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Sharlo & yealina - Kakushigoto [Osu|OsuMania|CatchTheBeat]

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Sharlo
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Topic Starter
Sharlo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年1月15日 at 2:33:14

Artist: Sharlo & yealina
Title: Kakushigoto
Tags: Vocaloid mafumafu IA Narcissu Oracle Fycho Kawaiwkyik RLC Icing_wind victorica_db Simple_Star Rumia- Xinely
BPM: 200
Filesize: 9035kb
Play Time: 03:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fycho's Hard (3.58 stars, 557 notes)
  2. Ic's 4K HD - 4Key (3.34 stars, 1941 notes)
  3. Insane (5.18 stars, 963 notes)
  4. Narcissu's Easy (1.29 stars, 162 notes)
  5. Oracle's Normal (2.26 stars, 355 notes)
  6. RLC's Extra (5.66 stars, 1228 notes)
  7. Rumi's 7K MX - 7Key (4.99 stars, 3228 notes)
  8. S.Star's 7K HD - 7Key (2.38 stars, 1368 notes)
  9. victorica's 4K MX - 4Key (4.28 stars, 2638 notes)
  10. wkyik's Insane (4.63 stars, 682 notes)
  11. Xinely's Overdose (5.4 stars, 1199 notes)
Download: Sharlo & yealina - Kakushigoto
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th 夏萝 & 霜爷 - かくしごと

Just wanna let you know a beautiful voice from yealina.
Amazing lyric storyboard was made by Xinely.

1300 Favs Thanks so much!!

泥有种憋点开
Natsu → Spectator → ursa → Spy → Konei → ExPew → Atrue → Spy → smallboat → TicClick → Tari → CLSW → Deif → Deif → TicClick
Last edited by Sharlo , edited 96 times in total.
Sakaue Nachi
558 posts
Joined September 2012
Sakaue Nachi
1st...
ExPew
Elite Mapper
1,220 posts
Joined January 2011
ExPew
best map~~
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
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Joined April 2013
Akasha-
lol, sorry ;w; re-start to mapping hd now :(
but seems your map need another 4k diff too, if you not having it yet, I can make 4k ez or nm too
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Sharlo

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

lol, sorry ;w; re-start to mapping hd now :(
but seems your map need another 4k diff too, if you not having it yet, I can make 4k ez or nm too
Oh I already requested IC to make 4k NM <3
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
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Joined April 2013
Akasha-

Sharlo wrote:

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

lol, sorry ;w; re-start to mapping hd now :(
but seems your map need another 4k diff too, if you not having it yet, I can make 4k ez or nm too
Oh I already requested IC to make 4k NM <3
Okay I see, I will starting to make 7k hd, tks <3

P/s: lol 1000 post~
[Emiria]
1,010 posts
Joined November 2012
[Emiria]
....if you do that ,,also need 4k HD..
Bruce
1,076 posts
Joined January 2013
Bruce
Hi. IRC Mod for IC's 4K Normal
SPOILER
18:15 Icing_wind: 星酱
18:16 Simple_Star: 风酱
18:16 Icing_wind: 有时间吗
18:16 Simple_Star: 怎么啦
18:16 Icing_wind: 我做完了
18:16 Icing_wind: 试试图
18:22 Simple_Star: 怎么说呢 之前的抓音问题我在最后一个Pattern已经用Play的方式表达出来了
18:22 Simple_Star: 然后有音抓错的
18:23 Icing_wind: 嗯嗯
18:23 Icing_wind: 我看到了
18:23 Simple_Star: 00:50:722 - 00:51:022 - 00:51:172 -
18:23 Simple_Star: 这三处是重音
18:23 Simple_Star: 00:50:872 - 这个不是
18:24 Simple_Star: 00:57:172 - ~00:58:072 - 亲..这是NM 而且BPM略高 1/2的34 Stream也是很有杀伤力的
18:25 Icing_wind: 哈哈
18:25 Simple_Star: 然后你各种大篇幅的1/2狂点 而且基本上没怎么停过 实际上鼓点或者Bass都有几次停过的
18:26 Simple_Star: 01:21:772 - ~01:29:572 - 关于和这种相同音的Piano Part 你可以看我Normal的抓音 然后你对比一下
18:26 Icing_wind: 蛋疼、、 我再去看看你的
18:26 Simple_Star: 01:32:422 - 然后这一段只有这个突然是红线Double
18:27 Simple_Star: 01:39:172 (99172|0,99472|2,99772|3) - 这个条子人声抓的真的很美 我那时候也没想到
18:27 Icing_wind: 啊 这个失误了
18:27 Icing_wind: 害羞........
18:27 Simple_Star: 01:49:972 - ~01:50:572 - 这里仔细听一下 然后告诉我你应该怎么改
18:28 Simple_Star: 嗯 有两种正解 对一个就可以了
18:31 Simple_Star: 01:55:072 - 这一段开始 人声抓错了
18:31 Simple_Star: 你放Note的地方才应该是人声条子
18:31 Simple_Star: 条子的地方才应该是鼓点Note
18:32 Simple_Star: 01:57:772 - 到这里结束都是
18:33 Icing_wind: 0.0 真的 这个大失误
18:33 Simple_Star: 改完了说一声继续下面的
18:33 Icing_wind: 改完啦
18:33 Simple_Star: 01:59:572 - 这边 你觉得怎么样
18:34 Simple_Star: 我给你个建议
18:34 Simple_Star: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1996489
18:34 Icing_wind: 这里我都没有细心。。 这会才听出来音都比较轻
18:35 Simple_Star: 02:07:822 (127822|1) - 这个也是失误了吧 这边没音 反而02:07:972 - 才有
18:35 Simple_Star: 02:30:472 - 这边抓错 条子交接应该在这里
18:36 Icing_wind: 急着做了 = =
18:36 Simple_Star: 其实不用着急啊 慢工才出细活
18:36 Icing_wind: 一直是开100 到听不清的地方才用50
18:37 Simple_Star: 02:46:822 - 也是有个大失误了http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1996495
18:37 Icing_wind: 怎么说。。 有些时候有些事我就变急性了。。。
18:38 Simple_Star: 02:55:372 - ~02:57:622 - 这边你的音全部抓错了 应该是1/3 不过是Normal所以我建议全删光
18:38 Simple_Star: 除了条子
18:38 Simple_Star: 03:09:772 - 重音必须加一个Note强调
18:39 Simple_Star: 03:25:371 (205371|0,205371|1) - 这边是人声渐出 不需要加Note
18:40 Icing_wind: 嗯 改完了
18:40 Simple_Star: 给Sharlo吧
18:41 Simple_Star: 没什么大问题了
18:41 Icing_wind: 嗯嗯 我自己再看看
18:41 Icing_wind: 尽量改好给她
18:41 Icing_wind: mod的时候看NM的人我觉得不会太多 所以我改好给她好了
wendao
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wendao
:3
DiVeZ
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DiVeZ

wendao wrote:

:3
:3
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Fycho
得赶紧先把前排抢了
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Sharlo

Fycho wrote:

得赶紧先把前排抢了
收到邮件还以为是来交图的【
yealina
10 posts
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yealina
咦我自己都忘记抢个前排
Oracle
571 posts
Joined April 2012
Oracle

Fycho wrote:

得赶紧先把前排抢了
Mashiro-Fang
150 posts
Joined September 2013
Mashiro-Fang
mod for Ic's 4K NM


00:32:572 - 00:37:372 - 这中间的note最好排一下 放一条线感觉不是很好
01:40:972 - 01:48:172 - 同上
后面还有类似的地方 自己注意改一下吧
03:07:972 - 漏音
03:08:272 - 漏音
后面抓的人声的话就把这两个地方也抓了吧
03:26:571 - 漏
03:36:171 - 漏


总感觉有些地方不适合出现在NM里（大雾

good luck :D
justhow0615
89 posts
Joined July 2011
justhow0615
來囉

[victorica's 4K MX]

00:26:947 (26947|2) - delete?

01:54:622 - add?

01:55:372 - ^

02:09:097 (129097|1) - 把這顆移動到 02:09:097 (129097|1) - 其中一欄?

以上
CrazyStar
88 posts
Joined February 2011
CrazyStar
mod by victorica's request

[db's 4K MX]
00:07:297 - 刪除一顆加到後面的白線
00:11:047 - 做成和後面一樣的三連點
00:56:497 - 刪除一顆加到後面的白線
01:15:697 - ^
01:40:972 (100972|3) - 移動到2跟前面的兩顆配成交錯的感覺
Kiai段的LN盡量每一段都有

p.s.可以將Kiai段中那個變速刪除

[IC's 4K NM]
00:39:772 - 怎麼這裡沒有条了
00:41:422 - 加一顆
各Kiai段再檢查一下有沒有對整齊就好了


好歌好聲好圖好譜師們，射星 :)
Icing_wind
164 posts
Joined February 2014
Icing_wind

Mashiro-Fang wrote:

mod for Ic's 4K NM


00:32:572 - 00:37:372 - 这中间的note最好排一下 放一条线感觉不是很好 好哒
01:40:972 - 01:48:172 - 同上
后面还有类似的地方 自己注意改一下吧
03:07:972 - 漏音 这个我当时也想往前抓，感觉抓后面两个好点
03:08:272 - 漏音 ↑
后面抓的人声的话就把这两个地方也抓了吧
03:26:571 - 漏 不瞒你说我早就发现了。。。 就等你们来mod hhh
03:36:171 - 漏


总感觉有些地方不适合出现在NM里（大雾
good luck :D
谢谢月 qwq
Last edited by Icing_wind , edited 1 time in total.
Icing_wind
164 posts
Joined February 2014
Icing_wind

CrazyStar wrote:

mod by victorica's request

[IC's 4K NM]
00:39:772 - 怎麼這裡沒有条了
00:41:422 - 加一顆
各Kiai段再檢查一下有沒有對整齊就好了


好歌好聲好圖好譜師們，射星 :)
（ 黑星哥神麻婆加神触）
qwq 谢谢黑星哥
reepor
8 posts
Joined August 2014
reepor
[victorica's 4K MX]
00:25:747 (25747|2) - 左移至第一格
00:49:672 - 加一个
03:17:647 (197647|0) - 右移至第四格

水mod完毕。 太神，摸不动.....qwq
[Emiria]
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Joined November 2012
[Emiria]
irc with ic V1.0版本
22:10 Icing_wind: 豆包哥
22:10 Icing_wind: 好了
22:10 victorica_db: .
22:10 Icing_wind: 0.0
22:10 victorica_db: 有改过么
22:11 Icing_wind: 没。。 刚刚重启了。。。。
22:11 victorica_db: ...
22:11 victorica_db: 那开始把 今天先写第一分钟。。
22:12 Icing_wind: 好
22:12 victorica_db: /.\看效率 块的话2分钟
22:12 victorica_db: 慢的话就1分钟了
22:12 Icing_wind: 是改原来的还是要remap
22:12 victorica_db: 00:01:373 (1373|3,1373|1,1672|1,1672|3) - 单note。
22:12 victorica_db: 改原来的
22:13 Icing_wind: 呼...
22:13 Icing_wind: 改好啦
22:13 victorica_db: 00:02:422 - +1个note
22:14 Icing_wind: 嗯
22:14 victorica_db: 00:02:722 - 从这里开始取另外一个音 不要鼓点和那个混取 感觉不是太好
22:15 victorica_db: 00:06:172 -
22:15 victorica_db: 到这里都是一样的
22:15 victorica_db: 和我上面说的一样
22:15 Icing_wind: 好
22:16 victorica_db: 00:06:172 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1997202
22:17 victorica_db: 00:07:372 - 这里开始回归02.772一样的
22:18 victorica_db: 00:13:368 - 00:21:772 - 这一段要没只写钢琴 要么写人声 看你喜欢
22:19 victorica_db: 00:22:072 - 00:22:222 - 加一个note
22:21 victorica_db: 00:22:972 - 这里开始全半段的人声不要去 放鼓点 后边段写人声 举个例子 我放QQ上
22:22 victorica_db: 00:32:572 - 到这都和上面一样
22:22 Icing_wind: 嗯嗯
22:23 victorica_db: 00:32:572 - 00:49:372 - 这段全部写鼓点
22:23 victorica_db: 鼓点的变化足够能满足NM了
22:26 victorica_db: 00:49:372 - 看QQ
22:26 Icing_wind: 嗯
22:26 victorica_db: 00:51:772 - 这里开是鼓点全错
22:26 victorica_db: 开始
22:26 victorica_db: 仔细听
22:27 victorica_db: 用鼓点加人声 ka ku xi ko do 这个人声才写出来 其他以鼓点为主
22:28 victorica_db: 好 今天先到这。。
22:28 victorica_db: 你全部改完明天在找我check一下
Kawawa
Kawawa
Halo, how do u do
I suggest u :)
Mania mode about..

Ic's 4K NM - many modify.....
00:02:422 - Note 1add
00:12:022 - Note 1add
00:12:172 - delete
00:13:522 - delete
00:13:822 - delete
00:15:922 - delete
00:16:222 - delete
00:16:672 - hit sound change -> "whistle"
00:16:972 - hit sound change -> "whistle"
00:17:272 - Note 1add
00:17:347 - delete
00:17:722 - delete
00:18:022 - delete
00:18:172 - hit sound change -> "whistle
00:18:322 - delete
00:18:622 - delete
00:18:922 - delete
00:19:222 - delete
00:19:522 - delete
00:19:822 - delete
00:20:122 - delete
00:20:422 - delete
00:20:722 - delete
00:21:022 - delete
00:21:322 - delete
00:22:822 - note 1add
00:59:272 - note 1add
00:59:872 - note 1add
01:00:923 - delete
01:01:222 - note 1add
01:01:372 - note 1add
01:04:372 - delete
02:55:372 - note 1add
03:03:022 - delete
03:03:772 - note 1delete
03:16:072 - note 1add
03:16:673 - note 1add


S.Star's 7K NM
01:13:368 - note 1add
01:18:172 - note 1add

Victorica's 4K MX
00:11:122 - D key note movement -> S key
00:11:272 - note 1delete
00:11:422 - F key note movement -> D key
01:10:897 - delete
01:30:622 - note 1delete
02:26:572 - K key note delete
03:17:572 - D key note movement -> K key
03:54:021 - note 1delete

Rumi's 7K MX
02:17:872 - note 1delete << because, too rapid fast drum.. i think it's some lower
02:18:097 - note 1delete << same.

good luck :)
Lirai
1,514 posts
Joined December 2013
Lirai
Hi here's Little Mod for your mania Chart, Sharlo <3

Checked with Mod above and no double Mod with it

[Ic's 4K NM]
00:46:972 - Add Note to 4

00:50:572 (50572|0) - Move to 3 and then 00:50:722

(50722|2) - Change to double on col 1 n 4

01:01:372 (61372|2) - Change to double on col 2 n 4

01:05:947 - 01:06:022 - Add note maybe, Stair is good here

01:10:972 - Add to 1

01:54:322 (114322|3) - Move to 3, avoid the LN above

02:04:972 - Add to 4

02:08:572 (128572|1) - Move to 1
02:09:172 (129172|3) - Move to 2
^ These double suits with the vocal itself

02:36:172 - Add note for cymbal

02:46:372 (166372|3) - Move to 3

03:22:971 - Add to 1

03:30:171 - Add to 4

03:49:371 - Add to 1
[S.Star's 7K NM]
00:26:272 (26272|4) - Move to 4, maybe separate this double since you use that for this kind beat

00:48:172 (48172|5,48172|3,48472|2,48472|4) - Move one coloumn left

01:55:372 - Add to 1 for cymbal

01:56:572 (116572|5,116572|3) - Move one coloumn right

02:24:472 - Add Note?

02:55:072 (175072|5) - Move to 2

03:18:172 - Add to 6
[victorica's 4K MX]
00:05:197 (5197|2) - Delete
00:05:122 - Add Note
^ 1/2 seems fine here

00:25:522 - Add Note ?

00:46:972 - Add to 2 , for cymbal

01:27:772 (87772|0) - Delete, This Grace doesn't need

double on it's end

01:32:872 - Add to 3, just like you had done before for

this pattern

02:14:272 (134272|1) - Delete
02:14:572 - Add to 3

02:15:772 (135772|2) - Delete, Triple is enough maybe

03:30:171 - Add to 1
[Rumi's 7K MX]
00:46:522 - 00:46:822 - Triple here seems good

00:59:272 (59272|1) - Move to 1, and Add note on 4
00:59:872 - Add to 4

01:01:072 - 1/4 Stream here seems fine

01:31:372 - 4Notes Here seems fine too

01:54:997 - There should be double here, maybe on 3 n 6

01:57:772 - Add to 7
02:52:972 - ^

03:04:972 (184972|3,184972|6) - Move one coloumn left

03:25:671 (205671|2,205671|0,205671|5) - Change to |1|3|5|7|, that's should be fit with the cymbal too


Good Luck ~

I Love this Song <3
Rumia-
2,513 posts
Joined July 2012
Rumia-

DE-CADE wrote:

[Rumi's 7K MX]
00:46:522 - 00:46:822 - Triple here seems good added at 00:46:747

00:59:272 (59272|1) - Move to 1, and Add note on 4 moved to 2 didnt add at 4 , crowdy
00:59:872 - Add to 4 ^

01:01:072 - 1/4 Stream here seems fine dont want to focus on the stream for this chorus

01:31:372 - 4Notes Here seems fine too prefered 3

01:54:997 - There should be double here, maybe on 3 n 6 no , making a layer of bass and snare

01:57:772 - Add to 7
02:52:972 - ^ added both

03:04:972 (184972|3,184972|6) - Move one coloumn left prefered to keep as my personal pattern view

03:25:671 (205671|2,205671|0,205671|5) - Change to |1|3|5|7|, that's should be fit with the cymbal too i dont think so


Good Luck ~

I Love this Song <3
thanks for mod!
Icing_wind
164 posts
Joined February 2014
Icing_wind

victorica_db wrote:

irc with ic V1.0版本
22:10 Icing_wind: 豆包哥
22:10 Icing_wind: 好了
22:10 victorica_db: .
22:10 Icing_wind: 0.0
22:10 victorica_db: 有改过么
22:11 Icing_wind: 没。。 刚刚重启了。。。。
22:11 victorica_db: ...
22:11 victorica_db: 那开始把 今天先写第一分钟。。
22:12 Icing_wind: 好
22:12 victorica_db: /.\看效率 块的话2分钟
22:12 victorica_db: 慢的话就1分钟了
22:12 Icing_wind: 是改原来的还是要remap
22:12 victorica_db: 00:01:373 (1373|3,1373|1,1672|1,1672|3) - 单note。
22:12 victorica_db: 改原来的
22:13 Icing_wind: 呼...
22:13 Icing_wind: 改好啦
22:13 victorica_db: 00:02:422 - +1个note
22:14 Icing_wind: 嗯
22:14 victorica_db: 00:02:722 - 从这里开始取另外一个音 不要鼓点和那个混取 感觉不是太好
22:15 victorica_db: 00:06:172 -
22:15 victorica_db: 到这里都是一样的
22:15 victorica_db: 和我上面说的一样
22:15 Icing_wind: 好
22:16 victorica_db: 00:06:172 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1997202
22:17 victorica_db: 00:07:372 - 这里开始回归02.772一样的
22:18 victorica_db: 00:13:368 - 00:21:772 - 这一段要没只写钢琴 要么写人声 看你喜欢
22:19 victorica_db: 00:22:072 - 00:22:222 - 加一个note
22:21 victorica_db: 00:22:972 - 这里开始全半段的人声不要去 放鼓点 后边段写人声 举个例子 我放QQ上
22:22 victorica_db: 00:32:572 - 到这都和上面一样
22:22 Icing_wind: 嗯嗯
22:23 victorica_db: 00:32:572 - 00:49:372 - 这段全部写鼓点
22:23 victorica_db: 鼓点的变化足够能满足NM了
22:26 victorica_db: 00:49:372 - 看QQ
22:26 Icing_wind: 嗯
22:26 victorica_db: 00:51:772 - 这里开是鼓点全错
22:26 victorica_db: 开始
22:26 victorica_db: 仔细听
22:27 victorica_db: 用鼓点加人声 ka ku xi ko do 这个人声才写出来 其他以鼓点为主
22:28 victorica_db: 好 今天先到这。。
22:28 victorica_db: 你全部改完明天在找我check一下
噗。。豆包哥。。。hhhhh
Icing_wind
164 posts
Joined February 2014
Icing_wind

DE-CADE wrote:

Hi here's Little Mod for your mania Chart, Sharlo <3

Checked with Mod above and no double Mod with it

[Ic's 4K NM]
00:46:972 - Add Note to 4

00:50:572 (50572|0) - Move to 3 and then 00:50:722

(50722|2) - Change to double on col 1 n 4

01:01:372 (61372|2) - Change to double on col 2 n 4

01:05:947 - 01:06:022 - Add note maybe, Stair is good here

01:10:972 - Add to 1

01:54:322 (114322|3) - Move to 3, avoid the LN above

02:04:972 - Add to 4

02:08:572 (128572|1) - Move to 1
02:09:172 (129172|3) - Move to 2
^ These double suits with the vocal itself

02:36:172 - Add note for cymbal

02:46:372 (166372|3) - Move to 3

03:22:971 - Add to 1

03:30:171 - Add to 4

03:49:371 - Add to 1
ok~ :D
Bruce
1,076 posts
Joined January 2013
Bruce
Thanks Modders.Here is change http://puu.sh/c2RgO/f8867c6e92.osu
shionelove
1,521 posts
Joined September 2010
shionelove
memememememememeowmeow
column 1234 1234567
BPM=200.001?200.000?

4K
[Ic's 4K NM]
00:08:422 (8422|3) - conflict 00:03:622
00:51:172 (51172|1) - add 3? same sound as 00:51:022 (51022|3,51022|0) -
02:01:072 (121072|3) - move to 3?
02:30:772 (150772|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2109728
02:45:772 (165772|3,165772|2) - delete one
02:51:322 - add
[DB's4K MX]
00:10:972 (10972|1,10972|2) - delete one and 00:11:272 (11272|1) - delete><
00:22:522 (22522|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2109759(suggestion)
00:24:247 (24247|1) - conflict 01:32:572 (92572|0,92610|1) -
00:51:172 (51172|1) - add 1
01:52:672 (112672|0) - change LN like 00:44:272 (44272|2) -
01:57:172 (117172|1) - add 4
02:18:697 (138697|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2109790
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2109793 meow(i can't hear 1/6)
02:37:934 - add 2
02:49:672 (169672|1) - change short,02:50:272 (170272|3) - change LN
02:56:572 (176572|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2109809(1/3&1/6)
02:58:822 (178822|0) - delete
03:25:371 (205371|0) - delete?
03:33:171 (213171|2,213246|3,213321|2,213396|3,213471|2) - change 43434
03:44:271 (224271|1) - delete
03:52:071 (232071|1) - 1/8

7K
[S.Star's7K NM]
00:21:472 - add
00:40:072 (40072|2,40672|2) - move to 6?
01:39:022 (99022|5) - move to 5
[Rumi's7K MX]
00:26:947 (26947|2) - delete
00:31:747 (31747|4) - ^(3+3 sound)
00:59:272 (59272|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2109907
01:45:772 (105772|6) - add 1
02:16:522 - add
02:34:822 (154822|5,154859|4,154934|3) - meow?1/4 meowmeow
02:35:422 (155422|5,155459|4,155497|3,155534|2) - meow(1/4)
02:35:872 (155872|3,155909|2,155984|1,156022|0) - meow(1/4)
02:56:572 (176572|5) - to 02:57:584 (177584|5) - meow(1/3&1/6)
03:07:147 (187147|6) - start 03:07:072
03:13:147 - add 3
03:32:871 (212871|3) - delete and add 2?
03:39:471 (219471|6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2109935

meowmeowmeowmeowmeowmeowmeow
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
as ur req

RLC's Extra

  1. 00:12:023 (4,1) - too large ds here. i can see that u give consistent jumping before and they're good to me, thou this one's following those light piano beats and it's really not that necessary to give a really big jump here. move 00:12:173 (1,2,3) - to some places like 202,106 maybe.
  2. 00:50:573 (10,1,2,3) - here i recommend u set nc like this: 00:50:573 (10,1) - swap nc setting; 00:51:023 (2) - add nc. for u have a big 1/4 jump here 00:50:573 (10,1) - before a sudden pause at 00:51:023 (2,3) - , it's some kind of readding pattern and players may get confused if u give 1/4 ds as 00:50:573 (10,1) - and 1/2 ds as 00:51:023 (2,3) - . set nc like i said can be much better than this imo, making it easier to distinguish different patterns.
  3. 01:07:673 (2,1) - too large ds here. really like my 1st mod and maybe move 01:07:823 (1,2,3) - to 134,255, or just reverse the slider and stack those two notes at the head.
  4. 02:56:798 (1) - and 02:57:173 (1) - remove nc. it's really hard to judge those note's order in a sudden with really big jumps and hasty rhythm, thou i'm not a nc spam hater but this can be really effective to playing. highly recommend u fix this to give clear reading sets, or it'll be really confusing even to pros players.
  5. so hard, i can't play this well ;w;

Insane

  1. 01:05:423 (4,5) - larger ds. u already set anti jumps at 01:04:973 (1,2,3,4) - and give shorter ds here can be a bit weird since it's also a new section in vocal beats' track. just ctrl+g 01:05:573 (5) - and move it to 128,344, which can be great to me. if u wanna a consistent flow or some kind of fluent pattern, u can curve this slider like similiar arc to the stream 01:05:873 (6,7,8,9,1) - with a bit angle rorating 0.0
  2. 03:35:573 (4) - ctrl+g. u have lots of big jump in this kiai part, and this slider start wth a really heated beat, so 03:35:423 (3,4) - should gives a larger ds jump, note like u've set. as for flow, for ur 03:35:273 (2,3) - jumping, the anti-jump can be easily acceptable imo. with objs behind, 03:35:573 (4,5) - have a lager ds, but still fine to play with fine flow here. (i see u didn't refusing big 1/4 jumps like 03:44:123 (1,2) -
  3. sliders' speed changing is fine set in the diff to me as well.

wkyik's Insane

  1. 00:51:173 (3) - remove the whistle hs. here should be a really heavy beat in the song's original track imo, so maybe give a heavier hs instead.
  2. 00:59:573 (6,7,8,9,10) - why not ctrl+g? can be give better ds setting and making it more confortable to read pattern in playing.
  3. 01:02:573 (1) - offscreen's unrankble. change a place plz.
  4. 01:07:373 (1) - ctrl+g. u have set 01:05:873 (5,1) - with larger ds in similiar vocal melody and pattern in the song, why did shorter jump at 01:07:073 (4,1) - ? choose larger one as previous is better for the emotion this section's beats expressed. if u mind 01:07:373 (1,2) - 's ds's too short if u changed, maybe just move that note to 256,344 to avoid that and still keep similar ds to 01:07:973 (3) - .
  5. 03:13:973 (2) - ctrl+g. give anti-flow with 03:13:373 (1) - and 03:14:573 (1) - can be better if u insist the ds here, coz will express more emphasis aiming with big gaps here.
  6. 03:16:973 (1,2,3,4) - maybe ctrl+g these one by one? some kind of better to play for patterns' ds shifting with simple sliders.
  7. 03:40:223 (2,3) - too sudden big jump, why not choose same ds like 03:38:573 (1,2) - for similar vocals? or just did pattern for pattern? same to 03:41:423 (2,3) -
  8. still good to play

Fycho's Hard

  1. 00:13:373 (1) - quiet part from this have too much whistle hs, reduce some to express more silent feeling, rather than set them at all 1/1 ticks. and also maybe low down the hs volume here, coz somehow this part's really noisy to me with those hs.
  2. 03:30:473 (1) - ctrl+g? better ds setting to 03:29:573 (3,1) -, and 03:30:473 (1,2) - can be some kind of better as well (if u don't really insist that symm hit position so much
  3. fycho use symm patterns as well lol

Oracle's Normal

  1. 00:13:373 (1) - some kind of same to fycho's mod, low down the hs volume a bit at this part. same to 01:21:773 (1) - 's part as well.
  2. 00:25:373 (1,2) - it'll be great if u fix nazi issues like 00:25:373 (1,2) - 's blanket or something left else in lower diffs.
  3. 00:57:773 (3) - very wrong slider's end's rhythm is. drag it to white tick. and 01:28:973 (1) - , 02:38:573 (1,2) - too.
  4. 01:32:573 (3) - realy reach the top and score can overlap that imo... move the track's control point to 365,31 can be better.
  5. 01:45:773 (1,2,3) - still nazi but little suggestion: set those slider's head and the note in a line so the organization can be expressed and composing can be cleaner.
  6. 02:54:173 (3,4,1) - avoid this overlap is for what i mentioned above. and also why not give regular pentagon at 03:27:773 (1,2,3,4,1) - ?
  7. lol watch out detail thing if u care.

Narcissu's Easy

  1. 00:52:973 (3,4) - blanket. same to the whole diff, thou it's nazi, but players have long sliders always in lower diffs, cleaner composing can make them more enjoyble when playing.
  2. 02:41:273 this break time start from no where but the middle of that vocal section, which is a bit wrong to me. avoid that by removing 02:39:173 (1,2,3) - , or just fill the break time with objs. really weird to break that time imo.
  3. 02:55:373 (1) - end at 02:57:623. recently the spinner's end sets without following any beat in the song, which can be less acceptable than i suggested.
  4. and maybe u need set break time at 03:00:473
sharlo's vocal again lol

good luck
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