jonawaga wrote:

Hey! M4M

General- 5 is not a good amount of combo colors for this song, 4 or 2 would be better i dont see whats the matter ; ill need more opinions on this xD

Easy-
00:06:398 (3) - place at x-164 y-272 then resnap the next two so 00:08:318 (1) - this ends at x-208 y-108
https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/rNbUtZz.jpg?1///https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/yCFvtzh.jpg?1 umm.. sure why not xD i did something similar because it had uneven spacing
00:29:438 (3) - place at x-292 y-80 to fix the pattern, unless I don't see what you're doing fixed!
00:49:598 (2) - x-304 y-184 fixed
00:52:478 (5) - shape looks bad at this time try one of these:
https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/cAFc7Dg.jpg?1///https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/8pNYSEy.jpg?1 alright; fixed
01:00:158 (1) - x-220 y-44 done
01:17:438 (1) - stop this at 1:20:588 no changes; id rather have more time for beginners to get from the spinner to the next note
01:29:438 (2) - x-282 y-292 did something a bit different...
01:48:638 (2) - curved so it looks like 01:38:558 (1,2) - this did something different again xD
01:49:838 (4) - x-180 y-220 so it's in the middle ^
02:09:278 (3) - shape looks bad here try copying 02:07:358 (1) - this shape sorry no changes..
02:24:638 (3) - x-428 y-204 did something different
Normal-
You are using a lot of the same sliders. I won't be bugging you about this this, but I think know you can get a lot more creative with the sliders. hmm alright ill keep that in mind xD
For help: go to the forum page about sliders --->https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/208596
There is much more creativity in your other diffs, so just try to think of easier versions of your hard techniques
00:01:358 (2) - but this better between the two sliders x-228 y-200 done
00:21:518 - a note should be here its just a vocal, no major instrumental in the music so no changes
01:04:718 (2) - x-484 y-228 done
01:16:238 (2) - x-428 y-260 no changes sorry
01:17:438 (1) - this should end 01:17:438 (1) - here ^
01:29:918 (2) - x-104 y-56 done
01:30:638 (3) - x-273 y-32 did something different
02:36:638 (1) - on the other diff there was no nc here okay NC removed xD
you should change one of them
Hard-
00:10:238 (1) - x and y-220 actually its 219 and fixed xD
00:10:718 (2) - x-136 y-120 done
00:12:158 (1,1) - I'll just show you what to do here sorry no changes
https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/FJKMZYi.jpg?1
00:12:158 (1,1) - x-264 y-132 woah are you sure you got the right notes? those are sliders
00:46:238 (4,5) - x-400 y-140 i would like them not to line up with the slider xD sorry
01:51:518 (4,5) - stack oh thanks for helping me notice that ! just 1 axis off xD
Mirai-
I'm awful at mapping insane diffs btw thats fine xD anything will help i guess
00:12:278 (1,1) - same as on hard my response same as hard
http://imgur.com/FJKMZYi
01:10:238 (2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped its to follow the music xD
01:11:198 (6,1) - stack did that on purpose but.. okay stacked for now xD since idk what i was thinking??
01:13:838 (2) - x-276 y-240 did something different
01:14:318 (4) - x-384 y-280 ^
01:22:958 (6) - stack this to 01:21:278 (1) - this did that on purpose so no changes sorry
01:33:518 - add note here and stack onto 01:32:318 (4) - this following the music there so no changes
01:35:918 (5,6,7) - a bit overmapped ^
02:07:598 (1,2,3) - a bit overmapped ^
02:37:118 (3) - this should be a circle and then a smaller slider did something different

Hope this Helps I ask to change a lot, but I really think this is good! thanks! and thanks for the mod
Good Luck~

Celizavia wrote:

M4M
Easy

1. 2,3 CS is too big in my opinion, maybe 2,5 or 3? big CS is ugly imo yeah 2.5 would work :3 honestly i prefer largest circles lol
2. maybe ctrl+j on 00:21:758(3) ? no sorry , that will have bad flow unless i want my slider to be out of the screen lol
3. add whistle at 00:28:958(2)? since u make whistle at the fist slider added~
4. 00:30:398 ^ only added at the end since the music is a bit different
5. 01:39:518(2) how about pointing the slider end upwards so it makes a blanket with (3)? http://puu.sh/bfcUv/b9f1672fc4.jpg no changes sorry
6. 02:07:358(1) ctrl+j? fixed that slider in prev mod xD
7. 02:09:278(3) why use a straight elbow slider idk what that name is lol when u use curved through out the diff? maybe change it to the curved ones? ehhh i think its okay :<
8. 02:26:078(4) remove finish, it doesnt have a strong emphasis imo done
   

Normal

1. maybe spinner starts at 00:12:158? i like it how it is right now so no changes
2. 00:21:278(2) add whistle? i dont think its needed tbh
3. 01:03:758 add a note? i dont think it fits so no changes.. i kinda wanted to give a 1/1 break before a important beat
4. maybe a 1/2 slider at 01:25:838 until 01:26:078? good idea~ also i have room to emphasize the downbeat *fixed*// wait i made it a 1/1 slider instead xD
5. 01:29:678 add a note? yeah i should probably add a note i completely ignored the guitar Dx
6. 01:33:518 ^? since u do it at 01:34:478(2) no changes.. no instrumentals there
7. 02:36:638 remove nc fixed (with prev mod)
   

Hard

1. maybe add a note at 00:00:398? since it starts there. but if u do that, u must move the red line to there aswell no changes cause the music actually gets 'loud' at where it currently is
2. 00:38:078(3) maybe change into a 2 circles instead? nah then it wouldnt match the prev slider xD
3. 00:41:918(3) move the sliders end at the red tick please alright.. i was following the vocal there but i guess its a bit random xD
4. maybe remove the finish at 00:46:238(4) ? no since they are both important instrumentals
5. 01:46:238(1) a sudden awkward single whistle note here, consider removing it? done
   

hope my mods help

kakifly wrote:

all diffs by me cuz i hav no frien ds...

lemme be your first friend then :p LOL haha i was kidding about that but we can be friends if you like xD

1. 00:41:438 (2) - move x:268 y:176 ?
2. 00:57:278 (3) - move x:368 y:296

1. 00:46:238 (6) - move x:504 y:216
2. 00:49:358 (4) - ^ x:452 y:268
3. 00:50:078 (7) - ^ x:400 y:152
4. 00:57:278 (4) - ctrl + G
5. 01:11:198 (6) - move x:244 y:324
6. 02:26:078 (4) - move x:252 y:196
7. 02:37:118 (3) - ctrl + G

xxdeathx wrote:

Hi, from our queue. I chose to mod this song because it's probably my favorite from this anime :3

[General]

1. Source/tags should be Puella Magi Madoka Magica and Mahou Shoujo Madoka★Magica i have the source in Japanese but ill put that into the tags
2. Also change kyoko to kyouko because I think that type of romanization is in the ranking criteria done
3. 02:38:078 (1) - Silence the end of the spinner? Like 5-10% volume alright; added

[Easy]

1. 00:12:158 (1) - You can still end the spinner on 00:15:518 since this is a low bpm song. 1 beat of reaction time should still be enough. hmm.. alright since theres an important beat there xD
2. 00:52:478 (1) - Shorten to a 1.5 beat repeat slider so it can repeat on a significant note, and map the note at 00:54:398 remapped that section since i dont want to have a 1.5 beat slider
3. 01:17:438 (1,1) - Consider deleting the slider and ending the spinner where the slider used to start, since there isn't any other good place to end the spinner. sorry no changes there; i actually found an ok place to end the spinner xD
4. 01:49:838 (3) - This rhythm should be better to cover all the important beats. http://puu.sh/bhLyG/34a111d663.png did something different..
5. 02:36:158 (4) - Same as above but with http://puu.sh/bhLK1/4d9aeec2ed.png

did something different
Fix your new comboing, especially in the kiai. Go with NC every 2 measures to be best. okay gonna look over that

[Normal]

1. 00:49:598 (3,4) - Since 00:50:558 is a strong downbeat, you don't want to have a weak slider end there. Also it doesn't make sense to start 00:50:798 (4) - there, you're ignoring the clap at 00:51:038. Use this rhythm http://puu.sh/bhJFF/6882834677.png i tried changing it but then i had to mofidy so many other things i think ill keep it as it is for now
2. 01:04:718 (2) - 01:09:038 (2) - Same thing as ^. Try a 1/2 repeating slider, and maybe for 01:05:438 (3) - too fixed
3. 01:17:438 (1) - put a circle here because a spinner start doesn't do the vocals justice. did a slider instead
4. 01:43:838 (3) - Check spacing. done

[Hard]

1. 00:05:918 (1) - Completely unnecessary new combo. Any volume or hitsound things you do with timing sections around it shouldn't make it NC. You already have a consistent system of one NC every measure, no need to break it. fixed
2. 00:12:158 (1) - Spinner starts are extremely weak so a strong finisher note like here should have a circle, and follow with a spinner like you did in Mirai diff. okay added
3. 00:12:158 (1,1) - You want spinners to end on the downbeat, since the spinner end is where you hear the tick. Move the end of the first spinner and start of the second forward by 1/4 beat. not quite sure what you mean but the second spinner already starts on a downbeat
4. 00:40:718 (4,1,2) - why not arrange so the end of (2) overlaps with (4)? Much like you did 00:20:558 (2,3,4) - no changes because 4 was suppose to stack with another note and it also breaks the symmetry :<
5. 00:47:678 - There is enough of a break earlier so you should map these vocals. Maybe it'll be okay to ignore them in easy/normal, but I recommend mapping them for hard. hmm ill need more opinions on this since if i do i will have to completely rearrange a lot of notes
6. 00:50:558 (1,2) - Blanket would look nicer i think this flows better :3
7. 01:10:478 (2) - Move to the right a little more so it flows well into the next object. fixed
8. 02:08:078 (2) - You want a slider start or circle on 02:08:318, not a slider end, because that note is extremely strong and slider ends are extremely weak. really? i dont really think so.. i mean the vocal is emphasized a bit but its not the large white tick or anything (lol)

[Mirai]

1. This diff name doesn't really have anything to do with the show. Just go with Insane. B-but in the song they sing "Mirai" xD and idk what else to call this and insane is a boring name u_u i was also thinking about "witch" but idk if that has anything to do with the song; do you have any suggestions?
2. 00:12:278 (1,1) - Spinner starts are extremely weak. You want spinners to end on the downbeat, since the spinner end is where you hear the tick. Move the end of the first spinner and start of the second forward by 1/4 beat. same as hard
3. 00:14:078 (1) - 00:15:518 is a much stronger beat than the current ending point, so end the spinner at 00:15:518. It'll sound better because it fits the music. i like it how it currently is; im sure a circle emphasizes a beat better so i think its better if the spinners end covers the faint-er beat xD
4. 00:31:358 (1,2) - Line them up, it'll look neater. done
5. 00:35:318 (2) - Remove this note since it's overmapped. You can't hear any beat on this tick. Ok
6. 00:48:638 (1,2,3) - Use smaller spacing for these post-slider streams, they're surprisingly hard to play when the spacing is big. okay; lowered spacing a bit
7. 01:36:158 (6,7) - 01:39:998 (6,7,1,3,4,5) - Keep them parallel to be neater. done
8. 01:39:998 (6,7,1) - Same thing I said earlier about smaller spacing for 1/4 stuff. this is just one note so i think its fine but fixed anyways xD
9. 01:52:478 - I hear a note on this tick, try putting a circle there. no changes; sorry i feel like its too random and sort of ruins the 'break'
10. 01:56:198 (3) - Same thing about overmapped notes. fixed
11. 02:00:158 (2,3) - I'm fine with 3/4 sliders unless you're ignoring something on the 1/2 tick that you should have mapped. If you listen slowly, you can hear 02:00:398 and 02:00:878. So your sliders must end on those times instead of being 3/4. aw ok xD i actually really like how it was but i guess i have to change it :<
12. 02:09:038 - Since this is the hardest difficulty, you shouldn't really ignore any prominent vocals like this one. fixed
13. 02:15:518 (1,1,1) - You don't need new combo spam when all the notes are the same spacing and timing. Remove NC on all of these. fixed
14. 02:16:958 (1,2,3) - Since the slider's straight, I'm assuming you want the circles after it to go in the same direction. The last one is a little too high. fixed
15. 02:24:638 (1,2,3,4) - It's possible to arrange these in a way that they all blanket each other, which looks much nicer. See http://puu.sh/bhHOm/7a3d0e9d11.png oh! that looks a lot better xD fixed
16. 02:34:718 (2) - Try making this a 1/2 repeating slider so you don't outright ignore the vocal, which sounds really awkward in hard/insanes. diff something a bit different
17. 02:36:638 (2) - ^

This diff plays pretty well but the jumps are a bit big, but that's just my opinion. Some parts are a little messy but overall it's decent. fixed some jumps and organized them too xD i actually did do that but apparently i lost the progress somehow?

[Hitsounds]
Your hitsounding could use some work. Now I'm no expert to hitsounding by any means but I can help your map with some basic stuff. I'll be looking at Mirai difficulty, but these should apply to the same times at all diffs.

1. 00:15:998 - From this point on, claps should be on every 2nd and 4th white tick because that's where you hear loud drum hits. 00:16:478 and 00:17:438 for example. Use this pattern throughout the rest of the song until near the end, except for places where the drum hits are absent again like 01:11:678 section. alright
2. Avoid using finishes at places like 00:31:118 (8) - and 00:36:878 unless you hear a crashing cymbal in the music. I only listed two places you had finishes, but go through and remove all of the ones that don't have the crashing cymbal sound. Ones like 00:44:558 (1) - are okay because I do hear the sound there. there wasnt a finish at 31 but ill keep that in mind
3. 00:46:238 (6,7) - these two are much louder drum hits so they should clap. fixed
4. I know the least about whistles, but usually their general pattern is every 1st and 3rd white tick, which means the long white tick and short white tick exactly between two long white ticks. i used whistles every beat at kiai and i just followed the instrumentals everywhere else xD

It's a nice song and as I said before, the map is pretty decent, so I hope you'll manage to get this ranked! thank you !

Miramono wrote:

Hi! from modding queue...

[Hard]

1. 00:41:438 (2) - move x:268 y:176 ? no changes sorry if i stack it then it will break the consistency
2. 00:57:278 (3) - move x:368 y:296 that would ruin the star jump ><

[Mirai]

1. 00:46:238 (6) - move x:504 y:216 that would break the consistency in the jump ><
2. 00:49:358 (4) - ^ x:452 y:268 ^
3. 00:50:078 (7) - ^ x:400 y:152 ^
4. 00:57:278 (4) - ctrl + G that doesnt color DS and also i wanted to have a jump there;
5. 01:11:198 (6) - move x:244 y:324 that unstacks the note :0
6. 02:26:078 (4) - move x:252 y:196 i rearranged that part so it may not be correct >.<
7. 02:37:118 (3) - ctrl + G ^

That's all, hope I helped

PuttyoU wrote:

Hello , from my modding queues!

[Mirai]

1. 00:23:678 (1) - head whistle done
2. 00:38:558 (6,7) - add whistle i dont see the reason for it xD
3. 00:46:238 (6,7) - I want slider jump(if you change it,please add whistle in 2 sliders head) what?? sorry no changes and it already had whistle
4. 00:59:318 - add note but theres nothing there xD
5. 01:03:518 (8,9) - slider jump what do you mean?
6. 01:45:518 (6) - whistle ok
7. 01:51:038 (4) - slider end poind x:319 y:339 ill just allign the circles instead
8. 01:51:278 (5) - ^ x:413 y:213 ^
9. 01:51:758 (7) - this note jump please(example x:481 y:107) ??
10. 02:02:558 (4) - x:352 y:365 did something similar
11. 02:02:798 (5) - whistle no need
12. 02:09:038 (7) - change 1/4 slider did something else
13. 02:18:158 (5) - whistle i dont think it needs one
14. 02:26:558 (1,2) - more open ??
15. 02:23:918 (5,8) - clap ok
16. 02:40:958 - spinner end is the best here. All diff change please.

alright,,

[Hard]

1. 00:20:798 (3) - whistle in head no need?
2. 00:35:198 (1,5) - whistle. slider whistle in head. ok
3. 00:53:918 (5,6,1) - keep DS but i wanted to give a jump??
4. 01:44:078 (6) - whistle ok
5. 01:58:238 (2,3,4,5) - very constrained lol ik but theres no other place to put them xD
6. 02:06:514 - add note theres nothing there..
7. 02:27:038 (2) - ignore finish fixed
8. 02:32:798 (1) - whistle
9. 02:33:758 (4) - whistle in head
10. 02:34:238 (1) - whistle in tail
11. 02:36:158 (1) - whistle in head
    added whistles myself where i heard the chime thing :3

[Normal]

1. please check DS fixed
2. I recommend you use sliderstick sound ??
3. 01:14:558 (5) - whistle in tail Done
4. 01:18:158 (1) - no spinner here. note please Srry im gonna keep the spinner
5. 01:55:358 (3) - this rhythm fit in song. if you change it,please add 3:clap 5:whistle in head
   

sorry not a fan of that rhythm..

[Easy]

1. I recommend you use sliderstick sound
2. 00:44:558 (1) - no spinner here. note please sorry gonna keep the spinner there
3. 01:39:518 (2,3) - Symmetrically please done
   

Sorry easy modding.

Good luck

wa_ wrote:

M4M as requested, Easy, Normal and Hard were checked tomorrow. (some NCs may be already fixed)

Let's go~

[General]
MP3 is 320kbps, so it's unrankable, check 2nd post :^) already fixed ^o^

[Easy]

1. 00:23:678 (1) - Isn't it considered as off-screen? (I use 16:9 screen and can't change resolution to check if it's OK or not, so please check it!) alright; moved in a bit
2. 01:00:158 (1,2) - Hm, these sliders may be hard even for new playes, but it seems that it fits good rhythm. thats exaclty what im thinking but idk what else to do.. any suggestions?
3. 01:06:878 (4) - This slider needs NC, for Easy diff 7 is quite high (OR for better consistency put NC at 01:08:318 and remove at 01:09:758. already fixed
4. 01:12:638 (2,3) - Can you make this blanket better? lol sure
5. 01:21:278 (1,2,3) - Just personal suggestion: What about to make this pattern smoother and change it slightly to something like this? sure
6. 01:56:798 (4) - Again, try to add here NC. already added
7. 02:24:638 (3) - Why don't you add NC here, this is the moment when new part of song begins, you even emphasized that thing by finish hitsound! alright
8. 02:30:158 (1,1) - I'm not sure if space between spinner and slider is not too short. If this would make any problem, just try to shorten slider to 02:31:838. It's better solution than doing anything with already fitting slider. i think its fine; i put the slider right in the middle so hopefully ppl can easily reach the slider

[Normal]

1. 00:00:638 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing like this doesn't look good... Use 1.2 or 1.3. (Also, there are more issues like this in this diff) inconsistent? i am currently using 1.2
2. 01:10:478 (4) - Can you move it down to ~x28 y184 for better flow? fixed
3. 01:38:558 (2) - I'd suggest to make this slider vertical like this. Just look how it would change flowing it this part. hmm ill think about it but for now no changes
4. 01:40:478 (4) - Consider adding NC. done
5. 01:57:278 (1,2,3) - It doesn't really fits to rhythm and vocals. Maybe it could work within Insane or Hard diff, but it's still Normal and it may actually confuse players. Try something like this.

done !

[Hard]

1. 00:02:558 (1,2,3) - There's something bad with flow. I don't like how you placed (2), pattern is actually good, but imo it doesn't flow well. Try to change this pattern like this. i think its okay; the tail of 1 lines up with head of 2 so no changes sorry
2. 00:32:318 (3) - What about to reverse this slider and make movement smoother here? nah.. it doesnt reallygo with the rhythm?
3. 00:36:878 (6) - Can you make spacing around this circle more equal? okay; i tried to do a jump but i guess it failed xD
4. 00:37:598 (2) - You can get nicer movement when you move this slider down to about x440 y276. did something else..
5. 00:40:958 (1,2) - These sliders needs to be moved down under (4). You can avoid bad-looking overlap and flattened pattern, what I don't like in maps with smooth sliders like that. Select both sliders and move to x304 y184. It's way better! it is! thank you ^o^
6. 00:50:558 (1,2) - Why don't you CTRL+G this pattern? It's not much to do, but you can get better flow here. hmm.. i think it flows weird so no changes
   00:57:278 (3,4,5,1) - I'd suggest to make these spacing equal. (but I'm not sure if it's possible here) fixed
7. 01:41:438 (3,4) - Similar to 00:37:598 (2), try to move left these notes to x280 y128, I guess. wanted to have a jump there sorry

[Mirai]

1. Some star patterns would be polished a bit, it seems you made them manually. i honestly dont know how the polygonal circle creation thing works >_<
2. 00:31:358 (1,2) - I don't know why is it mapped like this, Regular 1/2 slifer (or 2 circles) should be better instead of (overmapped) 1/4.the thing is there is a 'strong' sound every 1/2 beat and a slider tail just wont do it >< ill need more opinions on this
3. 01:01:358 (1) - I really suggest change it into 1/2 slider. It just avoids important note at white tick and it seems that vocals don't have to be emphasized like here. alright; fixed
4. 01:30:878 (1,2) - Try to follow vocals here. It looks like these sliders were placed randomly without any reason. i was following the vocal xD
5. 01:33:518 - Why no circle here? Also, this antijump doesn't look good, try to add more space between notes? added circle
6. 01:52:958 (1) - I don't know what that shape means. You wanted to make wave? It doesn't look good... Try something other :p i tried to make it look better xD
7. 02:00:158 (2,3) - Try to increase bodies spacing, just move (3) to x340 y56. did something else
8. Maybe there are more flow issues, but I didn't pointed out them and in overall it's OK.

Not bad, maybe pay more attention to aesthetics and flow

-Nya- wrote:

Hey! From your M4M modding queue.
Well, here's my mod:

General:
Your background image is larger than 1366X768, according to AiMod. I don't know if it's such a big issue, but just pointing it out. already fixed ^0^Bitrate is too high ^

Mirai:
00:04:478 (1,2) – Curve more uh ok why not xD00:05:438 (3) – Place it here: X:380 Y:109 nah i think it currently flows better00:20:558 (3,4) – Blanket better wasnt trying to blanket but fixed00:39:038 (1,2) – Improve the blanket, use the approach circle wasn't trying to blanket it will break the flow here00:46:478 (7,1) – Stack done01:40:478 (1,2) – Rather blanket this i think it flows better this way01:47:918 (4) – Place it here: X:321 Y:36 but then it doesnt stack01:55:598 (7,6) – Stack? ??End the last spinner here: 02:43:358 - did something else

Hard:
00:46:238 (4,5) – Place these two here: X:446 Y:216 sorry i like how it currently is; i prefer the flw to bend a little rather to be completely straightAlso end the last spinner here: 02:43:358 – did something else

Normal:
AiMod~ One DS issue fixed00:00:638 (1) –Curve more uh ok xD00:28:238 –Add hitcircle nah; i have no where to put it and theres only a vocal there00:30:158 (5) –Ctrl+H did something else00:45:998 (6) –Move this slider downwards till it’s here: X:152 Y:160 nice idea~ now its symmetrical ^o^ fixed00:49:598 (3) –Ctrl+H (Remember to do the same with 00:51:518 (5) – no changes sorry02:10:238 (3) –Curve this slider more or just make it a straight slider. no changes 02:15:518 (4) –Place this slider here: X:176 Y:108. You will then create two blankets i'd rather it have a nice flow.. no changes :<02:21:518 (2,3) –Blanket ^02:23:198 (4) –Ctrl+J nah02:37:838 (1) –End spinner here: 02:43:358 – did something different

Easy:
AiMod~ One DS issue fixed00:15:998 (1) – Add finish at the head of this slider added00:27:518 (1) – Place this slider here: X:44 Y:220 Ok.00:31:838 (1) – Place this slider here: X:144 Y:296 ok00:40:958 (3) – Move it to this spot: X:440 Y:240? no changes sorry00:48:638 (1,2) – Blanket. Like this: already fixed this in another mod but i didnt blanket
[box=Picture]

sheela901 wrote:

Hey again kakifly!

General

1. Since you don't have a storyboard, you can uncheck the Widescreen Support option (in the Song Setup).

alright; fixed

Easy

1. 00:04:478 (1) - Not sure if you forgot, but the tail could have a whistle, as there's a "bell" sound in the music. So since there's a note on the beat, you can fill it with a whistle. There's also 00:06:398 (3) . k added
2. 00:04:478 (1,3) - On those bodies, you added a whistle, which sounds weird. I suggest to remove them. wait what?? i think you might've copied the wrong notes ??
3. 00:09:758 (2,3,4) - Nazi. Move them to x:264 y:180, then 00:10:238 (3,4) to x:313 y:266. The thing is that 00:09:758 (2,3,4) could be the same line perfectly with 00:08:318 (1) -'s curve. fixed~
4. 00:17:438 (2,4) - Add claps on those two to follow the clap in the music. Try this clap hitsound (reduce the volume of this hitsound to 20%, which means that when you add a clap on a note, you should add a point with a 20% volume on the note, then add another point with the same volume as before (30%) on the next tick). thanks very much for the hitsound! i actually do have them with all the other diffs since except easy. the sound actually comes every 2nd and 4th white tick ^o^
5. 00:21:278 (2,4) - ^
   There's also 00:25:118 (2,3,4) - , 00:28:958 (2) . You should add claps on the 2nd and 4th white ticks.
6. 00:38:558 (4) - The distance between this and the previous object breaks the constant distance snap. Moving this to x:120 y:365 should fix the problem. fixed
7. 01:25:118 (1) - There's also this one. Move 01:24:638 (4) to x:137 y:265. fixed
8. 01:28:478 (1) - I was thinking of a note on 01:28:478 -, then an 1/1 slider on 01:28:958 . The head gets a more "stronger" beat on the downbeat. So I thought it sounded better. thats a better idea xD fixed~
9. 01:36:638 (3,1) - Swap the new combo. There's an emphasis at 01:36:638 . There's 01:40:478 (3) you need to add a new combo. done
10. 02:01:598 (6) - This note should have a new combo, since the beat is strong there. It also follows the new combo pattern. And remove it from 02:03:518 (1) . done; made some adjustments to other nc's too
11. 02:18:398 (2) - Move this to x:210 y:314 to fix the inconstant distance. It'll also be in the middle of the two sliders. fixed~ idk how that even happened...
12. 02:28:478 (5) - Add a new combo to follow the pattern.
13. 02:29:918 - Maybe a note on this tick? It should complete the kiai mode. no.. maybe thats a bit hard for easy imo

Normal

1. 00:17:918 (1) - Remove the finish on the head. There's no emphasis beat here. There's also 00:19:838 (1) . done
2. 00:44:558 (4) - Add a new combo on the head. This beat changes the music. You add one to 01:49:838 (1) . okay
3. 00:51:038 - Try adding a note there. The slider 00:50:798 (4) sounded weird, but okay. on a blue tick? nah.. i think ill remap that part a bit
4. 02:24:158 (1) - The repeat is, in my opinion, is not strong for this beat in the music. I suggest to add a 1/2 slider on 02:24:158 , then a 1/1 slider on 02:24:638 . It also follows with the vocals. done~

Hard

1. 00:08:798 (3) - The three previous objects goes on a straight line, but the slider (3) decides to curve, which breaks the flow (in my opinion). The best way to fix it is to make 00:08:318 (1,2,3) a triangle pattern:
   fixed
2. 00:20:798 (3) - Try moving this to x:99 y:224 to create a blanket pattern with the next object, and I thought it'll make a better flow for 00:19:838 (1,2,3) . fixed~ that works nicely !
3. 00:28:478 (3,4) - Move them to x:167 y:52. It'll just make a better circular flow. fixed
4. 00:41:918 (3) - Reduce it to the red tick (00:42:158 - )? I think the blue tick isn't worth it. It breaks the rhythm, and sounds a little weird. hmm ok fixed
5. 01:13:598 (1,2) - Try moving them to where they'll be on the middle of 01:13:358 (4) . It'll just make it nicer. sorry i dont get what you mean...
6. 01:16:238 (2) - Move this to x:406 y:53 to fix the inconstant distance. It's uncomfortable to play when the distance between this and the previous/next object is little than the constant distance. i wanted to have an uneven jump there, new music starts to play so i think its okay
7. 01:17:918 (2) - If you switch the head and the tail, it would create a circular flow, which is comfortable to play. ok
8. 01:48:158 (1) - This slider definitely sounds weird (unless I have broken ears). lol i think its fine.. it follows the music correctly xD
9. 01:49:598 (4) - As you did for the first part, replace the slider by two notes (one on the head, and the other on the tail). Circles (notes) are more stronger than slider's tail, in my opinion. ok
10. 01:58:238 (2) - The distance between this and the previous object is too small. Try blanketing with 01:57:758 (1) -'s head:
    
    

    225,281,118238,2,2,P|228:207|289:157,1,154.000004699707,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    369,197,118958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    425,123,119198,1,10,0:0:0:0:
    511,154,119438,1,0,0:0:0:0:

    i didnt do that but i did fix it so the distance is more consistent
11. 01:59:438 (5,1) - Reduce the jump a bit? There's no strong beat, like 01:53:918 or 01:55:838 . you're right; fixed
12. 02:33:758 (4,1) - These sliders, for me, sounded weird. You follow the vocals before, but these sliders decides to go to another track in the music. I suggest to use this rhythm:
    
    It'll follow better with the vocals. i think ill keep the current rhythm but thanks

Mirai

1. 00:05:918 (1) - If you add a new combo to this note, then what about 00:03:998 (4,4) ? I suggest to remove the new combo on the note. ill remove the combo.. i removed it before but my saves got reset x_x
2. 00:25:598 (1) - I suggest to copy-paste 00:25:118 (4) , flip it horizontally and vertically, and move it to x:432 y:180. Yours was a little "flow breaking" in my opinion. ok fixed~
3. 00:31:358 (1) - This slider sounds weird, since it isn't part of 00:30:638 (6,7,8) . I mean that the music on where 00:31:358 (1) lands isn't the same as the part to 00:30:638 from 00:31:238 . I suggest to extend 00:31:358 (1) to the upbeat. It sounds more better. changed to a repeat instead
4. 00:35:678 (3,4,5,6,7) - perfectu plz The star pattern isn't beautiful. Try this code:
   
   I made more changes, so if it doesn't suit you, you can always make changes. hmm.. sorry i dont really like using codes i just arranged it myself but thanks
5. 00:43:838 (3) - I don't like it that way. The flow breaks there, so try paralleling with 00:43:358 (2) . nah, i think it flows fine i mean its a circular motion to get from the tail of 3 to head of 4
6. 01:04:958 (3,4) - These 1/4 sliders don't follow anything in the music, in my opinion. Try notes on 1/2 beats. did circles instead; i think it fits better

I think I can find more suggestion in the insane difficulty, so if you want, you can poke me in-game (normally in the weekends) to get a recheck. Good Luck on ranking this map. Here's a star! -w-b The mapset is really cool. thank you for the star!!

EDIT: Welp, I shot two stars (there's was a lag, so, - 3-), enjoy it~Lol well thanks xD

fm4a93au04 wrote:

Hello , from my queue ~~ ... again ?

fm4a93au04's standard modding queue

I don’t use box for my mod , so it maybe a little long … anyway , I’ll try my best .

Thanks for the hitsound suggestion but i think i'll stick with what i've got ><

[Easy]

Composing is very good for me =..= . So I focus on rhythm and sound .

00:00:638 (1) – End remove W . but the w matches the music

00:02:078 (2) – Try to add some to match the BG drum sound . added clap( I think the sound S:C1-W is very fit ~~ try it ~~ or N-H )

00:02:558 (3) - End remove W . ok

00:03:998 (4) – Remove W . but again it matches music :0

00:04:478 (1,3) – Remove W at head , and W at sliderbody . ^

00:07:838 (4) – W . added

00:09:758 (2,3,4) – Do something to match the BG drum sound ( use my sound or N-H ) . Maybe gradually increase the vol. . increased volume, same for all diffs

00:12:158 – Why not add a note with F here ? If you do this , then later the spinner . ( maybe to 00:12:398 . or 00:12:638 . )

00:12:158 (1) – Maybe to near to next object ?



I prefer to :

i put the slider in the middle of the screen so its okay and there really isnt another good place to end the slider

00:15:998 ~ 00:46:478 – If you like my sound ( not my … I mean , “ The sound I recomand to you ” . I‘ll call it as “ my sound ” for an abbreviation bellow ) , here you can try to add them ~ 00:49:118 . 00:51:038 . 00:51:998 . 00:52:958 . and so on ~ Or , you can add N-H . the sound actually comes every 2nd and 4th beat.. i just didnt add for easy but i think i will

00:42:878 (1) – Here can add F since near the turning part of the song ( add one more F to emphsize this ending ) . i dont think f is need there

00:44:558 – Why not add a note with F here ? or , scale 00:43:358 (2) to here and F at end . If you do so , then later the spinner 1/2 or 1 beat and end at same place . added f and c to spinner

00:48:638 ~ 01:11:198 – Same as 00:15:998 ~ 00:46:478 , but noteworthy is 01:03:998 ~ 01:09:278 you need to put them every beat unless there need F , since the BG drum sound change here . yes i understand xD

00:49:598 (2) – Remove W at body . no changes

I don’t know why you add W at sliderbody ? If it is you mean to then ignore me . Short slider’s W sliderbody I think it’s not bad , but I don’t like long slider with W , so …… =..= . i have a thing going on at kiai like.. 1 W every beat xD sorry..

00:54:878 (4) - Remove W at body .^

00:56:318 (1) – F at head , remove W at body . [/color]

01:01:358 (2) – Head N-H , end N-F for a powerful little end . already has F at the end

01:02:318 (3) – I prefer to delete it and add a note at 01:03:038 . Since a short pause , beginners can read this :

hmm.. sorry no changes i think that ignores the music :<

It’s very fair , since the short pause will give player a long time to check for that .



Prev : x1.19 , next : x1.18 ( since grip so is not x1.2 ) .

Just … a reference .

01:09:758 (4) – Head N-F . added

01:11:678 (1) – Head F . no changes.. doesnt fit music

01:12:638 (2) – End W . added

01:15:038 (4) – W . added

01:16:958 (2) – Change to a 1/2 beat slider ( end at 01:17:198 . ) , and end add F . it has the same music as the prev pattern so i dont think i need to change the rhythm

01:17:438 (1) – Scale it to 01:20:318 . done

Oh , bellow … uh … since this song is a mirror ( first part is very very similar to second part ) , so I don’t tell the suggest about sound bellow . Just copy them to second part . Unless , there is something defferent from first part .

01:47:678 (1) – End F . doesnt fit music

01:49:838 (3) – Gradrualy increase vol. ? Maybe 30% , 45% , and last 60% for a little end ? If you like , try to make your own style ~ done! did something similar

01:59:678 (4) – Head F ? doesnt fit music

02:01:598 (6) – F ? added

02:09:278 ~ 02:23:198 – Same as 01:03:998 ~ 01:09:278 .no changes

02:05:438 (3,4,1) - Copy 01:00:158 (1,2) .’s rhythm to here maybe ? i think i will remap 1:00 so it follows the beat instead

02:22:238 (2) – Make a red point curve at 02:22:478 ? ( other similar place can also add ) nice idea! done

02:24:638 (1,2,3,4,5) – Add F every 1 beat . i did but only for the first few notes

02:29:918 – Add note ? If you do so , then later the next spinner 1/2 beat and end at same place . started spinner there instead

02:32:798 (1,2) – I prefer to delete them and add note at 02:34:238 . did something different

02:38:078 (1) – 1/2 beat later to batch beautiful BG sound . Better then match vocal imo vocals and that bg soud starts at the same place.. so no changes.


Other sound same . Try to find out where fit them in your style ~

[Normal]

About sound , just copy E to N . Again , choose you like and ignore what you dislike ~ THANKS ~~

01:17:438 (5) – Dlete this to make a powerful end at 01:17:198 (4) . is better then follow the vocal here imo . Or , scale it to 01:18:878 . and make a heart or something =..= .



Spinner : 01:19:358 ~ 01:20:798 . i think its okay where it is; i moved it only for easy because they theres more time to get from the spinner to the circle

02:00:638 (5,1) – Avoid this overlap . They will overlap when test play . I’m a lazy guy , so : fixed



Next : x1.19 by magic =ㄦ= . <- Plz KICK him !!!!!

02:36:638 – Add a note and later the next 2 obj 1/2 beat . Don’t forget to end the spinner at 02:40:958 . no changes

[Hard]

Just follow the Easy mod to add sound or gradrualy increase vol or something . Since sound change can apply to all diff so ……

<- Yes , I lazy to type !! ( PUNCH ~~ )

… Let’s start ~

00:55:358 (3,4) – Change they into two 1 beat slider . Or change 00:54:878 (2) into note . no changes.. sorry

01:03:038 (3) – Ctrl+G ? that kind of ruins the flow >_<

01:25:838 (2) – move to ( x,y ) – ( 168,240 ) . i wanted to have uneven jump

01:07:358 (4) - Ctrl+G ? breaks flow, sorry

02:36:638 (2,3) – Ctrl+G , and then ctrl+G 02:36:638 (2) again . I think is more fit here imo . alright fixed

So , the old saying ...

Good luck to your map ~~ thanks!

Lapis Aoki wrote:

M4M from your queue ~ >w<

[General]

1. 02:37:838 (1) - This spinner should end at 02:43:838 imo, it feels better i think i will end it where it currently is.. i got a lot of mods to change where the slider ends and most people suggest the current one; sorry
2. Please take a look at the whole map of this diff, you're missing lots of finish hmm okay but which diff?
3. You're also missing some whistles too

[Easy]

1. 00:00:638 (1) - I would suggest that you use whistle here, but still, keep the finish, cause the piano and the finish are both played at the same time ~ already added xD
2. 00:05:918 (2) - There's no use of the whistle here, also 00:02:078 (2) you didn't added whistle, so yeah lol ~ :p done
3. 00:25:598 (3) - Missing whistle at the beginning of the slider added
4. 00:44:558 (1) - This spinner should end at 00:46:718 imo, it sounded better hmm.. i like it where it currently ends; right when the instrumentals end xD
5. 00:56:318 (1) - Missing finish, listen to this please added
6. 01:09:758 (4) - ^ already added
7. 01:25:118 (1) - Missing whistle, listen to this added
8. 01:29:918 (3) - ^ at the repeat ^
9. 02:01:598 (6) - NC should start here, cause of the finish already added
10. 02:07:358 (1) - Finish is at the wrong timing, please remove it moved slider to right timing
11. 02:37:838 (1) - This spinner should end at 02:43:838 imo, it feels better

[Normal]

1. 00:31:358 (1) - Missing finish i dont think it suits the music to put a finish there
2. 00:42:878 (1) - Missing whistle added
3. 00:44:558 (4) - NC here, cause of the finish already added
4. 01:21:278 (1) - What with the low hitsound here? And also, missing finish, and please rise the volume, cause it looks weird like this IMO added finishbut i didnt change the volume cause the clap is a bit loud n stuff

Other than that, looks good to me, good luck

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m owo

[General]

1. hmm the current ranked version has the artist as "Ai nonaka & Eri Kitamura" so i'm not sure which one is correct. i had Lanturn check the metadata for me and they checked official source so i think its good for now xD
2. I would recommend at least 1000 autoleadin? I Think when playing the map the leadin comes automatically??

[Mirai]

1. maybe ar 8? some of the jump patterns become quite hard to read with ar 7 alright fixed
2. 00:08:798 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - how bout reducing the size of these jumps as the music here is slightly quieter then slowly making them larger? okay good idea~
3. 00:11:918 (8,1) - maybe u can exaggerate this jump a bit more to emphasize the finish done
4. 00:12:278 (1,1) - i recommend u doing this instead since the emphasis on spinners lie at the end um ok
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:14:198 (1) - maybe end this at 00:15:518 - instead, the 1/2 gap is kinda sudden i think its okay for insane; i tested it out a few times and i suck at osu; i moved it closer to the centre if that helps
6. 00:55:838 (3,1) - space this consistently as the rest? nah; i think it builds a nice pressure if that makes sense
7. 01:10:958 (5,6) - space this out more, when it comes to kickslider jumps its better to have them spaced out more evenly okay then
   01:36:398 (7,1) - ^
8. 01:17:438 (1) - how bout add circle and drag spinner back by 1/4? mm i tried that but i didnt really likeit;;
9. Solid diff indeed, but... too solid. It would be more interesting if you have a variety of distance in jumps and stuff. it's good, but just plays the same throughout the whole song imo :/lol thanks; sorry this is only my second time trying an insane;; and idont play them much so idk what to do x_x

[Hard]

1. 01:09:758 (1,2,3) - make ds here consistent? theres a strong beat so i wanted to have a combo jump :3
2. 01:17:198 (4) - maybe have the nc and jump here instead of 01:17:438 (1) - cuz of the finish sound owo yes yes but at where the nc currently is new music starts playing
3. 02:30:398 - how bout add circle and drag spinner back nah
4. 02:29:678 (4,5) - ctrl g rhythm so slider head can express finish sound? im sure not what you mean?
5. again solid!

thanks xD

[Normal]

1. 00:20:558 - add note for bass sound? added
   01:25:838 - ^ added 1/2 slider
2. honestly at least ar4 for a better spread :> okay; raised ar and od
3. 01:25:118 - downbeat should be something clickable, also to keep NC consistent okay
4. again solid. to make this a bit more interesting though, consider maybe stacking some of the circles? like 00:39:758 (2,3) - this would give a very nice effect if stacked, ur choice though. yes i see what you mean! ill keep it in mind

[Easy]

1. be careful for the amount of time u have between a spinner and the next object. 00:12:158 (1,1) - avoid things like this. have at least i would say 2 white ticks of room after a spinner before u place a note ill fix them all
   02:29:678 (1,1) - ^
   
   same goes with normal diff

ok; but i think some are ok i put the notes right in the middle of the screen

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hello there
M4M from your queue

[General]
Uncheck letter box during break ( your map doesn't has break time) Done

[Mirai]

• I would use AR=8 so for nice transition from Hard to this diff already added

1. 00:05:918 (1) - No need to NC unless you decide to put finish HS here i dont think you have the updated version?? :0
2. 00:07:838 (4) - This would be sound better if you use the same rhythm that you do here 00:04:478 (1,2,3,1) - the music really sound like the same they are the same rhythm to me?
3. 00:08:798 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This kind of music here can form lots of pattern maybe you use more pattern here this would intresting lol ill try but what pattern?
4. 00:17:918 (1,2) - Try this http://puu.sh/bjGta/a861d7a36e.png it sound nice to me nah; then i'd be missing a clap in the music and i think the current one is ok
5. 00:22:238 (2,3,4,5) - Try this http://puu.sh/bjGz4/159293c53b.png sound nice did something else
6. 00:26:078 (2,3,4,5) - Not a really good shape maybe you can make it looks like this http://puu.sh/bjGF4/dfa9d13eb8.png ( (5) x=240 ) done
7. 00:30:638 (6) - NC like this http://puu.sh/bjGKv/5ce12efcb4.png would make it more easier to recognize change in beat spacing the updated version of my map is differnt
8. 00:31:838 - NC suggestion http://puu.sh/bjGSq/8d96d19acb.png nah
9. 00:34:478 - NC suggestion http://puu.sh/bjGVH/f25510df8d.png My NC is for consistentcy in pattern that nc gets sort of long.. no changes sorry
10. 00:43:358 (2) - NC here instead of 00:42:878 (1) - if you follow th vocal no changes
11. 00:42:878 (1,2,3,4) - Line up y=244 on all notes for better flow done
12. 00:44:558 (1) - No need for whistle. Finish sound is loud that can make it unable to hear whistle sound done
13. 00:45:278 (2) - Move to x=296 y=155 for better cosmetic http://puu.sh/bjHem/78fb8ab531.png okay; also made adjustments to all the circles so the jump is even again; had to stack last two notes
14. 00:56:798 (2) - Should make this same as 00:56:318 (1) - it would create nice flow and cosmetic fixed
15. 01:01:838 (2) - Ctrl+J then reposition and this would flow better , I think no i think it flows better the way; the head of next slider lines up with tail
16. 01:03:518 (8,1) - Make it like this for nice cosmetic http://puu.sh/bjHnA/e144fad38d.png See that (8) will create some nice blanket shape with (1) fixed
17. 01:10:238 (2,3,4,5) - You can make this spacing a bit more intresting I would make something like this http://puu.sh/bjHK8/9b913ecce3.pngi spread them out but they still have a consistent spacing
18. 01:20:558 - NC suggestion http://puu.sh/bjHQG/238e48b2d1.png nah; this nc follows the music better imo
19. 01:29:438 - NC suggestion http://puu.sh/bjHUh/f8c49305be.png My NC is for consistentcy in pattern ok added
20. 01:39:518 (5,6) - I think the music not really goes with this symmetry try this rhythm http://puu.sh/bjI1f/ca511974a6.png thats exactly what i have? probalby since your version isnt updated ><
21. 01:47:198 (3) - Suggest copy-paste 01:46:238 (1) - and then Ctrl+J then Ctrl+G i think the currently one; although looks a bit weird flows much better
22. 01:58:718 (5,6) - Hmm..rhythm is a bit weird try this http://puu.sh/bjICQ/972f3c0183.png See that the new NC also consistent too , right? then it ends on a strong downbeat and the sliders start on red ticks which feel weird;; no changes
23. 02:13:118 (1) - x=368 to line up 02:12:158 (5,6,1) - fixed
24. 02:17:678 (4) - Angle a bit up for better cosmetic and flow http://puu.sh/bjIQM/563f0a4124.png ok
    I think HS is a bit not consistent for kiai time you should use same pattern of HS for kiai time i'm pretty sure i have a whistle on every beat and clap every 2nd beat; i will recheck later
    But this diff is a bit nice to play thanks? xD

[Hard]

• Maybe OD=5 Did 6 since i think normal was 5?

1. 00:09:758 - NC suggestion http://puu.sh/bl2ry/16bc345211.png no changes
2. 00:16:718 (2) - Might need to place lower for a better flow http://puu.sh/bl2y5/4eac48068c.png fixed
3. 00:23:198 (5) - Hmm..I would Ctrl+J then reposition here to keep the flow that you do here 00:22:478 (2,3,4) - i think its okay right now
4. 00:32:318 (3) - Ctrl+G and it should make flow a bit more intresting fixed! its really nice thanks
5. 00:34:238 - Rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/bl2Qc/fe27758627.png i think that may break the consistency;;
6. 00:35:678 (3,4) - Should copy-paste 00:35:198 (1,2) - for consistent in spacing http://puu.sh/bl2Yk/6c4fef1cff.png I think (4) spacing is a bit off okay fixed
7. 01:00:638 (2) - Should place like this for better cosmetic and flow http://puu.sh/bl34Y/a98787e232.png but that looks very inconsistent Dx
8. 01:08:558 (3,5) - Should line up (x=480 on all notes) so this will consist with this line up 01:08:318 (2,4) - you also might need to reposition 01:09:278 (6) - too fixed
9. 02:04:478 (4,5,6) - Flow is a bit weird here how about this? http://puu.sh/bl4xQ/7d84c69274.png nah
10. 02:15:518 (1) - Rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/bl4MT/6cfc19839c.png ok
11. 02:23:678 (4) - y=216 to line up 02:22:478 (1,2,4) - fixed
    Good diff

thanks

[Normal]

• OD=4 you already have easier diff than this now
  Sorry but I'm not a fan of this type of Normal but I would point out that some notes still inconsistent in DS like this one 01:12:638 (2,3,4) - 01:12:638 (2,3) - DS=1.12 (1.1 ish) but 01:13:358 (3,4) - DS= 1.18(1.2 ish) Also you can decrease the amout of sliders and add more circles for this diff

sorry thats just how i like to map Dx

[Easy]

1. 00:12:158 (1) - About spinner usage in Easy : Spinners should be used sparingly in Easy difficulties - generally ends of mapped parts before a break and the entire song. When using a spinner, make sure the length is fairly long. 2-4 measures is a good guide.
   The reasoning is because most new players are going to react slowly to a spinner, so there's a delay in starting them. Then they will also spin wildly, usually drawing along the perimeter of the screen. Once the spinner is complete, they will be most probably disoriented and wondering where their cursor is. This is the reason why if you have a spinner in the middle of a mapped phrase, you should allow for as much time as possible for recovery. A good rule of thumb is 3-4 beats after a spinner, but this can vary depending on BPM. fixed these in prev mod
   I think you would need to move spinner end to 00:15:038 -
2. 00:42:878 (5) - Remove NC and NC this 00:43:358 (6) - instead nah
3. 02:29:678 (1) - Spinner end at 02:31:838 - fixed
   Looks like the only problem for this diff is the spinner the others are fine to me

Overall
Good map to play but it might need some improvement in consistentcy of the map okay i'll work on that; thanks for the mod!

Good luck

litoluna wrote:

hi~
for m4m
[Easy]

1. 00:04:478 (1) - missing whistle at boby? no?
2. 00:06:398 (3) - ^ ^
3. 01:01:598 - I think not need finish. you're right; removed
4. 01:01:838 (3) - finish at head and delete finish at end ok
5. 01:55:838 - I think not need finish. ok; removed
   
   beautiful easy thank you!

[Normal]

1. 00:14:078 (1,1) - Too soon after a spinner in a Normal. this unrankble element. okay; fixed
   02:30:398 (1,1) - ^ fixed
2. 00:19:838 (1,2,3) - change DS 1.2? ok
3. 00:21:758 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
4. 01:07:838 (1) - add finish at head added
5. 01:11:678 (1) - ^ nah; it doesnt fit the music there
6. 01:47:918 (3) - delete note.Because note is connected too much, you should cut it your right; removed
   
   The spacing should prepare it

[Hard]

1. 00:48:638 (1,2) - I think 1/1slider is fiting. fixed
   
2. 02:06:878 - add note added
3. 02:36:638 (2,3,4) - try this Rhythm.(more vocal following) its nice; fixed
   

[Mirai]

1. 00:25:598 (1) - try curveslider
   
   SPOILER

   
   ok
2. 00:43:358 (2,3) - try this slider
   
   SPOILER

   
   ok! that flows a lot better
3. 01:07:838 (1,2,3) - There is not a sound here(01:07:958 (2) - ) removed
   I think fiting slider
   added
4. 02:05:918 (2) - I think fiting clap only. already has clap?
5. 02:06:158 (3) - ummm... Because there is not the sound of cymbals, exclude finish and add whistle that was a mistake lol >< fixed~

sorry poor english

Good luck!!! thanks!

CDFA wrote:

I love having nice memes thrown in my face

Insane:
00:25:598 (1) - This would be nicer if it flowed better with the previous slider i see what you mean; fixed
00:55:358 (2,3) - This is really weird because of the overlap and the fact that the music doesn't really change all that much, so the anti-jump is just odd. Possibly make these regular jumps, it has the same amount of impact without destroying the flow alright.. god it took me a while to arrange the jumps so they dont look hideous x_x
01:01:358 (1) - Add clap on end of slider added
01:10:238 (2,3,4,5,6) - This feels out of place mostly because everything else is nicely distance snapped, so having all of these random jumps is a bit off ok; fixed their consistency so they are even
01:55:598 (5) - Make this jump smaller? fixed
02:22:958 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer the spacing of these to be similar to the spacing of (3) and (4) ok
02:28:478 (1) - Add finish on slider head i dont think it needs one; the sound is different; the last few notes literally had the crashing cymbol sound

Hard:
00:12:278 (1,1) - I'd prefer if you did this like Insane, because ending on the blue tick just sounds awkward, and the end of a slider has more of an impact than the beginning of one done
01:16:238 (2,3) - Fix this spacing, ESPECIALLY since you're making a pattern done
01:47:678 (5,6) - You shouldn't have 2 finishes in a row unless the music has it. Apply this to all other instances fixed; in all diffs
02:07:118 (4) - Add finish added
02:15:518 (2) - Add clap ^
02:16:478 (4) - Add clap ^
02:30:398 (1) - Add finish ^

Normal:
01:11:678 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider a finish wouldnt fit there; added a whistle instead
01:18:158 (1) - Move this back to the white tick. Mostly because I've been getting yelled at about spinners so im morally obligated to tell you this ok
01:36:158 (5) - Add finish on end of slider finish wouldnt work there; added whistle
01:44:318 (1) - Finish on beginning of slider added
02:07:118 (3) - ^ ^
02:16:958 (1) - ^ ^
02:30:398 (1) - ^ already has one

Easy:
Fine

The biggest issue with this map is the hitsound inconsistency. Which sucks because the hitsounds are cool, but a lot of times I'll just be missing nitpicky things. Go through every diff and make sure the hitsounds are as consistent as you can make them. alright; got a few mods on inconsistent hitsounds but now i have to stop being lazy and check them all ;__;

Get like 3-4 more mods then bug me about this. alright lol

Also I'm trying to find the correct metadata for this but I can't, so if anybody has the Volume 5 Blu-Ray/DVD set of Madoka, can you be a broksi and check that out for me thx Lanturn checked official sources for the names and the title is in english
; checked a ranked version of this song to make sure. so i think the metadata is fine ?? :<

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\SB1.jpg",320,240
 F,0,152318,153898,0,1
 S,0,152318,153898,0.645
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\SB1.jpg",320,240
 F,0,153898,170135,1
 S,0,153898,170135,0.645
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\SB2.jpg",320,240
 S,2,48479,49473,0.645,0.8
 F,1,48479,49479,1,0
 F,1,63998,64998,1,0
 S,2,63998,64998,0.645,0.8
 F,1,113918,114918,1,0
 S,2,113918,114918,0.645,0.8
 F,1,129278,130278,1,0
 S,2,129278,130278,0.645,0.8
 F,1,144638,145638,1,0
 S,2,144638,145638,0.645,0.8
//Storyboard Sound Samples

pishifat wrote:

from your queueueueuueue

general

1. add im to the tags. it's common to ignore the usage of the apostrophe when searching stuff like this. (i searched "and im home" in my osu library and got no results so it's stupid)um idk if it has anything to do with the song but ok..?

mirai

1. 00:04:958 (2,3) - considering you emphasized the bell noise stuff with whistles, you should emphasize them with your mapping as well. by this, i mean not having the stronger beat on the end of the slider, which happens with (2) here. if you were to ctrl+G 00:04:958 (2,3) - so that their rhythms switch, things woul d be emphasized properly according to your hitsounds. same would apply to 00:06:398 (1,2,3) - . more on active/passive hitsounding can be found i do agree with what you said but the rhythm .. not so much. The circle seems to be emphasizing nothing so i will keep it as it is; they have whistles if thats enoughhere if you're interested. also, your normal diff does emphasis stuff correctly there
2. 00:12:278 (1) - shouldn't this have a whistle since it's the same bell noise as other places with whistles removed
3. 00:18:878 (3,4,5,6,1) - you probably already know about it, but when making star shapes (or anything else actually), it can be a lot neater by using the compose>create polygon circles tool. you can see the difference in neatness between your original and a version using that tool. would apply to any other star shapes you've got, like 00:37:598 (2,3,4,5,6) - and other shapes like 00:45:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - etc i know about the tool but it just gets confusing on how to use it.. guess ill test it out now
4. 00:21:758 (1,2) - might make sense to ctrl+g these (for the rhythm thing again), since the vocal "ni" would be better represented by the 1 beat long slider and the 1/2 beat vocals would be better represented with the 1/2 beat slider. fixed
5. 00:31:118 (1,2) - may want to swap the NCs on these, since (1) is still part of the previous vocal phrase and (2) is part of the next. if you had an object placed on the downbeat it would be clear to ahve the NC there, but since this is a slider end, it's kind of confusing. if you plan on keeping it, 01:36:398 (7,1) - these NCs should be switched since it's the same thing. (please dont do the second choice it's bad) fixed; did first suggestion
6. 00:31:838 (3) - missing clap on the headzor added
7. 00:39:038 (1,2) - dunno if it's intentional that this isn't a blanket, but if not, raising the tail of (1) up works out for doing that dont wanna blanket here
8. 01:01:358 (1) - shoudl have le clap on le tail added
9. 01:01:358 (1,2) - since (2) is where the song gets more intense (as expressed by your hitsound finish), you may want to actually have 01:01:358 (1) - continue with teh slower SV shared by 00:59:678 (7,1) - . this way, when the song picks up more, the player will move more. right now, the player starts moving faster before the song gets louder and it's kinda weird. with those changes, your NCs would look like this. fixed
10. 01:12:638 (3) - since the flow moving from 01:11:678 (1,2) - is exactly a straight line up and (3) is exactly a straight line up... shouldn't they be in the same straight line? like 3 is slightly to the left and i'm wondering if there's a reason for that, since having it directly above 2 would make mroe sense fixed; also changed slider shape a bit
11. 01:30:878 (1,2) - maybe it's just me, but i feel like this would play a bit nicer if (1)'s curve were the opposite direction, so there's a sort of loop-ish flow, similar to what you did at 0 1:40:478 (1,2) - oh it does; fixed
12. the green line on 02:09:279 - is off by AN ENTIRE MILLISECOND. it should be at 02:09:278 - because that's where all otehr ones are and kiai is inconsistent by a 1/1000th of a second why would you make such a huge mistake you are a terrible person. OH MY GOD HOW DID I MAKE SUCH A UNRANKABLE MISTAKE !!!!! MUST FIX!!!11!!!1111!!!!!
13. 02:27:038 (3) - should have a finish right I guess so if i were keeping a constant finish
14. 02:28:958 (2) - ^

hard

1. 00:04:478 (1,2,3) - 00:06:398 (1,2,3) - gonna say the same thing as in insane with rhythmswitching. if you didn't change it there, then this can be ignored i guess. if you did though, you like 100% should change it here.
2. 00:12:278 (1) - yeahsamething as insane done
3. 00:20:558 (2,4) - normally wouldn't complain about stacks, but since these are both visible ingame, it would probably be a good idea to get it more exact. holy- i just fixed this yesterday wtf..
4. 00:25:598 (1) - you should probably move this more to the left since it overlaps the key bindings in 4:3 resolutions. fixed
5. 00:53:198 (2,3,4,5,6) - same thing about compose>create polygon circles as in insane (sorry) same response lol
6. 00:58:238 (1) - should have a whistle on head added
7. 01:32:798 (1,2,3) - seems kidn of awkward to have a jump in a place where there's linear flow like this. if (2) were equally spaced between (1,3) it would make more sense, just as you did at 01:36:638 (1,2,3) - or 01:48:158 (1,2,3) - or like everywhere fixed
8. 02:11:198 (1,2,3,4) - uh what's with the spacing here? if it's intentional, that's.. well pretty unusual well its intentional but i ll try to make it less weird xD
9. 02:18:878 (1) - should also have a whistle on head added

normal

1. 00:15:998 (1,2,3) - shouldn't these be in a straight line like 00:39:038 (1,2,3) - or wat fixed; i noticed the ones at 39 sec were a few axis off so fixed those too
2. 00:18:638 (2,3) - uhspacing spacing is fine.. i had to have it stack another note so i cant change it LOL
3. 00:19:838 (1,2,3) - uh uh spacing fixed
4. 00:17:918 (1) - considering you start using a 2 bar comboing pattern after the intro section, it would make sense to remove the NC here removed
5. 00:40:958 (4) - should have a whistleee
6. 00:42:878 (1,2,3) - le spacing. gonna stop pointing out tiny spacing things like that. if there's a visible differnece between object overlaps you should probably adjust it
7. some hitsound spam:

SPOILER

• 
  fixed most of these; thanks

1. 00:52:478 (1) - whisssssssstle
2. 01:24:638 (6) - shoudl have a clap on the head
3. 01:27:038 (4) - and a whistle on the head
4. 01:29:678 (2) - shouldn't have anything whistle-related following the guitar
5. 01:37:118 (1) - should have a clap on headz
6. 01:39:998 (3) - not really sure why there's a whislte on the tail ehre there isnt?
7. 01:46:238 (1) - should have a whistle right no?
8. 01:59:678 (3,4,5,6,1) - just a reminder again to use that tool for polygon circlesaofjdfioasdjfods
9. 02:18:878 (4) - should have a whistle on head. right now there's one on the slider body so i think you know it sohuld be there lol
10. 02:27:518 (6) - whistle should be on the head of this, not the tail, right?

1. 02:32:798 (1) - you'll probably want to put this exactly in the center of the grid, since its slight offset compared to the perfectly centered spinner is gross fixed

easy

1. a couple more spacing things, as mentioned in normal, are here. (meaning stuff like 01:21:278 (1,2,3) - since you can clearly see (2) is closer to (3) than (1)). also stuff like 02:18:878 (3,4) - where it's like distance snap not enabled. fixed
2. hitsound spam:

SPOILER

• 
  fixed most of these

1. 00:37:118 (3) - shoudl have a whistle on the head right? consistency with 00:29:438 (3) -
2. 00:40:958 (3) - ^
3. 01:06:878 (4) - le whistle on le head for reasons
4. 01:27:038 (3) - ^
5. 01:32:318 (3) - ^except tail
6. 01:33:758 (1) - ^
7. 01:38:558 (3) - ^except head now i dont see the reason here?
8. 01:42:398 (3) - ^
9. 01:46:238 (3) - ^
10. 02:03:518 (3) - ^on both head and tail
11. 02:05:438 (1) - ^head
12. 02:12:158 (4) - ^

1. 02:22:238 (2) - should really get rid of this and do what you do at 02:06:398 (2,3) - and 01:48:638 (2,3) - and the other times it happens. the red tick there is way stronger than anything else around it, so you kinda need an object there. following usual rhythm there is fine and good and consistent and yay i changed the rhythm at both spots since i found one that suited the music better
2. 02:23:678 (3) - if you don't happen to change that rhythm thing, this should have a whistle on the head.
3. 02:24:638 (1,2,3,4,1) - no idea what's going on with the finishes here lol fixed
4. 02:35:678 (5) - assuming the whistle on 02:33:758 (3) - was intentional, this should have a whistle. if not, (3) shouldn't added
5. not really my preference when it comes to flow stuff, but i won't mention something that subjective here and i have math homework i should be doing so your map is perfect ok.

hitsounds are confusing

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