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Queen P.A.L - JULIAN [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
CrazyStar
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年1月10日 at 下午 06:55:14

Artist: Queen P.A.L
Title: JULIAN
Source: BMS
Tags: lr2 FIGHTERS for B.O.F. 2009 cranky
BPM: 153
Filesize: 2586kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another - 4Key (3.74 stars, 1229 notes)
  2. Hyper - 4Key (3.02 stars, 883 notes)
  3. Normal - 4Key (2.11 stars, 496 notes)
Download: Queen P.A.L - JULIAN
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal - 100%
Hyper - 100%
Another - 100%
Sky_Demon
摸圖 摸圖 摸圖

key: |1|2|3|4|

Normal
00:09:997 - 這裡重音
00:10:781 (10781|1) - 移動到00:11:173 -
00:11:762 - 加一個在2
00:47:056 (47056|1,47056|2,47252|0,47252|1) - 你擺這樣是想殺死新手麼
給你個建議吧http://puu.sh/bRpeb/f547c3629a.jpg
00:53:428 (53428|2) - 這跟的是什麼音? 跟鼓的話就over map了 放50%聽聽看
跟琴音的話 時間點音該是這裡00:53:396 -
01:05:291 - 這裡應該是這樣http://puu.sh/bRpxW/e46463166a.jpg
Hyper
00:50:716 (50716|2,50716|1) - 移動到00:50:683 -
00:51:026 (51026|2) - 移動到 00:51:075 -
01:06:075 - 重音 加一個
這裡重音都放3鍵了01:19:017 - 這裡怎麼沒有 01:20:977 -
01:38:036 - 漏音
01:41:566 - ^
01:41:664 - ^
01:43:819 (103819|1,104016|0) - 音不是通的很清楚 建議砍了
01:44:311 - 漏音
01:49:604 (109604|2,109604|3,109604|1) - 音沒那麼重才是 砍不砍看你
Another
00:32:742 - 重音
00:58:428 - 加一個
01:12:350 - 重音
01:12:644 - 漏音 聽不到的話用50%
01:20:977 - 重音
01:21:762 - ^
01:50:389 - 01:50:977 - 可以考慮抓這個音 反正已經不人性了ww

-身為人性向的實在拿Another沒轍 水了點抱歉拉ww-

就這樣啦 祝你好運~
射個星 o/ :)
Topic Starter
CrazyStar

Sky_Demon wrote:

摸圖 摸圖 摸圖

key: |1|2|3|4|

Normal
00:09:997 - 這裡重音 okay
00:10:781 (10781|1) - 移動到00:11:173 - 同上,okay
00:11:762 - 加一個在2 後面三個音是抓Vocal的起頭
00:47:056 (47056|1,47056|2,47252|0,47252|1) - 你擺這樣是想殺死新手麼 參考了後,照自己的方式修改了
給你個建議吧http://puu.sh/bRpeb/f547c3629a.jpg
00:53:428 (53428|2) - 這跟的是什麼音? 跟鼓的話就over map了 放50%聽聽看 這裡是藍拍白拍都有音的
跟琴音的話 時間點音該是這裡00:53:396 -
01:05:291 - 這裡應該是這樣http://puu.sh/bRpxW/e46463166a.jpgFixed
Hyper
00:50:716 (50716|2,50716|1) - 移動到00:50:683 - 放歪了hehehe
00:51:026 (51026|2) - 移動到 00:51:075 - 是有1/8的,保留
01:06:075 - 重音 加一個
這裡重音都放3鍵了01:19:017 - 這裡怎麼沒有 01:20:977 - 因為1分19那個前面是拉了一個比較長的LN,所以就不擺Triple
01:38:036 - 漏音vocal結尾後故意空著的
01:41:566 - ^不是抓這個音
01:41:664 - ^^
01:43:819 (103819|1,104016|0) - 音不是通的很清楚 建議砍了好哦!
01:44:311 - 漏音一樣是故意控的
01:49:604 (109604|2,109604|3,109604|1) - 音沒那麼重才是 砍不砍看你給"hey!"一點戲份
Another
00:32:742 - 重音修改
00:58:428 - 加一個分軌處理,4是鼓,1 2 3是特效音,所以這邊不加
01:12:350 - 重音加上了
01:12:644 - 漏音 聽不到的話用50%這邊應該是那個Rap的聲音
01:20:977 - 重音是的,加上了
01:21:762 - ^^
01:50:389 - 01:50:977 - 可以考慮抓這個音 反正已經不人性了ww其實這音不太明顯,有人再提我再加上

-身為人性向的實在拿Another沒轍 水了點抱歉拉ww-不會的,三個難度都幫了很多忙:D

就這樣啦 祝你好運~感謝呆萌哥:">
射個星 o/ Thanks :)
Kawawa
halo~

mania mod abount

i think, just suggest :)

NM
00:00:781 - note 1add

hyper
00:52:751 - 1add
00:52:938 - 1add
00:54:313 - 1add
00:55:487 - 1add
00:55:879 - 1add
00:59:997 - 1add
01:00:977 - 1add
01:02:546 - 1add
01:08:526 - 1add
01:08:722 - 1add

another
01:05:291 - F note -> D movement
01:05:585 - D note -> J movement
01:05:879 - D note -> J movement
01:05:977 - D note -> J movement
01:06:271 - 1add

good luck XD
pocket-Gao
好听,我射 :)
richardfeder
gonna edit later /.\ too busy recently
Normal
HP8....??
very beginning ~ 00:13:526 (13526|2) - I'm not sure about what are you trying to follow and current notes are kinda...random for me T.T if you want to change your beginning I think clap sounds are really good to start with. So does voice.

00:18:624 (18624|2,19017|0) - they should be the same as 00:19:409 (19409|2,19605|2,19801|0,19997|0) - if I am not wrong

00:51:173 (51173|3,51435|1) - double notes
00:51:958 (51958|3) - replace by a LN and add a note while delete 00:52:154 (52154|3,52350|3,52448|2,52546|1,52644|0) - [stick on what you can hear most is OK no need to shift from melody to beats at this point]

01:03:722 (63722|1) - no sound here

01:24:409 (84409|0) - move right by two columns?

01:35:879 (95879|0,96271|0) - http://puu.sh/c5cMY/b1831e8dfb.jpg just suggestion

Hyper
00:03:231 (3231|2) - unsnapped. I guess it should be 1/4 earlier

00:03:819 (3819|2) - ^ seems 1/4 earlier is more feels better but yea your choice

00:06:074 (6074|3,6270|0) - ?
00:07:251 (7251|2,7349|1,7447|0) - delete

00:38:918 (38918|1) - delete

00:45:878 - from here:Do you want to try some 1/2 LN? www

00:54:506 (54506|2,54702|3,55290|3,55356|2,55422|1) - ? feels like a lot is missing
00:55:879 - also. missing a note?

01:03:721 (63721|3,63819|2,63918|1,64016|2,64114|0,64310|1,64408|2,64506|0) - 窜音??!

01:07:840 (67840|1) - add a vocal note since you map vocal 01:08:035 (68035|3,68102|2,68167|1,68231|0) - . If you don't add this then this will be another case of 窜音T.T

01:11:859 (71859|2,71957|3) - double?

01:15:486 (75486|0) - why is this single note?

01:29:212 (89212|3) - delete

01:29:898 (89898|3,89996|0,89996|1,90094|2,90192|0,90290|2,90388|1,90388|3) - http://puu.sh/c5drL/9aa75aa9cd.jpg anyway use LN or not is not a big deal(for instance 01:30:291 (90291|0) - can be a normal note and that makes more sense when 01:30:487 (90487|2) - and itself are in the same column)...but the main idea is highlighting theme/map proper kick sound & ignore the rest

01:35:486 (95486|0) - delete

后面差不多跟^^同样啦我就不写了

01:49:996 (109996|1,109996|3,110094|2,110094|0,110192|1,110192|3,110584|2,110584|1,110682|0,110682|3,110780|2,110780|1,111172|3,111172|2,111270|0,111270|1,111368|2,111368|3) - 坑 看了半天才发现原来只写了kick

Another is overall good for me and I just have a few things to mention:
1.开头是不是再简化一下?有些东西好像不怎么听得见
2.整体有点单调(? all normal notes -> kinda monotone? 其实我觉得一些比较空的地方可以适当加些长条短条写旋律 会更好玩些 全部塞满note打起来会稍微有些无聊(.
3.结尾那个分明是4连啊???!!!!
Icing_wind
Hyper
00:07:937 (7937|2) - 取了
00:08:036 - 加两个
00:16:366 - 取了
00:16:271 - 加两个
00:29:997 (29997|1) - 移到4
00:47:448 (47448|3) - 取了
01:34:507 - 加一个
01:40:781 - 加一个
01:47:056 - ↑
mod完毕。 good luck :D
Topic Starter
CrazyStar

KawaEE wrote:

halo~

mania mod abount

i think, just suggest :)

NM
00:00:781 - note 1add okay

hyper
00:52:751 - 1add
00:52:938 - 1add
00:54:313 - 1add
00:55:487 - 1add
00:55:879 - 1add
I catched the other sound so remain

00:59:997 - 1add X
01:00:977 - 1add X
01:02:546 - 1add X
01:08:526 - 1add okay~
01:08:722 - 1add ^

another
01:05:291 - F note -> D movement fixed
01:05:585 - D note -> J movement X
01:05:879 - D note -> J movement X
01:05:977 - D note -> J movement X
01:06:271 - 1add X

good luck XD Thank you my friend~~~

richardfeder wrote:

gonna edit later /.\ too busy recently 辛苦了,我這麼久才回,真是抱歉
Normal
HP8....??
very beginning ~ 00:13:526 (13526|2) - I'm not sure about what are you trying to follow and current notes are kinda...random for me T.T if you want to change your beginning I think clap sounds are really good to start with. So does voice.
All fixed and followed voice!

00:18:624 (18624|2,19017|0) - they should be the same as 00:19:409 (19409|2,19605|2,19801|0,19997|0) - if I am not wrong
Remain because of the drum sounds
00:51:173 (51173|3,51435|1) - double notes fixed
00:51:958 (51958|3) - replace by a LN and add a note while delete 00:52:154 (52154|3,52350|3,52448|2,52546|1,52644|0) - [stick on what you can hear most is OK no need to shift from melody to beats at this point]
I thought here was an alternative pattern to bridge the next measure so I added a LN,but the drum sounds was still exist in

01:03:722 (63722|1) - no sound here X

01:24:409 (84409|0) - move right by two columns? X

01:35:879 (95879|0,96271|0) - http://puu.sh/c5cMY/b1831e8dfb.jpg just suggestionchanged with another patterns

Hyper
00:03:231 (3231|2) - unsnapped. I guess it should be 1/4 earlier Fixed

00:03:819 (3819|2) - ^ seems 1/4 earlier is more feels better but yea your choice Fixed

00:06:074 (6074|3,6270|0) - ? Add some note in the next 2 notes
00:07:251 (7251|2,7349|1,7447|0) - delete Okay

00:38:918 (38918|1) - delete X

00:45:878 - from here:Do you want to try some 1/2 LN? www I ever thought it too,but finally decided to put notes

00:54:506 (54506|2,54702|3,55290|3,55356|2,55422|1) - ? feels like a lot is missing It's my failure,fixed
00:55:879 - also. missing a note? Fixed

01:03:721 (63721|3,63819|2,63918|1,64016|2,64114|0,64310|1,64408|2,64506|0) - 窜音??!Remain,but if someone else mod it again then I'll make some adjustment

01:07:840 (67840|1) - add a vocal note since you map vocal 01:08:035 (68035|3,68102|2,68167|1,68231|0) - . If you don't add this then this will be another case of 窜音T.T Okay

01:11:859 (71859|2,71957|3) - double? Yeah!

01:15:486 (75486|0) - why is this single note? LN+Single

01:29:212 (89212|3) - delete

01:29:898 (89898|3,89996|0,89996|1,90094|2,90192|0,90290|2,90388|1,90388|3) - http://puu.sh/c5drL/9aa75aa9cd.jpg anyway use LN or not is not a big deal(for instance 01:30:291 (90291|0) - can be a normal note and that makes more sense when 01:30:487 (90487|2) - and itself are in the same column)...but the main idea is highlighting theme/map proper kick sound & ignore the rest

01:35:486 (95486|0) - delete

後面這一大段我有大幅度修改了

后面差不多跟^^同样啦我就不写了

01:49:996 (109996|1,109996|3,110094|2,110094|0,110192|1,110192|3,110584|2,110584|1,110682|0,110682|3,110780|2,110780|1,111172|3,111172|2,111270|0,111270|1,111368|2,111368|3) - 坑 看了半天才发现原来只写了kick 這邊也有些修改


Another is overall good for me and I just have a few things to mention:
1.开头是不是再简化一下?有些东西好像不怎么听得见 好 改全抓Vocal了
2.整体有点单调(? all normal notes -> kinda monotone? 其实我觉得一些比较空的地方可以适当加些长条短条写旋律 会更好玩些 全部塞满note打起来会稍微有些无聊(.
3.结尾那个分明是4连啊???!!!!


我其實比較想用做StepMania譜面的套路做這難度,做出來會像第兩點提出來的模樣,不過有些地方不適合就放棄了

Icing_wind wrote:

Hyper
00:07:937 (7937|2) - 取了
00:08:036 - 加两个 我只取Vocal
00:16:366 - 取了
00:16:271 - 加两个 X
00:29:997 (29997|1) - 移到4 X
00:47:448 (47448|3) - 取了
01:34:507 - 加一个 X
01:40:781 - 加一个 X
01:47:056 - ↑ X
mod完毕。 good luck :D 感謝IC
-LASU-
Hi CrazyStar san

|1|2|3|4|
Another mod
Another
00:12:154 - How about? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2499339
00:20:291 - add note 4 (Hyper 1notes)
00:20:481 - add note 2 (same)
00:58:526 - add note 1 or 2
01:01:271 - add note 2
01:04:409 - add note 1
01:07:742 - ^
01:10:389 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2499405
01:26:173 - add note 3 and 01:26:271 (86271|2) - move to 4
01:26:468 (86468|3) - move to 2
01:30:879 - add note 3
01:32:252 - add note 2
01:33:036 - ^
01:38:526 - add note 4
01:45:585 - add note 3
01:48:036 - add note 4
good luck (^ω^)
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