1. Hard (3,1 stars, 167 notes)
2. Maldita Sea! (4,81 stars, 148 notes)
3. Normal (2,37 stars, 199 notes)

After Dreams- wrote:

dame las gracias por los bpm heuhehuehe(?

intenta no poner notas en las partes azules ni que los sliders terminen hay(solo si pones streams podrias usarlos)

Ejemplo: 01:54:560 (10) -

Dejarlo asi


Si la dificultad AM sera hard , te recomiendo ponerle estas cosas en Song Setup


Lo demas esta bien , ojala te ranken el map

1. I've modded your GD on Ceph23's Light Song. There isn't much I can do for the actual maps before you fix some fundamental issues. You need 1 Easy/Normal Diff. Easy maps have a star rating below 1.5 and Normal is between 1.5~2.0
2. There aren't that many different timing points and BPMs for this song. Reduce the song to 50% and then 25% and make sure the ticks match perfectly to the song. It seems like you might have mistimed some sections so you overcompenstate with a slightly faster BPM, and then have overcompensate with a slower BPM.... alternating from 140->144->141->143. etc. I suggest you request the help of a BAT if you are adamant about getting this map ranked. If the BPM is truly changing that much, its extremely inconsistent and hard to play as Osu! is a rhythm game and requires strong beat syncopation & prediction.
3. Your naming scheme is a little odd. I don't quite follow. Usually, if you have an alternate naming scheme, it should still make sense and seem consistent holistically.
4. Remove the ? mark to the "Rock" Tag. You can consider adding the Album Title the song comes from into the tags as well.

1. Your overall mapping technique seems a little sporadic and random. I suggest you analyze some of your favorite techniques from similar genres of music. For example, I really like DnB and upbeat songs. So when I map, I use a few key maps as references/inspiration (Dear You - Rue, Calamity Fortune - Flower, Chasers - fanzhen0019, dreamenddischarger - AngelHoney). As beginner mappers, you and me, we should emulate the styles that have been found successful and favorable by the community. Once you understand the overall design of beatmaps, it will be much easier for you to incorporate your own twist and favor to it.
2. Here, you have some major timing issues. Even at 100% rate, i can hear disconnects in the music.

1. Seems like you only mapped the first few seconds of this. I suggest you map to the level at which you play. Or play test your map often as you map. Make sure that the flow is enjoyable and the combos and patterns interesting to play & visually pleasing. There is no point to playing Classic Osu! compared to something like Taiko or CTB if you don't make the hitcircles creative and fun!