[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

*sigh* ... i'm tried about anime song
and eroge are similar kind to anime
but never mind i will mod this for B00BS TKS

[Muzukashii]
00:16:661 (30) - ? why k : it's actually d and other diff (except Kantan) are d - i dont mind that. k fits with the flow.
00:23:075 (67) - d : ^ - i want to use more simple pattern like this.
00:29:696 (105) - d : ^

00:36:523 (140) - follow her voice #nonsense


00:49:558 (201) - d : ^
00:52:868 (219) - d : her boo.. voice are going down - hmm,, if someone suggest the same thing, i will consider this.

00:56:385 (236) - follow her voice #nonsense


00:59:489 (248,249) - Ctrl+G : fit to her voice better - sounds already ok for me.

o.O 290 BPM !? i'm get now why your Muzu nearly to be Oni
[Oni]
00:16:351 (31,32) - Ctrl+G : snare is in 31 not 32 - thats intentional to make easier.

00:18:627 (49) - k : i hear something at this and it's fit to k
also you will get beautiful pattern ! -> dkkd kddk #profit

00:21:937 (76) - k : ^
00:25:247 (101) - k : ^
00:28:558 (128) - k : ^ keep some of this duplicate mod for more variety pattern - sounds good. so fixed them.

00:45:109 (236) - you probably know
00:48:420 (263) -

01:03:834 (364) - ahhh ~ that kawaii voice #comment

01:27:885 (491) - move to 01:27:782 (490) - and change to k : follow her voice - sorry i like current one.

01:33:109 (535) - hmm you really know it
01:36:420 (562) - yeah
01:39:730 (587) - you feel some bore now
01:43:040 (614) - haha

[Inner Oni]

00:08:305 (14) - ikr this note you make player playing without stuck by make player thought there were usual pattern and snap but there are no sound here delete or move to 00:07:953 - yeah there is no sound but that plays better for me.

00:16:351 (34,35) - Ctrl+G : like Oni ^ - fixed.

00:16:558 (36) - It's Obvious d - i love this arrange sound.

00:21:937 (91,92,93) - and repeat this pattern until end (keep some for more variety pattern) - i dont want to use the same pattern.

01:13:247 (491,492) - Ctrl+G : dunno what to say but i feel like this better - following the snaredrum.

01:29:385 (626,627,628,629,630) - kkkkk : since i saw your Oni has kkk on this part and her voice are going to break some glass - i like the current pattern :3

awww fu- /me nosebleed

Good Boobs Luck

1. 00:13:717 (1) - nitpick here but perhaps replace this spinner with a kat on 00:13:717 - and a kat on 00:14:775 - ? there's still some pretty clear rhythms going on in the background and this is the only spinner in the entire set so perhaps consistency is the best option here? also the current spinner is quite close to the don so that could be something to consider too
2. 01:45:109 (59) - another nitpick but perhaps this final note may catch beginners off-guard due to the fact that it's the only note on a red tick, and while the SV is 0.6, yes, there is no barline indication like all the other notes; 'cause the map ends before that bar. it would sound weird to apply this suggestion but consistency is practically a must for beginners so maybe consider moving this note 1/2 beat later to the downbeat?
3. this is a really nice Kantan actually, a bit simple but seems really good o.o

1. 01:15:420 (171,172,173,174,175,176,177) - perhaps this section might play a little bit awkwardly since it uses both 3/2 finishers and 1/1 finishers; perhaps make it something like this for more simplicity? currently I think the pattern is a bit difficult.
2. 01:31:144 (223) - another nitpick but perhaps make this into a kat for a nicer-looking pattern and something that would play a bit less complex due to less colour changes? d k k fits the vocals best and it gives the D a bit more meaning
3. also a really nice Futsuu :3

1. 00:08:070 - how about adding a don here? there's a clear instrument lead-in to the 1/3 here so perhaps add a don here for following more of the main song? :3
2. 00:42:523 (152,153) - why the finishers here? in the Oni and in the Inner they were not finishers (in the Oni they were still separate; they COULD have been finishers but you chose not to map that way) so why should they be finishers here? it gives the K a few notes after less emphasis than it should; just make these two notes normal kats.
3. 01:20:799 (312,313,314,315) - the structure here should be similar to the one used at 01:22:454 (322,323,324,325) - so perhaps make 312-315 a 4-plet on 1/2 for consistency; also there's a significant kick on 01:21:109 - which implies that note should get the most emphasis, so these should both be dddk patterns.
4. 01:27:420 (355,356,357,358) - ^ but there's more of a snare at 01:27:730 - but it's the same deal here really

1. 00:08:070 - Refer to Muzukashii; and especially consider it here 'cause this is a higher difficulty so we need a higher density :3
2. 00:59:696 (338,339,340) - Perhaps to distinguish this more from the Inner Oni you could try deleting 339 and then for pitch relevancy make 338 a kat? just a small suggestion but it can help the difficulty curve a bit I guess; plus I don't think the 1/2 has much to follow to begin with so...meh
3. 01:21:213 (439) - Another structure nitpick; perhaps delete this note to give a similar structure to 01:22:247 (446,447,448,449,450) - while giving the patterns more variety between each other?
4. 01:27:834 (490,491,492) - Again to distinguish this from the Inner Oni a bit more; perhaps delete 491? no need to make 490 into a kat; that wouldn't really fit in terms of pitch relevancy.
5. 01:29:437 (505,506) - Perhaps delete these two notes also (or maybe just 505, or none at all, your choice lol) to give a more consistent structure to the Kiai Time? no other reason why; just for note structure purposes.

1. 00:20:385 (76,77,78,79,80) - Maybe change this pattern to kkddd? It plays much less awkwardly than the current pattern; while still keeping pitch relevancy and k and d at the start and end of the pattern; so the flow remains (in fact it'd play like kkddddk except you need to slow down for the d k at the end (it'd be more like kkddd d k ;w;))
2. 00:27:006 (142,143,144,145,146) - if you applied the previous suggestion, apply it here too; it's the same sound and your map is kinda based on consistency within patterns and structure anyways so...
3. 00:35:799 (217) - nitpick but maybe have this be a don instead? it gives the kicks more of a kat-only feeling and thus emphasises them a bit more~
4. 00:46:868 (309,310,311,312,313) - refer to first suggestion.
5. 00:55:661 (384) - refer to 3rd suggestion; maybe you won't accept it this time 'cause of the vocal being more present but if you want consistency then apply here too.
6. 01:31:558 (653,654,655,656,657) - Maybe change this pattern to kkdkk? refer to first suggestion for the reason why (replace "k and d at the start and end of the pattern" with "kats at the start and end of the pattern" and the kkddddk thing)
7. 01:34:868 (686,687,688,689,690) - and perhaps change this pattern to kkddd also? refer to first suggestion again.
8. 01:41:489 (752,753,754,755,756) - Applied the previous suggestion? Like every other time I've asked this; apply the suggestion here too if you have; it's the same deal here!!

Dainesl wrote:

Surprise!!!!!!

Modding as per your request \:3/

Black = Suggestion/small recommendation
Orange = Strong recommendation, normally more in-depth but will sometimes be short and simple
Red = Unrankable issue

You mentioned to me in-game that this was an eroge song, so perhaps add "eroge" to tags?

Also the Romanised Source is "Koisuru Shoujo to Omoi no Kiseki" so maybe add "Koisuru Shoujo" to tags since that doesn't appear in the metadata?

In addition, the mp3 file (this) has "OP" in it so perhaps add "opening" to tags as well? - added them.

Kantan

1. 00:13:717 (1) - nitpick here but perhaps replace this spinner with a kat on 00:13:717 - and a kat on 00:14:775 - ? there's still some pretty clear rhythms going on in the background and this is the only spinner in the entire set so perhaps consistency is the best option here? also the current spinner is quite close to the don so that could be something to consider too - i think that there is no need to consider the consistency because such 170bpm part is only here. spinner works well as Kantan.
2. 01:45:109 (59) - another nitpick but perhaps this final note may catch beginners off-guard due to the fact that it's the only note on a red tick, and while the SV is 0.6, yes, there is no barline indication like all the other notes; 'cause the map ends before that bar. it would sound weird to apply this suggestion but consistency is practically a must for beginners so maybe consider moving this note 1/2 beat later to the downbeat? - i dont agree completely. we shouldnt use the 1/2 line for Kantan but if mapped on 01:45:213 - instead of 01:45:109 - , it would be so hard rhythm.
3. this is a really nice Kantan actually, a bit simple but seems really good o.o

Futsuu

1. 01:15:420 (171,172,173,174,175,176,177) - perhaps this section might play a little bit awkwardly since it uses both 3/2 finishers and 1/1 finishers; perhaps make it something like this for more simplicity? currently I think the pattern is a bit difficult. - changed some pattern.
2. 01:31:144 (223) - another nitpick but perhaps make this into a kat for a nicer-looking pattern and something that would play a bit less complex due to less colour changes? d k k fits the vocals best and it gives the D a bit more meaning - pitch is lower than 01:30:937 (222) - . so d is working well.
3. also a really nice Futsuu :3

Muzukashii

1. 00:08:070 - how about adding a don here? there's a clear instrument lead-in to the 1/3 here so perhaps add a don here for following more of the main song? :3 - it doesnt fit with flow since i dont focusing on such instrument sound.
2. 00:42:523 (152,153) - why the finishers here? in the Oni and in the Inner they were not finishers (in the Oni they were still separate; they COULD have been finishers but you chose not to map that way) so why should they be finishers here? it gives the K a few notes after less emphasis than it should; just make these two notes normal kats. - idk why mapped them, removed.
3. 01:20:799 (312,313,314,315) - the structure here should be similar to the one used at 01:22:454 (322,323,324,325) - so perhaps make 312-315 a 4-plet on 1/2 for consistency; also there's a significant kick on 01:21:109 - which implies that note should get the most emphasis, so these should both be dddk patterns. - shouldnt. its really meaningless for the flow of my diff. the flow has changed from on 01:22:040 -
4. 01:27:420 (355,356,357,358) - ^ but there's more of a snare at 01:27:730 - but it's the same deal here really - there is no snaredrum.

Oni

1. 00:08:070 - Refer to Muzukashii; and especially consider it here 'cause this is a higher difficulty so we need a higher density :3 - the same. youre fundamentally misunderstanding. fist of all, "higher density" =/= "difficulty". honestly, claim is nearly meaningless on such slowly/relax part.
2. 00:59:696 (338,339,340) - Perhaps to distinguish this more from the Inner Oni you could try deleting 339 and then for pitch relevancy make 338 a kat? just a small suggestion but it can help the difficulty curve a bit I guess; plus I don't think the 1/2 has much to follow to begin with so...meh - i made contrast with next kdk.
3. 01:21:213 (439) - Another structure nitpick; perhaps delete this note to give a similar structure to 01:22:247 (446,447,448,449,450) - while giving the patterns more variety between each other? - the same.
4. 01:27:834 (490,491,492) - Again to distinguish this from the Inner Oni a bit more; perhaps delete 491? no need to make 490 into a kat; that wouldn't really fit in terms of pitch relevancy. - already distinguished enough. if playing with alt-style, possible to ready against 1/4 with dominant hand.
5. 01:29:437 (505,506) - Perhaps delete these two notes also (or maybe just 505, or none at all, your choice lol) to give a more consistent structure to the Kiai Time? no other reason why; just for note structure purposes. - changed some pattern.

Inner Oni

1. 00:20:385 (76,77,78,79,80) - Maybe change this pattern to kkddd? It plays much less awkwardly than the current pattern; while still keeping pitch relevancy and k and d at the start and end of the pattern; so the flow remains (in fact it'd play like kkddddk except you need to slow down for the d k at the end (it'd be more like kkddd d k ;w;))
2. 00:27:006 (142,143,144,145,146) - if you applied the previous suggestion, apply it here too; it's the same sound and your map is kinda based on consistency within patterns and structure anyways so... - got them.
3. 00:35:799 (217) - nitpick but maybe have this be a don instead? it gives the kicks more of a kat-only feeling and thus emphasises them a bit more~ - i have swapped 00:35:799 (217,218) -
4. 00:46:868 (309,310,311,312,313) - refer to first suggestion.
5. 00:55:661 (384) - refer to 3rd suggestion; maybe you won't accept it this time 'cause of the vocal being more present but if you want consistency then apply here too.
6. 01:31:558 (653,654,655,656,657) - Maybe change this pattern to kkdkk? refer to first suggestion for the reason why (replace "k and d at the start and end of the pattern" with "kats at the start and end of the pattern" and the kkddddk thing) - fine with current one. x3
7. 01:34:868 (686,687,688,689,690) - and perhaps change this pattern to kkddd also? refer to first suggestion again.
8. 01:41:489 (752,753,754,755,756) - Applied the previous suggestion? Like every other time I've asked this; apply the suggestion here too if you have; it's the same deal here!! - changed them to kkkdd instead of kkddd. it will work as an accent.

good luck for ranking; the set's really well-made

bbj0920 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue. seriously i wanna F*** HER!!!!11!111!1!!!1! b00bs for da epik win
..okay

Kantan

SPOILER

00:20:799 (9) - k - Melody pitch, and rhythm
00:27:420 (19) - ^ - actually no sense because already made a good contrast. http://puu.sh/bihyN/0233c764c5.jpg
00:29:902 (23) - Move to 00:29:696 - - i would like to keep as a simple pattern.
00:47:282 (45) - k
00:57:213 (59) - D - Well, keeping consistency :p - yeah D doesnt work for the consistency.
01:35:282 (44) - k
01:41:902 (54) - ^

Futsuu

SPOILER

00:20:799 (39) - D - what for? it doesnt fit well with flow imo. ;__;
00:37:351 (83) - ^ - the same reason. doesnt work for the flow.
01:12:937 (168) - d - I see no reason to put k, it's quiet part - made a contrast with previous ddd d. it works with such as lower diff.

Muzukashii

SPOILER

00:20:799 (52) - K - the same reason. sorry ;^;
00:23:075 (62,63,64,65) - dk dk - as i said in reply to immortals, i wanna use simple pattern.
00:37:351 (132) - D - the same reason as other diffs.
01:33:316 - Add a note - d - hmm, im worried about diffspread between Futsuu and Muzukashii. maybe i shouldnt add anymore imo.

Oni

SPOILER

00:25:661 (105) - k
00:28:971 (132) - ^
00:45:523 (240) - ^ - and many more I didn't mention. - im gonna use this suggestion on other part!
01:05:489 (370) - D - i really dont wanna use bignote on this part ;__;
01:14:489 - Add a note - d or k - hmm, i will consider about that.
01:22:247 (446,447,448,449,450) - kdk dk - nope, its really unnecessary for the flow.

Inner Oni

SPOILER

I actually played this once, and I came on her boobs.
Flawless ~_~ Nothing to poke at. - boobs!! hentai0920

TKS wrote:

bbj0920 wrote:

Inner Oni

SPOILER

I actually played this once, and I came on her boobs.
Flawless ~_~ Nothing to poke at. - boobs!! hentai0920

1. 01:45:006 - 僕的にはここを音取りしてdを追加した方が良いように思えます。そしてそこにdを追加すると1/4?の4連符の最後 01:45:109 にfinishが来てしまいますね。Muzukashiiでは1/4?の最後にfinishが来るパターンはないので譜面の統一性を保つためにfinishを削除すればいいと思います。

1. 00:16:040 ~ 00:16:178 - ここは少しリズム難だと思います。Inner Oniにも同じ配置があるのでOniでは次の写真のようにこれより簡単なリズムの1/4を適用してみてはどうでしょうか。https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/A6U2VY0.png

1. 01:21:109 - ここはdに変えたほうが良いように思えました。

とてもいい譜面であまり指摘するところがありませんでした 頑張ってください

SKSalt wrote:

どうも　日本人なので日本語でModさせていただきます

[General]

問題無いと思います。

[Kantan]

指摘するところは見当たらないです！

[Futsuu]

いいと思います！

[Muzukashii]

1. 01:45:006 - 僕的にはここを音取りしてdを追加した方が良いように思えます。そしてそこにdを追加すると1/4?の4連符の最後 01:45:109 にfinishが来てしまいますね。Muzukashiiでは1/4?の最後にfinishが来るパターンはないので譜面の統一性を保つためにfinishを削除すればいいと思います。 - 今のパターンが好きなのでそのままにします。 * 白+赤線上のノーツは1/2です。

[Oni]

1. 00:16:040 ~ 00:16:178 - ここは少しリズム難だと思います。Inner Oniにも同じ配置があるのでOniでは次の写真のようにこれより簡単なリズムの1/4を適用してみてはどうでしょうか。https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/A6U2VY0.png - fixed.

[Inner Oni]

1. 01:21:109 - ここはdに変えたほうが良いように思えました。 - シンバルの音があるのでkにします。ボーカルとドラムの音を拾っています。

とてもいい譜面であまり指摘するところがありませんでした 頑張ってください

追記：曲の最後の終わり方が盛り上がっているように僕は感じ取れなかったので全難易度において最後のfinishは必要ないと思いました。ドン！やカッ！で終わるよりもドンやカッで終わるほうがこの曲に合うと思います。 - 最後の音が強く、またその直後からミュートされているのでメリハリのために大音符を置いています。

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

• All okay xD

• 
  01:05:489 (2) - i'm not sure but.. D? because here sounds more high
  01:08:799 (5) - ^?

• 
  00:41:075 (91,92) - control+g? i think sounds better
  01:05:489 - same reason as kantan, change to D?
  01:08:799 - ^?
  01:29:696 - delete this note? so the players can get ready for this longer pattern 01:30:730 -

• 
  01:05:489 (258) - same reason as the other diffs, change to D?
  01:08:799 (266) - ^?

• 
  01:05:489 (370) - same reason as the other diffs xD, change to D? (if you rejected before sorry the spam (? ww )
  01:08:799 (380) - ^?

• 01:05:489 (458) - same reason as the other diffs, change to D?
  01:08:799 (469) - ^?
  01:39:782 (736) - for more variety change this to k (dkd)? for me sounds good

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi TKS hentai here a mod~ :3

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

• All okay xD

[Kantan]

• 
  01:05:489 (2) - i'm not sure but.. D? because here sounds more high
  01:08:799 (5) - ^? - no need to add finisher at this part since this part is so quiet.

[Futsuu]

• 
  00:41:075 (91,92) - control+g? i think sounds better - i wanna keep such simple pattern as d k ddk.
  01:05:489 - same reason as kantan, change to D?
  01:08:799 - ^?
  01:29:696 - delete this note? so the players can get ready for this longer pattern 01:30:730 - - fixed.

[Muzukashii]

• 
  01:05:489 (258) - same reason as the other diffs, change to D?
  01:08:799 (266) - ^?

[Oni]

• 
  01:05:489 (370) - same reason as the other diffs xD, change to D? (if you rejected before sorry the spam (? ww )
  01:08:799 (380) - ^?

[Inner Oni]

• 01:05:489 (458) - same reason as the other diffs, change to D?
  01:08:799 (469) - ^?
  01:39:782 (736) - for more variety change this to k (dkd)? for me sounds good - nooo, it goes well as a consistency.

aaaaaaaa how to mod this, is a very good map, sorry if my mod as not helped, anyway, i hope you get ranked this soon, good luck TKS and take a star! ^^/

JUDYDANNY wrote:

どうも~,こんにちは!
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Taiko Moding Queue

コメントなしは主観だったりどこかで似たような提案してる(はずな)ので割愛してます

[Kantan]

1. 00:40:661 (37,38) – delete finish? 後半のddkkdとの掛け合いとかその後の00:43:971 – とかのfinishのリンク有無とかもありそうですが,, 聞いてて少々大きぎるかな..39番だけで十分にボーカルは意識されると思います。 - fixed.
2. 01:23:696 (27,28) - (finish,normal)>>(normal,normal) or (normal, finish) ? - 周辺のfinisher消してすこし作りなおしました。
3. Very Nice Kantan

[Futsuu]

1. 00:41:696 – delete? 00:43:144 (1,2,3,4,5) –との緩急をもっと意識してみるのもあり? - removed then!
2. 01:09:834 – delete, same as 01:06:109 -. - 強いドラムの音があるので…!
3. 01:44:592 – add k ? -最後の大音符が裏打ちなので気持ちゆったりめにスペース作りたいです!!

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:16:454 (29,30) – dk or kd ? どちらかにした方がよりはっきりする気がしました - changed to dk.
   個人的には00:16:247 (28,29,30) - でパーカッションの音が落ち続けている(ように私は聞こえた)ので(29)にd音を置くことをお勧めします!
   kdについては元のBPMが290と早く、シンバルフォローはできていると思ったのでバス音フォローも追加できるとより良いかな!
2. 01:29:282 (1,2,3) – kkd>dkk ? 気持ち更にボーカル意識..? - changed to dk dkkd. it works well, too!!
3. Good working.

[Oni]

1. 00:52:765 – delete? or move to 00:53:178 - ? Innerに似た理由です - moved to 00:52:971 -
2. 01:03:627 - d? 音下がってきてると思うので合うかな..? - fixed.
3. 01:30:730 - k? - ドラム重視ですがボーカルの出だしにも合うのでこのままにします!!

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:36:937 – delete finish? これはボーカル...なのかな? Oniはあまり不自然に感じませんでしたが.. - 00:56:799 - には無いジングル？みたいな強い音を拾ってます!! 変化付けという意味で..
2. 00:52:765 – delete? ちょっと後になりますが00:53:385 -でボーカルが前半と違って気持ち伸びてないのでfitすると思います! - Oni同様に移動させました。
3. 01:03:420 (1,2,3,4) – kdkk>>>kkdd? 気持ち盛り下がるのを表現するのにどうでしょう? - なんとなくkkdkにしました!! こっちの方が良い気がしました
4. 01:06:523 –delete ? or move to 01:06:937 - ? - 消すほどの理由は感じませんでした... あとfinisher置かない分01:07:144 (463) - を孤立、または直後に逆色を置きたいので、このままで...!
5. 01:22:247 (1,2,3,4,5) –　~~ ddd,k,k >>>d,d,kkk or d,d,k,kkd ? ノビの方に純粋な連打でいいかなと思いました - 01:23:902 - のことも考えてd d kkkにしました!!

全体的にシンプルで整ってていい感じ 久しぶりに高速譜面をeditで見ましたw
こういうのもっとランクドに欲しいですね! 頑張ってください>w<//

TKS wrote:

この書き込み欄は自分の譜面の紹介をする所です。更新する時に詳細などを含むと何が違うか分かりやすくなります。

Jerry wrote:

Here's my taiko mod :3

• [Oni]

1. 00:16:247 (30,31,32) - Change these 3 notes to k k d? Because the drum's pitch at 00:16:247 (30,31) - sounds the same as 00:16:040 (27,28,29) - and it creates a better flow imo - i just want to make an easier Oni this time. so maybe as you know, kkk k k d is actually a bit harder than kkk d d k.
   
   
2. 00:32:592 (156) - Change this to kat, so that it's the same with what you did at 00:35:902 (177) - and also 00:39:213 (197) - yeah but its just intentional. i want to make a change with 00:35:902 - . also vocal's pitch is not the same. 00:35:902 - has a bit high pitch sound there, therefore i placed kkddk for that. and i have changed 00:39:213 (197) - to d. idk why but it was k ;_;
   
   
3. 00:52:454 (291) - ^ same, change this to kat so that it's consistent with the kats at 00:55:765 (312) - and also 00:59:075 (333) - - the same reason as above.
   
   

• [Inner Oni]

1. 00:40:868 (252) - Change this note to kat so that there is a good consistency in the kat rhythm with 00:41:489 (257) - and 00:42:523 (265) - - this part has a good consistency already. maybe you will notice it when you have deleted 00:41:592 (258) - this one. these patterns are just my playfulness
   
   
2. 00:41:902 (261) - ^ Same reason, change to kat so that a solid kat rhythm for this part can be made - the same as mentioned above.
   
   01:03:006 (443,444,445) - I love this sexy don triplet here, it's makes this part sound really good <33 - waaaaai!! arigatou!! ♥♡♥♡♥└(՞ةڼ◔)」♥♡♥♡♥

Well, that's all from me~
Good luck with the map!

1. 00:39:834 (36,37) - I think you can try d k d here ,this part is a bit different with former part.
2. 01:28:661 (35,36,37,38) - how about remove these two don's finish and add k on 01:29:902 - ,because the instrument's power on 01:28:661 (35,36) - is not as powerful as 01:30:316 (37,38) -

1. 00:23:902 - add note here? to make a consistency with 00:29:902 (66,67,68,69,70) -
2. 01:38:385 - ^

1. 01:21:006 (313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - how about this, it is more fit the song, also more consistent with former and latter part
2. 01:27:627 (356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363) - ^, try this
3. 01:31:971 - ~ 01:45:109 - try to make some 2/1 break as you mapped on first part

1. 01:30:730 (514,515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526) - i found that instrument's tone is not same as first part, so I suggest you change this pattern like this would be better for the instrument