Minakami Yuki wrote:

~Recheck~

General

1. Preview time unsnapped because of the offset change.

Collab Insane

1. 02:38:005 (1,2) - I'm not sure that snap these on 1/6 here is right or not, for safe I recommend to change the pattern here. changed

Minakami Yuki wrote:

~Recheck~

General

1. Preview time unsnapped because of the offset change. aaa fixed QAQ

Collab Insane

1. 02:38:005 (1,2) - I'm not sure that snap these on 1/6 here is right or not, for safe I recommend to change the pattern here.

BeatofIke wrote:

moe o3o

xxdeathx wrote:

Lolicons >w<

CloudSplash16 wrote:

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Hi.

[Insane]

1. 03:32:176 - I think it's better to make all this part kiai time like this: http://puu.sh/fEjev/fa4ab0bc74.jpg
2. 00:06:805 (1,1,1) - It's better to reverse the direction of these since it's similar to 00:05:433 (1,1,1) Do this: http://puu.sh/fEfmp/b6543caa49.jpg
3. 01:07:662 (5) - This doesn't fit the rhythm of the song. Please reduce it to a 1/2 beat slider so it matches the drum rhythm: http://puu.sh/fEfPR/20548e653b.jpg or if you really want a note on that tick, http://puu.sh/fEfV9/334a143dcc.jpg
4. 01:36:462 (1,2,3) - The way this is stacked makes it confusing to read because the approach circles overlap in a really weird way. I think it's better to either stack them directly http://puu.sh/fEh1f/3677887586.jpg or scale it up like this: http://puu.sh/fEheF/ddb72f9ebe.jpg
5. 01:57:890 (2) - This is touching the hp bar. Try to avoid that.
6. 04:18:462 (4) - Missing clap.
7. 04:19:834 (4) - Missing clap.

Good map. Call me back when you are ready.

CloudSplash16 wrote:

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Hi.

[General]

1. The current background image has low quality. Here is a better version: http://puu.sh/fE3cr/55c9c6a07e.jpg

[Easy]

1. 01:51:890 (2) - Add a clap on the head. It matches with 03:04:576 (2)
2. 01:36:976 (1) - Remove clap from the end? It doesn't seem to fit. You didn't use it at 02:50:347
3. 03:41:433 (1) - Combo here should match with 01:57:205 (5)
4. 04:44:862 (1) - How about adding normal finish on this spinner? (hitsound will be on end of the spinner)

[Normal]

1. 01:59:947 (4,2) - To avoid covering the repeat on (2), can you move (4) like this? http://puu.sh/fE72J/efd65fcc1a.jpg This is to make sure the player can clearly see the repeat on (2).
2. 03:10:062 (1) - Can make this shape look nicer if you move the second point like this: http://puu.sh/fE5yd/cf4f0a098e.jpg
3. 03:41:433 (1) - Combo here should match with 01:57:205 (4)
4. 04:44:862 (1) - Add a whistle on the spinner?
5. 04:47:605 (1) - A finish will sound good here.

[Hard]

1. 00:24:976 (4,1) - It's better to put larger distance between these. It looks too much like 1/2 beat.
2. 00:31:147 (1) - This doesn't look good, and can cause issues for gameplay. I recommend widening the angle like this: http://puu.sh/fEb5N/5bca718980.jpg
3. 00:36:633 (1) - Missing a whistle on head.
4. 00:49:490 - There doesn't seem to be any reason to stretch the break warning here. Set it back to the default?
5. 01:17:605 (1,1) - Weird to use two combos here... It can be confusing, so just choose one of them to use NC on?
6. 02:30:290 (1,1) - Same here.
7. 02:52:405 (1) - Finish on head.
8. 04:10:576 (1) - Same as 00:31:147 (1) Please change it: http://puu.sh/fEdn7/d451c3bc0a.jpg
9. 04:39:376 (1) - http://puu.sh/fEdxd/fb39024f2b.jpg
10. 04:44:862 (1,1) - Same suggestions are Normal.

[Insane]

1. 03:32:176 - I think it's better to make all this part kiai time like this: http://puu.sh/fEjev/fa4ab0bc74.jpg
2. 00:06:805 (1,1,1) - It's better to reverse the direction of these since it's similar to 00:05:433 (1,1,1) Do this: http://puu.sh/fEfmp/b6543caa49.jpg
3. 01:07:662 (5) - This doesn't fit the rhythm of the song. Please reduce it to a 1/2 beat slider so it matches the drum rhythm: http://puu.sh/fEfPR/20548e653b.jpg or if you really want a note on that tick, http://puu.sh/fEfV9/334a143dcc.jpg
4. 01:36:462 (1,2,3) - The way this is stacked makes it confusing to read because the approach circles overlap in a really weird way. I think it's better to either stack them directly http://puu.sh/fEh1f/3677887586.jpg or scale it up like this: http://puu.sh/fEheF/ddb72f9ebe.jpg
5. 01:57:890 (2) - This is touching the hp bar. Try to avoid that.
6. 04:18:462 (4) - Missing clap.
7. 04:19:834 (4) - Missing clap.

[Extra]

1. 00:05:090 (1,2,1,2) - I think it's better to add some hitsounds on these too.
2. 00:16:062 (1,2,3,4) - Same here.
3. 00:49:662 (1) - There doesn't seem to be any reason to stretch the break warning here. Set it back to the default?
4. 01:01:319 (1) - Curve here is a bit too tight in my opinion. It makes the direction a bit ambiguous. Adjust it a bit like this so it's clearer: http://puu.sh/fElS1/39b565cff2.jpg
5. 04:03:376 (1,1) - This spacing is awkward to play. How about you stack it like you did with 02:29:776 (1,1)
6. 04:20:176 (1) - Add a finish?
7. 04:47:605 (1) - Add a finish on the head?

Good map. Call me back when you are ready.

FencerTJ wrote:

Is it nitpicky to point out there should be a space before the parentheses, since that's the title for the soundcloud? Or is it irrelevant, since on the provided mp3 it's without the space, even though that's just the file name, not necessarily the song?

CloudSplash16 wrote:

FencerTJ wrote:

Is it nitpicky to point out there should be a space before the parentheses, since that's the title for the soundcloud? Or is it irrelevant, since on the provided mp3 it's without the space, even though that's just the file name, not necessarily the song?

Uhh.. I think you should look more carefully. There is no space in the title on SoundCloud.

Chirony wrote:

おめぴょんぴょん！

caren_sk wrote:

おめでとー！これからもがんばってー！

Arieeru wrote:

ランクドおめです～
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Cihyaa wrote:

gratz! おめでとうございます！！

scanter wrote:

Mokori-san omedetooooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuu \o/

Minakami Yuki wrote:

out of qualified jail おめでとう