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Kawada Mami - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-

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a round of applause to kibbleru for modding this 200 times



im available if this needs more mods
Topic Starter
Momovely
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Topic Starter
Momovely

Momovely wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

getting there

[Insane]
  1. 00:58:282 (1) - nc not needed? ok
    00:59:595 (1) - ^ ok
    01:04:845 (1) - ^ ok
  2. 01:14:782 (4) - could nc here since it changes to 1/1 keep it Because I like it rhythm


[Easy]
  1. 00:18:532 - finish sounds a bit strange here o-o change costom2 finish
  2. 00:43:095 - replace clap with whistle ok
  3. 00:58:095 (1) - drag this slider 1/2 back in the timeline, gives a better rhythm that way ok
thanks

I am sorry to let you have a hard time :o
Satellite

Kibbleru wrote:

getting there

[Satellite]
  1. 00:07:845 - is this whistle needed? i dont hear it in the music
  2. 00:33:907 - second finish here just sounds too much to me. maybe replace it with whistle or something
  3. 01:18:532 - maybe remove this finish.
    01:30:532 - ^
    01:42:532 (4) - ^
    01:36:532 (3) - ^
    01:48:532 - ^
    01:31:470 (7) - ^ this one could be replaced with whistle
    yeah some of these finishes just sound a bit too much could remove some. no changed here
and remove finish here 01:27:532 -

no comment = Fixed thank you for mod :3
http://puu.sh/dwDxD/d95c42f408.osu
Lecana

Kibbleru wrote:

getting there


[Lecana]
  1. 00:08:220 - to 00:10:845 - replace all the claps with whistles o-o they fit better.
    :arrow: ok
    00:11:595 - replace clap with whistle
    :arrow: ok
    01:14:595 - ^
    :arrow: ok
  2. 00:12:345 (5,6) - didn't realize this before but arent these quite overmapped? maybe just remove them and put a repeat onto 00:11:782 (4) -
    :arrow: awesome
  3. 01:13:095 (3) - end slider at 01:13:282 - , there is a strong drum beat that should be mapped and after that, add clap at 01:15:532 (1) -
    :arrow: sorry.
  4. 01:12:720 (1) - i don't hear any finishes here, proabably better to replace it with a clap
    :arrow: ok
  5. 01:13:001 (2,6,8) - clap would fit nicely
    :arrow: ok
    01:13:845 (7) - and remove this clap, not in the music
    :arrow: ok
    01:15:345 (5) - ^
    :arrow: ok
    01:58:282 - ^
    :arrow: ok
  6. 01:14:220 (1,2) - whistle
    :arrow: ok
    01:14:782 - ^
    :arrow: ok
    01:15:157 - ^
    :arrow: ok
  7. 01:15:532 - i think a finish would work better than a clap here
    :arrow: sorry.
  8. 01:30:532 - remove whistle
    :arrow: ok
  9. 01:40:095 (2) - remove clap and whistle, not in the music
    :arrow: ok
  10. 01:40:657 - whistle and finish instead imo
    :arrow: ok
  11. 01:40:845 - remove hitsounds
    :arrow: ok
    01:41:032 - ^
    :arrow: ok
  12. 02:02:595 (1,2) - maybe swap nc here, its better to put it in the middle of the stream rhythm rather than where it currently is
    :arrow: ok
  13. 02:03:720 - woah volume too loud, i can hear the soft hitnormals really clearly, tone it down a bit. i think just delete this timing point 02:03:720 - 60% is enough for this part since soft finishes are really loud itself already.
    :arrow: delete
thanks mod again again :3
http://puu.sh/dzF2C/d1d672b13f.zip
Quilt
added and removed whistels
but i don't want to change slider, cz this slider is fit here enough

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Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Momovely
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Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
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ShiraKai

Kibbleru wrote:

getting there

[Shirakai]
  1. 00:47:220 - finish?
    00:44:220 - ^
    00:56:220 - ^
    00:59:220 - ^
  2. 01:13:095 (1) - remove this whistle, there isn't any percussion here at this point in the music
  3. 01:24:720 (1) - nc sorta inconsistent remove?
all fixed!
thanks ;)
http://puu.sh/dCoIA.zip
Topic Starter
Momovely
update
Kibbleru
shirakai's normal
00:31:095 (4,5,6) - try to not do back and forth in normal diff, it's hard to expect
01:17:782 (2,4) - the 4 gets hidden under the 2 slider and becomes hard to read, unstack pls
ShiraKai

Kibbleru wrote:

shirakai's normal
00:31:095 (4,5,6) - try to not do back and forth in normal diff, it's hard to expect
01:17:782 (2,4) - the 4 gets hidden under the 2 slider and becomes hard to read, unstack pls
ok fixed!
Kibbleru
Journey was tough, gg 5 pages of rechecking

but FINALLY

Ik u guys must hate me "wow this guys is so picky" but here is your well earned bubble. 17 days gg

SPOILER
01:13 Kibbleru: ok
01:13 Kibbleru: final recheck hopefully lol
01:13 *Kibbleru is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/525143 Kawada Mami - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-]
01:13 Kibbleru: so u there?
01:14 Momovely: ok
01:14 Momovely: yes
01:16 Kibbleru: i haven't really picked on it yet but its been bothering me, is this nc spam really needed here? 01:44:595 (1,1) -
01:16 Kibbleru: 01:48:345 (1) - same here
01:16 Kibbleru: 01:56:970 (1,1,1) - and yeah
01:18 Momovely: ettoo
01:18 Momovely: This is because it is easy to look, and it does it
01:18 Momovely: Make it easy to see
01:18 Kibbleru: maybe decrease it to nc groups of 4 instead of 2?
01:21 Momovely: Should I make a remove nc?
01:22 Kibbleru: ok here's what i suggest
01:22 Kibbleru: 01:44:595 (1) - remove this one
01:23 Kibbleru: 01:48:345 (1,1) - remove these or something
01:23 Kibbleru: 01:48:345 (1) -
01:23 Kibbleru: and
01:23 Kibbleru: 01:49:095 (1) -
01:23 Kibbleru: sry
01:23 Kibbleru: and remove 01:57:345 (1) -
01:23 Momovely: ok
01:26 Kibbleru: 01:48:345 (1,1) - ahh this part doesn't foolow song well now
01:26 Kibbleru: okay
01:26 Kibbleru: uhh
01:27 Kibbleru: 01:47:970 - nc
01:27 Kibbleru: 01:48:345 - remove nc
01:27 Kibbleru: 01:48:720 - nc
01:27 Kibbleru: 01:49:095 - remove nc
01:27 Momovely: ok
01:32 Kibbleru: ask quilt if he wants to make his diff AR8
01:32 Kibbleru: cuz some parts need it
01:33 Momovely: me too
01:33 Momovely: changed ar8
01:37 Kibbleru: is shirakai online
01:39 Momovely: inviting shirakai
01:40 Kibbleru: tell him to check forum
01:41 Momovely: ok
01:42 Kibbleru: shirakai's normal is also missing the source
01:42 Kibbleru: btw do u have any metadata confirmation thing?
01:43 Kibbleru: make the kiai times on your easy diff and insane diff consistent
01:43 Kibbleru: 01:28:095 - ur insane diff has a kiai fountain here
01:44 Kibbleru: add it for ur easy too
01:44 Momovely: oh
01:45 Kibbleru: doesnt matter for gd but creator diff should have consistent kiai
01:45 Momovely: ok
01:45 Momovely: fix
01:45 Kibbleru: did u get shirakai?
01:48 Momovely: Is there metadate mistake?
01:49 Kibbleru: no i just want to know if you have a source
01:49 Kibbleru: for the metadata
01:51 Momovely: yes
01:51 Momovely: and
01:52 Momovely: guy check it
01:58 Kibbleru: did shirakai send u the diff yet
02:01 Momovely: ok
02:01 Momovely: update
02:01 Momovely: shirakai's normal
02:02 Kibbleru: redling
02:02 *Kibbleru is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/525143 Kawada Mami - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-]
02:03 Kibbleru: u didnt change anything else right?
02:05 Momovely: no
02:06 Momovely: http://puu.sh/dEJkE/bc0cc0fcb1.png
02:06 Momovely: send it from shirakai
02:07 Kibbleru: journey was tough
02:08 Momovely: i see
Topic Starter
Momovely

Kibbleru wrote:

Journey was tough, gg 5 pages of rechecking

but FINALLY

Ik u guys must hate me "wow this guys is so picky" but here is your well earned bubble. 17 days gg

SPOILER
01:13 Kibbleru: ok
01:13 Kibbleru: final recheck hopefully lol
01:13 *Kibbleru is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/525143 Kawada Mami - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-]
01:13 Kibbleru: so u there?
01:14 Momovely: ok
01:14 Momovely: yes
01:16 Kibbleru: i haven't really picked on it yet but its been bothering me, is this nc spam really needed here? 01:44:595 (1,1) -
01:16 Kibbleru: 01:48:345 (1) - same here
01:16 Kibbleru: 01:56:970 (1,1,1) - and yeah
01:18 Momovely: ettoo
01:18 Momovely: This is because it is easy to look, and it does it
01:18 Momovely: Make it easy to see
01:18 Kibbleru: maybe decrease it to nc groups of 4 instead of 2?
01:21 Momovely: Should I make a remove nc?
01:22 Kibbleru: ok here's what i suggest
01:22 Kibbleru: 01:44:595 (1) - remove this one
01:23 Kibbleru: 01:48:345 (1,1) - remove these or something
01:23 Kibbleru: 01:48:345 (1) -
01:23 Kibbleru: and
01:23 Kibbleru: 01:49:095 (1) -
01:23 Kibbleru: sry
01:23 Kibbleru: and remove 01:57:345 (1) -
01:23 Momovely: ok
01:26 Kibbleru: 01:48:345 (1,1) - ahh this part doesn't foolow song well now
01:26 Kibbleru: okay
01:26 Kibbleru: uhh
01:27 Kibbleru: 01:47:970 - nc
01:27 Kibbleru: 01:48:345 - remove nc
01:27 Kibbleru: 01:48:720 - nc
01:27 Kibbleru: 01:49:095 - remove nc
01:27 Momovely: ok
01:32 Kibbleru: ask quilt if he wants to make his diff AR8
01:32 Kibbleru: cuz some parts need it
01:33 Momovely: me too
01:33 Momovely: changed ar8
01:37 Kibbleru: is shirakai online
01:39 Momovely: inviting shirakai
01:40 Kibbleru: tell him to check forum
01:41 Momovely: ok
01:42 Kibbleru: shirakai's normal is also missing the source
01:42 Kibbleru: btw do u have any metadata confirmation thing?
01:43 Kibbleru: make the kiai times on your easy diff and insane diff consistent
01:43 Kibbleru: 01:28:095 - ur insane diff has a kiai fountain here
01:44 Kibbleru: add it for ur easy too
01:44 Momovely: oh
01:45 Kibbleru: doesnt matter for gd but creator diff should have consistent kiai
01:45 Momovely: ok
01:45 Momovely: fix
01:45 Kibbleru: did u get shirakai?
01:48 Momovely: Is there metadate mistake?
01:49 Kibbleru: no i just want to know if you have a source
01:49 Kibbleru: for the metadata
01:51 Momovely: yes
01:51 Momovely: and
01:52 Momovely: guy check it
01:58 Kibbleru: did shirakai send u the diff yet
02:01 Momovely: ok
02:01 Momovely: update
02:01 Momovely: shirakai's normal
02:02 Kibbleru: redling
02:02 *Kibbleru is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/525143 Kawada Mami - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-]
02:03 Kibbleru: u didnt change anything else right?
02:05 Momovely: no
02:06 Momovely: http://puu.sh/dEJkE/bc0cc0fcb1.png
02:06 Momovely: send it from shirakai
02:07 Kibbleru: journey was tough
02:08 Momovely: i see

Thank you very much!
Satellite
wa
Shohei Ohtani
wa
Ozato Fumika
ter

in case you dont get it its water
Topic Starter
Momovely

No Dap wrote:

ter

in case you dont get it its water
why???
Melophobia
[General]
Combo color 1 and 4 resemble each other, that makes it really difficult for players to tell where the combo starts/ends. Please consider swapping their order or adding an inbetween color. But I don't recommend using bluish colors in the first place, since it's frequently blended with the video.

[Insane]
00:40:657 (2) - Honestly I kinda dislike these 4 whistles in a row; how about removing this one? sounds much better imo.
00:43:470 (7) - ^
00:52:657 (4) - ^
01:09:345 (4) - I can slightly hear a percussion, so I want you to try adding something here. You might as well try soft-hitclap4 here with a lower volume setting (30~40%)
01:10:845 - ^
01:11:970 (4) - 01:12:532 (1) - Remove these whistles and it'll sound much better imo.
01:52:845 (6,7,8,9) - This is way too loud compared to the rest of this difficulty. Consider reducing the volume a little.
02:05:032 (4) - If you'd like to follow the instruments precisely this should be 1/8. but if you want it to be clickable then this is fine as it is now.
02:11:032 - I'm not a big fan of this 1/1 blank here I always end up hitting (1) ealier.. I suggest something like this, to me it sounds much better this way. http://puu.sh/dFSUM/50a2a2b3fb.jpg

この曲のようにバスドラムがずっと1/1間隔で鳴ってる曲を作る時はsoft whistleをちょくちょく使わないとHitsoundが単調になりがちです。Kiai timeとかで特に顕著だと思います。次回から意識してみて下さい~

[Lecana's]
00:02:220 - 00:08:220 - チンチン鳴り過ぎ。こういうエコー掛かったHitsoundは要所要所で使うから映えるのであって、コンスタントに使うのには全く適してません。結果的に、00:08:220 - 以降は本来前のPartより強調されるべきなのに対して、比較的静かに感じてしまいます。Clapを減らして、いくつかデフォルトのWhistleに置き換えてみたりしてください。
00:08:032 (6,7,1) - Spacingが歪だし、Overlapも美しくない。2.5xくらいまで広げるとちょっと綺麗になります。
00:14:032 - ここに三連打? 1拍置くのも結構好きなんですが、音的な物足りなさがあります。本来の音が1/8なのでキックスライダーを置くのもアリかなって思います。
00:34:470 (3,4,5) - 正三角形にしましょう。個人的なアレですが見た目というより流れ的な好みです。
00:36:720 (1) - 音がないところにNote置くだけならまだしもFinishはやりすぎ。ここは絶対Hitsound付けない方が良いです。
00:37:845 (6) - Soft-hitclap4を使ってみましょう
01:06:907 - もうちょっとHitsoundをSimpleに。俺なら全部の赤線にWhistleを置いて、他は全部外します。そして、01:08:220 (5) - にデフォルトのFinishかWhistleを置く感じで綺麗にまとまると思います。
01:09:345 - Insaneに同じ。Soft-hitclap4置くと良い感じにアクセントになる&Backgroundの音によく合います。01:10:845 - も同じ。
01:13:001 (2) - 奇を衒いすぎ。普通のClapで良いと思います。
01:13:095 (3) - Backgroundの三連符の音を尊重する形で終点を赤線に合わせましょう。
01:17:220 - Kiaiはここから。
01:28:470 (1,2,3,4,5) - 一応Overmappingしてるので、もう少し音量下げましょう。40~50%くらいが良いと思います。
01:34:657 (4,5) - せっかく一直線においてるのでSpacing揃えちゃいましょう。
01:53:032 (2) - ここの流れ方があんまり好きじゃない。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2377167 こういう風に高低差つけたり、いっそのこと https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2377173 こんな感じにしてみると良くなると思います。
02:03:626 - 個人的な好みですがここにもNote置いちゃいたい。

TsukuyomiのMapsetを先に通すよう提言があった&時間がないので今日はここまで。続きは後日やります。
Lecana

Melophobia wrote:

[Lecana's]
00:02:220 - 00:08:220 - チンチン鳴り過ぎ。こういうエコー掛かったHitsoundは要所要所で使うから映えるのであって、コンスタントに使うのには全く適してません。結果的に、00:08:220 - 以降は本来前のPartより強調されるべきなのに対して、比較的静かに感じてしまいます。Clapを減らして、いくつかデフォルトのWhistleに置き換えてみたりしてください。
:arrow: whistleに変更しました。
00:08:032 (6,7,1) - Spacingが歪だし、Overlapも美しくない。2.5xくらいまで広げるとちょっと綺麗になります。
:arrow: okです
00:14:032 - ここに三連打? 1拍置くのも結構好きなんですが、音的な物足りなさがあります。本来の音が1/8なのでキックスライダーを置くのもアリかなって思います。
:arrow: キックスライダー置きました。
00:34:470 (3,4,5) - 正三角形にしましょう。個人的なアレですが見た目というより流れ的な好みです。
:arrow: okです
00:36:720 (1) - 音がないところにNote置くだけならまだしもFinishはやりすぎ。ここは絶対Hitsound付けない方が良いです。
:arrow: okです
00:37:845 (6) - Soft-hitclap4を使ってみましょう
:arrow: Very Good!!!!!!!!!!!
01:06:907 - もうちょっとHitsoundをSimpleに。俺なら全部の赤線にWhistleを置いて、他は全部外します。そして、01:08:220 (5) - にデフォルトのFinishかWhistleを置く感じで綺麗にまとまると思います。
:arrow: okです
01:09:345 - Insaneに同じ。Soft-hitclap4置くと良い感じにアクセントになる&Backgroundの音によく合います。01:10:845 - も同じ。
:arrow: okです
01:13:001 (2) - 奇を衒いすぎ。普通のClapで良いと思います。
:arrow: okです
01:13:095 (3) - Backgroundの三連符の音を尊重する形で終点を赤線に合わせましょう。
:arrow: okです
01:17:220 - Kiaiはここから。
:arrow: okです
01:28:470 (1,2,3,4,5) - 一応Overmappingしてるので、もう少し音量下げましょう。40~50%くらいが良いと思います。
:arrow: okです
01:34:657 (4,5) - せっかく一直線においてるのでSpacing揃えちゃいましょう。
:arrow: 揃えました
01:53:032 (2) - ここの流れ方があんまり好きじゃない。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2377167 こういう風に高低差つけたり、いっそのこと https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2377173 こんな感じにしてみると良くなると思います。
:arrow: 高低差つけるほうで行ってみたいと思います。
02:03:626 - 個人的な好みですがここにもNote置いちゃいたい。
:arrow: 忙しいパートはここまでで終わり!
みたいな締め方したかったので間あけてます。


TsukuyomiのMapsetを先に通すよう提言があった&時間がないので今日はここまで。続きは後日やります。
ありがとうございましたヾ(。>﹏<。)ノ゙
素晴らしいmod!!thanks!!
http://puu.sh/dFZcf/7bb79ee090.zip
Shohei Ohtani
Remember to not rank this until after Tsukuyomi's is out of qualified
Topic Starter
Momovely

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
Combo color 1 and 4 resemble each other, that makes it really difficult for players to tell where the combo starts/ends. Please consider swapping their order or adding an inbetween color. But I don't recommend using bluish colors in the first place, since it's frequently blended with the video.

ok changed Combo color



[Insane]
00:40:657 (2) - Honestly I kinda dislike these 4 whistles in a row; how about removing this one? sounds much better imo. surely, fix!
00:43:470 (7) - ^ fix!
00:52:657 (4) - ^ fix!
01:09:345 (4) - I can slightly hear a percussion, so I want you to try adding something here. You might as well try soft-hitclap4 here with a lower volume setting (30~40%) nice!fix
01:10:845 - ^ fix!
01:11:970 (4) - 01:12:532 (1) - Remove these whistles and it'll sound much better imo. surely, fix!
01:52:845 (6,7,8,9) - This is way too loud compared to the rest of this difficulty. Consider reducing the volume a little. surely,turn down the volume to 40%
02:05:032 (4) - If you'd like to follow the instruments precisely this should be 1/8. but if you want it to be clickable then this is fine as it is now. fix!
02:11:032 - I'm not a big fan of this 1/1 blank here I always end up hitting (1) ealier.. I suggest something like this, to me it sounds much better this way. http://puu.sh/dFSUM/50a2a2b3fb.jpg  mmk

この曲のようにバスドラムがずっと1/1間隔で鳴ってる曲を作る時はsoft whistleをちょくちょく使わないとHitsoundが単調になりがちです。Kiai timeとかで特に顕著だと思います。次回から意識してみて下さい~

まだよくわからない部分が多いのでアドバイス助かります :)

次回から意識して気をつけていきます!


TsukuyomiのMapsetを先に通すよう提言があった&時間がないので今日はここまで。続きは後日やります。
okです!

忙しい中ありがとうございます!m(_ _)m
Melophobia
遅くなってすみません。,,Ծ‸Ծ,,

[Insane]
01:12:345 - 指摘し忘れてましたがここにもSoft-hitclap4を。

[Lecana's]
00:59:220 (1) - たぶんFinish付け忘れ?00:47:220 (1) - には付いてるので。
01:09:345 - 01:10:845 - 今のままだとやや煩いので20%ほどVolumeを下げるといいかも。
01:12:345 - 指摘し忘れてましたがここにもSoft-hitclap4を。
01:38:782 (1) - Clap?

[Quilt's]
00:03:720 (1) - このSliderは00:03:532 - から始まるべき。
00:24:532 (6,1,2,3) - Spacingが不揃いで美しくない。
00:38:220 (1) - Finish?
00:44:595 (2) - 前のNoteに重ねるのも芸がない&流れ的にもよくないのでこんな感じにしてみては。 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2461221
00:48:907 (1,2,3) - 汚い
00:58:845 (3) - 前のSliderの終点に重ねるべき
01:01:938 - Clap追加
01:09:345 - 01:10:845 - 01:12:345 - 低めのVolumeでSoft-hitclap4を使ってみましょう。
01:16:470 (1,2) - 個人的な好みですがそれぞれの始点より終点にWhistle置いた方が映えます。
01:38:970 (5) - 始点のClapを外して終点に追加?
01:40:657 - Clap
01:55:470 (3,4,5,6) - このJump見た目が悪し叩いた感じも意味不明です。
02:06:345 (5) - ブランケット作りたかったのは理解できるんだけど、このSpacingをなぜここに?っていう疑問。見た目的にも美しくないので、コンスタントなSpacing使う形でパターンを作り直した方がいい。
02:08:220 - Note追加。02:06:720 - と聞き比べると、音が全然違うので区別化する感じで。
02:11:220 - この難易度だけSpinner無いのはちょっとアレなので特にこだわりとか無ければ追加しましょう。

[Satellite's]
Anti jump使いまくってるのでStack leniency4くらいまで下げましょう
00:52:470 - 大した問題でもないんだけど、Newcomboを00:53:032 - に持ってきたほうが綺麗に区切れて好きです。
01:14:595 (2) - ここにWhistle無い方が綺麗にまとまっていいかも?
01:16:470 (1,2) - 始点より終点にwhistle置く方が聞こえが良い気がするんですがどうでしょう?
01:33:345 (3) - Clap付け忘れ?
01:35:032 (7) - ここのClap正直合わないと思います。もし何か置きたいなら、次のNoteにもClap置いて少しVolumeを下げるとか・・
01:39:532 - ここのClapを外して、01:39:157 - に追加?
02:06:720 (4) - このSliderは02:06:532 - から始めるべきかな?同じリズムが3回くらい続いててちょっと冗長な気がしました。

[Normal]
00:37:845 (4) - Finish?
01:09:345 - 01:10:845 - 低めのVolumeでSoft-hitclap4?良いアクセントになると思います。
01:16:470 (1,2) - 他の難易度に同じ。終点にwhistle付けたほうが好きです。
01:28:845 - Clapの方が違和感が少ないかも?
01:39:720 (2) - Repeatではなく01:40:657 - にNote置いた方がいいと思います。最低でも終点のClapは全くあってないので外して下さい。
01:51:720 (4) - このSection、ずっと1/1で単調になってます。というわけでこのSliderを01:51:532 - まで移動してみてはどうでしょうか。
01:52:470 (1,2) - Kiai前のとこと同じ。でもこっちは今のままでもいいかも。
02:00:532 - Finish?
02:05:313 (1) - このSpinner正直合ってないし、後続のNoteが全くないのも違和感MAXなので、消して普通にNotes置いていく事をおすすめします。

[Easy]
00:01:470 - ここから始めたほうがいいです。Easyで作りにくいのは解るんだけど、00:08:220 - から始めるのは違和感しかないです。
00:10:845 (4) - x:372 y:164に移動?ブランケットも綺麗なんだけど、流れ的にこっちの方が好きです。
01:06:720 (3,4) - Finishは普通に合わないと思います
Topic Starter
Momovely

Melophobia wrote:

遅くなってすみません。,,Ծ‸Ծ,,  だいJOBです!

[Insane]
01:12:345 - 指摘し忘れてましたがここにもSoft-hitclap4を。

[Easy]
00:01:470 - ここから始めたほうがいいです。Easyで作りにくいのは解るんだけど、00:08:220 - から始めるのは違和感しかないです。
00:10:845 (4) - x:372 y:164に移動?ブランケットも綺麗なんだけど、流れ的にこっちの方が好きです。
01:06:720 (3,4) - Finishは普通に合わないと思います
全部直しました!

リチェックありがとうございますm( _ _ )m
Satellite

Melophobia wrote:

遅くなってすみません。,,Ծ‸Ծ,,

[Satellite's]
Anti jump使いまくってるのでStack leniency4くらいまで下げましょう
00:52:470 - 大した問題でもないんだけど、Newcomboを00:53:032 - に持ってきたほうが綺麗に区切れて好きです。
01:14:595 (2) - ここにWhistle無い方が綺麗にまとまっていいかも?
01:16:470 (1,2) - 始点より終点にwhistle置く方が聞こえが良い気がするんですがどうでしょう?
01:33:345 (3) - Clap付け忘れ?
01:35:032 (7) - ここのClap正直合わないと思います。もし何か置きたいなら、次のNoteにもClap置いて少しVolumeを下げるとか・・
01:39:532 - ここのClapを外して、01:39:157 - に追加?  :arrow: 157は元々clap入ってました!532のclapはkeepしたほうが自分好みというかそれっぽい音もあるのでここはkeepします!
02:06:720 (4) - このSliderは02:06:532 - から始めるべきかな?同じリズムが3回くらい続いててちょっと冗長な気がしました。
何も書いてないところは全部直しました Thank you for mod ! :3

http://puu.sh/e8vmx/75b8d545b6.zip
ShiraKai

Melophobia wrote:

遅くなってすみません。,,Ծ‸Ծ,,

[Normal]
00:37:845 (4) - Finish? ここはこのclapが気に入ってるのでこのままで!
01:09:345 - 01:10:845 - 低めのVolumeでSoft-hitclap4?良いアクセントになると思います。 OK
01:16:470 (1,2) - 他の難易度に同じ。終点にwhistle付けたほうが好きです。 OK
01:28:845 - Clapの方が違和感が少ないかも? OK
01:39:720 (2) - Repeatではなく01:40:657 - にNote置いた方がいいと思います。最低でも終点のClapは全くあってないので外して下さい。 変更しました~ スペーシングは合わせましたが配置が危ういかもしれません…
01:51:720 (4) - このSection、ずっと1/1で単調になってます。というわけでこのSliderを01:51:532 - まで移動してみてはどうでしょうか。 fixed!
01:52:470 (1,2) - Kiai前のとこと同じ。でもこっちは今のままでもいいかも。 こっちはこのままにします₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾
02:00:532 - Finish? OK
02:05:313 (1) - このSpinner正直合ってないし、後続のNoteが全くないのも違和感MAXなので、消して普通にNotes置いていく事をおすすめします。 たぶんこっち(02:05:220 - )のことですよね…? notes詰めときました( ˘◡˘ )
modding感謝です :3
http://puu.sh/e9r8H.zip
Topic Starter
Momovely
追記

[INSANE]

01:35:595 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 少し配置を弄りました
Lecana

Melophobia wrote:

遅くなってすみません。,,Ծ‸Ծ,,


[Lecana's]
00:59:220 (1) - たぶんFinish付け忘れ?00:47:220 (1) - には付いてるので。
01:09:345 - 01:10:845 - 今のままだとやや煩いので20%ほどVolumeを下げるといいかも。
01:12:345 - 指摘し忘れてましたがここにもSoft-hitclap4を。
01:38:782 (1) - Clap?
All fixedです!
http://puu.sh/ee9Nl/ce55661506.zip
Quilt
特にプレイに問題ないと思ったので00:03:720 (1)は直しませんでした
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Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Momovely
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Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Sprite opening ao no kanata four rhythm Beyond the sky into the firmament Lecana Quilt ShiraKai Satellite dagger-gazel
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196,84,73845,2,0,P|236:76|264:80,1,68.0000012969971,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,100,74220,6,0,P|361:73|376:24,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,74595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,84,74782,2,0,P|116:88|64:148,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,44,75532,2,0,P|420:112|368:176,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,212,76095,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,148,76470,6,0,P|120:108|128:68,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,196,76845,2,0,P|192:224|144:244,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,108,77220,6,0,P|284:88|368:116,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,264,77782,2,0,P|212:284|128:256,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,124,78345,2,0,L|84:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,292,78720,5,2,0:0:0:0:
60,124,78907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,223,79095,2,0,P|253:221|306:163,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,76,79657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,156,79845,2,0,P|410:188|447:203,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,76,80220,6,0,P|248:52|180:72,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,128,80782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,180,80970,2,0,P|200:240|192:276,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,348,81345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,348,81532,2,0,B|232:352|264:316|264:316|356:360,1,160
336,240,82095,6,0,L|264:204,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,176,82470,2,0,P|132:174|93:183,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,124,82845,2,0,P|244:84|244:36,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,108,83220,6,0,P|67:182|96:256,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,222,83782,2,0,P|309:147|281:74,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,12,84345,2,0,P|178:49|183:89,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,184,84720,6,0,P|110:212|35:189,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,268,85282,2,0,P|285:239|360:262,1,160
444,308,85845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,164,86032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,204,86220,6,0,P|467:164|464:124,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,28,86595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,28,86782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,88,86970,2,0,P|307:105|234:74,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,24,87532,2,0,L|288:208,1,160
277,277,88095,5,8,0:0:0:0:
219,83,88470,2,0,P|174:88|136:113,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,184,88845,2,0,P|168:221|162:266,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,191,89220,6,0,P|343:116|326:39,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,100,89782,2,0,P|344:124|412:88,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,28,90345,2,0,P|209:49|194:85,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,251,90720,6,0,P|222:224|234:193,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,100,91095,2,0,P|312:96|352:100,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,112,91470,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,24,91657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,176,91845,2,0,P|312:232|324:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,99,92220,6,0,P|191:79|115:101,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,179,92782,2,0,P|18:155|-2:115,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,190,93157,2,0,P|137:229|120:265,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,102,93532,2,0,P|184:98|248:158,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,248,94095,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,152,94282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,236,94470,2,0,P|193:275|205:313,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,152,94845,2,0,P|352:120|352:64,2,80,8|0|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,248,95407,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,188,95595,2,0,P|117:164|47:199,2,160,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,248,96532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,148,96720,5,2,0:0:0:0:
220,288,96907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,204,97095,2,0,L|448:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,97470,2,0,L|340:128,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,224,97845,2,0,L|412:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,303,98220,5,8,0:0:0:0:
319,303,98313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,303,98407,2,0,P|280:297|241:303,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,340,98782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,231,98970,2,0,P|168:192|164:152,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,99345,2,0,P|235:95|239:135,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,272,99720,6,0,P|356:196|340:120,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,196,100282,2,0,P|136:272|152:348,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,184,100845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,184,101032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,108,101220,6,0,P|176:60|184:20,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,168,101595,2,0,P|324:207|309:244,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,307,101970,2,0,P|149:300|76:332,2,160,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,332,102907,5,0,0:0:0:0:
284,232,103095,2,0,P|275:192|276:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,52,103470,2,0,P|188:32|136:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,72,103845,2,0,P|48:32|36:-4,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,116,104220,6,0,P|200:196|164:264,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,320,104782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,208,104970,2,0,P|48:212|13:234,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,356,105345,2,0,P|200:352|234:329,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,260,105720,6,0,P|348:244|412:260,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,272,106095,2,0,P|464:236|468:196,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,48,106470,2,0,P|360:108|368:168,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,106845,2,0,P|328:212|288:204,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,192,107220,6,0,P|134:258|143:336,2,160,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,100,108157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,120,108345,2,0,P|92:100|72:64,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,20,108720,6,0,P|248:16|292:32,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,84,109095,2,0,P|436:143|446:221,2,160,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,110032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,132,110220,6,0,P|188:128|160:144,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,110595,2,0,P|96:264|132:312,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,110970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,248,111157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,231,111345,2,0,P|179:192|178:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,56,111720,6,0,P|214:28|252:16,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,94,112095,2,0,P|302:91|339:106,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,112,112470,2,0,P|97:77|98:38,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,56,112845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
205,86,112938,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,122,113032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
186,154,113126,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,181,113220,6,0,P|137:254|166:327,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,253,113782,2,0,P|137:239|68:275,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,253,114345,2,0,P|223:214|222:175,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,20,114720,6,0,L|213:96,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,139,115095,2,0,P|339:141|375:131,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,108,115470,1,2,0:0:0:0:
401,33,115657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
465,194,115845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,35,116032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,108,116220,6,0,P|382:121|321:68,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,15,116782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,15,116970,2,0,L|206:100,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,176,117345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,161,117532,2,0,P|346:148|416:180,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,300,118095,6,0,P|339:268|328:230,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,82,118470,2,0,P|228:90|198:117,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,300,118845,2,0,P|243:266|251:230,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,203,119220,6,0,P|78:266|85:355,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,203,119782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,244,119970,2,0,P|246:253|286:242,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,273,120345,2,0,P|390:304|402:342,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,184,120720,6,0,P|358:146|385:118,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,150,121095,2,0,P|253:187|226:215,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,247,121470,2,0,P|51:238|-9:285,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,331,122032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,247,122220,5,8,0:0:0:0:
152,215,122313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,182,122407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
166,145,122501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,111,122595,2,0,P|142:70|158:23,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,122970,2,0,P|292:153|276:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,285,123345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,285,123438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,285,123532,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,188,123720,6,0,P|360:174|442:195,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,285,124282,2,0,P|147:299|65:278,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,78,125032,5,0,0:0:0:0:
191,78,125220,2,0,P|173:118|170:156,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,328,125595,2,0,P|289:255|280:178,1,160
267,90,126157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,222,126345,2,0,P|175:231|126:222,1,80
280,216,127095,6,0,P|312:244|352:256,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
296,136,127470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,136,127563,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,136,127657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,160,127845,2,0,P|200:212|204:252,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
202,322,128220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,160,128595,6,0,P|424:108|420:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
356,224,128970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,224,129063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,224,129157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,176,129345,2,0,P|248:172|208:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
56,240,129907,6,0,L|12:240,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
164,244,130282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,244,130376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,244,130470,2,0,P|176:192|160:152,1,80
72,56,130845,2,0,P|56:140|104:204,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
256,192,131407,12,0,137595,0:0:0:0:
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[Satellite's]
01:14:595 (2) - すみませんTime間違えてました。始点と折り返しにWhistle置いて、終点には付けない方が良いと思います。

[ShiraKai's]
01:14:595 (2) - 直ってないです。
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Melophobia wrote:

[Satellite's]
01:14:595 (2) - すみませんTime間違えてました。始点と折り返しにWhistle置いて、終点には付けない方が良いと思います。 さてらいとさんの許可を得て直しました
ShiraKai

Melophobia wrote:

[ShiraKai's]
01:14:595 (2) - 直ってないです。 Normalのmodのとこに書かれていなかったので見落としていましたが、Hardに合わせてwhistleを抜いた方がいいということですよね :o :?:
fixed!
http://puu.sh/enr5b.zip
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~
ありがとうございます!
BeatofIke
Map looks/plays fine I guess. Just fix Easy difficulty a little bit and add video in Normal.
[General]
  1. The map starts a bit too quickly. Add Lead-in seconds: 500.
  2. ShiraKai's Normal is missing video.
  3. Add a silenced (44 byte) soft-sliderslide4 so the sliderslide at S:C4 timing section is silenced too.
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:470 (1,2) - New combo should start at 00:05:220. Remove the combo at 00:04:470.
  2. 00:11:220 (1,2) - The blanket at 1 can be polished more:
    Code
    444,132,11220,6,0,P|424:224|332:232,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    292,116,12720,2,0,B|206:145|225:98|135:116,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:57:907 (1,2) - New combo should start at 00:58:845 so it is consistent with the combo at 00:44:220 (1,2,3). Remove combo at 00:57:907.
  4. 01:10:470 (3,1) - Very weird flow here. Try a blanket at 01:09:345 (2,3) and adjust spacing at 01:11:220 (1):
    Code
    388,124,70470,2,0,P|359:96|321:85,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    244,100,71220,6,0,P|193:60|108:94,2,160,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 02:00:345 (2) - This blanket can be polished too:
    Code
    330,112,120345,2,0,P|392:128|458:67,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Call me back once you are done~
Satellite
Ike chan ! Thank you for check !
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BeatofIke wrote:

Map looks/plays fine I guess. Just fix Easy difficulty a little bit and add video in Normal.
[General]
  1. The map starts a bit too quickly. Add Lead-in seconds: 500.
  2. ShiraKai's Normal is missing video.
  3. Add a silenced (44 byte) soft-sliderslide4 so the sliderslide at S:C4 timing section is silenced too.
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:470 (1,2) - New combo should start at 00:05:220. Remove the combo at 00:04:470.
  2. 00:11:220 (1,2) - The blanket at 1 can be polished more:
    Code
    444,132,11220,6,0,P|424:224|332:232,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    292,116,12720,2,0,B|206:145|225:98|135:116,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:57:907 (1,2) - New combo should start at 00:58:845 so it is consistent with the combo at 00:44:220 (1,2,3). Remove combo at 00:57:907.
  4. 01:10:470 (3,1) - Very weird flow here. Try a blanket at 01:09:345 (2,3) and adjust spacing at 01:11:220 (1):
    Code
    388,124,70470,2,0,P|359:96|321:85,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    244,100,71220,6,0,P|193:60|108:94,2,160,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 02:00:345 (2) - This blanket can be polished too:
    Code
    330,112,120345,2,0,P|392:128|458:67,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Call me back once you are done~

all fix!


thank you Ike :)

very helpful ;)
BeatofIke
Re-check on Easy. Your combos got mixed up www

01:10:470 (1) - Remove combo
01:26:595 (6,1) - New combo should start here. Remove combo at 01:26:970 (1).
01:31:470 (1,2) - Remove combo at 1 and add new combo at 01:32:220 (2).
01:38:220 (3,1) - Add combo at 3 and remove combo at 01:39:345 (1).
02:00:345 (1) - Remove combo.
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BeatofIke wrote:

Re-check on Easy. Your combos got mixed up www

01:10:470 (1) - Remove combo
01:26:595 (6,1) - New combo should start here. Remove combo at 01:26:970 (1).
01:31:470 (1,2) - Remove combo at 1 and add new combo at 01:32:220 (2).
01:38:220 (3,1) - Add combo at 3 and remove combo at 01:39:345 (1).
02:00:345 (1) - Remove combo.
oh sorry my mistake :o

ok revised it.

thanks re-check!
BeatofIke
Almost there! Just 1 more issue to fix:

[ShiraKai's Normal]
  1. 01:09:345 (4) - Try not to use hitsounds volumes less than 30% because hitsounds are usually inaudible below that percentage. I suggest increasing the hitsound voulme to at least 30%
[Satellite's Hard]
  1. 00:11:782 (3) - The soft-whistle at the end of this slider is inaudible. Please remove the soft-whistle so it's consistent with Quilt's Hard.
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