From my queue.
[Facil]
[Facil]
- 00:47:620 (2) - I feel like this will flow smoother between (1) and (3) if you turn the curves in the opposite way: http://puu.sh/d1eXv/f44bee43a0.jpg
- 01:13:176 (2) - Minor spacing error can easily be fixed: Code
- 01:34:287 (1,2) - Should be 1.0x distance?
- 01:38:732 (1) - Use some slider shape to add emphasis to the beat on the repeat? Maybe like http://puu.sh/d1fnQ/118e6915a7.jpg or any other shape that puts emphasis on the syncopated beat.
- 01:43:732 (2) - How about a vertical reflection? I think that will flow nicer: http://puu.sh/d1fzA/81407e5e53.jpg
- 02:16:509 (2) - You can make the shape a bit cleaner. The curved part is uneven, making the corner have a bit of a weird bump. You can clean it up by moving the second point so it's equidistant from the first and third: http://puu.sh/d1fUB/24c1997714.jpg
- 03:09:843 (2) - Same suggestion as 00:47:620 (2)
- Why no kiai time? Add it to match the other diffs?
- 00:26:232 (2) - Try a more interesting shape for this slider? The electric guitar has a cool "growling" effect on this note, so it'd be cool to have a different slider shape to go with it.
- 00:34:009 (1) - This is difficult for the player to anticipate, as they will likely expect to play on the downbeat, whereas this is before the downbeat. I recommend either removing this circle or changing the rhythm like so: http://puu.sh/d1knW/180ba933d0.jpg as the slider will help show them where the downbeat really is.
- 01:04:843 (2,3,1,2) - Some minor spacing error here. 0.66x should be closer to 0.6x.
- 02:33:732 (2,3,1,2) - ^
- 02:30:398 (3) - New combo.
- 03:37:898 (1) - Did you intentionally change DS to 0.7x at this part? I can't tell
- 03:38:454 (3,4,5) - I think you should increase distance on these to 1.0x, since they are not overlapping.
- 00:21:509 (2,3) - Fix stack
- 00:38:732 (1,2) - ^
- 00:21:787 (3) - Add sliderslide whistle here too?
- 01:13:176 (4) - I think it will flow a bit better if you rotate it like this: http://puu.sh/d1o0Z/a603bfc7f0.jpg
- 01:10:954 (5) - I think you should add a new combo here. It will give the drum fill stronger definition, and it's the start of a new vocal phrase... right?
- 01:28:732 (8) - ^
- 02:39:843 (7) - ^
- 02:57:620 (7) - ^