Satellite wrote:

[General]

1. とりあえずInsaneだけみました...Normal Hard modが必要ならまた呼んでください・・・ Insaneだけで十分です！ありがとう！

[Insane]

1. 00:54:567 - 02:15:164 - この2箇所add noteしませんか？00:54:567 - のほうは少し配置を弄らないとnote置くことは少し難しいかもしれませんが、合うと思います　次の2つの3連打の部分と聞き比べると音がちょっと弱い気がするのでここは単発にしておいた次第です
2. 01:17:291 (4,1) - 歌詞に合わせるならCtrl+Gした音取りのほうが合います、そのままでも大丈夫です(似た様な箇所 02:37:888 (4,1) - 04:19:978 (4,1) - あんまり歌詞は気にしない人なのでこのままでいきたいです
3. 02:07:440 (8) - X:356 Y:32に移動しませんか？02:06:993 (6,7,8,1,3) - ここで５角形作っても綺麗なんですがかなり配置が壊れてしまうので 02:07:440 (8) - だけをX:356 Y:32に移動すると 02:07:217 (7,8,1,2) - ここで綺麗な台形が作れるしDSも1.2で統一されるのでより良くなると思います　直しました、ただちょっと流れが気になります
4. 02:42:142 (2) - X:192 Y332に移動 02:41:246 (3,1) - ここの流れがDS1.2なので 02:42:142 (2,3) - こちらも1.2に、また３角形の形も整えられると思います　Fixed
5. 02:42:814 (7) - これだけ下に下がりすぎで少しゆがんで見えました、よければ使ってください( 02:42:366 (3,4,5,6,7) - この部分　Fixed
   

   284,288,162367,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   313,271,162478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   346,264,162590,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   380,267,162702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   411,281,162814,1,2,0:0:0:0:

6. 03:41:470 (1,1,1) - Volumeが一定より音に合わせて 80% 60% 50%等変えてあげるとより良くなると思います　んん・・あんまり音量に違いを感じないので今のままでもOKだと思います
7. 03:47:963 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 03:48:635 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ここの２箇所だけ流れが逆のほうがいいと思いました、主観なのでどちらでも　んー今の変な流れの方が好きです
8. 04:11:246 (1) - Naziだけど2grid下げたら 04:10:799 (4,5,1) - ここのDSが統一されると思います　Fixed
9. 04:34:194 (9) - ストリームの中でここだけRemove noteしたほうがメロディに沿ってて叩きやすいと思いました、Clapが入るような音も恐らくないですが、このままでも大丈夫です なんとなくStreamつなげちゃった方が叩いてて気持ちいいような感じがしたのでこんな感じになってます

配置に関しては何も言うことないです!! Nice map

Natsu wrote:

As requested

General:

1. I'm also unsure about your timing, since the ¨Tv Size¨ use 2 lines, but the change is really noticeable, which is not the case here... but probably the second line is necessary. So better ask to a timing expert Surely.
2. Well since you are looking for a new BG, I found one, that I feel fit the song better than your current one: Well I will use shirakai's one anyways since I liked it the most.
   
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Insane:

1. 00:08:788 (5) - nothing wrong about this, just suggesting to use 3 circles instead? following the vocals like you was doing before in 00:07:893 (2,3,4) - I feel circles represent better the song, maybe just me The current one represents better how i feel the song.
2. 00:24:232 (2) - stack this with 00:23:336 (7) - your diff will look cleanner, pluse the distance between 00:23:784 (1,2,3) - will be the same Good point, fixed.
3. 00:41:694 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this part plays awesome Thanks!
4. 00:57:366 just wondering why you didn't map the stream here? In my opinion it fit with the instruments coming back after the a capella part By not adding any notes here i think i can emphasize the next kiai beginning, but it's maybe just me. :<
5. 01:13:485 (5) - I don't like how this slider play here, talking about the rhythm, I prefer if you map this one like the second kiai in 02:34:082 (5,1,2,3) - , something like this: I'll think about this later, for now I cannot come up with something cool. Though I'm totally fine with the current one.
   
6. 01:33:187 (4) - nothing wrong about your rhythm, but personally I don't like to map important beats like the one in 01:33:635 - as slider tails, since that important beat require a click able action IMO, why not adding a 3/4 slider and then a circle? I can listen music in 01:33:523 -, something like this: Honestly I don't like using 3/4 that way. It always feels like overmapped.
   
7. 02:53:784 (1) - similar as above, also I like this slowdown it fit the music perfectly, why you didn't the same in 01:33:187 (3) - ? It's already 0.75x, I don't see any reason to make it even slower.
8. 03:40:799 (1,1,1,1) - nice idea, what about to gradually increase the sv of each slider? will make a better emphasis with the music, also will be fun to play IMO It'll look terrible imo lol.
9. 03:44:381 (1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - personally not a fan of the combo spam, but this one fit the music pretty nice though o: Even though I'm also not a fan of newcombo spamming but this one somehow looks awesome in my eyes.

Hard:

1. 00:07:445 (1,3) - make them symmetrical? (talking about the position of the sliders in ¨y¨) just for a better design Yeah, looks much better now.
2. 00:25:799 in the insane diff you have whistle + finish here and in hard just whistle, maybe missing finish? Fixed.
3. 00:57:366 same suggestion as the Insane diff Same as Insane, and considering it's just a Hard I shouldn't map the stream here.
4. 01:12:030 unnecessary green line, not important, but doesn't hurt to delete the unnecessary ones This is necessary for the re-kiai effect.
5. 02:53:784 (1) - I like this slowdown it fit the music perfectly, why you didn't the same in 01:33:187 (3) - ? It's already 0.75x, I think it's fine as is now.
6. 03:40:799 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - really nice, GJ Thanks!
7. 04:43:933 (2,3) - sorry nazi, stack them properly, unless is on purpose Oh yeah, fixed.

Normal:

1. 00:20:202 (1,2,3) - adjust the pattern to be symmetric? something like this: The current one somehow looks cooler to me.
   
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2. I notice some combo inconsistencys in the kiai, dunno if them are on purpose or not, but I prefer if you keep your every two stanzas combo patttern, anyways I'll post them c: [/color]
   
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   00:59:605 Remove NC
   01:03:187 ^
   01:17:515 ^
   01:28:261 (1) - ^
   01:31:843 (1) - ^ note: I know is for the sv change, but also I'm not sure to have ¨sv changes¨ in the easy diff of the set, consider this too.
   02:48:858 remove NC
   02:52:440 (1) - ^ also same as 01:31:843
   04:09:455 (1) - remove NC
   04:30:948 ^
   04:34:530 (1) - ^ also same as 01:31:843
   As for the slowdown I think it's okay. This is indeed the easiest difficulty of this mapset but still Normal. And 0.75x doesn't make much difference in playing imo.
3. 01:26:470 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer if you avoid this kind of patterns for this diff, they can be really confused to play for new players (since you don't have an easy diff) Honestly I don't think these stacks are confusing even for beginners, they're the easiest way to emphasize that 1/1 snare-drum i think.
4. 02:47:067 (1,2,3,4) - same as above
5. 04:07:664 (1,2,3,4) - ^
   04:29:157 (1,2,3,4) - ^

awesome work, also full version ☺/*

ShiraKai wrote:

リクエストありがとうございます！

BGを探しているということで案を何個か出しておきます 1個目のやつにしました神ですありがとう！

[Normal]

1. 02:07:664 (3) - 終点にclap?
2. 03:11:694 (3) - clapの付け忘れていませんか？
3. 04:01:620 (2) - 終点にclap?
4. 04:02:963 (3) - finishとかどうでしょう？ 後ろで音が鳴っているので何もないのには違和感がありました。
5. 04:06:545 (3) - ここの始点、Drum-clapとか合うと思います。　↑Hitsound全て修正しました
6. 04:23:112 (2) - 細かいことですが、x:184,y:296まで下げた方が自然なブランケットを作れます。Ok~
7. 04:34:530 (1) - 1番と同じようにブランケットを作ってみては？今のやつの方がちょっと好きです
   
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8. 04:40:351 (2) - clap抜けかも？はい・・・

[Hard]

1. 00:23:784 (1) - ここの終点はまだスネアの音が鳴っているのでclap付けた方が曲とマッチします。付け忘れてました（死
   04:48:858 (1) - ^　^
2. 02:30:500 (4) - x:348,y:344へ移動して多少ジャンプさせるのはどうでしょう？ 02:30:724 - がより強調されると思います お、いいですね　採用しました

[Insane]

1. 00:47:067 (1,2) - ctrl + Gした方が個人的にやり易かったです 今のやつが微妙な気がしたんでとりあえず入れ替えてみました　何か思いついたらまた修正しちゃうかもしれません
2. 01:02:515 (3) - 終点のclapがないのは付け忘れでしょうか？
3. 01:07:776 (3) - clapとかどうですか？
4. 01:16:843 (3) - ここの終点も付け忘れ？
5. 01:54:903 (8) - 少ししつこく聞こえたのでwhistleいらない気がします。　↑全て修正
6. 02:45:612 - 後ろのピアノの音に沿って連打を置いているならここにもnoteが欲しいです。なんとなくここは開けといた方がﾋﾟｰ　ﾋﾟﾛﾋﾟﾛみたいなリズムが作れて良い気がしたのでこんな感じになってます
7. 03:12:814 (2) - ctrl + Gするとより流れが良くると思います。そうですね直しました
8. 03:38:112 (3,4) - 後ろの音に合わせて(3)の終点と4にclap入れませんか？付けてみました

遅くなって申し訳ないです
綺麗な曲で素敵な譜面でした

Fycho wrote:

as your request, sorry a little delay.

[General]

1. kick/snare drums (Finish/Clap)of your hitsounds are really too light comparing with cymal and whistle imo, how about changing to a strong drum or increase the volume of hitsounds file? Increased the volume of the clap, but didn't change the finish, I don't want it to be that loud.
2. I personally think timing point at 00:13:038 – is a bit delay, try13033(13038-5) Okie.

[Insane]

1. I would rather add whistle at00:47:515 (3) –than 00:46:396 (3) –, pitch at 00:47:515 –is high enough and keep a consistency with 00:42:814 (3) -
2. 01:07:440 (2,3,4) –equal (2,3)’s spacing with (3,4)? Fixed
3. 01:11:694 (10) –I’d like to add normal-clap which fits music better I like the way it is now.
4. 01:31:396 (4) –whistle is needed here to emphasize the music. It will be too noisy imo, added a finish instead.
5. 02:17:739 (3,4,5,6,7,8) –stacked streams play not that good and don’t flow well, I’d rather not stack them or change 02:17:963 (5,6,7,8) –into two 1/4 sliders Simpified this section because of the next kiai beginning. That way I can emphasize it in a better way.
6. 03:51:993 (2) –There is a cymbal in music, so how about setting addition to normal? Also normal-clap fits better too. I would like to make a minimal use of finishes so I didn't add it here.
7. 04:14:829 (1) –beat at 04:15:276 – is quite strong, I’d like to emphasize it, how about trying this rhythm? You got a point, but for me it represents better how I feel the song so I would like to keep it as it is.http://puu.sh/bqE8J/cdcbb28899.jpg

[Hard]

1. 02:00:276 (4) –why not add a whistle? Added.

very clean diff.

[Normal]

1. 01:26:470 (1,2,3,4) -1/1 stack for the lowest diff maybe a bit hard to play imo. Honestly I have no idea how stacking can be harder since it's essentially easier than notes spaced out. x_x And considering this is the easiest diff but is still a Normal it should be fine.

I can only find these….quite a few stuffs. Really nice mapset.