes here~
00:53:635 (11) - sooo ugly D: fixed.


thanks for modding~
Saten ruiko
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sumeragi Amane
>~<
OoAiroO_old
star~``
misa_old
不错www最后个难度那条东西真那啥TAT
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

misa wrote:

不错www最后个难度那条东西真那啥TAT
misa试图辛苦了。。。~~~
xierbaliti
modded in Q_Q

._.



SPOILER
这个还是放上来吧01:49:806 (5) -


Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

xierbaliti wrote:

modded in Q_Q

._.
Q_Q = =~~喜儿神触手
vivere
Hi~

Easy

01:00:018(3,4)-shrink the space, so it is with 1, 2 (before it is noticed to be apart xD)
01:50:657-please the combo 3 is to the height of the combo 2 ;)

--------------------------

Insane

00:52:997(8,9,10)-put together a little because they are far apart

--------------------------

STAR! 8-)
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

vivere wrote:

Hi~

Easy

01:00:018(3,4)-shrink the space, so it is with 1, 2 (before it is noticed to be apart xD) fixed
01:50:657-please the combo 3 is to the height of the combo 2 ;) i think this is also ok= =

--------------------------

Insane

00:52:997(8,9,10)-put together a little because they are far apart fixed

--------------------------

STAR! 8-)
DJPop
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Kytoxid
Timing feels about 20-30ms too early.
Much of the kiai placement was strange; kiai is probably best placed on an actual note, so that the stars fly out when the epic starting note is hit.
Consider not using white notes, since they hurt eyes when kiai is on. Similarly, grey notes are hard to see when playing tag coop.
Lots of unused timing sections on all diffs.
The breaks on Insane might as well be removed, they're really short. (difficulty name here is also kinda weird, change it to TaikOsu Insane, or TaikOsu Oni, or just Oni, maybe.)

The maps themselves are pretty nice. 02:01:721 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - on Insane is quite hard to read, but nothing else.

Star~
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

DJPop wrote:

Mute the "normal-sliderwhistle.wav".


~Easy~
00:55:338 (1) - curve left fixed

~Normal+~
00:56:614 (4) - move up 1 grid (Lv3) fixed
01:30:657 (1) - curve right fixed
01:31:082 (2) - curve left fixed

~Hard~
01:07:678 (7) - move right 1 grid (Lv3) fixed
01:33:635 - move down & left 2 grids (Lv3) fixed

~Insane (also Taiko Oni~!)~
Fine.


+Star
thanks DJPop~
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Kytoxid wrote:

Timing feels about 20-30ms too early. in taiko i feel good. i'll find more people to check the timing.
Much of the kiai placement was strange; kiai is probably best placed on an actual note, so that the stars fly out when the epic starting note is hit.
Consider not using white notes, since they hurt eyes when kiai is on. Similarly, grey notes are hard to see when playing tag coop. fixed
Lots of unused timing sections on all diffs. fixed. but some of them are for volume lol
The breaks on Insane might as well be removed, they're really short. (difficulty name here is also kinda weird, change it to TaikOsu Insane, or TaikOsu Oni, or just Oni, maybe.) change the name to Oni now. it's better. because of the HPDR is 6. i think though short, the break time is still needed.

The maps themselves are pretty nice. 02:01:721 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - on Insane is quite hard to read, but nothing else.

Star~
arien666
[Easy]
No problem

[Normal+]
Also, No problem

[Hard]
00:59:16(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?

[Oni]
00:11:08(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
01:08:31(End of 8) - [Suggestion] As Taiko-authentic, this is 'Kat'.



Still good song :3
Umm... Proto-bubble or not?
I'll do that if you updated with these things :3
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

arken1015 wrote:

[Easy]
No problem

[Normal+]
Also, No problem

[Hard]
00:59:16(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?

[Oni]
00:11:08(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
01:08:31(End of 8) - [Suggestion] As Taiko-authentic, this is 'Kat'.



Still good song :3
Umm... Proto-bubble or not?
I'll do that if you updated with these things :3
Good luck :3
all fixed arken~ thanks~~
arien666
DDD DDD DDDDD K DDD DDD DDDDD K DDD DDD DDDDD K (Big Don~)

Proto-bubble da-don!
Good luck :3
yaya
offset : 890

all diff kiai times start at 00:58:742 & 01:44:699 finish at 01:10:657 & 02:03:423

others fine1
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

offset : 890

all diff kiai times start at 00:58:742 & 01:44:699 finish at 01:10:657 & 02:03:423

others fine1
fixed. 鸭鸭好人~~
Leorda
NI HAO! Master of Taiko!

[Easy]
00:33:655 (4) - Make parallel?
00:37:059 (4) - ^
00:38:336 (1) - Make symetric?
00:40:038 (3) - ^
00:43:443 (4) - Make curve?
01:07:698 (4) - Make parallel?
01:19:612 (4) - ^
01:23:016 (4) - ^
01:27:698 (1) - ^
01:29:400 (4) - Make curve?
01:46:421 (5) - Make parallel


[Normal+]
00:36:614 (3) - Make curve?
00:47:252 (3) - Make parallel?
00:51:933 (3) - Make symetric?
00:54:912 (1) - Make parallel?
01:07:253 (6) - ^
01:53:210 (6) - ^


[Hard]
01:39:593 (9) - Make parallel?

[Oni]
00:11:082 (3) - Move 1 grid up?
01:10:976 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it?
01:49:806 (5) - Make parallel?
01:56:827 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it?


Not bad
STAR
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO! Master of Taiko!

[Easy]
00:33:655 (4) - Make parallel?
00:37:059 (4) - ^
00:38:336 (1) - Make symetric?
00:40:038 (3) - ^
00:43:443 (4) - Make curve?
01:07:698 (4) - Make parallel?
01:19:612 (4) - ^
01:23:016 (4) - ^
01:27:698 (1) - ^
01:29:400 (4) - Make curve?
01:46:421 (5) - Make parallel


[Normal+]
00:36:614 (3) - Make curve?
00:47:252 (3) - Make parallel?
00:51:933 (3) - Make symetric?
00:54:912 (1) - Make parallel?
01:07:253 (6) - ^
01:53:210 (6) - ^


[Hard]
01:39:593 (9) - Make parallel?

[Oni]
00:11:082 (3) - Move 1 grid up?
01:10:976 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it?
01:49:806 (5) - Make parallel?
01:56:827 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it?


Not bad
STAR
Fixed. Leorda, XIE XIE = =~~
a526412351
find a star~~~~~~~~~``
a526412351
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lepidopodus
I like this song, so star~
karta454515
我雖然不懂得製作Beatmap的訣竅
不過我很喜歡這首歌曲
STAR!~

Although I did not understand manufactures Beatmap knack I very much like this first song

:)
ironhell
star

wow 30 star

rank it
Sushi
[Insane]
01:49:826 (5) - too sudden imo, but ok.

Great!
Onizuki
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