00:03:371 (3) - 00:06:083 (3) - 00:08:795 (3) - 00:11:507 (3) - 00:14:219 (3) - 00:16:931 (3) - 00:19:643 (3) - I feel like these are oversimplifying the melody that the song provides
basically that's exactly what i want to do here tbh00:23:032 (1,1) - it feels like this could be a slider instead for better playability
but somehow a slider can't be better than circles for the momentum00:24:219 (4) - OCD, the top part of the zig zag is not parallel to the bottom part.
idk looks good to me00:31:507 (1,2,3,4) - not a big fan of these symmetrical angled sliders, try
this but their lengths are calculated so their angles can be all well-performed for the pattern01:15:575 (3,4) - these could 1/4 sliders instead of 1/8, feels like it fits the
no, they should be in 1/801:19:473 (5) - why not a 1/4 slider if the song did provided that 1/4 there, plus you have a clap there so the emphasis would be stronger there
get into the background and you'll find out there's no bass and drum around this place, so a plain pattern is better for that cuz circles wont do echoing01:38:626 (5,1) - not an overlap but it still felt cluttered when I played it and it caught my eye
gonna say that's fine for me as always02:39:473 (4) - I feel like it would fit the melody better if this was a 1/2 slider + triplet, I played it and it felt awkward as I need to hold for 1/1 when the was a prominent note in the melody
All of the 1/4 triplets/streams are all intentionally removed (except the middle one cuz part finisher) so it can separate two kiais with their own different unique style. as you can see, the first kiai is much complicate.03:02:580 (5) - this sounds like it should end at 1/4 not 1/6
NOT 1/4 but a different 1/6, changed03:08:456 (1,2,1,2) - for more relaxing play (not necessarily better) I feel like these two should be 1/3 sliders with reveres arrow so the player would know the next set would also be 1/3
i'd rather stay like this with a different NC pattern