Seven Lions with Myon and Shane 54 - Strangers (Feat. Tove L · forum

Want 2 Buy Avon

Joined February 2014

Want 2 Buy Avon 2014-12-28T01:50:24+00:00

~~Blackmailed into modding~~ Modding cause I was asked to

[Inv's Easy]
Just gunna say ahead of time I think an easy should have the same DS for the whole song

00:35:354 (3,4) - Not DS correctly
00:37:200 (1) - I'd change this shape into something like a curve or basically anything besides a straight slider cause of her pitch change
00:47:354 (2,1) - I'm not a big fan of overlaps in easy diffs
00:51:046 (4) - not DS correctly
00:55:662 (1,2) - Fix the blanket and DS 2 correctly
01:18:739 (2) - DS correctly, I can see a lot of new players mistaking the beat seperation
01:19:662 (3) - DS correctly
01:20:585 (4,5) - Stacks in easy's are pretty meh to me
01:22:431 (2) - Not DS correctly, and same issue as before
01:24:277 (4) - ^ and the overlap is meh is an easy
01:26:123 (2) - Not DS correctly
01:26:585 (3) - ^
01:27:046 (4) - ^
01:28:893 (1) - ^
01:29:816 (2) - same as before
01:32:585 (1) - Not DS correctly
01:32:585 (1) - same as before
01:35:354 (4,5) - still think stacking is bad for an easy
01:39:046 (5) - same as before
01:39:970 (1) - ^
01:41:816 (3) - Not DS correctly
01:43:662 (1) - same as before
01:44:816 (2) - ^
01:45:970 (4) - Not DS correctly
02:05:816 (1) - ^
02:07:662 (3) - ^
02:12:739 (4) - ^
02:12:739 (4,1) - Same thing about stacking
02:15:046 (3) - Not DS correctly
02:16:893 (1) - ^
02:16:893 (1,2,3) - This would be really hard for new players to read imo
02:19:662 (6) - Not DS correctly
02:21:046 (1,2,3) - will be hard for new people
02:23:354 (5) - Not DS correctly
02:23:816 (6,1) - same thing about stacking
02:24:277 (1,2) - Blanket could be better? I think
02:28:431 (2) - Not DS correctly
02:29:816 (5) - ^
02:31:662 (1,2,3) - Will be hard to read for new people
02:35:354 (6) - Not DS correctly
02:38:123 (7,8,9,1) - if you compare the distance between 7 and 9 to that of 9 to 1 it's gunna definitely mess up new players
02:39:970 (2,3,4) - Hard to read for new player
02:41:816 (5) - Not DS right
02:42:739 (6) - Not DS right
02:45:508 (7) - ^
02:45:508 (7,8,9,1) - same thing about spacing as before
02:48:277 (3,4,5) - Hard to read for newer players
02:52:893 (7,8) - Not DS correctly and the overlapping could be a problem
02:53:816 (1) - Not DS correctly
02:53:816 (1) - Why does this end on the blue tick? I'd extend it to the white tick
02:56:585 (4,5,6) - Hard to read
03:05:816 (2) - DS wrong
03:08:123 (4,1) - DS is wrong and stacking
03:09:508 (2) - DS is wrong
03:10:431 (3) - ^
03:11:354 (4) - ^

so uh, don't hate me for my mod, I just think that an easy should be more straight forward and not have artificial difficulty due to readability and spacing since newer players would have a really hard time with it.
Also why is the OD double the other easy when it's technically an easier map

[Garven's Easy]

00:54:277 (8) - This is snapped wrong
00:55:662 (1) - ^
01:28:893 (5) - ^
01:44:816 (7) - I realize it's for symytrey but it's snapped wrong
02:02:123 - This part you have a lot of sliders when it's the kiai meanwhile 01:17:816 - is mostly single taps when it isn't kiai, maybe mix them both up a bit?
02:23:123 (5) - Ctrl+G and resnap? it'd flow better imo
02:31:662 (1) - This is snapped wrong
02:53:816 (1,2) - Blanket maybe?
02:57:046 (4,5,6,7) - I'd ctrl+G these for better flow
You should map the ending of the map like everyone else did

All I could find

[Broseph's Normal]

You have a different preview point than every other diff so make it the same as the others
01:07:431 (2) - I'd ctrl+G this to flow better and rearrage the stuff afterwards
01:11:354 (3,3) - I think these repeat 1 too many times causing the flow to break
01:25:893 (2,3,1) - This overlap isn't very pretty
01:40:662 (2,3,1) - ^
02:23:816 (4,2) - Stack the slider end of 2 under the slider head of 4
02:37:200 (1) - I think this repeats 1 too many times
02:40:662 (4,3) - This overlap isn't very pretty either
02:44:585 (1) - Same as before
02:51:970 (1) - Same as before
03:05:584 (2) - I'd ctrl+G this too and move the other stuff after it
03:09:507 (3) - Same as before
03:11:353 (3) - ^

[Hard]

01:16:085 (1) - I know a spinner this long is rankable but idk I feel like it'd fit an insane better than a hard
01:18:508 (2) - NC due to SV change
01:18:970 (3) - move to x:177 y:108 for perfect stack
01:23:354 (6) - NC due to SV change
01:25:893 (3) - ^
01:30:739 (5) - ^
01:33:277 (2) - ^
01:33:739 (3) - Move to x:335 y:276 for perfect stack
01:38:123 (6) - NC
01:40:662 (3) - NC
02:42:739 (1,2,3,4) - You use this pattern quite a few times and it feels boring for a kiai
02:59:470 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit
03:12:277 (1,2,3,4) - Ew, just Ew

[Insane]

01:01:662 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is super boring, you should map some of the vocals/the piano notes on the red ticks
01:17:008 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit at all
01:18:508 (3) - NC
01:23:354 (5) - NC
01:24:623 (2,3) - wtf is this spacing
01:30:739 (5) - NC
01:31:662 (1,2) - I'd lower the SV for these so they look less retarded when you play them
01:33:277 (3) - NC
01:39:681 (3) - Wtf is this spacing again
The entire first kiai is one of the most boring things I've seen in a while, copy paste everywhere
01:58:431 (1) - why map this as a spinner when last time it sounded like this it was a stream
02:36:739 (6) - Move this to x:170 y:207
why do you copy paste your kiai times so much? it's supposed to be the most interesting part of the song yet you map it the most boring
03:12:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why double the spacing of this stream compared to the other one when this is the ending of the song, not a build-up to anything
03:16:085 (1) - why don't you have the volume changing green lines like in the hard?

That's what I saw, Good luck getting your map ranked~

Maeglwn

Topic Starter

Maeglwn 2014-12-28T03:33:47+00:00

first thing I'm going to point out; SV changes do not need to be preceded by new combos. at all. therefore, I'm excluding those parts. that is barely a thing ever that happens.

I also didn't respond to a lot of the negative and generally not constructive comments.

Xellie wrote:
[Hard]
01:16:085 (1) - I know a spinner this long is rankable but idk I feel like it'd fit an insane better than a hard it's fine
01:18:970 (3) - move to x:177 y:108 for perfect stack for both of the ones mentioned, no matter what way you do it in this situation they will never be perfectly stacked due to stack leniancy. plus, I'm not going to take extra effort to make my sliders correctly pixelated on top of other sliders, that's a waste of time
01:38:123 (6) - NC why? this doesn't match at all
01:40:662 (3) - NC same as above
02:42:739 (1,2,3,4) - You use this pattern quite a few times and it feels boring for a kiai this is a basic slider pattern which is present in generally every kiai you will ever play
02:59:470 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit eh. I'll consider changing this one
03:12:277 (1,2,3,4) - Ew, just Ew descriptive
[Insane]
01:01:662 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is super boring, you should map some of the vocals/the piano notes on the red ticks it's fine
01:17:008 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit at all its fine
01:24:623 (2,3) - wtf is this spacing it's fine because it's coming off of a slider. playtests show it's fine.
01:31:662 (1,2) - I'd lower the SV for these so they look less retarded when you play them uh.. what?
01:58:431 (1) - why map this as a spinner when last time it sounded like this it was a stream because it's coming off of a break.
03:16:085 (1) - why don't you have the volume changing green lines like in the hard?fixed

That's what I saw, Good luck getting your map ranked~

I'll KD for effort, at least. but you really need to work on being more constructive in your modding instead of just pointing out flaws and straight bashing everything to hell

BrosephStalin

126 posts

Joined June 2013

BrosephStalin 2014-12-28T04:22:38+00:00

Xellie

Xellie wrote:
~~Blackmailed into modding~~ Modding cause I was asked to Blackmailed into mapping, know da feel
[Broseph's Normal]
You have a different preview point than every other diff so make it the same as the others
01:07:431 (2) - I'd ctrl+G this to flow better and rearrage the stuff afterwards I'd do this if I didn't mean remapping the entire map upto the break. I think newer players will figure this one out eventually.
01:11:354 (3,3) - I think these repeat 1 too many times causing the flow to break Not mah 4-repeat sliders. Aaaaaawwww naw. These babies stay.
01:25:893 (2,3,1) - This overlap isn't very pretty Changed (I guess)
01:40:662 (2,3,1) - ^ (But now my blanket is ugly rip)
02:23:816 (4,2) - Stack the slider end of 2 under the slider head of 4 Changed
02:37:200 (1) - I think this repeats 1 too many times I don't
02:40:662 (4,3) - This overlap isn't very pretty either When (4) is hit, (3) isn't even thinking about being an object yet.
02:44:585 (1) - Same as before
02:51:970 (1) - Same as before
03:05:584 (2) - I'd ctrl+G this too and move the other stuff after it Same as earlier
03:09:507 (3) - Same as before
03:11:353 (3) - ^

Thanks for the mod!
Sorry for sounding angry

Update

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69653863

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69653863 2014-12-28T04:38:48+00:00

Fixed everything (somewhat) other than the DS suggestions because that's just the way I map. Thanks a bunch!

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osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Seven_Lions___Myon___Shane_54_feat__Tove_Lo_-_Strangers.mp3
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[Metadata]
Title:Strangers (Feat. Tove Lo)
TitleUnicode:Strangers (Feat. Tove Lo)
Artist:Seven Lions with Myon and Shane 54
ArtistUnicode:Seven Lions with Myon and Shane 54
Creator:Maeglwn
Version:inv's Easy
Source:
Tags:dubstep Garven inverness the mortal instruments city of bones
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Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 2014-12-28T23:27:28+00:00

Xellie wrote:
[Garven's Easy]
00:54:277 (8) - This is snapped wrong With that much time between each hit, a .2x or even .1x increases aren't going to kill anyone.
00:55:662 (1) - ^
01:28:893 (5) - ^
01:44:816 (7) - I realize it's for symytrey but it's snapped wrong
02:02:123 - This part you have a lot of sliders when it's the kiai meanwhile 01:17:816 - is mostly single taps when it isn't kiai, maybe mix them both up a bit? These are completely different sections of music... I don't understand the comparison being made here.
02:23:123 (5) - Ctrl+G and resnap? it'd flow better imo I've been using some back and forth flow riddled throughout the map, and this is a continuation of that pattern.
02:31:662 (1) - This is snapped wrong
02:53:816 (1,2) - Blanket maybe? Not going for a blanket
02:57:046 (4,5,6,7) - I'd ctrl+G these for better flow They'd lose a lot of their echo effect.
You should map the ending of the map like everyone else did The end is boring compared to where I ended and feels like a bit letdown after that big section of awesome.

Thanks!

Want 2 Buy Avon

264 posts

Joined February 2014

Want 2 Buy Avon 2014-12-31T18:09:48+00:00

Maeglwn wrote:
first thing I'm going to point out; SV changes do not need to be preceded by new combos. at all. therefore, I'm excluding those parts. that is barely a thing ever that happens.

I also didn't respond to a lot of the negative and generally not constructive comments.

Xellie wrote:
[Hard]
01:16:085 (1) - I know a spinner this long is rankable but idk I feel like it'd fit an insane better than a hard it's fine
01:18:970 (3) - move to x:177 y:108 for perfect stack for both of the ones mentioned, no matter what way you do it in this situation they will never be perfectly stacked due to stack leniancy. plus, I'm not going to take extra effort to make my sliders correctly pixelated on top of other sliders, that's a waste of time
01:38:123 (6) - NC why? this doesn't match at all
01:40:662 (3) - NC same as above
02:42:739 (1,2,3,4) - You use this pattern quite a few times and it feels boring for a kiai this is a basic slider pattern which is present in generally every kiai you will ever play
02:59:470 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit eh. I'll consider changing this one
03:12:277 (1,2,3,4) - Ew, just Ew descriptive
[Insane]
01:01:662 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is super boring, you should map some of the vocals/the piano notes on the red ticks it's fine
01:17:008 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit at all its fine
01:24:623 (2,3) - wtf is this spacing it's fine because it's coming off of a slider. playtests show it's fine.
01:31:662 (1,2) - I'd lower the SV for these so they look less retarded when you play them uh.. what?
01:58:431 (1) - why map this as a spinner when last time it sounded like this it was a stream because it's coming off of a break.
03:16:085 (1) - why don't you have the volume changing green lines like in the hard?fixed

That's what I saw, Good luck getting your map ranked~
I'll KD for effort, at least. but you really need to work on being more constructive in your modding instead of just pointing out flaws and straight bashing everything to hell

I would've been more constructive but that'd be saying to remap both your kiai's and I think it's a bit unrealistic to expect someone to give suggestions for about 30% of your map, and I point out flaws the way I do because if it's something that I think can be fixed in multiple ways then it'd be better for the mapper to decide since it's their map. and to be fair, this is similar to what happened when you modded my first map, and what I've seen done on other maps by you so it sounds hypocritical to complain about what I did.

Kodora

Kodora 2014-12-31T19:45:58+00:00

Little note for Broseph's Normal: considering thar hardest Easy have CS3.5 and Hard have CS4, would be nice to use CS4 in Normal to balance spread.

Good luck!

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-04T01:01:55+00:00

YO MAEG UR #1 FAN CUMING IN WITH THE BEST MOD OF THE CENTURY

BRACE UR SELFTSA
[Insane]00:45:970 (4,5,6,7,8) - kinda weird flow

00:48:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - yeah uh i think u should map the vocals since this is an insane an all uknwmsayin'?
01:14:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - k sry but this is ugly
01:21:970 (2,3) - yo what are with these sliders. dont overlap pls?
01:28:431 (1,2,3) - bring this higher?
01:36:277 (1,2) - ugleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
01:39:046 (1,2) - feel like u could use a red anchor point for a V slider here.
02:03:970 (7,8) - rotate 35 degrees and maybe do somethin like this?

SPOILER

so it can flow with the next note 02:04:893 (9) -
02:08:585 (8,9,1,2) - sumthin about this pattern is bothering me

02:10:893 (5) - kinda feel like slider's out of place.. could use note instead
02:23:355 (8,9,1,2) - same as 02:08:585 (8,9,1,2)
02:25:663 (5) - same as 02:10:893 (5)
02:30:739 (9) - vocal here, use note instead
02:32:816 (4,5,6,7) - ugle + no flow sry dont hit me
02:40:893 (7) - make this on the same X: as 02:40:662 (6) - ?
02:47:585 (4,5,6,7) - same as 02:32:816 (4,5,6,7)
03:12:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - o my. lo this is quite the ugle

[Hard]00:33:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ugle
00:42:508 (9,10,11) - ^
01:12:277 (5,6,7,8) - yo weird flow
01:21:046 (1,2,3) - yo i feel like u cud maybe bring it down a big so it creates a 3x DS to the next note.

SPOILER

01:24:277 (1,2,3) - ugleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewrerw
01:25:893 (3) - yo u should bring this up to align with the previous note
01:33:739 (3) - personally not enough spacing and it kinda looks weird lol
rest looks fine imo

bro's normal

ar from 5.5 to 4.5 or 5 please. kinda fast right now
00:50:585 (1) - stack with 00:50:816 (2) -
00:54:277 (1) - ^
00:52:431 (1) - yo use same DS
00:54:277 (1) - ^
00:56:123 (1) - ^
01:06:739 (1,2) - yo wtfi s this blanaak ete fix pls
01:08:354 (3) - dude 4 thje luv of god pls use same DS in a normal
02:16:430 (4,5) - TBH should be stacked with 02:16:892 (1) - since theres only 1 sound in the music and it feels like a stop
02:20:123 (4,1) - b l a n k e t pls
02:23:816 (4,1) - ^^^^
02:27:508 (4,5) - same as 02:16:430 (4,5)

btw not modding the easies cuz im certain my bros inver&garven got them down just fine

Maeglwn

Topic Starter

Maeglwn 2015-01-04T04:12:36+00:00

Xellie wrote:
I would've been more constructive but that'd be saying to remap both your kiai's and I think it's a bit unrealistic to expect someone to give suggestions for about 30% of your map, and I point out flaws the way I do because if it's something that I think can be fixed in multiple ways then it'd be better for the mapper to decide since it's their map. and to be fair, this is similar to what happened when you modded my first map, and what I've seen done on other maps by you so it sounds hypocritical to complain about what I did.

that's not constructive, that's worse. do you know what being constructive means?

it's not unrealistic, have you ever seen a BAT mod?

and if you don't say any of the ways it could be fixed if you see "multiple" then that's not being constructive

if you see an issue and the mapper doesn't see it or understand itw hen going over the map without your mod then obviously enough it's not a thing that they themselves can fix without serious effort, because the way they had it was the way they mapped it

and what other maps, find you? lol that doesn't count for anything

if you sincerely feel this way do me a favor and don't mod any of my maps from now on, thanks

Maeglwn

Topic Starter

Maeglwn 2015-01-04T04:27:04+00:00

byfar wrote:
YO MAEG UR #1 FAN CUMING IN WITH THE BEST MOD OF THE CENTURY

BRACE UR SELFTSA
[Insane]00:45:970 (4,5,6,7,8) - kinda weird flow not seeing it, it's a triangle

00:48:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - yeah uh i think u should map the vocals since this is an insane an all uknwmsayin'? vocals would just be like 3 sliders, that's dumb
01:14:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - k sry but this is ugly I think the ending is but I'm not really too sure on how to fix it
01:21:970 (2,3) - yo what are with these sliders. dont overlap pls? been meaning to fix for a while
01:28:431 (1,2,3) - bring this higher? done
01:36:277 (1,2) - ugleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee fixed
01:39:046 (1,2) - feel like u could use a red anchor point for a V slider here. huh?
02:03:970 (7,8) - rotate 35 degrees and maybe do somethin like this?
SPOILER
not a fan of this
so it can flow with the next note 02:04:893 (9) -
02:08:585 (8,9,1,2) - sumthin about this pattern is bothering me lol wha
02:10:893 (5) - kinda feel like slider's out of place.. could use note instead not sure what you're getting at with how it feels out of place
02:23:355 (8,9,1,2) - same as 02:08:585 (8,9,1,2) same response
02:25:663 (5) - same as 02:10:893 (5) same
02:30:739 (9) - vocal here, use note insteadeh I like this fine
02:32:816 (4,5,6,7) - ugle + no flow sry dont hit me triangles are fine o.O
02:40:893 (7) - make this on the same X: as 02:40:662 (6) - ? they blanket each other atm
02:47:585 (4,5,6,7) - same as 02:32:816 (4,5,6,7) same
03:12:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - o my. lo this is quite the ugle :(

[Hard]00:33:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ugle I honestly do think this is fine

00:42:508 (9,10,11) - ^^
01:12:277 (5,6,7,8) - yo weird flow just a basic little jump, should be fine
01:21:046 (1,2,3) - yo i feel like u cud maybe bring it down a big so it creates a 3x DS to the next note. it's a hard yo, 3x ds is a no no
SPOILER
01:24:277 (1,2,3) - ugleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewrerw ight
01:25:893 (3) - yo u should bring this up to align with the previous note fixed
01:33:739 (3) - personally not enough spacing and it kinda looks weird lol bleh
rest looks fine imo

ty

BrosephStalin

126 posts

Joined June 2013

BrosephStalin 2015-01-04T04:43:42+00:00

byfart

byfar wrote:
Bro's Normal
ar from 5.5 to 4.5 or 5 please. kinda fast right now AR -> 5, CS -> 3.5
00:50:585 (1) - stack with 00:50:816 (2) - Uh, no
00:54:277 (1) - ^
00:52:431 (1) - yo use same DS Yo check out inv's easy if you wanna complain about DS
00:54:277 (1) - ^
00:56:123 (1) - ^
01:06:739 (1,2) - yo wtfi s this blanaak ete fix pls *sigh* Fiiiine
01:08:354 (3) - dude 4 thje luv of god pls use same DS in a normal pls
02:16:430 (4,5) - TBH should be stacked with 02:16:892 (1) - since theres only 1 sound in the music and it feels like a stopThe music goes from quiet (sliders, slow) to actually able to hear the music yo (Circles, faster).
02:20:123 (4,1) - b l a n k e t pls O.K.
02:23:816 (4,1) - ^^^^Fiiiine
02:27:508 (4,5) - same as 02:16:430 (4,5)

Thanks for the mod yo

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byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-04T15:49:15+00:00

no kds

yea I meant the red anchor points that creates sliders like these < >
http://puu.sh/e3U7l/7234702eb6.jpg

what I meant about here: 02:10:893 (5) was that I'm not a huge fan of pure slider usage during songs like these lol. and that I'm suggesting u use 2 notes instead of that slider cuz I just honestly don't feel like that belongs there. during my sightread that part made me feel iffy.
EDIT: nvm I checked that part and it's ok

01:14:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - hmm

SPOILER

start maybe from around the same X: as 01:13:200 (7) - but then the Y value would be the value if u placed another slider there like this

SPOILER

also sorry for being an asshole and not providing screenshots lol

for:: 01:28:431 (1,2,3)

this is what I had in mind lol

Want 2 Buy Avon

264 posts

Joined February 2014

Want 2 Buy Avon 2015-01-06T17:25:48+00:00

t/229723/start=180

Sure you give some suggestions but the amount of things you claim are wrong is much higher than you give fixes for, and the wording is plain rude, so sorry that I modded the same way.
My last post on your maps since you requested no more mods from me.

Maeglwn

Topic Starter

Maeglwn 2015-01-07T01:34:33+00:00

Xellie wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/229723/start=180

Sure you give some suggestions but the amount of things you claim are wrong is much higher than you give fixes for, and the wording is plain rude, so sorry that I modded the same way.
My last post on your maps since you requested no more mods from me.

that wasn't a mod

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 2015-01-07T02:28:02+00:00

Please stop this tit for tat. Everything here is voluntary and bickering amongst yourselves for something so minute isn't exactly becoming for either of you.

BrosephStalin

126 posts

Joined June 2013

BrosephStalin 2015-01-07T02:47:47+00:00

I agree with Graven, yo. If you're gonna have a shitstorm have it privately.

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Owntrolf 2015-01-07T07:01:36+00:00

Garven's Easy
Welp I dont know what I'm supposed to look at but its probably fine since people will mostly just focus on the circles
Wait wut does this difficulty end early?

inv's Easy
Looks fine if you ignore the AiMod ds complaints it just might be a little hard to read
Those sliders <3

Broseph's Normal
You should probably make some circles lower since I think they might be a bit high
Some stacking issues but who really cares about those :>

01:19:662 (1) - You could cripple the slider where around the middle where it makes that part
01:44:124 (2,3) - Probably goes too high, it sort of touches the drain bar in default skin
02:37:200 (1) - Might be a problem since you cant tell how many times its going to repeat\
02:44:585 (1) - ^

Hard
Not much unless you want me to complain about stacks
03:14:239 (1) - I think its better to just use sliders instead of a spinner

Insane
00:35:816 (1,2,3) - Might want to fix the triangle
00:48:739 - The patterns starting from here feel a bit far
01:24:623 (2,3) - Wait wut so the circle is in 1/8 and is apparently about x5 DS how does one even hit that circle
02:37:200 (7) - Might be going a little too high

Nazimod

SPOILER

01:21:200 (2,1) - Stack
01:28:585 (2,2,5) - ^
01:35:970 (2,1) - ^
01:36:124 (3,2) - ^
02:30:739 (9,11,2) - ^
02:40:431 (5,8) - ^
02:55:200 (5,8) - ^

Maeglwn

Topic Starter

Maeglwn 2015-01-07T22:35:02+00:00

Owntrolf wrote:
Hard
Not much unless you want me to complain about stacks
03:14:239 (1) - I think its better to just use sliders instead of a spinner meh I like the spinner

Insane
00:35:816 (1,2,3) - Might want to fix the triangle fixed
00:48:739 - The patterns starting from here feel a bit far was the point
01:24:623 (2,3) - Wait wut so the circle is in 1/8 and is apparently about x5 DS how does one even hit that circle actually believe it or not it plays fine which is weird
02:37:200 (7) - Might be going a little too highnah it's kay

ty

BrosephStalin

126 posts

Joined June 2013

BrosephStalin 2015-01-08T01:15:43+00:00

Ty owntrolf bae

Update

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 77816
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
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GridSize: 4
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Title:Strangers (Feat. Tove Lo)
TitleUnicode:Strangers (Feat. Tove Lo)
Artist:Seven Lions with Myon and Shane 54
ArtistUnicode:Seven Lions with Myon and Shane 54
Creator:Maeglwn
Version:Broseph's Normal
Source:
Tags:dubstep Garven inverness the mortal instruments city of bones
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Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2015-01-09T20:48:47+00:00

[General]

Please use Combo colors.

[Garven's Easy]

00:59:354 (3) - I honestly think you should place this 1/2 later, that rhythm is really hard to guess, and having the downbeat not mapped (here especially, it is really strong imo) appears really odd to me. Would be great if you could somehow map both, maybe with a 1/2 slider?

Too many red tick stuff, too long NCs, I'm not sure whether that easy is really "good". I mean, of course it works, but using that many red tick rhythms is really weird to play, especially in easy diffs. On the other hand, it offers more variation, so idk what to think tbh. As said, it certainly works somehow, and at least it's not filled with circles to follow everything unlike my easy / normals.

[inv's Easy]

Rename to Normal, no way this is an Easy. Complicated rhythm, stacks, unconsistent spacing (not in a bad way), well.

00:47:354 (2,1) - Yeah, you could go like "no matter what diff it is, the person playing this doesn't have to spam and miss because they're confused". Yet, I think that one is really misleading, and could cause frustration. Place at another spot would be the solution. If you rename it to normal it's fine.
01:41:354 (2,3) - I think that's in one measure and should follow a circle flow, not left right. move to 24 152?
02:29:816 (5) - neat!

[Broseph's Normal]

00:33:508 (1,2) - Make sure both blankets are equal.
00:42:046 (4,5,1,2,3) - Try something like this, it offers more movement and flows better as well. http://puu.sh/eigYD/50eb55dba8.jpg
00:44:354 (5,6) - Symmetric slider usage would really fit here! It looks neater, and seems more interesting to me. http://puu.sh/eih6N/1fbbfad8d1.jpg
01:11:354 (3) - That double repeater doesn't seem necessary, since it unneedly stresses the player. Try two sliders pointing to the bottom right (middle thing) to fix that.
01:13:200 (3) - Same.
01:45:509 (1) - 3 and 1 don't compliment each other at all. http://puu.sh/eihIn/1967fe869f.jpg Even if it needs some replacing, go for this, or something similar. Same for your copy pasted part.

The song has different parts, yet you kept mapping everything the same. No different stuff in the kiai, is what saddens me the most! You should try being more variating your stuff, to get it more interesting.

[Insane]

I'm bored, I wanna see the insane first.

So.. I've testplayed it, and it didn't play ~that~ great to me. The first kiai is what stood out the most to me, so I focus on that. (the rest was readable, so duh)

01:18:277 (2,3) - Hm, The flow between those is slighty interrupted by 3 being too low, for what actually needed to create a smooth flow here. So first of all, it would be good if you could move that a bit up. Secondly, what about a straight slider shape instead (being mirrored afterwards?) Her voice is pretty direct, and a straight slider seems more appropriate to me, because it's "directer". I'm bad in explaining, yknow.
01:21:046 (1,2,3) - Honestly, the song isn't that strong here, the jump is way too exaggerated. You should definitely lower that one a bit, and it will play better. A lot.
01:22:431 (3) - The songs flow stays the same, but the noise changes a bit, so what about ctrl + g to keep the flow as well?
01:23:354 (5) - Flows being very tight angled again here, would soften it a bit up. What about something like http://puu.sh/eijMp/244c83f9b4.jpg ?
01:24:585 (2) - 1) I think this is 1/3 2) Spacings too high to be readable, compare with your other spacing; it's almost the same, yet there's more time in timeline.
01:26:816 (5) - Bad flow, would be solved if moved up. Let me give you some coordinates
01:26:816 (5) - 256 32
01:27:046 (6) - 256 324
01:27:277 (7) - 256 144
01:27:739 (8) - 396 256
01:27:970 (9) - 116 256
^ try it , and let me know!
01:28:431 (1,2,3) - What about a same-length-triangle?
01:31:200 (6) - Again, flow things. something liek http://puu.sh/eikeB/9f81e6c257.jpg maybe?
Same to the other part, obviously

I'll check the hard later

Gl Maeglwn, I hope you can improve your map a bit!

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

69653863 2015-01-09T22:11:29+00:00

I KNOW RIGHT
this WAS a Normal before but then because one thing or another this somehow ended up being easier than Garven's so yeah

I'd ask maeg about renaming the diff to Novice or smth

edit: I prefer to keep that circle because I like the current zigazaggy flow. also THANK.

Last edited by 69653863 2015-01-10T07:00:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Maeglwn

Topic Starter

Maeglwn 2015-01-10T04:28:42+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
[General]

Please use Combo colors. I'll get there

[Insane]

I'm bored, I wanna see the insane first.

So.. I've testplayed it, and it didn't play ~that~ great to me. The first kiai is what stood out the most to me, so I focus on that. (the rest was readable, so duh)

01:18:277 (2,3) - Hm, The flow between those is slighty interrupted by 3 being too low, for what actually needed to create a smooth flow here. So first of all, it would be good if you could move that a bit up. Secondly, what about a straight slider shape instead (being mirrored afterwards?) Her voice is pretty direct, and a straight slider seems more appropriate to me, because it's "directer". I'm bad in explaining, yknow. that's just your mapping style with the more DIRECT AND THATS SOMETHING YOU WOULD TOTALLY SAY I'll move it up though yea
01:21:046 (1,2,3) - Honestly, the song isn't that strong here, the jump is way too exaggerated. You should definitely lower that one a bit, and it will play better. A lot. come on the jump isn't even that bad at all it's just fun to play
01:22:431 (3) - The songs flow stays the same, but the noise changes a bit, so what about ctrl + g to keep the flow as well? ight yea
01:23:354 (5) - Flows being very tight angled again here, would soften it a bit up. What about something like http://puu.sh/eijMp/244c83f9b4.jpg ? with ctrlging this with the other note from before it plays fine now
01:24:585 (2) - 1) I think this is 1/3 2) Spacings too high to be readable, compare with your other spacing; it's almost the same, yet there's more time in timeline. god fine I fixed it screw the haters I really liked this
01:26:816 (5) - Bad flow, would be solved if moved up. Let me give you some coordinates I actually think flow herei s absolutely fine. it creates an awesome looking figure 8 pattern when you do it with your mouse and I really like it
01:26:816 (5) - 256 32
01:27:046 (6) - 256 324
01:27:277 (7) - 256 144
01:27:739 (8) - 396 256
01:27:970 (9) - 116 256
^ try it , and let me know!
01:28:431 (1,2,3) - What about a same-length-triangle? done
01:31:200 (6) - Again, flow things. something liek http://puu.sh/eikeB/9f81e6c257.jpg maybe? actually this is cool, done
Same to the other part, obviously

I'll check the hard later

Gl Maeglwn, I hope you can improve your map a bit!

BrosephStalin

126 posts

Joined June 2013

BrosephStalin 2015-01-10T20:47:19+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
[Broseph's Normal]

00:33:508 (1,2) - Make sure both blankets are equal. They do look equal to me! (Although I'm not an expert on blankets)
00:42:046 (4,5,1,2,3) - Try something like this, it offers more movement and flows better as well. http://puu.sh/eigYD/50eb55dba8.jpg Adjusted!
00:44:354 (5,6) - Symmetric slider usage would really fit here! It looks neater, and seems more interesting to me. http://puu.sh/eih6N/1fbbfad8d1.jpg It really does Changed
01:11:354 (3) - That double repeater doesn't seem necessary, since it unneedly stresses the player. Try two sliders pointing to the bottom right (middle thing) to fix that. Changed :3
01:13:200 (3) - Same.[/color] ^
01:45:509 (1) - 3 and 1 don't compliment each other at all. http://puu.sh/eihIn/1967fe869f.jpg Even if it needs some replacing, go for this, or something similar. Same for your copy pasted part. Changed!

The song has different parts, yet you kept mapping everything the same. No different stuff in the kiai, is what saddens me the most! You should try being more variating your stuff, to get it more interesting. I didn't mean to sadden you with the map! D: Lookout for the kiai remap coming 2015~

Thanks for the mod

/

Update pls

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Garven

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Garven 2015-01-11T01:16:23+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
[Garven's Easy]

00:59:354 (3) - I honestly think you should place this 1/2 later, that rhythm is really hard to guess, and having the downbeat not mapped (here especially, it is really strong imo) appears really odd to me. Would be great if you could somehow map both, maybe with a 1/2 slider?

It's a 1/1 rhythm post-slider. Those tend to be the most natural rhythms to play.

Too many red tick stuff, too long NCs, I'm not sure whether that easy is really "good". I mean, of course it works, but using that many red tick rhythms is really weird to play, especially in easy diffs. On the other hand, it offers more variation, so idk what to think tbh. As said, it certainly works somehow, and at least it's not filled with circles to follow everything unlike my easy / normals.

Yeah, this map was hard to make not boring as shit and still play as an Easy. Most suggestions I have seen so far really don't work for how the map is constructed though, so it's hard to take any suggestions without essentially remapping the entire thing since it would change the emphasis beats for the entire song (I guess except for the kiai). As it is now, the low approach rate and number of hit objects to keep track of on the screen at once should serve as a good guide in case the rhythms escape those that are playing.

Maeglwn

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Maeglwn 2015-01-15T06:13:37+00:00

remapped the insane

Garven

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Garven 2015-01-15T07:02:31+00:00

Wow that needs a lot of modding.

byfar

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byfar 2015-01-15T21:14:32+00:00

rip

Maeglwn

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Maeglwn 2015-01-15T23:04:35+00:00

byfar wrote:
rip

meh at least its noticed early

dkun

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dkun 2015-01-20T03:54:01+00:00

[Insane]
00:36:277 (3,4) - This jump makes no sense. There's nothing in the music that represents the need for this jump.
00:36:970 (6,7,8) - 6-8 can be made symmetrical with each other from 7 to go full circle.
00:39:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe you can change this to be like this. Use the grid to your advantage! img
00:41:585 (8) - If you take the above suggestion, stack this on 2 of said combo.
00:41:816 (9,10) - Same as 00:36:277. If you don't change it, at least please stack on 6 of last combo.
00:42:508 (1) - Same thing as above.
00:43:662 (4,5) - Why is this a jump?
00:51:046 (9,10,11) - This could be a symmetrical anti-jump from 5,6,7.
00:52:431 (3,5) - This doesn't look half bad!
00:59:123 (6) - This would flow better if you stacked it on 5.
01:07:662 (3,4) - If 1,2 is going to be a jump, please follow suit with the combo. (They actually make sense here imo!)
01:10:431 (1,5,9,13) - I'm sure the first two combos here can be arranged better. (This also means that you should NC every 4th, I noted the spots)
01:31:893 (2,3,4,5,6) - This can be made to follow the backbeat (emphasized with 6), but you end it early. I continue with the stream of sliders (refer to 1) until 1 of the next combo. img for reference.
01:58:431 (1) - Could alternate with streams and sliders here for variety.
02:16:893 (1) - From this point on, I feel like the map is a repeat of itself. As the song itself is repetitive, this is okay to an extent, but not an extent I am personally okay with. I'm going with the ghastly suggestion of trying to remap and change it up here, or just cutting the song at the first break.

I love the song, but I'm not a big fan of what I've seen so far in Insane. I'll be back to mod the rest of this set once the Insane has more to show for itself.

Maeglwn

Topic Starter

Maeglwn 2015-01-20T04:35:44+00:00

dkun wrote:
[Insane]
00:36:277 (3,4) - This jump makes no sense. There's nothing in the music that represents the need for this jump. fixed
00:36:970 (6,7,8) - 6-8 can be made symmetrical with each other from 7 to go full circle. not quite understanding
00:39:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe you can change this to be like this. Use the grid to your advantage! img seems like not that much of a difference when I did it, but I might've done it wrong lol. regardless, fixed
00:41:585 (8) - If you take the above suggestion, stack this on 2 of said combo. did a bunch of restacking so idk what exactly this is referencing anymore so just assuming I did it
00:41:816 (9,10) - Same as 00:36:277. If you don't change it, at least please stack on 6 of last combo.
00:42:508 (1) - Same thing as above.
00:43:662 (4,5) - Why is this a jump? fixed
00:51:046 (9,10,11) - This could be a symmetrical anti-jump from 5,6,7. huh?
00:52:431 (3,5) - This doesn't look half bad! lol yea, I wish I did it more honestly
00:59:123 (6) - This would flow better if you stacked it on 5. like it the way it is in this case
01:07:662 (3,4) - If 1,2 is going to be a jump, please follow suit with the combo. (They actually make sense here imo!) not understanding what you mean by this
01:10:431 (1,5,9,13) - I'm sure the first two combos here can be arranged better. (This also means that you should NC every 4th, I noted the spots) done
01:31:893 (2,3,4,5,6) - This can be made to follow the backbeat (emphasized with 6), but you end it early. I continue with the stream of sliders (refer to 1) until 1 of the next combo. img for reference. did it to the next blue tick, the yellow tick would've made it way too awkward in my opinion
01:58:431 (1) - Could alternate with streams and sliders here for variety. yea, I meant to do this, I'm dumb though
02:16:893 (1) - From this point on, I feel like the map is a repeat of itself. As the song itself is repetitive, this is okay to an extent, but not an extent I am personally okay with. I'm going with the ghastly suggestion of trying to remap and change it up here, or just cutting the song at the first break. ahh.. idk, I have to disagree. I mapped the second half quite a bit different. LOL I mean, maybe I'm missing it or something, but I like it. so I'm gonna humbly pass on this one

I love the song, but I'm not a big fan of what I've seen so far in Insane. I'll be back to mod the rest of this set once the Insane has more to show for itself.

dkun sensei

I'm a little disappointed that you didn't like the map but well shit happens I guess

thanks for the mod yo

Maeglwn

Topic Starter

Maeglwn 2015-02-19T19:42:20+00:00

got a mod from xyuwelion but he doesn't want kd apparently so sending a star at my own map ;D

-July-_old

-July-_old 2015-02-22T21:22:05+00:00

Hi hi! A M4M from #modhelp! >w< Still learning how to mod so I probably won't be able to pick much out.

Garven's Easy

The length of it is at 3:01 when all the other difficulties end at 3:21. (Not counting the spinners. This is just my opinion but this makes the difficulty seems...Incomplete. I think you should add just a bit more. >w<
01:51:277 (1,2) - This should move a bit more to the right, I think. It might end up covering the leader board so just to be safe, I think moving it slightly might be better.
02:09:508 (1) - It's like 1 millimeter away from touching the HP bar. xD It'd be safer to lower the slider a bit.
02:23:123 (5) - Reverse this slider, maybe?

That's all I could point out for this difficulty! I hoped it helped! >w<

inv's Normal

01:27:970 (5) - Touching the HP bar!
03:06:739 (3) - This slider feels too low. >w<

Broseph's Normal

01:43:663 (1) - Touching the HP bar!
01:58:431 Maybe add a spinner here and end it at 02:01:662 ? Just a suggestion. >w<
02:06:739 (3) - ^
02:08:354 (2) - This slider may get obscured by the combo counter.

I couldn't find anything for Hard or Insane. >w< Probably because I'm still learning how to map Hard and Insane and I could only barely play Hard and can't even make it past 5 notes for Insane. =w= Anyway, I hoped my mod helped!

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

69653863 2015-02-23T09:58:06+00:00

-July- wrote:
inv's Normal
01:27:970 (5) - Touching the HP bar! lolk fixed
03:06:739 (3) - This slider feels too low. >w< Nah lol I think I'm fine with this

Thank

me

osu file format v13

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BrosephStalin

126 posts

Joined June 2013

BrosephStalin 2015-02-27T16:41:47+00:00

Broseph's Normal

01:43:663 (1) - Touching the HP bar! oki
01:58:431 Maybe add a spinner here and end it at 02:01:662 ? Just a suggestion. >w< nop
02:06:739 (3) - ^
02:08:354 (2) - This slider may get obscured by the combo counter. oki

cool

Update

osu file format v14

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Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2015-02-28T01:56:30+00:00

yooooooooooooo made you a better bg

so improved

i'm so funny

but in all seriousness the current bg is pretty gross (especially when upscaled) and I suggest finding something cleaner. though I did legitimately try to improve it in some way, and this is what I ended up with. whether or not it's actually any better is still up in the air...
no kds obv

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 2015-03-03T05:31:51+00:00

-July- wrote:
Hi hi! A M4M from #modhelp! >w< Still learning how to mod so I probably won't be able to pick much out.

Garven's Easy
The length of it is at 3:01 when all the other difficulties end at 3:21. (Not counting the spinners. This is just my opinion but this makes the difficulty seems...Incomplete. I think you should add just a bit more. >w< Nah, I ended it there because it felt like such a let down to keep mapping after such an awesome chorus.
01:51:277 (1,2) - This should move a bit more to the right, I think. It might end up covering the leader board so just to be safe, I think moving it slightly might be better. I don't mind overlapping those types of game elements.
02:09:508 (1) - It's like 1 millimeter away from touching the HP bar. xD It'd be safer to lower the slider a bit.
02:23:123 (5) - Reverse this slider, maybe? k
That's all I could point out for this difficulty! I hoped it helped! >w<

Thanks!

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Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2015-03-12T22:51:06+00:00

[Insane]

00:32:816 (1,2,3) - Why did you not map the white tick here? this is so out of sync that I don't even know what your trying to follow here. I can see your following vocals, but missing that strong white tick is surely not the way to go in this case, its only natural to map it
00:50:123 (5) - New combo's need to be added here, these anti jump patterns are hard to read without them, they're really sudden and a new combo will help make them readable.
01:31:662 (1,2,3,4) - Check the snapping in this, I thinks its off.
01:34:662 (7) - I don't hear anything in yellow ticks are you sure this is 1/8
01:35:816 (10) - You forgot a new combo here.
01:42:046 (7) - Wrong snapping , its 1/6.
02:05:354 (10) - I would place this slider higher, so we can see the sliderpath more clearly.
02:20:124 (10) - ^ same as above, but this one lower.

[Hard]

01:19:893 (6) - Wrong snap. try 1/4
01:27:277 (7) - ^ , same take a look at these too insane, might of forgot them.
02:11:354 (7) - Reduce the combo's here, almost the same rhythm density as Insane and still same comboing, please shorten. it to make around 6 combo's if you can , That being said, here's a great place to add a combo because of a jump. Also bad spread, why same HP as Insane? there are more notes in Insane
02:22:432 (7) - ^
02:26:123 (7) - ^
02:37:200 (7) - ^
02:51:969 (7) - ^
01:34:662 (6) - 1/4
01:25:200 (1,2) - I would just use one slidere here 3/4 are unnecessary here.
01:39:970 (1,2) - ^
01:42:046 (7) - ^

[Normal]

Needs to be reworked. The diff spread is horrible, this almost has same amount of 1/4 as Hard , I consider this a light hard.

00:52:431 (1,2,3) - Unacceptable, look at Hard and compare to this? Is this part really easier than Hard?

[Inv's Normal]

00:47:354 (2) - Make them stack. Otherwise perfect, love this diff.

[Easy]

First of all, Insanely long combo's, you better use HP 1 or shorten your combo's. This ain't good.
01:03:970 (4) - Obviously readable, but hey if you take my advice above and shorten your combo's maybe you can shorten your combo's and add a new combo here because it will make multiple reverses readable (even though the slider velocity is slow.
02:01:662 (1) - Too soon after the spinner, I can very partially see the circle before spinner ends.

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 2015-03-12T22:59:38+00:00

Tari wrote:
[Easy]

First of all, Insanely long combo's, you better use HP 1 or shorten your combo's. This ain't good. How so? Have you actually playtested how the HP drain plays with artificial breaks to see how difficult it is to recover HP? I find that HP 2 is balanced well with this map, and the combo progressions work fine with how dense the map is.
01:03:970 (4) - Obviously readable, but hey if you take my advice above and shorten your combo's maybe you can shorten your combo's and add a new combo here because it will make multiple reverses readable (even though the slider velocity is slow. A new combo won't mean jack to new players as far as "readability" goes. New combos don't mean anything to me, a seasoned player, either as a new combo doesn't consistently signify a change in mapping.
02:01:662 (1) - Too soon after the spinner, I can very partially see the circle before spinner ends. It's 3 beats at 130 bpm. It's fine - seeing the approach circle before the spinner is completed isn't a good criteria to judge upon.

Thanks!

Maeglwn

Topic Starter

Maeglwn 2015-03-13T00:49:30+00:00

Tari wrote:
[Insane]

00:32:816 (1,2,3) - Why did you not map the white tick here? this is so out of sync that I don't even know what your trying to follow here. I can see your following vocals, but missing that strong white tick is surely not the way to go in this case, its only natural to map it fixed
00:50:123 (5) - New combo's need to be added here, these anti jump patterns are hard to read without them, they're really sudden and a new combo will help make them readable. fixed
01:31:662 (1,2,3,4) - Check the snapping in this, I thinks its off. seems fine to me
01:34:662 (7) - I don't hear anything in yellow ticks are you sure this is 1/8 fixed
01:35:816 (10) - You forgot a new combo here. fixed
01:42:046 (7) - Wrong snapping , its 1/6. fixed
02:05:354 (10) - I would place this slider higher, so we can see the sliderpath more clearly.fixed
02:20:124 (10) - ^ same as above, but this one lower. fixed
[Hard]

01:19:893 (6) - Wrong snap. try 1/4fixed
01:27:277 (7) - ^ , same take a look at these too insane, might of forgot them.fixed
02:11:354 (7) - Reduce the combo's here, almost the same rhythm density as Insane and still same comboing, please shorten. it to make around 6 combo's if you can , That being said, here's a great place to add a combo because of a jump. Also bad spread, why same HP as Insane? there are more notes in Insane fixed all
01:34:662 (6) - 1/4 if you mean 1/6, fixed
01:25:200 (1,2) - I would just use one slidere here 3/4 are unnecessary here. I like this similarity between the insane, this is more of a mapping style preference than anything

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

69653863 2015-03-13T01:51:06+00:00

fixed tari's mod and a bunch of things

osu file format v14

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Tags:dubstep Garven inverness the mortal instruments city of bones BrosephStalin
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280,168,142431,2,0,P|332:168|384:120,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,37,143354,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,156,143816,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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376,248,145662,2,0,P|336:272|264:264,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,328,146585,2,0,P|156:272|108:228,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,332,147970,5,2,0:0:0:0:
232,204,148431,1,10,0:0:0:0:
340,248,148893,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,128,149354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,44,149816,2,0,B|208:56|192:100|192:100|180:60|136:52|88:68|88:68|104:132|56:188|-8:172,1,360,2|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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200,300,152354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,320,152585,2,0,P|256:284|324:280,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,344,153508,2,0,P|436:284|456:228,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,108,154431,2,0,L|384:120,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,76,155354,2,0,P|208:156|76:128,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,158123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,284,158354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,158585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,188,159046,6,0,L|64:64,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,152,159970,2,0,P|152:216|120:264,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,280,160662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,296,160893,2,0,L|276:284,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,312,161816,2,0,P|384:276|380:208,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,100,162739,2,0,B|332:104|332:104|300:144|300:144|256:100|184:120,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,284,165508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,288,165739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,292,165970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,184,166431,6,0,P|120:180|168:216,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,104,167354,2,0,P|260:156|320:172,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,112,168277,2,0,L|440:236,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,244,168970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,256,169200,2,0,P|420:312|396:364,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,170123,2,0,B|244:232|268:188|268:188|232:192|232:192|232:124|168:104,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,36,172893,2,0,L|257:105,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,88,173354,2,0,L|176:152,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,144,173816,6,0,P|100:264|24:352,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,308,175200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,340,175662,2,0,P|348:288|416:268,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,187,176585,2,0,P|271:138|278:80,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,64,177277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,48,177508,2,0,B|124:104|124:0|0:60,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,28,179816,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,56,180277,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,160,180739,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,244,181200,6,0,P|440:280|376:272,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,352,183046,2,0,L|108:108,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,12,184431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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