playin14 wrote:

Hello Here is a mod for the mania diff

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[Divine hard]

00:19:171 (19171|1) - move 2 to 4
00:19:338 (19338|3) - move 4 to 3
00:19:505 (19505|2) - move 3 to 4
00:19:671 (19671|3) - move 4 to 2
00:23:339 (23339|0) - delete 1
00:23:505 (23505|0) - add 1
00:24:171 (24171|2) - delete 3
00:24:839 (24839|1) - delete 2
00:28:005 (28005|3) - add 4
00:28:671 (28671|3,28671|2) - delete 3 and 4
00:28:672 (28672|1) - add 2
00:28:838 (28838|1) - move 2 to 3
00:28:839 (28839|0) - add 1
01:42:339 - 01:45:005 - Well, I think this is overmapped? Maybe remap this part
01:46:005 (106005|3) - add 4
01:46:338 (106338|2,106338|3) - delete 3 and 4
01:47:005 (107005|1) - move 2 to 3
02:05:672 - 02:37:005 - to be honest, this part of the song is too loud for me. I can't focus on the notes, but I think this part is ok.
02:55:671 (175671|0) - move 1 to 4
02:56:005 (176005|2) - move 3 to 1
02:57:672 (177672|3) - add 4
02:57:922 (177922|3) - delete 4
02:58:339 (178339|3) - add 4
02:59:005 (179005|3) - add 4
02:59:672 (179672|3) - add 4
03:00:339 (180339|3) - add 4
03:00:505 (180505|2) - move 1
03:01:005 (181005|3) - add 4
03:14:339 (194339|1) - add 2
03:16:838 (196838|3) - delete 4
03:17:005 (197005|3) - add 4
05:34:338 (334338|1) - move 2 to 4

Well, I hope this will help. Feel free to ignore my suggestions
Good Luck!

1. Use a different font for the text in the storyboard, perhaps one of these: 12 3
2. Different colour for the text, perhaps gradient
3. Huge file size on storyboard, try to somehow shrink it lol

Yuutosan wrote:

Here's my mania mod as requested in my queue. sorry it's a bit late. ahhh its oke thanks for modding lmao <3

Yuutosan wrote:

Here's my mania mod as requested in my queue. sorry it's a bit late.

[General]
The hitsounds are too loud, please reduce them to 20-30 .

Please fix these 1ms unsnapped notes. . Go timing > Resnap All Notes (Apply this when you have applies my mods.)


[mijkolsmith's Divine Hard]
00:28:839 - add note to 1 here, since the sound is pretty loud.
00:31:505 - add a note since the sounds are same with the previous notes. like 00:30:339 (30339|1,30339|3,30672|2,30672|1) -
00:32:005 - add note, the reason is same as above.
00:43:339 - add note to 4
00:53:672 - add one more note to 1, the snare is very strong.
01:17:338 (77338|0,77671|1) - move both to the right by 1
01:23:005 - add note like 01:22:005 (82005|3,82005|0) -
01:25:339 - add note
01:27:671 (87671|0,87671|1,87671|2) - sudden three notes. but they have no loud sound. I'd suggest you to delete one of them.
01:33:005 (93005|1,93005|2,93005|3) - ^
02:49:005 (169005|1,169005|2) - I don't think these are needed/
03:34:339 - add note to 1
04:47:839 - add note
04:48:339 - ^

Ok good luck...

you asked me for this mod ages ago sorry

1. nice storyboard buddy
2. excuse my terrible modding it's my first time modding ayeeee
3. nice map nice song nice artist nicenicenic e

1. the highlight.png is pretty dark, maybe try making it the colour it is except brighter instead of darker? it'd look nicer, but you'd probably also need to decrease the opacity a little so it doesn't look too distracting
   
   picture of what i mean

   
2. basically the same for ring.png, try using this and decreasing the opacity a little to minimize distractions
   
   picture of what i mean

   
3. 04:18:422 - maybe from here up until the kiai time, make the lyrics in the storyboard fade a little/decrease the opacity with them, making them a bit more transparent each time (what i mean: "lean into my side" won't be as faded as "call the chants inside" and "never felt alive" will be the most faded (but still readable) since it's the most quiet one by that time since the vocals get quieter towards the kiai time you feel me)
4. 03:34:339 - maybe chill out a little on the crystallize effect - you can still use it, but probably don't crystallize it so much (or simpler, go into photoshop again and redo the frames in the crystallize frames, using a smaller cell size)
5. 03:34:339 - mentioning this part again because i like the way the highlight follows the notes in the song nice job kiddo
6. did you use combo colours or am i just not seeing them? either way, i think they'd kinda suit the map but it's up to you whether or not you want to add them :^)
7. 05:43:672 - same suggestion as before about the faded text, maybe try it here again since the vocals are quieter here too

1. enjoy some new crystallize frames - just tested them too and they're good ayeeee
2. i think adding a blurred background of the monochrome bg would be pretty good during the parts of the song where there's vocals that fades out back into the non-blurred background when there aren't vocals anymore would look pretty neat

byfar wrote:

holy damn 6 mins kkkkk

w8

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hi ~

from "Mania New Modding Team" Queue

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[mijkolsmith's Divine Hard]
[General]


00:13:505 - add

00:43:255 (43255|2) - delete
00:43:172 - add1

01:04:339 - to 01:04:672 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2417861 ?

01:04:672 - (SV)Audio 30%
01:47:672 - ^40%
02:03:672 - ^54%
03:55:672 - ^30%

01:05:005 - add
01:06:339 - delete one note
01:07:005 - add
01:07:339 - delete one note
01:08:005 - ^
01:08:339 - ^
01:09:005 - ^
01:09:672 - add
01:10:005 - delete one note
01:11:339 - ^
01:12:005 - ^
01:13:005 - add
01:14:672 - ^1
02:02:005 - ^1

02:04:672 - delete one note
02:05:672 - ^
02:28:672 (148672|1) - delete
02:29:672 - ^^
02:35:672 - ^
02:38:339 - ^
02:44:672 (164672|0) - delete

02:46:672 - add 4
02:47:339 - ^1
02:47:672 - ^1

02:49:005 (169005|1,169005|2) - delete

03:13:672 - add
03:17:005 - ^
03:22:339 - ^
03:22:630 - ^3
03:23:130 - ^3

03:57:339 - delete one note
04:00:005 - ^
04:02:005 - ^
04:52:672 - ^
04:55:172 - ^
05:30:005 - ^

05:35:339 - to 06:03:672 - ?

good luck >w</

Harbyter wrote:

hi~ here the from req on ▣▣▣No.1 Team Modding Queue OPEN [Mania]▣▣▣


[MOD]

Column -1-2-3-4-

mijkolsmith's Divine Hard

00:22:339 - suggest to add another note here,for the strong sound here ,it helps too for the incoming new rhytm

00:28:005 - here to delete one,

00:33:005 - like the first one,add 1 note here

00:43:255 (43255|2,43255|0,43339|1,43339|3) - this pattern is incomplete without the first notes here 00:43:172 - so add??

00:43:672 - add,same suggestion like the first one

00:54:339 - ~

01:04:339 - here is a 1/8, this is a MX so how to turn it in a 1/8 stair? like this
if yes remember to fix this LN 01:04:672 (64672|0) - should start here 01:04:714 -

01:16:005 - 01:16:672 - how about to fill those ?

01:31:005 - add

01:44:172 (104172|3) - nothing here,delete?

01:47:172 - add here

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03:01:380 - 03:01:464 - add ,complete the 1/8 stair

03:01:755 - from here to here 03:02:005 - another 1/8,complete it?

03:02:089 - to here 03:02:339 - another 1/8

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03:10:339 - hue another long 1/8 here too ,but i think you won't do here

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pattern start from here 03:22:589 - so add here and here 03:22:630 -

03:23:089 - here too
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05:09:005 (309005|3,309047|2,309089|1,309130|0) - delete ,nothing
05:09:547 (309547|1,309630|3,309714|1) - same here,nothing ,delete

well that's all,i honestly think you have a lot of work to do with those pattern too T.T good luck for the rank!

1. combo colors are not same :V
2. mania diff has not SB Epilepsy warning

• I'm not a SToryBorder but i can give you some suggestion since imo you need some,i'm not discussing the SB quality but just some parts of it:

1. Text: personally i don't like the font that you used because i think it soesent fit generally with the BG and the rest of the SB you can use http://www.dafont.com/ for finding some more light formd fornt and not Arial, why don't you try to go for softer colours and give a fade to the words and an outer light wich is easier to do with photoshop,
2. suggestion: 00:22:339 - here you have a tranformation wich is really nice but imo you should start to change the colour of the background on 00:21:005 - but on 00:22:339 - wich would be perfect with the loop that you choise for this part
   You should ask a SBorder to help you with a mod since imo it really needs one on the SB

1. rise lead-in up to 2000 pls
2. I wanted to say something in general to the diff , is not bad but you have some points wich imo forgotten to be mapped tike:
   03:01:172 - you can totally listen the sound in background wich you even mapped before so you should do with this one aswell to keep everything consistant and balanced in your diff
   03:04:339 (6,7) - here you mapped this kind of sound in a totally different way and not in 1/8
   03:06:839 (4,5) - same again here
   03:09:672 (5,6) - same
   03:15:005 (5) - same
   03:17:672 (6,7) - same and so on,try to keep thins kind of sound consistant with the rhythm that you give to it,so you should totally check really good one by one this kind of sounds and change the rhythm to the patterns
   
3. 02:48:672 (1) - imo here you should use 1/4 rhythm since it looks a bit overmapped with 1/8
   
4. about the usage of patterns you got really much incostency because somethimes when you have to use 1/8 you use 1/4 or even 1/2 and in some parts wich is generally the rhythm of the song id alive you let it die with slow sliders like in this case 03:21:005 (1,2) -
   
5. the flow in general between the patterns is not really good in some parts for example 00:32:339 (1,2,3,4,1) - here
   
   SPOILER

   
   here is how i see your flow the problem is basicly in the end but you can re-do this pattern in this way to have a nice and smooooty flow:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. try to look on some aproved dnb maps for having some jump inspiration because imo you need some more cute one ;_; and imo in the slower part of the map try to not use so many circles :V

VINXIS wrote:

1. suggestion: 00:22:339 - here you have a tranformation wich is really nice but imo you should start to change the colour of the background on 00:21:005 - but on 00:22:339 - wich would be perfect with the loop that you choise for this part idk wat ur saying but if u can, pls explain

1. The map is still somewhat beginnerish, but I think you know that yourself . I noticed a lot of irregular spacing at places where it shouldn't change, and there wasn't really a great flow. But I see those things a lot with new mappers
2. I am surprised that no one noticed this but the BPM is unnecessarily doubled. Nothing in the music would make it 180, but rather 90 (don't forget to double the SV)
3. Slidertick rate is a bit overkill in such a calm song, I suggest changing this to 1, or let it stay at 2 if you apply my bpm change.
4. The purple combo color (Combo 2) blends a lot with the background. Consider making this one a bit lighter/darker to avoid this.
5. If Nerodae mapped the intro (I don't know how much), it's kind of like a collab and you should add him to the tags. I'm not sure if this has to be done, but I would do it.
6. Cool storyboard, it fits the song perfectly, the lyrics were displayed in a nice way except for the font imo

Yoshiap wrote:

Yay marathons!

To prevent myself putting question marks on every suggestion, I'll just bold blatantly incorrect things. Otherwise everything is a suggestion.

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[Divine Hard]
Does that mean Insane? Who knows, it's a marathon map... difficulty doesn't mean much...
Maybe add SV's into the map? Not sure if you intentionally didn't add any throughout.
00:01:006 - add note You use 2 notes for this type of sound for at least the majority of the beginning section
00:06:005 - remove 4 Can represent the sound with 1 note. Also kinda builds up to the 2-note thing right afterward
00:09:339 - add note You use 2 notes for this sound just before this
00:13:005 - remove note Can represent the sound with 1 note. Also kinda builds up to the 2-note thing right afterward. Alternatively, you can also keep since it does keep up the build-up feeling.
00:13:505 - add note Emphasis consistency, especially considering previous instances
00:14:172 - remove note See 2 comments above
00:14:339 - add note See 2 comments above
00:18:339 - Maybe like this? Basically what I've been saying above for the intro section
00:56:005 - remove note Not really much reason to emphasize the beat, though it follows a pattern Instead of removing that one I made the other ones double too, guess that fixes it
01:11:339 - add note Follows emphasis pattern that you establish beforehand just before this
01:19:672 - remove note Same reason as above, but for the opposite effect
01:20:672 - remove note More of above
01:21:005 - and onwards - Basically the above. You switch to all 2-notes after a certain point, which is fine, but then keep that consistent.
02:42:505 - add note? Feels better with a constant beat going, given what you just mapped
02:43:339 - ^
02:44:505 - ^
02:44:839 - ^
03:38:339 - No sound to support the stream here. Not sure what you'd do with it though... 25% speed works well
04:47:005 - add note Drum emphasis
04:47:172 - remove note Opposite of above
04:50:172 - remove...? Feels out of place, especially given the previous beat that has been followed
06:04:714 - not sure why you stagger when there doesn't seem to a reason/sound to. I kinda see why you might do it though it sounds nice ;3

I have no idea how to mod your bursts/streams, but they do fit so...

Good luck on your map! :3