Why the hell am I modding again...
00:08:606 - might want to reduce the hitvolume in this timing section - I can barely hear the music over the circles. 70-80% seems to be good for me.
00:16:438 (7) - I'm not entirely sure why you're using 1/6 when 1/4 follows the music, and tbh it sounds pretty awkward
Combo colors 6 and 7 are similar enough to each other that I missed the first transition between them. Maybe make 7 a bit darker?
00:34:093 - hitvolume seems a bit loud in this section too.... 60% works for me
00:37:014 (6) - not entirely confident with how this fits into the music. It doesn't start on a strong beat of the lyrics and it doesn't end on a strong beat of the instrumental.
01:15:244 (2) - I can't really tell if the bottom half is supposed to be curved or not...either make it curved enough to look intentional or straight enough to look intentional
01:23:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I like this
01:54:137 (6) - I honestly feels like it flows better without this note but that's up to you
01:54:801 - hitvolume -> 75% so that you can crescendo 02:43:916 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3)?
03:40:465 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - the huge breaks feel really awkward. I realize that you're mapping to the cymbals in the music but the pauses are just too much...either make one long break or map something in the middle
04:32:235 (4) - might flow a little better if the start of this slider was a horizontal flip of the start of 2
05:08:789 - hitvolume -> 70%
05:26:455 - maybe put a note or two in this big blank space?
05:29:122 - ^
05:47:622 (5) - not entirely sure what part of the music its supposed to be starting on
06:12:122 (4,1,2) - its a little weird to close-stream notes that aren't equidistant time-wise from each other
07:10:122 (1,2) - erm....its obvious that you put a lot of thought into this slider art here. The problem is that especially following out of 07:06:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6), the speed up is jarring and I hate to say this but whatever you were trying to draw is either some really common secret symbol I'm not aware
of or is going to fly over the heads of most of the players. While I respect that it might have meaning to you...it doesn't have meaning to anyone else
07:12:788 (3) - place a note here?
07:12:788 - should probably turn off kiai time for the break. Although I'm also really not sure at all why your break is more than 1 minute long.
08:43:038 (1) - hitvolume -> 40-50%
ah, I understand the break now, you aren't finished with the map yet
Well, good luck and I hope this helps