Columns = 0/1/2/3
Numbers without "column" refers to number of notes.
[BPM/Offset/Timing/Setup]
- Usagi's EZ / NM - HP8 on easy might be a bit too high... maybe 6 for easy / 7 for NM? (HD and MX can keep HP8). OD = 8 for HD and MX.
- Tags - Just "whagwha" and "victus" is probably enough for your name tags. Same goes for any tags with "osu!mania" since there's a mania map filter in the search options.
- Everything else seems fine~
[AIMod]
- 01:22:210 (Usagi's NM) - unsnapped object
- Otherwise clear~
[Usagi's EZ]
- 01:06:002 - maybe use doubles whenever you hear this instrument in the kiai (as a sort of emphasis)? (e.g. at 01:06:691 / 01:07:381 / 01:08:071 etc - whenever you hear this instrument for the duration of the kiai.)
- 01:32:036 (92036|0) - might be better as a normal note - I don't think the instrument you're following starts until 01:32:208 so move your LN to 01:32:208 instead (ending on 01:32:467). Move 01:32:381 (92381|1) - to 01:32:467 too (following instrument).
[Usagi's NM]
- 01:26:691 - inconsistent missing note - you've used doubles on this instrument so far.
[HD]
- 00:22:208 - Add note? There seems to be a stress on the instrument here and it'll keep it consistent across difficulties.
- 00:55:312 - Add note for stress on instrument?
- 01:27:898 (87898|2,87984|3) - maybe make these doubles since I think they're the same as 01:27:036 (87036|3,87036|0,87266|3,87266|0,87553|0,87553|3) - ?
- 01:28:415 - could also work as a triple (midpoint of kiai) - but optional.
- 01:34:795 - Delete a note (inconsistent)? Same for 01:36:174?
- 01:50:484 - Add note for cymbal? (optional)
[MX]
- 00:04:277 - Maybe delete a note (I think your pattern is a triple on every alternating double white line here?) - it'd also make it consistent with 00:04:967.
- 00:08:415 - Add note to make triple for pattern consistency?
- 00:15:484 to 00:16:519 - The stronger beats seem to be the middle five instead of the first four. (Delete one from 00:15:484, add one to 00:16:174 and 00:16:346 )?
- 00:18:071 - Feels inconsistent, maybe make a triple?
- 00:19:450 (19450|3) - Inconsistent with the previous whispered vocal at 00:10:829.
- 00:26:002 - Move one from here to 00:26:174 so the rhythm is consistent with 00:23:243 ?
- 00:38:760 - Maybe make this a triple (feels kind of inconsistent) -> then move 00:38:933 to column 1?
- 01:02:726 - Delete one (feels inconsistent with pattern so far - whenever that instrument played on a red line you've used two notes for it so far).
- The white line pattern for 00:55:312 to 01:03:588 (inclusive) might fit the music better if you use 3-2-2-2 for each bar (01:03:588 can stay the same since the music sort of fades there).
- 01:07:036 - Feels overdone, delete one to make it consistent with 01:08:415?
- 01:09:967 - Move a note up to 01:10:140 (for a 2-3 pattern like you've used for this so far)?
- 01:13:760 - Feels like incorrect emphasis, there's nothing much here (delete one or two notes)?
- 01:15:312 - Move a note to 01:15:657 (wrong emphasis)?
- 01:16:174 - (optional) Move to column 0/1 to reduce awkwardness?
- 01:18:071 - Delete one, I'm not sure if this part would qualify for 3 notes.
- 01:19:105 - Might work as a triple here.
- 01:19:277 - Delete one, again, I don't hear much going on.
- 01:19:622 - Move one up to 01:19:795 (incorrect emphasis)?
- 01:20:140 - Add one for emphasis?
- 01:20:484 to 01:20:829 - Delete one from the blue lines to make it a 1-note stream maybe? I don't hear much on the blue lines. Add one to 01:20:484 for consistency and delete a note from 01:20:743 (it kind of sounds the same as 01:20:657 )?
- 01:22:381 - Could do with adding one here (consistency).
- 01:22:726 (82726|2,82726|0,82812|2,82812|0,82898|3,82898|1) - Maybe 1-1-3 instead of 2-2-2 would fit the music better (emphasise the right beat)?
- 01:23:760 - Add one for consistency~
- 01:24:612 - Maybe add one to match background music? If you do then add one to 01:25:140 too (consistency / background music)
- 01:26:519 (86519|3,86519|1,86605|2,86605|3,86691|1,86691|0) and 01:27:898 (87898|3,87898|0,87984|3,87984|0,88071|1,88071|2) - Maybe 2-1-3 to emphasise the white line (optional)?
- 01:29:970 / 01:31:330 - Feels kind of weird, might need to complete polarity change (move it to the red line or add note on to the red line to make it a 3-note stream). Accidental placement maybe? (Ignore if deliberate).
- 01:29:105 / 01:30:312 / 01:31:864 , - Delete one (no loud sound in music)
- 01:32:898 / 01:35:657 - Add one (consistency break).
- 01:37:381 - Move one to 01:37:553 (reduce emphasis on "blank" white line and increases emphasis on strong red line)
- 01:38:243 (98243|2,98243|3,98329|2,98329|3,98415|0,98415|1) and 01:38:933 (98933|2,98933|1,99019|2,99019|1,99105|3,99105|0) - 2-1-3 emphasis (optional)?
- 01:42:553 / 01:43:071 - This is the rhythm I'm referring to by 2-1-3~
- 01:43:933 - Add one to match 01:44:622 ?
- 01:45:657 - Move a note up to 01:45:829 - to decrease emphasis on white line and increase emphasis on red line?
- 01:46:346 - Add note to make triple so it's consistent with 01:47:726 ?
- 01:46:691 to 01:47:381 - Maybe use a white/red line pattern of 3-2-1-2-3? (Delete one from 01:46:864 and 01:47:036, add one to 01:47:208)
- 01:47:553 - Maybe could do with deleting one - not much going on there?
- 01:48:588 (108588|2,108588|3,108674|3,108674|2,108760|1,108760|0) - Maybe another 2-1-3?
- 01:49:105 (109105|0,109105|3,109364|0,109364|2,109622|0,109622|1,109622|3) - Might be more consistent if you used 3-3-3 or 2-2-2, since these three beats sound the same. (2-2-2 suggested to match surrounding music).
A really nice map, I think main issues were emphasis, but overall very consistent throughout, good job~
