1. Your video is too big and have sound on it, which is unrankable. Here is better one with removed volume and redused filesize.
2. Remove ed from tags - website search doesn't work for words with less than 3 characters anyway.
3. Your map starts kinda too fast with 400 ms of audio lead-in, and seems that automatic audio lead-in doesn't works well here - please add it manually using notepad, 1500 should be fine (File -> open .osu in Notepad -> change "AudioLeadIn: 400" to "AudioLeadIn: 1500")

1. 00:02:263 (5,1) - I feel flow here kinda weird; tranzition from jump & regular spacing, from linear & curved slider could be improved a tiny bit. How about change it to something like this so it'd feels more smooth while playing?
   
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:05:387 (1,2,3) - Kind of similiar issue; perhaps make it more smooth too? Like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:12:887 (1,3) - Stack it perfectly for estetical reasons (currently its few grids off due to bug, which'd looks bad while playing)
4. 00:26:324 (3) - New combo follow vocals?
5. 00:34:115 (3) - This slider should be 3/4, not 1/3, you can check this by listening at 25% playback
6. 00:42:865 (1,2,1,2) - Ah, this pattern looks a bit messy :< How about to make something like this to make it more smooth and interesting to play? (just keep 0.60 spacing between each two sliders)
   
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:49:116 (5) - Needs new combo due to jump & new part at music
8. 00:59:740 (7,8,1) - Re-space this part a bit please to avoid overlapping - something like this would looks more clean:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:16:619 (4) - New combo due to pattern please.
10. 01:16:619 (4,5,6,7) - Same, i think would be better to use slighty bigger DS between these sliders to avoid untidy overlapping
11. 01:25:393 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think NC on each two notes would looks pretty well with your pattern.

1. 00:34:115 (8) - This slider should be 1/4, not 1/3, you can check this by listening at 25% playback
2. 00:35:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flows kinda bad, maybe make something like this instead?
   
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:01:303 (2,3,4) - Strange that this is single linear pattern at the whole diff - it looks quite strange here and feels out of place. Try something like this instead:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:02:552 (4,7) - This stack could be better for estetical reasons
5. 01:16:931 (4) - New combo follow vocals please
6. 01:20:393 (1) - I believe this spinner should begins at 01:20:081 - follow vocals

1. 00:39:740 (2,3) - Imo, they'd looks better as regular blanket instead of linear slider
2. 00:49:115 (3) - Missed clap on tail
3. 00:52:240 (2,4) - Both missing claps
4. 01:15:369 (1) - Nah, linear slider looks very out of flow here. Try something more smooth here, like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   

Feith wrote:

hello...
from mod q here
here is my results !

[General]
change [short ver.] with (Short Ver)?
the green combo colour is not sync with the background


[Easy]
00:40:366 (3) - make it longer until 00:42:865
00:43:490 (4) - drag it until it fit the tick
00:45:365 (1) - ^
00:49:115 (3) - ^
00:50:365 (1) - ^
00:52:865 (3) - ^
00:55:365 (1) - ^
00:58:490 (2) - ^
01:00:365 (1) - ^
01:04:115 (3) - ^
01:05:365 (1) - ^
01:06:615 (2) - ^
01:09:740 (1) - ^
01:10:990 (2) - ^
01:13:490 (4) - ^
00:44:740 (5) - place it between the end of 4 and the head of 1
01:10:365 (1) - remove finish?
01:19:768 - new object ?


[Normal]
00:01:013 (2) - make it on x:248 y:80
00:05:075 (5) - NC ?
00:14:762 (6) - ^
00:38:803 (6) - ^
00:41:303 (3) - Drag until it fits the tick
00:42:553 (5) - ^
00:43:490 (6) - ^
00:44:740 (9) - ^
00:45:365 (1) - ^
00:46:303 (3) - ^
00:47:553 (5) - ^
00:49:115 (1) - ^
00:49:740 (2) - ^
00:50:365 (3) - ^
00:51:303 (4) - ^
00:52:865 (1) - ^
00:53:490 (2) - ^
00:54:115 (3) - ^
00:55:053 (5) - ^
00:56:303 (3) - ^
00:57:240 (4) - ^
00:59:115 (1) - ^
00:59:740 (2) - ^
01:00:365 (1) - ^
01:01:303 (2) - ^
01:02:552 (4) - ^
01:04:115 (7) - ^
01:05:052 (1) - ^
01:06:302 (3) - ^
01:07:240 (4) - ^
01:08:802 (4) - ^
01:10:365 (1) - ^
01:10:990 (2) - ^
01:12:865 (5) - ^
01:13:490 (6) - ^
01:14:439 (7) - ^
01:18:181 (6) - ^

Kodora wrote:

As requested, from BMT I love you kodora!

[General]

1. Your video is too big and have sound on it, which is unrankable. Here is better one with removed volume and redused filesize. Fixed
2. Remove ed from tags - website search doesn't work for words with less than 3 characters anyway. Fixed
3. Your map starts kinda too fast with 400 ms of audio lead-in, and seems that automatic audio lead-in doesn't works well here - please add it manually using notepad, 1500 should be fine (File -> open .osu in Notepad -> change "AudioLeadIn: 400" to "AudioLeadIn: 1500") Fixed

[Hard]

*I think a bit small circle size (around 4.5) would work very well with overral calm pace of map Have a try.

1. 00:02:263 (5,1) - I feel flow here kinda weird; tranzition from jump & regular spacing, from linear & curved slider could be improved a tiny bit. How about change it to something like this so it'd feels more smooth while playing? Fixed
   
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:05:387 (1,2,3) - Kind of similiar issue; perhaps make it more smooth too? Like this: Fixed
   
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:12:887 (1,3) - Stack it perfectly for estetical reasons (currently its few grids off due to bug, which'd looks bad while playing) Fixed
4. 00:26:324 (3) - New combo follow vocals? I think we don't need a NC here
5. 00:34:115 (3) - This slider should be 3/4, not 1/3, you can check this by listening at 25% playback Fixed
6. 00:42:865 (1,2,1,2) - Ah, this pattern looks a bit messy :< How about to make something like this to make it more smooth and interesting to play? (just keep 0.60 spacing between each two sliders) Well.... your pattern looks messier.... As a player, I can easily read what I've placed..However It's not that easy for me to read this..
   
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:49:116 (5) - Needs new combo due to jump & new part at music Fixed
8. 00:59:740 (7,8,1) - Re-space this part a bit please to avoid overlapping - something like this would looks more clean: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:16:619 (4) - New combo due to pattern please. Fixed
10. 01:16:619 (4,5,6,7) - Same, i think would be better to use slighty bigger DS between these sliders to avoid untidy overlapping
11. 01:25:393 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think NC on each two notes would looks pretty well with your pattern. Ummmm...fixed

Overral not bad, but i think you need to focus at flow more - currently your flow and note placement is kinda "centered (see this - most of your notes placed near the center of map - this makes your map feels kinda unbalanced a bit). Try to work a bit more at your flow here please Thanks!

[Normal]

*I think smaller CS (4) would work much better for overral slow pace of map Fixed
*I don't think that AR5 is really needed, considering your patterns, SV and BPM here, Reduse it by 1 tick please - AR 4 would be better suitable here Fixed
*AIMod reports so many unsnapped slidertails/repeats, make sure to fix them all please. Yeah, It's my fault. I forgot to check the green line.
*SV changes usually not recommended for Easy/Normal diffs since they might be very unexpected for beginners, and raising SV by 0.20 feels pretty huge here - can you please at least drop a bit your SV changes by x0.10? x0.20 are really harsh for a Normal (actually i think that x1.20 SV sections might be just an issu.. are you sure about them?) My fault..

1. 00:34:115 (8) - This slider should be 1/4, not 1/3, you can check this by listening at 25% playback That's because the green line...
2. 00:35:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flows kinda bad, maybe make something like this instead? Fixed
   
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:01:303 (2,3,4) - Strange that this is single linear pattern at the whole diff - it looks quite strange here and feels out of place. Try something like this instead:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:02:552 (4,7) - This stack could be better for estetical reasons Changed the slider
5. 01:16:931 (4) - New combo follow vocals please Fixed
6. 01:20:393 (1) - I believe this spinner should begins at 01:20:081 - follow vocals Fixed

[Easy]

*Please raise HP Drain by 1 tick - HP1 feels very low here, even for Easy :<
*Same concerns about SV changes as in Normal
*I believe you can use some ticksounds for more completed rhythm Fixed

1. 00:39:740 (2,3) - Imo, they'd looks better as regular blanket instead of linear slider Remapped
2. 00:49:115 (3) - Missed clap on tail Fixed
3. 00:52:240 (2,4) - Both missing claps Fixed
4. 01:15:369 (1) - Nah, linear slider looks very out of flow here. Try something more smooth here, like this:
   Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

Overral nice map, just needs some work at flow - i'm sure this map have nice potential to be ranked. Thanks moe kodora!

Best of luck!

1. Background size is not rankable, please stick to the recommended resolutions.
   
   
2. You might want to try adding custom combo colours.

1. 00:15:075 (1) - Would be cool to split this up into 2 circles so you can click the tone on the downbeat and have a better emphasis.
2. 00:40:366 (3) - Using a new combo to emphasize the chorus' start would be nice.
3. 01:11:302 (3) - This huge jump doesn't really fit here since the holding vocal doesn't have that much of an impact, better to make the spacing lower.
4. 01:18:650 (1) - Please map this Spinner out, it does not really fit anything in the music and it's just too sudden and too short and therefore is weird.
   

1. 00:40:365 (3) - Same thing as on Hard.

Konei wrote:

Hey there, as requested.

[General]

1. Background size is not rankable, please stick to the recommended resolutions. Cut it into 1024*768
   
   
2. You might want to try adding custom combo colours. Added some.

[Hard]

1. 00:15:075 (1) - Would be cool to split this up into 2 circles so you can click the tone on the downbeat and have a better emphasis. split it into a citcle and a slider.
2. 00:40:366 (3) - Using a new combo to emphasize the chorus' start would be nice. Fixed
3. 01:11:302 (3) - This huge jump doesn't really fit here since the holding vocal doesn't have that much of an impact, better to make the spacing lower. Ctrl+G
4. 01:18:650 (1) - Please map this Spinner out, it does not really fit anything in the music and it's just too sudden and too short and therefore is weird. Fixed
   

[Easy]

1. 00:40:365 (3) - Same thing as on Hard. Fixed

This is pretty nice, really good stuff for your first one. Thanks a lot for your mod!

Call me back.

CDFA wrote:

I was supposed to get to this a month ago

but here I am now

Hard:
00:15:075 (6) - Would you be able to like even out this thing I think here is a small climax, It's no problem here for a small jump.
00:42:865 (1,2,1,2) - Like, it's fine, but the main issue is the context in which you're putting this. It's all light and then suddenly you're putting a technical 1/4 stream on there. It's a little bit sudden, especially with no drums or anything. There is electronic sound and it's 1/4.

Normal:
00:05:075 (5) - It might be better to not have such a huge gap in between this and the previous note. While I was playing it, I was tempted to hit it super early. I think it's no problem.
00:11:013 (2,3,4,5) - This is REALLY contrasting from the beginning. In the beginning, you have a more 1/1 feel to things, but in here, you're going super 1/2 all of a sudden. It's not consistent 1/1 because there is no vocal.... My normal follows vocal.
01:00:365 (1,2) - Make this a coherent pattern rather than just two unrelated sliders. It's fine
01:20:081 (1) - All diffs made by the same mapper must end at the same place. So if you could end this at the same place as hard, that'd be swell Fixed

This diff is consistent, but the beginning is really sort of off from the general consistency and seems to be a completely different idea than the rest of the map. Which is eh.

Easy:
01:20:081 (1) - Same as normal Fixed

I'm so sorry I completely forgot about this! I remember downloading the map, but I don't know what happened .

Forum PM when these are fixed.

1. Replace current soft-sliderslide.wav to http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav
2. soft-hitwhistle.wav is shorter than 100 ms.
   

1. Snap also 01:26:487 - green line in all diffs.
2. Disable Widescreen support and Letterbox in breaks in all diffs.

IamKwaN wrote:

k i got some unrankable issues on hitsounds:

1. Replace current soft-sliderslide.wav to http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav
2. soft-hitwhistle.wav is shorter than 100 ms.
   

Fixed all unrankable issues
Do these whenever you have time:

1. Snap also 01:26:487 - green line in all diffs. Fixed
2. Disable Widescreen support and Letterbox in breaks in all diffs.

I have ruled out all unrankable possibilities of this map.

CDFA wrote:

God dammit smallboat

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Autumn wrote:

恭喜rank
我太懒了，写了一半的mod还存着orz

Sky Trias wrote:

WoW ! Gratz

Atrue wrote:

omg so fast…
gratz！

Zweib wrote:

congratz~

Project Railgun wrote:

Congrats on first rank!


Nice song~

Sellenite wrote:

恭喜啊

Autumn wrote:

恭喜rank
我太懒了，写了一半的mod还存着orz

lkx_Shore wrote:

恭喜！

Autumn wrote:

恭喜rank
我太懒了，写了一半的mod还存着orz

快贴出来看看(

Umi wrote:

I really like the hitsounds of this map, gratz on First rank! ~

examination wrote:

出狱啦