Seven Lions with Myon and Shane 54 - Strangers (Feat. Tove L

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Topic Starter
Maeglwn
oh jesus

Axarious wrote:

:D
[General]
  1. Yer maps, yer changes.
  2. Mostly just blanketing and eye-candy-esque-ness. NO KIDDING
  3. Equilateral triangles. holy balls
  4. I really like the symmetry, though. I CAN TELL

[Hard]
  1. OD7, maybe.
  2. 00:36:903 (5,6,7) - Maybe intentional but (6) isn't quite centered in a linear fashion with the tail of slider (5) and the head of slider (7). intended
  3. 00:52:364 (1,2,1,2) - Because 00:48:672 (1,2,1,2) - are Ctrl HJ'd, why not do the same for this set of four instead of just a Ctrl J? cause different patterns :P
  4. 00:59:287 (1,2) - Blanket, rotate (1) by -3 around selection center. just kinda moved the middle dot a bit
  5. 01:32:056 (8,1) - Move (8) to the end of (1) at x:335 y:276. sighs loudly okay
  6. 01:34:595 (6,7,8) - Probably intentional placement of (8) to the left of the peak of the equilateral triangle for a 1.10x distance snap but otherwise fix triangle! you and your triangles
  7. 01:35:748 (1,2,3,1) - Blanket, rotate slider (1) -1 degree around selection center. close enough
  8. 01:36:672 (2) - If you follow ^, rotate 1 degree around selection center or redo the ctrl HJ on (1). bleh
  9. 02:10:364 (4,6) - Place (6) on the head of slider (4) to lead into the next slider. circular flow is fine here
  10. 02:11:749 (8) - I recommend moving this to x:247 y:226 so that the end of the slider matches up with the head of slider (4). omfg
  11. 02:14:056 (3,4,5,6) - Probably intentional but this isn't a square. Ignore if this was meant to be. bleh
  12. 02:26:519 (8) - I recommend moving this to x:265 y:158 so that the end of the slider matches up with the head of slider (4). you're hurting me
  13. 02:28:826 (3,4,5,6) - Also not a square. bleh
  14. 02:39:903 (3,4,5,6) - Probably intentional but this isn't an equilateral triangle. omfg
  15. 02:54:672 (3,4,5,6) - ^ because HJ. god
  16. 03:01:133 (1,2) - Probably intentional but these two sliders' center isn't on the y-axis. Their head and tail y-values are also not the same. holy christ dude

[Insane]

  • just kinda gonna apply a few of the blanket ones because they're so minor. won't be commenting on
  1. AR8-9, HP7 maybe. it's a slow ass song, ar9 is not a thing
  2. 01:04:826 (5,6,7,8) - (1,2,3,4) are Ctrl H's, but these aren't Ctrl J's. patterns don't always have to be the same :P
  3. 01:32:056 (2,1) - From (2) to (1) is a 7.26x next distance snap. Playable and comboable but one shouldn't even find this kind of spacing in SnowNiNo_'s "Rabbit Jumping Maps" XD. I pulled it back one, mostly because through every playtest I've done with it so far it didn't matter so it didn't really seem like a big deal


holy christ dude please think of more actual things next time for the love of everything

like thank you for the mod and all but seeing so many little things based on how my triangles aren't fully equilateral hurt instead of help :P
Axarious
Great nice. LOLLOVEYOU<3
Kalxie
Hard:
02:36:210 (3,4,5,6) - If you're going to make these circles, maybe make them into a square pattern or a diamond. As they are now, you might as well make them sliders.
03:12:210 (1,2,3,4) - You could probably afford to be more creative here. Star patterns instead of a plus with sliders. The buildup is good but the climax is unsatisfying with just repeating sliders.

Insane:
00:48:210 - 00:58:826 - It's fine to have the start slow with a few notes but as it drags on it just feels empty. Consider adding more here. You could add stuff to match the background melody here.
01:20:979 (1,2,3) - I would go for a different spacing here that transitions better into the upcoming sliders. Lines would be better here than triangles; triangles completely break the flow here. The same applies to the various instances where these hit circles appear in the map.
01:24:845 (3) - Maybe attaching this to the slider. The 1/8th jump feels forced and awkward.

In general, it's hard to find anything to say that won't repeat since a lot of the stuff was H/J'd.
Topic Starter
Maeglwn
yoooo I didn't know you modded

Omg No Pls wrote:

Hard:
02:36:210 (3,4,5,6) - If you're going to make these circles, maybe make them into a square pattern or a diamond. As they are now, you might as well make them sliders. they're a parellogram as it is atm, they're fine imo
03:12:210 (1,2,3,4) - You could probably afford to be more creative here. Star patterns instead of a plus with sliders. The buildup is good but the climax is unsatisfying with just repeating sliders. you'd have t oexplain, I'm not really catching on here

Insane:
00:48:210 - 00:58:826 - It's fine to have the start slow with a few notes but as it drags on it just feels empty. Consider adding more here. You could add stuff to match the background melody here. will consider adding in stuff, but I had it this way to keep the calm factor of the intro. it also goes with the hard
01:20:979 (1,2,3) - I would go for a different spacing here that transitions better into the upcoming sliders. Lines would be better here than triangles; triangles completely break the flow here. The same applies to the various instances where these hit circles appear in the map. interesting idea.. idk, I like my triangles. will definitely consider
01:24:845 (3) - Maybe attaching this to the slider. The 1/8th jump feels forced and awkward. I don't mind this jump, through playtesting it looks fine

In general, it's hard to find anything to say that won't repeat since a lot of the stuff was H/J'd.
ty for the mod yo
Kalxie
I do mod, I just never got around to posting stuff because lazy.

Hard:
03:12:210 (1,2,3,4) - You could probably afford to be more creative here. Star patterns instead of a plus with sliders. The buildup is good but the climax is unsatisfying with just repeating sliders. you'd have t oexplain, I'm not really catching on here

The sliders are at 1/4 intervals and take up probably 4 or so measures. Instead of making them sliders, you could be more creative and make them into circles with different patterns. The difficulty isn't a problem if it's "hard" and sliders there are unsatisfying with how you built up to that point.
Garven

Axarious wrote:

[Garven's Easy]
  1. AR3 maybe. That'd feel unbalanced with the slider speeds
  2. 00:36:903 (3) - Ends of the sliders have y-values 151 and 152, make them equal. You sir, have surpassed my level of nazi. I am impressed.
  3. 00:40:133 (1,2) - Blanket, rotate (2) -2 degrees around selection center. k
  4. 01:02:749 (2,3,4,5) - (2) and (3) are mapped to her singing, (4) is mapped to background beats (first reverse lands on her singing but the other doesn't), and (5) is mapped to singing. Might be a little confusing with the red and white tick starts. There isn't very much going on in the music that is very strong to follow, and I want to avoid being lame and following the metronome. I feel this is fair anyway, due to the leniency that slider starts have.
  5. 01:08:980 (6,7,8) - I feel like these would work better on white ticks. Perhaps if that slider didn't end on a red tick, but the preceding rhythms really call for offbeat following here.
  6. 02:11:056 (2) - Top and bottom of slider don't have the same x-values, rotate by 1 degree around selection center for x:400. k
  7. 02:38:979 (1,2) - Move (1) 4 places to the right to x:260 y:304 so the centers of sliders (1) and (2) have the same x-value. Reshaped the 2 slider and repositioned.
Thanks!

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Kaguya Hourain
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[General]
Nothing found.

[Garven's Easy]
Well this is weird. Star-wise I mean.
AR -1 OD -1 (Slider speed doesn't really matter. AR is just too high for Easy.)
00:40:133 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket here
00:59:056 (3) - I would move that on the big tick. It's not like there's nothing there and it makes it easier for the player to figure out.
01:03:903 (4) - Ugh, 2 reverse arrows. Not good. Either extend it by 1/2 and delete the second reverse or don't extend it by 1/2 and delete the second reverse and add a circle. I prefer option 2 because it makes more sense.
01:21:903 (6,7) - Transition from white ticks to red tick might be a little hard. Try making these a slider. That goes to many other sections that look similar to this.
01:25:133 (1,2) - I don't get why you didn't at least place a circle like you did in the previous section. It's sounds pretty much the same. If it's about the cymbal that's there then just don't add a hitsound. OR you can make a slider here.
01:54:672 (1,1) - Judging by the criteria YOU set, I would unrank this time difference if I was QAT. Lower than 1500ms. Yep.
02:11:056 (2) - Another double reverse. I'd just make this 2 sliders.
I would definitely map the post-kiai part of the song. Feels unintuitive to just end the map there.

Pretty faulty diff actually didn't expect that.


[inv's Normal]
HI INV!
AR -1, please.
00:35:287 (3,4) - What. inverness imperfect blanket?! BLASPHEMY!
00:37:133 (1) - 1/1 spam feels unintuitive here. Try shortening the slider by 1/2 and do some magic :P
00:42:210 (2,3) - More imperfect blankets???
00:53:287 (2) - Circle > slider instead of just one reverse slider.
00:57:903 (2,3) - Circle > slider instead of slider > circle. Also imperfect blanket with 1.
01:06:672 (1,2) - Losing faith in blankets here.
01:09:441 (4,1) - Idk dude.
02:24:210 (1,2) - Woooooow.
02:38:979 (1,2) - Dude please.
03:00:672 (9,1) - I should stop.

The whole map's rhythm is unintuitive. I don't know what went wrong here but you can do much better than this inv.

00:20 Maeglwn: alright
00:20 Maeglwn: I'm alive now
00:20 Kaguya Hourain: Awesome
00:20 Kaguya Hourain: let's go over this a bit quick because I need to go to bed
00:20 Kaguya Hourain: waking up in 7 hours
00:20 Maeglwn: lol that works
00:21 Kaguya Hourain: I'm already finished with the 2 actually bad diffs
00:21 Kaguya Hourain: so I hope yours are better XD
00:21 Maeglwn: eh
00:21 Maeglwn: I thought inverness diff was pretty good
00:21 Kaguya Hourain: it was just 1/1 spam
00:21 Kaguya Hourain: nothing interesting
00:21 Kaguya Hourain: and bad blankets
00:22 Kaguya Hourain: yes inv has made bad blankets
00:22 Maeglwn: oh, yea, that's cause I fucked up al lof his sliders
00:22 Maeglwn: LOL
00:22 Kaguya Hourain: oh dear
00:22 Kaguya Hourain: why
00:22 Kaguya Hourain: Now I have to rewrite my whole mod
00:22 Kaguya Hourain: anyway
00:22 Maeglwn: huh?
00:22 *Kaguya Hourain is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/457455 Seven Lions with Myon and Shane 54 - Strangers (Feat. Tove Lo) [Hard]]
00:22 Maeglwn: no you don't
00:22 Maeglwn: lol
00:22 Maeglwn: it's fine
00:22 Kaguya Hourain: diff is fine uptil here
00:23 Kaguya Hourain: 01:10:826 (2,3) - This feels a bit too close
00:23 Kaguya Hourain: looks kinda disturbing in my eyes idk
00:23 Kaguya Hourain: the rest of the sliders afterwards and before were spaced better
00:23 Maeglwn: yea, you are definitely right
00:23 Maeglwn: fixing
00:24 Kaguya Hourain: so next we have this here
00:24 Kaguya Hourain: 01:15:441 (4,1) - If you want you can either:
00:25 Kaguya Hourain: a) Extend slider by 1/4 more and shorten the spinner by the same amount
00:25 Kaguya Hourain: or
00:25 Kaguya Hourain: b) Place a circle instead of extending slider
00:26 Maeglwn: put a circle
00:26 Kaguya Hourain: 01:15:903 (1) - Would also be a nice idea to shorten the spinner by 1 measure in the end so that it ends on the drum and add a circle where the spinner used to end
00:26 Kaguya Hourain: if the spinner looks too short to you then feel free to ignore this
00:26 Maeglwn: yea, it's probably too short unfortunately
00:27 Kaguya Hourain: Thought as much
00:27 Kaguya Hourain: welp
00:27 Kaguya Hourain: next is some serious stuff
00:27 Kaguya Hourain: 01:17:749 (1,2) - SV changes too abrupt
00:27 Kaguya Hourain: Way to fix: NC
00:27 Maeglwn: ehh... idk, I honestly think it's fine
00:27 Maeglwn: there's a visible audio cue
00:28 Kaguya Hourain: Yeah but nothing indicates the SV change
00:28 Kaguya Hourain: Nothing too clear imo
00:28 Maeglwn: the bpm is practically halved for this section
00:28 Maeglwn: that should be enough of a indication :P
00:28 Kaguya Hourain: what
00:28 Kaguya Hourain: you mean red line?
00:28 Kaguya Hourain: cuz there is no red line
00:28 Maeglwn: no, I mean in the song itself
00:29 Kaguya Hourain: well
00:29 Kaguya Hourain: you could use tick rate 2
00:29 Kaguya Hourain: makes it clear enough and doesn't affect the map
00:29 Maeglwn: eh
00:29 Maeglwn: I guess
00:29 Kaguya Hourain: (much)
00:29 Maeglwn: sure, I'll try it
00:29 Maeglwn: garven would be proud
00:29 Kaguya Hourain: \o/
00:29 Kaguya Hourain: Tick rate 2 best rate
00:29 Kaguya Hourain: fits everywhere
00:29 Kaguya Hourain: :D
00:30 Maeglwn: just made all diffs tick rate 2
00:30 Maeglwn: cause garven's was already
00:30 Maeglwn: didn't even notice
00:30 Kaguya Hourain: Yeah your insane has the same issues with the SV changes
00:30 Kaguya Hourain: which gets solved with Tick Rate 2
00:30 Kaguya Hourain: 01:20:979 (1,2,3) - Idk about the readability of this
00:30 Maeglwn: why wouldn't it be readable
00:30 Kaguya Hourain: Maybe a reverse slider would be better
00:31 Kaguya Hourain: I dunno it's 1/3 and it's too abrupt and I got confused the first time :3
00:31 Maeglwn: that's the songs fault, not my maps fault. LOL
00:31 Kaguya Hourain: Yeah
00:31 Kaguya Hourain: Not arguing there
00:31 Kaguya Hourain: That doesn't mean that there is no way to fix it
00:32 Maeglwn: eh. I'll consider it. I kinda like it this way atm though
00:32 Kaguya Hourain: well it fits the most imo
00:32 Kaguya Hourain: but get some more feedback
00:32 Kaguya Hourain: also wtf
00:32 Kaguya Hourain: do I see copypaste
00:32 Kaguya Hourain: omg I do see copypaste
00:33 Maeglwn: absolutely
00:33 Maeglwn: LOL
00:33 Maeglwn: why do you think I map 40 second songs
00:33 Kaguya Hourain: IDK DUUUUUUDE
00:33 Kaguya Hourain: :D
00:33 Maeglwn: eh, besides it adds consistency, cause it's only like a 15 second portion
00:34 Kaguya Hourain: I guess
00:34 Kaguya Hourain: I just hate copypaste
00:34 Maeglwn: :P I feel you
00:34 Kaguya Hourain: There is always something you can do just slightly different
00:34 Kaguya Hourain: and I'm no talking about rotating
00:34 Kaguya Hourain: not*
00:34 Kaguya Hourain: 02:20:287 (10,1) - uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
00:34 Kaguya Hourain: UUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
00:35 Kaguya Hourain: idk
00:35 Maeglwn: ?
00:35 Maeglwn: wha
00:35 Kaguya Hourain: feels
00:35 Kaguya Hourain: out of place
00:35 Maeglwn: the only other thing I thought about doing is putting the slider heads on top of each other
00:35 Maeglwn: but that just feels unoriginal
00:35 Kaguya Hourain: http://puu.sh/cjYxB.jpg
00:35 Maeglwn: yea but that's dumb
00:36 Kaguya Hourain: No it's not
00:36 Maeglwn: idk, I don't like it
00:36 Kaguya Hourain: [http://puu.sh/cjYAh.jpg ?]
00:36 Maeglwn: like that even less
00:36 Kaguya Hourain: idk then
00:36 Kaguya Hourain: keep it that way I guess
00:37 Maeglwn: I try to avoid overlaps at like all costs
00:37 Maeglwn: cause they don'tl ook pretty
00:37 Kaguya Hourain: But it's gonna throw off a lot of players
00:37 Maeglwn: eh, I'll consider changing it
00:37 Kaguya Hourain: 02:41:979 (10) - Don't try variety on 1/2 spam song :P
00:38 Kaguya Hourain: just keep spamming XD
00:38 Kaguya Hourain: 02:56:748 (10) - same
00:38 Maeglwn: nah, variety is good yo
00:38 Kaguya Hourain: that is overmapping tho
00:38 Maeglwn: if it's just 1/2 spam nobody will want to play it
00:38 Kaguya Hourain: wtf are you talking about
00:38 Kaguya Hourain: people LOVE 1/2 spam!
00:38 Kaguya Hourain: why do you think TV Sizes get instaranked
00:38 Maeglwn: no it's not, because the head of the slider gives a sound
00:39 Maeglwn: the rest of the slider doesn't matter
00:39 Kaguya Hourain: might as well make it 1/16 then
00:39 Maeglwn: because people like the animes that they're from
00:39 Maeglwn: lol
00:39 Kaguya Hourain: 03:13:595 (4,1) - Same as the beginning actually
00:40 Kaguya Hourain: 03:15:903 (1) - Lower the volume steadily here
00:40 Kaguya Hourain: like 5% every white tick or something
00:41 Maeglwn: meh, kinda did it
00:41 Kaguya Hourain: oke
00:41 Kaguya Hourain: hard's done
00:43 Kaguya Hourain: so insane
00:43 *Kaguya Hourain is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/457456 Seven Lions with Myon and Shane 54 - Strangers (Feat. Tove Lo) [Insane]]
00:44 Kaguya Hourain: You MIGHT want to go ar 8.5
00:44 Kaguya Hourain: spacing is a bit rough on the kiais
00:45 Maeglwn: eh, I guess it would improve the spread a bit if I did
00:45 Maeglwn: so sure
00:45 Kaguya Hourain: you'll find the 1/3 totally readable now I think
00:45 Maeglwn: the 1/3 is much more readable in this diff than in hard anyways
00:46 Maeglwn: cause it's jumps
00:46 Maeglwn: lol
00:46 Kaguya Hourain: 01:39:903 (1,2) - Do this rhythmical pattern in every single instance that's like this
00:46 Kaguya Hourain: talking about 01:36:210 (1,2) - this being wrong
00:46 Kaguya Hourain: 01:43:595 (1,2) - also this
00:47 Kaguya Hourain: 02:20:287 (12,13,1) - Make that slider you made on the Hard as well, fits way better here than just a triple
00:48 Maeglwn: it's because those times are different than the first one you mentioned
00:48 Maeglwn: and I think the triple fits a lot more
00:48 Kaguya Hourain: Then do the triple on Hard as well
00:49 Maeglwn: but then it's too hard
00:49 Kaguya Hourain: lol
00:49 Kaguya Hourain: not really
00:49 Kaguya Hourain: it's just a 1/4 stack in 130bpm
00:49 Maeglwn: there's like no motion in the hard diff at all that requires more than one finger
00:49 Kaguya Hourain: well
00:49 Kaguya Hourain: consistencyyyyyyyyyyy
00:50 Maeglwn: there's already plenty of consistency. LOL
00:50 Maeglwn: idk. maybe.
00:50 Maeglwn: another thing that I like as it is but I'll consider it
00:50 Kaguya Hourain: Well I loved the paired sliders in your diffs
00:50 Kaguya Hourain: They all play so well
00:50 Kaguya Hourain: Welp
HabiHolic
[General]

  1. Only Garven's Easy diff remove countdown please and change preview point please
  2. All diff remove Widescreen Support
  3. offset is 3925 batter. now is fast offset
  4. That means you map will not get ranked if you don't change it. Convert your mp3 so that it's at least 128 kbit/s & 192 kbit/s


[Garven's Easy]

  1. 00:44:287 (6) - NC? if your vocal flow want
  2. 00:48:441 - Useless greenlines
  3. 00:53:287 (7) - very long combo.here NC
  4. 01:06:441 (5) - ^
  5. 01:10:364 (1) - hmm.. i think spiner end 01:16:826 - here is batter
  6. 01:21:441 (5) - NC?
  7. 01:28:826 (5) - ^
  8. 01:36:672 (7) - ^
  9. 01:43:595 (5) - ^
  10. 02:02:056 (2) - ^


[inv's Normal]

  1. 00:37:133 (1) - vocal flowing please. patten Ignore please
  2. 00:47:287 (2,1) - (2) note (1) slider stack please
  3. 01:10:364 (1) - white tick increase please
  4. 02:29:749 (5) - spacing
  5. 02:33:441 (4) - (3) slider Blanket?
  6. 02:45:903 (9) - missing clap
  7. 02:52:364 - add note batter
  8. 02:53:749 (1) - white tick increase please


[Hard]

OD -2 please. now is very high

  1. 01:16:018 (1) - slider end 01:16:826 - here batter
  2. 01:24:210 (1,2,3) - how about this patten?
  3. 01:30:672 (5) - NC
  4. 01:36:672 (2) - Ctrl + g please. adding jump play batter
  5. 02:53:748 (1) - high jump. like this?
  6. 03:02:056 (2) - delete finish on the head. very awkward this
  7. 03:14:056 (5) - finish?


[Insane]
OD -1

  1. 00:35:056 (7,1) - Swap NC
  2. 01:10:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here is use drum sampleset please and add finish on the head (drum finish)
  3. 01:16:941 (1) - delete this. very short spiner
  4. 01:21:903 (2) - move 340 : 264
  5. 01:22:826 (4) - missing Blanket
  6. 01:26:287 (4) - Ctrl + g
Topic Starter
Maeglwn

HabiHolic wrote:

[General]

  1. Only Garven's Easy diff remove countdown please and change preview point please fixed
  2. All diff remove Widescreen Support fixed
  3. offset is 3925 batter. now is fast offset got a new mp3 isntead
  4. That means you map will not get ranked if you don't change it. Convert your mp3 so that it's at least 128 kbit/s & 192 kbit/s fixed


[Hard]

OD -2 please. now is very high

  1. 01:16:018 (1) - slider end 01:16:826 - here batter I guess so
  2. 01:24:210 (1,2,3) - how about this patten? don't see enough of a difference
  3. 01:30:672 (5) - NC wouldn't make sense
  4. 01:36:672 (2) - Ctrl + g please. adding jump play batter too far of a jump for a hard
  5. 02:53:748 (1) - high jump. like this? same as above
  6. 03:02:056 (2) - delete finish on the head. very awkward this fixed
  7. 03:14:056 (5) - finish? sure


[Insane]
OD -1

  1. 00:35:056 (7,1) - Swap NC don't see how this would make sense
  2. 01:10:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here is use drum sampleset please and add finish on the head (drum finish) drum sampleset looks nice, but not the finish
  3. 01:16:941 (1) - delete this. very short spiner it's probably fine
  4. 01:21:903 (2) - move 340 : 264 not seeing why, but I did it
  5. 01:22:826 (4) - missing Blanket fixed
  6. 01:26:287 (4) - Ctrl + g pass
Aiceo
crappy newbie mod inc

Never played easy diffs, so can't really help you with them.

02:38:107 (9,10,11,12) - i'd unstack these
02:34:415 (9) - a good slider for the vocals?
00:48:723 (1) - you could actually put some weirdly shaped vocal sliders here
01:16:992 (1) - i'd definetely replace this spinner with a slider.
02:34:646 (10,11,12) - remove triple pls
02:38:107 (9,10,11,12) - would be more fun if this was unstacked (personal opinion)
02:49:530 (10,11) - remove the 10th combo note, it shouldn't be there.
03:10:415 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - new combo?
03:12:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i find this stream incredibly hard lol
That's all. Sorry if this isn't really helpful, trying my best and i'm new to this!
Garven

Kaguya Hourain wrote:

[Garven's Easy]
Well this is weird. Star-wise I mean.
AR -1 OD -1 (Slider speed doesn't really matter. AR is just too high for Easy.) Moved -.5 -1 was way too cluttered
00:40:133 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket here Good enough
00:59:056 (3) - I would move that on the big tick. It's not like there's nothing there and it makes it easier for the player to figure out. It's already pretty easy to figure out. It would also break the rhythm for the pair right afterward.
01:03:903 (4) - Ugh, 2 reverse arrows. Not good. Either extend it by 1/2 and delete the second reverse or don't extend it by 1/2 and delete the second reverse and add a circle. I prefer option 2 because it makes more sense. They're good. It's a nice long slider so the second repeat is quite apparent.
01:21:903 (6,7) - Transition from white ticks to red tick might be a little hard. Try making these a slider. That goes to many other sections that look similar to this. I didn't want to have any sliders during the beginning of this section. There's not a very strong beat to rely on that is consistent, so I opted for simplicity and add on as it repeats 3 more times.
01:25:133 (1,2) - I don't get why you didn't at least place a circle like you did in the previous section. It's sounds pretty much the same. If it's about the cymbal that's there then just don't add a hitsound. OR you can make a slider here.
01:54:672 (1,1) - Judging by the criteria YOU set, I would unrank this time difference if I was QAT. Lower than 1500ms. Yep. You should learn to read. You'd make for a dubious QAT if that's how you'll make calls for rankability.
02:11:056 (2) - Another double reverse. I'd just make this 2 sliders.
I would definitely map the post-kiai part of the song. Feels unintuitive to just end the map there. I find it feels better ending where it does. It's all cooldown from there.

Pretty faulty diff actually didn't expect that. Ok

HabiHolic wrote:

[Garven's Easy]

  1. 00:44:287 (6) - NC? if your vocal flow want It wouldn't match the previous part
  2. 00:48:441 - Useless greenlines It's a volume change...
  3. 00:53:287 (7) - very long combo.here NC Same comboing scheme as all the previous parts
  4. 01:06:441 (5) - ^
  5. 01:10:364 (1) - hmm.. i think spiner end 01:16:826 - here is batter It'd be way too late for the next note.
  6. 01:21:441 (5) - NC?
  7. 01:28:826 (5) - ^
  8. 01:36:672 (7) - ^
  9. 01:43:595 (5) - ^
  10. 02:02:056 (2) - ^ The new combos are consistent as they are.
Thanks!

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Garven
[Normal]
00:48:277 (1) - Give more time after the spinner please
00:57:046 (3,1) - Spacing
01:19:662 (1,2) - Spacing (might be forgiven, but it'd be better with larger spacing)
01:31:662 (3,1) - Spacing
01:34:432 (1,2) - Spacing (might be forgiven, but it'd be better with larger spacing)
01:45:509 (1) - This finish was kinda random
02:05:354 (4,1) - Give more spacing with the 1/1 gaps aaaah

This feels more like a slow Hard with large circles due to it mostly being 1/2 rhythms.
Topic Starter
Maeglwn

Garven wrote:

This feels more like a slow Hard with large circles due to it mostly being 1/2 rhythms.
should be fine, there's one easy and then there's one easy+ thing and then there's a normal+ and a hard idk where that is and then an insane that is probably closer to an extra
BrosephStalin

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:48:277 (1) - Give more time after the spinner please Arright
00:57:046 (3,1) - Spacing
01:19:662 (1,2) - Spacing (might be forgiven, but it'd be better with larger spacing)
01:31:662 (3,1) - Spacing
01:34:432 (1,2) - Spacing (might be forgiven, but it'd be better with larger spacing)
01:45:509 (1) - This finish was kinda random Blame Maeg, removed.
02:05:354 (4,1) - Give more spacing with the 1/1 gaps aaaah aaaah fine.

This feels more like a slow Hard with large circles due to it mostly being 1/2 rhythms. Overmapped normal pls remap.
Thanks for the mod Graven, you da real QAT-Man

osu file format v13

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[Metadata]
Title:Strangers (Feat. Tove Lo)
TitleUnicode:Strangers (Feat. Tove Lo)
Artist:Seven Lions with Myon and Shane 54
ArtistUnicode:Seven Lions with Myon and Shane 54
Creator:Maeglwn
Version:Broseph's Normal
Source:
Tags:dubstep Garven inverness the mortal instruments city of bones
BeatmapID:562380
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OverallDifficulty:4
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320,187,96740,2,0,P|251:174|183:187,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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80,274,98124,6,0,B|136:318|136:318|204:318,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,282,98816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,320,99047,2,0,P|401:347|453:348,2,105,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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512,254,100663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,262,100893,1,0,1:0:0:0:
357,319,101124,2,0,P|322:315|292:298,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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472,128,102509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,54,102740,1,0,1:0:0:0:
428,54,103201,2,0,L|462:23,2,46.6666666666667,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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264,90,106432,2,0,L|201:215,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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59,105,123508,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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431,277,125354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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472,240,130430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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332,224,133892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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28,48,136430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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433,77,148662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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204,120,150277,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,204,150508,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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371,317,151200,2,0,L|438:298,1,70,8|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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438,41,152354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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244,355,156046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,294,156277,2,0,P|170:226|183:158,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,98,156970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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30,241,159739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,181,159970,2,0,P|156:164|224:180,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,239,160662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,295,160893,6,0,P|378:312|412:319,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,268,161354,2,0,P|479:233|468:200,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,207,161816,2,0,P|314:216|245:208,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,251,162508,6,0,P|177:153|271:127,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,208,163431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,291,163662,2,0,P|307:268|329:204,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,124,164354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,64,164585,6,0,L|232:45,3,70,2|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,256,167123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,291,167354,2,0,P|508:275|518:210,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,132,168046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,72,168277,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,44,168508,2,0,L|280:26,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,127,169200,2,0,P|353:161|335:191,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,248,169662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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16,88,170816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
43,8,171046,2,0,L|110:26,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,85,171508,2,0,L|237:103,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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128,128,173354,2,0,L|195:110,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,49,173816,6,0,P|322:41|372:92,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,124,174508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,187,174739,2,0,P|224:219|220:253,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,244,175431,2,0,P|338:242|370:228,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,160,175893,6,0,P|443:185|456:218,2,70,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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200,68,177046,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,11,177278,6,0,P|124:109|213:152,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,178201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,152,178432,2,0,P|364:135|396:75,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,15,179124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,179355,6,0,L|498:163,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,223,179816,2,0,L|371:241,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,300,180277,2,0,L|243:318,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,377,180739,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,315,180970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,235,181200,6,0,P|161:166|153:97,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,44,181892,2,0,B|148:8|148:8|220:40|220:40|282:40,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,72,182815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,124,183046,6,0,P|436:192|424:261,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,320,183738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,352,183969,2,0,L|217:370,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,310,184431,2,0,L|90:328,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Tsusumu
Blackmailed into modding Modding cause I was asked to

[Inv's Easy]
Just gunna say ahead of time I think an easy should have the same DS for the whole song
  1. 00:35:354 (3,4) - Not DS correctly
  2. 00:37:200 (1) - I'd change this shape into something like a curve or basically anything besides a straight slider cause of her pitch change
  3. 00:47:354 (2,1) - I'm not a big fan of overlaps in easy diffs
  4. 00:51:046 (4) - not DS correctly
  5. 00:55:662 (1,2) - Fix the blanket and DS 2 correctly
  6. 01:18:739 (2) - DS correctly, I can see a lot of new players mistaking the beat seperation
  7. 01:19:662 (3) - DS correctly
  8. 01:20:585 (4,5) - Stacks in easy's are pretty meh to me
  9. 01:22:431 (2) - Not DS correctly, and same issue as before
  10. 01:24:277 (4) - ^ and the overlap is meh is an easy
  11. 01:26:123 (2) - Not DS correctly
  12. 01:26:585 (3) - ^
  13. 01:27:046 (4) - ^
  14. 01:28:893 (1) - ^
  15. 01:29:816 (2) - same as before
  16. 01:32:585 (1) - Not DS correctly
  17. 01:32:585 (1) - same as before
  18. 01:35:354 (4,5) - still think stacking is bad for an easy
  19. 01:39:046 (5) - same as before
  20. 01:39:970 (1) - ^
  21. 01:41:816 (3) - Not DS correctly
  22. 01:43:662 (1) - same as before
  23. 01:44:816 (2) - ^
  24. 01:45:970 (4) - Not DS correctly
  25. 02:05:816 (1) - ^
  26. 02:07:662 (3) - ^
  27. 02:12:739 (4) - ^
  28. 02:12:739 (4,1) - Same thing about stacking
  29. 02:15:046 (3) - Not DS correctly
  30. 02:16:893 (1) - ^
  31. 02:16:893 (1,2,3) - This would be really hard for new players to read imo
  32. 02:19:662 (6) - Not DS correctly
  33. 02:21:046 (1,2,3) - will be hard for new people
  34. 02:23:354 (5) - Not DS correctly
  35. 02:23:816 (6,1) - same thing about stacking
  36. 02:24:277 (1,2) - Blanket could be better? I think
  37. 02:28:431 (2) - Not DS correctly
  38. 02:29:816 (5) - ^
  39. 02:31:662 (1,2,3) - Will be hard to read for new people
  40. 02:35:354 (6) - Not DS correctly
  41. 02:38:123 (7,8,9,1) - if you compare the distance between 7 and 9 to that of 9 to 1 it's gunna definitely mess up new players
  42. 02:39:970 (2,3,4) - Hard to read for new player
  43. 02:41:816 (5) - Not DS right
  44. 02:42:739 (6) - Not DS right
  45. 02:45:508 (7) - ^
  46. 02:45:508 (7,8,9,1) - same thing about spacing as before
  47. 02:48:277 (3,4,5) - Hard to read for newer players
  48. 02:52:893 (7,8) - Not DS correctly and the overlapping could be a problem
  49. 02:53:816 (1) - Not DS correctly
  50. 02:53:816 (1) - Why does this end on the blue tick? I'd extend it to the white tick
  51. 02:56:585 (4,5,6) - Hard to read
  52. 03:05:816 (2) - DS wrong
  53. 03:08:123 (4,1) - DS is wrong and stacking
  54. 03:09:508 (2) - DS is wrong
  55. 03:10:431 (3) - ^
  56. 03:11:354 (4) - ^


so uh, don't hate me for my mod, I just think that an easy should be more straight forward and not have artificial difficulty due to readability and spacing since newer players would have a really hard time with it.
Also why is the OD double the other easy when it's technically an easier map

[Garven's Easy]
  1. 00:54:277 (8) - This is snapped wrong
  2. 00:55:662 (1) - ^
  3. 01:28:893 (5) - ^
  4. 01:44:816 (7) - I realize it's for symytrey but it's snapped wrong
  5. 02:02:123 - This part you have a lot of sliders when it's the kiai meanwhile 01:17:816 - is mostly single taps when it isn't kiai, maybe mix them both up a bit?
  6. 02:23:123 (5) - Ctrl+G and resnap? it'd flow better imo
  7. 02:31:662 (1) - This is snapped wrong
  8. 02:53:816 (1,2) - Blanket maybe?
  9. 02:57:046 (4,5,6,7) - I'd ctrl+G these for better flow
  10. You should map the ending of the map like everyone else did


All I could find

[Broseph's Normal]
  1. You have a different preview point than every other diff so make it the same as the others
  2. 01:07:431 (2) - I'd ctrl+G this to flow better and rearrage the stuff afterwards
  3. 01:11:354 (3,3) - I think these repeat 1 too many times causing the flow to break
  4. 01:25:893 (2,3,1) - This overlap isn't very pretty
  5. 01:40:662 (2,3,1) - ^
  6. 02:23:816 (4,2) - Stack the slider end of 2 under the slider head of 4
  7. 02:37:200 (1) - I think this repeats 1 too many times
  8. 02:40:662 (4,3) - This overlap isn't very pretty either
  9. 02:44:585 (1) - Same as before
  10. 02:51:970 (1) - Same as before
  11. 03:05:584 (2) - I'd ctrl+G this too and move the other stuff after it
  12. 03:09:507 (3) - Same as before
  13. 03:11:353 (3) - ^


[Hard]
  1. 01:16:085 (1) - I know a spinner this long is rankable but idk I feel like it'd fit an insane better than a hard
  2. 01:18:508 (2) - NC due to SV change
  3. 01:18:970 (3) - move to x:177 y:108 for perfect stack
  4. 01:23:354 (6) - NC due to SV change
  5. 01:25:893 (3) - ^
  6. 01:30:739 (5) - ^
  7. 01:33:277 (2) - ^
  8. 01:33:739 (3) - Move to x:335 y:276 for perfect stack
  9. 01:38:123 (6) - NC
  10. 01:40:662 (3) - NC
  11. 02:42:739 (1,2,3,4) - You use this pattern quite a few times and it feels boring for a kiai
  12. 02:59:470 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit
  13. 03:12:277 (1,2,3,4) - Ew, just Ew


[Insane]
  1. 01:01:662 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is super boring, you should map some of the vocals/the piano notes on the red ticks
  2. 01:17:008 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit at all
  3. 01:18:508 (3) - NC
  4. 01:23:354 (5) - NC
  5. 01:24:623 (2,3) - wtf is this spacing
  6. 01:30:739 (5) - NC
  7. 01:31:662 (1,2) - I'd lower the SV for these so they look less retarded when you play them
  8. 01:33:277 (3) - NC
  9. 01:39:681 (3) - Wtf is this spacing again
  10. The entire first kiai is one of the most boring things I've seen in a while, copy paste everywhere
  11. 01:58:431 (1) - why map this as a spinner when last time it sounded like this it was a stream
  12. 02:36:739 (6) - Move this to x:170 y:207
  13. why do you copy paste your kiai times so much? it's supposed to be the most interesting part of the song yet you map it the most boring
  14. 03:12:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why double the spacing of this stream compared to the other one when this is the ending of the song, not a build-up to anything
  15. 03:16:085 (1) - why don't you have the volume changing green lines like in the hard?

That's what I saw, Good luck getting your map ranked~
Topic Starter
Maeglwn
first thing I'm going to point out; SV changes do not need to be preceded by new combos. at all. therefore, I'm excluding those parts. that is barely a thing ever that happens.

I also didn't respond to a lot of the negative and generally not constructive comments.

Xellie wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 01:16:085 (1) - I know a spinner this long is rankable but idk I feel like it'd fit an insane better than a hard it's fine
  2. 01:18:970 (3) - move to x:177 y:108 for perfect stack for both of the ones mentioned, no matter what way you do it in this situation they will never be perfectly stacked due to stack leniancy. plus, I'm not going to take extra effort to make my sliders correctly pixelated on top of other sliders, that's a waste of time
  3. 01:38:123 (6) - NC why? this doesn't match at all
  4. 01:40:662 (3) - NC same as above
  5. 02:42:739 (1,2,3,4) - You use this pattern quite a few times and it feels boring for a kiai this is a basic slider pattern which is present in generally every kiai you will ever play
  6. 02:59:470 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit eh. I'll consider changing this one
  7. 03:12:277 (1,2,3,4) - Ew, just Ew descriptive


[Insane]
  1. 01:01:662 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is super boring, you should map some of the vocals/the piano notes on the red ticks it's fine
  2. 01:17:008 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit at all its fine
  3. 01:24:623 (2,3) - wtf is this spacing it's fine because it's coming off of a slider. playtests show it's fine.
  4. 01:31:662 (1,2) - I'd lower the SV for these so they look less retarded when you play them uh.. what?
  5. 01:58:431 (1) - why map this as a spinner when last time it sounded like this it was a stream because it's coming off of a break.
  6. 03:16:085 (1) - why don't you have the volume changing green lines like in the hard?fixed

That's what I saw, Good luck getting your map ranked~
I'll KD for effort, at least. but you really need to work on being more constructive in your modding instead of just pointing out flaws and straight bashing everything to hell
BrosephStalin

Xellie wrote:

Blackmailed into modding Modding cause I was asked to Blackmailed into mapping, know da feel
[Broseph's Normal]
  1. You have a different preview point than every other diff so make it the same as the others
  2. 01:07:431 (2) - I'd ctrl+G this to flow better and rearrage the stuff afterwards I'd do this if I didn't mean remapping the entire map upto the break. I think newer players will figure this one out eventually.
  3. 01:11:354 (3,3) - I think these repeat 1 too many times causing the flow to break Not mah 4-repeat sliders. Aaaaaawwww naw. These babies stay.
  4. 01:25:893 (2,3,1) - This overlap isn't very pretty Changed (I guess)
  5. 01:40:662 (2,3,1) - ^ (But now my blanket is ugly rip)
  6. 02:23:816 (4,2) - Stack the slider end of 2 under the slider head of 4 Changed
  7. 02:37:200 (1) - I think this repeats 1 too many times I don't
  8. 02:40:662 (4,3) - This overlap isn't very pretty either When (4) is hit, (3) isn't even thinking about being an object yet.
  9. 02:44:585 (1) - Same as before
  10. 02:51:970 (1) - Same as before
  11. 03:05:584 (2) - I'd ctrl+G this too and move the other stuff after it Same as earlier
  12. 03:09:507 (3) - Same as before
  13. 03:11:353 (3) - ^
Thanks for the mod!
Sorry for sounding angry :?

osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:Strangers (Feat. Tove Lo)
Artist:Seven Lions with Myon and Shane 54
ArtistUnicode:Seven Lions with Myon and Shane 54
Creator:Maeglwn
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Fixed everything (somewhat) other than the DS suggestions because that's just the way I map. Thanks a bunch!

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276,352,91200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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136,136,93970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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20,300,95354,1,0,1:0:0:0:
20,300,95816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,336,96277,6,0,P|176:296|244:300,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,336,97200,1,0,1:0:0:0:
308,220,97662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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460,60,99046,2,0,P|396:80|320:4,1,180,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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120,152,101354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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276,340,102739,2,0,P|304:268|408:252,1,180,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,256,103662,6,0,B|412:208|412:208|436:132,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
428,280,104816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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152,352,105970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,228,106431,2,0,P|128:228|84:180,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,64,107354,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,136,122123,6,0,P|440:104|504:108,2,120,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,248,123508,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,180,123970,2,0,L|264:56,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,40,124893,2,0,L|128:168,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,272,125816,6,0,P|156:260|224:372,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,292,127200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,340,127662,2,0,L|460:216,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,108,128585,2,0,P|464:128|392:116,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,168,129508,6,0,P|240:80|112:88,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,180,130893,1,8,0:0:0:0:
8,292,131354,2,0,B|124:340|124:240|240:296,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,336,132739,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,336,133200,6,0,L|356:212,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,100,134123,2,0,P|320:104|272:56,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,48,135046,2,0,B|164:68|168:88|168:88|148:112|148:112|156:152|156:152|144:216|72:228|20:200|8:124|72:84,1,360,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,48,136893,6,0,L|296:56,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,44,137585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,32,137816,2,0,P|300:100|316:144,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,236,138739,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,220,139200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,344,139662,2,0,P|192:264|52:264,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,148,141046,5,8,0:0:0:0:
60,120,141277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,88,141508,2,0,L|172:104,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,142431,2,0,P|332:168|384:120,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,36,143354,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,156,143816,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,156,144277,6,0,P|492:280|416:364,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,248,145662,2,0,P|336:272|264:264,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,328,146585,2,0,P|156:272|108:228,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,332,147970,5,2,0:0:0:0:
232,204,148431,1,10,0:0:0:0:
340,248,148893,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,128,149354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,44,149816,2,0,B|208:56|192:100|192:100|180:60|136:52|88:68|88:68|104:132|56:188|-8:172,1,360,2|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
64,272,151662,6,0,L|188:280,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,300,152354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,320,152585,2,0,P|256:284|324:280,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,324,153508,2,0,P|416:264|436:208,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,108,154431,2,0,L|384:120,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,76,155354,2,0,P|232:156|100:128,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,158123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,284,158354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,158585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,188,159046,6,0,L|64:64,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,152,159970,2,0,P|152:216|120:264,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,280,160662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,296,160893,2,0,L|276:284,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,304,161816,2,0,P|388:268|384:200,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,100,162739,2,0,B|332:104|332:104|300:144|300:144|256:100|184:120,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,284,165508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,288,165739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,292,165970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,184,166431,6,0,P|128:180|176:216,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,108,167354,2,0,P|260:160|320:176,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,112,168277,2,0,L|440:236,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,244,168970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,256,169200,2,0,P|420:312|396:364,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,170123,2,0,B|244:232|268:188|268:188|232:192|232:192|232:124|168:104,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,36,172893,2,0,L|257:105,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,88,173354,2,0,L|176:152,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,144,173816,6,0,P|100:264|24:352,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,308,175200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,340,175662,2,0,P|348:288|416:268,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,184,176585,2,0,P|272:140|284:72,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,64,177277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,48,177508,2,0,B|128:100|128:4|0:60,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,28,179816,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,56,180277,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,160,180739,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,244,181200,6,0,P|440:280|376:272,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,352,182123,2,0,P|276:312|200:296,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,352,183046,2,0,L|108:108,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,12,184431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,24,184893,6,0,P|216:64|272:64,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,336,188123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,336,188585,6,0,L|188:332,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,192277,12,2,195970,0:0:0:0:
Garven

Xellie wrote:

[Garven's Easy]
  1. 00:54:277 (8) - This is snapped wrong With that much time between each hit, a .2x or even .1x increases aren't going to kill anyone.
  2. 00:55:662 (1) - ^
  3. 01:28:893 (5) - ^
  4. 01:44:816 (7) - I realize it's for symytrey but it's snapped wrong
  5. 02:02:123 - This part you have a lot of sliders when it's the kiai meanwhile 01:17:816 - is mostly single taps when it isn't kiai, maybe mix them both up a bit? These are completely different sections of music... I don't understand the comparison being made here.
  6. 02:23:123 (5) - Ctrl+G and resnap? it'd flow better imo I've been using some back and forth flow riddled throughout the map, and this is a continuation of that pattern.
  7. 02:31:662 (1) - This is snapped wrong
  8. 02:53:816 (1,2) - Blanket maybe? Not going for a blanket
  9. 02:57:046 (4,5,6,7) - I'd ctrl+G these for better flow They'd lose a lot of their echo effect.
  10. You should map the ending of the map like everyone else did The end is boring compared to where I ended and feels like a bit letdown after that big section of awesome.
Thanks!
Tsusumu

Maeglwn wrote:

first thing I'm going to point out; SV changes do not need to be preceded by new combos. at all. therefore, I'm excluding those parts. that is barely a thing ever that happens.

I also didn't respond to a lot of the negative and generally not constructive comments.

Xellie wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 01:16:085 (1) - I know a spinner this long is rankable but idk I feel like it'd fit an insane better than a hard it's fine
  2. 01:18:970 (3) - move to x:177 y:108 for perfect stack for both of the ones mentioned, no matter what way you do it in this situation they will never be perfectly stacked due to stack leniancy. plus, I'm not going to take extra effort to make my sliders correctly pixelated on top of other sliders, that's a waste of time
  3. 01:38:123 (6) - NC why? this doesn't match at all
  4. 01:40:662 (3) - NC same as above
  5. 02:42:739 (1,2,3,4) - You use this pattern quite a few times and it feels boring for a kiai this is a basic slider pattern which is present in generally every kiai you will ever play
  6. 02:59:470 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit eh. I'll consider changing this one
  7. 03:12:277 (1,2,3,4) - Ew, just Ew descriptive


[Insane]
  1. 01:01:662 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is super boring, you should map some of the vocals/the piano notes on the red ticks it's fine
  2. 01:17:008 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit at all its fine
  3. 01:24:623 (2,3) - wtf is this spacing it's fine because it's coming off of a slider. playtests show it's fine.
  4. 01:31:662 (1,2) - I'd lower the SV for these so they look less retarded when you play them uh.. what?
  5. 01:58:431 (1) - why map this as a spinner when last time it sounded like this it was a stream because it's coming off of a break.
  6. 03:16:085 (1) - why don't you have the volume changing green lines like in the hard?fixed

That's what I saw, Good luck getting your map ranked~
I'll KD for effort, at least. but you really need to work on being more constructive in your modding instead of just pointing out flaws and straight bashing everything to hell
I would've been more constructive but that'd be saying to remap both your kiai's and I think it's a bit unrealistic to expect someone to give suggestions for about 30% of your map, and I point out flaws the way I do because if it's something that I think can be fixed in multiple ways then it'd be better for the mapper to decide since it's their map. and to be fair, this is similar to what happened when you modded my first map, and what I've seen done on other maps by you so it sounds hypocritical to complain about what I did.
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