ChouCho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size ver.) · forum

Maboyu

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2014-08-17T09:11:38+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年12月26日 at 下午 11:55:18

Artist: ChouCho
Title: Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size ver.)
Source: GLASSLIP
Tags: グラスリップ opening p.a.works ちょうちょ iamkwan yf_bmp size project
BPM: 107
Filesize: 19691kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.22 stars, 71 notes)
Hard (2.65 stars, 192 notes)
KwaN's Normal (1.77 stars, 130 notes)
yf's Insane (3.74 stars, 260 notes)

Download: ChouCho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size ver.)
Download: ChouCho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#4 グラスリップ Opening Rank!

Easy By Me 100%

Normal By IamKwaN 100%

Hard By Me 100%

Insane By yf_bmp 100%
(BG and video) by Shad0w1and thanks you :3

If downloading before 2014/12/24,please redownload !

Last edited by Maboyu 2015-02-09T18:02:31+00:00, edited 67 times in total.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-18T07:47:41+00:00

http://puu.sh/aXmIE/f30f8eb1df.rar

これが恋かな... <3

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-08-18T12:42:46+00:00

Quick check
offset 540?
[Hard]
00:16:505 (2) - end point 324,140 more nature……
00:17:066 (3) - could blanket better
算了看你这图横平竖直的给你指条明路，全选，旋转3度。
00:42:019 (5) - move 2nd point little right,more nature
[KwaN's Normal]
00:31:084 (4) - blanket 还能优化一下……
00:36:411 (1) - 往下移一小格……嗯差不多了
[Easy]
00:08:094 - space...太空……
00:24:355 (2,3) - 改成折返啊亲
00:39:776 (2) - blanket还能优化一下
话说你NC怎么断的能讲讲么……

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-08-18T13:27:07+00:00

[Easy]
00:09:495 (1) - ctrl j 和 00:05:009 (1) - 一下一上不挺好w？

00:25:477 (4,5) - 这里好几次没有读懂orz 还有就是觉得00:26:598——00:27:159 这种节奏不太明显的地方可以跟一下vocal

00:47:346 转盘往后退一点然后这里补个note：ほら　あ——这样的感觉;w;

01:12:299 这里就不用叮的音效了吧;w;【个人觉得用normalhit 就不错/w\ 】稍微斟酌一下

[骏马normal]

;w; nice

[Hard]
00:37:533 (3) - 用和00:36:411 (1) - 一样的形状？w

SPOILER

00:40:897 (1) - 是个重音，可以放远一些，比如放在和00:42:019 (5) - 转折处stack的位置:

SPOILER

坐标x224 y92

01:00:524 (5,1) - 这两个直滑条显得有些死板了;w;弯一些？

01:12:299 和ez处的建议一样w

[General]
挺好的;w;说不出来什么，我还太年轻orz
祝rank，先射个星(╯‵ w ′)╯︵

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-18T14:31:41+00:00

Fixed all and several patterns and hitsounds adjusted. :3
Thanks for mod!

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49028
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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Title:Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:夏の日と君の声 (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:AliomLoung
Version:KwaN's Normal
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Tags:グラスリップ opening  p.a.works iamkwan
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sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

sodarose 2014-08-18T15:18:14+00:00

我是来骗kud的 ;w;

[easy]
00:05:009 (1) - 到00:13:981 (1) - 中间太空了，填些东西进去把
00:25:477 (4,5) - 这两个听起来怪怪的（可能是我的错觉;w;)

[KwaN's Normal]
看作者就知道摸不动;w;

[hard]
hard作为最高难度的话我觉得可以适当的把四围提高一点。比如OD or HP+1
00:13:281 (6) - 这个滑条尾拉到00:13:701 的红线上会好一点把
00:45:383 (1) - 这个滑条形状有点怪（可能是我的错觉;w;)

渣摸见谅orz

FastBoy

140 posts

Joined July 2013

FastBoy 2014-08-18T15:35:16+00:00

走過來見到順便mod一mod

[Easy]

大概00:06:131~00:09:215和00:10:617~00:13:701左右的時間神馬都沒有...
弄個spinner出來也好啊=A=
但還是憑你自己的感覺和風格吧
始終你的經驗還是比我多...

00:24:636 (3) - 就這樣放個短的在Easy中...感覺有點怪怪的...試試把00:24:355 (2,3)合起來弄成一條長一點的吧

01:21:271 (1) - 我在這裡重覆聽了很多遍(其實應該說看了很多遍...)如果Ctrl+G的話感覺可以flow得更好,但還是看你的吧

完美OAO...
對於我這種新手真的不知道可以幫到你多少=A=
但還是會去看看Normal和Hard滴~

[KwaN's Normal]

(KwaN君的耶OAO~

靠...完全找不到有神馬問題...
我輸了...

[Hard]

00:13:281 (6) - 感覺拉長一個16分音聽起來舒服一點

00:45:383 (1) - 雖然不太喜歡這形狀,但還是看你的吧

高手弄的果然不同...

我真的完全輸了...
加油~你的圖一定會被rank的~

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-08-18T16:37:43+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Fixed all and several patterns and hitsounds adjusted. :3
Thanks for mod!
[/spoilerbox]

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh现在有什么感想没有

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-18T17:06:01+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
IamKwaN wrote:
Fixed all and several patterns and hitsounds adjusted. :3
Thanks for mod!
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh现在有什么感想没有

沒有

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-08-19T01:53:35+00:00

As ur request.

[General]

Fine.

[Easy] 節奏是沒什麼大問題，只是音效應該可以稍微配個whistle(玩的時候感覺vocal地方有點安靜)，看看這些位置可不可以加。(記得加的時候要跟Hard對應加)

whistle能加的位置:
00:15:383 (2) - 前頭
00:16:224 (3) - 中間折返
00:19:869 (2) - 前頭
00:20:710 (3) - 中間折返
00:24:355 (2) - 前頭
00:55:757 (2) - ^
01:10:056 (3) - ^

01:11:178 (4) - 連續三個叮聲有點吵，remove this?

[KwaN's Normal]

00:16:224 (1) - 前段whistle配合vocal似乎適合。
00:20:710 (1) - ^
00:27:159 (4) - 這前端應該是whistle而不是clap?
00:29:963 (2,3,4) - 這之間的空隙不同有點不太好看。
00:32:766 (2) - 前段whistle配合vocal似乎適合。
00:45:383 (1) - ^
01:01:925 (3) - 照前面這樣聽，這邊前端應該要加whistle?

[Hard] 昨天幫你試玩後，沒什麼問題。

個人覺得whistle能加的位置 (如果不適合就別硬加了):

00:06:552 (5) - whistle
00:08:795 (6) - 前頭
00:10:897 (3) - 尾端
00:12:159 (3) - 前頭
00:13:281 (6) - ^

00:45:383 (1,2,3) - 這三個全選，然後使與 00:47:907 (2,3) 成三角形比較好看，下面那個3記得跟00:48:748 (5) stack.
01:11:178 (3) - 同Easy

Good luck.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-19T05:09:04+00:00

smallboat wrote:
[KwaN's Normal]
00:16:224 (1) - 前段whistle配合vocal似乎適合。 nope, I only add whistles on high pitches.
00:20:710 (1) - ^ ^
00:27:159 (4) - 這前端應該是whistle而不是clap? why?
00:29:963 (2,3,4) - 這之間的空隙不同有點不太好看。 more or less the same
00:32:766 (2) - 前段whistle配合vocal似乎適合。 ...no
00:45:383 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:925 (3) - 照前面這樣聽，這邊前端應該要加whistle? nope, compared to previous two, this got a lower pitch.

@Loneight: Fixed in my way.
@小魚: 加了2000ms的audio-leadin.
Thank you. Fixed some other patterns.

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256,184,79869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,137,80150,2,0,L|174:75,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,196,80991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,278,81271,5,0,0:0:0:0:
236,270,81552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,81832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,103,82112,2,0,P|272:93|324:122,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
388,185,82953,2,0,L|380:246,1,60,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
346,328,83514,5,4,0:1:0:0:
256,192,83795,12,0,87159,0:0:0:0:

Last edited by IamKwaN 2014-08-19T14:43:26+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2014-08-19T07:15:24+00:00

o/
Request from In-game

黑色只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
藍色是建議改掉
紅色是unrankable

[general]

lead-in再加個1000~1500, 目前來說第一顆note的出現時間還是太快了, 會反應不及, ~~不過聽說rank後會自動加, 我不太清楚~~

[Easy]

00:34:168 (3) - 在我眼裡感覺不太好看, 試試這個?

code

482,143,34168,2,0,B|488:204|468:247|468:247|488:280|480:332,2,180,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:58:000 (4) - , 01:03:327 (1,2,3) - , 01:10:056 (3,4,5,1) - 同Hard

沒什麼可以說的

[KwaN's Normal]

00:28:841 (3,1) - 交換NC, 像這種來回然後又有遮擋的, 對newbie來說很難讀圖, 所以最好有個不同顏色的combo提示, 就像01:13:981 (4,1) -
01:07:533 (3,1) - 交換NC, 就像vocal一樣, slider跟著變化, NC也跟著變化, 而且美觀上會更好

嘛... 還不錯

[Hard]

00:06:411 (4,6) - , 00:08:654 (5,6) - 這兩個所佔的地方我剛好都聽到有類似預設的drum-hitnormal的聲音, 不訪試試? 後面有相同的地方我就不多說了
00:30:103 (3) - 刪掉whistle如何? 讓這00:29:963 (2,3,4) - 音效有種漸入漸出的感覺. 00:31:084 (7,10) - , 00:47:907 (2,3) - 這兩個同這
00:35:710 (5) - 這裡建議來個whistle, 打起來會更有感覺, 而且我聽這裡的吉他聲音跟00:31:224 (8) - 很像, 需要音效加持. 00:39:495 (2,4) - (2)跟(4)的開頭同這
00:53:234 (3) - 不彷試試在開頭跟迴轉箭頭地方加個whistle? 我聽起來是更有感覺, 決定權在於你
00:58:000 (2,3,4,1) - 太多finish有點吵雜, 而且聲音又如此大聲把原音樂蓋過去了, 試試來個漸漸提高音量的設置, 比如00:58:000 (2) - 設15%音量, 00:58:281 (3) - 20%, 00:58:561 (4) - 25%, 00:58:841 (1) - 原來的音量, 這樣聽起來不是比較舒服么?
01:03:327 (1,3,1) - 我在開頭都聽到了一個跟00:58:841 (1) - 開頭很像的聲音, 卻沒有S:C2的finish, 試試加上去, 然後記得跟隨音樂裡那聲音調音量
01:10:617 (2,3,4,1) - 同音量聽起來感覺很奇怪, 明明音樂有高低音的, 試試01:11:178 (3,1) - 設置20%音量, 01:11:738 (4) - 30%

嘛, flow上跟排列上基本都沒有問題, 就單純音效比較多而已, 無論如何, solid diff

就這些了~
加油囉!

bigfrog

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

bigfrog 2014-08-20T06:18:15+00:00

hello, from In-game~

Easy
00:34:168 (3) - 覺得紅點前的部分再彎曲點會更好看,~~因為這個滑條有反覆所以時間比較長,不用特別在意跟上一個滑條的關係?~~(抱歉我不知道在說什麼)
01:22:953 (2) - 弄成1/4的反覆滑條感覺比較好

KwaN's Normal
00:47:626 (1,2,3,4,5) - 覺得排成半圓弧狀比較好看,調一下(5)??
01:19:028 (1,3) - 互相平行?

Hard
00:24:355 (3) - 逆轉30度打起來比較順的樣子,而且和00:25:477 (2)感覺比較不會有違和感...
01:16:084 - 加一個circle在這,其實最後那一段也有...但是好像不好改,主要還是看你怎麼想囉

大概就這些,都抓不出什麼問題 XD
GL~!!

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2014-08-20T08:26:49+00:00

Hello, Sorry for being late a little bit~

[General]

Fine.

[Easy]

00:25:196 - 其实这里是有音的~把00:25:477 (4) - 提前到这里开始压到白线好一些？虽然跟vocal问题不大，但是和00:22:953 (1) - 处于不同音轨，有点别扭。
00:43:140 (3,1) - nazi，Blanket没做好。而且00:43:140 (3) - 的弧度其实可以再修的圆滑一点。
01:20:150 (4,1) - nazi，blanket没做好
Nice overall.

[给喵's Normal]

00:15:944 (3,1,2) - 等边三角形没修好
Awesome diff! Nothing to say. ~~怎么感觉像低BPM的Fycho's Hard~~

[Hard]

00:15:383 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这里节奏没做好。音轨换的太突然了。要么都跟琴要么都跟vocal。建议把3去掉，4向前延长1/2跟vocal，前后衔接自然一点。
00:26:598 (4,1) - nazi blanket
00:35:851 (6,1) - ^
00:41:178 (2,5) - ^
00:47:346 (3,1,2,3,4) - nazi 五边形
01:21:832 (2,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:03:327 (1,3) - nazi blanket
基本上都是nazi mod~这种曲子一般节奏不怎么会出问题

Good Luck~

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2014-08-20T09:44:13+00:00

包子

ts8zs wrote:
Quick check
offset 540? 感覺Offset 524就可以了>.<
[Hard]
00:16:505 (2) - end point 324,140 more nature……
00:17:066 (3) - could blanket better
算了看你这图横平竖直的给你指条明路，全选，旋转3度。修改了w
00:42:019 (5) - move 2nd point little right,more nature 改了!
[Easy]
00:08:094 - space...太空…… 的確!!!
00:24:355 (2,3) - 改成折返啊亲 ok改了:D
00:39:776 (2) - blanket还能优化一下好>< fixed
话说你NC怎么断的能讲讲么…… NC全fixed

謝謝包子R:D

OblivioN

OblivioN wrote:
[Easy]
00:09:495 (1) - ctrl j 和 00:05:009 (1) - 一下一上不挺好w？摁改了:D

00:25:477 (4,5) - 这里好几次没有读懂orz 还有就是觉得00:26:598——00:27:159 这种节奏不太明显的地方可以跟一下vocal OK改了!!但是跟你的節奏不太一樣

00:47:346 转盘往后退一点然后这里补个note：ほら　あ——这样的感觉;w; um..這邊我考慮一下

01:12:299 这里就不用叮的音效了吧;w;【个人觉得用normalhit 就不错/w\ 】稍微斟酌一下其實我比較喜歡叮的音效:D

[Hard]
00:37:533 (3) - 用和00:36:411 (1) - 一样的形状？w
SPOILER
保持原來的吧><

00:40:897 (1) - 是个重音，可以放远一些，比如放在和00:42:019 (5) - 转折处stack的位置:
SPOILER

坐标x224 y92 比較喜歡原來這樣>.<

01:00:524 (5,1) - 这两个直滑条显得有些死板了;w;弯一些？好!

01:12:299 和ez处的建议一样w 同EZ

[General]
挺好的;w;说不出来什么，我还太年轻orz
祝rank，先射个星(╯‵ w ′)╯︵

謝謝你的mod and star:D

sodarose

sodarose wrote:
我是来骗kud的 ;w; ;w;

[easy]
00:05:009 (1) - 到00:13:981 (1) - 中间太空了，填些东西进去把好~
00:25:477 (4,5) - 这两个听起来怪怪的（可能是我的错觉;w;) 修改了:D

[hard]
hard作为最高难度的话我觉得可以适当的把四围提高一点。比如OD or HP+1 感覺這樣就好了~~
00:13:281 (6) - 这个滑条尾拉到00:13:701 的红线上会好一点把好!
00:45:383 (1) - 这个滑条形状有点怪（可能是我的错觉;w;) 會嗎OAO?

渣摸见谅orz

謝謝你的MOD

FastBoy

FastBoy wrote:
走過來見到順便mod一mod 感恩^^

[Easy]

大概00:06:131~00:09:215和00:10:617~00:13:701左右的時間神馬都沒有... 的確QAQ
弄個spinner出來也好啊=A=
但還是憑你自己的感覺和風格吧
始終你的經驗還是比我多...

00:24:636 (3) - 就這樣放個短的在Easy中...感覺有點怪怪的...試試把00:24:355 (2,3)合起來弄成一條長一點的吧 OK修改了

01:21:271 (1) - 我在這裡重覆聽了很多遍(其實應該說看了很多遍...)如果Ctrl+G的話感覺可以flow得更好,但還是看你的吧摁.以fixed

完美OAO...
對於我這種新手真的不知道可以幫到你多少=A=
但還是會去看看Normal和Hard滴~

[Hard]

00:13:281 (6) - 感覺拉長一個16分音聽起來舒服一點的確:D 改了

00:45:383 (1) - 雖然不太喜歡這形狀,但還是看你的吧摁....

高手弄的果然不同... 我不是高手QAQ

我真的完全輸了...
加油~你的圖一定會被rank的~

謝謝你的MOD>.<

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2014-08-20T15:22:13+00:00

M4M~ (greetings from KwaN

)

[General]
Referring to this website: http://vgmdb.net/album/45718 . As far as I know, '(TV Size)' is not allowed in titles anymore, but should be renamed into 'TV Edit'.

[Easy]
00:05:009 (1) - The note density until 00:13:981 - is very sparse, even more than a few seconds ago when there wasn't even real tension in the music.
Why don't you add backsliders at 00:07:252 - and 00:11:738 - , just with more quiet hitsounds?
00:34:168 (3) - try to make the slider more appealing to the music by emphasizing the hiccup http://puu.sh/b0sQH/8b9803aad3.jpg
00:39:776 (4) - Similar case to above ^

[Normal]
00:00:524 (1,2,1,2) - As far as I know, 20% vol. is minimum for clickable objects, so please increase them by 5%.
00:22:393 (3) - I'd add the clap HS here instead of 00:22:112 -
00:29:963 (2,3) - nazi stuff, but don't you want to make them parallel?

[Hard]
HP5 and OD5 would give a more balanced feeling in this map.

00:26:598 (4,1) - Try to blanket here.
01:03:327 (1,3) - ^

Nice maps, nice song. Good luck!

Greetings,
paseli

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-08-20T19:51:44+00:00

Yo.
from my queue

[Easy]

00:24:355 (2) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. try this.
img
00:49:869 (1) - ...I'm not sure this break time... Easy diff must be more break time.Try this
00:58:000 (4) - Not too fond of the straight flow here.
img

[Hard]

Nothing to Say. nice diff :3

Good luck :3

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2014-08-21T05:20:11+00:00

Loneight wrote:
o/
Request from In-game
黑色只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
藍色是建議改掉
紅色是unrankable
[general]
lead-in再加個1000~1500, 目前來說第一顆note的出現時間還是太快了, 會反應不及, ~~不過聽說rank後會自動加, 我不太清楚~~ lead-in我改成2000

[Easy]
00:34:168 (3) - 在我眼裡感覺不太好看, 試試這個? 到覺得還好就這樣吧!
code
482,143,34168,2,0,B|488:204|468:247|468:247|488:280|480:332,2,180,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:58:000 (4) - , 01:03:327 (1,2,3) - , 01:10:056 (3,4,5,1) - 同Hard ok fixed
沒什麼可以說的

[Hard]
00:06:411 (4,6) - , 00:08:654 (5,6) - 這兩個所佔的地方我剛好都聽到有類似預設的drum-hitnormal的聲音, 不訪試試? 後面有相同的地方我就不多說了都加上了w
00:30:103 (3) - 刪掉whistle如何? 讓這00:29:963 (2,3,4) - 音效有種漸入漸出的感覺. 00:31:084 (7,10) - , 00:47:907 (2,3) - 這兩個同這好~! 00:31:084 (7,10)這個地方我刪除7跟9 00:47:907 (2,3)這個地方就保持這樣吧>.<
00:35:710 (5) - 這裡建議來個whistle, 打起來會更有感覺, 而且我聽這裡的吉他聲音跟00:31:224 (8) - 很像, 需要音效加持. 00:39:495 (2,4) - (2)跟(4)的開頭同這好後面地方也補上音效了!
00:53:234 (3) - 不彷試試在開頭跟迴轉箭頭地方加個whistle? 我聽起來是更有感覺, 決定權在於你感覺不錯! 加了!
00:58:000 (2,3,4,1) - 太多finish有點吵雜, 而且聲音又如此大聲把原音樂蓋過去了, 試試來個漸漸提高音量的設置, 比如00:58:000 (2) - 設15%音量, 00:58:281 (3) - 20%, 00:58:561 (4) - 25%, 00:58:841 (1) - 原來的音量, 這樣聽起來不是比較舒服么? 的確這樣比較舒服fixed
01:03:327 (1,3,1) - 我在開頭都聽到了一個跟00:58:841 (1) - 開頭很像的聲音, 卻沒有S:C2的finish, 試試加上去, 然後記得跟隨音樂裡那聲音調音量以加上!!
01:10:617 (2,3,4,1) - 同音量聽起來感覺很奇怪, 明明音樂有高低音的, 試試01:11:178 (3,1) - 設置20%音量, 01:11:738 (4) - 30% ok fixed
嘛, flow上跟排列上基本都沒有問題, 就單純音效比較多而已, 無論如何, solid diff
就這些了~
加油囉!
謝謝你的mod !!:D

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2014-08-21T05:32:20+00:00

smallboat wrote:
As ur request.

[General]

Fine.

[Easy] 節奏是沒什麼大問題，只是音效應該可以稍微配個whistle(玩的時候感覺vocal地方有點安靜)，看看這些位置可不可以加。(記得加的時候要跟Hard對應加) 好~

whistle能加的位置:
00:15:383 (2) - 前頭以補上
00:16:224 (3) - 中間折返 ^
00:19:869 (2) - 前頭 ^
00:20:710 (3) - 中間折返 ^
00:24:355 (2) - 前頭 ^
00:55:757 (2) - ^ ^
01:10:056 (3) - ^ ^

01:11:178 (4) - 連續三個叮聲有點吵，remove this? 這邊我調低音量了~~

[Hard] 昨天幫你試玩後，沒什麼問題。 WW

個人覺得whistle能加的位置 (如果不適合就別硬加了):

00:06:552 (5) - whistle 補上!
00:08:795 (6) - 前頭 ^
00:10:897 (3) - 尾端 ^
00:12:159 (3) - 前頭 ^
00:13:281 (6) - ^ ^

00:45:383 (1,2,3) - 這三個全選，然後使與 00:47:907 (2,3) 成三角形比較好看，下面那個3記得跟00:48:748 (5) stack. 這邊是故意放這樣的
01:11:178 (3) - 同Easy 一樣都調低音量了

Good luck.
謝謝小船>.<

Last edited by Maboyu 2014-08-24T06:20:39+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-21T05:59:03+00:00

bigfrog wrote:
KwaN's Normal
00:47:626 (1,2,3,4,5) - 覺得排成半圓弧狀比較好看,調一下(5)?? 好
01:19:028 (1,3) - 互相平行? 那是故意ctrl+<<的

F D Flourite wrote:
[给喵's Normal]
00:15:944 (3,1,2) - 等边三角形没修好好的
Awesome diff! Nothing to say. ~~怎么感觉像低BPM的Fycho's Hard~~ ;w;

paseli wrote:
[Normal]
00:00:524 (1,2,1,2) - As far as I know, 20% vol. is minimum for clickable objects, so please increase them by 5%. ah, this isn't the case. If it fits, I can use 15% as well.
00:22:393 (3) - I'd add the clap HS here instead of 00:22:112 - nah.. i just follow the pattern earlier
00:29:963 (2,3) - nazi stuff, but don't you want to make them parallel? no w

Satellite wrote:
Yo. Yo.

Thank you guys

SPOILER

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ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-08-21T09:10:13+00:00

hi
又这么人性不愧是善良鱼

Easy

00:05:009 (1,1) - 这两个后面可以加个break?
01:14:542 (3) - 感觉kiai结束又是vocal转鼓声可以加一个nc

Normal
00:00:524 (1,2) - 那这两个往两侧偏一点让这四个滑条每两个的角度都差不多感觉会美观些
00:27:159 (4,1) - 交换nc
genius kwan

hard
建议hp5比较适合因为图本身不是很难没必要弄高hp
00:08:795 (6) - 这里为什么不和前面一样把四分拍上的音跟上?
00:29:122 (4) - 把向下凸起会不会让flow好些?
00:47:346 (3,1,2,3,4) - 为什么不弄个正五边形呢
00:50:991 (3,4) - 让他们倾斜一点感觉自然点不那么死板https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1949611
00:58:841 - 这里是不是应该用s:c1的clap?

挺不错加油吧
美丽

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2014-08-21T12:58:12+00:00

Mod Info

Black: Suggestions
Bold: Important things. You should consider
Red: Unrankable issues. You Must Fix

General

収録曲 01. 夏の日と君の声 (TVアニメ「グラスリップ」OPテーマ)
专辑是这样写的不知道能不能用tv size。。关于标题你问问狗吧我也不确定

Hard

我怎么觉得这歌音效都这么低沉呢。。。感觉明亮一些比较好啊0.0
00:05:009 (1,2) - 前面的这个降低点音量吧。。。太突兀了
00:13:981 (1) - 为啥从这之后那么长一段都没有whistle了。。有点空空的感觉。。你可以用whistle追人声的高音额。。类似00:17:066 (3) - 这种地方
全部note都分布在中间偏上的地方。。。。

Normal
没啥好说的做得挺好的

Easy
感觉节奏空的厉害。。然后听起来超级怪感觉不如让骏马吧他的normal再简单一点点直接当最低难度，反正normal只有2.01星。。这个easy没太大必要

图做的不错基本没啥好说的额

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2014-08-23T05:00:54+00:00

bigfrog

bigfrog wrote:
hello, from In-game~

Easy
00:34:168 (3) - 覺得紅點前的部分再彎曲點會更好看,~~因為這個滑條有反覆所以時間比較長,不用特別在意跟上一個滑條的關係?~~(抱歉我不知道在說什麼) !!!???
01:22:953 (2) - 弄成1/4的反覆滑條感覺比較好保持原來的吧>.<

Hard
00:24:355 (3) - 逆轉30度打起來比較順的樣子,而且和00:25:477 (2)感覺比較不會有違和感... 好!
01:16:084 - 加一個circle在這,其實最後那一段也有...但是好像不好改,主要還是看你怎麼想囉試好幾次還是原本的比較好..

大概就這些,都抓不出什麼問題 XD
GL~!!
謝謝bigfrog >.<

F D Flourite

F D Flourite wrote:
Hello, Sorry for being late a little bit~

[General]
Fine.
[Easy]
00:25:196 - 其实这里是有音的~把00:25:477 (4) - 提前到这里开始压到白线好一些？虽然跟vocal问题不大，但是和00:22:953 (1) - 处于不同音轨，有点别扭。修改了!
00:43:140 (3,1) - nazi，Blanket没做好。而且00:43:140 (3) - 的弧度其实可以再修的圆滑一点。fixed
01:20:150 (4,1) - nazi，blanket没做好 fixed
Nice overall.
[Hard]
00:15:383 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这里节奏没做好。音轨换的太突然了。要么都跟琴要么都跟vocal。建议把3去掉，4向前延长1/2跟vocal，前后衔接自然一点。 ok fixed
00:26:598 (4,1) - nazi blanket fixed
00:35:851 (6,1) - ^ ^
00:41:178 (2,5) - ^ ^
00:47:346 (3,1,2,3,4) - nazi 五边形 ok!
01:21:832 (2,1,2,3,4) - ^ 這邊......
01:03:327 (1,3) - nazi blanket ok!
基本上都是nazi mod~这种曲子一般节奏不怎么会出问题
Good Luck~
謝謝你的mod

Last edited by Maboyu 2014-08-24T06:20:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

rinsukir 2014-08-23T07:14:37+00:00

hi

[Easy]
00:37:533 (2) - 缩短1/2?
00:54:355 (1) - 试试这样?
00:58:000 (4) - 把中间的whistle去掉?
01:12:299 (1) - 头上的finish换成sc1的whistle?
01:13:421 (2) - 这里调大声点吧
爱感觉节奏有点怪有时跟人声有时跟鼓点..

[KwaN's Normal]
00:19:309 (3) - 中间的whistle放到头上?
00:23:795 (2) - 头whistle?
00:25:196 (1) - ^

[Hard]
可以适当加一些whistle..?
00:45:383 (1) - 用tick做一下音效吧还有形状感觉有点怪orz
01:02:206 (3,1) - 3最后一下加上whistle 1头去掉finish?
01:05:009 (4) - 尾巴加一下whistle或者clap吧
01:10:056 (1) - 头或者尾巴加finish?
01:23:094 - 漏音了吧

抱歉摸不出什么.. 射个星好了
goodluck~

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-23T07:19:44+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
Normal
00:00:524 (1,2) - 那这两个往两侧偏一点让这四个滑条每两个的角度都差不多感觉会美观些最主要是想要對稱啦
00:27:159 (4,1) - 交换nc 好

kamisamaaa wrote:
没啥好说的做得挺好的 ;w;

rinsukir wrote:
[KwaN's Normal]
00:19:309 (3) - 中间的whistle放到头上? 中間好像比較高音
00:23:795 (2) - 头whistle? 好
00:25:196 (1) - ^ 不夠高音

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riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2014-08-23T13:18:32+00:00

Yo, jut throwing a few suggestions which I got after testing the map.

[General]

Try to add names of the main characters to the tags, since this is a song from the anime, these tags may help some people.

[Easy]

The rhythm itself feels tricky. I'd reduce OD a bit in order to make it more playble. I'd say that OD 1,5 would be fine.
00:07:252 - I would rather have these parts mapped. Empty breaks feel inconsistent and don't really fit in the Easy diff specific since they can trouble players.
00:49:869 (1) - the slider appears when the spinner is still spinable. it might confuse beginners, so I would highly suggest you to leave more time between the spinner and the following hitobject.

The diff itself is quite alright. The rhythm is fine (except the breaks). Flow can be improved, but I think that it's because you're still quite nw to mapping, so it should be fine, too.

[KwaN's Normal]

We've discussed some general-stuff in-game. Unfortunately, I've lost the log and it was too short to post it, anyway.
Note: forgot to mention, that CS 3,5 would help you to make patterns slightly neater with lower DS values

In case if you decide to ignre suggested changes, I recommend you to use AR4,5 or 5 and HP4 since your rhythm is intense and low HP feels too boring with it.

[Hard]

The SV/DS on these diff are low, even for a relaxing song, they feel a bit too low. The diff itself has too much in common with the Normal diff. Try to use higher velocity and something like x1,0 DS to make it more interesting and to improve the balance of the spread. Also, adding some playable jumps where they would fit - might be a nice idea. Please, remember, that the song has low BPM!

I don't really have too much to suggest since I would highly recommend you to use faster SV. So, the E-N-H spread will get more balanced and the Hard itself will become more interesting for players. Please, contact me in-game if you have any questions or want to discuss that with me.

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Best of luck!

Last edited by riffy 2014-08-23T14:50:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-08-23T13:35:19+00:00

i will finish my diff tommorrow
sry for such baka yf

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-23T13:37:27+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
sry for such baka yf

/me hugs such baka yf

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2014-08-24T06:19:34+00:00

paseli wrote:
M4M~ (greetings from KwaN )

[General]
Referring to this website: http://vgmdb.net/album/45718 . As far as I know, '(TV Size)' is not allowed in titles anymore, but should be renamed into 'TV Edit'. Here, I'll go ask BAT，Temporarily do not want to change>.<

[Easy]
00:05:009 (1) - The note density until 00:13:981 - is very sparse, even more than a few seconds ago when there wasn't even real tension in the music.
Why don't you add backsliders at 00:07:252 - and 00:11:738 - , just with more quiet hitsounds? OK!add backsliders!!
00:34:168 (3) - try to make the slider more appealing to the music by emphasizing the hiccup http://puu.sh/b0sQH/8b9803aad3.jpg sor~no change
00:39:776 (4) - Similar case to above ^ ^

[Hard]
HP5 and OD5 would give a more balanced feeling in this map. OK HP5 but no OD5

00:26:598 (4,1) - Try to blanket here. fixed:D
01:03:327 (1,3) - ^ ^

Nice maps, nice song. Good luck!

Greetings,
paseli
Thank you mod^^

Satellite wrote:
Yo.
from my queue

[Easy]
00:24:355 (2) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. try this. fixed!
img
00:49:869 (1) - ...I'm not sure this break time... Easy diff must be more break time.Try this fixed!

00:58:000 (4) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. fixed~!!
img
[Hard]
Nothing to Say. nice diff :3 >.<
Good luck :3
thank you mod:D

Last edited by Maboyu 2014-08-26T03:57:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-08-24T09:51:25+00:00

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Hard

01:20:991 (5) - arrange ds
how to mod maps like this? i can hardly find issues ;w;

KwaN's Normal

00:28:281 (2,3,4) - stack patterns like this r not recommended to be set in low diffs for noobs like normal
01:02:767 (4,5,1) - ^
01:13:981 (4,5,1) - ^
other stuffs r fine

fine with easy diff as well (too much gap thou

good luck

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-08-24T12:05:13+00:00

insane done
http://puu.sh/b5MsU/9a1587bacd.zip

Miramono

103 posts

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Miramono 2014-08-24T12:42:10+00:00

Hi! from modding queue...

MOD

[Easy]
No Comment

[KwaN's Normal]
00:26:598 (3) - move x:272 y:336

[Hard]
00:11:318 (4) - move x:136 y:168
01:11:178 (3) - ctrl + G

That's all

Maboyu

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Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2014-08-24T15:11:30+00:00

ZZHBOY

ZZHBOY wrote:
hi
又这么人性不愧是善良鱼

Easy
00:05:009 (1,1) - 这两个后面可以加个break? w這邊我加了來回的滑條了!
01:14:542 (3) - 感觉kiai结束又是vocal转鼓声可以加一个nc 這邊就不想改了!

hard
建议hp5比较适合因为图本身不是很难没必要弄高hp 摁!好hp5
00:08:795 (6) - 这里为什么不和前面一样把四分拍上的音跟上? 不怎麼想>.<
00:29:122 (4) - 把向下凸起会不会让flow好些? 好!
00:47:346 (3,1,2,3,4) - 为什么不弄个正五边形呢 fixed
00:50:991 (3,4) - 让他们倾斜一点感觉自然点不那么死板https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1949611 這樣的確不錯!改了
00:58:841 - 这里是不是应该用s:c1的clap? 因為這邊有個叮所以是放原本的音效
挺不错加油吧
美丽
謝謝zzh~~~:D

kamisamaaa

kamisamaaa wrote:
Mod Info
Black: Suggestions
Bold: Important things. You should consider
Red: Unrankable issues. You Must Fix

General
収録曲 01. 夏の日と君の声 (TVアニメ「グラスリップ」OPテーマ)
专辑是这样写的不知道能不能用tv size。。关于标题你问问狗吧我也不确定
這邊去問一下BAT!

Hard
我怎么觉得这歌音效都这么低沉呢。。。感觉明亮一些比较好啊0.0 摁......
00:05:009 (1,2) - 前面的这个降低点音量吧。。。太突兀了 30%很低了說>.<
00:13:981 (1) - 为啥从这之后那么长一段都没有whistle了。。有点空空的感觉。。你可以用whistle追人声的高音额。。类似00:17:066 (3) - 这种地方好!!
全部note都分布在中间偏上的地方。。。。

Easy
感觉节奏空的厉害。。然后听起来超级怪感觉不如让骏马吧他的normal再简单一点点直接当最低难度，反正normal只有2.01星。。这个easy没太大必要 EASY有改了很多>.<

图做的不错基本没啥好说的额
Thanks kamisamaaa mod

Mei

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Mei 2014-08-25T02:58:04+00:00

[hard]

00:31:084 (7,8,9,10) - 感觉这样更好看
Picture
00:34:168 (1) - 中间红线漏人声了，但是貌似听起来还行
00:45:383 (1,2) - 换下nc？（因为23是个跳，但是这个我不太确定
00:52:112 (1) - 这个的话向上弯感觉更好
00:56:598 (1,2) - 或许换下nc因为我感觉后面234用了特别的hitnormal说不定专门用个颜色会好些
00:58:841 (1) - 去掉这里的finish感觉好听些
01:12:299 (1) - ^

。。。早知道早点来摸了，我什么也摸不出来了呜呜

只能给你小星星了komen>.<

Maboyu

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Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2014-08-25T06:04:03+00:00

rinsukir

rinsukir wrote:
hi

[Easy]
00:37:533 (2) - 缩短1/2? OK!
00:54:355 (1) - 试试这样? fixed!
00:58:000 (4) - 把中间的whistle去掉? 這邊有個叮聲!!就不刪了!!
01:12:299 (1) - 头上的finish换成sc1的whistle? 不~~~這邊有個叮!!!
01:13:421 (2) - 这里调大声点吧好!
爱感觉节奏有点怪有时跟人声有时跟鼓点.. 有稍微的修改了!

[Hard]
可以适当加一些whistle..? 摁!
00:45:383 (1) - 用tick做一下音效吧还有形状感觉有点怪orz 就放這樣吧!>.<
01:02:206 (3,1) - 3最后一下加上whistle 1头去掉finish? 好3+whistle 但是1头不刪除finish 我調低音量了!
01:05:009 (4) - 尾巴加一下whistle或者clap吧好+whistle
01:10:056 (1) - 头或者尾巴加finish? 聽起來怪怪的!!!
01:23:094 - 漏音了吧這邊故意的!!

抱歉摸不出什么.. 射个星好了
goodluck~
謝謝你的mod and star!!:D

HW

Hollow Wings wrote:
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Hard
01:20:991 (5) - arrange ds fixed:D
how to mod maps like this? i can hardly find issues ;w;

good luck
謝謝HW>.<

Miramono

Miramono wrote:
Hi! from modding queue...
[Easy]
No Comment

[Hard]
00:11:318 (4) - move x:136 y:168 NO!!
01:11:178 (3) - ctrl + G ok! fixed

That's all

Thank you mod^^

Last edited by Maboyu 2014-08-25T08:15:34+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-08-25T06:13:00+00:00

@Bakari: fixed AR and OD instead as some of my testplayers said it plays quite well.
@HW: 不改了,全都是故意的,就像你的腦洞一樣
@Miramono: I prefer mine.
@小魚: 幫我把AR改成4.5, OD改成4.

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-08-25T06:46:01+00:00

Hard

01:07:252 (4,1) - if 01:07:813 (1) starts at 01:07:533 it would sound much more fitting, maybe work around that for the rhythm

yf's Insane

00:28:991 (3) - this feels weird because 00:29:132 is empty, which I think shouldn't be because the music here isn't being expressed in the map
00:31:094 (5,6,7) - circle slider slider instead of slider slider circle, something should start at 00:31:234 instead of having a slider end there because of the music

SPOILER

01:17:005 (2,4,6) - somehow, they sound like they're starting too early
01:23:244 (4,5) - make them slightly more closer, I think would be nicer!

Good Luck

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-08-25T08:11:35+00:00

hi 凑数摸request from IamKwan

[Insane]
test了一下从00:13:991 - 开始怎么听着有drum sampleset的finish 你做了什么
00:16:234 - 从这里开始都只有finish的咚咚咚不如顺便跟着吉他音放几个whistle听起来比较清亮也不会至于一直都是hitnormal的声音? kiai部分同
00:31:094 (5,6,7) - 虽然音效上听着没差但是打起来感觉不是跟着吉他的稍微改一下?
01:17:005 (2,4,6) - 还是放在红线好
01:23:524 (5) - N了个C的?

[Hard]
00:49:309 (6) - 去掉一个折返?
nazi一下 01:20:710 (4,5,1) - 这个是不是没DS好

其他都很好 >.<

[Normal]
kwan爷就是kwan爷看得心旷神怡

[Easy]
00:34:168 (3) - 如果硬要说的话这个是不是没包好啊
00:47:346 (1,1) - 转盘之后接的可能有点快了

好迅速骗完闪人o3o

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