changed everything, thank you for your mod^^_verto_ wrote:
M4M from my que~
KantanSPOILER00:13:351 (5) - I'd remove this, compared to the other parts it's too much
00:28:889 (20,21) - why are these kats when the previous ones were dons? K->D
00:32:736 (24,25) - ^
00:33:812 (26) - I don't think this should be a finisher, you'd have to move it 1/2 earlier
00:38:889 (32) - k->d the previous note is on the same sound and it's a d
00:41:351 (35,36) - k->d
00:43:659 (37) - remove finisher
00:53:043 (51) - d->k
00:56:120 (55) - how about deleting this and putting 1-1 dons on the red notes right next to it? http://puu.sh/bIhbe/5c18d135a9.jpg
01:45:197 (114,115,116,117) - These could be finishers, also D D K K, though that might be a bit too hard for kantan
01:49:966 (122) - remove finisher?
01:51:197 (124) - note here
01:52:736 (125) - remove finisher
FutsuuSPOILER00:12:889 (6) - I'd remove this and put a kat here instead 00:16:120 (13) -
^ if you accept this, do it with 00:17:966 (16,17,18) -
00:40:120 (58,59) - invert?
00:44:120 (70) - I'd remove this, so there is more buildup for the next few notes
00:50:428 (87) - 00:51:659 (90) - I don't like how these two are mapped on the lyrics, put them 1/2 ahead
01:32:889 (40,41,42) - shouldn't these be monocolour?
01:35:812 (46,47) - make these two don instead? Too many kats there on basically nothing
01:50:120 (74) - You put duplets on lyrics but not on this? Such a shame, put a d there
MuzukashiiSPOILERI'm kind of against the "fill up the empty parts of music with taiko sounds" thing, but you managed to pull it off well I think.
00:24:582 (50) - remove
00:31:197 (62) - d->k
00:36:889 (87) - Move 1/2 ahead and make that triplet pattern ddk
00:39:505 (98) - how about putting a d here? Makes the lyricsmapping more in synch with the rest
00:40:274 (102,103) - invert, especially if you have accepted ^
00:42:428 (112) - this just screams to be a kat imo
00:59:197 (178) - ^
01:02:582 (188) - remove, triplet sounds out of place among those duplets
01:08:120 (209,210,211,212) - http://puu.sh/bNZyp/b05ed2bc3d.jpg -> http://puu.sh/bNZAk/fdccea7b7a.jpg
01:10:120 (219) - k , though I don't really like that you ignore the drums and map the lyrics instead
01:11:351 (224) - ^
01:31:966 (316) - Move this 1/2 earlier, there is a pretty prominent sound there
01:32:736 (322) - add a kat here especially if you accepted ^, feels wrong that the pattern abruptly stops there
01:33:812 (325,326,327,328,329) - k d kkk->kkk ddd? there is a pretty cool drumroll there
01:46:736 (372) - remove, makes 01:46:889 (373) - less accented
00:31:812 (66) - remove
01:48:120 (379) - ^
OniSPOILERDone, sorry for being late, but was busy with university since it's the first month and all. Good luck with your set! also expecting your mod OvO00:12:890 (8,9) - invert maybe? You put kat on the piano previously.
00:13:966 (12) - k here on the piano
00:16:428 (21,32,43) - d->k on all of these
00:30:121 (69,70,71) - you can try maybe an 1/6 here? dddk kkkd whatever.
00:31:044 (77,78) - invert so kats are more konsistent, also pitch
00:39:352 (119) - k->d
00:43:506 (143) - K->D
00:54:890 (208) - D->K it's the same sound as 00:54:275 (206,207) -
00:57:966 (221) - d->k
00:58:429 (223,224) - either both d or k but you put d here 00:55:967 (213,214) - so I guess you should roll with that
01:07:660 (277,278,279,280,281,282,283) - I don't like this part at all, how about removing 01:07:660 (277) - 01:07:890 (279) - making 01:07:813 (278) - k->d and making this a ddd triplet? 01:08:275 (282) -
01:09:813 (291) - remove
01:10:121 (294) - d->k so it matches 01:11:198 (302,303) -
01:17:967 (346) - move to 01:18:274 (347) -
01:33:506 (456) - why K here when 01:32:890 (454,455) - are both D?
01:33:813 (457,458,459,460,461) - There is a drumroll you can easily add a stream to that maybe like this: http://puu.sh/bRJhj/fa30ea896d.jpg
01:47:352 (531,532,533) - I think these should be kats, the guitar is really prominent there and as I noticed you mapped that part on it.