TK from Ling tosite sigure - unravel (TV edit) [Taiko|Osu|Os · forum

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-08-26T19:32:56+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 26. Januar 2015 at 16:03:14

Artist: TK from Ling tosite sigure
Title: unravel (TV edit)
Source: Tokyo Ghoul
Tags: 東京喰種トーキョーグール luxoDeh Yuzu- Mao Nwolf mingmichael cdhsausageboy Marirose Opening
BPM: 135
Filesize: 17235kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

Cdh's Oni (3,37 stars, 300 notes)
Easy (1,41 stars, 64 notes)
Inner Oni (3,91 stars, 376 notes)
Kantan (1,14 stars, 88 notes)
Luxo's Hard (2,85 stars, 177 notes)
m1ng's Muzukashii (2,89 stars, 213 notes)
Mao's Insane (3,93 stars, 280 notes)
Marirose's Hard - 4Key (2,66 stars, 611 notes)
Marirose's Insane - 4Key (3,61 stars, 773 notes)
Marirose's Normal - 4Key (1,92 stars, 340 notes)
Normal (1,69 stars, 98 notes)
Nwolf's Futsuu (1,79 stars, 135 notes)
Realization (4,45 stars, 290 notes)
Yuzu's Hard (2,72 stars, 156 notes)

Download: TK from Ling tosite sigure - unravel (TV edit)
Download: TK from Ling tosite sigure - unravel (TV edit) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Redownload if downloaded in 2014 - Mp3 changed

~ ~ ~
#8th Ranked - My first (real) multiple-mode mapset, yay! c:
Realization is something between Insane and Extra, but it's mapped kind of experimental so if you don't like it or it plays bad for you, try Mao's Insane which is a nice challenge too! :3
Thanks to pishifat for the new mp3!
~ ~ ~

Easy - by me
Normal - by me
Hard - by Yuzu-
Hard - by luxoDeh
Insane - by Mao
Realization - by me
~
Kantan - by me
Futsuu - by Nwolf
Muzukashii - by mingmichael
Oni - by cdhsausageboy
Inner Oni - by me
~
4K Normal - by Marirose
4K Hard - by Marirose
4K Insane - by Marirose

Awesome Anime, definitely worth watching!

Changelog Standard

06.12.2014 - Finished all diffs
08.12.2014 - Applied litoluna's Mod
09.12.2014 - Applied Pho's Mod
09.12.2014 - Applied -Maruk-'s Mod
11.12.2014 - Applied AlpacaCokelat's Mod
11.12.2014 - Applied Kaguya Hourain's Mod
11.12.2014 - Applied ColdTooth's Mod
12.12.2014 - Applied Kyubey's Mod
13.12.2014 - Applied Mira-san's Mod
13.12.2014 - Applied nadapan's Mod
14.12.2014 - Applied M o k o r i's Mod
14.12.2014 - Applied ankou's Mod
27.12.2014 - Applied Sieg's Mod
15.01.2015 -

by Sieg
25.01.2015 - Applied Kyshiro's Mod
26.01.2015 - Applied ByBy_ChAn's Mod
26.01.2015 -

by Kyshiro

Changelog Mania

September 2014 - Finished all diffs
09.12.2014 - Applied Ichigaki's Mod
09.12.2014 - Applied hutunohito's Mod
09.12.2014 - Applied DrawdeX's Mod
09.12.2014 - Applied Aii-'s Mod
09.12.2014 - Applied Nijigen-kun's Mod
27.12.2014 - Applied Z3nx's Mod
27.12.2014 - Applied nowsmart's Mod
18.01.2014 - Applied DE-CADE's Mod
18.01.2014 -

by DE-CADE

Changelog Taiko

07.12.2014 - Finished all diffs
09.12.2014 - Applied -Maruk-'s Mod
11.12.2014 - Applied Charlotte's Mod
12.12.2014 - Applied Neku okazaki's Mod
19.12.2014 - Applied Nardoxyribonucleic's Mod
19.12.2014 - Applied Hanjamon's Mod
27.12.2014 - Applied Nofool's Mod
03.01.2015 - Applied qoot8123's Mod
04.01.2015 -

by qoot8123

Last edited by Myxo 2015-01-26T15:50:15+00:00, edited 60 times in total.

Asagi Mutsuki

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Asagi Mutsuki 2014-08-27T11:02:03+00:00

First k

Marirose

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Marirose 2014-09-05T07:27:35+00:00

Hi Desperate kun, here's 4K GD

http://puu.sh/btvW9/bb269271fa.zip

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-09-15T13:42:48+00:00

Marirose wrote:
Hi Desperate kun, here's 4K GD

http://puu.sh/btvW9/bb269271fa.zip

Thank you, finally updated! :3 (I'm so late wow)

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2014-09-15T14:26:10+00:00

Can i make a Futsuu diff with Genocide?

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-09-16T17:33:18+00:00

gokugohan12468 wrote:
Can i make a Futsuu diff with Genocide?

No, sorry. I decided to map it myself or ask someone more experienced than me.

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2014-09-20T02:48:18+00:00

Good Luck pro mapper!

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-09-21T17:03:34+00:00

hyped lel

Marirose

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Marirose 2014-10-29T03:20:55+00:00

XD gogo rip

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-10-31T11:57:00+00:00

Revived.
I have 5 Pending Mapsets now that need to be Ranked / Finished. *sigh*
But I will work on it!

Asagi Mutsuki

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Asagi Mutsuki 2014-12-02T05:29:26+00:00

map why are you dead again :<

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-12-06T09:44:40+00:00

;www; Sorry...

Ichigaki

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Ichigaki 2014-12-06T23:12:27+00:00

PM Request

Hiii c:
I wonder if you can take a look at the 4K diffs in my mapset...
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/206887 
Thank you in advance!

Column setup

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

General

Song Setup :
1. Metadata : It'd be better to change the Source into 'Tokyo Ghoul' and move the japanese source into tags
2. Other : Clear
Music and background :
1. Music : Clear
2. Background : The background here is a bit blurry, and the resolution isn't rankable. Change it into 1366x768 or 1024x768
Kiai and audio preview point :
1. Kiai : How about end this on 01:21:597 - at least to follow the vocal
2. Audio preview point : How about 00:55:597 - ?

Warning

This mod mostly contain suggestion, so feel free to reject it with the reason

Marirose's Insane

Change into Marirose's MX (Because they'll think it's standard diff)
00:08:486 - The rhythm is started here. Try to add a note on 00:08:486 - in 2 and 00:08:597 - in 3
00:27:153 - The 'loud' double trill is started here, so add a note on 4
00:28:264 - 00:30:042 - Unsnapped everywhere.
1. 00:28:375 (28375|3) - Change the end to 00:28:486 -
2. 00:28:597 (28597|1) - Change the end to 00:28:708 -
3. 00:28:819 (28819|2) - Change the end to 00:28:930 -
4. 00:28:968 (28968|1) - Move to 00:28:930 - and change the end to 00:29:153 -
5. 00:29:264 (29264|1) - Change the end to 00:29:375 -
6. 00:29:486 (29486|2) - Change the end to 00:29:634 -
7. 00:29:708 (29708|0) - Change the end to 00:29:819 -
8. 00:29:856 (29856|3,29857|1) - Move to 00:29:819 -
9. 00:29:930 (29930|2) - Change to LN which the end is on 00:30:042 -
00:30:819 (30819|1) - You missed a rhythm here. Add a note to 3
00:32:819 (32819|3,32819|2,32930|1,32930|2,33042|1,33042|0) - I'm not sure with this, because there's no loud sound it should be. Maybe change it into normal stair
00:40:819 (40819|1) - Remove this, no loud sound there
00:41:597 (41597|3,41597|0,41708|1,41708|2) - Remove one note each row, same reason with above
00:55:819 - 00:56:264 -
1. 00:55:930 (55930|1) - Remove this, i don't hear clear rhythm hear.
2. 00:56:042 (56042|3,56153|0,56264|2) - Double trill this. It have same sound with 00:55:819 (55819|3,55819|2) -
00:57:819 (57819|3,57819|1) - Remove one of them, the loud sound is started above it
00:59:597 (59597|3,59597|2) - ^
01:04:486 - I hear a soft drum sound here. Consider to add a note there
01:17:486 (77486|3,77486|2,77708|2,77708|3) - Remove one of them, have different sound with the other
01:20:708 - Add a note in 4, but leave if you think the end of LN is included as a 3-notes
01:20:486 - How about add a note here? There's a piano there.
>.<)

Marirose's Hard

Change into Marirose's HD
00:29:597 (29597|3) - Change into double notes
01:05:930 - Add a note on 3, i heard missed rhythm there
01:14:264 (74264|3,74375|0,74486|2,74486|3) - Change to double trill for that loud sound
01:17:597 - Add a note in 3, missed pattern
01:20:486 - Add a note here, the reason is same in Insane's mod
Cool~

Marirose's Normal

Change into Marirose's NM
00:12:708 (12708|2) - Is this to follow the vocal? It'd be better if you move it to 00:13:153 - , you missed a rhythm there
00:24:264 - Missed pattern, add a note there
01:20:708 - Add a note in 1, missed rhythm and pattern
Great~

Overall

Well done Marirose >,<)b

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-12-06T23:40:27+00:00

Ichigaki wrote:
General
Song Setup :
Metadata : It'd be better to change the Source into 'Tokyo Ghoul' and move the japanese source into tags No, since the japanese source is the original name of the anime ;w;
Other : Clear
Music and background :
Music : Clear
Background : The background here is a bit blurry, and the resolution isn't rankable. Change it into 1366x768 or 1024x768 The solution I have is completely rankable... It just can't be above 1366x768. I will ask ringating for help with the BG tho if I remember
Kiai and audio preview point :
Kiai : How about end this on 01:21:597 - at least to follow the vocal Hmm we choose it this way because the song gets very calm at 01:19:819
Audio preview point : How about 00:55:597 - ? There is a little fade-in when you listen to Previews, that's why I placed the Preview Point before the vocals, so it doesn't sound weird.

Thank you for modding, the rest is for Marirose~

mingmichael

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mingmichael 2014-12-07T04:32:09+00:00

my diff doneeeee aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah sorry for the latenezzzzz ;w;

Muzukashii

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-12-07T10:56:42+00:00

Thank you so much! Updated :3
Now only waiting for Nwolf's Futsuu~ And then the whole mapset will be ready!

Nwolf

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Nwolf 2014-12-07T11:05:28+00:00

Footshoe

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Unravel.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55486
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 41597
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:unravel (TV edit)
TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:Desperate-kun
Version:Nwolf's Footshoe
Source:東京喰種トーキョーグール
Tags:Tokyo Ghoul luxoDeh Yuzu- Mao Nwolf mingmichael cdhsausageboy Marirose Anime Opening
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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Video,480,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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(you might want to change diff name)

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-12-07T11:19:56+00:00

IT'S READY
FARK YEAH!

Mao

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Mao 2014-12-07T11:39:16+00:00

Have my star o/

shionelove

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shionelove 2014-12-07T12:44:14+00:00

⊂(　　⊂　　　_ω_　)⊃
column 1234

[Normal]
00:20:264 - add guitar sound
00:30:819 (30819|0) - delete?of course there's piano sound,but conflict 00:31:264 (31264|3,31375|1,31486|0,31597|2) -
it's normal diff so i recommend delete
00:34:264 - if you follow guitar sound,add here
if you follow drums sound,wrong rhythm,check please
00:34:708 - add some
00:36:042 - ^^
00:37:819 - ^
00:39:597 - ^
00:54:486 (54486|0,54597|3,54708|0,54819|3) - 1/3 or 1/6
01:00:153 - add same snare sound
...this diff seems too hard for Normal diff...
some parts are same as your Hard diff
⊂(　　⊂　　　_ω_　)⊃
[Hard]
00:54:486 (54486|0,54597|3,54708|0,54819|3) - 1/6
01:01:153 - add some snare
01:02:930 - ^
01:05:930 - add
[Insane]
00:28:264 to 00:30:042 - some are unsnap
00:54:486 (54486|2,54486|3,54597|1,54597|0,54708|2,54708|3,54819|0,54819|1) - 1/6
01:01:153 - add some
01:02:930 - ^
01:04:486 - add
01:05:930 - ^

good luck⊂(　　⊂　　　_ω_　)⊃

DrawdeX

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Joined December 2012

DrawdeX 2014-12-07T14:56:30+00:00

Hello!

From Astral Horizon's Modding Team.
Mod as requested~

Everything modded

4K = |1|2|3|4|

[Marirose's Normal]
• 00:18:930 - Add a note, for guitar sound.
• 00:21:375 - ^
• 00:24:264 - ^
• 01:20:708 - Add a note, for the beat.

[Marirose's Hard]
• 00:33:153 - Add one note or two notes, for the cymbals.
• 00:56:264 (56264|2) - Make this into LN until 00:56:708 - like in Normal diff.
• 01:01:153 - Add a note, for loud sound.

[Marirose's Insane]
• 00:28:375 ~ 00:30:042 - Some unsnapped notes.
• 00:33:153 - Add another note, for the cymbals.
• 00:56:264 (56264|2) - Make this into LN until 00:56:486 .
• 00:56:708 - Add another note, for the strong beat.
• 01:20:708 - ^

That's all.
Good luck~!

Ichigaki

1,767 posts

Joined February 2013

Ichigaki 2014-12-07T15:07:36+00:00

Seems you forgot something... >.<)v

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-07T18:10:04+00:00

Speedmodding the GD Hards >w< Because I feel like it.

[Yuzu-nyan]

00:25:597 - Imo it would sound good to add a note here because of the guitar
00:40:708 (1,2,3) and 00:41:597 (1,2,3) - Decide for one version? Second one sounds better to me
00:49:153 (6) - Move so that the distance to (5) is lower and to (1) bigger
00:54:486 (6) - Must be 1/6
~~Copy Mao's and mine hitsounding, it's more bootiful~~

[Luxo-chan]

OD 6.5 | HP 6, for spread and fun
00:08:486 (1) - It's the only diff with that note so maybe remove >< And I can move the offset..
00:08:708 (2,3,4) - Make (2) curved a bit ? For better aesthetics: http://puu.sh/dkVSl/93f1bf01f2.jpg
00:10:264 (6,7) - Have little jump here, maybe http://puu.sh/dkVVv/6341be5f26.jpg ?
00:11:153 (8,1) - Reduce the distance a bit ;w;
00:14:042 (4,5) - Same. Maybe (5) to 450|230 http://puu.sh/dkW13/f17323030d.jpg
00:16:708 (3,4) - Again jump too big imo :c
00:19:375 (1,2,3) - Maybe make the sliders like http://puu.sh/dkW5x/0d22400b52.jpg ? Almost 90° angle doesn't look good to me
00:21:819 (7) - http://puu.sh/dkWgl/ef597ad4a5.jpg sounds better
00:25:375 (6) - http://puu.sh/dkWjc/3752d8f70f.jpg
00:26:486 - Start the spinner here already?
00:32:930 (5,6,1) - Too big distances
00:41:597 (3,4) - Replace with: http://puu.sh/dkWqp/8cc6e311a3.jpg
00:42:486 to 00:49:597 - Make the section less dense. It's a very calm section and also to fit the other diffs better, it would be nice if you can use many breaks (1/1-gaps) here and lower SV would be nice too
00:54:486 (5) - Needs to be 1/6
01:17:486 (5) - http://puu.sh/dkWCV/10914f2321.jpg is better - Don't start a reversed slider on the blue tick, because it doesn't play very well
Hmm the hitsounding needs some work too o/

Sadly I can't give myself kudosu *Desp runs*

Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Maruyu 2014-12-07T18:26:34+00:00

OSHIETE YO

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Aii-

357 posts

Joined May 2013

Aii- 2014-12-07T21:17:27+00:00

Mod request Mania :3

[Marirose's Normal]

00:16:930 (16930|2) - move to col 4

00:18:264 (18264|0) - move to col 2

00:18:486 (18486|3) - how about this note delete and 00:18:708 (18708|2) - move to col 4 and 00:18:930 - add note to col 3 < like this time 00:20:264 - i think it's great :3

00:21:597 (21597|3) - move to 00:21:375 -

01:06:042 - add note

01:20:708 - add note

01:25:042 (85042|3) - sugestion ,, change to Longnote ,, and finish at 01:26:486 -

[Marirose's Hard]

00:10:375 (10375|3) - delete ;w;

00:10:486 (10486|2) - move to col 4

00:42:819 (42819|3) - move to col 2

00:44:708 (44708|3) - move to col 2

00:47:486 (47486|3) - move to col 1

00:56:264 (56264|2) - change to Longnote

01:01:486 - add note

01:25:042 (85042|3) - change to Longnote finish like NM diff :3

[Marirose's Insane]

00:11:819 (11819|2,11819|3,11930|0,11930|1) - 2 note ?

00:16:930 (16930|2) - move to col 4 ,, i think it's good for jack

00:18:930 (18930|0) - move to col 3

00:20:486 (20486|1) - move to col 1

00:56:486 (56486|1) - change to normal note ,,, or 00:56:264 (56264|2) - here change to long note and finish at 00:56:708 -

01:17:264 - add note

01:17:375 - add note

01:20:708 - add note col 4

01:25:042 - change to longnote like NM/HD :3

i love this song GoodLuck~ :3

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-12-08T03:53:19+00:00

Was going to mod but then i see some changes un-updated, will wait for Marirose's update before I mod

Marirose

1,121 posts

Joined September 2012

Marirose 2014-12-08T07:17:42+00:00

i ll fix them these 2 days,thanks to all modders

Niji_old_1

Niji_old_1 2014-12-08T08:51:08+00:00

Hello, Mod as Requested by PM

*Mania! Mod

Coloumn : l 0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l

Black --> My Suggestion/opinion
Red --> Unrankable issue
Blue --> Comment
Green --> Positive Support

Mod Inside

[General]
CLEAN

[Normal]

00:34:264 - add note, sound same like 00:35:153 (35153|1) -

00:36:042 - add note here, u cant handle this sound, I think

00:44:708 - add note, has soft cymbal sound.. same like 00:43:819 (43819|2) -

00:56:042 (56042|2) - change to normal note, then . . add note here 00:56:153 (56153|3) -

01:06:042 (66042|0) - u missing this sound, add note

[Hard]
Perfect, .-. I think . .

[Insane]

01:05:819 (65819|1) - sound here :3, drummer can feel this . .

Good chart

Keep ur great work. . .

Goodluck Desperate-kun >///<

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2014-12-08T14:18:17+00:00

Desperate-kun wrote:
Speedmodding the GD Hards >w< Because I feel like it.
[Luxo-chan]

OD 6.5 | HP 6, for spread and fun fixed
00:08:486 (1) - It's the only diff with that note so maybe remove >< And I can move the offset.. ook
00:08:708 (2,3,4) - Make (2) curved a bit ? For better aesthetics: http://puu.sh/dkVSl/93f1bf01f2.jpg ok
00:10:264 (6,7) - Have little jump here, maybe http://puu.sh/dkVVv/6341be5f26.jpg ? ok
00:11:153 (8,1) - Reduce the distance a bit ;w; I couldn't here :/
00:14:042 (4,5) - Same. Maybe (5) to 450|230 http://puu.sh/dkW13/f17323030d.jpg ok
00:16:708 (3,4) - Again jump too big imo :c tryed
00:19:375 (1,2,3) - Maybe make the sliders like http://puu.sh/dkW5x/0d22400b52.jpg ? Almost 90° angle doesn't look good to me ok
00:21:819 (7) - http://puu.sh/dkWgl/ef597ad4a5.jpg sounds better ok
00:25:375 (6) - http://puu.sh/dkWjc/3752d8f70f.jpg ok
00:26:486 - Start the spinner here already? no
00:32:930 (5,6,1) - Too big distances tryed
00:41:597 (3,4) - Replace with: http://puu.sh/dkWqp/8cc6e311a3.jpg ok
00:42:486 to 00:49:597 - Make the section less dense. It's a very calm section and also to fit the other diffs better, it would be nice if you can use many breaks (1/1-gaps) here and lower SV would be nice too tryed to delete some notes
00:54:486 (5) - Needs to be 1/6 yes
01:17:486 (5) - http://puu.sh/dkWCV/10914f2321.jpg is better - Don't start a reversed slider on the blue tick, because it doesn't play very well ok
Hmm the hitsounding needs some work too o/

Sadly I can't give myself kudosu *Desp runs*

Ook!

I'll try to check the hitsounds again and to fix some jumps.. Now I don't have time, I just fixed your check, but I'll give this diff a better look later ^.^

code

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Unravel.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55486
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:unravel (TV edit)
TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:Desperate-kun
Version:Luxo's Hard
Source:東京喰種トーキョーグール
Tags:Tokyo Ghoul luxoDeh Yuzu- Mao Nwolf mingmichael cdhsausageboy Marirose Anime Opening
BeatmapID:544404
BeatmapSetID:206887

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CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,480,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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litoluna

1,074 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-12-08T14:35:55+00:00

hi~ Desperate-kun

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]

AIBat -> ok
Title Source -> ok
SPOILER

Tokyo Ghoul Official Site's Source ->http://www.marv.jp/special/tokyoghoul/music.html
I think good

[Easy]

00:30:042 (1) - I felt fitting soft finish.
I think at least drums sound is better than a whistle sounds.
what do you think?

[Normal]

01:18:042 (3) - umm. I feel like that it dull.
my idea:

vocal following pattern.try this

[Yuzu's Hard]

00:29:597 (3) - I like Ctrl+G
Oneself completely does it this way though it is a favorite problem
01:20:486 (2) - I felt not fiting finish at head point.
I listened Cymbals sound is this point -> 01:20:708 -
01:21:375 (3) - I felt not fiting finish at head point.
I listened Drums sound is this point -> 01:21:597 -

[Luxo's Hard]

00:08:708 (2,3,4) - I think cool this arrangement. but I felt a flow to be not good for Hard diff
idea
SPOILER
00:33:375 (6) - As for me, this introduction did not understand any sound whether you responded.
so I think don't need this note.
01:01:819 (5) - NC and 01:02:264 (1) - remove NC
vocal begin at 01:01:819 (5) - so I think fiting it.

[Mao's Insane]

00:27:819 (3,4,5,6,1) - so difficulty... You should prepare spacing. but cool Stream
00:35:153 (8,9,1) - I want follow of kick slider Stream.
It was hard to swat it a little and felt it.
SPOILER
01:11:153 (2) - I think Circle is better than a slider.
what do you think?

[Realization]

00:45:819 (5) - I felt fiting Additions Drum whistle.
I listend Hi-Hat sounds this point.
01:21:597 (5) - I felt fiting finish(volume 20%)
I listend Cymbals sounds this point.

wide spacing Stream so difficult

Tokyo ghoul o.o
nice job! Good luck~

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-08T14:52:17+00:00

litoluna wrote:
hi~ Desperate-kun

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
AIBat -> ok
Title Source -> ok
SPOILER

Tokyo Ghoul Official Site's Source ->http://www.marv.jp/special/tokyoghoul/music.html
I think good
[Easy]
00:30:042 (1) - I felt fitting soft finish. Added
I think at least drums sound is better than a whistle sounds.
what do you think?
[Normal]
01:18:042 (3) - umm. I feel like that it dull. I think that slider is nice ;w;
my idea:

vocal following pattern.try this
[Realization]
00:45:819 (5) - I felt fiting Additions Drum whistle. Added
I listend Hi-Hat sounds this point.
01:21:597 (5) - I felt fiting finish(volume 20%) Whistle sounds better to me here
I listend Cymbals sounds this point.

wide spacing Stream so difficult :b
Tokyo ghoul o.o Hahaha nice
nice job! Good luck~

Thank you very much! Updated!

Writing this down so I remember what wasn't yet applied ><

Std: All GDs, lilotuna's Mod
Mania: All Mods

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-12-08T15:01:32+00:00

litoluna wrote:
[Mao's Insane]
01:11:153 (2) - I think Circle is better than a slider. I don't really want that much emphasis on the blue tick as it is more building up to the next slider rather than being so loud to be mapped as a clickable action.

Rest of the suggestions has been applied, thanks!

Code

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55486
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:Desperate-kun
Version:Mao's Insane
Source:東京喰種トーキョーグール
Tags:Tokyo Ghoul luxoDeh Yuzu- Mao Nwolf mingmichael cdhsausageboy Marirose Anime Opening
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115,52,52597,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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397,47,66042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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78,132,66819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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149,347,71153,2,0,P|179:358|213:361,1,58.4499982162476,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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343,136,74930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,81597,12,0,85042,0:0:0:0:

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2014-12-09T03:17:42+00:00

Via PM request :3

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable stuff/very high recommend
Red: Highly recommend?

[General]

Nicht sicher ob du das musst, aber ich glaube der Anfang des Tracks braucht ein besseres Timing, auch wenn da nix gemappt ist. Vielleicht schon einen Red Timing Point bei 00:01:375 - BPM 135.00 setzen?
Widescreen Support auf Easy ist noch an, bitte ausschalten. ;(
Mag vielleicht nur an mir liegen, aber ich empfand den Noise auf den Slidern an den ruhigeren Passagen als relativ nervig, besonders zwischen 00:42:486 - 00:49:597 - , wo nur wenig instrumental untermalt wird. Vielleicht kannst du ja eine leere soft-sliderslide2.wav hinzufügen.
I feel no real difference between the two hards while playing... which is kind of sad :c I wished one of them would be a bit harder to make the spread better. But eh, nothing too relevant.

[Easy]

00:24:708 (2,1) - Sieht etwas seltsam aus derzeit, konntest du das ende von 00:24:708 (2) - nicht über 1 legen? Andere Möglichkeit wäre auch: http://puu.sh/dmDli/0340c0b34f.jpg . Eher persönliche Meinung.
00:38:930 (3) - Der Whistle auf dem sliderend stört, kannst du ihn löschen?
00:41:597 (2) - (alle diffs) Wieso ein Finish hier, da ist kein Zimbel auf dem Beat.
01:11:819 (2) - Könnte besseren Flow haben: http://puu.sh/dmDJn/36f7cc5e9c.jpg
Good to go!

[Normal]

01:12:708 (5) - Whistle auf dem Reverse-Arrow?
Sieht gut aus~ Bin immer noch kein Fan von deinen Cripple-Slidern am Ende

[Yuzu's Hard]

00:25:597 (5) - Add a whistle on this slider maybe, it's a bit hitsound empty at this part.
00:29:597 (3) - Whistle or some addition on the start of this backslider, the drum's the strongest at this point.
00:46:708 (2) - Missed finish on this sliderstart
00:47:708 - Strongly recommend to set a beat here for the piano.
00:49:597 (1) - There should be an original soft-hitfinish here due to the cymbal in the track. Or you could at the current soft-finish to every down beat at this section til 00:54:042 -
01:02:042 (6) - Add clap on sliderend?
01:07:375 (1) - Not sure if intended, but the whistle on this whole slider is pretty annoying.
01:12:708 (1,2) - Umm... not sure if you are trying to blanket here or not, but might be a good idea to do so. Same at 01:18:042 (1,2) -
01:17:597 (3) - Clap shouldn't be on blue tick here. Delete it.
Is gud.

[Luxo's Hard]

Wait... there's two of them?
00:45:597 (6) - There's no actual beat here, and adding it for the noise is a bit weird. Placing it at 00:45:819 - would make more sense to me.
00:47:375 (3) - ^, this beat is void, there's nothing in the music here.
Else nothing litoluna pointed out already. Fine as always.

[Mao's Insane]

00:20:819 - Hmm, bin mir relativ sicher das hier auch ein Beat sein sollte.
00:27:597 (2,3,4) - Why u do dis to me? ;_; Sollte ok sein, ich versteh nur nicht warum du 3-4 unbedingt so klein spacen musstest im gegensatz zum rest der combo.
00:28:708 (3) - Der Slider startet nicht unbedingt auf einem starken Beat, den ich in der Musik wieder erkannt habe, lediglich den Nachhklang von der E-Gitarre. So etwas wäre angebrachter: http://puu.sh/dmYln/0e5869959f.jpg
00:57:819 (4,5) - Hmm... ich weiß nicht, der Jump zur 5/downbeat passt nicht so richtig hinein, ich sehe keinen Grund in der Musik, um hier extra Druck auszuüben. Den stream einfach um zwei Circles (slider raus) zu erweitern erscheint mir als sinnvoller.
01:19:153 (2,3,4) - Rein preferenzmäßig: wie wärs wenn du die letzten beiden immer ein wenig nach rechts rückst? http://puu.sh/dmZ3I/49886b25d0.jpg Flowt ein wenig besser imo, ohne die Spielweise des Patterns von Grund auf zu verändern.
Niiice.

[Realization]

00:11:153 (4) - Uh... okay warum nicht lol. Ich fänd ein Circle zwar angebrachter, aber was solls~
00:11:597 (1) - Bräuchte eine Verbindung zur nächsten Combo imo wegen dem Vocal. Vielleicht folgendes: http://puu.sh/dmZMM/214fb4c228.jpg
00:12:930 (2,3,4,5) - Etwas ovaler Flow käme hier recht gelegen: http://puu.sh/dmZRD/6cdaf82730.jpg
00:48:708 (3,4) - Fänd's gut wenn sich das nicht überlappen würde. Wie wäre es mit: http://puu.sh/dn0au/b87a5315fe.jpg Sieht cleaner aus
00:54:486 (1,2,3) - Ziemlich tricky wegen 1/6 Beats. Ich würd sie nicht so hoch spacen, ctrl+g die 2te, das ist schon schwer genug zu treffen: http://puu.sh/dn0mR/c7a7e4e0af.jpg
01:03:375 (1,3) - NC sollte erst auf 3 (oder auch auf 3, w/e)
01:18:931 (5) - Setz vielleicht auch einen NC hierhin für die relativ großen Sprünge.
So im Nachhinein war die Diff eigentlich ziemlich gut lol.

The set is pretty neat, I like the STD insanes in this ones a lot. Below nothing too special, but it's fine. Have a star, and good luck! /o/

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2014-12-09T06:02:17+00:00

Hi! request from PM

[Easy]

AR -1

00:28:264 (1) - Clap + Finish
00:30:042 (1) - Normal Finish
00:51:375 (1) - NC

[Nomal]

00:17:375 (3) - Drum Finish
00:30:042 (1) - Normal Finish
00:51:375 (4) - NC
00:58:486 (4,5) - Better flow
img
01:05:375 (3) - add circle?
01:12:708 (5) - Try use this
img

[Yuzu's Hard]

00:10:486 (1) - NC
00:17:375 (3,4,5) - Try use this
img
01:10:819 (3) - Remove last reverse

[Luxo's Hard]

00:33:375 (6) - Remove
00:48:486 (1) - NC

Taiko

d don
D Big don
k ka
K Big ka

[Inner Oni]

00:30:116 (82) - add k
00:31:005 (86) - ^
00:36:042 (115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122) - try use this
img
00:39:597 (141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - ^
img
00:40:597 (150) - D
00:40:708 (151) - k
00:40:819 (152) - add k
00:41:708 (156) - ^
00:44:597 (165) - k
00:45:375 (167) - d
00:55:819 (218,219,220,221,222,223,224) - tyr use this
img
[img]puu.sh/dn9DC/746110bc08.png[/img]
01:18:042 (368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376) - all D
01:22:597 (384) - k
01:24:708 (395,396,397,398) - k k d d

Good luck

Marirose

1,121 posts

Joined September 2012

Marirose 2014-12-09T07:47:44+00:00

GD UPDATE
Normal，Hard Diff，remapped！\>o</

now offline remapping Insane diff

http://puu.sh/dnful/b3f3bb8820.zip

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-09T15:08:29+00:00

Pho wrote:
Via PM request :3

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable stuff/very high recommend
Red: Highly recommend?

[General]
Nicht sicher ob du das musst, aber ich glaube der Anfang des Tracks braucht ein besseres Timing, auch wenn da nix gemappt ist. Vielleicht schon einen Red Timing Point bei 00:01:375 - BPM 135.00 setzen? Pure Vocals müssen nicht getimed sein
Widescreen Support auf Easy ist noch an, bitte ausschalten. ;( Done
Mag vielleicht nur an mir liegen, aber ich empfand den Noise auf den Slidern an den ruhigeren Passagen als relativ nervig, besonders zwischen 00:42:486 - 00:49:597 - , wo nur wenig instrumental untermalt wird. Vielleicht kannst du ja eine leere soft-sliderslide2.wav hinzufügen. Ich finde etwas Feedback nicht verkehrt :3
I feel no real difference between the two hards while playing... which is kind of sad :c I wished one of them would be a bit harder to make the spread better. But eh, nothing too relevant. Welll.. Hard players are a big audience and I think it's good to give them a choice, same as you can have multiple Insanes etc. The spread would not really improve when one diff would be more difficult ... After all, an even spread is about ~equal difficulty gaps, and you just see the two Hards as a choice.
[Easy]
00:24:708 (2,1) - Sieht etwas seltsam aus derzeit, konntest du das ende von 00:24:708 (2) - nicht über 1 legen? Andere Möglichkeit wäre auch: http://puu.sh/dmDli/0340c0b34f.jpg . Eher persönliche Meinung. Hmm, ich mag wie meins aussieht, aber ich bin selbst skeptisch wegen Readability... Ich ändere das später ab, im Moment möchte ich es behalten
00:38:930 (3) - Der Whistle auf dem sliderend stört, kannst du ihn löschen? Jo
00:41:597 (2) - (alle diffs) Wieso ein Finish hier, da ist kein Zimbel auf dem Beat. Intuition :<
01:11:819 (2) - Könnte besseren Flow haben: http://puu.sh/dmDJn/36f7cc5e9c.jpg Mein Flow ist nicht schlecht imo und Variation ist wichtig
Good to go!
[Normal]
01:12:708 (5) - Whistle auf dem Reverse-Arrow? Hmm, nah, da sind die Vocals nicht stark / hoch genug
Sieht gut aus~ Bin immer noch kein Fan von deinen Cripple-Slidern am Ende ;www; xD
[Realization]
00:11:153 (4) - Uh... okay warum nicht lol. Ich fänd ein Circle zwar angebrachter, aber was solls~ Ich weiß was du meinst. Aber hier hat es iwie gepasst, und ich finde mit nem Circle wirkt die 1/1-gap doof an der stelle
00:11:597 (1) - Bräuchte eine Verbindung zur nächsten Combo imo wegen dem Vocal. Vielleicht folgendes: http://puu.sh/dmZMM/214fb4c228.jpg Hmm so habe ich das noch nicht betrachtet, aber ich finde hier passt ein grader Slider viel besser zu dem Sound dem ich folge :<
00:12:930 (2,3,4,5) - Etwas ovaler Flow käme hier recht gelegen: http://puu.sh/dmZRD/6cdaf82730.jpg Es geht mir hier wirklich um Variation in der Map, und linear flow gefällt mir hier gut
00:48:708 (3,4) - Fänd's gut wenn sich das nicht überlappen würde. Wie wäre es mit: http://puu.sh/dn0au/b87a5315fe.jpg Sieht cleaner aus Der Pattern 00:48:708 (3,4,1) - gehört zusammen mit den Overlaps.. Und ich finde es passt gut zu den Vocals, die sich einfach nicht so "clean anhören" (wie der ganze Song auch nicht)
00:54:486 (1,2,3) - Ziemlich tricky wegen 1/6 Beats. Ich würd sie nicht so hoch spacen, ctrl+g die 2te, das ist schon schwer genug zu treffen: http://puu.sh/dn0mR/c7a7e4e0af.jpg Ich muss ehrlich sagen, dass ich den Flow im Moment besser finde, und dadurch ist es leichter zu spielen.
01:03:375 (1,3) - NC sollte erst auf 3 (oder auch auf 3, w/e) Ups, hab ich vergessen :3
01:18:931 (5) - Setz vielleicht auch einen NC hierhin für die relativ großen Sprünge. Das ganze ist ein riesiges 8-Eck, also denke ich nicht, dass da ein NC angebracht ist
So im Nachhinein war die Diff eigentlich ziemlich gut lol. Danke. Sorry, dass ich hier nicht viel gefixt habe, aber ich hoffe meine Begründungen sind schlüssig
The set is pretty neat, I like the STD insanes in this ones a lot. Below nothing too special, but it's fine. Have a star, and good luck! /o/

Thank you so much! o3o

-Maruk- wrote:
Hi! request from PM

[Easy]

AR -1 I don't want to, because the map feels very energetic and also because of the difficulty spread

00:28:264 (1) - Clap + Finish I prefer Finish only here
00:30:042 (1) - Normal Finish I want it to be a different hitsound from 00:33:597 -
00:51:375 (1) - NC Doesn't follow my NC pattern, I've been placing NCs every second measure except for very special patterns

[Nomal]

00:17:375 (3) - Drum Finish Added a Whistle instead, to follow the vocals, since there is no drum of any kind
00:30:042 (1) - Normal Finish Same reasoning as Easy
00:51:375 (4) - NC ^
00:58:486 (4,5) - Better flow I don't think so, sorry
img
01:05:375 (3) - add circle? There is already an object o.o
01:12:708 (5) - Try use this I prefer my version, sorry
img
Taiko

d don
D Big don
k ka
K Big ka

[Inner Oni]

00:30:116 (82) - add k
00:31:005 (86) - ^
00:36:042 (115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122) - try use this
img
00:39:597 (141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - ^
img
00:40:597 (150) - D
00:40:708 (151) - k
00:40:819 (152) - add k
00:41:708 (156) - ^
00:44:597 (165) - k
00:45:375 (167) - d
00:55:819 (218,219,220,221,222,223,224) - tyr use this
img
[img]puu.sh/dn9DC/746110bc08.png[/img]
01:18:042 (368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376) - all D Replaced by something else
01:22:597 (384) - k
01:24:708 (395,396,397,398) - k k d d Fixed this one

Sorry, I denied everything else. Some of your suggestions where you said I should add something, there was already an object, sometimes even the one you told me to use. Then, where you suggested different rhythms, mine followed the main instrument that I was following and sometimes drums / vocals too, but I can't see a logic in your rhythm suggestions.
Good luck

Thank you for the mod! Updated.

What is left to be applied

Mania:
Marirose fix Insane
Taiko:
-
Standard:
Mao fix Pho and Maruk
Yuzu & Luxo fix litoluna, Pho, Maruk

Marirose

1,121 posts

Joined September 2012

Marirose 2014-12-10T13:32:35+00:00

GD UPDATE
Insane diff fixed :)/

thanks to all modders

update

osu file format v13

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ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:Desperate-kun
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Source:東京喰種トーキョーグール
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Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-10T14:32:32+00:00

Nice, updated! :3

What is left to be applied

Standard:
Mao fix Pho and Maruk
Yuzu & Luxo fix litoluna, Pho, Maruk
Taiko, Mania:
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Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-12-10T18:33:54+00:00

Pho wrote:
[Mao's Insane]
00:20:819 - Hmm, bin mir relativ sicher das hier auch ein Beat sein sollte. Hm, ich weiß, was du meinst, aber ich finde der Slider wirkt zusammen mit den Vocals gut und durch die fehlenden Vocals davor ist das 1/4 da nicht so offensichtlich. Adde ich irgendwann vielleicht.
00:27:597 (2,3,4) - Why u do dis to me? ;_; Sollte ok sein, ich versteh nur nicht warum du 3-4 unbedingt so klein spacen musstest im gegensatz zum rest der combo. Sollte ein wenig den Increase darstellen.
00:28:708 (3) - Der Slider startet nicht unbedingt auf einem starken Beat, den ich in der Musik wieder erkannt habe, lediglich den Nachhklang von der E-Gitarre. So etwas wäre angebrachter: http://puu.sh/dmYln/0e5869959f.jpg Ich weiß auch nicht so ganz, warum der so ist lol Fixed.
00:57:819 (4,5) - Hmm... ich weiß nicht, der Jump zur 5/downbeat passt nicht so richtig hinein, ich sehe keinen Grund in der Musik, um hier extra Druck auszuüben. Den stream einfach um zwei Circles (slider raus) zu erweitern erscheint mir als sinnvoller. Findest du? Hm,ich find der Jump spielt sich nicht wirklich "unter Druck". Ich werd mal abwarten, was die anderen Modder sagen. Hab fürs erste das Spacing zwischen Slider und 5 verkleinert.
01:19:153 (2,3,4) - Rein preferenzmäßig: wie wärs wenn du die letzten beiden immer ein wenig nach rechts rückst? http://puu.sh/dmZ3I/49886b25d0.jpg Flowt ein wenig besser imo, ohne die Spielweise des Patterns von Grund auf zu verändern. Nah, wollte hier mal was anderes :b

Thanks!

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Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-12-11T03:36:38+00:00

Ayo mod as promised i think

[General]

hi 1ms unsnapes

You will need to hitsound this sooner or later for rank

[Marirose's Insane]

00:11:819 (11819|2,11819|3,11930|0,11930|1) - I really think 2 note chords is overemphasizing this very soft clap here, i would suggest to reduce them to 1 note "chords"
00:29:930 (29930|3,29930|2,30042|3) - This LN here makes the playing of the drums quite awkward imo, i would suggest this instead ( unsnaps lol )

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00:30:153 (30153|1,30264|3,30375|0,30486|1,30597|2,30708|3,30819|1,30930|3,31042|1,31153|3) - Since the note density is quite low, might as well follow pitch relevancy

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00:33:596 - 00:40:707 - Honestly, this pattern here for the drums doesn't really fit, the strength of the patterns feels too underwhelming compared to the strength of the drums in the music, i would suggest to increase the amount of hammers / alternating hand patterns / any other patterns that increases intensity to increase the strength of the section here
00:41:042 (41042|3,41375|1,41930|3,42264|2) - The gaps in between the LNs here feels rather weird to play | I would suggest to change 00:41:042 (41042|3,41930|3) - both of these LNs to 1/4 length to mimic the staccato feeling on the violin, if you want to you can change 00:41:375 (41375|1,42264|2) - but i think using 1/2 on those is easier to give a higher accuracy for the player
00:49:596 - TO 00:54:485 - | I see that you are increasing the intensity of the section here with more hammers after time, following that idea ( if i guess correctly ) you might want to hammer this 00:53:819 (53819|0,53930|1) - so that the gradient of intensity in the section here feels more like a curve
00:55:819 - You might want to 3 OR 4-note chord this, the vocal and drums here are quite loud and significant, a 3 OR 4 note chord would fit better imo
00:56:707 - During my testplay, i felt that the hammers were rather inconsistent, I will now suggest to:
01:01:819 (61819|2,61819|1,61930|3,61930|0,62042|2,62042|1) - Hammer some of these
01:05:930 (65930|2,65930|1,65930|3) - I would suggest to remove some notes here, it feels rather overemphasized
01:06:486 (66486|3,66486|0,66486|2,66597|0,66597|1,66708|3,66708|2,66819|1,66819|0,66930|0,66930|3,67042|2,67153|3,67264|0,67375|1,67375|2) - Increase the intensity of the section here after time to follow the mood of the music/drums similar to what you did here 01:10:042 (70042|1,70042|0,70042|3,70153|1,70153|2,70264|0,70264|3,70375|1,70375|2,70486|0,70486|3,70597|2,70597|1,70708|2,70708|3,70819|2,70819|1,70930|2,70930|0,70930|3) - , ex.

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01:11:375 (71375|1,71375|2) - Well, since there are so many hammers already, i would suggest to hammer this drum snare so that it emphasizes the drum even more |

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01:13:042 (73042|2,73153|1,73153|0) - ^
01:14:819 (74819|2,74930|1,74930|3) - ^
01:15:708 (75708|2,75819|0,75819|3) - ^

01:13:930 (73930|3,74042|1,74042|0) - You might want to have both of them as 2 note chords and hammer at least 1 note here for the drum snares

01:24:930 (84930|0,85042|2) - Might want to hammer these 2 since they are the same instrument with the same pitch

00:55:819 (55819|1,55819|3,55930|2,56042|1,56153|0,56153|2,56264|3) - Anticipating and reading this with 2.0 speed is almost impossible without several retries and remembering the patterns here
00:55:374 - I would suggest to reduce the SV here or put a lower SV ( around 0.5? ) some where here 00:55:707 - to normalize the scroll speed here and to allow players to react and read OR you can just change to another SV patterning here so that it is easier to read

[Marirose's Hard]

00:14:042 (14042|0,14042|1) - This chord feels rather overemphasized on the left hand here, i would suggest to move 00:14:042 (14042|1) - to the far right so as to balance the impact on the hands and also follow pitch relevancy on the melodic instrument here
00:17:819 (17819|0,17930|3,18153|0,18264|3,18597|1,18708|3) - I personally find patterns like this on weird snap quite hard to time properly when playing, if possible, try to make this easier to play, it's "hard difficulty" after all, i would not suggest complicated rhythms | EX. 00:18:041 - 00:18:485 - overmapping these with notes could make the playing easier imo, well if you are in the club of " no overmapping " then i guess you can skip this suggestion
00:41:597 (41597|0) - Move to the far right for pitch relevancy
01:17:153 (77153|0,77153|3,77264|1,77375|2,77486|3,77597|2,77597|0,77708|1,77819|2,77930|3) - I suggest a stronger pattern here ( like the image below ), it doesn't really fit with the intensity of the drums imo

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01:20:263 - I would suggest to map to the vocals here, it's a easier rhythm than following the 1/2 here 01:20:486 (80486|3) - solely

[Marirose's Normal]

00:12:707 - I would suggest to map to the vocals here, same as the reason I stated above on another difficulty, it feels more complete and it's easier to follow
00:14:930 (14930|0) - I would suggest to move 1/2 forward OR 00:14:707 - Add a note here | Since you followed the string instrument 00:14:412 (14412|3) - here, you might want to follow through the idea here by adding another note for the string instrument so that "normal difficulty" players do not get confused and hit 00:14:930 (14930|0) - too early
00:16:930 (16930|2,17153|0) - I personally think that "normal difficulty" players would prioritize in following the vocals in songs especially in parts like this as the instruments in the background feels negligible | I would suggest to follow the vocals directly like this

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00:20:486 (20486|0) - Same idea as above, I would suggest to move to 00:20:930 -
00:26:263 - Same idea, I would suggest to add a note if possible
00:47:596 - You might want to follow the vocals/hat here since you mapped to the vocals/hat/kick 00:46:708 (46708|1,47153|0) - here
00:48:708 (48708|3) - Well, same idea as i mentioned, I would suggest to follow the vocals here by moving this 1/2 forward
01:05:597 (65597|3,65597|0,66264|3,66264|1,66486|3,66486|0,67375|1,67375|2) - This section feels rather empty, i would suggest to add notes or spread the notes out here
01:18:042 (78042|2,78042|1,78264|1,78264|2,78486|2,78486|1,78708|2,78708|1,78930|2,78930|3,79153|1,79153|0,79375|3,79375|2,79597|0,79597|1) - I personally feel that the music is increasing in intensity here, I would suggest to do the same for the notes also | I feel that hammers give more strength/intensity than alternating hand on a 1/2 scenario here thus i would suggest to "flip" the pattern like this |

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OR like this

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Nothing else

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2014-12-11T08:19:34+00:00

Hi!! :3
lmao didnt realize it's tokyo ghoul cracks knuckles

[General]

Never seen bg with 1187x768 whee but since you're in BAT team, i guess you knew it

[Easy]

00:24:708 (2,1) - well you probably did this on purpose, but i kinda prefer the usual overlap lmao http://puu.sh/dpWx4/8e7d1b2bc5.jpg but yeah it's up to you
00:44:264 (2,1,2) - i think you use finish hitsound too much in this part. well i'm okay with it but it kinda doesn't fit the song since at this part the song is kinda quiet. i suggest to remove the finishes from those slider's head
00:49:153 (3,1) - why not use 1.1x ds between them? since 00:49:597 (1) - 's sv kinda change

[Normal]

00:44:264 (2) - 00:46:042 (1) - 00:47:819 (4) - same like easy, about the hitsound at slider's head
00:56:264 (3) - add clap? i prefer it like that because at this part, the drum noises are still strong
01:18:042 (3) - ok only suggestion, because the few last red squares kinda makes the slider's junction a bit like idk derp http://puu.sh/dpXGA/6abffda257.jpg

[Yuzu's Hard]

00:23:597 (2) - only suggestion. i'd rather bend this slider a bit so the flow would be better http://puu.sh/dpYxp/c99217ccce.jpg
00:28:264 (1) - i think softfinish fits better than drumfinish since the cymbal here is strong
00:29:153 (2) - ^
00:33:597 (1) - add normal-hitfinish at slider's head? idk to accent the start of a new verse but it's up to you
00:42:486 (1) - ^ but with soft-hitfinish
01:02:042 (6) - clap at slider's tail?
01:21:375 (3) - i'd rather place this somewhere farther. make it more interesting to play(maybe around 208|44 or anywhere you want as long as it's a bit farther from before)

[Luxo's Hard]

00:16:708 (3,4) - gdi the distance is really far for hard especially this is the part where it's less jumpy
00:30:042 (1) - add finish at slider's head? i tried it, and it's kinda cool when the cymbal noise is being accented
00:47:375 (3,4) - same like 00:16:708 (3,4) -
00:58:042 (4,5) - only suggestion. i'd rather make them a bit spaced out, since the sv is quite slow and thus won't make it cramped like the current one http://puu.sh/dq06M/d16a56f9ab.jpg but yeah maybe you prefer the current one so it's up to you
01:03:375 (3,4) - ^
01:13:375 (2,3) - ^
01:13:819 (4) - add clap at slider's head?
01:19:819 (1,2) - i think normal-hitfinish fits better than drum-hitfinish

i just realized that you didn't do anything with the sv, making it quite slow during energetic parts like 00:33:596 - and the kiais. well idk when i played it, it's kinda like a turn-off because the loud music makes me want to move my mouse faster lmao but you probably prefer it that way, so yeah. just pointing it out

welp can't find anything in last two insane diffs, i'm sorry ;w;
and i'm sorry for poor mod

anyway i hope it gets ranked soon! <3

goodluck!

Charlotte

1,905 posts

Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2014-12-11T08:28:12+00:00

hi~.from my modding queues (Cdh's request)

[

about]

d is don note
k is kat note
D is big don note
K is big kat note

[

General]

Good~

[

Kantan]

OD2→3 HP2→3

01:06:931 - add k.because,follow the vocal.

[

Nwolf's Futsuu]

OD3→4 HP3.5→4

00:52:703 - add d.because,follow the rhythm.

00:56:707 - 01:07:379 - I think hard pattern (1/4 line). so 01:10:925 - 01:17:376 - this pattern is good.think again

[

m1ng's Muzukashii]

00:32:371 - add d.

00:32:928 - ^

00:59:698 - move to 00:59:605 -
01:03:266 - move to 01:03:161 -
01:05:051 - move to 01:04:931 -
01:06:828 - move to 01:06:713 -

[Cdh's Oni][list:1337]

00:34:486 (6,7,8,9,10) - I feel don't fit.
00:38:042 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^

00:59:698 - move to 00:59:605 -
01:03:266 - move to 01:03:161 -
01:05:051 - move to 01:04:931 -
01:06:828 - move to 01:06:713 -

This map Oni...so 1/6 is don't fit.imo

sorrry.I'm not good at Inner Oni.so no check.Good luck

Myxo

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3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-11T13:02:53+00:00

Charlotte wrote:
hi~.from my modding queues (Cdh's request)

[ about]
d is don note
k is kat note
D is big don note
K is big kat note
[ General]

Good~
[ Kantan]

OD2→3 HP2→3 I completely rearranged the diff settings, to 2-2, 3-3, 4-4, 5-5, 6-6 should be better now ;w;
To Taiko Guest Mappers: If you don't agree with the diff setting I set in your diffs now (it's not much different from old one), please tell me lol

01:06:931 - add k.because,follow the vocal. Done
w

sorrry.I'm not good at Inner Oni.so no check.Good luck Okay, thanks :3

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
Hi!! :3
lmao didnt realize it's tokyo ghoul cracks knuckles hehe

[General]

Never seen bg with 1187x768 whee but since you're in BAT team, i guess you knew it Yep, ranking criteria allows it, though I might let someone help me improving it ;W;
[Easy]

00:24:708 (2,1) - well you probably did this on purpose, but i kinda prefer the usual overlap lmao http://puu.sh/dpWx4/8e7d1b2bc5.jpg but yeah it's up to you Finally changed to something else
00:44:264 (2,1,2) - i think you use finish hitsound too much in this part. well i'm okay with it but it kinda doesn't fit the song since at this part the song is kinda quiet. i suggest to remove the finishes from those slider's head You are right, fixed
00:49:153 (3,1) - why not use 1.1x ds between them? since 00:49:597 (1) - 's sv kinda change But it would look weird if the gap between 1/1s would change here, since (3) is a circle ... That's why I thought it'd be less confusing this way
[Normal]

00:44:264 (2) - 00:46:042 (1) - 00:47:819 (4) - same like easy, about the hitsound at slider's head Done
00:56:264 (3) - add clap? i prefer it like that because at this part, the drum noises are still strong Nah, it sounds better without a clap for me
01:18:042 (3) - ok only suggestion, because the few last red squares kinda makes the slider's junction a bit like idk derp Hmm yet I want to keep this slider as-is but I will see what others tell me http://puu.sh/dpXGA/6abffda257.jpg
welp can't find anything in last two insane diffs, i'm sorry ;w;
and i'm sorry for poor mod
anyway i hope it gets ranked soon! <3
goodluck!

Thanks so much, both of you! :3 Updated!

What is left to be applied

Standard:
Yuzu & Luxo fix litoluna, Pho, Maruk, AlpacaCokelat
Taiko:
GDs fix Charlotte
Mania:
fix Z3nx

Kaguya Hourain

514 posts

Joined October 2012

Kaguya Hourain 2014-12-11T17:05:41+00:00

Hello~

General

Uninherited timing point complications I think but not sure probably cuz I didn't update diffs.

Easy

Why not OD3
00:15:819 (1) - x:432 y:197 would flow better with current sliderpath imo. Don't forget to resnap the circle :3
00:17:597 (3) - This might be a bit confusing I would actually start it on the red tick. I don't think it would be that hard. Make sure the slider's first reverse ends where it currently does and well I'd remove the reverse and add a circle 00:18:707 - here.
Otherwise pretty clean and nice :3

Normal

OD to 5? If you don't get why throw me a pm.
00:36:263 (5) - Hmmm how about you make this 3/4? Sounds so much cooler!
00:39:819 (5) - Same here!

Yuzu-han's Hard

Hey bae~
AR to 7 would be nice!
00:32:708 (4) - Maybe place two 1/4 stacked and then stack a 1/4 single reverse slider? I think it fits better and plays more smoothly~
00:49:153 (6) - Would place a bit lower for smoother movement :3
01:00:042 (5,6,1) - Sliderpath doesn't really flow well with the stack there :/ Try rotating the slider clockwise a little!

Luxo's Hard

OD to 7?
00:47:375 (3,4) - Quite the unnecessary spaceout. Lower the spacing here ples
Interesting!

Mao's Insane

AR9 OD7 get outta here! OD8 OR RIOT!!
00:26:264 (7,3,4,5,6) - Would keep the increase in spacing consecutive here instead of just having 4 5 and 6 spaced the same.
00:56:708 (1,2) - Hmm I'd reverse those two in the timeline to match the vocals I feel it fits so much better!
01:00:264 (1) - I feel this and the next reverse one like that are breaking the flow of the map, bringing it to a slower pace rather than the fast pace the kiai has. Why don't you try something like this:
box of kawaii~

Realization

Since you consider this an Extra go with OD9 :3
00:11:153 (4) - DESPERATE-SAN WHYYYYYYYY
00:26:486 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - While I like the idea here I don't think that it fits with the music that much. It feels better if the pattern gets cut off into two instead of three, ending on 2 of the second current combo. Pretty sure you want to keep this but, just saying that it feels wrong.
00:33:042 (8,9) - I'd stack this :3
00:54:486 (1,2,3,1) - These are really unreadable. I've played the diff so many times I still don't think I can read it. Try something like this:
such kawaii
The kiai is really nice!

Welp that's it from me~

Speedrank ples

Myxo

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3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-11T19:01:41+00:00

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
Hello~

General
Uninherited timing point complications I think but not sure probably cuz I didn't update diffs. yep, you didn't update, baka xD

Easy
Why not OD3 OD3 too much for the easiest diff imo
00:15:819 (1) - x:432 y:197 would flow better with current sliderpath imo. Don't forget to resnap the circle :3 Done, nice
00:17:597 (3) - This might be a bit confusing I would actually start it on the red tick. I don't think it would be that hard. Make sure the slider's first reverse ends where it currently does and well I'd remove the reverse and add a circle 00:18:707 - here. Nah, I think it's fine. I completely dislike 3/2-gaps, and here the current rhythm fits well with the instruments.
Otherwise pretty clean and nice :3

Normal
OD to 5? If you don't get why throw me a pm. Diff spread, and I really prefer OD < AR
00:36:263 (5) - Hmmm how about you make this 3/4? Sounds so much cooler! I don't think so o.o I would miss the cymbals and drums
00:39:819 (5) - Same here! ^

Realization
Since you consider this an Extra go with OD9 :3 People already complained about the 1/6 so clear no, sorry
00:11:153 (4) - DESPERATE-SAN WHYYYYYYYY Okay, finally changed.. Although it was cute xDD
00:26:486 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - While I like the idea here I don't think that it fits with the music that much. It feels better if the pattern gets cut off into two instead of three, ending on 2 of the second current combo. Pretty sure you want to keep this but, just saying that it feels wrong. Mhm, it actually fits well with the music. If you listen to vocals, or the drums, it makes sense
00:33:042 (8,9) - I'd stack this :3 Nah I thought too many stacks there were boring
00:54:486 (1,2,3,1) - These are really unreadable. I've played the diff so many times I still don't think I can read it. Try something like this: Sorry but for now I'd really like to keep it, although they are subject to change. But I've seen it in so many maps (mainly from chinese mappers) and I think it plays nice and I can use it here because it really fits and gives nice emphasis.. If you can't read it maybe it's because of your rather low skill, no offense
such kawaii
The kiai is really nice! Cool, thank you :3

Welp that's it from me~

Speedrank ples

Thanks so much! Updated

Left to be applied box

Standard:
Yuzu & Luxo fix litoluna, Pho, Maruk, AlpacaCokelat, Kaguya
Mao fix Kaguya
Taiko:
GDs fix Charlotte
Mania:
fix Z3nx

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-12-11T19:14:25+00:00

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
Mao's Insane
AR9 OD7 get outta here! OD8 OR RIOT!! 7.5 is a deal *runs*
00:26:264 (7,3,4,5,6) - Would keep the increase in spacing consecutive here instead of just having 4 5 and 6 spaced the same. That was what it was supposed to be. Fixed
00:56:708 (1,2) - Hmm I'd reverse those two in the timeline to match the vocals I feel it fits so much better! Still considering :/
01:00:264 (1) - I feel this and the next reverse one like that are breaking the flow of the map, bringing it to a slower pace rather than the fast pace the kiai has. Why don't you try something like this: You think so? I thought of it as a good variation. I don't know, probably changing with further opinions.
box of kawaii~

Thanks!

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ColdTooth

1,104 posts

Joined June 2012

ColdTooth 2014-12-11T21:08:24+00:00

It has been awhile since I last modded in terms of modding, because schoolwork pretty much brought me so down, so feel free to say this mod sucks.

Mod by request

No drafts were harmed in the making of this mod lol thats a lie

[Easy]

00:24:708 (2) - Right now it doesn't look flowing in transition. Try moving this down a little bit so it lines up with the end

00:53:153 (1,2) - Make parallel

01:08:264 (1,2,1) - Make into triangle

01:20:708 (2) - x:456 y:48

[Normal]

00:24:264 (3,4) - Maybe have these two blanket one another?

00:26:486 (1,1) - I kinda feel like these two are a little too close to each other in rhythm, maybe the first spinner can have a couple notes in it

00:38:930 (4) - Blanket 00:38:486 (3) - /run

01:06:264 (4) - Maybe have this curved to transition to 01:07:375 (1) - better

01:18:042 (3) - My only issue is that the end is more crowded than the beginning of the slider lol

[Yuzu's Hard]

00:14:042 (4) - Have the last sliderpoint go down a little bit

00:26:486 (1,2,3,4) - ok so, the fact that not a lot of people will expect the sv change (not like it will matter), but what I really do not like it the fact that there is an increase of spacing, and I think that is not necessary

00:54:264 (5,6) - This kinda looks badly placed imo. Maybe 6 can be moved to the right a bit and not left, and maybe even curved

00:56:708 (1,2) - This looks weird. Consider making these two the same sliders, blanketing one another

01:18:042 (1,2) - Please make these the same sliders, right now it looks weird

01:19:819 (1,2) - I kinda dislike these last two sliders. Maybe make them have a bit faster sv

[Luxo's Hard]

To me, this feels really slow. And the gap of difficulty between this and Mao's Insane kinda puts me to think if this should be a bit harder because it is a lot slower

00:19:375 (1,3) - Why not make these the same?

I think it just needs some more work. No offense, I kinda wish it had faster sliders.

[Mao's Insane]

oh hi

00:27:819 (3,4,5,6,1) - *explode*

00:52:930 (8,1) - I find this confusing :c

01:01:153 (2,3,4) - I kinda expected a small jump, maybe increase the spacing a tad?

01:02:486 (2,3,4) - ^

[Realization]

00:10:486 (1,2,3,4) - Odd pattern.

00:49:597 (1,2,4,5) - This kinda bummed me out. I thought 2 and 5 would be triplets with 2 circles and not a 1/4th slider

00:58:338 (8,9) - Alright... I kinda don't hear the 1/6th but ok xD

Overall, great mapset

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2014-12-11T21:30:34+00:00

ColdTooth wrote:
It has been awhile since I last modded in terms of modding, because schoolwork pretty much brought me so down, so feel free to say this mod sucks.

Mod by request

No drafts were harmed in the making of this mod lol thats a lie

[Easy]

00:24:708 (2) - Right now it doesn't look flowing in transition. Try moving this down a little bit so it lines up with the end Fixed

00:53:153 (1,2) - Make parallel I like how it currently is ;w;

01:08:264 (1,2,1) - Make into triangle There is no reason ... In this way, the flow is better, and the overlap is not noticeable because the objects are far apart

01:20:708 (2) - x:456 y:48 okay

[Normal]

00:24:264 (3,4) - Maybe have these two blanket one another? They already do ;www;

00:26:486 (1,1) - I kinda feel like these two are a little too close to each other in rhythm, maybe the first spinner can have a couple notes in it Nah, it's okay, 2/1-gap after spinner in Normal is enough and this is even low BPM

00:38:930 (4) - Blanket 00:38:486 (3) - /run Already

01:06:264 (4) - Maybe have this curved to transition to 01:07:375 (1) - better I think the transition is fine atm

01:18:042 (3) - My only issue is that the end is more crowded than the beginning of the slider lol Already told you ingame ;w;

[Realization]

00:10:486 (1,2,3,4) - Odd pattern. Fixed

00:49:597 (1,2,4,5) - This kinda bummed me out. I thought 2 and 5 would be triplets with 2 circles and not a 1/4th slider Huh? I think the sliders on the blue ticks fit here well with the vocals, no change

00:58:338 (8,9) - Alright... I kinda don't hear the 1/6th but ok xD It's there babe xD

Overall, great mapset

Thank you very much! Updated!

Stuff left

Standard:
Yuzu & Luxo fix litoluna, Pho, Maruk, AlpacaCokelat, Kaguya, ColdTooth
Mao fix Coldtooth
Taiko:
GDs fix Charlotte
Mania:
fix Z3nx

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2014-12-11T23:06:41+00:00

litoluna wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]
00:08:708 (2,3,4) - I think cool this arrangement. but I felt a flow to be not good for Hard diff no change
idea
SPOILER
00:33:375 (6) - As for me, this introduction did not understand any sound whether you responded.
so I think don't need this note. ok
01:01:819 (5) - NC and 01:02:264 (1) - remove NC ok
vocal begin at 01:01:819 (5) - so I think fiting it.

Pho wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]
Wait... there's two of them?
00:45:597 (6) - There's no actual beat here, and adding it for the noise is a bit weird. Placing it at 00:45:819 - would make more sense to me. ok
00:47:375 (3) - ^, this beat is void, there's nothing in the music here. ok, changed
Else nothing litoluna pointed out already. Fine as always.

-Maruk- wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]

00:33:375 (6) - Remove no
00:48:486 (1) - NC ok

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]

00:16:708 (3,4) - gdi the distance is really far for hard especially this is the part where it's less jumpy fixed
00:30:042 (1) - add finish at slider's head? i tried it, and it's kinda cool when the cymbal noise is being accented yes
00:47:375 (3,4) - same like 00:16:708 (3,4) - ok
00:58:042 (4,5) - only suggestion. i'd rather make them a bit spaced out, since the sv is quite slow and thus won't make it cramped like the current one http://puu.sh/dq06M/d16a56f9ab.jpg but yeah maybe you prefer the current one so it's up to you I tryed it, maybe this will make the kiai a bit more interesting
01:03:375 (3,4) - ^
01:13:375 (2,3) - ^
01:13:819 (4) - add clap at slider's head? ok
01:19:819 (1,2) - i think normal-hitfinish fits better than drum-hitfinish yes

i just realized that you didn't do anything with the sv, making it quite slow during energetic parts like 00:33:596 - and the kiais. well idk when i played it, it's kinda like a turn-off because the loud music makes me want to move my mouse faster lmao but you probably prefer it that way, so yeah. just pointing it out

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
Luxo's Hard
OD to 7? no
00:47:375 (3,4) - Quite the unnecessary spaceout. Lower the spacing here ples ok
Interesting!

ColdTooth wrote:
[Luxo's Hard]

To me, this feels really slow. And the gap of difficulty between this and Mao's Insane kinda puts me to think if this should be a bit harder because it is a lot slower it was meant to be like this. I was asked to try to keep it with a certian diff rate and I tryed my best to do it. I know it could have been faster but it was mapped to be not too much hard.

00:19:375 (1,3) - Why not make these the same? ok

I think it just needs some more work. No offense, I kinda wish it had faster sliders.

Thanks for the mods

code

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Title:unravel (TV edit)
TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:Desperate-kun
Version:Luxo's Hard
Source:東京喰種トーキョーグール
Tags:Tokyo Ghoul luxoDeh Yuzu- Mao Nwolf mingmichael cdhsausageboy Marirose Anime Opening
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Neku Okazaki

Neku Okazaki 2014-12-11T23:51:09+00:00

Hi o/, MP mod request ~

[Kantan]

Estimated rank SS

00:10:486 (3) - The sound changes, a k is better imo
00:13:597 (5,6) - Not is too playable at the first time, try to make something more playable, like dk
00:15:819 (7,8,9) - Has a different intensity, try something like d k d. intensity
00:19:375 (10,11,12) - ^
00:24:264 (14,15) - This dont follow the rhythm, this is more playable: dk
00:32:708 (21,22,23) - Ctrl + G?, is better imo intensity
00:51:375 (43) - d is better imo, because this part is only for ddd
00:59:374 (56) - This is a combination of sounds and vocal, d is better for this part
01:02:041 (59) - ^ dkk
01:09:597 (71) - a kkk pattern isnt good for this, try kdk to make it more playable

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[Futsuu]

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Testplay: This diff is too hard to be a futsuu and too easy to be muzukashii, because it have some patterns like dk with out the vocal follow.

00:16:708 (9) - The vocal change the word, change this to k, it follow more the vocal
00:18:486 (12) - d if you make this^, to follow the pattern
00:52:707 (22) - Add d to continue with the pattern
00:57:042 (2) - Move to 00:57:152 - , is more playable...

Testplay: This diff is too hard to be a futsuu and too easy to be muzukashii, because it have some patterns like dk with out the vocal follow.

00:58:819 (6) - ^
01:00:596 (11) - You dont need to change this ~
01:02:375 (15) - Move to 01:02:485 -
01:05:930 (25) - ^, is better imo
01:18:042 (51) - This is a combination of vocal and sound, change to k, this follow more the vocal

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[Muzukashii]

Estimated rank S

Testplay: This is something like a comberted map

00:09:375 (3,2) - Ctrl + G?, is more playable
00:11:153 (2) - Move to 00:10:930 - ...

Testplay: This is something like a comberted map

00:12:930 (3,2) - Ctrl + G is better imo
00:26:264 (1) - Chango tok because it 00:26:264 (1,2) - have a change, and not of intensity
00:29:819 - Add k
00:30:707 - Add d
00:32:374 - Have sound, add d
00:33:596 - - 00:40:152 - hmmm...

Testplay: This is something like a comberted map

01:12:597 (2) - Dont make it more har, please delete this
01:25:042 (12) - Move to 01:25:152 -

Sorry, it really need some mods more.

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[Oni]
00:35:152 - Add d to link the other parts
00:38:707 - ^
00:55:819 - - 00:56:263 - Map this

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Good luck

[Inner oni]
00:28:264 (73) - Unrankeable

Finish notes must not be in the middle or at the beginning in a 1/4 or above stream. At the end, finish streams may be allowed if there is a reasonable sound for it. Finisher notes at the end of a stream must have the opposite color of the four previous notes.

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Ok, im only see it, good luck ~

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