1. Easy (1.17 stars, 67 notes)
2. Hard (2.68 stars, 178 notes)
3. Normal (1.77 stars, 126 notes)

Vercetti wrote:

[General]
offset 412->388 Fixed
easy与normal不允许滑条变速 Fixed
歌曲后面的几秒空白可以截掉 懒
[Hard]
00:22:286 - 00:23:223 这段跟vocal会好一点 不，跟伴奏
[Normal]
00:38:848 (6) - NC
00:58:535 (1) - ^
01:07:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这种遮挡对于normal来说有点难
01:20:097 (1) - 转盘长度缩短一点
All fixed.
[Easy]
AR+1 想了想，还是没加，毕竟normal和easy之间难度差已经很小了，不想再拉近
01:20:410 (1) - 转盘长度缩短一点 Fixed

渣摸,音效什么的无能为力= =

• 
  这图我就按DT视角来摸吧;w;
  00:08:512 (3,4) - 这两个note可以向两侧移开些，现在4和2挤在一起不漂亮
  00:26:324 (3,4,5,6) - stack感觉有点偷懒
  00:31:324 (2,3,4,5,6) - 2和之后的间距不相同感觉怪怪的
  00:42:886 (1,2,3,4) - 每两个都靠的太紧了，稍微拉开些
  01:12:886 (1,2,3) - 注意一下1 2的头和3的间距，有点近
  01:25:385 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个梗角度太大，而且2 3贴的太近，可以试着调整一下

-[Hikari]- wrote:

渣摸来惹

[Hard]

• 
  这图我就按DT视角来摸吧;w;
  00:08:512 (3,4) - 这两个note可以向两侧移开些，现在4和2挤在一起不漂亮 Fixed
  00:26:324 (3,4,5,6) - stack感觉有点偷懒 这个是跟小提琴的声音的，听一听
  00:31:324 (2,3,4,5,6) - 2和之后的间距不相同感觉怪怪的 为了突出12345这么放的
  00:42:886 (1,2,3,4) - 每两个都靠的太紧了，稍微拉开些 Fixed
  01:12:886 (1,2,3) - 注意一下1 2的头和3的间距，有点近 这个应该没问题
  01:25:385 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个梗角度太大，而且2 3贴的太近，可以试着调整一下 稍微改小了一点

Tician wrote:

Beatiful song (even if I do not understand any word^^) - so let's start

General

Song Setup:
- Title: Use a space between "Days" and "(" Fixed
- You need some more tags. Now your song will only be found when somebody is looking for the word "kagerou". Maybe you add: TV Anime Jin Lia - just everything people can find your song. Add some
Timing - OK
Your review point is right between 2 ticks, was it on purpose? Fixed

I noticed it at the hard one. Your using your custom sounds only for the beginning and ending and in the middle I can hear my own sound - it's confusing me, but maybe that's only my opinion and you did it on purpose?^^ On purpose

Easy

00:18:512 (3,4) - I would not overlap them (I know it's looking good), I let my friend (total newbie ) test it, but he didnt saw the (4) and tried to drag the ending of the slider to the beginning *giggle* No
00:39:137 (1,2,3) - nearly the same, but I think you can keep it, the reverse arrow is your friend :)
The AIMod keeps a spacing problem - it's not the world, but it's easy to fix
01:19:448 Maybe you fill something in here *speaking of a funny moment when people think it's over* No, I thinks blank is better

Well can't tell you more, I like the way you map and can't find any mistakes^^

normal

00:34:137 (4) - I am confused about this, it's not snapping with the time line, but AIMod is not crying^^ Let it reverse here00:34:605 it still fit to the voice This is a 1/3 slider, and I don't find anything wrong here.

And again - can't find more

Hell, I normaly do not mod hard ones... but let's give it a try

hard

00:31:324 (2) - this one maybe you put it closer to the next circle - it's looking so lonely^^ No because 00:31:637 (3,4,5,6,1) - those circles are whole
00:39:137 (1,2) - Maybe some sounds on these two? They already have whistles.
00:37:887 (1) - Maybe remove the New Combo here^^ No, I consider it better.

This map is great - I can't find anything more Thanks a lot for your mod!

Modem wrote:

Hi! From M4M! Here's my mod:

Easy
01:19:136 Add a slider from here to 01:19:761 I consider the original one better

Normal
00:01:012 (2) Reversed it once or add a note add a note
00:01:950 (3) Move it to x: 188 y: 200 move it to another place
00:02:262 (4) Remove the reverse and move it to 00:02:887
00:02:262 Then, add a small slider here to 00:02:575 and put it at x: 224 y: 320 No
00:11:012 (2) Reversed it once and flip this slider horizontally reversed
00:31:637 (2) Split this into two sliders and a note finally split it into a reversed slider and a slider
00:40:387 (1) Remove clap but stay with finish I think clap+finish fit this note.

Hard
How about change the Beat Snap Divisor into 1/4 ?
00:03:825 (3) Remove a slider here
00:03:825 Then, add a note
00:03:981 Add a note
00:04:137 Add a note
00:08:356 Add a note and make it into triplets
00:31:480 Add a note
Sorry I think original one is better
Nice map and beautiful hit sound
Anyway, Good Luck!!! (^ w ^)

• the artist is (almost) wrong, its nazi, just make one space Jin feat. Lia, my friend has a bubbled map and made it.

• CS +1 OD -2 HP -1 , it dont look consisting on easy.
  00:01:012 (2,3) - wrong ds, need fix
  00:03:512 (4,1) - make blanket here
  00:11:637 (2,3) - dont stack, beginners are not ready for stacks
  00:24:762 (4,1) - ^
  00:25:387 (1,2) - split sliders for parallel, or make sym here
  00:26:637 (2,3) - dont stack, same like 00:11:637 (2,3) -, also, slider overlapped the note on 00:29:137 (5) -
  00:39:137 (1,2,3) - ^
  00:49:136 (3,1) - ^, but make parallel here
  01:09:761 (1,2) - swap new combo
  01:15:386 (1,2) - dont stack, same like 00:11:637 (2,3) -

• HP and AR -1, OD -2, not very consisting.
  00:02:887 (4,5) - you used 1.0x space and this ds wont consist nicely.
  00:14:137 (6,7) - ^
  00:20:387 (1,2) - make sym
  00:25:387 (1) - smooth slider?
  00:31:637 (2,3) - make parallel here
  00:46:324 (3,4,5) - flow breaked here. remake
  00:50:386 (3,4) - make sym or parallel
  01:00:386 (1,2) - ^
  01:15:386 (1,3) - stack
  01:17:886 (5,7) - ^

VeeLaHee104 wrote:

[General]

• the artist is (almost) wrong, its nazi, just make one space Jin feat. Lia, my friend has a bubbled map and made it.

1. 00:02:887 (3) - Distance Snap.
2. 00:26:637 (2) - DS.
3. 00:29:137 (5) - I suggest you stack or put (5) elsewhere when the AR is low. It looks a little sloppy when there are overlaps that aren't intentional.
4. 00:50:386 (1) - It would look a lot prettier if you stacked sliders that flowed together more. Like this:
5. 01:00:386 (1) - DS.
6. 01:04:136 (3, 1, 2) - All DS. compare to previously.

1. 00:02:262 (3) - Overlay. Try elsewhere.
2. 00:07:262 (3, 4, 5, 6, 7) - Try to use the Ctrl R (60 degrees) function for hexagons. For tighter, cleaner shapes.
3. 00:39:137 (1) - Remove NC.
4. 00:40:387 - DS...
5. 01:16:011 (3) - Stack better.
6. 01:19:136 (7) - STack better.

1. 00:10:231 (6) - Space evenly between the two sliders.
2. 00:16:325 (3) - Blanket.
3. 00:23:824 (3) - Make blanket neater.
4. This song doesn't have 1/4 notes. I don't any of the 1/4 note streams are appropriate for this song. Please consider using something else to add difficulty to the song.

VeeLaHee104 wrote:

hello, m4m from your queue~

[General]

• the artist is (almost) wrong, its nazi, just make one space Jin feat. Lia, my friend has a bubbled map and made it.

[Easy]

• CS +1 OD -2 HP -1 , it dont look consisting on easy. Well Turn it into CS3, OD3, HP2, AR3
  00:01:012 (2,3) - wrong ds, need fix Fixed
  00:03:512 (4,1) - make blanket here Remapped
  00:11:637 (2,3) - dont stack, beginners are not ready for stacks Fixed
  00:24:762 (4,1) - ^
  00:25:387 (1,2) - split sliders for parallel, or make sym here Fixed
  00:26:637 (2,3) - dont stack, same like 00:11:637 (2,3) -, also, slider overlapped the note on 00:29:137 (5) - Fixed
  00:39:137 (1,2,3) - ^ I think stack here is appropriate
  00:49:136 (3,1) - ^, but make parallel here Fixed
  01:09:761 (1,2) - swap new combo I think this NC fits the vocal.
  01:15:386 (1,2) - dont stack, same like 00:11:637 (2,3) - Fixed

[Normal]

• HP and AR -1, OD -2, not very consisting.
  00:02:887 (4,5) - you used 1.0x space and this ds wont consist nicely.
  00:14:137 (6,7) - ^
  00:20:387 (1,2) - make sym
  00:25:387 (1) - smooth slider?
  00:31:637 (2,3) - make parallel here
  00:46:324 (3,4,5) - flow breaked here. remake
  00:50:386 (3,4) - make sym or parallel
  01:00:386 (1,2) - ^
  01:15:386 (1,3) - stack
  01:17:886 (5,7) - ^

Well, thanks for modding, Normal needs remapping, I will change distance space and map again.
the mapset have nice hitsounds, but mapping... nvm.... GL~~ ^^

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Hello, just taking a look at this amazing song ~ <3
Btw, I mapped this song and its bubbled now, I hope you rank this soon ~ o3o

Anyways, so I'm here to say some few stuff

Artist: ''じん ft. Lia''
Romanised Artist: ''Jin ft. Lia''
Title: ''days (short ver.)'' ------> http://vgmdb.net/album/45120 Fixed

no kds

VeeLaHee104 wrote:

[General]

• the artist is (almost) wrong, its nazi, just make one space Jin feat. Lia, my friend has a bubbled map and made it.

Its ''ft.'' not ''feat'' owo

Awaken wrote:

yo.

From pending bar 顺便凑个100kd 厚

[General]

我当个for ranked的图来摸了

[Hard]

00:12:887 (1,3) - stack Fixed

00:22:887 (1,2,3) - flow有点差劲 类似这样的比现在的好

SPOILER

Fixed

00:26:012 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 我觉得这个梗不适合 音乐里唱的是个长音 你这里用几个单点下节奏有点说不过去 最不济把00:26:949 (5,6) - 这两个换成slider 这里跟的小提琴啊。。。。music 想了想，把6和7改成了slider[/color]

00:29:137 (3,1) - stack

00:31:637 (3,4,5,6) - 这也是 音乐中应该是类似渐变的 你这里跟前面有个间距后面四个单点反而黏在一起 不怎么符合节奏 我建议你把00:31:324 (2,3) - 这两个换成滑条 然后后面三个circle搞渐变 Fixed

00:42:886 (1,2,3,4) - 你这四个放的..不美 可以这么说 而且如果12同向34同向的话效果会好很多 还有 no overlay Fixed

01:25:385 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这几个倒是很适合你用的whistle 搞个音效渐变会很不错 Fixed

[Normal]

00:52:261 (5) - 这里虽然你好像差1.4x差的不多 但是由于你间距使用的也是差点让objects粘在一起的类型 所以这里就直接看成粘了 调整成1.4x

01:07:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 连续circle有啥必要啊..音乐里面也没有连音啊 01:09:448 (6,7) - 这两个换成slider也好啊

01:13:511 (6) - 跟前面一样

01:15:386 (1,3) - stack啊

01:17:886 (5,7) - 故意的么 类似的这种stack又不美 如果是为了减小间距的话 我觉得也没必要 低难度美观性重要的多

换成1.4x remap
[Easy]

00:01:012 (2,3,4) - DS Fixed

Good Luck

Lapis Aoki wrote:

I got some information with Lanturn about my map, and here they are

Artist is correct

The title isn't correct, it should be ''days [short ver.]'' http://1stplace.co.jp/artist/jin/disco_works.php



Again, no kds please

Sky Trias wrote:

Hi! From Endless Modding Queue

*mod*mod*mod* Thanks*Thanks*Thanks*

• Hard
  []

1. 00:05:231 - add note Well, I think I can't put a note there because there's no sound...
2. 00:22:106 - add note ? *i think* ^
3. 00:28:981 - ^ ( 3 note better ) ^
4. 00:50:386 (1) - add whistle There is a clap
5. 00:51:324 (3) - ^ ?? There is already a whistle
6. 00:56:324 (3) - ^ ?? There is already a whistle too....

Nice mapset Thanks!
GL and i hope this can help you

1. 00:10:231 (6) - delete
2. 00:21:324 (3,3) - make them shorter and add circles to fill gaps
3. 00:30:387 (1) - make half size and add note after
4. 00:34:137 (3) - you don't need it. keep normal flow
5. 00:36:324 (7) - half size repeat
6. 00:41:324 (5) - ^
7. 00:42:886 (1,1) - double size and remove their (2)
8. 00:46:324 (3) - replace with 3 circle
9. 00:51:324 (3) - half size add note after
10. 00:52:417 (5) - delete
11. 00:55:229 (7) - delete
12. 01:01:324 (3) - half size add circle after
13. 01:03:042 (2,4) - delete
14. 01:11:323 (3) - half size repeat
15. 01:21:636 - add circle

1. cool
2. 01:24:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - COOL

okdesu wrote:

from Endless Modding Team

[Hard]
Rhythm

1. 00:10:231 (6) - delete No, because it connects two music sentence.
2. 00:21:324 (3,3) - make them shorter and add circles to fill gaps There's only a piece of voice... Why do we use circles?
3. 00:30:387 (1) - make half size and add note after ^
4. 00:34:137 (3) - you don't need it. keep normal flow The reason why I don't use a smooth slider is that the rhythm here is 1/3, I'd like to distinguish this slider from the others.
5. 00:36:324 (7) - half size repeat nope
6. 00:41:324 (5) - ^
7. 00:42:886 (1,1) - double size and remove their (2) listen to the music
8. 00:46:324 (3) - replace with 3 circle ^^^
9. 00:51:324 (3) - half size add note after
10. 00:52:417 (5) - delete
11. 00:55:229 (7) - delete
12. 01:01:324 (3) - half size add circle after
13. 01:03:042 (2,4) - delete
14. 01:11:323 (3) - half size repeat all denied
15. 01:21:636 - add circle Considering...

Arrange

1. cool
2. 01:24:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - COOL

Thanks!
Hitsound

lkx_Shore wrote:

General

1. 标题的Days应该改成days. 参考已经泡了的图或者 http://vgmdb.net/album/45119 好
2. Source改成“メカクシティアクターズ”Tag补上“ED Mekakucity Actors Kagerou Project Hibiya Yuurus”
3. 有视频就不要加SB了，把white.jpg和.osb都去掉. 好，其实本来不打算用video的
4. 添加400ms audio lead-in,确保玩家有1.5秒的准备时间。 Fixed
5. 这个曲子的Kiaitime部分不适合用默认的clap.建议换成Normal底音音效。 Fixed
6. BPM应该是92，但是需要多条红线来对齐人声。添加这些红线。 我看了看那个泡图是96啊。。。
   

   offset:27912
   offset:30389
   offset:34115
   offset:74439
   offset:75369
   offset:79456

Hard

1. 打开这个难度我感到满满一阵违和感....现在排版略散，AR应该用7.2比较好。 有很大区别吗。。
2. 00:07:262 - 换成1/1滑条更好，跟人声。 好
3. 00:26:637 (4) - 同上。
4. 00:27:262 (6,1) - 叠好或者拉开，现在半吊子不太好。 换成了两个滑条
5. 00:31:324 (2,3) - 太近，这种梗起跳一般是你使用的标准间距(1.4x) 不，这里是一个小高潮，还是用变距跳拉上去
6. 00:42:886 (1,2,1,2) - 我不太明白这样狂塞有什么意义。
7. 01:02:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上。
8. 01:16:479 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ 这里都是有电音的，想了想第二个不太好看也有点卡手，拆第二个好了
9. 01:18:511 (2) - 这一个note用40%音量，回响效果。 好
10. 01:25:385 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 倾斜15度更好看。 你书得对

Normal

1. 00:02:887 (4) - 大白线有重音的地方全部加Clap.
   
   重音

   • 
     00:07:887 (4) - 这里这个没有加，看后面怎么说吧。。
     00:32:886 (6) -
2. 00:14:137 (7) - 多余的节奏，00:13:928 - 应该是一个1/1的滑条。 删了7，跟vocal就跟到底吧
3. 00:49:761 (2,4) - 叠好。 fixed
4. 01:02:573 (4,7) - 同上。 这里，应该是没错的吧。。
   Normal塞的节奏稍微有点满，不过不打紧。

Easy

1. 00:12:887 (3,5) - 补上Whistle.保持这一部分的整体一致。 Fixed
2. 00:18:512 (3,4) - Easy里不要用重叠梗，Unrankble. Fixed
3. 00:27:887 (3) - 换成drum效果更好. 听了一下，还是用原来的吧。。
4. 00:39:137 (1,2,3) - 不要重叠，另外滑条很奇怪... 你说对了，随便拉的【不会拉滑条，stack fixed
5. 00:45:386 (1) - 改成Finish. 不想在这里加finish
6. 01:05:386 (1) - 同上. 同上
7. 01:09:761 (1) - 滑条尾改Finish. 好像也不太适合。。
8. 00:50:386 (1,2,3) - 使用一致的间距。
9. 00:52:886 (3,4,1) - 同上。 Fixed

Others

排版走势比较偏上...多利用一下下面吧。
使用更多的倾斜排版会让谱面看起来好看点。
你书的对，不过毕竟简单图不好发挥，要是有Insane的话就好多了。
Goodluck. Thank you!

tpzzht056 wrote:

从贴吧过来的，有余力看图了的说。。。
那么就稍微mod一下这个图好了。。。

[normal]
00:14:137 (6) - 可以去掉note 这个note是vocal啊。。。
00:58:824 - 可以增加一个note 有道理，看后面怎么说
01:08:823 (4,5) - 可以改为滑条 好

[hard]
00:10:231 (6) - 可以去掉note
00:24:762 (4) - 可改为单点
00:52:261 (5) - 可以去掉note，变连打为单点
00:54:761 (4,5,6,7) - 可以去掉note(5,7),变连打为单点 想了想，还是没改【其实去了连打也可以，但是感觉节奏单调啊

以上是我所提的建议，可以采纳一下，也可以无视。
使用上述建议更改时可能还需要改其他地方也说不定，就说这些了的说。。。
希望我的建议有那么点用处...

然后祝你的图能rank。
非常感谢你能抽出时间！

Yuukou wrote:

渣摸，贴吧滚过来的>>>

easy

感觉没什么好说的问题啦，
00:02:887 (3) - 只不过这里感觉可以试试换成连接红线的滑条？ Ummm，感觉不用啊

normal

0:58:511 (5) - 试试前后的红线都摆一个note连起来节奏好喜爱那个还不错？ 既然都这么说，那就加啦
01:09:448 (6) - —01:10:073 (8) - 感觉换成一个折返滑条还不错？ 都试了一下，用前面那位的好了

hard

00:34:137 (3) - 这里的线没对齐是故意的吗感觉换成这样会好一点？ 啊，这里vocal是三分拍啊，用1/4看没对齐是正常的>>
00:39:137 (1) - —00:39:761 (2) - 这个打起来有点奇怪试试红线也摆上note顺便加个折返滑条？我感觉这里用这种pattern挺好的呀>>>
00:54:761 (4,5,6,7) - 感觉note距离可以再分散一点？毕竟hard。 我打的insane也就这样吧。。。是我太弱
01:02:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上;;w; 同上
01:18:667 (1) - 转盘感觉有点突然呢QAQ 你不会miss吧。。。
另外觉得ar+1 感觉不用，bpm太低了

以上，有什么说的跟其他mod重复就无视就好辣! 嘛，总之非常感谢你的mod!
祝早日rank :) 首先要有bat肯理我

PureCreamy wrote:

Hi! Random Mod
Please let me mod this beautiful song ♥♥♥ Thanks!!!

General
Cute hitsound! Loved it very much ♡♡♡ www

Easy
HD+1
00:20:387 (1) Add finish I think we don't need a finish here...
01:00:386 (1) Change sampleset and addition to auto Changed the sampleset, I'd like to use normal finish here.
01:18:511 Add a note + clap
01:19:136 Add a note + finish
01:19:761 Add a note + whistle Added a slider.

Normal
OD+1 I think OD5 is enough
00:40:387 (1) Remove clap hitsound. Just finish hitsound would be nice
01:00:386 (1) ^ Fixed.
01:18:511 (6) Change hitsound to clap
01:19:136 (7) Change hitsound to finish Use whistle instead

Hard
00:40:387 (3) Remove clap hitsound Fixed

It's nicely mapped ♡
Good luck ♡

Modem wrote:

Nice map ♡♥♡ Hope it can get ranked soon!
Ganbatte Teichan (^ w ^)

Narcissu wrote:

這音效感覺好像是從我圖裏面拿的感覺>, 你书得对，我很喜欢你的图，感觉歌挺适合的就直接拿了。。。需要标出来吗

給自己的圖射太多星會顯得很小氣 因为很多bat有star的底线，那个时候很想去找bat（毕竟是事实上的1st，很想rank的，以后应该不会这么急了）。嘛，如果也没有bat愿意来看的话就quit好了。

lkx_Shore wrote:

bpm的确是96，我那会手滑写错成92了。但那几根红线还是必要的，因为重音有变。而你说的小高潮变间距跳，用1.4x(那部分你是以这个间距为标准)开始变大就是从当前继续增强。你缩小成1.0x再起跳就变得意义不明了，音乐在那可没有变弱。