1. 00:44:752 (2,1,2) - despite of the constancy with previous combos. This works much better imo >.< http://puu.sh/bmgfe/84dcb77efc.jpg (or at least just the green part)
2. 00:47:419 (5) - this should be more away of 00:47:586 (1) - . It doesn't feel good while playing because you were jumping before and suddenly it stops with not much sense for me
3. Finish spinner at 01:26:253 - ? because if you continue it, it should end further i think

1. 00:15:919 (2) - you could instead map the vocals starting at 00:16:086 - with one 1/2 slider. It doesn't map anything imo >.<. (and you leave it in blank on your insane too)
2. 01:16:752 (1,2,3) - ^^and here you made something different
3. 00:19:253 (4,1) - Blanket here would be nice :3
4. 00:30:919 (3) - make it more curved for blanket?

1. 00:11:919 (2,3) - you can improve this blanket xd
2. I don't like very much continuous 1/2 with that high SV and BPM, like these 00:14:919 (3,4) - They are for too hard imo (i think you can make 00:14:919 (3) - just a circle because you didn't 1/2 from 00:14:586 (2) - , just guessing a bit xD)
3. 00:16:919 (1,2,3,4) - wouldn't it be a bit hard to read?xD just saying

1. 00:18:919 (3,1,2) - I think this part can be different, but nothing come to my mind D: . Maybe make (3) two circles instead?
2. 01:00:919 (3) - 01:11:586 (3,4) - error in constancy? I'd change 01:00:919 (3) - to 2/1 + circle (is it 2/1 the long slider of 2 white tick?)

rossonero1899 wrote:

i'm not fan of the song, but your map is so fun to play >w<

[Insane]

1. 00:44:752 (2,1,2) - despite of the constancy with previous combos. This works much better imo >.< http://puu.sh/bmgfe/84dcb77efc.jpg (or at least just the green part) it for follow long vocal ><
2. 00:47:419 (5) - this should be more away of 00:47:586 (1) - . It doesn't feel good while playing because you were jumping before and suddenly it stops with not much sense for me make (4) more closer instead
3. Finish spinner at 01:26:253 - ? because if you continue it, it should end further i think nah too loud

[Hard]

1. 00:15:919 (2) - you could instead map the vocals starting at 00:16:086 - with one 1/2 slider. It doesn't map anything imo >.<. (and you leave it in blank on your insane too)
2. 01:16:752 (1,2,3) - ^^and here you made something different
3. 00:19:253 (4,1) - Blanket here would be nice :3
4. 00:30:919 (3) - make it more curved for blanket?

[Normal]

1. 00:11:919 (2,3) - you can improve this blanket xd
2. I don't like very much continuous 1/2 with that high SV and BPM, like these 00:14:919 (3,4) - They are for too hard imo (i think you can make 00:14:919 (3) - just a circle because you didn't 1/2 from 00:14:586 (2) - , just guessing a bit xD) did another way x9
3. 00:16:919 (1,2,3,4) - wouldn't it be a bit hard to read?xD just saying kk changeddd

[Easy]

1. 00:18:919 (3,1,2) - I think this part can be different, but nothing come to my mind D: . Maybe make (3) two circles instead? umm slider more understandable imo
2. 01:00:919 (3) - 01:11:586 (3,4) - error in constancy? I'd change 01:00:919 (3) - to 2/1 + circle (is it 2/1 the long slider of 2 white tick?) I made (3,4) like (3) instead lol

i hope it help a bit at least >.< <3

humu.mp3 lol xd

Ntasuto wrote:

Hiiii
From my M4M Q~ lol so it's m4m queue. the rules is like nm rules so I though it's nm XD well, I will mod your map asap


General: Everything looks ok

Easy

SPOILER

General: -

00:00:919 (1) - move to x: 116 | y: 96 > remove 00:01:919 (1) - and then copy and paste 00:00:919 (1) - then make a perfect flipped mirror > if you did what i said , don't forget to move 00:02:919 (3) to x: 448 | y: 220 also em mine still seems nice.. not really care about symmetry thing
00:06:253 (1,2,3) - move the whole pattern a bit left to (2) is in the center ! > If you did, move 00:08:919 (1) a bit down to x: 456 | y: 240 to make up to the distance imo it's not really different how this pattern looks at gameplay
00:36:586 (2,3) - make blanket better
00:48:919 (1,2) - ^
00:50:253 (3,4) - ^
01:18:253 (1) - not 100% perfect. move 2nd anchor to x: 204 | y: 308 so it becomes . then copy paste to replace this: 01:19:586 (2) -

Normal

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General: -

00:11:919 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:14:919 (3,4) - passive sliders don't feel right here. I suggest replacing 00:14:919 (3) - with a circle and then and a 1way 1/2 reverse slider from 00:15:087 to 00:15:419 . Like this : http://puu.sh/brz2R/e5df641d7a.png It fits the rhythm perfectly changed by myself as I said in above
00:30:252 (1) - not perfect. fix pls ( a way to find if it is perfect is to copy paste the slider on top of itself and ctrl+H check if it is a 100% fit ) ngg imo it's fine
00:37:919 (6,1) - alight those 2 so they are in a straight line. ( use a helping slider to do this, like this:http://puu.sh/brzk1/04b11905da.png) maybe it's only my eyes but I don't see problem why it should like that e_e
00:38:919 (2,3) - ^
01:02:586 (2,3) - fix blanket + 01:03:253 (3,4) - same
01:08:586 (3,4) - blanket a biiiiiit better
01:15:586 (1,2) - fix blanket

Hard

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General:

1. The map feels a bit awkward on some parts. kinda like cant hear the notes i hit :/, will try to mention them below
2. The song is mapped non stop . just like adding circles onto beats without purpose. except from some parts that you should've been nuts to add notes. really?

00:04:919 (1) - 2nd/3rd hit of the reverse slider is too quiet:/ give the player no feedback about the rhythm since I don't want to add 1/4 reverse slider for just tring sound in here
00:05:586 (3) - ^ (this one not that much) it's awkward if I remove that
00:08:586 (4) - remove clap and change Sampleset( http://puu.sh/brAzO/71bbe6d837.png ) to Normal like 00:08:252 (3) , these 2 are identical beats and they should sound the same when you click them. nuu I always add clap in every white tick before downbeat ;w;
00:17:252 (2) - the slider tail need to be clicked ! split it into 1/2 slider + 1 note . the slider tail belongs with these 2 : 00:17:752 (3,4) I think it's fine this way.. not really made a different to me e_e
00:17:752 (3,4) - the hitsounding on this sounds too harsh and brutal. maybe lower volume or just change sampleset to auto :/ not sure. figure out something nn it's sounds fine for me lol
00:27:086 (2,3) - swap place . it's heard similar with 00:25:752 (2,3) - hue
00:34:086 - the transition that happens here from Auto to Normal sampleset sounds too brutal for me . way too loud and a bit unexpected. the music doesnt get that strong at that part and ti kinda makes no sense I want in here not too quiet >.<
00:38:586 (2) - remove clap nopee
00:42:252 (1,3) - overlap here is not that appealing :/ but I like it 8(
00:43:586 (1,3,4) - why slider(1) has different treatment than (3)(4) ? they are identical and should look identical :/ Also the whole part before that point you where following the lyrics and suddenly you put this note: 00:43:919 (2) - this make this part really confusing . I recommend removing 00:43:919 (2) - COMPLETELY and turn 00:43:586 (1) - into 2 circles. changed this part. since imo it's a bit hard too hue
00:48:919 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:58:086 (1,2) - blanket a bit better
01:00:086 (2,3) - passive slider here sounds bad. swap places so its circle then slider. ( don't forget to remap them ) wat..
01:05:419 (2,3,4) - again with the passive slider. make no sense and don't sound that good as you probably think. recommend have these 2: 01:05:419 (2,3) swap places like i said above > remove 01:05:919 (4) > and a circle @ 01:06:086 - co there should be 5 clickable circles from 01:06:086 to 01:06:753 ( dont forget to fix combo color) mm... prefer mine 8(
01:12:252 (3) - remove this. not necessary I swear it will become awkward if no note in there..
01:20:252 (4) - add clap on head it will break the clap consistency

Insane

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General: Insane is way better than hard. much more readable

00:07:586 (1) - rotate 30° clockwise to flow better to next note. Like this : http://puu.sh/brCBN/9b43f444b5.png
00:17:586 (3,4) - same as above. sounds too brutal to me nope sorry ><
00:18:752 (3,4) - swap places ( then you can ctrl+G 00:18:753 (3) and stack 00:19:086 (4) - on its head ) [ the editor links in the Parentheses will be work assuming you did the 1st swap] or you can use a pattern that you come up with nah
00:19:586 (1,2) - slider(1) tail is a bit off. fix it
00:28:752 (1,2) - - make blanket a bit better
00:34:086 - same as hard :/ nah 8(
00:38:586 (2) - remove clap from slider head nuppp
00:41:586 (3,5) - is this overlap necessary ? :S maybe you can avoid it somehow but I like it and since I stack (3) under (5)

Any questions regarding my mod or map feel free to ask in-game !

well that's from me. hope i helped and ofc best of luck

Kagamine Ren wrote:

Please change the soft-sliderslide to the 44b version
Please disable the Widescreen support in Normal and Easy diff to make all diffs consistent.
01:06:753 - Why S here? i can't see any reason so change it to S:C1? I forgot lel

Insane:
00:30:086 (5,1) - the spacing is too big imo.
00:54:253 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - it's better to make the spacing consistent imo, so i prefer 00:55:419 (2) - stack on 00:54:419 (2) -
01:16:419 (6,7,1) - i suggest to make a jump here, it's really fit here.

that's all to me.

call me back when your body is ready!

Kagamine Ren wrote:

found some issues
Insane:
00:01:086 (2,3,4) - is this overlap on purpose? they are supposed to be stacked. I try to stacked it but it always ended like that ;-;
00:04:586 (1,1) - they are too close and may be read as 1/2, so i suggest to enlarge the spacing. stacked above slider
00:15:919 (1) - consider deleting this note because this is totally overmapped and hard to catch the rhythm here for players. done, actually that for following vocal "ra'' lol

Hard:
00:53:919 (2,1) - use 1.20 DS too? the spacing change here is a little confusing. fixed
00:15:419 (4,1) - 00:22:086 (2,1) - are they on purpose? you didn't use such kind of overlaps in the other parts of the map. I just feel it fit with stacking XD

Hope this is the last check, sorry for inconvenience. ;_;