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[General]
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Best of luck!
[General]
- Consider making your colours a little less bright. Yur colours are cute, but they may hurt eyes in a really bad way as they are too bright.
- I'm quite sure that Xanandra won't be happy to have ErufenRito in the tags. Anyways, you'd bettter ask him directly.
- 00:41:232 (1,2,3) - 00:58:176 (4,1) - and so on - I doubt that this rhythm is a way to go for the easiest diff. The problem is that you switch your rhythm and it feels confusing for beginners. Moreover, sometimes the polarity changes like 00:44:565 (3) - leave stong beats (00:44:843) unstressed. The main point is that beginners are incapable of reading/handling rhythm changes/polarity switches.
- 01:43:732 (2) - minor - I'd suggest to make this curve more obvious. The ngle is too small and significant parts of the sliderbody get overlapped in a tricky way. rough example
Actually, I don't quite agree with your rhythm as it feels sorta too complicated for the easiest diff.
- There are quite a lot of unused green lines. Please, consider removing them as they might glitch the game. 01:47:343 - example.
- I'd try to map those empty 3/2 gaps like 00:28:732 - first of all, that'd give your more consistent rhythm. SEcondly, it will make the star rating go higher and improve the balance of the set significantly.
- 02:56:232 (3,1) - pretty sure you'd like to keep x1.0 DS here instead of weird x1.2 which was sorta inconsistent.
So, yeah, I'd recommend to use more 1/2s as that'd fix the balance and improve your rhythm. I won't go into details but I think you've got the idea.
- 00:38:732 (1,2,3) - you could use some rhythm like you did it with 00:36:787 (2,3,4) - I just feel like 00:39:009 - the beat here should be mapped. It has some beats and vocals and ignoring it feels unnatural.
Note: 01:33:176 - and I'd suggest to map this beat as well - 00:43:454 (5) - haven't you missed a new combo here? It would fit with the vocals/pattern, if I am not mistaken.
- 02:05:537 (2,3) - minor - the DS feels a little random. Mind keeping it more consistent?
This diff is amazing!
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Best of luck!