in general: rhythm at some places is a bit eh since like y'know the song isn't exactly 100% correctly timed? you'd need many many timing things i think

[the small diff]
00:04:458 (3) - there's only 1 other sound in middle of slider, not 2 ://///
00:15:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - why the symmetry
00:28:397 (5) - make 2 circles ):::::

[the average sized diff]
00:05:064 (6) - move the slider end point to 276, 331 for symmetry?!?! and even spacign!?!??
00:07:892 (1,2) - just like let them touch or w/e. you know how to make i tlook good idek y u did that
00:12:943 (2) - slider shape doesn't really make sense since there's really only 1 sound in the middle of the slider, not 3. :/// kyshiro you are better than this
00:17:791 (1) - what why
00:28:397 (4) - make it so that the start is same distance from 2's start and 3's end please because it looks so lopsided (use 237, 170)
00:29:003 (1) - remove 1 repeat (or 2?!?!) and put circle yeah

[the big diff]
what is the point of 5.1 cs
00:00:822 (1,2) - move to 4,170 (like, select both of them and move together) so that you get symmetry (1's end and 3's start are symmetrical relative to 2)
00:02:034 (2,4,2) - these objects feel a bit bland w/ no hitsounds idk
00:10:821 (4) - i think it'd be better if this wasn't a slider since y'knwo, (DEOS'nt make SENSE) kind of
00:12:236 - kind of wish i could click here instead of there being a slider end there ://///
00:14:357 - ^
00:14:660 - ^
00:16:478 (1) - eh. idk, spacing is quite...... small
00:25:670 (5) - why didn't you continue w/ the rhythm as you did before (slider end of this object would be slider start in the measure before
00:29:003 (1) - move to 243,180 so that the red 2 and the red 3 from before it make a line or w/e, and then remove a repeat and put a circle at the end since honestly it's so anti-climatic (mapperfs need 2 STOP doing this). i suggest putting the circle at 290,266 so that it makes a triangle w/ the red 2 and the kick slider

smo-smoke weed, evry dae WOOP WOOP

Generalizado
Remove widescreen support & letterboxxxx
an AudioLeadIn: 1500 would be cool

[Normal bud]
00:09:912 (1) - maybe ctrl+h and something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985386 I personally prefer overlaps like you did but it feels kinda out of place here to me, and kinda breaking flowowowow. Minor thing though!
00:20:518 (2) - would be cool if you'd consider doing something like this here http://puu.sh/beHaE/0262385fdf.jpg
You're missing out notes you don't have to miss out by making combo 2 that long, it just feels missing especially in the start of the kiai o/
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985370 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985374 just a quick example of how you could change it, you probably can find a better tho

[Hard drug dealer]
It plays well, though the spacing on the 1/6 notes can be kinda confusing at first you get used to it. Just one think tho-
00:07:185 (4,5,6) - This is the only thing that felt kinda weird to play. I'm not sure if it's the little jump you use or the direction, but just aligning it straight like this http://puu.sh/beIZO/8f74311c58.jpg made it play better imo

[Insane Mexican cartel]
00:07:943 (2) - isn't this supposed to start here 00:07:892 considering the spacing? Always broke there
00:19:003 (1,1,1) - curving the first and third slider would make this pattern look a bit cooler imo http://puu.sh/beKaU/14f20c3141.jpg
00:24:357 (4) - extend this combo so it ends here 00:24:660
00:26:478 (4,5) - well it's placed outside of the editor frame itself, not sure if there's anything wrong with that but it does feel very low when you play it
could just select 00:25:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and ctrl+shift+r -15 degrees and slide it all into position with slider 5 before this combo.


Woop I think that's it, gl!

EDIT: Also unsure about some timing parts, maybe it's just mixed poorly but some places like this 00:07:892 (1) - feels like they need reds

cheesiest wrote:

in general: rhythm at some places is a bit eh since like y'know the song isn't exactly 100% correctly timed? you'd need many many timing things i think

[the small diff]
00:04:458 (3) - there's only 1 other sound in middle of slider, not 2 :///// so wot i think it looks cool :c
00:15:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - why the symmetry why the fuck not hueh
00:28:397 (5) - make 2 circles )::::: okaey

[the average sized diff]
00:05:064 (6) - move the slider end point to 276, 331 for symmetry?!?! and even spacign!?!?? sure
00:07:892 (1,2) - just like let them touch or w/e. you know how to make i tlook good idek y u did that okaey
00:12:943 (2) - slider shape doesn't really make sense since there's really only 1 sound in the middle of the slider, not 3. :/// kyshiro you are better than this b-but i like the slider form pls
00:17:791 (1) - what why god i hate you guys ok fine i fixed ok ok
00:28:397 (4) - make it so that the start is same distance from 2's start and 3's end please because it looks so lopsided (use 237, 170) fixd
00:29:003 (1) - remove 1 repeat (or 2?!?!) and put circle yeah OK FINE LOL

[the big diff]
what is the point of 5.1 cs the insane logo : - ) 5.0 would be 3.73 ok
00:00:822 (1,2) - move to 4,170 (like, select both of them and move together) so that you get symmetry (1's end and 3's start are symmetrical relative to 2) sure
00:02:034 (2,4,2) - these objects feel a bit bland w/ no hitsounds idk added some whistles
00:10:821 (4) - i think it'd be better if this wasn't a slider since y'knwo, (DEOS'nt make SENSE) kind of youre right, fixd
00:12:236 - kind of wish i could click here instead of there being a slider end there :///// i don't want to fix this one tho, the sliders here feel fine imo, wouldnt be able to put the wubspeedups then either
00:14:357 - ^
00:14:660 - ^
00:16:478 (1) - eh. idk, spacing is quite...... small not anymore it isnt
00:25:670 (5) - why didn't you continue w/ the rhythm as you did before (slider end of this object would be slider start in the measure before i dunno i think both ways work, leaving it for now because changing this pattern would hurt my fragile little heart of stone murder death.. what
00:29:003 (1) - move to 243,180 so that the red 2 and the red 3 from before it make a line or w/e, and then remove a repeat and put a circle at the end since honestly it's so anti-climatic (mapperfs need 2 STOP doing this). i suggest putting the circle at 290,266 so that it makes a triangle w/ the red 2 and the kick slider I think the location is fine, i fixd the note tho

thank : - )

Liiraye wrote:

smo-smoke weed, evry dae WOOP WOOP

Generalizado
Remove widescreen support & letterboxxxx didddddddddddd
an AudioLeadIn: 1500 would be cool no need to, osu does this by itself (or is supposed to)

[Normal bud]
00:09:912 (1) - maybe ctrl+h and something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985386 I personally prefer overlaps like you did but it feels kinda out of place here to me, and kinda breaking flowowowow. Minor thing though! i dont know it really flows fine imo :c
00:20:518 (2) - would be cool if you'd consider doing something like this here http://puu.sh/beHaE/0262385fdf.jpg Sure fixed
You're missing out notes you don't have to miss out by making combo 2 that long, it just feels missing especially in the start of the kiai o/
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985370 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1985374 just a quick example of how you could change it, you probably can find a better tho

[Hard drug dealer]
It plays well, though the spacing on the 1/6 notes can be kinda confusing at first you get used to it. Just one think tho-
00:07:185 (4,5,6) - This is the only thing that felt kinda weird to play. I'm not sure if it's the little jump you use or the direction, but just aligning it straight like this http://puu.sh/beIZO/8f74311c58.jpg made it play better imo Gave it less spacing instead, works too

[Insane Mexican cartel]
00:07:943 (2) - isn't this supposed to start here 00:07:892 considering the spacing? Always broke there o sheet, fixed
00:19:003 (1,1,1) - curving the first and third slider would make this pattern look a bit cooler imo http://puu.sh/beKaU/14f20c3141.jpg tbh i prefer it like this, feels good with the slowdowns :c
00:24:357 (4) - extend this combo so it ends here 00:24:660
00:26:478 (4,5) - well it's placed outside of the editor frame itself, not sure if there's anything wrong with that but it does feel very low when you play it This is the lowest point in the editting screen, it's completely on screen and totally fine
could just select 00:25:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and ctrl+shift+r -15 degrees and slide it all into position with slider 5 before this combo.


Woop I think that's it, gl!

EDIT: Also unsure about some timing parts, maybe it's just mixed poorly but some places like this 00:07:892 (1) - feels like they need reds it's mixed poorly, the way it's mapped makes most sense though

thank thank

HandHeldPillow wrote:

Blaze it

Smoke so much weed you wouldn't believe, and i get more ass then a toilet seat

Insane in The Membrain

00:08:094 (3) - move to x:352 y:208 or atleast space it a bit, the curosr is a little cramped in there fixed differently, reverse slider was missplaced
00:21:428 (1,2,3) - plays a bit awkwardly Made a curved slider instead of red anchor slider, better i think

Harder Better Faster Danker

00:17:185 (7) - annoys me why though :c
00:23:246 (3) - rotate to line up with the next note better did this on purpose

Notes: 2 Dank 2 Furious

thank thank thank : - )

WHERE IS MY MENTION FOR BEING THE TESTER?!!

Nah Joke. have a Star !

yon hyaku nijuu moyase my fellow brother

[General]

1. Tag suggestion: Thomas the tank engine

[Normal]

1. 00:29:003 - Remove these green lines here, they aren't really needed

[Hard]
I'm sorry, but you are going to need at least have AR 7.5 here. You have tons of 1/3, and so the faster AR will allow players to read it easier. You can still keep the 6.9 OD for le funny meme

1. 00:12:236 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - I usually had a lot of difficulties seeing tons of 1/3 doubles in close proximity like this. I'd either tap too slow or not fast enough, so I suggest you change at least 00:12:236 (6,7,8,9) - in to sliders to allow for not only a change up in play but bring the level of play down respectively
2. 00:24:357 (6,7,1) - These patterns were a bit awkward. With the 1/3 distance and the shape of 7, the flow changes quite drastically and the play becomes a bit tight. It plays a bit smoother if you invert the curve the other direction, but I am still a bit iffy on it. Try this rhythm out, I think it will help keep the play engaging while being able to capture what is going on in the music. Also you can have those 1/3 stacks that populate this difficulty so consistency is a bonus here too
   
   It removes all the unnecessary awkwardness tbh
3. 00:29:306 (2) - I would move this circle either further away from 00:29:003 (1) - or stack it underneath. Its position is a bit confusing and hard to hit imo

[Insane]
Hmm there seems to be a difficulty gap between the Hard and Insane. The Hard is a lot slower paced than this diff. I would consider toning down the difficulty here, or raise the difficulty on the hard and normal and map an easy

1. There are a lot of circles here that serve no purpose other than to add extra pressure to the map. I recommend that you delete a lot of these, such as 00:10:720 (3,5) - . This will also tone down the difficulty enough to maybe make the gap between hard and insane closer
2. HP8 would be nice tbh, to add challenge to an already short map. Also would fit the spread better maybe
3. 00:11:125 (6,1) - I would consider making this a single slider, plays well and makes for a nice lead in to the following pattern

Well thats about it, map is already pretty clean enough which is to be expected from your maps. Other than the spread issue, nothing really holding this back. However I definitely would take in to consideration lowering the difficulty of the Insane!

Call me back

Lust wrote:

yon hyaku nijuu moyase my fellow brother

[General]

1. Tag suggestion: Thomas the tank engine done

[Normal]

1. 00:29:003 - Remove these green lines here, they aren't really needed alrighty

[Hard]
I'm sorry, but you are going to need at least have AR 7.5 here. You have tons of 1/3, and so the faster AR will allow players to read it easier. You can still keep the 6.9 OD for le funny meme though it makes me sad i guess you're right, readability > le funny meymey

1. 00:12:236 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - I usually had a lot of difficulties seeing tons of 1/3 doubles in close proximity like this. I'd either tap too slow or not fast enough, so I suggest you change at least 00:12:236 (6,7,8,9) - in to sliders to allow for not only a change up in play but bring the level of play down respectively That's actually pretty cool too, fixed
2. 00:24:357 (6,7,1) - These patterns were a bit awkward. With the 1/3 distance and the shape of 7, the flow changes quite drastically and the play becomes a bit tight. It plays a bit smoother if you invert the curve the other direction, but I am still a bit iffy on it. Try this rhythm out, I think it will help keep the play engaging while being able to capture what is going on in the music. Also you can have those 1/3 stacks that populate this difficulty so consistency is a bonus here too That rhythm does play better, done
   
   It removes all the unnecessary awkwardness tbh
3. 00:29:306 (2) - I would move this circle either further away from 00:29:003 (1) - or stack it underneath. Its position is a bit confusing and hard to hit imo Alright

[Insane]
Hmm there seems to be a difficulty gap between the Hard and Insane. The Hard is a lot slower paced than this diff. I would consider toning down the difficulty here, or raise the difficulty on the hard and normal and map an easy Talked about this, slightly making the insane easier

1. There are a lot of circles here that serve no purpose other than to add extra pressure to the map. I recommend that you delete a lot of these, such as 00:10:720 (3,5) - . This will also tone down the difficulty enough to maybe make the gap between hard and insane closer Replaced a few doubles with sliders
2. HP8 would be nice tbh, to add challenge to an already short map. Also would fit the spread better maybe Sure
3. 00:11:125 (6,1) - I would consider making this a single slider, plays well and makes for a nice lead in to the following pattern Tried?

Well thats about it, map is already pretty clean enough which is to be expected from your maps. Other than the spread issue, nothing really holding this back. However I definitely would take in to consideration lowering the difficulty of the Insane!

Call me back

thankythanky

Well, here you go then. Looks all fine and dandy to me!

Smokerino 420 Bub-ble-rino

Mainly spacing fixes in Hard, lowercase title and tag removals

Thomas the Speedrank Engine. Damn XD

Pretty dank

Zare wrote:

log thingy

04:09 Zare: loool
04:10 Zare: title should be lowercase
04:10 Kyshiro: you sure?
04:10 Zare: https://soundcloud.com/thunderclowns/thomas-the-weed-engine
04:11 Zare: unless there's another source for this
04:11 Kyshiro: thats my source
04:11 Kyshiro: but
04:11 Kyshiro: i dunno thomas is even a name lmao
04:11 Kyshiro: but yeah i'll change it i guess
04:11 Zare: the title is lowercase there man
04:12 Kyshiro: fixd
04:12 Zare: and tbh I'd remove "faggot" from tags unless already done
04:12 Kyshiro: LOOOOOOOOOOOL
04:12 Kyshiro: i thought i removed that
04:12 Zare: still there
04:13 Kyshiro: fixd
04:13 Zare: you can remove "weed" too since it's in the title
04:13 Kyshiro: right
04:14 Zare: same for darude sandstorm
04:14 Zare: lol
04:14 Kyshiro: its an mlg reference tho
04:14 Zare: you can keep the everyday variations
04:14 Zare: well whatever
04:14 Kyshiro: darude sandstorm is like
04:14 Kyshiro: ''whats that song name''
04:14 Zare: I know 
04:14 Zare: but
04:14 Kyshiro: darude sandstorm.
04:14 Zare: yeah
04:14 Zare: yeah okay keep it
04:14 Kyshiro: yey
04:15 Zare: I'm not a fan of the whistles
04:15 Zare: but that's just me ;w;
04:15 Kyshiro: blame kaguya hourain
04:15 Kyshiro: i actually like the hitsounds idk
04:15 Zare: oh, you can put them in the tags if they did the hitsounds
04:16 Kyshiro: oh cool
04:16 Kyshiro: he'd like that hue
04:16 Zare: Normal seems fine
04:17 Zare: 00:07:488 (6,1) - spacing miiiiight be hard to catch idk
04:17 Zare: Hard diff
04:17 Zare: then again
04:17 Zare: nah ignore that
04:17 Kyshiro: idk for sliders i think that spacing is fine
04:18 Zare: yeah i just mean the reading
04:18 Kyshiro: hmm
04:18 Kyshiro: well you have a point there
04:18 Zare: 1/6 sliders and 2/6 spacings
04:18 Kyshiro: cause of the note before that first slider
04:18 Kyshiro: i'll fix
04:18 Zare: look reeeal similar
04:18 Kyshiro: yeah i fixed eet
04:19 Zare: 00:10:215 (7) - any reason for this spacing inconsistency
04:19 Kyshiro: http://puu.sh/beSmj/13fe625240.jpg LOL
04:19 Kyshiro: uhm nope, fixing that
04:20 Zare: 00:12:034 (5,6) - spacing 1.1 please
04:20 Zare: would also improve looks with 6-7
04:21 Kyshiro: like how
04:21 Zare: 6 is closer to 5 than to 7 rn
04:22 Zare: I'd move it like in the middle of the two
04:22 Kyshiro: fixed spacing
04:22 Kyshiro: http://puu.sh/beSys/c9faab273d.jpg i think i got the distance right now?
04:23 Zare: if I'd nazi I'd say it's too close to 7 now
04:23 Kyshiro: shit you didnt rank it on 4:20am
04:23 Kyshiro: that would've been 10/10
04:23 Zare: loool
04:23 Zare: sorry
04:23 Zare: timezones would kill that anyway
04:23 Kyshiro: yes but eu time
04:24 Kyshiro: i didnt think about it until now tho so w/e
04:24 Zare: 00:18:397 (3,4) - idk maybe use 1.2 for these
04:24 Kyshiro: sure
04:25 Zare: 00:28:397 (4) - hoho slider ending on strong beat
04:26 Kyshiro: fuk
04:26 Kyshiro: lemme fix that
04:27 Kyshiro: made it 2 notes instead
04:27 Zare: k
04:27 Zare: 00:12:034 (1,1) - RNC?
04:27 Zare: the NCs fit for the previous sounds but these are kinda 
04:27 Zare: not needed
04:28 Kyshiro: hmm
04:28 Kyshiro: sure
04:28 Kyshiro: fair enough
04:28 Zare: 00:14:458 (1,1) - same here then
04:28 Kyshiro: 00:14:458 (1,1) - same here then?
04:28 Kyshiro: yes
04:28 Kyshiro: OL
04:29 Zare: rest seems fine except 00:08:700 (5,1) - maybe it just doesn't lookr eally cool
04:29 Kyshiro: hmm
04:29 Kyshiro: i have an idea gimme a sec
04:30 Zare: and maybe the flow from 5-6 isn't the best
04:30 Kyshiro: http://puu.sh/beT5B/3bb3af4dc9.jpg
04:30 Kyshiro: satisfied?
04:30 Zare: yes
04:30 Kyshiro: what do you think about this 00:07:892 (2) - 
04:30 Kyshiro: im not happy with the claps i think
04:31 Zare: just remove the clap from the tail
04:31 Zare: reverse**
04:31 Zare: I mean revrese
04:31 Kyshiro: that sounds worse
04:31 Zare: ha
04:32 Zare: remove clap from head and tail, keep on reverse
04:32 Kyshiro: i'll put claps and lower the volume a bit
04:32 Kyshiro: that works
04:32 Zare: i don't really like the whole thing
04:33 Kyshiro: idunno it fits tho
04:33 Zare: yeah k
04:34 Zare: that's all I guess
04:34 Kyshiro: alrighty

Mainly spacing fixes in Hard, lowercase title and tag removals

Thanksssssssss

Lanturn wrote:

Thomas the Speedrank Engine. Damn XD

lol'd

HandHeldPillow wrote:

Pretty dank

dankest

This is perfect for the 12-year-old kids nowadays \o3o/

>5 hours ago
Ha. Getting my popcorn ready.

BLAZE IT.

''This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zondag 31 augustus 2014 at 21:42:07 UTC''



fastest ever?

Kyshiro wrote:

''This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zondag 31 augustus 2014 at 21:42:07 UTC''



fastest ever?

Wait, huh?

I don't even....

oh my...

speed like light

gr8 map m8 i r8 8/8 m8

lol......

6/9

weed every day/10

weed

Gratz o/

That was fast..

Gratz Kyshiro o/

lol grats.

dude what

let's begin the heated arguments of the reds against another reds
preferrably new reds
resulting in revocations of their red
im redy

holy shit a 6 hour rank?

dayum

Congratz tho

-

ColdTooth wrote:

holy shit a 6 hour rank?

dayum

Congratz tho

6?
4 hours, 59 minutes and 1 second to be exact

what the ...

that was cool, teach me how2speedrank maps

You can't be serious. Unqualified due to blatant abuse of power, even tho the map clearly needs more revision.

[General]

1. Timing is off. Actually, the entire mp3 is fricken wobbly and iffy. Shiro determined a well-working timing here:
   Offset 815
   BPM 98.9
2. Inappropriate background
3. Inappropriate map tags

Moreover several complaints about bad combo usage, overmapped/wrong snapped objects in the Insane, unreasonable jumps.

tl;dr: you must be shitting me. Circlejerk elsewhere. Suspended both BATs until explanation is received. Locked.

Unlocking this. I don't want to see this happen again - ever.

Everything has been fixed

Good to see this one unlocked

[Normal]
Suggested Settings
AR: 3
OD:3
00:04:455 (3) - Move the end node to x: 105 y: 181
00:21:441 (3) - Make the blanketing there a little better by moving the middle node to x: 310 y: 200
00:28:418 (5) - Move the note to x:218 y: 207

[Hard]
00:09:156 (4) - Snap the slider endpoint by 1/12 more
00:12:948 (2) - Move the slider to x:500 y:135
00:14:768 (5) - Move the slider to x:244 y:139

[Insane]
Suggested Settings
CS: 4.9
AR: 8.5
HP: 7.5 or 7