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Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2015-01-26T17:22:16+00:00

sorry for delay

[Gerenal]

09:11:664 - this timing point offset should -20

[Marathon]

00:10:970 (1) - stack with 00:10:522 (4) - would better imo
00:14:552 (1) - ctrl+g
00:15:447 (1) - ^
00:17:686 (4) -
SPOILER
01:35:473 - downbeat here, so i think 01:35:266 (1) - should be start on 01:35:473 -
01:51:378 (6) - try x216 y348?
02:09:481 - missing clap here?
04:52:803 - whistle
04:54:107 - ^
05:11:553 (1) - i think didn't need sipnner here
06:07:387 (3) - nc
06:09:913 (3) - ^
06:10:861 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think you can try this jump pattern
SPOILER
06:30:405 (3,4) - this jump is kinda fast imo, maybe you can move to x472 y206
06:41:773 (3) - it's very hard to read on playing orz, move to x188 y56?
07:27:121 (9) - nc
09:01:833 (4,5) - ummm, try this rhythm?
SPOILER

overall it's is good
good luck

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2015-01-27T03:22:58+00:00

[Timing]
02:13:776 - 02:14:776 - these need -4
05:42:756 - need -5
06:56:774 - 06:57:405 - should be 190.1bpm
07:22:070 - 07:22:385 - need +6
07:48:438 - need -7
08:25:558 - need +4
09:11:664 - i wouldnt say this need -20, but -10 is necessary

[Marathon]
some green lines to snap
02:42:660 - snap to 02:42:662
03:50:215 - snap to 03:50:217
09:34:231 - snap to 09:34:238

00:09:626 (2) - clap on start
00:52:442 - you should add a red line here to fix the inaccurate snapping for the 1/4 sliders; remember to add one back at 00:53:123
01:05:079 (4,1) - these should be symmetrical on the y-axis
01:35:266 (1,2) - i had some trouble hitting this accurately due to the overly long slider messing up the rhythm. I recommend this instead:

SPOILER

02:10:171 (1) - the end should be snapped at 1/6 at 02:10:803. There are a lot of timing issues in this section, you should go consult some timing experts since I think the timing here can be improved.
03:33:777 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern flows really awkwardly due to the bad angle change at 03:34:110 (3,1). I recommend you do a ctrl+g on 03:34:110 (3,1)
03:35:110 (1) - this stream could use some hitsounding that stands out, its really hard to hit all 300s when feedback is very bland
05:04:052 (2) - clap should be here instead of 05:04:215 (3), and no clap on 05:04:541 (5)?
05:11:553 (1) - tone down the slider end, its really loud right now
05:35:753 (1) - this is overlapping the hp bar, might want to lower it a bit
06:11:335 (5,6,7,1) - the flow here is not very smooth, try to adjust it for a more natural curve:

SPOILER

06:43:037 (1,2,3,4) - i seriously thought this was a 1/4 stream when i first played it. To make it more readable, you can increase the spacing slightly to get rid of the overlaps, which indicate better that its an anti-jump. 06:46:826 (2,3,4,1) - this is fine because it belongs to a slower sv section
08:18:753 - timing here is really questionable, get someone to fine tune it
09:01:833 (4,5) - this pattern has a really awkward click action, you are better off adjusting it to two circles then a repeat slider at 09:01:986
09:02:292 (1) - i really dont recommend putting such a long and fast stream near the end of a compilation, consider swapping out one of the combos for a set of repeat sliders
09:19:981 (1) - forgot a clap at the end (and whistle)

The map itself is great, however there are many timing issues that warrants further investigation. See if you can get someone good at timing to go over this for you.

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-01-27T05:11:51+00:00

Kocari

Kocari wrote:
Sorry here as requested. Took a while to get back to you and I apologize. Had many mods to go through, but I'm here now with lemonade in one hand

I wanted to point out that there isn't a SB and I can help you with that just pm me if you need it and I'll get it done. Reasoning is so people can tell the BPM changes while playing and that can help them while some don't.

[I like Pho] I love it <3

03:28:777 (2) - I wouldn't make this close to 03:27:777 (3,5,1) because that sequence has it's own thing going on so moving the slider back away from it is like respect in its own way otherwise you can keep it the same I thinhttps://osu.ppy.sh/forum/posting.ph ... =3693443#k I get your point lol. Reworked my whole section anyway.
03:37:776 (1) - I would make slider conistent on both ends so it flows consistently with how the music plays out and since no sound shows up during the slider I feel representing that it a way would be nice Allright~
09:19:981 (1) - Whistle on tail to continue pattern Done.

Nice map from each individual mapping. nano.Ripe sure is something else when she sings Hope to see this ranked in the near future ganbate We should do moar stuff like this then /o/

[box=Xinchii]

Xinchii wrote:
Owe you a mod from queue xD
Let's GO ~

Hana no Iro - Pho
03:21:777(1) - Slider incomplete overlapping with 03:20:777(2) - ? Reworked already.
03:34:276(1,2,3) - Ctrl+G here ? It may highlight 03:34:276 - 's strong beat
also make symmetry with 03:34:776(1) - cus you do jump here too.
03:42:443(5) - try x:351|y:252 , it's better symmetry in 03:41:776(1,2,3,4,5) - this part. I don't really see a problem with the current position, keep

Plz rank this
it's Awesome !!

Knotts

Knotts wrote:
M4Mmmmm this is tasty

Marathon[list]
[*]03:22:277 (2,1) - Bad looking overlap Reworked already.
[*]03:30:776 (4,3) - Blanket? Reworked already.
[*]03:39:110 (1) - Strange looking slider art lol Uh yeah, i fixed it up lol.
[*]03:40:777 (2,1,1) - This looks more appealing to me Reworked already.
[*]03:40:777 (2) - Maybe NC on this I don't really think it's needed.
[*]03:41:943 (2,4) - There's no sound on this so maybe change 03:41:777 (1,3) - into 1/2 sliders or change 03:41:777 (1) - into a 1/1 Nice catch, changed into 1/2.
[*]03:42:110 (3,1) - Why overlap? Maybe blanket the stream to that circle Reworked already.
[*]03:44:443 (1) - NC

lfj

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Timing]
02:13:776 - 02:14:776 - these need -4
05:42:756 - need -5
06:56:774 - 06:57:405 - should be 190.1bpm
07:22:070 - 07:22:385 - need +6
07:48:438 - need -7
08:25:558 - need +4
09:11:664 - i wouldnt say this need -20, but -10 is necessary -10ms sounds more reasonable yup, sry wkyik. What troubles me though are these 09:27:100 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - beats that clearly need proper timing (cuz nano.RIPE doesn't know how to use metronome properly =.=)

[Marathon]
some green lines to snap
02:42:660 - snap to 02:42:662
03:50:215 - snap to 03:50:217
09:34:231 - snap to 09:34:238 02:10:803. There are a lot of timing issues in this section, you should go consult some timing experts since I think the timing here can be improved.
03:33:777 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern flows really awkwardly due to the bad angle change at 03:34:110 (3,1). I recommend you do a ctrl+g on 03:34:110 (3,1) Reworked whole section already.
03:35:110 (1) - this stream could use some hitsounding that stands out, its really hard to hit all 300s when feedback is very bland Added drumkicks and volume changes, that should do it.
09:19:981 (1) - forgot a clap at the end (and whistle) Done.

The map itself is great, however there are many timing issues that warrants further investigation. See if you can get someone good at timing to go over this for you.

Thanks for all the mods guys!

No comment = fixed.

Hana no Iro

Extra timing sections:

189777,333.333333333333,4,2,2,80,1,0
215110,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
215443,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
215776,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
216443,-200,4,2,2,50,0,0
220776,-200,4,2,2,60,0,0
221110,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,70,0,0
221443,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,80,0,0
221776,-100,4,2,2,80,0,0

Diff:

346,61,192444,5,8,0:0:0:0:
431,146,192611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,172,192777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,114,192944,5,8,0:0:0:0:
66,203,193111,1,0,3:0:0:0:
182,231,193277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,233,193444,5,8,0:0:0:0:
400,351,193610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,299,193777,2,0,L|220:312,3,50,0|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,368,194110,2,0,L|108:344,3,50,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
116,340,194444,5,0,3:0:0:0:
94,319,194527,1,0,3:0:0:0:
80,292,194610,1,0,3:0:0:0:
72,262,194694,1,0,3:0:0:0:
72,232,194777,1,0,3:0:0:0:
79,203,194860,1,0,3:0:0:0:
95,177,194944,1,0,3:0:0:0:
119,159,195027,1,0,3:0:0:0:
148,154,195110,6,0,P|184:182|253:185,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,124,195443,2,0,P|362:62|346:1,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,68,195777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,208,195944,1,0,3:0:0:0:
330,128,196110,1,10,0:0:0:0:
204,72,196277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,220,196444,6,0,P|236:289|325:383,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,334,196944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,163,197110,2,0,P|485:103|478:57,1,100
367,165,197444,2,0,P|374:213|405:252,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,369,197777,6,0,P|277:377|226:369,1,100
57,257,198110,2,0,P|109:251|166:260,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,371,198444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,226,198610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,302,198777,1,10,0:0:0:0:
345,125,198944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,204,199110,6,0,L|452:96,1,100
353,37,199444,2,0,P|294:29|245:45,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,199694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,199777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,108,199944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,155,200110,1,10,0:0:0:0:
155,270,200277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
38,161,200444,6,0,P|24:101|38:38,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,188,200777,1,10,0:0:0:0:
146,188,200944,2,0,P|187:192|266:220,1,100
288,304,201276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,369,201444,2,0,P|162:365|87:343,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,285,201777,6,0,P|264:297|374:332,1,200,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,332,202277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,170,202443,2,0,P|287:182|397:217,1,200,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,217,202944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,169,203110,6,0,P|179:125|177:75,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,41,203443,2,0,L|380:41,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,243,203777,2,0,P|221:275|167:285,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,243,204110,2,0,P|93:189|89:131,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
23,41,204444,5,8,0:0:0:0:
9,159,204610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,175,204777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,55,204944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,163,205110,5,0,3:3:0:0:
93,202,205194,1,0,3:3:0:0:
106,240,205277,1,0,3:3:0:0:
125,274,205360,1,0,3:3:0:0:
154,301,205444,1,0,3:3:0:0:
188,319,205527,1,0,3:3:0:0:
227,319,205610,1,0,3:3:0:0:
266,310,205694,1,0,3:3:0:0:
299,290,205777,6,0,P|340:249|364:202,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,77,206110,2,8,P|322:80|274:102,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,32,206444,2,0,P|73:107|92:202,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,233,206943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,173,207110,6,0,P|279:117|278:71,1,100
356,235,207443,2,0,P|343:290|345:337,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,214,207777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,74,207943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,34,208110,1,10,0:0:0:0:
260,174,208277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,106,208443,6,0,P|372:60|366:-2,1,100
140,13,208776,2,0,P|140:63|166:106,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,174,209110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,174,209277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,232,209443,1,10,0:0:0:0:
436,232,209610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,226,209777,6,0,P|336:274|367:313,1,100
444,126,210110,2,0,P|387:125|334:158,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,225,210443,2,0,P|175:274|144:313,1,100
68,126,210776,2,0,P|124:125|178:158,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,380,211110,6,0,B|222:295|287:246|252:177,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,76,211610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,76,211777,2,0,P|455:54|511:66,1,100
439,259,212110,2,0,P|446:203|447:146,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,310,212443,6,0,P|301:271|303:199,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,109,212777,1,10,0:0:0:0:
230,73,212943,2,0,P|180:68|124:74,1,100
259,254,213277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,254,213443,2,0,P|273:209|270:141,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,127,213777,5,12,0:0:0:0:
89,229,213943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,286,214110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,127,214276,5,12,0:0:0:0:
430,229,214442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,286,214609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,199,214777,5,12,0:0:0:0:
335,199,214943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,37,215110,5,8,3:2:0:0:
239,37,215193,1,0,3:0:0:0:
219,39,215276,1,0,3:0:0:0:
199,44,215360,1,0,3:2:0:0:
181,52,215443,1,8,3:2:0:0:
164,62,215526,1,0,3:0:0:0:
148,75,215610,1,0,3:0:0:0:
134,89,215693,1,0,3:0:0:0:
122,105,215776,5,8,0:0:0:0:
113,123,215860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
106,141,215943,1,8,0:0:0:0:
101,161,216026,1,8,0:0:0:0:
99,181,216110,1,8,0:0:0:0:
101,200,216193,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,219,216276,1,8,0:0:0:0:
109,238,216360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,256,216443,6,0,P|202:320|306:306,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,236,217443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,103,217776,6,0,B|298:102|256:143|256:143|210:97|153:99,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,136,218777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,264,219110,6,0,B|146:286|162:325|162:325|206:320|206:320|246:342|287:331,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,233,220110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,171,220443,5,2,0:0:0:0:
389,171,220777,2,0,P|361:168|335:154,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,164,221110,6,0,P|201:145|232:146,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,276,221443,6,0,P|292:321|268:342,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,331,221776,6,0,L|104:211,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,210,222110,2,0,L|243:87,1,100
127,47,222443,2,0,P|101:50|72:59,3,50,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
106,153,222776,2,0,P|88:172|71:197,3,50,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
159,251,223110,5,0,3:0:0:0:
138,272,223193,1,0,3:0:0:0:
127,301,223277,1,0,3:0:0:0:
136,329,223360,1,0,3:0:0:0:
157,349,223443,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,360,223527,1,0,3:0:0:0:
213,358,223610,1,0,3:0:0:0:
236,338,223693,1,0,3:0:0:0:
246,310,223777,5,8,0:3:0:0:
329,174,223943,1,8,0:3:0:0:
178,229,224110,1,4,0:3:0:0:
331,275,224277,1,4,0:3:0:0:
233,149,224443,1,4,0:2:0:0:
130,144,230438,6,0,L|180:175,1,59.9999981689454,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:

Last line is from your part Milan, I needed to copy since I repositioned the last circle on my section.

Rain Curtain

Extra timings:
Uh, just move the redline here by -10ms as lfj said and snap the greenline at 09:33:634 - lol.

Diff:

114,68,555219,5,4,0:0:0:0:
114,68,555367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,68,555516,2,0,P|104:130|114:168,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,345,555813,2,0,P|235:284|220:245,1,100
112,164,556110,2,0,P|59:166|9:205,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,320,556407,5,0,0:0:0:0:
79,320,556555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
79,320,556704,2,0,B|157:222,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,96,557001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,96,557149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,96,557298,2,0,P|259:142|255:191,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,294,557595,6,0,P|400:336|432:224,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,558040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
57,247,558189,2,0,P|86:331|167:294,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,558634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,558783,6,0,P|256:28|176:80,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,305,559377,2,0,P|358:258|403:248,1,100
466,189,559674,2,0,P|474:141|463:78,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,104,559971,6,0,B|248:145|248:145|156:96,1,200,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,560417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,560565,2,0,B|88:192|88:192|152:232,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,332,560862,2,0,B|300:356|300:356|352:356,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,232,561159,6,0,P|432:176|304:120,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,64,561605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,64,561753,2,0,P|160:108|168:132,1,100
164,264,562050,2,0,P|134:303|87:318,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,562347,6,0,L|280:192,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,562793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,562941,2,0,B|416:96|416:96|384:144,1,100
252,284,563238,2,0,B|252:236|252:236|284:188,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,284,563535,6,0,B|408:356|344:356|344:356|256:356,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,316,563981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,244,564129,2,0,P|96:164|116:128,1,100
240,20,564426,2,0,P|240:100|220:136,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,564723,6,0,P|240:304|388:312,1,200,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,176,565169,1,0,0:0:0:0:
494,114,565318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,34,565466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,44,565615,1,10,0:0:0:0:
345,132,565763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,228,565912,6,0,P|255:291|192:228,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,132,566356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,44,566504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,34,566653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
18,114,566801,1,10,0:0:0:0:
84,176,566950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,184,567100,6,0,B|284:184|284:184|344:220|344:220|424:220,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,116,567545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,24,567694,2,0,P|336:88|336:132,1,100
228,356,567991,2,0,P|256:292|256:248,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,28,568288,6,0,P|60:96|128:180,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,568733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,129,568882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,129,569030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,129,569179,2,0,L|359:109,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,192,569476,6,0,B|364:208|364:208|308:232|308:316,1,200,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,292,569921,2,0,P|460:240|400:108,1,200
256,44,570367,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,44,570516,6,0,B|220:104|296:176|256:240,1,200
172,184,570961,1,10,0:0:0:0:
172,184,571110,2,0,P|264:140|348:196,1,200
256,336,571555,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,336,571704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,315,571852,6,0,P|77:307|37:279,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,211,572149,2,0,P|256:203|300:175,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,28,572446,2,0,P|141:88|169:108,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,107,572743,2,0,P|380:75|395:28,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,573040,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,156,573189,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,176,573337,1,8,0:3:0:0:
256,196,573486,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,216,573634,6,0,P|220:228|324:288,1,300.000011444092,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

GET A SB ALREADY >.<

Mint

1,607 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-01-27T16:21:45+00:00

Xinchii

Owe you a mod from queue xD
Let's GO ~

[General]

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[Marathon]
Esoragoto - appleeaterx GOD you are my mod idol lool

>//<

04:44:976(4) - incomplete overlapping with 04:43:998(4) - ? Fixed!

[/list]

Plz rank this
it's Awesome !!

Knotts

M4Mmmmm this is tasty

Marathon

02:25:442 (1,2) - These don't really look well together. I'd go for something symmetrical or parallel I like these wave sliders, they go well with the singers voice imo >_> will try to make something else if it gets mentioned again
04:48:237 (1) - Move to (295, 298) for the pentagon
04:48:237 (1,2,3,4) - This might feel better to play than what you have currently i like your pattern! tried to make something similar (also fixed the suggestion above when i was adjusting this pattern)
04:55:900 (6,1) - Make this have the same spacing as 04:55:247 (3,4) - i get what you mean, but it plays fine imo
05:11:553 (1) - Start spinner at 05:11:471 - sure why not!

Kawaiwkyik

sorry for delay

[Gerenal]

09:11:664 - this timing point offset should -20

[Marathon]

02:09:481 - missing clap here?
04:52:803 - whistle
04:54:107 - ^
05:11:553 (1) - i think didn't need sipnner here ill remove it when it gets mentioned again

rest is fixed!
overall it's is good
good luck

jonathanlfj

[Timing]
02:13:776 - 02:14:776 - these need -4

will leave this to milan!

[Marathon]

05:04:052 (2) - clap should be here instead of 05:04:215 (3), and no clap on 05:04:541 (5)?

fixed!
05:11:553 (1) - tone down the slider end, its really loud right now

i think you were talking about the spinner, but sure!

The map itself is great, however there are many timing issues that warrants further investigation. See if you can get someone good at timing to go over this for you.

Thanks for modding all

@Milan: can you fix the timing for me, and silence the spinner end at 05:11:471 (1) - owo?

Song #1

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360,72,137775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,152,137942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,248,138109,2,0,L|264:240,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,216,138441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,296,138608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,152,138775,6,0,P|320:96|320:56,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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128,80,139442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,96,139608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,139775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,240,139941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,140109,6,2,P|408:88|440:104,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,96,143775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,80,143942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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421,164,146775,5,2,0:0:0:0:
362,303,146942,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,108,147108,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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215,190,147441,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,128,147608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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353,128,147775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
278,258,147942,1,8,0:0:0:0:
278,258,148025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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363,221,148608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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294,177,149108,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,177,149275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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345,88,149776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
345,88,149942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,56,150108,2,0,P|128:56|80:52,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,150442,2,0,P|256:176|304:180,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,150775,6,0,P|180:284|104:212,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,32,151275,2,0,P|268:104|196:180,1,170.000003242493,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,72,151775,2,2,L|192:88,1,85.0000016212464,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,168,152108,5,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,152275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,60,152441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,224,152608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,152775,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,110,152941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,240,153108,1,12,0:0:0:0:
444,264,153275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,144,153442,6,0,P|184:204|200:312,2,170.000003242493,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,168,154275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,240,154441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,116,154608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,264,154775,6,0,P|456:204|440:96,1,170.000003242493,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,156108,5,6,0:0:0:0:

Song #2

64,220,281389,5,8,0:0:0:0:
72,238,281470,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,257,281552,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,277,281633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
98,297,281715,6,0,P|156:309|206:305,1,89.9999972534181,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,138,282041,2,0,P|168:179|152:217,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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128,64,282693,2,0,L|223:51,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,68,283019,6,0,P|381:126|406:192,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,297,283345,2,0,P|281:238|256:172,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,230,283671,2,0,P|406:242|340:267,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,138,283997,2,0,P|260:125|326:100,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,230,284324,6,0,P|472:172|472:124,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,280,284650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,176,284813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,138,284976,2,0,P|209:196|209:244,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,88,285302,1,8,0:0:0:0:
110,192,285465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,285628,6,0,P|188:332|80:292,1,179.999994506836,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,138,286117,2,0,P|271:118|379:158,1,179.999994506836,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,252,286607,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,324,286769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,324,286851,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,324,286932,6,0,P|312:332|268:340,1,89.9999972534181,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,204,287258,2,0,P|192:212|236:220,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,244,287584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,136,287747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,152,287911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,217,288074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,297,288237,6,0,P|245:318|199:320,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,306,288563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,306,288726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,153,288889,2,0,P|202:180|228:229,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,199,289215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,92,289378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,289541,6,0,P|296:52|340:44,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,144,289867,2,0,P|404:148|360:156,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,217,290193,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,272,290356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,290519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
370,153,290682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,304,290845,6,0,P|160:332|64:316,1,179.999994506836,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,160,291334,2,0,P|240:132|336:148,1,179.999994506836,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,143,291742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
325,143,291824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,276,291987,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,276,292068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,276,292150,6,0,L|468:176,1,89.9999972534181,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,143,292476,2,0,L|339:242,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,280,292802,2,0,L|212:180,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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136,188,294269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,144,294432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,60,294595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,32,294758,6,0,L|376:24,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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488,96,295247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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104,128,295737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Yauxo

1,622 posts

Joined June 2011

Yauxo 2015-01-27T21:46:59+00:00

Too lazy to edit the quote OpieOP

Added the clap and did something to that other combo. Sent my map to Milan-

I forgot the other mod fuck STOP THE TRAIN

edit:

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Marathon]
00:10:970 (1) - stack with 00:10:522 (4) - would better imo I want this to have a new combo/slowdown effect (which is why it has less DS)
00:14:552 (1) - ctrl+g well, why not
00:15:447 (1) - ^ not this one though
00:17:686 (4) - This is the first time ever Iam mapping a "flow" like this. It better works out
SPOILER
01:35:473 - downbeat here, so i think 01:35:266 (1) - should be start on 01:35:473 - changed with other mod

edit2:

Knotts wrote:
M4Mmmmm this is tasty

[notice]Marathon[list]
00:15:447 (1) - I'd lower this a little for better flow and a bigger jump like 00:14:104 (2,3,1,1) - fuck it, ctrl+g (i literally just denied that in the other mod, guess I change fast)
00:17:238 (3,4) - Seem's out of place because most of this song has a lot more spacing between sliders. fixed with other mid
00:20:597 (3,1) - Nazi overlap
00:23:507 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:17:238 (3,4) changed
00:24:850 (4,3) - Can you get rid of this tiny overlap :3 Just move (4) down a little
00:27:761 (3,1) - Flow's a little awkward. I like thismore Ive got a hard time accepting the 1->2->3 then though :v Will think about later
00:41:166 (2,3) - Curving (3) like this might look better. The jump to the stack isn't really that hard so it should be fine if you choose to do this
01:18:922 (1) - All these extended sliders like this one make you skip the clap and the overall song is really quiet to due to all the missing claps I dont really feel like mapping it differently though. I think the vocals add a nice flowy element in here with these parts and I really want to keep them :v
01:36:094 (3) - Slider makes you miss 01:36:197 - changed to something

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Milan- 2015-01-28T03:28:52+00:00

Kawaiwkyik

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
sorry for delay

[Gerenal]
09:11:664 - this timing point offset should -20
[Marathon]
01:51:378 (6) - try x216 y348? the flow towards 1 isnt good then ><
02:09:481 - missing clap here? i believe it's not a snare but a kick
06:07:387 (3) - nc i guess so
06:09:913 (3) - ^ it's readable enough imo
06:10:861 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think you can try this jump pattern did something
SPOILER
06:30:405 (3,4) - this jump is kinda fast imo, maybe you can move to x472 y206 did something><
06:41:773 (3) - it's very hard to read on playing orz, move to x188 y56? :3
07:27:121 (9) - nck
09:01:833 (4,5) - ummm, try this rhythm? did something
SPOILER
overall it's is good <3
good luck

jonathanlfj

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Timing]
02:13:776 - 02:14:776 - these need -4
05:42:756 - need -5
06:56:774 - 06:57:405 - should be 190.1bpm
07:22:070 - 07:22:385 - need +6
07:48:438 - need -7
08:25:558 - need +4
09:11:664 - i wouldnt say this need -20, but -10 is necessary all done

[Marathon]
some green lines to snap
02:42:660 - snap to 02:42:662 .663 according to my screen:o
03:50:215 - snap to 03:50:217 k
09:34:231 - snap to 09:34:238 09:34:228 after timming change

00:52:442 - you should add a red line here to fix the inaccurate snapping for the 1/4 sliders; remember to add one back at 00:53:123
01:05:079 (4,1) - these should be symmetrical on the y-axis did it on purpuse to make 01:04:209 (2,3) - symmetrical and keep DS, i think xd
02:10:171 (1) - the end should be snapped at 1/6 at 02:10:803. There are a lot of timing issues in this section, you should go consult some timing experts since I think the timing here can be improved. ok):
05:35:753 (1) - this is overlapping the hp bar, might want to lower it a bit it's fine on my screen http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2627681
06:11:335 (5,6,7,1) - the flow here is not very smooth, try to adjust it for a more natural curve:
SPOILER
did something><
06:43:037 (1,2,3,4) - i seriously thought this was a 1/4 stream when i first played it. To make it more readable, you can increase the spacing slightly to get rid of the overlaps, which indicate better that its an anti-jump. 06:46:826 (2,3,4,1) - this is fine because it belongs to a slower sv section uhm did something hope it's better lol
08:18:753 - timing here is really questionable, get someone to fine tune it
09:01:833 (4,5) - this pattern has a really awkward click action, you are better off adjusting it to two circles then a repeat slider at 09:01:986 ok
09:02:292 (1) - i really dont recommend putting such a long and fast stream near the end of a compilation, consider swapping out one of the combos for a set of repeat sliders ok ;w; hope it's better now

The map itself is great, however there are many timing issues that warrants further investigation. See if you can get someone good at timing to go over this for you.

Thank you <3

I was talking with pishi the other day and yeah timming is bad at many places >< ill see what i can do here orz.

btw u guys should recheck if i didnt mess something up, (specially pho >.>)

TicClick

Global Moderator

4,416 posts

Joined February 2011

TicClick 2015-02-03T17:16:59+00:00

So I finally beat the antipathy I had (and which I still have) toward this awful voice and fixed the timing. Replace all your red lines with this (Ctrl+C → Ctrl+V in Timing Panel (F6)):

SPOILER

224,447.761194029851,4,2,1,73,1,0
33776,434.782608695652,4,2,1,80,1,0
33993,434.782608695652,4,2,1,80,1,0
52442,434.782608695652,4,2,1,85,1,0
53123,434.782608695652,4,2,1,78,1,0
68991,413.793103448276,4,2,1,80,1,0
104310,344.827586206897,4,2,1,80,1,0
104654,344.827586206897,4,2,1,83,1,0
133801,333.333333333333,4,1,2,80,1,0
134801,333.333333333333,4,1,2,80,1,0
139105,333.333333333333,4,2,2,80,1,0
140105,333.333333333333,4,2,2,75,1,0
159400,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,0
160066,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,0
188787,333.333333333333,4,2,2,80,1,0
189787,333.333333333333,4,2,2,80,1,0
203110,333.333333333333,4,2,2,80,1,0
228012,441.176470588235,4,1,1,80,1,0
228453,441.176470588235,4,1,1,80,1,0
264418,441.176470588235,4,2,1,65,1,0
265511,441.176470588235,4,2,1,65,1,0
277484,326.086956521739,4,1,2,80,1,0
277810,326.086956521739,4,1,2,80,1,0
314051,319.148936170213,4,2,1,80,1,0
342751,315.789473684211,4,2,1,82,1,0
378721,315.789473684211,4,2,1,80,1,0
379668,315.789473684211,4,2,1,80,1,0
416774,315.623356128354,4,2,1,80,1,0
417405,315.623356128354,4,2,1,70,1,0
442086,315.789473684211,4,2,1,80,1,0
442401,315.789473684211,4,2,1,80,1,0
468431,315.789473684211,4,2,1,80,1,0
499042,315.789473684211,4,2,1,73,1,0
505562,306.122448979592,4,2,1,80,1,0
551654,297.029702970297,4,2,2,80,1,0
577489,285.714285714286,4,2,1,70,1,0
584331,280.373831775701,4,2,1,56,1,0
585452,292.682926829268,4,2,1,56,1,0
586037,288.461538461538,4,2,1,60,1,0
587774,285.714285714286,4,2,1,85,1,0

I didn't really follow what I changed, but I prefer to post the whole thing to make it clear, unless there's only one or two offsets changed. Just use it and see when AiMod starts spitting out unsnap warnings.

For reference, here's the diff (left is your timing, right is mine): https://www.diffchecker.com/6q8nfjrq

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Milan- 2015-02-03T21:36:56+00:00

!!
Thank you very much for the help! <3

Kimiko's voice is cute wtf>.>

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-02-03T22:12:52+00:00

Finish, drag all into folder

http://puu.sh/fr6Ef/8d118edbcd.rar

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-02-03T23:04:13+00:00

orz

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orz 2

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114,68,555367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,68,555516,2,0,P|104:130|114:168,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,345,555813,2,0,P|235:284|220:245,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,164,556110,2,0,P|59:166|9:205,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,320,556407,5,0,0:0:0:0:
79,320,556555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
79,320,556704,2,0,B|157:222,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,96,557001,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,96,557149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,96,557298,2,0,P|259:142|255:191,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,294,557595,6,0,P|400:336|432:224,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,558040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
57,247,558189,2,0,P|86:331|167:294,1,200,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,558634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,558783,6,0,P|256:28|176:80,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,305,559377,2,0,P|358:258|403:248,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
466,189,559674,2,0,P|474:141|463:78,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,104,559971,6,0,B|248:145|248:145|156:96,1,200,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,560417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,560565,2,0,B|88:192|88:192|152:232,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,332,560862,2,0,B|300:356|300:356|352:356,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,232,561159,6,0,P|432:176|304:120,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,64,561605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,64,561753,2,0,P|160:108|168:132,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,264,562050,2,0,P|134:303|87:318,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,562347,6,0,L|280:192,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,562793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,562941,2,0,B|416:96|416:96|384:144,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,284,563238,2,0,B|252:236|252:236|284:188,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,284,563535,6,0,B|408:356|344:356|344:356|256:356,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,316,563981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,244,564129,2,0,P|96:164|116:128,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,20,564426,2,0,P|240:100|220:136,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,564723,6,0,P|240:304|388:312,1,200,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,176,565169,1,0,0:0:0:0:
494,114,565318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,34,565466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,44,565615,1,10,0:0:0:0:
345,132,565763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,228,565912,6,0,P|255:291|192:228,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,132,566356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,44,566504,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,34,566653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
18,114,566801,1,10,0:0:0:0:
84,176,566950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,184,567100,6,0,B|284:184|284:184|344:220|344:220|424:220,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,116,567545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,24,567694,2,0,P|336:88|336:132,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,356,567991,2,0,P|256:292|256:248,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,28,568288,6,0,P|60:96|128:180,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,568733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
238,129,568882,1,2,0:0:0:0:
238,129,569030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,129,569179,2,0,L|359:109,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,192,569476,6,0,B|364:208|364:208|308:232|308:316,1,200,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,292,569921,2,0,P|460:240|400:108,1,200
256,44,570367,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,44,570516,6,0,B|220:104|296:176|256:240,1,200
172,184,570961,1,10,0:0:0:0:
172,184,571110,2,0,P|264:140|348:196,1,200
256,336,571555,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,336,571704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,315,571852,6,0,P|77:307|37:279,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,211,572149,2,0,P|256:203|300:175,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,28,572446,2,0,P|141:88|169:108,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,107,572743,2,0,P|380:75|395:28,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,573040,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,156,573189,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,176,573337,1,8,0:3:0:0:
256,196,573486,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,216,573634,6,0,P|220:228|324:288,1,300.000011444092,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2015-02-07T04:20:38+00:00

no kd

02:09:481 - add a 184 bpm red line here and resnap 02:09:481 (1,2) -
02:10:171 - add a 174 bpm red line here to restore timing

that should solve the last bit of concern i have with timing

Milan-

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Milan- 2015-02-07T04:32:50+00:00

Done xD

im gonna stop mapping bad timmed songs orz

Pho

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Pho 2015-02-07T04:40:51+00:00

Milan- wrote:
Done xD

im gonna stop mapping bad timmed songs orz

So you gonna stop mapping nano.RIPE?

Milan-

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Milan- 2015-02-07T04:44:27+00:00

yes.
last nano.ripe from me lol
<3

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2015-02-07T04:45:14+00:00

lol well looks fine on my end, here you go
#1

Milan-

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Milan- 2015-02-07T04:49:18+00:00

Yaiii <3
Thanks xd

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2015-02-07T12:08:50+00:00

-- Remove unused timeline at 02:20:104.
-- "SB\Songs\L10.png" not used! You must remove this file.

Fix these and get a rebubble from jonathan. Bye.

Xgor

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Xgor 2015-02-07T12:24:28+00:00

Xgor's bubbled SB checking goo!

There is absolutly no reason to have a black image behind anything as the default colour when the background it's disabled is black. Right now it just taking up 1.33x SB load at all time. You should just remove it from the SB and the image folder.

The scrolling background on 00:39:210 - 01:08:991(Edit: Woops forgot to write everything here... soo) goes off so you can see outside the background

There is unused transparency on all the images with transparency in the SB folder. Please crop them.

I noticed that BG11.jpg is very low res in the SB compared to the rest, I suggest you use a higher res version of that image or something else.

Well... there is some SB problems right now, I've popped it for now as I feel that the SB issues is major enough to warrant a pop.

Last edited by Xgor 2015-02-09T21:54:16+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Milan-

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Milan- 2015-02-07T19:38:39+00:00

fk
orz
~~The scrolling background on 00:39:210 - 01:08:991 " what does it mean?~~ Fixed all the stuff. Also did what sonnyc pointed out (im blacklisted, i cry ;w;)

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-03-05T03:37:08+00:00

Xgor wrote:
Xgor's bubbled SB checking goo!

There is absolutly no reason to have a black image behind anything as the default colour when the background it's disabled is black. Right now it just taking up 1.33x SB load at all time. You should just remove it from the SB and the image folder.

The scrolling background on 00:39:210 - 01:08:991(Edit: Woops forgot to write everything here... soo) goes off so you can see outside the background

There is unused transparency on all the images with transparency in the SB folder. Please crop them.

I noticed that BG11.jpg is very low res in the SB compared to the rest, I suggest you use a higher res version of that image or something else.

Well... there is some SB problems right now, I've popped it for now as I feel that the SB issues is major enough to warrant a pop.

i hope u plan to rebubble this though :/

btw fav part 04:41:396 - gj apple

Xgor

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Xgor 2015-03-06T21:34:56+00:00

Sorry for not doing this eariler, Been focused on things outside osu!

Milan-

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Milan- 2015-03-06T22:30:42+00:00

Xgor wrote:
Sorry for not doing this eariler, Been focused on things outside osu!

It's ok, it's just me being hasty xd
Thanks <3

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DakeDekaane 2015-03-10T06:19:13+00:00

eeeee

mfw

Not for being picky, but you should fix your Collab Members tags with their correct capitalization (Yauxo, Pho, Kocari).

Tsukikage to Buranko
00:05:597 (1) - These 3/4 aren't really supported by the song, as there's no held note or similar to justify it, the vocals on the red tick are stronger so it feels weird passing over them
00:09:179 (1) - ^
00:30:671 (1) - Anyeason to have a NC here? NCs are used to separate rhythm sections/patterns, so having this alone is weird, when it belongs to the previous combo.

Zettaichi
00:41:166 (2,3) - Split this in something like the figure? Unless you're focusing on vocals, if that's the case, ignore this.

00:43:123 (3,4) - I think the triple could fit better being like this, listen how it'd follow to the vocals compared with what you have now.

00:44:644 (2,3,4,5) - These should be two 1/4 doubles, listen to the bass.
00:48:123 (2) - As 00:41:166 (2,3) -
00:49:971 (3,4) - As 00:43:123 (3,4) -
00:51:601 (2,3,4,5) - As 00:44:644 (2,3,4,5) -
00:59:209 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:03:557 (1,2) - Makes more sense the NC being on (2) than in (1). No big deal, but considering how the pace changes in (2) and not in (1), yeah.
01:05:296 (1) - Probably remove the NC here.

Tsuma Bikuhitori
01:16:232 (3) - This should be extended to 01:16:542 - , it'll match correctly the drums.
01:17:887 (3) - ^
01:18:922 (1) - And this should be 1/2 slider for the same reason.
01:22:232 (1) - ^
01:23:887 (1) - ^
01:29:473 (3) - As 01:16:232 (3) -
01:31:128 (3) - ^
01:32:163 (1) - As 01:18:922 (1) -
01:38:784 (1) - Remove NC?

Kage Fumi
02:10:171 (1) - *lolsuggestion* This should end 1/12 beat before the circle. It'd be the correct time for the held note.
02:10:171 (1) - *serious suggestion* Remove the circle and end the slider there.

Toumei na Sekai
02:43:899 (2,3) - This should be slider+circle, it would put the correct emphasis by clicking on the strongest beats.
02:43:899 (2,3) - Remove NC?

Hana no Iro
03:41:110 (3,4) - Although I see the intention of the NC, you can remove it and it won't do any change, and it'd be correct.

Esoragoto
05:11:396 (1) - Remove NC?

Virtual Boy
06:15:434 (1) - Remove NC?

Fault Finder
02:10:171 (1) - *lolsuggestion* This should end 1/8 beat before the circle. It'd be the correct time for the held note.
02:10:171 (1) - *serious suggestion* Remove the circle and end the slider there. Or put two circles.

Moratorium
07:18:867 (1) - Remove NC?

Moshimo no Hanashi
07:26:742 (4) - Stream should begin in 07:26:822 - , remove pls. You could also remove 07:26:663 (3) - .
07:45:137 (1) - Remove NC?

Nokuchiruka
08:19:989 (1) - Remove NC?

Real world
I have mixed feelings on parts like 08:29:694 (2,3,4) - , where the sliders begin on red ticks, I know you based this on the vocals, but the drums are stronger, so the player would naturally go for that (like 08:32:296 (3,4,1,2) - ). Just telling this for you to consider it.

Omokage Warp
10:03:774 (1) - Remove NC pls.

Not like I was getting lazier in the end, but there were no rhythm mistakes

Yauxo

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Yauxo 2015-03-10T19:00:58+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
eeeee

mfw

Not for being picky, but you should fix your Collab Members tags with their correct capitalization (Yauxo, Pho, Kocari).

Tsukikage to Buranko
00:05:597 (1) - These 3/4 aren't really supported by the song, as there's no held note or similar to justify it, the vocals on the red tick are stronger so it feels weird passing over them I originally mapped this like this so that it'd also support the vocals before/and the "Gatsu(tsu)" (I think? Iam bad at jp) itself. It has a nice effect imo. Give me a valid reason and I'll reconsider :3
00:09:179 (1) - ^
00:30:671 (1) - Anyeason to have a NC here? NCs are used to separate rhythm sections/patterns, so having this alone is weird, when it belongs to the previous combo.That's a basic NCing technique o.o The NC'd object would belong to the next combo if the song would continue on this point, which is the main reason for me. I dont like to have "8 hits (+1)" as opposed to a "8 hits" combo, if that makes sense. It also is a nice bonus HP refil.

Tsuma Bikuhitori
01:16:232 (3) - This should be extended to 01:16:542 - , it'll match correctly the drums.
01:17:887 (3) - ^ changed both
01:18:922 (1) - And this should be 1/2 slider for the same reason.
01:22:232 (1) - ^
01:23:887 (1) - ^ In my opinion, all of these are fine. They support the vocal lines as well as the, well, general major beat. Having 4 1/2 Sliders after another while the song allows for more is also really boring to play imo. But here again, give be a valid reason that I can follow up on and I might change this.
01:29:473 (3) - As 01:16:232 (3) -
01:31:128 (3) - ^ changed both
01:32:163 (1) - As 01:18:922 (1) - above
01:38:784 (1) - Remove NC? same as the other song

Thanks for modding

Milan-

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Milan- 2015-03-10T20:49:54+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
eeeee

mfw

Not for being picky, but you should fix your Collab Members tags with their correct capitalization (Yauxo, Pho, Kocari). ahahahda moved kocari at the beggining xd (i thought capital letters doesnt matter on tags(? anyways done)

Zettaichi
00:41:166 (2,3) - Split this in something like the figure? Unless you're focusing on vocals, if that's the case, ignore this. Yes, im trying to cover vocals here, and it's constant all over the song. And not only vocals but the melody this song has.

00:43:123 (3,4) - I think the triple could fit better being like this, listen how it'd follow to the vocals compared with what you have now. for the same reason as above, i think it's better how it's now, constant and following the melody. In addition that the vocals on that spot aren't really strong and noticiable ><

00:44:644 (2,3,4,5) - These should be two 1/4 doubles, listen to the bass. Is it what you mean http://puu.sh/guTJR/4b586494e4.jpg ?I think the current one is fine, cuz i focus a lot on the melody/music (dont know how it's called)
00:48:123 (2) - As 00:41:166 (2,3) -
00:49:971 (3,4) - As 00:43:123 (3,4) -
00:51:601 (2,3,4,5) - As 00:44:644 (2,3,4,5) -
00:59:209 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:03:557 (1,2) - Makes more sense the NC being on (2) than in (1). No big deal, but considering how the pace changes in (2) and not in (1), yeah. I just want to be constant with my nc ;w;. Also i think the pace changes on 1 cuz from 2 it's just resonance from the cymbal on 1 (or am i drunk?)
01:05:296 (1) - Probably remove the NC here. i like to add nc to the end :3 cuz constancy
humm altho i didnt change rhythms here, if you think im high or something just tell me >< cuz this song has almost constant 1/4 background noise so i tried just to cover the melody and vocals.

Kage Fumi
02:10:171 (1) - *lolsuggestion* This should end 1/12 beat before the circle. It'd be the correct time for the held note.
02:10:171 (1) - *serious suggestion* Remove the circle and end the slider there. I'd have used 1/12 /w\ (did this)

Toumei na Sekai
02:43:899 (2,3) - This should be slider+circle, it would put the correct emphasis by clicking on the strongest beats. did something else.
02:43:899 (2,3) - Remove NC? (was here a nc?) i added a nc to 02:44:400 (1) - for readablity, hope it's fine xd

Esoragoto
05:11:396 (1) - Remove NC? i dont think he'll do it, cuz he added it on the last update xD

Virtual Boy
06:15:434 (1) - Remove NC? i like to add nc to the end :3 cuz constancy

Fault Finder
02:10:171 (1) - *lolsuggestion* This should end 1/8 beat before the circle. It'd be the correct time for the held note.
02:10:171 (1) - *serious suggestion* Remove the circle and end the slider there. Or put two circles. i guess you meant 06:53:457 (4) - , extended the slider then :p

Moratorium
07:18:867 (1) - Remove NC? i like to add nc to the end :3 cuz constancy

Moshimo no Hanashi
07:26:742 (4) - Stream should begin in 07:26:822 - , remove pls. You could also remove 07:26:663 (3) - . removed 4 and moved things up :3
07:45:137 (1) - Remove NC? same asb4

Nokuchiruka
08:19:989 (1) - Remove NC? same

Real world
I have mixed feelings on parts like 08:29:694 (2,3,4) - , where the sliders begin on red ticks, I know you based this on the vocals, but the drums are stronger, so the player would naturally go for that (like 08:32:296 (3,4,1,2) - ). Just telling this for you to consider it. Uhm i think they are fine, i usually use offbeat sliders for stuff like this, and they play fine to me :3

Omokage Warp
10:03:774 (1) - Remove NC pls. i think it's fine to keep the constancy >< (or am i wrong?)

Not like I was getting lazier in the end, but there were no rhythm mistakes lazydake<3

also, pho said that the nc was fine.
Also changed the flow on the last song, it was a bit bad ><. Thank you! iluvuknow<3

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2015-03-11T05:06:57+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
DakeDekaane wrote:
Tsukikage to Buranko
00:05:597 (1) - These 3/4 aren't really supported by the song, as there's no held note or similar to justify it, the vocals on the red tick are stronger so it feels weird passing over them I originally mapped this like this so that it'd also support the vocals before/and the "Gatsu(tsu)" (I think? Iam bad at jp) itself. It has a nice effect imo. Give me a valid reason and I'll reconsider :3
00:09:179 (1) - ^
/*You're contradicting yourself here, it doesn't support the vocal line at all, as the vocals goes 1/2 for those sliders

00:30:671 (1) - Anyeason to have a NC here? NCs are used to separate rhythm sections/patterns, so having this alone is weird, when it belongs to the previous combo.That's a basic NCing technique o.o The NC'd object would belong to the next combo if the song would continue on this point, which is the main reason for me. I dont like to have "8 hits (+1)" as opposed to a "8 hits" combo, if that makes sense. It also is a nice bonus HP refil.
/*Read the bold sentence again, but since Milan decided to keep theirs, then this should stay for consistency.

Tsuma Bikuhitori
01:18:922 (1) - And this should be 1/2 slider for the same reason.
01:22:232 (1) - ^
01:23:887 (1) - ^ In my opinion, all of these are fine. They support the vocal lines as well as the, well, general major beat. Having 4 1/2 Sliders after another while the song allows for more is also really boring to play imo. But here again, give be a valid reason that I can follow up on and I might change this.
/*Being "boring" doesn't mean you can alter the rhythm at your choice, but since this "support" the vocal line, I'm not going to be stubborn about it, just letting you know so you consider it.
Thanks for modding

Let me know what do you think and I'll come back.

aaaa

Yauxo

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Yauxo 2015-03-12T22:01:35+00:00

2manyquotes

3/4 Thingy: I think it's okay to move from (Downbeat) to end on (speedy 3/4 vocal line) with a Slider to support both of them. I dont think I'd be able to start the Slider on the vocal start (as it starts on a weird timing) to end on it. If I'd do that, I'd skip a downbeat.
The red tick itself isnt really loud or major, and in my ears, is in a lower layer compared to the vocals happening there.
I didnt really contradict myself there, it's just to keep it on an, atleast for me, enjoyable level.

NC Thingy: Iam not quite sure why you made me read my own sentence again.
00:25:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - is basically the same as 00:28:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - in combolength.

Edit: I apparently didnt take the same timestamps for some reason, but it's the same thing .. basically.

The last object/The first object of the new combo is NC'd. I see no problem here :v

I wouldnt change these myself, but if it happens to be something that QATs really dislike and whatnot, I'll let Milan- just change it the way he/you guys want to.
I see nothing wrong with the rhythms if they play well. They do.

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2015-03-14T22:41:04+00:00

#2

Milan-

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Milan- 2015-03-14T23:31:03+00:00

Thankssss >/////<
one more awesome person www

Aka

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Aka 2015-03-16T12:55:52+00:00

omg this pic was the best one / )*^*( \

Fycho

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Fycho 2015-03-18T08:04:33+00:00

Small irc, fixed some hitsounds and greenlines,

SPOILER

2015-03-18 15:08 Fycho:  01:22:232 (1) -  make this to 1/2?
2015-03-18 15:09 Milan-: he didnt want to change them uhm
2015-03-18 15:09 Milan-: that's yauxo, he wrote something about those rhythms
2015-03-18 15:11 Fycho: well if he doesn't want to change, let it be
2015-03-18 15:17 Fycho: 08:51:275 (1) - finish on head？
2015-03-18 15:18 Milan-: ok :3
2015-03-18 15:19 Fycho: 08:31:683 (1) - finish on head too
2015-03-18 15:19 Fycho: 08:31:683 (1) - 
2015-03-18 15:19 Fycho: the similar ones
2015-03-18 15:20 Milan-: 08:41:479 (1) -  ok
2015-03-18 15:22 Fycho: 08:19:674 (5) - add clap ?
2015-03-18 15:22 Milan-: ok :3
2015-03-18 15:23 Fycho: 09:16:407 (1) - whistle
2015-03-18 15:23 Milan-: in addition to the finish right?
2015-03-18 15:23 Fycho: 09:17:595 (1) - whistle onhead?
2015-03-18 15:23 Fycho: yes, keep that finish
2015-03-18 15:23 Fycho: 09:18:783 (1) - whistle on head?
2015-03-18 15:24 Fycho: I mean add whistle on each long white tick
2015-03-18 15:24 Milan-: aaa pho's hitsounding ><
2015-03-18 15:24 Milan-: i think he follows the guitar
2015-03-18 15:24 Milan-: or
2015-03-18 15:25 Milan-: no, i have no idea what he whistled xD
2015-03-18 15:26 Milan-: i guess ill go ahead and add those whistles /w\
2015-03-18 15:26 Fycho: well
2015-03-18 15:26 Fycho: that's it
2015-03-18 15:26 Fycho: update when you are ready
2015-03-18 15:26 Fycho: I will recheck 
2015-03-18 15:30 Milan-: done :3
2015-03-18 15:31 Fycho: in AImod
2015-03-18 15:31 Fycho: missing files in bg/bg01
2015-03-18 15:31 Fycho: what's this?
2015-03-18 15:32 Milan-: aimod is drunk
2015-03-18 15:33 Milan-: its the same on any other map with sb :
2015-03-18 15:34 Fycho: 00:53:123 - useless green line
2015-03-18 15:35 Milan-: ops
2015-03-18 15:36 Fycho: 01:04:209 - 1ms unsnap for green lines
2015-03-18 15:38 Milan-: the next one too ><
2015-03-18 15:38 Fycho: that means there are unsnapped green lines
2015-03-18 15:39 Fycho: better to check each one, right?
2015-03-18 15:40 Milan-: im trying xd my pc is too old it seems heh
2015-03-18 15:41 Fycho: lol
2015-03-18 15:43 Fycho: that's all I guess