TK from Ling tosite sigure - unravel (TV edit) [Taiko|Osu|Os · forum

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2014-12-11T08:19:34+00:00

Hi!! :3
lmao didnt realize it's tokyo ghoul cracks knuckles

[General]

Never seen bg with 1187x768 whee but since you're in BAT team, i guess you knew it

[Easy]

00:24:708 (2,1) - well you probably did this on purpose, but i kinda prefer the usual overlap lmao http://puu.sh/dpWx4/8e7d1b2bc5.jpg but yeah it's up to you
00:44:264 (2,1,2) - i think you use finish hitsound too much in this part. well i'm okay with it but it kinda doesn't fit the song since at this part the song is kinda quiet. i suggest to remove the finishes from those slider's head
00:49:153 (3,1) - why not use 1.1x ds between them? since 00:49:597 (1) - 's sv kinda change

[Normal]

00:44:264 (2) - 00:46:042 (1) - 00:47:819 (4) - same like easy, about the hitsound at slider's head
00:56:264 (3) - add clap? i prefer it like that because at this part, the drum noises are still strong
01:18:042 (3) - ok only suggestion, because the few last red squares kinda makes the slider's junction a bit like idk derp http://puu.sh/dpXGA/6abffda257.jpg

[Yuzu's Hard]

00:23:597 (2) - only suggestion. i'd rather bend this slider a bit so the flow would be better http://puu.sh/dpYxp/c99217ccce.jpg
00:28:264 (1) - i think softfinish fits better than drumfinish since the cymbal here is strong
00:29:153 (2) - ^
00:33:597 (1) - add normal-hitfinish at slider's head? idk to accent the start of a new verse but it's up to you
00:42:486 (1) - ^ but with soft-hitfinish
01:02:042 (6) - clap at slider's tail?
01:21:375 (3) - i'd rather place this somewhere farther. make it more interesting to play(maybe around 208|44 or anywhere you want as long as it's a bit farther from before)

[Luxo's Hard]

00:16:708 (3,4) - gdi the distance is really far for hard especially this is the part where it's less jumpy
00:30:042 (1) - add finish at slider's head? i tried it, and it's kinda cool when the cymbal noise is being accented
00:47:375 (3,4) - same like 00:16:708 (3,4) -
00:58:042 (4,5) - only suggestion. i'd rather make them a bit spaced out, since the sv is quite slow and thus won't make it cramped like the current one http://puu.sh/dq06M/d16a56f9ab.jpg but yeah maybe you prefer the current one so it's up to you
01:03:375 (3,4) - ^
01:13:375 (2,3) - ^
01:13:819 (4) - add clap at slider's head?
01:19:819 (1,2) - i think normal-hitfinish fits better than drum-hitfinish

i just realized that you didn't do anything with the sv, making it quite slow during energetic parts like 00:33:596 - and the kiais. well idk when i played it, it's kinda like a turn-off because the loud music makes me want to move my mouse faster lmao but you probably prefer it that way, so yeah. just pointing it out

welp can't find anything in last two insane diffs, i'm sorry ;w;
and i'm sorry for poor mod

anyway i hope it gets ranked soon! <3

goodluck!

Charlotte

1,905 posts

Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2014-12-11T08:28:12+00:00

hi~.from my modding queues (Cdh's request)

[

about]

d is don note
k is kat note
D is big don note
K is big kat note

[

General]

Good~

[

Kantan]

OD2→3 HP2→3

01:06:931 - add k.because,follow the vocal.

[

Nwolf's Futsuu]

OD3→4 HP3.5→4

00:52:703 - add d.because,follow the rhythm.

00:56:707 - 01:07:379 - I think hard pattern (1/4 line). so 01:10:925 - 01:17:376 - this pattern is good.think again

[

m1ng's Muzukashii]

00:32:371 - add d.

00:32:928 - ^

00:59:698 - move to 00:59:605 -
01:03:266 - move to 01:03:161 -
01:05:051 - move to 01:04:931 -
01:06:828 - move to 01:06:713 -

[Cdh's Oni][list:1337]

00:34:486 (6,7,8,9,10) - I feel don't fit.
00:38:042 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^

00:59:698 - move to 00:59:605 -
01:03:266 - move to 01:03:161 -
01:05:051 - move to 01:04:931 -
01:06:828 - move to 01:06:713 -

This map Oni...so 1/6 is don't fit.imo

sorrry.I'm not good at Inner Oni.so no check.Good luck

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-11T13:02:53+00:00

Charlotte wrote:
hi~.from my modding queues (Cdh's request)

[ about]
d is don note
k is kat note
D is big don note
K is big kat note
[ General]

Good~
[ Kantan]

OD2→3 HP2→3 I completely rearranged the diff settings, to 2-2, 3-3, 4-4, 5-5, 6-6 should be better now ;w;
To Taiko Guest Mappers: If you don't agree with the diff setting I set in your diffs now (it's not much different from old one), please tell me lol

01:06:931 - add k.because,follow the vocal. Done
w

sorrry.I'm not good at Inner Oni.so no check.Good luck Okay, thanks :3

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
Hi!! :3
lmao didnt realize it's tokyo ghoul cracks knuckles hehe

[General]

Never seen bg with 1187x768 whee but since you're in BAT team, i guess you knew it Yep, ranking criteria allows it, though I might let someone help me improving it ;W;
[Easy]

00:24:708 (2,1) - well you probably did this on purpose, but i kinda prefer the usual overlap lmao http://puu.sh/dpWx4/8e7d1b2bc5.jpg but yeah it's up to you Finally changed to something else
00:44:264 (2,1,2) - i think you use finish hitsound too much in this part. well i'm okay with it but it kinda doesn't fit the song since at this part the song is kinda quiet. i suggest to remove the finishes from those slider's head You are right, fixed
00:49:153 (3,1) - why not use 1.1x ds between them? since 00:49:597 (1) - 's sv kinda change But it would look weird if the gap between 1/1s would change here, since (3) is a circle ... That's why I thought it'd be less confusing this way
[Normal]

00:44:264 (2) - 00:46:042 (1) - 00:47:819 (4) - same like easy, about the hitsound at slider's head Done
00:56:264 (3) - add clap? i prefer it like that because at this part, the drum noises are still strong Nah, it sounds better without a clap for me
01:18:042 (3) - ok only suggestion, because the few last red squares kinda makes the slider's junction a bit like idk derp Hmm yet I want to keep this slider as-is but I will see what others tell me http://puu.sh/dpXGA/6abffda257.jpg
welp can't find anything in last two insane diffs, i'm sorry ;w;
and i'm sorry for poor mod
anyway i hope it gets ranked soon! <3
goodluck!

Thanks so much, both of you! :3 Updated!

What is left to be applied

Standard:
Yuzu & Luxo fix litoluna, Pho, Maruk, AlpacaCokelat
Taiko:
GDs fix Charlotte
Mania:
fix Z3nx

Kaguya Hourain

514 posts

Joined October 2012

Kaguya Hourain 2014-12-11T17:05:41+00:00

Hello~

General

Uninherited timing point complications I think but not sure probably cuz I didn't update diffs.

Easy

Why not OD3
00:15:819 (1) - x:432 y:197 would flow better with current sliderpath imo. Don't forget to resnap the circle :3
00:17:597 (3) - This might be a bit confusing I would actually start it on the red tick. I don't think it would be that hard. Make sure the slider's first reverse ends where it currently does and well I'd remove the reverse and add a circle 00:18:707 - here.
Otherwise pretty clean and nice :3

Normal

OD to 5? If you don't get why throw me a pm.
00:36:263 (5) - Hmmm how about you make this 3/4? Sounds so much cooler!
00:39:819 (5) - Same here!

Yuzu-han's Hard

Hey bae~
AR to 7 would be nice!
00:32:708 (4) - Maybe place two 1/4 stacked and then stack a 1/4 single reverse slider? I think it fits better and plays more smoothly~
00:49:153 (6) - Would place a bit lower for smoother movement :3
01:00:042 (5,6,1) - Sliderpath doesn't really flow well with the stack there :/ Try rotating the slider clockwise a little!

Luxo's Hard

OD to 7?
00:47:375 (3,4) - Quite the unnecessary spaceout. Lower the spacing here ples
Interesting!

Mao's Insane

AR9 OD7 get outta here! OD8 OR RIOT!!
00:26:264 (7,3,4,5,6) - Would keep the increase in spacing consecutive here instead of just having 4 5 and 6 spaced the same.
00:56:708 (1,2) - Hmm I'd reverse those two in the timeline to match the vocals I feel it fits so much better!
01:00:264 (1) - I feel this and the next reverse one like that are breaking the flow of the map, bringing it to a slower pace rather than the fast pace the kiai has. Why don't you try something like this:
box of kawaii~

Realization

Since you consider this an Extra go with OD9 :3
00:11:153 (4) - DESPERATE-SAN WHYYYYYYYY
00:26:486 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - While I like the idea here I don't think that it fits with the music that much. It feels better if the pattern gets cut off into two instead of three, ending on 2 of the second current combo. Pretty sure you want to keep this but, just saying that it feels wrong.
00:33:042 (8,9) - I'd stack this :3
00:54:486 (1,2,3,1) - These are really unreadable. I've played the diff so many times I still don't think I can read it. Try something like this:
such kawaii
The kiai is really nice!

Welp that's it from me~

Speedrank ples

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-11T19:01:41+00:00

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
Hello~

General
Uninherited timing point complications I think but not sure probably cuz I didn't update diffs. yep, you didn't update, baka xD

Easy
Why not OD3 OD3 too much for the easiest diff imo
00:15:819 (1) - x:432 y:197 would flow better with current sliderpath imo. Don't forget to resnap the circle :3 Done, nice
00:17:597 (3) - This might be a bit confusing I would actually start it on the red tick. I don't think it would be that hard. Make sure the slider's first reverse ends where it currently does and well I'd remove the reverse and add a circle 00:18:707 - here. Nah, I think it's fine. I completely dislike 3/2-gaps, and here the current rhythm fits well with the instruments.
Otherwise pretty clean and nice :3

Normal
OD to 5? If you don't get why throw me a pm. Diff spread, and I really prefer OD < AR
00:36:263 (5) - Hmmm how about you make this 3/4? Sounds so much cooler! I don't think so o.o I would miss the cymbals and drums
00:39:819 (5) - Same here! ^

Realization
Since you consider this an Extra go with OD9 :3 People already complained about the 1/6 so clear no, sorry
00:11:153 (4) - DESPERATE-SAN WHYYYYYYYY Okay, finally changed.. Although it was cute xDD
00:26:486 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - While I like the idea here I don't think that it fits with the music that much. It feels better if the pattern gets cut off into two instead of three, ending on 2 of the second current combo. Pretty sure you want to keep this but, just saying that it feels wrong. Mhm, it actually fits well with the music. If you listen to vocals, or the drums, it makes sense
00:33:042 (8,9) - I'd stack this :3 Nah I thought too many stacks there were boring
00:54:486 (1,2,3,1) - These are really unreadable. I've played the diff so many times I still don't think I can read it. Try something like this: Sorry but for now I'd really like to keep it, although they are subject to change. But I've seen it in so many maps (mainly from chinese mappers) and I think it plays nice and I can use it here because it really fits and gives nice emphasis.. If you can't read it maybe it's because of your rather low skill, no offense
such kawaii
The kiai is really nice! Cool, thank you :3

Welp that's it from me~

Speedrank ples

Thanks so much! Updated

Left to be applied box

Standard:
Yuzu & Luxo fix litoluna, Pho, Maruk, AlpacaCokelat, Kaguya
Mao fix Kaguya
Taiko:
GDs fix Charlotte
Mania:
fix Z3nx

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-12-11T19:14:25+00:00

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
Mao's Insane
AR9 OD7 get outta here! OD8 OR RIOT!! 7.5 is a deal *runs*
00:26:264 (7,3,4,5,6) - Would keep the increase in spacing consecutive here instead of just having 4 5 and 6 spaced the same. That was what it was supposed to be. Fixed
00:56:708 (1,2) - Hmm I'd reverse those two in the timeline to match the vocals I feel it fits so much better! Still considering :/
01:00:264 (1) - I feel this and the next reverse one like that are breaking the flow of the map, bringing it to a slower pace rather than the fast pace the kiai has. Why don't you try something like this: You think so? I thought of it as a good variation. I don't know, probably changing with further opinions.
box of kawaii~

Thanks!

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ColdTooth

1,100 posts

Joined June 2012

ColdTooth 2014-12-11T21:08:24+00:00

It has been awhile since I last modded in terms of modding, because schoolwork pretty much brought me so down, so feel free to say this mod sucks.

Mod by request

No drafts were harmed in the making of this mod lol thats a lie

[Easy]

00:24:708 (2) - Right now it doesn't look flowing in transition. Try moving this down a little bit so it lines up with the end

00:53:153 (1,2) - Make parallel

01:08:264 (1,2,1) - Make into triangle

01:20:708 (2) - x:456 y:48

[Normal]

00:24:264 (3,4) - Maybe have these two blanket one another?

00:26:486 (1,1) - I kinda feel like these two are a little too close to each other in rhythm, maybe the first spinner can have a couple notes in it

00:38:930 (4) - Blanket 00:38:486 (3) - /run

01:06:264 (4) - Maybe have this curved to transition to 01:07:375 (1) - better

01:18:042 (3) - My only issue is that the end is more crowded than the beginning of the slider lol

[Yuzu's Hard]

00:14:042 (4) - Have the last sliderpoint go down a little bit

00:26:486 (1,2,3,4) - ok so, the fact that not a lot of people will expect the sv change (not like it will matter), but what I really do not like it the fact that there is an increase of spacing, and I think that is not necessary

00:54:264 (5,6) - This kinda looks badly placed imo. Maybe 6 can be moved to the right a bit and not left, and maybe even curved

00:56:708 (1,2) - This looks weird. Consider making these two the same sliders, blanketing one another

01:18:042 (1,2) - Please make these the same sliders, right now it looks weird

01:19:819 (1,2) - I kinda dislike these last two sliders. Maybe make them have a bit faster sv

[Luxo's Hard]

To me, this feels really slow. And the gap of difficulty between this and Mao's Insane kinda puts me to think if this should be a bit harder because it is a lot slower

00:19:375 (1,3) - Why not make these the same?

I think it just needs some more work. No offense, I kinda wish it had faster sliders.

[Mao's Insane]

oh hi

00:27:819 (3,4,5,6,1) - *explode*

00:52:930 (8,1) - I find this confusing :c

01:01:153 (2,3,4) - I kinda expected a small jump, maybe increase the spacing a tad?

01:02:486 (2,3,4) - ^

[Realization]

00:10:486 (1,2,3,4) - Odd pattern.

00:49:597 (1,2,4,5) - This kinda bummed me out. I thought 2 and 5 would be triplets with 2 circles and not a 1/4th slider

00:58:338 (8,9) - Alright... I kinda don't hear the 1/6th but ok xD

Overall, great mapset

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-11T21:30:34+00:00

ColdTooth wrote:
It has been awhile since I last modded in terms of modding, because schoolwork pretty much brought me so down, so feel free to say this mod sucks.

Mod by request

No drafts were harmed in the making of this mod lol thats a lie

[Easy]

00:24:708 (2) - Right now it doesn't look flowing in transition. Try moving this down a little bit so it lines up with the end Fixed

00:53:153 (1,2) - Make parallel I like how it currently is ;w;

01:08:264 (1,2,1) - Make into triangle There is no reason ... In this way, the flow is better, and the overlap is not noticeable because the objects are far apart

01:20:708 (2) - x:456 y:48 okay

[Normal]

00:24:264 (3,4) - Maybe have these two blanket one another? They already do ;www;

00:26:486 (1,1) - I kinda feel like these two are a little too close to each other in rhythm, maybe the first spinner can have a couple notes in it Nah, it's okay, 2/1-gap after spinner in Normal is enough and this is even low BPM

00:38:930 (4) - Blanket 00:38:486 (3) - /run Already

01:06:264 (4) - Maybe have this curved to transition to 01:07:375 (1) - better I think the transition is fine atm

01:18:042 (3) - My only issue is that the end is more crowded than the beginning of the slider lol Already told you ingame ;w;

[Realization]

00:10:486 (1,2,3,4) - Odd pattern. Fixed

00:49:597 (1,2,4,5) - This kinda bummed me out. I thought 2 and 5 would be triplets with 2 circles and not a 1/4th slider Huh? I think the sliders on the blue ticks fit here well with the vocals, no change

00:58:338 (8,9) - Alright... I kinda don't hear the 1/6th but ok xD It's there babe xD

Overall, great mapset

Thank you very much! Updated!

Stuff left

Standard:
Yuzu & Luxo fix litoluna, Pho, Maruk, AlpacaCokelat, Kaguya, ColdTooth
Mao fix Coldtooth
Taiko:
GDs fix Charlotte
Mania:
fix Z3nx

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2014-12-11T23:06:41+00:00

litoluna wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]
00:08:708 (2,3,4) - I think cool this arrangement. but I felt a flow to be not good for Hard diff no change
idea
SPOILER
00:33:375 (6) - As for me, this introduction did not understand any sound whether you responded.
so I think don't need this note. ok
01:01:819 (5) - NC and 01:02:264 (1) - remove NC ok
vocal begin at 01:01:819 (5) - so I think fiting it.

Pho wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]
Wait... there's two of them?
00:45:597 (6) - There's no actual beat here, and adding it for the noise is a bit weird. Placing it at 00:45:819 - would make more sense to me. ok
00:47:375 (3) - ^, this beat is void, there's nothing in the music here. ok, changed
Else nothing litoluna pointed out already. Fine as always.

-Maruk- wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]

00:33:375 (6) - Remove no
00:48:486 (1) - NC ok

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]

00:16:708 (3,4) - gdi the distance is really far for hard especially this is the part where it's less jumpy fixed
00:30:042 (1) - add finish at slider's head? i tried it, and it's kinda cool when the cymbal noise is being accented yes
00:47:375 (3,4) - same like 00:16:708 (3,4) - ok
00:58:042 (4,5) - only suggestion. i'd rather make them a bit spaced out, since the sv is quite slow and thus won't make it cramped like the current one http://puu.sh/dq06M/d16a56f9ab.jpg but yeah maybe you prefer the current one so it's up to you I tryed it, maybe this will make the kiai a bit more interesting
01:03:375 (3,4) - ^
01:13:375 (2,3) - ^
01:13:819 (4) - add clap at slider's head? ok
01:19:819 (1,2) - i think normal-hitfinish fits better than drum-hitfinish yes

i just realized that you didn't do anything with the sv, making it quite slow during energetic parts like 00:33:596 - and the kiais. well idk when i played it, it's kinda like a turn-off because the loud music makes me want to move my mouse faster lmao but you probably prefer it that way, so yeah. just pointing it out

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
Luxo's Hard
OD to 7? no
00:47:375 (3,4) - Quite the unnecessary spaceout. Lower the spacing here ples ok
Interesting!

ColdTooth wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]

To me, this feels really slow. And the gap of difficulty between this and Mao's Insane kinda puts me to think if this should be a bit harder because it is a lot slower it was meant to be like this. I was asked to try to keep it with a certian diff rate and I tryed my best to do it. I know it could have been faster but it was mapped to be not too much hard.

00:19:375 (1,3) - Why not make these the same? ok

I think it just needs some more work. No offense, I kinda wish it had faster sliders.

Thanks for the mods

code

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TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:Desperate-kun
Version:Luxo's Hard
Source:東京喰種トーキョーグール
Tags:Tokyo Ghoul luxoDeh Yuzu- Mao Nwolf mingmichael cdhsausageboy Marirose Anime Opening
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Neku Okazaki

Neku Okazaki 2014-12-11T23:51:09+00:00

Hi o/, MP mod request ~

[Kantan]

Estimated rank SS

00:10:486 (3) - The sound changes, a k is better imo
00:13:597 (5,6) - Not is too playable at the first time, try to make something more playable, like dk
00:15:819 (7,8,9) - Has a different intensity, try something like d k d. intensity
00:19:375 (10,11,12) - ^
00:24:264 (14,15) - This dont follow the rhythm, this is more playable: dk
00:32:708 (21,22,23) - Ctrl + G?, is better imo intensity
00:51:375 (43) - d is better imo, because this part is only for ddd
00:59:374 (56) - This is a combination of sounds and vocal, d is better for this part
01:02:041 (59) - ^ dkk
01:09:597 (71) - a kkk pattern isnt good for this, try kdk to make it more playable

Delete this code, videos on taiko isnt good:

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[Futsuu]

Estimated rank SS

Testplay: This diff is too hard to be a futsuu and too easy to be muzukashii, because it have some patterns like dk with out the vocal follow.

00:16:708 (9) - The vocal change the word, change this to k, it follow more the vocal
00:18:486 (12) - d if you make this^, to follow the pattern
00:52:707 (22) - Add d to continue with the pattern
00:57:042 (2) - Move to 00:57:152 - , is more playable...

Testplay: This diff is too hard to be a futsuu and too easy to be muzukashii, because it have some patterns like dk with out the vocal follow.

00:58:819 (6) - ^
01:00:596 (11) - You dont need to change this ~
01:02:375 (15) - Move to 01:02:485 -
01:05:930 (25) - ^, is better imo
01:18:042 (51) - This is a combination of vocal and sound, change to k, this follow more the vocal

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[Muzukashii]

Estimated rank S

Testplay: This is something like a comberted map

00:09:375 (3,2) - Ctrl + G?, is more playable
00:11:153 (2) - Move to 00:10:930 - ...

Testplay: This is something like a comberted map

00:12:930 (3,2) - Ctrl + G is better imo
00:26:264 (1) - Chango tok because it 00:26:264 (1,2) - have a change, and not of intensity
00:29:819 - Add k
00:30:707 - Add d
00:32:374 - Have sound, add d
00:33:596 - - 00:40:152 - hmmm...

Testplay: This is something like a comberted map

01:12:597 (2) - Dont make it more har, please delete this
01:25:042 (12) - Move to 01:25:152 -

Sorry, it really need some mods more.

Delete this code, videos on taiko isnt good:

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[Oni]
00:35:152 - Add d to link the other parts
00:38:707 - ^
00:55:819 - - 00:56:263 - Map this

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Good luck

[Inner oni]
00:28:264 (73) - Unrankeable

Finish notes must not be in the middle or at the beginning in a 1/4 or above stream. At the end, finish streams may be allowed if there is a reasonable sound for it. Finisher notes at the end of a stream must have the opposite color of the four previous notes.

Delete this code, videos on taiko isnt good:

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Ok, im only see it, good luck ~

Take my star ~

mingmichael

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mingmichael 2014-12-12T02:22:14+00:00

Charlotte

hi~.from my modding queues (Cdh's request)

[

about]

d is don note
k is kat note
D is big don note
K is big kat note

[

m1ng's Muzukashii]

00:32:371 - add d. nope nope, it will look like Oni patterns there

00:32:928 - ^ ^

00:59:698 - move to 00:59:605 -
01:03:266 - move to 01:03:161 -
01:05:051 - move to 01:04:931 -
01:06:828 - move to 01:06:713 - sorry, i focus on the instruments there (the drum hits on the 1/4. i just wanna to try to focus on it only, not to vocals from 00:56:707 - until 01:10:485 -

sorrry.I'm not good at Inner Oni.so no check.Good luck

Neku okazaki

Hi o/, MP mod request ~

[Muzukashii]

SPOILER

Estimated rank S

Testplay: This is something like a comberted map what do you mean lol

00:09:375 (3,2) - Ctrl + G?, is more playable nope, i used an easy pattern for my Muzu with the same notes for the patterns
00:11:153 (2) - Move to 00:10:930 - ... nope, since this note is just an additional note and it fits on there so i keep there

Testplay: This is something like a comberted map

00:12:930 (3,2) - Ctrl + G is better imo same here
00:26:264 (1) - Chango tok because it 00:26:264 (1,2) - have a change, and not of intensity nope, as you can hear the pitch sound has dropped on 00:26:263 - , so that's why i used a don there
00:29:819 - Add k nope, doublet is nice there and it will avoid the xxx X pattern which is a bit hard for Muzukashii even the BPM is slow
00:30:707 - Add d keep mine here for adding a break
00:32:374 - Have sound, add d same like charlotte's. nope adding a note here since it will look like an Oni pattern
00:33:596 - - 00:40:152 - hmmm... nope, i will not change anything in this part. i used a same notes for the patterns which are easy and it has many breaks too. more improvements on this part will make it to be a mini-Oni

Testplay: This is something like a comberted map

01:12:597 (2) - Dont make it more har, please delete this how lol see the spread diff between my Muzu and Oni. Oni contains full patterns and many doublets+triplets. if my part doesn't have any triplets and just 1/2 notes, the spread diff between those diffs become a bit horrible. so, i keep mine here with triplet
01:25:042 (12) - Move to 01:25:152 - hah? unreasonable here. keep mine since it will follow the last instruments

Sorry, it really need some mods more. pftt okay

Delete this code, videos on taiko isnt good:

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Ok, im only see it, good luck ~

Take my star ~

thanks for the mods~ but sorry no changes

@desperate : could you remove a video on my diff, please?

actually taikos don't need video huehue

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-12-12T11:08:54+00:00

Neku okazaki wrote:
Hi o/, MP mod request ~

[Kantan]
Estimated rank SS

00:10:486 (3) - The sound changes, a k is better imo Applied
00:13:597 (5,6) - Not is too playable at the first time, try to make something more playable, like dk Applied
00:15:819 (7,8,9) - Has a different intensity, try something like d k d. intensity I like to keep mine here, I want the calm sections to be really simple
00:19:375 (10,11,12) - ^ ^
00:24:264 (14,15) - This dont follow the rhythm, this is more playable: dk Applied
00:32:708 (21,22,23) - Ctrl + G?, is better imo intensity I think mine fits better... I wanted equal sounds to have equal d/k, so first and third is clear for me, and middle one I wanted k because it sounds better, so..
00:51:375 (43) - d is better imo, because this part is only for ddd Changed
00:59:374 (56) - This is a combination of sounds and vocal, d is better for this part Applied
01:02:041 (59) - ^ dkk I think mine sounds better
01:09:597 (71) - a kkk pattern isnt good for this, try kdk to make it more playable Applied

Delete this code, videos on taiko isnt good: Done, als for the other diffs
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[Inner oni]
00:28:264 (73) - Unrankeable
Finish notes must not be in the middle or at the beginning in a 1/4 or above stream. At the end, finish streams may be allowed if there is a reasonable sound for it. Finisher notes at the end of a stream must have the opposite color of the four previous notes.
It is rankable because the stream is 8 notes, I confirmed with BATs / QATs

Delete this code, videos on taiko isnt good: Done
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Ok, im only see it, good luck ~

Take my star ~

Thank you for the mod! Updated c:

What is left to do

Standard:
Yuzu fix litoluna, Pho, Maruk, AlpacaCokelat, Kaguya, ColdTooth
Mao fix Coldtooth
Taiko:
Nwolf & CDH fix Charlotte, Neku okazaki
Mania:
fix Z3nx

Last edited by Myxo 2014-12-12T14:11:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Neku Okazaki

Neku Okazaki 2014-12-12T13:25:13+00:00

Naku okazaki _(:3JL

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-12-12T14:11:26+00:00

Rofl, fixed xD

Asagi Mutsuki

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Asagi Mutsuki 2014-12-12T15:12:57+00:00

Charlotte wrote:
hi~.from my modding queues (Cdh's request)

[ about]
d is don note
k is kat note
D is big don note
K is big kat note
[Cdh's Oni]

00:34:486 (6,7,8,9,10) - I feel don't fit. It feels fitting enough for me though... i might change it if you provide a better alternative orz
00:38:042 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^ ^

00:59:698 - move to 00:59:605 - eh but the current pattern emphasizes the most outstanding drums while still having some consistent-like feel AND following the vocals, so no change ;w;
01:03:266 - move to 01:03:161 -
01:05:051 - move to 01:04:931 -
01:06:828 - move to 01:06:713 -

This map Oni...so 1/6 is don't fit.imo b...but the bpm is like really slow so it shouldn't cause any problems ;w; also the first part of the kiai is really. really easy (well, except for the 1/6 of course) with 3/4 breaks spread throughout so i don't think it'll be problems for players to read it properly too ;w;
sorrry.I'm not good at Inner Oni.so no check.Good luck

Neku okazaki wrote:
Hi o/, MP mod request ~

[Oni]
00:35:152 - Add d to link the other parts eh not changing this for now, having more 1/1 breaks will display the "heavy"(?) feel of the song much better imo, but well if more people (take more=5) complain about that, i will still fix it k
00:38:707 - ^ ^
00:55:819 - - 00:56:263 - Map this teach me the ways to map this neku, and i will

Delete this code, videos on taiko isnt good:
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desperate-kun done that i guess
Good luck

Take my star ~

Well tbh nothing was applied, but there are quite a few suggestions that I still need to consider so um, thanks!

Kyubey

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Kyubey 2014-12-12T18:15:11+00:00

Hi! will try to do «quality» mod for you, but imo standard diffs are almost ok, maybe need some little changed
won't check metadata because i trust you
whoa that sliderborder color
[Easy]
why od2.5? it doesn't make sense, difference between 2.5 and 2.0 equals to zero. better to make it 2.0, will look better with normal (4) and hard (6)
00:08:708 (1,1) - how about making them both straight? will look cool with vocals imo
00:26:486 (1) - make greenlines for increasing volume for every slidertick? that will follow music well
00:30:041 - better to add note here and make spinner after it, because there's pretty loud finish sound in the music
00:58:263 - this drum sample sounds pretty off considering other hitsounds in rest of the map (only in this difficulty)
01:21:596 - this sound is pretty audible too, i would add note here too
[Normal]
00:21:597 (4) - move it to 00:21:819 - for following that guitar sound? because on current place it sounds really strange, since there's no sound for it
00:25:152 - maybe change this rhythm to this for following guitar again? http://puu.sh/drK03/0b4951719f.jpg
00:30:041 - same as in easy
00:33:596 (1,2) - getting 300 in patterns like this is really painful, because player usually clicking circle too early. i suggest to change it to two 1/1 sliders for better playability
00:37:153 (1,2) - here too
00:48:485 - soft whistle for pointing at vocal?
00:54:264 (2) - soft whistle? listen to the music, it will fit
01:03:819 (1) - maybe move it to 52|128? 01:02:930 (5,6,1) - this shape will looks smoother, and i like how it will look with 01:04:708 (2) - this
01:21:596 - same as in easy
[Yuzu's Hard]
00:26:485 - to be honest, drum sampleset sounds really off here. normal hits would sound muuuch better, but drum is... just doesn't fit the music, it's too strange and too loud. and too different to the music
00:34:819 - you didn't add note here, why did you add 00:38:375 (4) - this? it sounds pretty off and inconsistent considering previous same part
00:45:597 (6) - it sounds strange too, but because there's no sound in the song. i'd delete it
00:54:930 - try to add default soft finish here
01:02:485 - missing clap?
01:17:930 - move this clap to 01:17:819 - this repeat arrow, it will follow vocals much better
01:20:041 - make them faster a little. maybe x0.8. this slowdown is really unexpected after x1.2 and player trying to move it too fast and release note too fast too. and getting 100
01:21:596 - maybe add here note before spinner? sound in track is pretty audible to click it
[Luxo's Hard]
00:09:153 (2,3) - no reason to make that sharp movement in this relaxing part (it plays really sharp and uncomfortable), better to keep DS here
00:11:153 (7,1) - you could move them closer to each other because of same reason
00:24:264 (3,4,5) - this pattern really overlaps with hp bar, move it down
00:58:263 - isn't it better to place 1/1 slider here? it will fit vocals REALLY good
00:59:152 - 00:59:819 - you used that clap pattern only once in first part of kiai, maybe make it in the whole first part? or delete here. for better consistency
01:21:596 - maybe add here note before spinner? sound in track is pretty audible to click it
[Mao's Insane]
00:10:264 (6,1,2,3) - this sharp flow with 6→1 doesn't fit this relaxing quiet part at all, and it's playing uncomfortable, better to move them closer to each other
00:22:930 (1,2) - this overlap could be better, if you made it more overlapping
00:27:819 (3,4,5,6,1) - this pattern is REALLY unfomfortable. this is one of hardest pattern to follow and usually it ends up spamming faster than needed for at least hitting it and getting 100s. please, make these notes with same spacing, and i will love you this map will be much more comfortable to play. and anyway, that kind of patterns fits better on the hardest difficulty
00:38:708 (8,9,1) - move it up, it overlaps with score meter
01:02:042 (1) - ^
01:10:042 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this overlap is really unreadable for me, better to move them away, it will be played much easier and better. maybe something like this http://puu.sh/drPht/b0c5a99684.jpg
01:15:819 (8) - score meter
01:21:596 - maybe add here note before spinner? sound in track is pretty audible to click it
[HI LAST DIFF WOOHOO AFTER YOU I WILL BE FREE]
~~good diff, nothing to mod this /me finally closes editor~~
:3
well this diff is really well-made, i'll point at things that felt bad for me
00:26:486 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - please move this whole pattern down, because player's attention is usually pointed near to center and it's sometimes getting hard to control something near the sides of screen
00:40:264 (4,5,6) - maybe make less spacing? that sudden increase is really unexpected and hard, it gives a lot of misses. try to use 1.8 DS maybe?
00:54:486 (1,2,3,1) - hm. i tried to replay your map 5 times in a row and even after it i didn't unrestand, whats wrong here. it reads really hard, really unexpected, my brain thought it's 1/2 or 1/4 sliders and i wasn't even able to move it correct. make less spacing, please
01:18:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - things like this need really a lot of attention and control, this is very very hard to not miss it. i suggest you to reduce these jumps. even if it's hardest diff in the mapset, you could be more polite to players

awesome mapset, good luck with ranking!

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-12-12T19:47:21+00:00

Kyubey wrote:
Hi! will try to do «quality» mod for you, but imo standard diffs are almost ok, maybe need some little changed Nice :3
won't check metadata because i trust you Ehhh better not xDD
whoa that sliderborder color *:
[Easy]
why od2.5? it doesn't make sense, difference between 2.5 and 2.0 equals to zero. better to make it 2.0, will look better with normal (4) and hard (6) Fixed
00:08:708 (1,1) - how about making them both straight? will look cool with vocals imo Done
00:26:486 (1) - make greenlines for increasing volume for every slidertick? that will follow music well Hmm I will think about it but atm I like to keep volume settings like the other diffs ):
00:30:041 - better to add note here and make spinner after it, because there's pretty loud finish sound in the music No, I don't like that for an Easy or Normal difficulty at all
00:58:263 - this drum sample sounds pretty off considering other hitsounds in rest of the map (only in this difficulty) Fixed
01:21:596 - this sound is pretty audible too, i would add note here too Same reasoning as above
[Normal]
00:21:597 (4) - move it to 00:21:819 - for following that guitar sound? because on current place it sounds really strange, since there's no sound for it Hmm I will consider it but I really want to simplify rather than having polarity issues...
00:25:152 - maybe change this rhythm to this for following guitar again? http://puu.sh/drK03/0b4951719f.jpg Sorry I think my rhythm fits the guitar better
00:30:041 - same as in easy Same reply
00:33:596 (1,2) - getting 300 in patterns like this is really painful, because player usually clicking circle too early. i suggest to change it to two 1/1 sliders for better playability Hmm I don't really know about this issue, but I think 3/2-slider should not be a problem... I'll ask about some more opinions on this
00:37:153 (1,2) - here too ^
00:48:485 - soft whistle for pointing at vocal? Added
00:54:264 (2) - soft whistle? listen to the music, it will fit Added
01:03:819 (1) - maybe move it to 52|128? 01:02:930 (5,6,1) - this shape will looks smoother, and i like how it will look with 01:04:708 (2) - this Yes, done
01:21:596 - same as in easy >w<
[HI LAST DIFF WOOHOO AFTER YOU I WILL BE FREE]
~~good diff, nothing to mod this /me finally closes editor~~
:3
well this diff is really well-made, i'll point at things that felt bad for me
00:26:486 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - please move this whole pattern down, because player's attention is usually pointed near to center and it's sometimes getting hard to control something near the sides of screen Done
00:40:264 (4,5,6) - maybe make less spacing? that sudden increase is really unexpected and hard, it gives a lot of misses. try to use 1.8 DS maybe? Hmm I don't think this is a problem, but if someone else mentions it I'll change it
00:54:486 (1,2,3,1) - hm. i tried to replay your map 5 times in a row and even after it i didn't unrestand, whats wrong here. it reads really hard, really unexpected, my brain thought it's 1/2 or 1/4 sliders and i wasn't even able to move it correct. make less spacing, please FINALLY fixed after everybody complained >< I will do this once though, believe me xD
01:18:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - things like this need really a lot of attention and control, this is very very hard to not miss it. i suggest you to reduce these jumps. even if it's hardest diff in the mapset, you could be more polite to players Hmmmm I really like this pattern and it's supposed to be the most difficult since it's the final of the song so I'd like to keep it ;www;

awesome mapset, good luck with ranking!

Thank you so much <3

What is left

Standard:
Yuzu fix litoluna, Pho, Maruk, AlpacaCokelat, Kaguya, ColdTooth, Kyubey
Luxo fix Kyubey
Mao fix Coldtooth, Kyubey
Taiko:
Nwolf fix Charlotte, Neku okazaki
Mania:
fix Z3nx

Mira-san

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Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2014-12-13T05:42:29+00:00

wow such delays of mine. Light mod lol (Because I can't find much)

Bold = Highly recommended
Blue = Not really recommended lolz.

[Realization]
00:40:708 (1,2) - I can't ignore the strong 'violin' sounds.

01:12:153 (6) - Move this a little bit higher to allow a curvier flow? The slider is curved so why not lolz.
01:10:375 (7,1) - I don't know why this needs to have a different spacing from the rest because similar parts have maintained the proper spacing lol.
01:15:153 (4) - Try putting this lower to allow a smoother flow to (5).
01:20:707 (3,4) - Please refer to the image below.

[Mao's Insane]
01:00:152 (11,1) - The spacing here. Unless this is a style.
01:20:707 (3,4) - Check my suggestion on Realization.
[Luxo's Hard]
00:10:042 (4,5,6) - Please check the spacing here. I don't think there's a beat here that could be emphasized by a jump.
01:01:819 (1,2) - Sounds weird if you ask me. Consider this.

01:04:485 (2) - Clap here should be on (3) instead. (some white ticks are covered rip)
01:12:708 (1) - Should be like 01:16:264 (1,2) for consistency.
[Yuzu's Hard]
01:02:485 - clap here.
01:09:819 (2) - Is this supposed to be a blanket or not? lolz

That's all I can find (ehhhhhh sry). Can't find anything on the Easy/Normal lolz.
Good luck. o/

Starfall9908

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Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2014-12-13T07:13:58+00:00

Mod Request through PM (I ended up having time to mod the map)

[Easy]

00:51:374 (3,4,5,6) - Putting 4 hitcircles in row is a really bad idea in Easy. The mapper should try to avoid making the player tap too much in Easy since Newbies are not used to it. Delete two circles and put a slider insted (I recommend to delete 4 and 5)
01:14:485 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Normal]

00:25:152 (4) - Blanket is a bit off
01:10:930 (1,2,3,4) - Isn't this a bit too hard to be normal?
01:14:485 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Yuzu's Hard]

00:15:374 (6) - This blanket can be better than that.
00:15:819 (1) - ^

[Luxo's Hard]

00:25:596 (7) - Blanket
00:30:041 (1) - I don't feel like a finish should be at the end of the slider
00:35:819 (3) - Blanket

[Mao's Insane]

00:27:819 (3,4,5,6,1) - Distance Snap
I couldn't mod the rest of the map because it was too hard for me ;_;

This mod ended up being pretty short and I only mentioned obvious things.

Please reply to my mod and tell me what you changed and what you didn't change to know how to be a better modder.

Good Luck

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-12-13T10:22:14+00:00

Mira-san wrote:
wow such delays of mine. Light mod lol (Because I can't find much)

Bold = Highly recommended
Blue = Not really recommended lolz.

[Realization]
00:40:708 (1,2) - I can't ignore the strong 'violin' sounds. I want to give the players a little break here and I think a bit of undermapping is nice for this song, when there is a calm section

01:12:153 (6) - Move this a little bit higher to allow a curvier flow? The slider is curved so why not lolz. Applied
01:10:375 (7,1) - I don't know why this needs to have a different spacing from the rest because similar parts have maintained the proper spacing lol. Hm but the stream has higher spacing because it's the transition to the next section and sounds different and I always had bigger spacing for transition stream -> slider so yea
01:15:153 (4) - Try putting this lower to allow a smoother flow to (5). I want to keep my triangle, sorry
01:20:707 (3,4) - Please refer to the image below. I think mine sounds much better with the vocals

That's all I can find (ehhhhhh sry). Can't find anything on the Easy/Normal lolz.
Good luck. o/

nadapan wrote:
Mod Request through PM (I ended up having time to mod the map)

[Easy]
00:51:374 (3,4,5,6) - Putting 4 hitcircles in row is a really bad idea in Easy. The mapper should try to avoid making the player tap too much in Easy since Newbies are not used to it. Delete two circles and put a slider insted (I recommend to delete 4 and 5) Circles in Easy is a nice variation and I really dislike having sliders all the time.. From my experience circles are often more fun for newbies than sliders even
01:14:485 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
[Normal]
00:25:152 (4) - Blanket is a bit off Fixed
01:10:930 (1,2,3,4) - Isn't this a bit too hard to be normal? Not really. The diff must be between Easy and Hard difficulty-wise for a proper spread, so I need a bit of difficulty ;w;
01:14:485 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

This mod ended up being pretty short and I only mentioned obvious things.

Please reply to my mod and tell me what you changed and what you didn't change to know how to be a better modder.

Good Luck

Thank you both! c: Updated!

What is left to be applied

Standard:
Yuzu fix litoluna, Pho, Maruk, AlpacaCokelat, Kaguya, ColdTooth, Kyubey, Mira-san, nadapan
Luxo fix Kyubey, Mira-san, nadapan
Mao fix Coldtooth, Kyubey, Mira-san, nadapan
Taiko:
Nwolf fix Charlotte, Neku okazaki
Mania:
fix Z3nx

luxoDeh

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Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2014-12-13T10:50:24+00:00

Kyubey wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]
00:09:153 (2,3) - no reason to make that sharp movement in this relaxing part (it plays really sharp and uncomfortable), better to keep DS here ok
00:11:153 (7,1) - you could move them closer to each other because of same reason ok
00:24:264 (3,4,5) - this pattern really overlaps with hp bar, move it down ok
00:58:263 - isn't it better to place 1/1 slider here? it will fit vocals REALLY good yes, but I won't change this for now. also because I like my pattern
00:59:152 - 00:59:819 - you used that clap pattern only once in first part of kiai, maybe make it in the whole first part? or delete here. for better consistency rechecked all hitsounds in kiai part
01:21:596 - maybe add here note before spinner? sound in track is pretty audible to click it ok

Mira-san wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]
00:10:042 (4,5,6) - Please check the spacing here. I don't think there's a beat here that could be emphasized by a jump. no, it's ok
01:01:819 (1,2) - Sounds weird if you ask me. Consider this. tryed something else, but changed

01:04:485 (2) - Clap here should be on (3) instead. (some white ticks are covered rip) checked all hitsounds
01:12:708 (1) - Should be like 01:16:264 (1,2) for consistency. nah

nadapan wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]
00:25:596 (7) - Blanket ok
00:30:041 (1) - I don't feel like a finish should be at the end of the slider no, it's ok
00:35:819 (3) - Blanket ok

Thanks, and code

code

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Title:unravel (TV edit)
TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:Desperate-kun
Version:Luxo's Hard
Source:東京喰種トーキョーグール
Tags:Tokyo Ghoul luxoDeh Yuzu- Mao Nwolf mingmichael cdhsausageboy Marirose Anime Opening
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Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Maruyu 2014-12-13T11:24:10+00:00

litosana wwwwwww

litoluna wrote:
[Yuzu's Hard]
00:29:597 (3) - I like Ctrl+G ok
Oneself completely does it this way though it is a favorite problem
01:20:486 (2) - I felt not fiting finish at head point. ok
I listened Cymbals sound is this point -> 01:20:708 -
01:21:375 (3) - I felt not fiting finish at head point. ok
I listened Drums sound is this point -> 01:21:597 -

Bo

Pho wrote:
[Yuzu's Hard]
00:25:597 (5) - Add a whistle on this slider maybe, it's a bit hitsound empty at this part. k
00:29:597 (3) - Whistle or some addition on the start of this backslider, the drum's the strongest at this point. k
00:46:708 (2) - Missed finish on this sliderstart ok
00:47:708 - Strongly recommend to set a beat here for the piano. [/color]
00:49:597 (1) - There should be an original soft-hitfinish here due to the cymbal in the track. Or you could at the current soft-finish to every down beat at this section til 00:54:042 - did second
01:02:042 (6) - Add clap on sliderend? done
01:07:375 (1) - Not sure if intended, but the whistle on this whole slider is pretty annoying. lel
01:12:708 (1,2) - Umm... not sure if you are trying to blanket here or not, but might be a good idea to do so. Same at 01:18:042 (1,2) - not really for both
01:17:597 (3) - Clap shouldn't be on blue tick here. Delete it. k
Is gud.

-Maruk- (no idea what to call this guy)

-Maruk- wrote:
[Yuzu's Hard]

00:10:486 (1) - NC no, it breaks patterns
00:17:375 (3,4,5) - Try use this i prefer my version
01:10:819 (3) - Remove last reverse ???

AlpacaChocolat

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
[Yuzu's Hard]

00:23:597 (2) - only suggestion. i'd rather bend this slider a bit so the flow would be better http://puu.sh/dpYxp/c99217ccce.jpg i thought about it, but i want it straight, just personal preference
00:28:264 (1) - i think softfinish fits better than drumfinish since the cymbal here is strong yes but drum is fine I think
00:29:153 (2) - ^ ^
00:33:597 (1) - add normal-hitfinish at slider's head? idk to accent the start of a new verse but it's up to you hmm, it doesn't feel quite right, but it's empty so I'll fix somehow
00:42:486 (1) - ^ but with soft-hitfinish nah this is fine
01:02:042 (6) - clap at slider's tail? fixed previously
01:21:375 (3) - i'd rather place this somewhere farther. make it more interesting to play(maybe around 208|44 or anywhere you want as long as it's a bit farther from before) this is also something I want as is

Kaguynyan Hourain

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
Yuzu-han's Hard
Hey bae~ ly
AR to 7 would be nice! i prefer ,5 ;w;
00:32:708 (4) - Maybe place two 1/4 stacked and then stack a 1/4 single reverse slider? I think it fits better and plays more smoothly~ i like this ;w;
00:49:153 (6) - Would place a bit lower for smoother movement :3 ok, tweaked a bit
01:00:042 (5,6,1) - Sliderpath doesn't really flow well with the stack there :/ Try rotating the slider clockwise a little! this is intended, looks fine to me so keep ww

ColdFeet

ColdTooth wrote:
[Yuzu's Hard]

00:14:042 (4) - Have the last sliderpoint go down a little bit fixed?

00:26:486 (1,2,3,4) - ok so, the fact that not a lot of people will expect the sv change (not like it will matter), but what I really do not like it the fact that there is an increase of spacing, and I think that is not necessary well I believe it fits perfectly, if it's an issue I'll change afterwards

00:54:264 (5,6) - This kinda looks badly placed imo. Maybe 6 can be moved to the right a bit and not left, and maybe even curved curving doesn't mean much, but changed it to the right

00:56:708 (1,2) - This looks weird. Consider making these two the same sliders, blanketing one another changed it differently

01:18:042 (1,2) - Please make these the same sliders, right now it looks weird k

01:19:819 (1,2) - I kinda dislike these last two sliders. Maybe make them have a bit faster sv nah, this is exactly how I want them. personal preference ;w;

Kyunbey

Kyubey wrote:
[Yuzu's Hard]
00:26:485 - to be honest, drum sampleset sounds really off here. normal hits would sound muuuch better, but drum is... just doesn't fit the music, it's too strange and too loud. and too different to the music actually I oppose to that, I think drum sounds lovely ;w;
00:34:819 - you didn't add note here, why did you add 00:38:375 (4) - this? it sounds pretty off and inconsistent considering previous same part removed note
00:45:597 (6) - it sounds strange too, but because there's no sound in the song. i'd delete it vocals ww
00:54:930 - try to add default soft finish here done
01:02:485 - missing clap? fixed previously
01:17:930 - move this clap to 01:17:819 - this repeat arrow, it will follow vocals much better k
01:20:041 - make them faster a little. maybe x0.8. this slowdown is really unexpected after x1.2 and player trying to move it too fast and release note too fast too. and getting 100 k
01:21:596 - maybe add here note before spinner? sound in track is pretty audible to click it it is there, but I prefer how it ends atm (with the vocals, and the spinner starting on the loud sound

Mira-nyan

Mira-san wrote:
[Yuzu's Hard]
01:02:485 - clap here. fixed previously
01:09:819 (2) - Is this supposed to be a blanket or not? lolz what k3k

nadapantsu

nadapan wrote:
[Yuzu's Hard]
00:15:374 (6) - This blanket can be better than that. ehh ok
00:15:819 (1) - ^ ^

holy shit

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Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-13T11:40:18+00:00

What is left to be applied

Standard:
Mao fix Coldtooth, Kyubey, Mira-san, nadapan
Taiko:
Nwolf fix Charlotte, Neku okazaki
Mania:
fix Z3nx

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-12-13T13:01:48+00:00

Mira-san wrote:
[Mao's Insane]
01:00:152 (11,1) - The spacing here. Unless this is a style. Going to consider this and fix if somebody else bothers. For now it's there for emphasis.
01:20:707 (3,4) - Check my suggestion on Realization. I used to have it like this but this one works much better with the vocals imo.

Fixed everything else, thanks!

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Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:Desperate-kun
Version:Mao's Insane
Source:東京喰種トーキョーグール
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PANDAAAAAAAA

745 posts

Joined September 2012

PANDAAAAAAAA 2014-12-14T05:20:40+00:00

hi

mania modding via PM.

Marirose's Normal

Normal > Normal+ ?
00:09:597 (9597|1) - i suggest to delete to make pattern.(if you follow this suggestion, please go on my mod.)
00:12:486 - add note
00:14:930 (14930|2) - delete
00:18:486 (18486|3) - delete
00:18:930 - add note
00:21:153 (21153|1) - move to 1
00:21:375 - add to 2
00:24:264 - add note
00:25:597 (25597|3) - delete

Marirose's Hard

00:40:819 (40819|3,41042|2,41375|1,41708|2,41930|3,42264|2) - make them to 1/4 beat LN?
nice

Marirose's Insane

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Asahina Momoko 2014-12-14T07:47:44+00:00

hii Desperate-kun, mod as your request from PM :3

General

remove "anime" tag, maybe it would be added in genre.

Easy

00:36:708 (5,4) - add whistles?
00:42:486 (1) - different DS from prev, but it's same differences in Normal's same part. so if you have any purpose, ignore it

Normal

00:42:486 (1) - same as easy
01:10:930 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - there are the hardest parts in this diff, it's cool the first part is ok. but in second part, i think new players would aim neatly those sliders (maybe doesn't "hold" on sliders starts).
if they do so, it's a little hard to aim those sliders like this.
SPOILER
so i recommend to copy previous sliders and put with turning the other way.

Yuzu's Hard

00:15:819 (1) - how about stack with end of 00:14:042 (4) - ?　(x359:y231)
01:21:375 (3) - move it to x245:y144 to stack correctly　with 01:19:819 (1) -
it was so fun diff

Luxo's Hard

00:26:375 (9,1,1) - there are so constrained part with playing. drums sound starts at 00:26:485 , so remove 00:26:375 (9,1) - and start spinner at 00:26:485
00:37:153 (1) - add clap

Mao's Insane

this diff should be more easily imo. because there is big difficulty gap with 2 hard diffs to play (for example, some spaced streams and short sliders, these are hard to hit)
this mapset includes 2 insane. in Realization also consists of some spaced objects. so i think this diff should be easily insane.
it not means it's bad, the flow and placement is so nice and cool. but merely...so hard

00:26:486 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - how about change the hitsound volume to gradually get louder?

Ralization

00:44:930 (2,3,4,5) - it's better to put those circles to another place than piling up imo.
00:46:708 (2,3,4,5) - ^^
01:14:819 (2) - maybe sampleset soft? to be consonant with another parts that has same timing

that's all! good luck, shoot a star

Last edited by Asahina Momoko 2014-12-14T10:34:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-14T09:22:27+00:00

M o k o r i wrote:
hii Desperate-kun, mod as your request from PM :3

General
remove "anime" tag, maybe it would be added in genre. done

Easy
00:36:708 (5,4) - add whistles? okay
00:42:486 (1) - different DS from prev, but it's same differences in Normal's same part. so if you have any purpose, ignore it It has a purpose.. It's the same gap as before, but the SV changes, so it's higher DS. But in this way it's less confusing to play, as when the spacing suddenly gets smaller after a circle

Normal
00:42:486 (1) - same as easy same
01:10:930 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - there are the hardest parts in this diff, it's cool the first part is ok. but in second part, i think new players would aim neatly those sliders (maybe doesn't "hold" on sliders starts).
if they do so, it's a little hard to aim those sliders like this.
SPOILER
so i recommend to copy previous sliders and put with turning the other way. Hmm I see what you mean. But atm I still believe it's fine.. Maybe I'll change it later if someone else points it out

Ralization
00:44:930 (2,3,4,5) - it's better to put those circles to another place than piling up imo. Nah, I like it, it creates much atmosphere / pressure imo
00:46:708 (2,3,4,5) - ^^ ^
01:14:819 (2) - maybe sampleset soft? to be consonant with another parts that has same timing Removed Soft Sampleset for the others instead

that's all! good luck, shoot a star

Thank you very much! :3
About Mao's diff: It is ofc much more difficult than the Hards, but the gap between Normal and Hard is also quite big, so after all the spread should be quite even imo.

What needs to be applied

Standard:
GDs fix M o k o r i
Taiko:
Nwolf fix Charlotte, Neku okazaki
Mania:
fix Z3nx, nowsmart

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-12-14T11:38:29+00:00

Made the Hitsound Volume increase as M o k o r i said, thanks!

Code

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55486
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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Title:unravel (TV edit)
TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:Desperate-kun
Version:Mao's Insane
Source:東京喰種トーキョーグール
Tags:Tokyo Ghoul luxoDeh Yuzu- Mao Nwolf mingmichael cdhsausageboy Marirose Opening
BeatmapID:556312
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syuru

134 posts

Joined May 2012

syuru 2014-12-14T19:11:38+00:00

from PM req! starting from hard
[General]

insane + realization don't have the whistle on the last spinner's end like in the two hards??

[Yuzu's Hard]

00:17:375 (3,4,5) - it's probably just me but i feel this is a weird way to map this part?? since the part before it seems to follow the vocal and this part no longer does that
00:49:597 (1) - really like this part here
rest looks good to me

[Luxo's Hard]

00:10:042 (4,5,6) - this part should be evenly spaced i think, so move 5 down some?
00:44:041 - i think you should add a circle here
for the kiai section, for some reason the claps really mess with the rhythms since some are on slider ends, some are on slider heads, etc. to me it seems like the rhythm of the clap clashes with the rhythm of this part of the map ;;;
01:02:263 (2) - move a bit up
01:10:263 (4) - i think this kick slider should be faster to build up to the 2nd part of the chorus

[Mao's Insane]

00:27:819 (3,4,5,6,1) - this part and the combo from 1 really throws me off rhythm and i'm not really sure why... it seems that the notes don't exactly go with the guitar in the music?? who knows i'm probably just rhythmically challenged oops
01:11:375 (3,4) - i think the 4 is difficult to read like this ;;
01:16:708 (2) - move up a bit, current placement pretty much completely covers the number
01:19:597 (4) - move so it's not directly above 3, i think a straight vertical jump feels awkward and a diagonal-ish one may be better

[Realization]

00:19:708 (2) - there's nothing really notable in the music here, this note seems unnecessary
00:25:597 (4,5) - i liked what you did w/the earlier part of this combo and i think you should replicate it here
00:36:486 (3,4) - jump feels really awkward?? it might be because i haven't played in a while but the spacing threw me off
00:40:042 (3,4) - ^
00:56:264 (5) - NC to signal SV change
01:04:153 (2) - ctrl g?
01:09:486 (2) - ^
01:14:375 (8) - for some reason i don't really like this note placement but i also don't really know where else to put it;;
01:17:153 (6,7,8,9) - really like this
also hell yeah for those jumps at the end

that's all i have to say wheeze
haven't been active for a bit so i'm probably overly picky for things that don't really matter
all changes up to you, good luck!

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2014-12-14T23:08:51+00:00

M o k o r i wrote:
Luxo's Hard
00:26:375 (9,1,1) - there are so constrained part with playing. drums sound starts at 00:26:485 , so remove 00:26:375 (9,1) - and start spinner at 00:26:485 I think you're right
00:37:153 (1) - add clap hm... no

ankou wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]
00:10:042 (4,5,6) - this part should be evenly spaced i think, so move 5 down some? ok, fixed once for all
00:44:041 - i think you should add a circle here no, I already removed from here
for the kiai section, for some reason the claps really mess with the rhythms since some are on slider ends, some are on slider heads, etc. to me it seems like the rhythm of the clap clashes with the rhythm of this part of the map ;;; yes, I checked but now they seem right to me :/
01:02:263 (2) - move a bit up why?
01:10:263 (4) - i think this kick slider should be faster to build up to the 2nd part of the chorus no change

Thanks

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Myxo

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Myxo 2014-12-15T15:29:28+00:00

ankou wrote:
from PM req! starting from hard
[General]
insane + realization don't have the whistle on the last spinner's end like in the two hards?? I think it depends on personal preference c: And hitsounding is not consistent anyways, between GDs and the rest ..
[Realization]
00:19:708 (2) - there's nothing really notable in the music here, this note seems unnecessary It's intuitive for me at this point
00:25:597 (4,5) - i liked what you did w/the earlier part of this combo and i think you should replicate it here No, I'm following the guitar sounds here which are much stronger imo
00:36:486 (3,4) - jump feels really awkward?? it might be because i haven't played in a while but the spacing threw me off Hmm the testplayers could play it just fine and it fits the music well here imo
00:40:042 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:56:264 (5) - NC to signal SV change Applied
01:04:153 (2) - ctrl g? I like the zig-zag-movement I currently have here, it fits the vocals well imo
01:09:486 (2) - ^ ^
01:14:375 (8) - for some reason i don't really like this note placement but i also don't really know where else to put it;; Hmm I think it's an interesting pattern ;w; Although it's something I usually don't do
01:17:153 (6,7,8,9) - really like this Thank you :3
also hell yeah for those jumps at the end c:
that's all i have to say wheeze
haven't been active for a bit so i'm probably overly picky for things that don't really matter Nah, you weren't picky >< Sorry that I didn't fix much.. I hope you can understand from my explanations why I didn't apply it. Mostly it's about personal preferences / intuition
all changes up to you, good luck!

Thank you very much! Updated the Gds too :b

What is left to be applied

Standard:
Yuzu fix M o k o r i, ankou
Mao & Luxo fix ankou
Taiko:
Nwolf fix Charlotte, Neku okazaki
Mania:
fix Z3nx, nowsmart

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-12-17T09:57:38+00:00

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested by cdh in my queue.

[Kantan]

00:29:597 (18,19) - consider changing these notes to k D ? This could follow the snare at 00:29:597 (18) - and the stressed sound at 00:30:041 (19) - respectively.
00:57:597 (53,54,55,56) - k d d k could fit the snares well.
01:01:153 (58,59) - swap these notes to k d ? Similar reason as ^
01:12:708 (75,77) - changing these notes to d could make the pattern more intuitive to play.
01:24:708 (92,93) - k d could follow the drop in the pitch of the piano nicely.

[Nwolf's Futsuu]

00:20:264 (14,15) - consider swapping these notes to d k ? The vocal at 00:20:708 (15) - is higher-pitched than 00:20:264 (14) -
00:22:930 (17,21) - similar to ^ , d k would be better imo.
00:55:596 (28) - d would be great to make a contrast to the high-pitched vocal at 00:55:819 (29,30) -
01:13:153 (39,40) - k d would be nice if you want to follow the drop in vocal pitch.

[m1ng's Muzukashii]

00:27:375 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - consider changing this to k d kkk D ? The kkk triplet could follow the snares well and D at 00:28:264 (1) - would be more coherent to the neighbouring 00:26:485 (2,1) - which are mapped as D.
01:17:819 (2,1) - As the vocal is really high-pitched at 01:18:041 (1) - , it'd be better to swap these two notes to d k.
01:18:930 (2) - change this to d if you apply ^ for the drop in vocal pitch.

[Cdh's Oni]

00:15:819 (22,23) - consider swapping these notes to k d for the drop in vocal pitch there ?
00:17:375 (26,27) - ^
00:26:486 (11) - you may add finish here for the noticeable cymbal sound.
00:29:485 (2) - change to d and add k at 00:29:596 - ? This could map the background drums in a way better.
00:32:819 - similar reason as ^ , adding d here would be great.
00:42:486 (5) - same as 00:26:486 (11) -
00:44:264 (7,8) - k k could accompany the relatively high-pitched vocal there.
00:53:152 (32) - It'd be better to add finish here as you did at 00:49:596 (12) - for the sake of consistency.
00:58:264 (46,47,48,49) - I have doubt about this. The background music only has 1/4 but you used 1/6 notes. As this is just an Oni, consider using 1/4 kkd instead to reflect the music ? Same suggestion applies to all other 1/6 kkkd in the kiai.
01:10:263 (103,104,105,106,107) - dkkdd could result in a better flow imo.
01:18:042 (149) - D would be great for emphasizing the vocal.

[Inner Oni]

00:12:042 (11) - k would be better since the vocal pitch is slightly higher than 00:12:264 (12) -
00:29:707 (79) - maybe k for the snare sound as well ?
00:32:930 - you may add d here since the drum is similar to 00:32:708 (92,93,94) -
00:42:486 (150) - you may add finish here for the noticeable cymbal sound. It could be more consistent to 00:40:707 (144) - which is a big note.
00:43:819 (153,154,155) - d k k would be better if you want to follow the increase in vocal pitch.
00:55:819 (209,210,211,212,213) - kdkkd could result in a better flow imo.
00:57:819 (220) - you may delete this note so that it would be consistent with the break at 00:56:930 -
00:58:264 (223,224,225,226) - In fact this 1/6 does not fit quite well as the music has 1/4 only. If I were you, I would simply use 1/4 kkd instead. However, you may keep it for complexity since this is an Inner Oni.
01:05:819 (275) - you may delete this note since background sound is absent.
01:13:485 (327) - k would be nice since the sound is similar to the previous 01:13:375 (326) -
01:13:819 (329,330,331,332,333) - kkdkd could result in a smoother flow imo.
01:17:041 (351) - same as 01:13:485 (327) -

That's all and good luck~

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-12-17T11:30:29+00:00

Nardoxyribonucleic

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested by cdh in my queue.

[m1ng's Muzukashii]

00:27:375 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - consider changing this to k d kkk D ? The kkk triplet could follow the snares well and D at 00:28:264 (1) - would be more coherent to the neighbouring 00:26:485 (2,1) - which are mapped as D. yup you are right, but i just wanna use an easy pattern for my Muzukashii here, and i don't follow whole of the instruments actually i just followed some perfectly if they can produce a nice&easy pattern only
01:17:819 (2,1) - As the vocal is really high-pitched at 01:18:041 (1) - , it'd be better to swap these two notes to d k. it's strong actually, not high. i keep mine with don
01:18:930 (2) - change this to d if you apply ^ for the drop in vocal pitch. keep mine here

That's all and good luck~

thanks for the mods~

but sorry no changes

Myxo

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Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-18T06:12:26+00:00

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:
Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested by cdh in my queue.

[Kantan]
00:29:597 (18,19) - consider changing these notes to k D ? This could follow the snare at 00:29:597 (18) - and the stressed sound at 00:30:041 (19) - respectively.
00:57:597 (53,54,55,56) - k d d k could fit the snares well.
01:01:153 (58,59) - swap these notes to k d ? Similar reason as ^
01:12:708 (75,77) - changing these notes to d could make the pattern more intuitive to play.
01:24:708 (92,93) - k d could follow the drop in the pitch of the piano nicely.
All fixed!

[Inner Oni]
00:12:042 (11) - k would be better since the vocal pitch is slightly higher than 00:12:264 (12) - yes
00:29:707 (79) - maybe k for the snare sound as well ? yes
00:32:930 - you may add d here since the drum is similar to 00:32:708 (92,93,94) - yes
00:42:486 (150) - you may add finish here for the noticeable cymbal sound. It could be more consistent to 00:40:707 (144) - which is a big note. yes
00:43:819 (153,154,155) - d k k would be better if you want to follow the increase in vocal pitch. Sorry I'd like to keep this, it sounds pretty nice to me
00:55:819 (209,210,211,212,213) - kdkkd could result in a better flow imo. I think the alternating rhythm is a nice variation and fits the music quite well
00:57:819 (220) - you may delete this note so that it would be consistent with the break at 00:56:930 - yes
00:58:264 (223,224,225,226) - In fact this 1/6 does not fit quite well as the music has 1/4 only. If I were you, I would simply use 1/4 kkd instead. However, you may keep it for complexity since this is an Inner Oni. The 1/6 is in the music though ;w;
01:05:819 (275) - you may delete this note since background sound is absent. yes
01:13:485 (327) - k would be nice since the sound is similar to the previous 01:13:375 (326) - yes
01:13:819 (329,330,331,332,333) - kkdkd could result in a smoother flow imo. yes
01:17:041 (351) - same as 01:13:485 (327) - yes
That's all and good luck~

Thanks very much, sorry for rushed reply, I have to go to school :b

Hanjamon

1,461 posts

Joined June 2012

Hanjamon 2014-12-18T12:32:43+00:00

Hi Desperate~ here the taiko mod you requested and sorry for the delay >.<

d=Don
D=Big Don
k=Katsu
K=Big Katsu

[General]

All seems okay

[Kantan]

Nothing to suggest here

[Nwolf's Futsuu]

00:48:707 - maybe add a d o k here? maybe you don't added a note because is a calm part but i think fits good with a note here
00:57:042 (2) - I don't agree with add notes in 1/4 beat in a Futsuu, of course is not hard and fits nice with the vocals but for some players maybe is hard so.. move to 00:57:152 - ? i think sounds good too
00:58:819 (6) - same reason as ^ move to 00:58:930 - ?
01:00:597 (11) - same reason as ^ move to 01:00:707 - ?
01:02:375 (15) - same reason as ^ move to 01:02:485 - ?
01:04:153 (20) - same reason as ^ move to 01:04:263 - ?
01:05:930 (25) - same reason as ^ here i think you can do.. move this note to 01:06:041 - ~~~ 01:06:486 (27) - move to 01:06:707 - (and maybe change to d too) ~~~ 01:06:930 (28) - move to 01:07:152 - (dd - kd - d/k - dk) ofc you are free to reject these suggestions xD

[m1ng's Muzukashii]

00:36:597 (4) - I know you are trying to have a consistency here but i suggest this, move this note to 00:36:485 - and add a d or k in 00:36:819 - ? i think fits good and is not hard, btw, feel free to reject this

00:40:153 (1) - same here? ^ move this note to 00:40:041 - and change to d and add a d or k in 00:40:374 - ?

Well about these suggestions you can do the same in 00:34:707 - and 00:38:263 - if you applied ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^
Anyway, feel free to reject >.<

[Cdh's Oni]

00:41:597 (1) - change to k? (kk) sounds better imo
00:53:153 (32) - maybe add finisher here for consistency with 00:49:597 (12) - ? also, sounds good with the finisher

[Inner Oni]

00:36:708 (117) - move this note to 00:36:596 - and add a d in 00:36:930 - ? fits better imo
00:48:708 (170) - change this note to k? sounds better imo

This is all, good luck to all ^^

let me use my gd with some 1/8 here (? jkkk xD

Asagi Mutsuki

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Asagi Mutsuki 2014-12-19T10:09:01+00:00

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:
Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested by cdh in my queue.
[Cdh's Oni]
00:15:819 (22,23) - consider swapping these notes to k d for the drop in vocal pitch there ? the vocal pitch sounds rising to me O_O
00:17:375 (26,27) - ^^
00:26:486 (11) - you may add finish here for the noticeable cymbal sound. its not strong enough to warrant a big note imo
00:29:485 (2) - change to d and add k at 00:29:596 - ? This could map the background drums in a way better. but i'm generally following the guitar so meh ;w;
00:32:819 - similar reason as ^ , adding d here would be great. Applied!
00:42:486 (5) - same as 00:26:486 (11) - tho it'll feel really weird since the diff isn't finisher-heavy and having a big note at the beginning of the calmest part sounds...weird
00:44:264 (7,8) - k k could accompany the relatively high-pitched vocal there. don bass desu
00:53:152 (32) - It'd be better to add finish here as you did at 00:49:596 (12) - for the sake of consistency. changed!
00:58:264 (46,47,48,49) - I have doubt about this. The background music only has 1/4 but you used 1/6 notes. As this is just an Oni, consider using 1/4 kkd instead to reflect the music ? Same suggestion applies to all other 1/6 kkkd in the kiai. THE KICKS ARE DENSER THAN 1/4 DHUWIHDIUQNSIUQNSIUQNQ um it might just be me but well i really think that having a kiai with larger spacing (no 1/4) to compensate for the slightly more challenging patterns (1/6s and the 1/4+1/6) plays much cooler, also inner has tons of 1/6 so i can't see why having recurring patterns are bad especially when they can provide players who can play easy oni some familiarity with 1/6 pattens since its slow and easy
01:10:263 (103,104,105,106,107) - dkkdd could result in a better flow imo. eh this is completely personal preference but i don't really like dkkdd lol
01:18:042 (149) - D would be great for emphasizing the vocal. I don't see why the vocals need extra emphasis here, sorry ;w;
That's all and good luck~

Hanjamon wrote:
Hi Desperate~ here the taiko mod you requested and sorry for the delay >.<

d=Don
D=Big Don
k=Katsu
K=Big Katsu
[General]

All seems okay
[Cdh's Oni]

00:41:597 (1) - change to k? (kk) sounds better imo violin pitchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
00:53:153 (32) - maybe add finisher here for consistency with 00:49:597 (12) - ? also, sounds good with the finisher Added upon nardo's mod
This is all, good luck to all ^^

let me use my gd with some 1/8 here (? jkkk xD *me slaps hanjamon*

Thanks for the mods!

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Myxo

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Myxo 2014-12-19T19:02:50+00:00

Hanjamon wrote:
Hi Desperate~ here the taiko mod you requested and sorry for the delay >.<

[Inner Oni]

00:36:708 (117) - move this note to 00:36:596 - and add a d in 00:36:930 - ? fits better imo Hmm for me my version sounds better although I can't explain why (because I'm taiko noob ;ww;)
00:48:708 (170) - change this note to k? sounds better imo Changed the previous note to k instead, it has similar effect
This is all, good luck to all ^^

let me use my gd with some 1/8 here (? jkkk xD Sorry I already have enough diffs, really D: Also, where do you hear 1/8 in the song xD The 1/6 is already a pain to hear

Thank you very much! c: Updated!

What is left to be applied

Standard:
Yuzu fix M o k o r i, ankou
Mao & Luxo fix ankou
Taiko:
ming fix Hanjamon
Nwolf fix Charlotte, Neku okazaki, Nardoxyribonucleic, Hanjamon
Mania:
fix Z3nx, nowsmart

Nofool

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Nofool 2014-12-20T23:23:07+00:00

Hi, taiko mod requested via pm

[Kantan]
- 00:36:485 - mm i could've suggested you to add a k here and del the two k around ('cause these k are not really following anything) but it looks good since it is a kantan imo.
- add d at - 00:43:152 -, - 00:44:930-, - 00:46:707 - and del - 00:43:819 (35) - 'cause drums+vocal, dunnoh what this d for the vocal is doing there if you don't add two others more. that part is airy enough so red lines are ok imo.
- 01:25:152 (93) - not sure if that d really is needed.

[Nwolf's Futsuu]
- 00:32:263 (26) - maybe move this to - 00:32:152 - ? kinda tricky yeah... but that actual ddd sounds a bit weird tho.
- 00:37:152 (42,43,44) - and - 00:38:930 (46,47,48) - swap colours ? for the cool effect kdk dkd kdk dkd, i think so it's okay even if there are 3 k in a row (you might used two times dkd because these k :c).
- 00:50:263 (15) - maybe mvoe this to - 00:50:707 - ? so it also fits a bit more the vocal. (also this part had more notes than the muzu, i hope it isn't a problem)
- 00:52:041 (20) - but then same here ye :c. the break you have after is not really needed tho.
- well kiai part (first one) might be too hard lol, maybe get similar colours for every patterns :
something like k d d k or d d d k, idk (much dk wow).

[m1ng's Muzukashii]
- 00:16:263 - sudden no follow of the vocal here x_x ? if you want to follow drums from here then it's a bit weird because of the previous part... else: del - 00:16:485 (2) -, add something at - 00:16:707 - and del - 00:17:152 (2) - so it fits the vocal (just an example, this whole part need similar changes if you still want to follow thee vocal).
- 00:33:596 - mm from here this part is a bit weird to play as i know you want to follow the guitar (or i guess?) but some notes are wrongly placed imo, what about something like this :

cursor is at - 00:35:041 - and the first blue note on the left is - 00:33:152 (1)-.
if you do these changes, then do the same for the rest of that part ofc.
- kiai is ok following drums, again not always sure if you follow the vocal or not but it's ok for drums.
- 01:25:041 (12) - not sure if that d really is needed.

[Cdh's Oni]
- 00:34:819 (9,10) - del them + add k at - 00:35:041 - ? basically it fits more the guitare but this part is kinda hard to map "well" and clean as you did, so as you want.
- 00:38:374 - ^.
- 00:49:819 - something like kd dkkd kd dk d kd dkkd kd dk... would've been a bit more consistent imo, but it sounds alright i guess.
nothing else ,_, cool style following drums, gj (hope more peoples like you become bat!).

[Inner Oni]
- 00:34:930 (105) - i could suggest to move it to - 00:35:041 - to follow a bit better the guitare here but it would break the 1/2-1/4 consistency so as you want.
- 00:38:485 (129) - ^.
- 01:04:596 (267) - move this to - 01:04:707 - ? more consistency with others pattern + fits more drums.
- 01:13:485 (327) - maybe del ? it might sounds a bit better with a break here following the vocal.
- 01:17:041 (350) - but it somehow sounds better with something here... no idea.
damn that kiai... i had to look very closely to be sure that everything was ok with drums x___x... (or something else), at least it sounds good but it is a bit weird to play lol (missed there on my first play ;_;).

edit: i somehow wrote "desperate-kun instead of "inner oni" lol... fixed
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good luck'

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mingmichael

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mingmichael 2014-12-21T04:33:02+00:00

thanks for the mods~! i changed the patterns, especially from 00:33:596 - . i simplified the patterns a bit

m1ng's Muzukashii

Asagi Mutsuki

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Asagi Mutsuki 2014-12-21T07:33:37+00:00

Nofool wrote:
Hi, taiko mod requested via pm

[Cdh's Oni]
- 00:34:819 (9,10) - del them + add k at - 00:35:041 - ? basically it fits more the guitare but this part is kinda hard to map "well" and clean as you did, so as you want. but a single note on blue tick plays pretty bad tbh ;w;
- 00:38:374 - ^. ^
- 00:49:819 - something like kd dkkd kd dk d kd dkkd kd dk... would've been a bit more consistent imo, but it sounds alright i guess. sounds alright i guess
nothing else ,_, cool style following drums, gj (hope more peoples like you become bat!). ;w; thanks!

good luck'

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