Chihara Minori - Paradise Lost (TV Size) · forum

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-09-08T08:33:04+00:00

Thank you Satellite san and litoluna san!!
so happy >.<

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-09-08T09:12:23+00:00

okurete gomen ne ><

( ˘ω˘ )

soft-sliderslide → http://puu.sh/bquZx/76cd15160b.wav

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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-09-08T18:29:58+00:00

Thank you Pandiar chan!

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-09-09T15:27:20+00:00

source啊source啊，没source怎么补番！(摔

[Insane]

00:25:900 (1,3) - blanket butter
01:15:536 (6) - 我觉得这个跳放得有点过分啊
SPOILER
哨子声真爽

[Hard]

00:07:172 (6) - NC
00:29:172 这么小声超没感觉啊，再佳条80%的绿线用normal的addition
00:59:718 (1,2,3) - 强迫症，请务必旋转同样的角度
01:04:082 (1) - 我想跳一下的效果比较好
01:25:718 (1) - 结尾了还坑我一下,NC猴不猴呀

[Frey's Normal]

00:04:445 (1,2) - 来两条辣条，加个声音递增,现在太没打击感了哇。还有00:05:536改为clap吧，好听多了，后面还有finish呢
00:19:900 (4) - 我觉得音是出现在00:19:718这里的啊，虽然降低难度了但不合曲就不好了
00:23:718 (2,4) - 尽量少出现这种吧
00:51:172 (1,1) - 这么短的转盘和后面的时间间距你肯定想被嘉文吊打ww,需要2 beat的空位
01:08:991 (3) - 连续两个finish超不好听的，滑条尾改为clap
01:14:445 (1,1) - ww
01:21:536 (2) - 这个NC吧，然后01:22:991 (1) - 这个不要NC，然后01:24:445 (3) - 这个NC

[Easy]

00:04:445 (1) - 4 beat
00:32:445 (4) - NC
00:34:263 (6,1) - 爷爷
00:45:172 (6) - 润滑一点

没摸给奥拉球，打包

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-09-09T17:50:46+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
source啊source啊，没source怎么补番！(摔

[Insane]
00:25:900 (1,3) - blanket butter
01:15:536 (6) - 我觉得这个跳放得有点过分啊
SPOILER
哨子声真爽
[Hard]
00:07:172 (6) - NC
00:29:172 这么小声超没感觉啊，再佳条80%的绿线用normal的addition
00:59:718 (1,2,3) - 强迫症，请务必旋转同样的角度我记得是同样的角度只是角度比较小
01:04:082 (1) - 我想跳一下的效果比较好呜保留这个意见
01:25:718 (1) - 结尾了还坑我一下,NC猴不猴呀
[Easy]
00:04:445 (1) - 4 beat
00:32:445 (4) - NC
00:34:263 (6,1) - 爷爷我要美丽
00:45:172 (6) - 润滑一点
没摸给奥拉球，打包准了

谢谢摸图>.<其他的都改了

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-09-10T06:40:24+00:00

Hi~ pm request
(I can't modding the Extra diff yet.. QwQ)

General

Add the Frey, Pandiar, Oracle in TAGs plz.

Easy

00:00:082 - Useless greenline imo. Delete?
00:00:082 (1) - Personally this part is soft sound is better. This applied all of you diff :3
00:10:809 (3) - finish on tail
00:12:445 (2) - ^
00:14:627 (1,2) - This is better with music I think
SPOILER
00:29:172 (1) - Volume is so high I think.. I prefer 50% bit it's up to you. And...no hitsound this part..?
00:56:809 (3) - This is better imo. like 01:08:445 (3,4) -
SPOILER
01:05:172 (3) - clap on tail
01:12:627 (1) - start from 01:12:809 and add a note at 01:12:445 ?
01:17:536 (3,4) - Followed the music, (3) note is not good imo. Maybe this is better. (The next vocal with the note)
SPOILER

Frey's Normal

00:00:082 - Useless greenline, Delete? And hitsound is same as Easy.
00:10:809 (5) - whistle on tail cuz it has same beat as 00:10:082 (4,5) - their head.
00:15:900 (4) - whistle on head. Fit the music imo.
00:27:354 (2) - Isn't this so far in Normal diff?
00:33:536 (5) - Maybe NC cuz 00:42:263 (1) - , 00:56:809 (1) - ?
00:39:354 (4) - Head : Normal whistle is better imo
00:39:900 (5) - Head, Tail : ^
00:50:991 (7,1,1) - (1,1)'s 1/1 gap is not big problem. But many Normal players feel that this spin is too short..Cuz (7,1) is 1/2 . This give Normal players 'sudden spin' so can't do it well, and this influence on the next (1) imo.. (01:14:263 (3,1,1) - this is too)
01:08:445 (2) - (364|16) is a bit better smooth flow imo
01:20:082 (1,2) - swap the NC
01:22:991 (1,3) - ^
01:24:445 (1) - whistle on head

Hard

00:28:809 (1,2) - swap the NC
00:59:718 (1,2,3) - a bit boring rhythm with pattern in Hard diff I think. Try changing the rhythm
SPOILER
01:02:809 (2) - weird rhythm imo
01:13:900 (4) - Try this?
SPOILER
01:14:991 (6) - not fit with music. delete?
01:24:991 (3,4) - 1/1 reverse slider or three 1/1 notes is better imo.

Pandiar's Insane

00:11:172 (2,3) - jump is better than stack imo. move the (2) to (248|96) or somewhere?
00:25:172 (6) - Why anti-jump is here... ;w; not fit I think stack on (7) or move this somewhere plz.
00:27:536 (5) - I know the NC patterns in this part. But this should have the NC cuz the music is changed.
00:28:809 (1,5) - swap the NC
00:35:354 (2,3) - ctrl + g is better I think.
00:39:536 (2,3,4,5) - a bit close jump. this has more strong beat than before jumps'. So I mean..give it more DS plz.
00:50:445 (5,6,7) - Personally I prefer this.
SPOILER
00:55:263 (9) - not fit note imo. Delete ?
00:59:718 (7,1) - swap the NC and NC on 01:01:172 (7) -
01:02:627 (1,2) - :3
SPOILER

Insane

00:27:718 (2,3,4) - too far jump for me..The music is very silent ;w;
00:31:354 (4,5) - I prefer ctrl + g . But just for me
01:14:627 (4) - Delete this note is better imo.
01:16:809 (4) - ctrl + g is better and fun for me

That's all. GL~

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-09-10T08:47:34+00:00

Pandiar's Insane

00:11:172 (2,3) - jump is better than stack imo. move the (2) to (248|96) or somewhere? yeah nice
00:25:172 (6) - Why anti-jump is here... ;w; not fit I think stack on (7) or move this somewhere plz.　it's my small personality
00:27:536 (5) - I know the NC patterns in this part. But this should have the NC cuz the music is changed. ok
00:28:809 (1,5) - swap the NC ok
00:35:354 (2,3) - ctrl + g is better I think. good
00:39:536 (2,3,4,5) - a bit close jump. this has more strong beat than before jumps'. So I mean..give it more DS plz. give it a bit ds
00:50:445 (5,6,7) - Personally I prefer this. yeah
SPOILER
00:55:263 (9) - not fit note imo. Delete ? i don't think so...sorry keep it
00:59:718 (7,1) - swap the NC and NC on 01:01:172 (7) - yeah
01:02:627 (1,2) - :3 !!! i did't notice. Fixed
SPOILER

thank you for modding

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Zweib

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Zweib 2014-09-10T10:37:44+00:00

唔。。女王。。唔。。。唔。。嗯嗯。。

摸摸

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[General]

I suppose Pandiar's Insane may use AR 8.7 and Extra use a larger AR for better diff spread?

A set of combo colors for your reference

[Colours]
Combo1 : 184,218,220
Combo2 : 191,117,96
Combo3 : 52,52,154
Combo4 : 240,236,230

[Easy]
00:15:718 (2) - 这里也用1/2 slider？打起来更容易把握节奏
00:29:172 (1) - 到下根蓝线前的这段sample用soft吧，而且节奏感觉有点坑人啊，把00:30:991 (3) 和00:33:172 (2) 这两个选中ctrl+G你听听怎么样
01:17:900 (4) - 有点太靠边了。。不过没出界就是了。。
01:01:172 (1) - 对称？

[Frey's Normal]
00:19:900 (4) - 这里没什么音，钢琴音的话是在00:19:718
00:25:536 (5) - 唔出界嫌疑
好w

[Hard]
00:04:809 (2) - 这个滑条改成3/4长，再接个1/4折返滑条怎么样？
00:10:809 (3) - 没听错的话这个滑条尾上应该有个clap？
00:13:718 (3) - 同上，另外(2)的clap被加到(3)的头上来惹
01:01:172 (1) - 这个blanket可以包更好一点

[Pandiar's Insane]
完璧な譜面じゃないかなorz

01:06:082 (3,4,5) - 位置は前のスライダーと少し離れてｗ
01:00:263 (8) - スライダーの形はいいですけど、終点でスタックしたら、初見は01:14:263 (1,2) と同じリズムに判断されるかも。スタックしないのほうがいいと思います。
00:45:172 (5,6) - ^
01:17:718 (3,4) - ^

[Insane]
00:05:536 (3,4,5,6) - 突然觉得这里可以音效从小渐增？（多插点草好看
00:17:172 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:00:991 (6) - 这个1/4有点奇怪。。
01:01:263 - 这里可以考虑加个note叠着。。。
01:01:991 - ^
01:11:718 (4,5) - 交换下位置打打看？

[Oracle's Extra]
tv里放个小圈extra一直觉得挺违和的= =
00:20:354 (6) - 还是把这个放00:20:445比较好，前面的滑条拉3/4长。不用滑条头而用尾压这音怕要算overmap,打着也奇怪
00:36:263 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 可能还不如直接放三连
00:51:354 (2) - 把这个拉到00:51:657 然后跟(3)放近点试试
01:11:718 (1,1) - 感觉有点断flow了，01:11:718 (1) 和01:12:082 (1) - 交换位置打打看
01:14:263 (1,2) - 同上swap
01:15:354 (2) - 用1/8折返可能更好
01:25:354 (2) - ctrl+G

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-09-10T12:45:58+00:00

默認顏色有點……

[easy]

00:32:809 (2,3,1) - 連續三個折返有點土……

[normal]

我建議1/2和1/1只選一個疊，因為你1/2比較多所以01:19:718 (3,1) - 分開……還有00:16:809 (6,7) - 最好疊

轉盤接物件……嘉文以至少隔4拍的理由un一些圖了……這bpm也高我覺得下限也要半節吧

[extra]

個人感覺HP有點高……auto開HR也有半血的時候

00:00:082 (1,2,3) - ……4分拍的曲子基本都是8字一句8節一段……副歌長一點16節……所以求4單點梗……

01:02:627 (1) - 這個附點拆成1/2滑條3個擺梗我覺得有感覺點……覺得占了後面位置可以2滑條帶note

因為我不能pass所以黑一分【喂

[Pandiar's Insane]

i suggest you use red color in 1.25 * SV slider …… skip red color in other slider ……

嗯嗯……最後發個“去吧皮卡丘，我的經驗靠你了”的符號

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-09-11T02:21:32+00:00

Karia wrote:
Hi~ pm request
(I can't modding the Extra diff yet.. QwQ)

General
Add the Frey, Pandiar, Oracle in TAGs plz.

Easy
00:00:082 - Useless greenline imo. Delete?
00:00:082 (1) - Personally this part is soft sound is better. This applied all of you diff :3ummm when there are drums ,i use normal. So when the drums disappear from 00:17:536 i start using soft。。。but i applied some change for the part after this
00:10:809 (3) - finish on tail
00:12:445 (2) - ^
00:14:627 (1,2) - This is better with music I think
SPOILER
00:29:172 (1) - Volume is so high I think.. I prefer 50% bit it's up to you. And...no hitsound this part..?ummm wait for more comments
00:56:809 (3) - This is better imo. like 01:08:445 (3,4) -
SPOILER
01:05:172 (3) - clap on tail
01:12:627 (1) - start from 01:12:809 and add a note at 01:12:445 ?
01:17:536 (3,4) - Followed the music, (3) note is not good imo. Maybe this is better. (The next vocal with the note)
SPOILER

Hard
00:28:809 (1,2) - swap the NC
00:59:718 (1,2,3) - a bit boring rhythm with pattern in Hard diff I think. Try changing the rhythm umm not changed since i think both of them fit the song and not rally necessary ttto change it tho
SPOILER
01:02:809 (2) - weird rhythm imoi think it's acceptable
01:13:900 (4) - Try this?ttoo hard ;w;
SPOILER
01:14:991 (6) - not fit with music. delete?
01:24:991 (3,4) - 1/1 reverse slider or three 1/1 notes is better imo.

Insane
00:27:718 (2,3,4) - too far jump for me..The music is very silent ;w;well the jump here should be fine
00:31:354 (4,5) - I prefer ctrl + g . But just for me umm i think current one better ._.
01:14:627 (4) - Delete this note is better imo.
01:16:809 (4) - ctrl + g is better and fun for me

That's all. GL~

Zweib wrote:
唔。。女王。。唔。。。唔。。嗯嗯。。嗯？！(╬ﾟдﾟ)⊂彡☆))д´)

摸摸

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[General]

I suppose Pandiar's Insane may use AR 8.7 and Extra use a larger AR for better diff spread?

A set of combo colors for your reference
[Colours]
Combo1 : 184,218,220
Combo2 : 191,117,96
Combo3 : 52,52,154
Combo4 : 240,236,230

[Easy]
00:15:718 (2) - 这里也用1/2 slider？打起来更容易把握节奏改了前面的摸之后这个美丽
00:29:172 (1) - 到下根蓝线前的这段sample用soft吧，而且节奏感觉有点坑人啊，把00:30:991 (3) 和00:33:172 (2) 这两个选中ctrl+G你听听怎么样
01:17:900 (4) - 有点太靠边了。。不过没出界就是了。。
01:01:172 (1) - 对称？

[Hard]
00:04:809 (2) - 这个滑条改成3/4长，再接个1/4折返滑条怎么样？
00:10:809 (3) - 没听错的话这个滑条尾上应该有个clap？
00:13:718 (3) - 同上，另外(2)的clap被加到(3)的头上来惹
01:01:172 (1) - 这个blanket可以包更好一点不包

[Insane]
00:05:536 (3,4,5,6) - 突然觉得这里可以音效从小渐增？（多插点草好看
00:17:172 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:00:991 (6) - 这个1/4有点奇怪。。打起来还好吧
01:01:263 - 这里可以考虑加个note叠着。。。
01:01:991 - ^先试试效果。。。
01:11:718 (4,5) - 交换下位置打打看？压蓝线的，如果是压红线隔1/2的话我就做跳了

others fixed

To Narcissu
改了

thank you guys for modding >.< very helpful

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-09-11T04:15:01+00:00

Zweib wrote:
唔。。女王。。唔。。。唔。。嗯嗯。。

摸摸

菟菟菟分界线菟菟菟菟菟分界线菟菟菟菟菟分界线菟菟菟菟菟分界线菟菟菟菟菟分界线菟菟菟菟菟分界线菟菟菟菟菟分界线菟菟菟

[Oracle's Extra]
tv里放个小圈extra一直觉得挺违和的= = 尝试一下没用过的东西拉233
00:20:354 (6) - 还是把这个放00:20:445比较好，前面的滑条拉3/4长。不用滑条头而用尾压这音怕要算overmap,打着也奇怪我改成circle压音了，希望会好点
00:36:263 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 可能还不如直接放三连没能想到什么比较好的排列
00:51:354 (2) - 把这个拉到00:51:657 然后跟(3)放近点试试可能会有点1/8overmap嫌疑,还是没动
01:11:718 (1,1) - 感觉有点断flow了，01:11:718 (1) 和01:12:082 (1) - 交换位置打打看神
01:14:263 (1,2) - 同上swap 倾向于原来的
01:15:354 (2) - 用1/8折返可能更好好主意
01:25:354 (2) - ctrl+G 神

神mod

Narcissu wrote:
默認顏色有點……

[extra]

個人感覺HP有點高……auto開HR也有半血的時候降了0.5 再降就要跟insane一样了

00:00:082 (1,2,3) - ……4分拍的曲子基本都是8字一句8節一段……副歌長一點16節……所以求4單點梗…… 我这里是跟的音高。。打起来还行就不动了。比较喜欢这个旋律重复的感觉。

01:02:627 (1) - 這個附點拆成1/2滑條3個擺梗我覺得有感覺點……覺得占了後面位置可以2滑條帶note 试了一下很好，可是后面会变成蓝线起的slider很美丽;_;

因為我不能pass所以黑一分【喂

感谢看图！ww

我降低了音量，调整了一些哨子和finish

hey

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Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 2014-09-11T06:06:53+00:00

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[Oracle's Extra]
00:18:445 (3) - 00:18:627 - 这里结束？

01:24:445 (1,2,3,1) - 这部分flow有点不顺。按理来说01:24:809 (3) - 应该会向2的左下角甩动更好一点吧，然后对应的这两个slider 01:24:991 (1,2) - 时间轴上也换一下，顺便该ctrl+g的换一下首尾。（语死早。。不知道能否理解。只是个人意见而已，仅做参考）

[Insane]
00:32:263 - 这部分整体比较紧凑，加个note吧

00:54:263 (1,2,3) - 这部分的flow不太自然。这部分给你点我的个人意见吧：(下面几点一起改看看效果怎么样)

00:53:172 (4) - 放到408|336附近
00:53:354 (5) - 的头移到00:52:809 (2) - 现在的位置
00:54:627 (3) - ctrl+g
00:55:354 (1) - ^
00:55:718 (2) - ^

01:01:263 (2) - 01:01:991 (2) - 删掉

01:14:445 (2) - 移到01:14:627 -

[Pandiar's Insane]

00:25:172 (6) - 00:25:354 (7) - と重ねて？

00:28:627 - add a note

01:01:172 (5,6,7,8,9) - この部分は少しの違和感があるような気がします　
例えば 01:01:172 (5) - このスライダーは01:01:445 - に延長するほうがいいかもしれませんね
単なる私自分の意見です

01:05:354 (1) - ctrl+> そして344|120の近くに

hard没什么问题，hard以下的就不看了。。因为我也不会做。
午觉时间没了、、_(´ཀ`」 ∠) ganbare

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-09-11T09:24:48+00:00

Zweib wrote:
[General]

I suppose Pandiar's Insane may use AR 8.7 and Extra use a larger AR for better diff spread?

A set of combo colors for your reference

OK set AR8.7

[Colours]
Combo1 : 184,218,220
Combo2 : 191,117,96
Combo3 : 52,52,154
Combo4 : 240,236,230

fixed

[Pandiar's Insane]
完璧な譜面じゃないかなorz　(*ﾉｪﾉ)

01:06:082 (3,4,5) - 位置は前のスライダーと少し離れてｗ　fixed
01:00:263 (8) - スライダーの形はいいですけど、終点でスタックしたら、初見は01:14:263 (1,2) と同じリズムに判断されるかも。スタックしないのほうがいいと思います。01:00:445 (3) にスタックした！
00:45:172 (5,6) - ^ 気に入ってるところだからあんまり変えたくない・・・ ;_;
01:17:718 (3,4) - ^ スタックしないで少し下に置きました

Zweib san modding ありがと ~~~ <3

Narcissu wrote:
[Pandiar's Insane]

i suggest you use red color in 1.25 * SV slider …… skip red color in other slider ……

um... i think it's no problem because there is NC

thank you for modding !

Kamio Misuzu wrote:
曲子略燃(,,•́ . •̀,,)

[Pandiar's Insane]

00:25:172 (6) - 00:25:354 (7) - と重ねて？ it's my small personality ><

00:28:627 - add a note that rhythm is better imo

01:01:172 (5,6,7,8,9) - この部分は少しの違和感があるような気がします　　something changed
例えば 01:01:172 (5) - このスライダーは01:01:445 - に延長するほうがいいかもしれませんね
単なる私自分の意見です

01:05:354 (1) - ctrl+> そして344|120の近くに sorry i like current pattern ><

thank you for modding !
and good japanese

mei chan he

osu file format v13

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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-09-11T18:11:51+00:00

Kamio Misuzu wrote:
曲子略燃(,,•́ . •̀,,)嘿嘿

[Insane]
00:32:263 - 这部分整体比较紧凑，加个note吧

00:54:263 (1,2,3) - 这部分的flow不太自然。这部分给你点我的个人意见吧：(下面几点一起改看看效果怎么样)
00:53:172 (4) - 放到408|336附近
00:53:354 (5) - 的头移到00:52:809 (2) - 现在的位置
00:54:627 (3) - ctrl+g
00:55:354 (1) - ^
00:55:718 (2) - ^
01:01:263 (2) - 01:01:991 (2) - 删掉

01:14:445 (2) - 移到01:14:627 -

hard没什么问题，hard以下的就不看了。。因为我也不会做。
午觉时间没了、、_(´ཀ`」 ∠) ganbare

二连的地方都是猪尾巴建议的。。你这样一说我有点纠结了因为和我之前的做法是一样的
保守起见我先恢复我原来的做法，看看更多人的建议
其他的改了，谢谢modding！！

Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2014-09-13T05:41:05+00:00

Mei~~~~~~~~~~
Pandiarさ～～～～～～ん
Oracle~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

YO

General

Fine.

Easy

00:04:445 (1,2) - want any hitsound (whistle?)
00:05:900 ~ 00:16:991 - i think you can set more finish. for example 00:07:172, 00:07:900 and more.
00:17:536 - add note?
00:50:991 (3) - add whistle
01:05:172 (3) - move to 01:05:354
01:09:172 - add finish
01:09:536 (4) - ^

Frey's Normal

00:05:900 ~ 00:16:991 - i think you can set more S:C1 finish.
00:07:172 (3) - add finish on head
00:07:900 (4) - ^
00:10:082 (4) - ^
00:10:809 (5) - ^
00:12:991 (3) - ^
00:13:718 (4) - ^
00:50:991 (7) - add whistle

so clean map!

Hard

00:05:900 ~ 00:16:991 - same with Easy. you can set more finish
00:07:172 (1) - add finish on head
00:07:900 (3) - ^
00:07:900 (3) - ^
00:10:809 (3) - ^
00:12:991 (1) - ^
00:13:718 (3) - ^
00:49:536 (1) - add whistle?
00:50:082 (3) - ^
01:03:718 (5) - add finish on head?

Pandiar's Insane

00:04:445 (9,1) - この二つ離したほうが見やすくないですか？
こんな感じで
01:25:900 (1) - 他のdiffでスピンの終点が01:27:263になってるので合わせたほうがいいかもしれません

めっちゃ綺麗で言うとこなんてほぼ皆無だったｗｗナイスです！

Meiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinsane

00:04:809 (3) - add finish on head
00:05:536 (3) - add finish
00:18:627 - add note better
01:14:445 (2,3,4) - suggestion. this rhythm is more fit for me.

Mei chan god mapper .=.

Oracle's Extra

00:00:082 (1) - add finish
00:05:536 (3) - add finish on head
01:15:354 (2) - add finish on tail

so hard ;w;
i like this diff's stream. so fun \:D/ Nice~~

Good Luck Chihara Meinori ~~~

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-09-13T06:16:56+00:00

iMage-- wrote:
Pandiar's Insane
00:04:445 (9,1) - この二つ離したほうが見やすくないですか？確かにそっちのほうが見やすいですが、ここでタメ？を作るiMage--にしてるのでスタックさせたままでいきたいです！
こんな感じで

01:25:900 (1) - 他のdiffでスピンの終点が01:27:263になってるので合わせたほうがいいかもしれませんあらま、fixed!!!

めっちゃ綺麗で言うとこなんてほぼ皆無だったｗｗナイスです！ただ綺麗なだけしか取り得がありませんから(´・ω・`)ゞ

もっどありがとうございました～～～～～～～

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304,80,17900,2,0,L|316:152,1,67.5000025749208
224,56,18263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,56,18445,2,0,P|164:108|104:100,1,135.000005149842
40,204,18991,2,0,P|96:192|128:188,1,67.5000025749208,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,348,19354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,256,19536,2,0,P|216:232|276:256,1,135.000005149842
388,336,20082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,336,20445,6,0,L|376:260,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,20809,2,0,L|460:300,1,67.5000025749208
308,296,21172,2,0,L|320:216,1,67.5000025749208
376,168,21536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,168,21718,2,0,P|460:152|484:108,1,135.000005149842
404,80,22263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,80,22445,2,0,L|264:96,1,135.000005149842
148,100,22991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,100,23354,6,0,L|140:180,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,164,23718,2,0,L|68:240,1,67.5000025749208
224,172,24082,2,0,L|208:240,1,67.5000025749208
112,320,24445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,320,24627,2,0,P|176:284|248:296,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,316,25172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,344,25354,2,0,P|392:340|436:296,1,135.000005149842
456,184,25900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,132,26082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,132,26172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,132,26263,6,0,L|192:144,1,135.000005149842
116,96,26809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,236,26991,2,0,L|308:228,1,67.5000025749208
432,184,27354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,60,27536,6,0,P|320:112|240:104,1,135.000005149842
104,296,28082,2,0,L|192:280,1,67.5000025749208
120,124,28445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,124,28809,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,156,28900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,188,28991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,220,29082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,252,29172,2,0,L|152:352,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,188,29536,2,0,L|256:288,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,148,29900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,228,30082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,104,30263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,224,30445,6,0,P|160:216|104:212,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,272,30809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,100,30991,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,284,31172,2,0,P|236:304|292:236,1,180
440,320,31718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,176,31900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,176,31991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,176,32082,6,0,L|364:268,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,236,32445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,176,32627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,88,32809,2,0,P|308:100|260:108,1,90
40,164,33172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,220,33354,6,0,B|248:176|324:180|324:180|324:208,1,180
268,300,33900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,336,34082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,336,34172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,336,34263,2,0,P|420:256|416:232,1,90
360,76,34627,2,0,P|296:116|240:92,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,96,34991,6,0,P|180:88|140:84,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,220,35354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,236,35536,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,180,35718,2,0,L|144:272,1,90
152,344,36082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,124,36263,6,0,P|148:104|198:134,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,134,36627,2,0,P|248:128|300:124,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,156,36991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,316,37172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,204,37354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,204,37445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,204,37536,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,268,37718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,244,37900,6,0,L|248:148,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,67,38263,2,0,L|431:163,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,336,38627,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,152,38809,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,268,38991,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,244,39172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,116,39354,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,304,39536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,304,39627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,304,39718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,336,39900,2,0,P|184:288|120:292,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,320,40263,2,0,P|44:316|-12:304,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,40627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,40718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,40809,6,0,L|216:168,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,268,41172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,204,41354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,84,41536,2,0,P|336:148|340:188,1,90
292,300,41900,2,0,P|340:288|396:280,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,300,42263,2,0,P|208:252|136:284,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,356,42809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,184,42991,2,0,L|115:187|70:190,1,90
328,84,43354,2,0,P|264:80|224:76,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,180,43718,6,0,B|408:192|452:172|452:172|468:144|464:96,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,104,44263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,272,44445,2,0,P|448:268|488:260,1,90
320,332,44809,2,0,P|275:324|230:322,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,368,45172,2,0,B|144:312|120:232|120:232|80:248,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,242,45718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,204,45900,2,0,P|216:256|212:296,1,90
128,68,46263,2,0,P|83:71|38:79,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,176,46627,6,0,P|180:168|236:164,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,272,46991,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,172,47172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,308,47354,2,0,P|276:304|224:300,1,90
16,296,47718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,124,47900,6,0,P|104:156|136:204,1,90
100,340,48263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,208,48445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,236,48627,2,0,L|276:228,1,90
72,124,48991,2,0,L|172:116,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,228,49354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,228,49445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,228,49536,6,0,P|324:204|308:136,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,72,50082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,104,50172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,136,50263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,260,50445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,188,50627,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,92,50809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,324,50991,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,108,51354,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,180,51718,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,260,51900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,260,51991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,260,52082,2,0,P|224:252|168:244,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,68,52445,6,0,L|264:168,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,340,52809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,280,52991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,284,53082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,288,53172,2,0,L|440:188,1,90
360,52,53536,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,124,53718,6,0,P|220:120|284:116,1,90
336,180,54082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,56,54263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,172,54445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,188,54536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,204,54627,2,0,P|67:199|22:196,1,90
232,300,54991,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,104,55172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,55263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,55354,6,0,L|344:204,1,90
104,300,55718,2,0,L|212:312,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,172,56082,2,0,L|390:162,1,90
152,196,56445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
333,309,56627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,56809,6,0,P|264:132|212:100,1,135
196,72,57172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,240,57354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,108,57536,2,0,L|388:96,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,204,57900,2,0,L|261:215,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,287,58263,6,0,L|333:310,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,352,58809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,288,58991,2,0,L|156:272,1,90
396,180,59354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,268,59536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,268,59627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,268,59718,6,0,B|215:272|153:221|153:221|176:201,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,92,60263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,92,60445,2,0,L|268:192,1,90
396,180,60809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,72,60991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,72,61082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,72,61172,6,0,P|219:79|172:84,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,224,61536,2,0,P|169:217|216:212,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,356,61900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,180,62082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,304,62263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,216,62445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,216,62627,6,0,P|268:200|216:188,1,90
168,196,62900,2,0,L|184:348,1,135
68,76,63354,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,76,63445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,76,63536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,76,63627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,76,63718,2,0,P|124:161|185:160,1,168.75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,156,64082,6,0,P|272:148|312:144,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,184,64445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,68,64627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,256,64809,2,0,P|436:244|480:236,1,90
272,320,65172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,68,65354,6,0,P|212:160|224:260,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,328,65900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,228,66082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,228,66172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,228,66263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,66445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,66627,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,140,66809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,340,66991,6,0,P|176:332|220:316,1,90
408,252,67354,2,0,L|396:352,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,104,67718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,67900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,176,68082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,32,68263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,152,68445,6,0,P|256:168|192:128,1,135
195,133,68809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,276,68991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,69172,2,0,L|220:348,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,256,69536,2,0,L|72:160,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,52,69900,6,0,P|216:64|260:72,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,128,70263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
421,312,70445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,312,70536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,312,70627,2,0,P|377:284|333:276,1,90
176,344,70991,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,188,71172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,248,71354,6,0,P|55:256|4:260,1,90
200,284,71718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,104,71900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,152,72082,2,0,P|249:144|296:140,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,216,72445,2,0,P|451:208|404:204,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,72809,6,0,L|220:340,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,116,73172,2,0,L|300:216,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,48,73536,2,0,P|172:72|136:80,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,228,73900,2,0,P|92:204|128:196,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,340,74263,6,0,B|360:280|352:220|352:220|328:244,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,228,74627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,292,74809,2,0,P|132:288|72:236,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,212,75263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,180,75354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,148,75445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,116,75536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,88,75627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,68,75718,6,0,P|136:72|200:76,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,228,76082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,128,76263,2,0,P|424:124|360:120,1,90
208,224,76627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,120,76809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,68,76991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,88,77082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,116,77172,6,0,L|76:224,1,90
96,344,77536,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,296,77718,2,0,B|356:264|356:264|352:312,1,180
344,344,78263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,84,78445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,84,78627,6,0,L|436:184,1,90
208,184,78991,2,0,P|280:172|312:168,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,173,79354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,44,79536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,196,79718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,124,79900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,80082,6,0,B|152:52|152:52|140:76,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,72,80445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,240,80627,2,0,P|152:188|224:248,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,284,81082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,284,81172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,284,81263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,280,81354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,276,81445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,264,81536,6,0,P|392:200|384:160,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,81900,2,0,P|264:144|272:184,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,312,82263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,284,82445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,82627,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,232,82809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,232,82900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,232,82991,6,0,P|176:216|144:212,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,344,83354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,228,83536,2,0,B|-8:156|20:88|20:88|64:104,1,180
164,156,84082,2,0,L|256:144,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,120,84445,5,4,0:0:0:0:
340,64,84627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,64,84718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,64,84809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,232,84991,2,0,P|380:228|320:220,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,192,85354,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,152,85445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,120,85536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,104,85627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,108,85718,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85900,12,0,87263,0:0:0:0:

Mei

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Mei 2014-09-13T06:22:25+00:00

iMage-- wrote:
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Fine.
Easy
00:04:445 (1,2) - want any hitsound (whistle?)
00:05:900 ~ 00:16:991 - i think you can set more finish. for example 00:07:172, 00:07:900 and more.ummm no finish here i think is ok
00:17:536 - add note?umm no becasue 00:16:809 (4) - 's tail is on red tick. if i add a note on a white tick, newbies may get confuse.
00:50:991 (3) - add whistle
01:05:172 (3) - move to 01:05:354rhythm will be too hard ;w;w;
01:09:172 - add finish
01:09:536 (4) - ^
Frey's Normal
00:05:900 ~ 00:16:991 - i think you can set more S:C1 finish.
00:07:172 (3) - add finish on head
00:07:900 (4) - ^
00:10:082 (4) - ^
00:10:809 (5) - ^
00:12:991 (3) - ^
00:13:718 (4) - ^
00:50:991 (7) - add whistle

so clean map!
Hard
00:05:900 ~ 00:16:991 - same with Easy. you can set more finish
00:07:172 (1) - add finish on head
00:07:900 (3) - ^
00:07:900 (3) - ^
00:10:809 (3) - ^
00:12:991 (1) - ^
00:13:718 (3) - ^
00:49:536 (1) - add whistle?umm i think no whistle is better ;w;w;w;
00:50:082 (3) - ^
01:03:718 (5) - add finish on head?

Meiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinsane
00:04:809 (3) - add finish on head
00:05:536 (3) - add finish
00:18:627 - add note betterumm no vocal so no.=. and i think this plays fine now
01:14:445 (2,3,4) - suggestion. this rhythm is more fit for me.!!

Mei chan god mapper .=.i am normal mapper orz. iMage best mapper!

Good Luck Chihara Meinori ~~~

others fixed!!!thank you >.<

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2014-09-14T02:11:57+00:00

一件一件来吧..大学刚把网络连上来..Sorry for being late

khy200610140 wrote:
normal
感覺ar低了點可以+1? (可能我太久沒打normal 覺得ar不習慣 Normal我不是经常做，但是我觉得简单一点会好点。

00:17:900 (1,2) - 這裡感覺怪怪的打著不舒服 这里我跟人声，我不是很确定改不改，看之后别人的MOD再说吧..

這個難度的排列我很喜歡w 沒找到什麼了 谢谢！

Sellenite wrote:
00:04:445 (1,2) - 来两条辣条，加个声音递增,现在太没打击感了哇。还有00:05:536改为clap吧，好听多了，后面还有finish呢
Fixed 声音递增我觉得没必要，Normal的音效没必要做的太复杂..Clap已经修改，谢谢提醒

00:19:900 (4) - 我觉得音是出现在00:19:718这里的啊，虽然降低难度了但不合曲就不好了 我为了保持间隔一致所以才放成这样..我拿不定，先放一个Whistle在这里看看，如果音效可以减小违和感的话自然是不错的。

00:23:718 (2,4) - 尽量少出现这种吧 谢谢提醒，我很少做normal，所以不清楚很多需要指导的地方。

00:51:172 (1,1) - 这么短的转盘和后面的时间间距你肯定想被嘉文吊打ww,需要2 beat的空位 Fixed 这里谢谢这个重要的提醒，那我先把转盘删掉吧

01:08:991 (3) - 连续两个finish超不好听的，滑条尾改为clap Fixed

01:14:445 (1,1) - ww Fixed 希望删掉转盘没问题

01:21:536 (2) - 这个NC吧，然后01:22:991 (1) - 这个不要NC，然后01:24:445 (3) - 这个NC Fixed

Karia wrote:
Frey's Normal
00:00:082 - Useless greenline, Delete? And hitsound is same as Easy. Fixed Thanks for reminding~

00:10:809 (5) - whistle on tail cuz it has same beat as 00:10:082 (4,5) - their head. Fixed

00:15:900 (4) - whistle on head. Fit the music imo. Fixed

00:27:354 (2) - Isn't this so far in Normal diff? Fixed My carelessness

00:33:536 (5) - Maybe NC cuz 00:42:263 (1) - , 00:56:809 (1) - ? I am not sure for this place...if more people memtion this,I'd fix it.

00:39:354 (4) - Head : Normal whistle is better imo I think using normal there will be a little bit weird.After all,this is a soft hitsound part

00:39:900 (5) - Head, Tail : ^ Same as above

00:50:991 (7,1,1) - (1,1)'s 1/1 gap is not big problem. But many Normal players feel that this spin is too short..Cuz (7,1) is 1/2 . This give Normal players 'sudden spin' so can't do it well, and this influence on the next (1) imo.. (01:14:263 (3,1,1) - this is too) Fixed Thanks for reminding,I have deleted the spins

01:08:445 (2) - (364|16) is a bit better smooth flow imo But I think a blanket also looks good

01:20:082 (1,2) - swap the NC Fixed

01:22:991 (1,3) - ^ Fixed

01:24:445 (1) - whistle on head Fixed

Zweib wrote:
[Frey's Normal]

00:19:900 (4) - 这里没什么音，钢琴音的话是在00:19:718 我仍然不知道这里应该怎么改..如果有人说出详细点的改法这里我就改了

00:25:536 (5) - 唔出界嫌疑 fixed 这都被你发现了！
好w

Narcissu wrote:
[normal]

我建議1/2和1/1只選一個疊，因為你1/2比較多所以01:19:718 (3,1) - 分開……
我觉得关系不是很大，当然这里我觉得值得改，但是待定吧

還有00:16:809 (6,7) - 最好疊
我这么放的原因是因为想做一个左右对称

轉盤接物件……嘉文以至少隔4拍的理由un一些圖了……這bpm也高我覺得下限也要半節吧 Fixed

iMage-- wrote:
Frey's Normal

00:05:900 ~ 00:16:991 - i think you can set more S:C1 finish. Good point..but if I do this,it will be difficult, because I have to add a set of custom hitsound. So I still choose to use whistle to replace the finish you memtioned.

00:50:991 (7) - add whistle Strange a bit...I'll think about it.

so clean map! Thank you for compliment

Thanks for all!!!

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2014-09-17T04:31:44+00:00

as requested~

大家都在用的藉口又出現了!!
好啦, 沒藉口我好像真的慢慢來了 orz

oshioki time T^T

onegai D:

[General]
not sure why end spinner here 01:27:263 and not 01:27:354 o_o

[Easy]
建議用1.1x DS
00:04:445 (1,2,1) - 00:06:627 (2) - 不同阿 (其實 00:06:627 (2) - 有點碰到 00:05:900 (1) - 也不好)
00:07:900 (3) - 願意灣比較大所以flow比較好嗎
00:12:445 (2) - 把頭跟尾都連在一起好不好
00:13:718 (3) - ^ 用同樣的形狀
00:30:263 (3) - 節奏?
00:32:445 (1) - flow :<
00:33:900 (4) - 灣另一邊跟 00:32:809 (2) - 一樣
00:36:082 (2) - 好像可以包住(1)?
00:37:900 (4) - 這個flow ><
00:43:718 (4) - 中間穿過slidertick然後把兩條線平行整齊點 http://puu.sh/bCbza/da6697df21.jpg
00:45:172 (6) - 抱歉我覺得這不好看 :c
00:56:445 (2) - spacing??
00:58:263 (1) - 尾在 (111,86) 停成為比較好的三角形?
01:04:082 (1) - 灣另一邊我覺得比較好看
01:15:718 (1,2) - 感覺有點怪 o-o
01:20:082 (3) - 灣少一點? http://puu.sh/bCc3g/72d1a7d039.jpg
01:21:536 (1,2) - 節奏慢了半拍的感覺
個人覺得rhythm有時候不搭音樂 o:

[Frey's Normal]
00:00:809 (2) - 好像可以包得更好
00:04:445 (1) - 明明是每兩結NC一次這就不用NC拉
00:21:536 (3) - 聽起來舒服點 http://puu.sh/bCcVT/bc92a6e686.jpg
00:24:445 (4) - ^
00:26:263 (1) - 尾有碰到 00:24:445 (4) -
00:36:445 (4) - 沒包好
00:41:172 (2) - 不確定新手看不看得到這個因為跟 00:39:900 (5) - 疊
00:44:445 (4) - 小灣另一邊可以避免跟 00:43:718 (3) - 用一樣形狀也可以有比較好flow
00:45:172 (1) - 沒包好
00:48:263 (2) - 不要clap
00:59:718 (4) - 可以包更好
01:14:263 (3,4) - 還蠻重要的一段 http://puu.sh/bCdEm/a73df13cef.jpg

[Hard]
一開始到 00:17:536 (1) - NC是每一節但這裡之後都是每兩節NC
00:07:172 (1) - 00:07:900 (3) - 用同一個形狀?
00:10:809 (3) - 試灣另一邊
00:12:991 (1) - 沒包好 00:12:445 (3) -
00:13:718 (3) - 跟 easy 一樣
00:15:900 - 可以改成圓圈?
00:18:263 (3,4) - 也可以更好
00:29:172 - 跟上個一樣
00:31:172 - 覺得這裡有個可點的東西比較好
00:48:445 (5,6) - 加油 ><
00:52:445 (1,2,3) - 3 包 1; 2 包 3?

類似這樣

00:54:809 (3) - 可以不要跟 00:53:718 (5) - overlap 嗎 D:
01:09:900 (1,2,3) - 01:10:627 (3,4,5) - 試著做個比較好看的三角形?
01:12:445 (6,7,1) - ^
01:18:445 (4,1) - 差一點 :V
01:21:900 (2,3,4) - 聽起來比較順 http://puu.sh/bCfi7/758eada8d1.jpg

Hard 跟 Insane 差 ~1.3星.. 建議把hard改更難一點
像 01:15:536 (6,1) - 01:16:991 (5,1) - 可加一個圈變成triple

[Pandiar's Insane]
00:04:809 (1) - can we not stack this lol its hard to read ):
00:11:718 (1,2) - should match imo
00:21:172 (3) - move left a bit to not overlap
00:21:718 (5) - blanket is off o:
00:24:082 (3) - avoid overlapping on the slider end ?
00:27:536 (1) - I just feel its missing the drum sound in the background o:
00:31:172 (4) - blanket a bit off
00:34:627 (6,1) - 00:36:263 (1,2) - i dont like sliders that stack at the end of another slider \: 00:39:900 (5,6) - looks nice!!
00:46:263 (8) - bend other way to avoid using same shape as 00:46:627 (1) -
00:47:900 (1) - imo would look better if it was more vertical
00:57:536 (4) - right a bit to not overlap?
00:59:718 (1) - why not try to blanket 01:00:445 (3) - ? the shape can look better too if u ask me.
01:06:991 (1) - the smallest overlap :c

[Insane]

沒事

SV 比上個insane低? :3

00:07:172 (1) - blanket ;w;
00:10:082 (1) - ^
00:12:991 (1) - 好像都可以更加強 o_o
00:18:627 - 可以加個什麼
00:27:718 (2,3,4) - 跟上個insane一樣好像可以跟鼓?
00:45:536 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - NICE PATTERN
01:11:354 (3,4,5) - 1/4 跳好像還蠻大的 o_o
01:20:082 (1,2,3) - 這.....

不錯但到後面時就距離突然格很大??

[Oracle's Extra]
00:18:445 (3,1) - 個人覺得比較好看 http://puu.sh/bCheA/ab6e442e3b.jpg
00:25:354 (3) - 跟easy 一樣 http://puu.sh/bChjZ/22ec23a749.jpg
00:27:354 (3) - 我覺得不好看 owo
00:27:718 (1) - 改成 00:28:082 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 一樣?
00:29:536 (2) - 跟上面一樣
00:35:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不知道這節奏是在跟啥
00:47:900 (1) - 00:48:627 (3) - 形狀不平衡 (凸出因該在中間)
00:56:809 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 好像不是在跟vocal o_o
01:01:536 (2) - 這樣不好看 ): 好像好一點? http://puu.sh/bChVJ/b89913d4ab.jpg 或 http://puu.sh/bChT7/cd14f2b1fc.jpg
01:01:900 (1,2) - ^
01:03:354 (1) - 圓圈的形狀可以更好

你現在的

01:17:172 (1) - 01:18:627 (1) - 我覺得這裡不適合stream l: 是在配背景的那個小聲音嗎 o-o

Good luuuck and haaave fuuuuun~~

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-09-17T05:30:57+00:00

Gaia wrote:
as requested~

大家都在用的藉口又出現了!!
好啦, 沒藉口我好像真的慢慢來了 orz
oshioki time T^T
onegai D:

[General]
not sure why end spinner here 01:27:263 and not 01:27:354 o_osuggest by Oracle and i think it is fine

[Easy]
建議用1.1x DS [color=#FF0000就是用的1.1 orz[/color]
00:04:445 (1,2,1) - 00:06:627 (2) - 不同阿 (其實 00:06:627 (2) - 有點碰到 00:05:900 (1) - 也不好)
00:07:900 (3) - 願意灣比較大所以flow比較好嗎
00:12:445 (2) - 把頭跟尾都連在一起好不好滑条很短啊这个已经很弯了
00:13:718 (3) - ^ 用同樣的形狀
00:30:263 (3) - 節奏?vocal压红线啊不好改。。。现在这个勉强能听[。。毕竟是ez ;w;/color]
00:32:445 (1) - flow :<
00:33:900 (4) - 灣另一邊跟 00:32:809 (2) - 一樣
00:36:082 (2) - 好像可以包住(1)?ez不太想包
00:37:900 (4) - 這個flow ><没位置拉滑调惹
00:43:718 (4) - 中間穿過slidertick然後把兩條線平行整齊點 http://puu.sh/bCbza/da6697df21.jpg
00:45:172 (6) - 抱歉我覺得這不好看 :c我也没什么点子;w;
00:56:445 (2) - spacing??
00:58:263 (1) - 尾在 (111,86) 停成為比較好的三角形?
01:04:082 (1) - 灣另一邊我覺得比較好看这样顺着flow好些
01:15:718 (1,2) - 感覺有點怪 o-o还ok把o-o
01:20:082 (3) - 灣少一點? http://puu.sh/bCc3g/72d1a7d039.jpg
01:21:536 (1,2) - 節奏慢了半拍的感覺
個人覺得rhythm有時候不搭音樂 o:为了控星;w;这个碎碎的鼓很多，而且人声基本上都是1/2，为了简单一点只能这样下了，如果你有好的节奏建议的话请务必告知！

[Hard]
一開始到 00:17:536 (1) - NC是每一節但這裡之後都是每兩節NC鼓激烈的地方都是1节1nc
00:07:172 (1) - 00:07:900 (3) - 用同一個形狀?
00:10:809 (3) - 試灣另一邊会overlap啊，不太想要这样
00:12:991 (1) - 沒包好 00:12:445 (3) -
00:13:718 (3) - 跟 easy 一樣这个不太想用一样的形状，没有blanket的对象话我觉得这个滑条会扭曲的比较突兀
00:15:900 - 可以改成圓圈?如果也是stack的话会很难读，这样简单一点萌萌送分嘿嘿
00:18:263 (3,4) - 也可以更好
00:29:172 - 跟上個一樣没太大必要，先看看别人怎么说吧
00:31:172 - 覺得這裡有個可點的東西比較好
00:48:445 (5,6) - 加油 ><
00:52:445 (1,2,3) - 3 包 1; 2 包 3?
類似這樣
00:54:809 (3) - 可以不要跟 00:53:718 (5) - overlap 嗎 D:
01:09:900 (1,2,3) - 01:10:627 (3,4,5) - 試著做個比較好看的三角形?
01:12:445 (6,7,1) - ^这个改起来太复杂了，要重新stack很多._.现在这样也还好啊
01:18:445 (4,1) - 差一點 :V这个真的感觉差不多了:v
01:21:900 (2,3,4) - 聽起來比較順 http://puu.sh/bCfi7/758eada8d1.jpg

Hard 跟 Insane 差 ~1.3星.. 建議把hard改更難一點这个spread我觉得还好，我的话没有鼓一般不会下1/4的节奏，hard就更不会了komen >.<
像 01:15:536 (6,1) - 01:16:991 (5,1) - 可加一個圈變成triple

[Insane]
沒事
SV 比上個insane低? :3
嗯我个人喜欢1.7
00:07:172 (1) - blanket ;w;
00:10:082 (1) - ^
00:12:991 (1) - 好像都可以更加強 o_o
00:18:627 - 可以加個什麼
00:27:718 (2,3,4) - 跟上個insane一樣好像可以跟鼓?我就是跟的鼓啊。。。这里也没有1/4的音不会加串的
00:45:536 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - NICE PATTERN嘿嘿
01:11:354 (3,4,5) - 1/4 跳好像還蠻大的 o_o不会太难打，没事o/
01:20:082 (1,2,3) - 這.....跟的是鼓啊，1.5ds也不算太变态吧._.

不錯但到後面時就距離突然格很大?? 这样爽！！！111

Good luuuck and haaave fuuuuun~~

谢谢你的mod >.<

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2014-09-17T06:50:58+00:00

Gaia wrote:
[Frey's Normal]
00:00:809 (2) - 好像可以包得更好 肉眼不是很明显吧？我其实觉得可以不改。

00:04:445 (1) - 明明是每兩結NC一次這就不用NC拉 我之所以这样，是因为音乐中有很明显的分段

00:21:536 (3) - 聽起來舒服點 http://puu.sh/bCcVT/bc92a6e686.jpg
00:24:445 (4) - ^ 好点子，但是我拿不准，先待定

00:26:263 (1) - 尾有碰到 00:24:445 (4) - 在实际玩的时候，这里应该是体现不出遮挡问题的。

00:36:445 (4) - 沒包好 不..不用那么苛刻吧..我觉得差不多了啊..？

00:41:172 (2) - 不確定新手看不看得到這個因為跟 00:39:900 (5) - 疊 待定，我也不知道新手打不打得了这个

00:44:445 (4) - 小灣另一邊可以避免跟 00:43:718 (3) - 用一樣形狀也可以有比較好flow 从00:43:354 (2,3,4,1)上下上下的击打点来说，我觉得这里flow是没有问题的。

00:45:172 (1) - 沒包好 FIxed

00:48:263 (2) - 不要clap fixed

00:59:718 (4) - 可以包更好 个人觉得不是很明显，如果还有人提起这我就去修改。

01:14:263 (3,4) - 還蠻重要的一段 http://puu.sh/bCdEm/a73df13cef.jpg Fixed

Thanks for your modding~

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-09-17T10:41:54+00:00

Gaia wrote:
[Pandiar's Insane]
00:04:809 (1) - can we not stack this lol its hard to read ):　i like this part ><
00:11:718 (1,2) - should match imo what mean? if it means ctrl+g slider,sorry no change;_l;
00:21:172 (3) - move left a bit to not overlap OK ~
00:21:718 (5) - blanket is off o: OK ~
00:24:082 (3) - avoid overlapping on the slider end ? no problem imo because it's insane diff
00:27:536 (1) - I just feel its missing the drum sound in the background o: i know but i want to make quiet part
00:31:172 (4) - blanket a bit off
00:34:627 (6,1) - 00:36:263 (1,2) - i dont like sliders that stack at the end of another slider \: 00:39:900 (5,6) - looks nice!! change another way and new rhythm
00:46:263 (8) - bend other way to avoid using same shape as 00:46:627 (1) - OK ~
00:47:900 (1) - imo would look better if it was more vertical changed a liitle
00:57:536 (4) - right a bit to not overlap? move a bit
00:59:718 (1) - why not try to blanket 01:00:445 (3) - ? the shape can look better too if u ask me.spice slider lol
01:06:991 (1) - the smallest overlap :c um...sorry i wanna keep my pattern

thank you for modding　(*ﾟｰﾟ)>

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albatross11

44 posts

Joined December 2013

albatross11 2014-09-21T08:24:38+00:00

好歌好图！
打了一遍感觉没什么违和感。。太弱摸不太懂就不摸啦~
射个星先╮(╯▽╰)╭
祝rank~

Last edited by albatross11 2014-09-22T17:12:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-09-21T08:58:55+00:00

From my queue~

[Easy]

01:20:082- why not add finish?

[Hard]

00:21:172 (2) - not good flow, imo. Ctrl+G?

[Insane]

00:47:354 (3,4) - why not blanket correctly?
01:03:354 (1,2,3) - too large DS?
01:09:809- I prefer to add a note

[Frey's Normal]

00:17:900~00:40:809- I prefer to increase hitsound's volume a bit
00:59:718 (4,5) - check blanketting
01:20:082- finish?

[Pandiar's Insane]

01:02:627 (1,2) - 強い音なので、何かhitsound付けた方が良いと思います。。。

[Oracle's Extra]

00:33:536 (1,2) - exchange their positions
01:17:172~01:20:627- cool!
01:23:900 (2,3) - I prefer to increase DS more

almost good~☆
Meinori-chan <3
~Good Luck~

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-09-21T22:53:14+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[Easy]
01:20:082- why not add finish?
[Hard]
00:21:172 (2) - not good flow, imo. Ctrl+G?
[Insane]
00:47:354 (3,4) - why not blanket correctly?ummm not blanket plays better for me..and i dont like blanket somuch
01:03:354 (1,2,3) - too large DS?that will be fine o/ i asked many people test this and it works well
01:09:809- I prefer to add a note
almost good~☆
Meinori-chan <3
~Good Luck~

others fixed o/
thank you RandomEffect san >.<

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2014-09-22T13:12:33+00:00

~~不要打我，我写得好长~~

From your req.

General

Fine

Oracle's Extra

00:00:082 (1,2,3,1) - After i listened the music,it feel like a group of 4.
00:04:445 (1,2) - Too far imo,Make them close?
00:47:900 (1) - Em...Too ugly...
00:49:536 (1) - Why not change into soft-finish,I feel more comfortable.
00:56:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - Isn't good rhythm...Only for harder?But there is a strong vocal here.Beats at vocal start will be better imo.
01:08:445 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above.
01:11:354 (1,1,1) - Mute made me feel weird.Change soft-sampleset at slider is enough imo.

Insane

00:00:082 (1) - Add a Finish at slider head?I think there is a few empty.
00:02:991 (1) - Same as above.
00:17:900 - The sound is too low imo,Try 60% volume.
00:26:263 (3) - Add a whistle at slider head,Have a downbeat here.
00:27:536 (1) - Add a whistle will be better.
00:27:536 (4) - I feel weird here,Try this rhythm.
img
00:48:627 (1,4) - nazi,Blanket better.
00:55:718 (2) - Why not add at slider head.This whistle parts is sound like very weird.Follow the vocal to add will be better imo.
01:02:627 (1) - Use 3/4 slider better here.Catch the music instead of loosen.
01:08:445 (1) - Same as above
01:11:354 (3,4,5) - Mute made me feel weird.Change soft-sampleset at slider is enough imo.

Pandiar's Insane

Your hitsound too weak imo,Why not try to add more finish or clap?
I prefer to use HP7 OD8...
score

00:18:445 (4) - Weird rhythm,Try this.
img
00:25:172 (6) - Stack at 00:25:354 (7) - head.Sudden use 0.7x DS is so strange.
00:35:718 (5,6) - Make them far a little.
00:36:263 (1) - Don't use 3/4 at here plz,Use 1/1 will have a best effect.
00:48:627 (4) - Use 1/1 slider will be better.
00:54:445 (4) - Same as above.

Well,Too Many hitsound question,So i make a box for you.
hitsound
1. 00:00:082 - Why not use "2/4 whistle" at prelude?
2. 00:11:354 (3) - Missed Clap here
3. 00:13:354 (2,3,4,5) - Use whistle instead of clap.
4. 00:13:354 (2) - Add a clap at slider tail.
5. 00:14:082 (6) - Missed clap at slider tail.
6. 00:16:445 (3) - Change into Finish will be better,Don't hesitate to use finish at downbeat.
7. 00:26:263 (1) - Add a whistle at slider head,For keep consistent with front.
8. 00:26:991 (3) - Add a whistle at slider too.Follow the music changes.
9. 00:27:354 (4) - Add a whistle,Reason same as above.
10. 00:27:536 (1) - Add a whistle at slider head.
11. 00:28:082 (2) - Add a clap at slider head and add a finish at 00:28:445 (3) - .
12. 00:35:354 (3,4) - Change into whistle,If you want add hitsound to express music,Do not use default clap.
13. 00:39:354 (1,4,5,6) - (Whistle) Change into Finish.
14. 00:49:172 (6) - Missed clap here.
15. 00:49:536 (1) - Add a Finish at slider head,When music power more and more strong.Just add finish.
16. 00:50:082 (2) - Add a Whistle.
17. 00:50:991 (1) - Change into Finish,Reason same as 00:49:536 (1) - .
18. 00:55:354 (1) - Add a Finish at slider head.
19. 00:56:809 (1) - Add a Whistle at slider head.
20. 00:59:718 (1) - Add a Whistle at slider head.
21. 01:01:172 (1) - Change into Finish.
22. 01:02:627 (1) - Add a Finish at slider head.
23. 01:02:900 (2) - Add a Finish at slider head and tail.
24. 01:03:354 (3) - Add a Finish.
25. 01:03:718 (7) - Add a Whistle
26. 01:05:354 (1) - Add a Whistle at slider head.
27. 01:06:991 (1) - Add a Finish at slider head.
28. 01:08:445 (1) - Add a Whistle at slider head.
29. 01:08:809 (2) - Missed clap here.
30. 01:11:354 (1,4) - Add a whistle at slider head.
31. 01:14:263 (1,2,3) - Change into Finish.
32. 01:20:082 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
33. 01:24:991 (5) - Change into Finish.

Hard

Fine

00:04:809 (2,4) - Change into whistle will have a better effect.
00:09:172 (2) - Remove slider tail whistle?Sound like a little spam.
00:17:900 - The sound is too low imo,Try 60% volume.
00:26:263 (3) - Add a whistle at slider head,Keep consistent with front.
00:39:718 (2,3,4,5) - Why use this weird rhythm?Use it will be better.
img
Btw,Add a soft-finish at 00:39:718 -
Add Finish at big white line.There are powerful.
00:55:354 (1) -
01:01:172 (1) -
01:06:991 (1) -
01:14:263 (5) -
01:03:718 (5) - Change into soft-finish for remove spam.

Frey's Normal

Fine.

00:02:991 (1) - Add a soft-finish at slider head?I think there is a few empty.
00:07:900 (4) - Remove a whistle at slider tail and add a clap will be better,Now sound like a litter whistle spam.
00:10:809 (5) - Same the above.
00:13:718 (4) - Above~
00:17:900 - The sound is too low imo,Try 60% volume.
00:39:354 (4) - Why not try this?Add a circle at 00:40:445 - is so bad...Cuz you isn't follow durm and it is very weak imo.
img
Btw,Add a soft-finish at 00:39:718 -
I think you missed clap in these places.
00:41:172 (2) -
00:42:263 (1) - Slider tail
00:43:718 (3) - Same as above
00:50:991 (7) - Why not add a finish here?I feel the power from the sound.
00:54:991 (5) - Add a finish at slider tail,Cuz ♂Power♂.
00:57:354 (2) - Suddenly whistle?In order to maintain the overall,You'd better remove it.
01:01:172 (1) - I feel the power again,Add a finish at slider head.
01:06:627 (6) - SAme as above parts.
01:08:991 (3) - Remove to maintain the overall?If you accept 00:57:354 (2) - point of view.
01:12:809 (1) - Add a finish will be better.
01:14:263 (3) - Why not add a whistle at slider head.
01:20:082 (4) - Add a soft-finish at slider head,If you love it.

Easy

Very neat,good work.

00:29:172 - The sound is too low imo,Try 60% volume.
00:39:354 (1) - Try this rhythm,This rhythm more appropriate than now,At the same time,It is simple for easy.
img
Btw,Add a soft-finish at 00:39:718 -
00:48:809 (4) - I feel a Downbeat at big white line,But you did not add any hitshound here,Try to add a soft-finish?
00:55:354 (1) - I can feel power at slider head,add a finish let me fly.
01:08:445 (3) - Same as above,let me fly again?

Other

Goodluck.

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-09-22T14:33:43+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
~~不要打我，我写得好长~~

From your req.

General

Fine

Insane
00:00:082 (1) - Add a Finish at slider head?I think there is a few empty.
00:02:991 (1) - Same as above.
00:17:900 - The sound is too low imo,Try 60% volume.change to 40%
00:26:263 (3) - Add a whistle at slider head,Have a downbeat here.
00:27:536 (1) - Add a whistle will be better.
00:27:536 (4) - I feel weird here,Try this rhythm.sorry i prefer current one since that fits music better for me
img
00:48:627 (1,4) - nazi,Blanket better.
00:55:718 (2) - Why not add at slider head.This whistle parts is sound like very weird.Follow the vocal to add will be better imo.
01:02:627 (1) - Use 3/4 slider better here.Catch the music instead of loosen.
01:08:445 (1) - Same as above
01:11:354 (3,4,5) - Mute made me feel weird.Change soft-sampleset at slider is enough imo.sorry but when i change it to soft it comes much weird for me

Hard

Fine
00:04:809 (2,4) - Change into whistle will have a better effect.
00:09:172 (2) - Remove slider tail whistle?Sound like a little spam.
00:17:900 - The sound is too low imo,Try 60% volume.
00:26:263 (3) - Add a whistle at slider head,Keep consistent with front.
00:39:718 (2,3,4,5) - Why use this weird rhythm?Use it will be better.well this one is not that weird for me and the your are already used by normal so i want it more chanllenge(and fun o/
img
Btw,Add a soft-finish at 00:39:718 -
Add Finish at big white line.There are powerful.
00:55:354 (1) -
01:01:172 (1) -
01:06:991 (1) -
01:14:263 (5) -
01:03:718 (5) - Change into soft-finish for remove spam.

Easy

Very neat,good work.
00:29:172 - The sound is too low imo,Try 60% volume.
00:39:354 (1) - Try this rhythm,This rhythm more appropriate than now,At the same time,It is simple for easy.
img
Btw,Add a soft-finish at 00:39:718 -
00:48:809 (4) - I feel a Downbeat at big white line,But you did not add any hitshound here,Try to add a soft-finish?
00:55:354 (1) - I can feel power at slider head,add a finish let me fly.sikao
01:08:445 (3) - Same as above,let me fly again?

Other

Goodluck.

thank you lkx >.<

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2014-09-22T14:54:55+00:00

这曲。。。 B站看散人励志被洗脑过

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-09-23T02:32:41+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
[Pandiar's Insane]
01:02:627 (1,2) - 強い音なので、何かhitsound付けた方が良いと思います。。。 finishいれときました～

modding ありがとうございました！

lkx_Shore wrote:
Pandiar's Insane

Your hitsound too weak imo,Why not try to add more finish or clap?
I prefer to use HP7 OD8... i think my diff is like light Insane and have many NC so OD7HP8 is fit
score
00:18:445 (4) - Weird rhythm,Try this. i don't think
img
00:25:172 (6) - Stack at 00:25:354 (7) - head.Sudden use 0.7x DS is so strange.
http://puu.sh/bK8jL/2f98bb4f8b.png
00:35:718 (5,6) - Make them far a little. OK ~
00:36:263 (1) - Don't use 3/4 at here plz,Use 1/1 will have a best effect. umm....sry no change
00:48:627 (4) - Use 1/1 slider will be better.OK ~
00:54:445 (4) - Same as above.
sry no change

Well,Too Many hitsound question,So i make a box for you. something changed with reference to it but i like simple hitsound
hitsound
00:00:082 - Why not use "2/4 whistle" at prelude?
00:11:354 (3) - Missed Clap here
00:13:354 (2,3,4,5) - Use whistle instead of clap.
00:13:354 (2) - Add a clap at slider tail.
00:14:082 (6) - Missed clap at slider tail.
00:16:445 (3) - Change into Finish will be better,Don't hesitate to use finish at downbeat.
00:26:263 (1) - Add a whistle at slider head,For keep consistent with front.
00:26:991 (3) - Add a whistle at slider too.Follow the music changes.
00:27:354 (4) - Add a whistle,Reason same as above.
00:27:536 (1) - Add a whistle at slider head.
00:28:082 (2) - Add a clap at slider head and add a finish at 00:28:445 (3) - .
00:35:354 (3,4) - Change into whistle,If you want add hitsound to express music,Do not use default clap.
00:39:354 (1,4,5,6) - (Whistle) Change into Finish.
00:49:172 (6) - Missed clap here.
00:49:536 (1) - Add a Finish at slider head,When music power more and more strong.Just add finish.
00:50:082 (2) - Add a Whistle.
00:50:991 (1) - Change into Finish,Reason same as 00:49:536 (1) - .
00:55:354 (1) - Add a Finish at slider head.
00:56:809 (1) - Add a Whistle at slider head.
00:59:718 (1) - Add a Whistle at slider head.
01:01:172 (1) - Change into Finish.
01:02:627 (1) - Add a Finish at slider head.
01:02:900 (2) - Add a Finish at slider head and tail.
01:03:354 (3) - Add a Finish.
01:03:718 (7) - Add a Whistle
01:05:354 (1) - Add a Whistle at slider head.
01:06:991 (1) - Add a Finish at slider head.
01:08:445 (1) - Add a Whistle at slider head.
01:08:809 (2) - Missed clap here.
01:11:354 (1,4) - Add a whistle at slider head.
01:14:263 (1,2,3) - Change into Finish.
01:20:082 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
01:24:991 (5) - Change into Finish.

thank you for modding >o<

code

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Creator:Mei
Version:Pandiar's Insane
Source:喰霊-零-
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xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2014-09-26T06:35:46+00:00

Hi, I decided to mod your map from my queue.

[General]
Looks fine!

[Easy]

The break is a little long and doesn't really belong at all. You don't need breaks in TV sizes.
00:41:172 (1) - Use 1/1 repeat slider so you don't ignore the vocal at 00:41:536
00:55:354 (1) - ^ There are plenty of other long sliders so you don't need these to be long too.

[Normal]

00:39:900 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - The stacks are neat but it's too much and will confuse normal players. I highly recommend unstacking most of it.
00:56:809 (1,2) - Try to avoid 3/4 gap altogether:
01:02:627 (3,4) - ^
01:08:445 (2,3) - ^

[Hard]

01:03:172 (3) - This circular placement is a little easier to read.
SPOILER
01:09:536 (3) - Right angle flow is kind of awkward and the stack is confusing, maybe this is better.
SPOILER

[Pandiar's Insane]

00:05:172 (2,4) - Blanket would be neater.
00:24:627 (5,6,7) - I know small spacing here fits the music, but this kind of overlapped spacing looks like 1/4. Increase the spacing so they don't overlap at least.
00:36:263 (1) - improve blanket; middle point is a bit close.
00:58:263 (1) - How about repeat 1/2 slider so you don't ignore vocals
01:02:900 (2) - Put circle at the end so you can have a keypress on the last vocal.
01:08:445 (1) - ^ Turn into 1/2 sliders followed by 2 circles; first circle for vocal and next circle for drum.
01:14:263 (1) - The strong drum is on the blue 3/4 tick at 01:14:536 so please don't end slider there. Put circle or slider on 01:14:536
01:20:082 (1) - ^

[Insane]
Holy shit I want this one ranked, so easy for a 4.57 star song. I think I could FC this.

00:57:172 (3) - I'd replace this with two circles so you can have a keypress on the vocal at 00:57:354
01:02:627 (1,2) - Similar thing here, I don't like sliders ending on strong, important vocals like this.
01:08:445 (1,2) - ^
01:21:354 (6) - ctrl-G would play better.

Great, fun diff!

[Extra]

00:12:991 (6,1) - Why don't you improve the blanket like this:
SPOILER
00:28:991 (9,1) - How about a bigger jump here to fit the music: there's a big crash since it's the start of a new measure and section.
00:51:718 (1) - I don't think this needs NC, it can go with the same combo as the previous objects.
01:02:627 (1) - This part is very strong, so it would fit music better to map a keypress on each note, like 01:14:263 (1,2,1) - instead of slider repeat or slider end.
01:15:354 (2) - I don't think this slider fits the music here, and you don't want to ignore the vocals at 01:15:536 and 01:15:718

Really nice mapset. I hope you rank soon so I can play the insanes for pp! They're just the right difficulty for me xD

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-09-27T04:22:36+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
Hi, I decided to mod your map from my queue.

[General]
Looks fine!

[Easy]
The break is a little long and doesn't really belong at all. You don't need breaks in TV sizes.keep this since i think it fits(no obivious durm there) ~~andiamlazy~~
00:41:172 (1) - Use 1/1 repeat slider so you don't ignore the vocal at 00:41:536
00:55:354 (1) - ^ There are plenty of other long sliders so you don't need these to be long too.

[Hard]
01:03:172 (3) - This circular placement is a little easier to read.you are stacking the note? well i just follow the distance so i think it should be fine
SPOILER
01:09:536 (3) - Right angle flow is kind of awkward and the stack is confusing, maybe this is better.
SPOILER

[Insane]
Holy shit I want this one ranked, so easy for a 4.57 star song. I think I could FC this.
00:57:172 (3) - I'd replace this with two circles so you can have a keypress on the vocal at 00:57:354
01:02:627 (1,2) - Similar thing here, I don't like sliders ending on strong, important vocals like this. this is kind overmap for me..and the i think to emphasis the vocal here is not that necessary.Meanwhile i am gonna follow the rhythm 01:01:900 (1,2,3,4) - so not going to overmap there.
01:08:445 (1,2) - ^^
01:21:354 (6) - ctrl-G would play better.
Great, fun diff!

Really nice mapset. I hope you rank soon so I can play the insanes for pp! They're just the right difficulty for me xD

others fixed o/ than you xxdeathx

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-09-28T05:38:45+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
Hi, I decided to mod your map from my queue.

[Pandiar's Insane]
00:05:172 (2,4) - Blanket would be neater.　OK ~
00:24:627 (5,6,7) - I know small spacing here fits the music, but this kind of overlapped spacing looks like 1/4. Increase the spacing so they don't overlap at least. increase the spacing
00:36:263 (1) - improve blanket; middle point is a bit close.OK ~
00:58:263 (1) - How about repeat 1/2 slider so you don't ignore vocals oops nice
01:02:900 (2) - Put circle at the end so you can have a keypress on the last vocal. i like current pattern ><
01:08:445 (1) - ^ Turn into 1/2 sliders followed by 2 circles; first circle for vocal and next circle for drum.^
01:14:263 (1) - The strong drum is on the blue 3/4 tick at 01:14:536 so please don't end slider there. Put circle or slider on 01:14:536 ^ (´・ω・｀)
01:20:082 (1) - ^ ^ (◞‸◟)

thank you for modding ~~ !

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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-09-28T07:56:47+00:00

update! And i also changed audio lead-in

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2014-09-29T04:58:14+00:00

Being a freshman,lots of things have to do..
;_ ; very sorry for delay, let me reply ur mods one by one.

RandomEffect wrote:
[Frey's Normal]

00:17:900~00:40:809- I prefer to increase hitsound's volume a bit
Fixed Increase by 15%

00:59:718 (4,5) - check blanketting
Fixed

01:20:082- finish?
Fixed

lkx_Shore wrote:
[Frey's Normal]

00:02:991 (1) - Add a soft-finish at slider head?I think there is a few empty.
I think there is no stress in the music, and I don't think this part should add some hitsounds

00:07:900 (4) - Remove a whistle at slider tail and add a clap will be better,Now sound like a litter whistle spam.
00:10:809 (5) - Same the above.
00:13:718 (4) - Above~
Well,no offence, but I think it sounds a bit weird if I change it like that.

00:17:900 - The sound is too low imo,Try 60% volume.
Fixed increase to 50%

00:39:354 (4) - Why not try this?Add a circle at 00:40:445 - is so bad...Cuz you isn't follow durm and it is very weak imo.
img
Btw,Add a soft-finish at 00:39:718 -

Surely,your idea is pretty nice though, I prefer the flow before. BTW,I fixed the hitsound

I think you missed clap in these places.
00:41:172 (2) -
00:42:263 (1) - Slider tail
00:43:718 (3) - Same as above
Indeed I deleted these claps last update.I am on purpose to do it

00:50:991 (7) - Why not add a finish here?I feel the power from the sound.

Fixed

00:54:991 (5) - Add a finish at slider tail,Cuz ♂Power♂.
I disagree. It sounds a little disturbing

00:57:354 (2) - Suddenly whistle?In order to maintain the overall,You'd better remove it.
Fixed

01:01:172 (1) - I feel the power again,Add a finish at slider head.
01:06:627 (6) - SAme as above parts.
Same as above

01:08:991 (3) - Remove to maintain the overall?If you accept 00:57:354 (2) - point of view.
Fixed

01:12:809 (1) - Add a finish will be better.
I just think I actually don't like put too much finish hitsounds into this diff.

01:14:263 (3) - Why not add a whistle at slider head.
Fixed good point

01:20:082 (4) - Add a soft-finish at slider head,If you love it.
It sounds stange...

xxdeathx wrote:
[Normal]

00:39:900 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - The stacks are neat but it's too much and will confuse normal players. I highly recommend unstacking most of it.

To be honest, I love this part I made, give me some time to think about it seriously

00:56:809 (1,2) - Try to avoid 3/4 gap altogether:

01:02:627 (3,4) - ^
01:08:445 (2,3) - ^
If more people mention this,I would change it.......Hard to say,but,I cannot think about a idea that how to replace them in a nicer shape and a better flow.

Thanks for all guys ,and thank for taking time to mod my diff .

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-09-30T05:05:41+00:00

iMage-- wrote:
Mei~~~~~~~~~~
Pandiarさ～～～～～～ん
Oracle~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~HEYYYYYY

YO

Oracle's Extra
00:00:082 (1) - add finish
00:05:536 (3) - add finish on head
01:15:354 (2) - add finish on tail

so hard ;w;
i like this diff's stream. so fun \:D/ Nice~~
Good Luck Chihara Meinori ~~~

ALL FIXED!!

Gaia wrote:
as requested~

大家都在用的藉口又出現了!!
好啦, 沒藉口我好像真的慢慢來了 orz
oshioki time T^T
onegai D:

[Oracle's Extra]
00:18:445 (3,1) - 個人覺得比較好看 http://puu.sh/bCheA/ab6e442e3b.jpg 喜欢现在的
00:25:354 (3) - 跟easy 一樣 http://puu.sh/bChjZ/22ec23a749.jpg 现在的就行啊
00:27:354 (3) - 我覺得不好看 owo D:
00:27:718 (1) - 改成 00:28:082 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 一樣? 想强调开头的那个音
00:29:536 (2) - 跟上面一樣喜欢现在的
00:35:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不知道這節奏是在跟啥仔细听背景音
00:47:900 (1) - 00:48:627 (3) - 形狀不平衡 (凸出因該在中間) 故意的;w;
00:56:809 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 好像不是在跟vocal o_o 跟的是背景音
01:01:536 (2) - 這樣不好看 ): 好像好一點? http://puu.sh/bChVJ/b89913d4ab.jpg 或 http://puu.sh/bChT7/cd14f2b1fc.jpg 可是我觉得很好看orz
01:01:900 (1,2) - ^
01:03:354 (1) - 圓圈的形狀可以更好好！很有用的方法，学到了
你現在的
01:17:172 (1) - 01:18:627 (1) - 我覺得這裡不適合stream l: 是在配背景的那個小聲音嗎 o-o 对的

Good luuuck and haaave fuuuuun~~

谢谢来mod！！

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~ hi!!!

[Oracle's Extra]
00:33:536 (1,2) - exchange their positions tried but prefer mine
01:17:172~01:20:627- cool! thank you!
01:23:900 (2,3) - I prefer to increase DS more done!
almost good~☆
Meinori-chan <3
~Good Luck~

thank u for modding~

lkx_Shore wrote:
~~不要打我，我写得好长~~ 打你

From your req.

Oracle's Extra
00:00:082 (1,2,3,1) - After i listened the music,it feel like a group of 4. yes..i'm grouping them by the tune difference.
00:04:445 (1,2) - Too far imo,Make them close? okay
00:47:900 (1) - Em...Too ugly...
00:49:536 (1) - Why not change into soft-finish,I feel more comfortable. good idea
00:56:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - Isn't good rhythm...Only for harder?But there is a strong vocal here.Beats at vocal start will be better imo. i'm not following vocal here~
01:08:445 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above. ^
01:11:354 (1,1,1) - Mute made me feel weird.Change soft-sampleset at slider is enough imo.i guess it's fine as is..

Other

Goodluck.

谢谢mod!!

xxdeathx wrote:
Hi, I decided to mod your map from my queue.

[Extra]
00:12:991 (6,1) - Why don't you improve the blanket like this: good
SPOILER
00:28:991 (9,1) - How about a bigger jump here to fit the music: there's a big crash since it's the start of a new measure and section. i think jump in the opposite direction is enough
00:51:718 (1) - I don't think this needs NC, it can go with the same combo as the previous objects. removed
01:02:627 (1) - This part is very strong, so it would fit music better to map a keypress on each note, like 01:14:263 (1,2,1) - instead of slider repeat or slider end. i liked how i hold the reverse slider here, sorry!
01:15:354 (2) - I don't think this slider fits the music here, and you don't want to ignore the vocals at 01:15:536 and 01:15:718 it's fine i'm following a different track
Really nice mapset. I hope you rank soon so I can play the insanes for pp! They're just the right difficulty for me xD

谢谢！

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-12T19:19:03+00:00

Where is the paARadise? ? ?? ? Lost pls call 1-800-338-9090

Oracle:
00:04:627 (2) - I will wire you $5 via PayPal if you can tell me with a straight face that people are hitting this and having a good time.
00:05:900 - Am i missing something here?
00:56:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - JESUS.
01:08:445 (1,2,3,4,5) - CHRIST.
01:16:082 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ok ill wire you another $5 if you can tell me what you're mapping to here.
01:24:991 (1,2,1) - THERE IS A SPEED LIMIT AND YOU ARE PASSING IT

Insane:
01:03:354 (1,2) - youre gonna win $5 too

Panda:
00:04:445 (9) - yeah just use hitnormals. apply this to the rest of the map too

Hard:
Ye

Normal:
ye

Easy:
ye

So tl;dr I like the entire mapset but jesus christ Oracle calm down like I'd like it if some high leveled players looked at the map and gave some more pointers

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-10-15T09:54:03+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Panda:
00:04:445 (9) - yeah just use hitnormals. apply this to the rest of the map too

i should do so?
if it is not Unrankble i want to no change
because i don't like normal sounds....

thank you for modding >w<

code

osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:Paradise Lost (TVサイズ)
Artist:Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:茅原実里
Creator:Mei
Version:Pandiar's Insane
Source:喰霊-零-
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Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-10-25T18:03:00+00:00

@cdfa
i reduced the spacing of the first sliders you mentioned.
about the stream...try to mod it with headphones =w=
i guess you're not plannin to recheck tho..

~~!summon Lust~~ they're busy at modding other maps so

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2014-12-06T07:11:54+00:00

Hi o/
Request from Oracle.

Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

雖然不知道你是不是故意的, 有些間距是1.2x, 又有些1.1x, 嘛..雖然沒說不可以, 建議是統一起來用一樣間距, 對newbie可能比較容易些, 畢竟這是給newbie們玩的, 間距不同可能造成一些判斷錯誤

nothing to say~

[Frey's Normal]

00:23:718 (2,4) - 不太建議這種circle遮擋於slider的尾巴梗出現在newbie的難度裡, 你還是想要用的話, 00:24:445 (4) - NC, 主要是因為顏色上的相同, 會產生讀圖上的不便
00:26:263 (1) - 在slider-end加個whistle? 在這裡弄成一個低-高-高-低的音, 感覺蠻適合這部分的音樂表達
01:02:627 (3) - NC? 同樣跟00:56:809 (1,2) - 一樣是3/4節奏, combo方式上卻不相同, 若是故意的, 我還是想建議你NC, 因為就只有這裡的節奏劇烈變化. 01:08:445 (2) - 同這
01:25:809 (1) - 若是這spinner是跟著vocal的話, 應該是01:26:445 - 開始吧?

~

[Hard]

00:55:718 (2,3) - 試試看這兩個分別獨自ctrl+G, 感覺上flow比較順暢
01:25:900 (1) - 同Normal

~

[Pandiar's Insane]

just suggestion: HP is a little high for me, and it's also make 00:17:536 - ~ 00:28:445 - reduce the hit point, try to -0.5 or 1.0?
00:36:082 (6) - it's so close that would make player hesitate a moment beacuse all 1/2 notes have large distance, try to use 1.2x or bigger distance?
00:51:354 (2) - try to move to 88|12 or other farther place, it would make player hard to read due to the distance is a little like 00:50:627 (6,7) - . Though you use NC to avoid the error, it's still not enough
01:25:900 (1) - if the spinner follow the vocal, I think it should start at 01:25:809 -

~

[Insane]

00:28:809 (1) - 考慮NC? 因為這裡的distance突然變化成1/4跳
01:25:900 (1) - 同Normal

nice diff!

[Oracle 's Extra]

00:06:991 (5) - 感覺這裡NC才符合00:09:900 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡的設置. 00:12:809 (5) - 同這
00:54:991 (4) - 這裡的flow讓我不太舒服..., 原因一樣就是實際的移動跟想像的移動不同, 造成的不對勁感覺, 試試這樣子?
```
280,240,54991,2,0,L|188:216,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:56:445 (4) - 同上, 試著不要彎曲, 或是改到100|196 或其他位子
01:15:263 (2) - 總覺得這個下的位子不對啊.., 不是應該在01:15:263 - 么?, 試著把01:14:809 (1) - 結束在01:15:172 -

(pokes

that's all!
call me back after checking

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2014-12-06T18:54:10+00:00

Loneight wrote:
[Frey's Normal]

00:23:718 (2,4) - 不太建議這種circle遮擋於slider的尾巴梗出現在newbie的難度裡, 你還是想要用的話, 00:24:445 (4) - NC, 主要是因為顏色上的相同, 會產生讀圖上的不便
Fixed

00:26:263 (1) - 在slider-end加個whistle? 在這裡弄成一個低-高-高-低的音, 感覺蠻適合這部分的音樂表達
Fixed 同时添加了00:27:536 (3) 的 Whistle

01:02:627 (3) - NC? 同樣跟00:56:809 (1,2) - 一樣是3/4節奏, combo方式上卻不相同, 若是故意的, 我還是想建議你NC, 因為就只有這裡的節奏劇烈變化.
01:08:445 (2) - 同這 All Fixed

01:25:809 (1) - 若是這spinner是跟著vocal的話, 應該是01:26:445 - 開始吧? 1:26:445? 确定没有打错吗？ Vocal的拖长音在01:25:718 (3) 就开始了。

Thanks for modding!

↓ ↓ ↓

Code for Queen Mei

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: garei0.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 51718
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5900,17536,29172,40809,52445
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Paradise Lost (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Paradise Lost (TVサイズ)
Artist:Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:茅原実里
Creator:Mei
Version:Frey's Normal
Source:喰霊-零-
Tags:ga rei zero opening frey pandiar oracle
BeatmapID:489868
BeatmapSetID:204020

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"1 (14).jpg",0,0
Video,0,"nyanyaiamop.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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412,304,41536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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104,214,56445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,140,56809,6,0,P|224:136|276:128,1,82.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Sellenite wrote:

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Zweib wrote:

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Kamio Misuzu wrote:

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

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Gaia wrote:

Gaia wrote:

Gaia wrote:

RandomEffect wrote:

General

Oracle's Extra

Insane

Pandiar's Insane

Hard

Frey's Normal

Easy

Other

lkx_Shore wrote:

General

Insane

Hard

Easy

Other

RandomEffect wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

Pandiar's Insane

xxdeathx wrote:

xxdeathx wrote:

RandomEffect wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

xxdeathx wrote:

iMage-- wrote:

Gaia wrote:

RandomEffect wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

Oracle's Extra

Other

xxdeathx wrote:

CDFA wrote:

[Easy]

[Frey's Normal]

[Hard]

[Pandiar's Insane]

[Insane]

[Oracle 's Extra]

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