PuttyoU wrote:

Hello , from my modding queues!
My English is very poor, sorry

[Kenterz's Insane]

1. 00:14:433 - rhythm suggestion It doesn't follow he song =/
   
2. 00:22:322 (1) - finish in head Fixed
3. 00:53:433 (1) - I think slider end 00:53:766 - the good Fixed
4. 00:55:655 (4) - NC Fixed
5. 01:04:877 (4) - there is not note but 1/8 slider I think it's better with a circle, because this will be the only moment where there's a 1/8 slider ._.
6. 01:09:099 (3) - this note 01:08:988 - the fit in song Fixed
7. 01:10:099 (6) - clap Fixed

I want original hitsound

I like this maps!!
I wait ranked.
Good luck

appleeaterx wrote:

Gex's Hard

* 00:14:322 (6,7) - I don't really like this overlap, and I strongly suggest to change this. But if you decide to do this, you'll have to space everything evenly again - you can use the code if you want. uguu~ nobody likes this overlap. Ok fixed.
* 00:20:544 (6,7,8) - Sudden change of rhythm here (blue-tick) - I recommend adding a NC to indicate this, but you can leave it as it is. Hmm not a bad idea. Fixed.
* 00:22:988 (2) - Distance Snap allows this to be a blanket, so I recommend making a good blanket here. Done
* 00:35:322 (4) - I'm not a big fan of sliders starting on the blue tick, but I guess the song allows it. The slider is just to replace to hitcircles.
* 00:40:766 (2) - Move this note to x116,y92, so it has the same spacing as * 00:41:655 (4,1) Has the same spacing already. What do you mean?
* 00:47:877 (1) - Do something more interesting here - maybe a SV change, or a more unique slider. Did both xD
* 00:57:877 (4) - Move to x0,y264 for a better blanket. Sure
* 01:01:433 (4) - Move to x276,y348 for a better blanket. Yup
* 01:20:988 (1) - End spinner on blue tick like the Insane diff. Okay

-Mo- wrote:

00:20:544 (6,7,8) - The polarity is difficult to follow when playing blind (http://youtu.be/53PkFLrK8Ws). Fixed in previous mod. Also I replaced the hitcircles with a slider.
00:27:655 (1,2,3) - Same as above. Yup, replaced with slider.

PuttyoU wrote:

[Gex's Hard]

1. 00:27:988 - ignore note and add reverse slider here 00:27:877 - Did it while fixing previous mod
2. 01:05:877 (7,8) - place suggestion hhmm nope. Is making a weird blanket with 01:04:988 (5,7)
3. 01:09:877 (8) - clap in head and tail Made something different
4. 01:13:655 (9) - clap in head Yup, feels better
5. 01:24:433 - spinner end here Fixed in previous mod

1. 00:08:099 - I dont understand why youre using normal sample set, it should be at least soft sampleset to keep consistency with this part 00:41:655 (and using soft sample set also sounds better for this first part)
2. 00:13:433 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm is wrong and plays bad imo, doesnt flow well with the music, it should be something more like this: 00:13:433 (1,2,3,4) -
3. 00:16:766 (1) - Because youre using a slider, im going to supposed that you started to follow the vocals, on which case, its wrong, the singer starts to hold his note at 00:16:988 - so slider should start there
4. 00:21:322 (3) - If youre trying to follow the guitars, you should hitsound it to make it more obvious, else it looks random imo.
5. 00:24:988 (4) - Inconsistent with what you did above, you should also add a note at 00:25:099 - to keep it consistent, or delete the note at 1/4 from 00:21:322 (3) -
6. 00:26:433 - Its missing a note, but you should not just add an circle in here, I recommend you something more like this: http://puu.sh/bhE3E/c4189f2548.jpg
7. 00:32:174 (1,1,1,1) - Absolutely no need for NC spam here, take them out, there are other ways to highlight the fact that they are in 1/6, and spamming NC is not one of them. One of them would depend on how you mapped it, but it failed since its pretty much the same as the rest of the map, so you have the option to remap it so its very clear its 1/6, or just replace them with a slider with repeats (the easiest way)
8. 00:38:211 (6,1) - Maaaybe increase the spacing between these two object to make it more obvious that both of them are part of different parts. In fact, Id remap it to make it more differentt, but up to you, its just mere personal taste.
9. 00:45:211 - Vocals pretty strong here, it shouldnt be mapped by a slider end here.
10. 00:53:877 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Again with the NC spam.
11. 01:20:322 - Plays better if a slider started here instead, as in do something like this: http://puu.sh/bhF7L/41a74d9468.jpg
    
    There were some good parts in the map, I wont deny it (00:48:988 - ) and hitsounds could be better if you were to replace some of your clap hitsounds with a whistle.

1. 00:26:766 (3,4) - Maybe give them a different pattern to make it go along with the fact that it sounds 'different' (higher volume)
2. 00:34:988 (3) - Well, slider, technically should start at 00:35:099 - and then end 00:35:322 -
3. 00:36:766 (3) - Same as above, this one too 00:33:211 (2) -
4. 00:38:544 (3) - Same as above, etc etc
   
5. 00:57:877 (4,5,6) - If I were you, Id put these three objects in a slider with repeat (like 00:56:988 (3) - )The way you mapped this its not very clear that (5) lands in a blue tick
6. 01:04:433 (3) - Same as above
   
   [Normal]
   
   Diff in general is quite lacking hitsounds, remember that hitsounds job is not only to make the map sound good, but also helps players to keep the rhythm, at least add the usual clap every second and fourth white tick in the kiai (although whole map is recommended)
   
7. 00:14:766 - Maybe add a circle here, sounds good.
   
   [Easy]
   
8. 00:14:766 - Maybe add a circle here, sounds good.
9. 01:09:433 - And another circle here too

Fluttershy03 wrote:

[Gex's Hard]

00:20:544 (1) - There's no need for the NC here, it will be more consistent if you removed it. With the NC I wanted to indicate the rhythm change, but later I added more sliders so I guess this NC can be removed now.

00:36:544 (1) - Add a soft finish here? It'll make the other two finishes on the starts of 00:35:655 (5,7) - sound stronger since 3 is more memorable than 2. Okok. Added.

00:40:099 (1) -Might want to add a soft finish here as well to keep consistency if you accepted my suggestion above. Yup

00:56:988 (3) - Curve this a bit more so that the blanket over 00:57:877 (4) - becomes a lot clearer and noticeable. It'll look better imo. idk how to curve it without messing it up the previous hitcircles and stuff. Instead I tried another shape.

01:00:544 (3) - Like my above suggestion, this will look better curved. Same as above.

01:10:322 (1) - Add a clap here for similar reasons as my first two suggestions for this diff, 3 is more memorable than 2. No, because there are different sounds

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hi, mod here~ any questions about my mod post then pm me ingame.

[Kenterz's Insane]

00:11:655 (7) - You should add an NC here to split up the 2 measure long combo since it would be more consistent. Feels odd that most of the combos in this peaceful part of the map are 1 measure long and this one is 2.

00:56:099 (1,2) - These two sliders are touching eachother. I know this is very minor but could you fix this? I think it'll look nicer.

01:17:433 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This pattern feels a little out of place, since it's the only one of it's kind throughout the entire mapset. You should replace it with something else. I think any jump pattern will be out of place =/


Well that's it from me! Good luck on rank!

Xanandra wrote:

Hello

[Insane]

1. 00:08:099 - I dont understand why youre using normal sample set, it should be at least soft sampleset to keep consistency with this part 00:41:655 (and using soft sample set also sounds better for this first part)
2. 00:13:433 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm is wrong and plays bad imo, doesnt flow well with the music, it should be something more like this: 00:13:433 (1,2,3,4) - I can't see your exemple
3. 00:16:766 (1) - Because youre using a slider, im going to supposed that you started to follow the vocals, on which case, its wrong, the singer starts to hold his note at 00:16:988 - so slider should start there
4. 00:21:322 (3) - If youre trying to follow the guitars, you should hitsound it to make it more obvious, else it looks random imo.
5. 00:24:988 (4) - Inconsistent with what you did above, you should also add a note at 00:25:099 - to keep it consistent, or delete the note at 1/4 from 00:21:322 (3) -
6. 00:26:433 - Its missing a note, but you should not just add an circle in here, I recommend you something more like this: http://puu.sh/bhE3E/c4189f2548.jpg
7. 00:32:174 (1,1,1,1) - Absolutely no need for NC spam here, take them out, there are other ways to highlight the fact that they are in 1/6, and spamming NC is not one of them. One of them would depend on how you mapped it, but it failed since its pretty much the same as the rest of the map, so you have the option to remap it so its very clear its 1/6, or just replace them with a slider with repeats (the easiest way)
8. 00:38:211 (6,1) - Maaaybe increase the spacing between these two object to make it more obvious that both of them are part of different parts. In fact, Id remap it to make it more differentt, but up to you, its just mere personal taste.
9. 00:45:211 - Vocals pretty strong here, it shouldnt be mapped by a slider end here.
10. 00:53:877 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Again with the NC spam.
11. 01:20:322 - Plays better if a slider started here instead, as in do something like this: http://puu.sh/bhF7L/41a74d9468.jpg
    
    There were some good parts in the map, I wont deny it (00:48:988 - ) and hitsounds could be better if you were to replace some of your clap hitsounds with a whistle.

Also, gonna mod it until here, gotta do some stuff, will come back later!

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hi, mod here~ any questions about my mod post then pm me ingame.

[Easy]

00:11:655 (1) - I recommend removing the clap you put here to stay consistent with the head of 00:08:099 (1) - and 00:15:211 (1) - Fixed

00:20:988 (3,4,5) - Rearrange these into an equilateral; triangle so that it will look nicer and less scruffy. Make sure to keep (5) blanketted though.
Fixed

00:43:655 (3) - Move this to x:264 y:205 to it blankets the head of 00:41:877 (2) - in a nicer fashion.
Fixed

00:50:767 (4,5,6) - I don't like this pattern for 2 reasons; first I find that (5,6) are too curved for it to look nice, and the repeat arrow of (6) is partially overlapped, making it hard to read. I'd consider changing the position of the notes a bit so that they can easily be read.
Fixed

00:52:544 (6) - Add a NC here? I think it'll be better so it would be more consistent with the main NC pattern you've been doing for most of the map.
Fixed

01:13:433 (5) - Add a clap here to keep this a more consistent clap pattern, making it sound more pleasing to the ears.
Fixed

01:16:544 (5,1,3) - Add claps on the sliderends and the circle I mentioned to keep the clap pattern going. I think it makes more sense, I don't know why it suddenly stops :/
Fixed

[Normal]

I feel that you need to add a larger variety of hitsounds. Right now a can't really hear them that much. There are also combo inconsistencies, so be sure to sort that out.

00:13:433 (3) - I suggest adding a finish here so it is more consistent, since the end of 00:09:433 (2) - has a finish as well.
Fixed

00:28:544 (5,2) - I suggest moving these two a bit so that they are on the same x:y as each other. I think this'll look neater this way.
Fixed

00:37:433 (2) - This could be blanketted better, try moving this circle to x:322 y:178 to improve this.
Fixed

00:47:211 (4) - This slider is a little too curved, try curving it less so it is identical to 00:45:433 (1) - , helping keep consistency with sliders.
Fixed (I think)
01:01:433 (6,1,2,3) - To be honest, this doesn't play or look well since (2,3) is hidden beneath (6). The best advice I could give you is to redo the pattern.
Remade pattern

01:09:433 (2,2) - Not fond of how these two sliderends are overlapping eachother in a way that they are only partially visible. Fix this by either making it a perfect stack or by not overlapping them at all.
Fixed

Well that's it from me! Good luck on rank!

Kiiwa wrote:

~

[Kenterz's Insane]

1. 00:30:766 - Remove this finish sounds better. Fixed
2. 00:41:655 (1) - Whistle sounds good. Fixed
3. 00:42:766 (4) - I think you should delete this note. Fixed
4. 00:52:211 (3) - Move this to 00:52:099 - for proper rhythm. Fixed
5. 00:54:248 - Remove finish from here, if you listen at 25% you'll hear its meant to be later... Fixed

Kiiwa wrote:

~

[General]

1. Artist: "Ling Tosite Sigure" or at least that's how my ranked map is named lol Gona wait for a bat to check
2. Move the preview time to 00:54:988 - instead, so he's not mid-lyric. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:42:766 (5) - This doesn't align with anything in the music. Move it to 00:42:544 - instead. Fixed
2. 00:44:099 (2) - Move this to 00:44:322 - and delete 00:44:544 (3) -Fixed
3. 00:46:322 (2) - Move this to 00:46:099 - Fixed
4. 00:47:211 (3) - Better to have this as just one note at 00:47:211 - since there is no sounds thereafter. Fixed
5. 00:54:322 (1) - ^Fixed
6. 00:56:099 (4) - New combo for Kiai.Fixed
7. Where are the hit-claps in the Kiai?Working on it
8. 01:21:433 (1) - Copy the hitsounds from the Insane for this spinner. Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:44:544 (4) - Delete this, it's on nothing.Fixed
2. 00:43:655 (3) - Extend this until 00:44:322 - Fixed

Thanks for your mod

Xanandra wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:26:766 (3,4) - Maybe give them a different pattern to make it go along with the fact that it sounds 'different' (higher volume) Changed.
2. 00:34:988 (3) - Well, slider, technically should start at 00:35:099 - and then end 00:35:322 - Sounds really bad, and actually ignores the white tick :/
3. 00:36:766 (3) - Same as above, this one too 00:33:211 (2) - ^^^
4. 00:38:544 (3) - Same as above, etc etc ^^^
   
5. 00:57:877 (4,5,6) - If I were you, Id put these three objects in a slider with repeat (like 00:56:988 (3) - )The way you mapped this its not very clear that (5) lands in a blue tick I guess the DS change should be a hint for the player, right?
6. 01:04:433 (3) - Same as above ^^^

Kiiwa wrote:

[Gex's Hard]

1. 00:33:099 (1) - Really awkward to start this on a blue tick, should really start on a white tick if possible. Well... actually it starts on the white tick, with the end of the previous slider.
2. 00:53:877 - Don't see the point of a speed up here honestly. Is just to emphasize the drums, but now that I look at it again 1.5x looks very high, so I decreased it to 1.3x

TaikuGx wrote:

Hey there~
from my modding queue

Easy

00:11:655 (1,2) - Try to curve 1 more for better looking blanket like this: http://puu.sh/bnMQC/20a206a498.jpg Fixed
00:18:322 (3,1) - I'd blanket them Fixed
00:40:099 (1) - I'd add a finish on the head Fixed
00:41:877 (2,3) - Fix the blanket Fixed
00:43:655 (3,1) - Keep the spacing constant. In Easy and Normal you should place objects where DS tells you to Fixed
00:47:211 (2) - Add finish here? Strong beat Fixed
00:51:655 (5,1) - Blanket Fixed
01:01:433 (3,4,1) - Try to move 1 a little rightgrid for perfect symmetry Fixed

Really nice diff.

Normal

00:16:988 (2,4) - Avoid overlaps like this Fixed
00:20:544 (4,3) - Copy one of the and stack them. (quite nazi cuz it's almost perfectly stacked but.. ) Fixed
00:28:544 (5,2) - Stack Fixed
00:36:544 (1,2) - Blanket Fixed
00:42:544 (5,1) - Spacing way too short Fixed
00:44:322 (2,1) - ^ Fixed
00:58:766 (1,4) - StackFixed
01:21:433 (1) - I'd extend the spinner to the big white tick 01:24:544 - Gona keep it the way it is
Thanks for moding

TaikuGx wrote:

Hard

00:34:766 (1,2,3,4) - I'd swap the slider length of 3 and 4: http://puu.sh/bnNFh/b0ff59608d.jpg fits the music better IMO I like this Changed
00:38:322 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:19:211 (5,6,7) - Blanket maybe? Or intended? Intended

Tbh this diff looks amazing to me. Almost nothing I would change Thx <3

-Nya- wrote:

Gex's Hard:

1. 00:16:988 (6,7) – Improve this blanket and curve 00:16:988 (6) – more Nope
2. 00:20:544 (6) – Straighten it or curve it more Is okay as it is
3. 00:22:322 (1,2) – This blanket can be improved Uhhmm right
4. 00:43:655 (5) – Rather make it look something like this Made something similar
5. 00:44:322 (6) – Straighten or curve more Nope
6. 01:19:211 (5,6,7) – Try something like this: I don't want a blanket here
7. 01:20:988 (1) – End it here: 01:24:544 - If you listen closely you'll see it's properly placed

-Nya- wrote:

Hello! From Nya's Standard Modding Queue
I can't mod the Insane; too hard for me.
Well, here's my mod:

Easy:
HP and AR~ Remove the decimals? Gona keep them for now00:18:322 (3,1) – Improve the blanket (Use the approach circle) Fixed00:21:877 (5,1) - ^ Fixed00:27:655 (3) – Rather place this hitcircle here: X:328 Y:216 Fixed00:41:877 (2,3) – Blanket this better. Fixed00:50:767 (4) – Place this slider here: X:164 Y:248, so that it’s in-line with: 00:48:988 (1) – Fixed00:52:544 (1) – Lessen the curve. If it’s too much curved, it tends to look ugly Fixed01:21:433 (1) – End this spinner here: 01:24:544 – Gona keep it like it is

Normal:
AR~ Remove decimal? Gona keep them for now00:10:322 (2,1) – Make the stack perfect. Place 00:11:655 (1) – here: X:176 Y:130 Fixed00:12:099 (2) – Rather do this? Fixed

Picture

I don’t think you should have two repeats there.00:15:211 (1) – Maybe remove one repeat and add a hitcircle here: 00:16:544 – Gona keep it like it is00:20:544 (4) – Curve more to blanket this hitcircle: 00:21:877 (5) – Fixed00:24:099 (3) – Same here; curve it more so that it’s blanketing the hitcircle and the slider Fixed00:24:988 (4,1) – You can improve the blanket Fixed00:27:655 (4) – Rather place this hitcircle here: X:48 Y:292 Fixed00:31:211 (4) – Move this slider to this point: X:396 Y:92 Fixed00:39:211 (5,6,7) – This looks a bit unneat; rather stack them on top of each other. Gona keep it like it is01:10:322 (1,2,3) - Curve these three a bit more Fixed01:12:988 (4) – Place the hitcircle here:X:220 Y:162, to improve the stack Fixed01:21:433 (1) – End the spinner here: 01:24:544 – Gona keep it like it is

Overall, good mapset. Thanks
Good Luck!

[ Setsuna ] wrote:

Came from my modding queue

*=Personal Opinion
**=Should Fix
***=FIX NOW LOL

General

***Get a custom hitsound Mybe one day
*Change title to "Unravel"??? Capitol U the non capital u is correct.

Normal

**Change HP to 4 Keeping it as it is for now
**00:39:211 (5,6,7) - Make this straight. Fixed my own way

Easy

**Change CS to 3 Keeping it as it is for now
**Change AR to 3 Keeping it as it is for now

Thanks for your mod!

[ Setsuna ] wrote:

[Gex's Hard]
**Change CS to 4 I don't want to have small circles :/
**Change AR to 7 ok
**Change OD to 6 meh ok
**Change HP to 7 lol is already 7. are you sure you are modding my diff? xD
**00:23:655 (3) - I recommend changing this as your missing a strong beat in the middle Nope, but maybe I'll change it in the future if I get any suggestion
*00:47:877 (1) - maybe change this to a SUPER SLOW slider, and make it a really interesting shape The shape is interesting enough imo
**01:20:988 (1) - Extend this to the white tick. already said in other mods, it ends in the blue tick

1. Your tittle song isn't completely correct. You need to change "TV edit" into "TV Edit". Tap on "E".
   http://vgmdb.net/album/46104 YOu can see here.
   
2. I really still hope you can add hitsound for your map: clap, whistle, sliderslide,.... So I won't mod hitsound of this map.
3. Your plan is current combo color? I think using the combo color is sensible at BG, still better.
4. You can remove []op[/b] in tags because it didn't support for searching and remove tokyo ghoul because it is supported in Source. You can add 東京喰種 トーキョーグール (it is Knaji and Kana of the name of this anime series.

1. 00:11:655 (1) - I really still don't like this slider pattern. How about this:
   
   Example

   
   

   288,96,11655,6,0,B|280:128|280:128|288:148|288:148|272:184|272:184|284:208|268:240,1,142.500005435944

2. 00:16:766 (1) - This slider isn't sensible for this rhythm. At the big white tick, there is a drum quite loud. I sugguest you changing into 2 circles and creat the jump.
   
   Example

   
   

   1. 00:16:766 (4) - is at 244/292
   2. 00:16:988 (1) - 200/156
3. 00:28:544 - I sugguest putting circle here. Because drum is quite loud. So bad to ignore it.
4. 00:30:766 (4) - I think more blanket wil be nicer with my way.
   
   Example

   
   

   256,16,30766,2,0,B|244:56|244:56|256:88|256:88|236:120|248:160,1,142.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 00:34:544 (4) - Move to 264/308 to blanket with 00:33:877 (1,2,3). So if you fix them, move 00:35:877 (2) - to 196/276 not to stack with 00:34:544 (4) -
6. 00:41:877 (2) - Move to 252/240 and 00:42:322 (3) - 125/197, so you can around 00:41:655 (1) - by 00:42:322 (3). Good pattern!
7. 00:44:544 (4) - Remove because this is a ghost not. NOt have any sounds from song.
8. 00:45:099 - I can hear a whistle - "Zig" here. I strongly sugguest for this rhythm. 00:45:211 (6) - Remove it. Put a slider from 00:45:099 - to 00:45:211. Excellent rhythm!
   
   Example

   
   

   372,108,45099,2,0,L|320:100,1,35.625001358986

9. 00:47:877 (3) - This slider ignored the voice here: 00:48:099. My way for this is remove this slider. Put a circle and a slider from 00:48:099 - to 00:48:322 -
   
   Example

   
10. 00:48:544 (5) - Move to 112/40. I really don't see any nice to stack with 00:49:322 (2) -
11. 00:55:211 (2) - This is quite difficult to read. Because usually, you used 1/4 with almost this pattern. some players can understand wrongly for this is "1/4 rhythm". I sugguest moving to 236/268
12. 01:02:322 (1) - Remove NC, it didn't support anything
13. 01:18:988 (4,1) - Quite far with default space for 1/4 in this map. MOve (4) nearer pls, like: 32/264
14. 01:19:211 (1,2) - Change into 1/1 slider and move to 140/208. NO have any breaks in his voice at 01:19:433.
    
    Example

    
    

    140,208,79211,6,0,B|188:184|228:208|228:208|264:196|264:196|296:208|336:184,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

15. 01:20:988 - Put here a circle, then put spin at blue tick afterward.
16. 01:20:322 (4,5) - I prefer my idea for the placement and pattern. Current will be not sensible when you move ur mouse.
    
    Example

    

1. CS 3.5? I still really don't like it. Insane is used 4.5. Hard should be 4; 3.5 is so small
2. You didn't use DS snap, that is thing I was realize. Someplace is 1.2x, someplace 1.02x. I'm agree that I and many mappers "always" use multiple DS but it is a plan. Your current diff isn't. That is my idea. Example like: 00:22:322 (1,2,3) - 00:19:655 (3) -
3. 00:36:099 (6) - Ugly slider. I want to more straight.
4. 00:47:877 - Put here a circle. Then let the slider 00:47:877 (1) - start to run.
5. 00:57:877 (4) - Stack
6. 01:09:877 (8,1,3) - ^
7. 01:11:655 (4,6) - ^
8. 01:15:655 (7) - NC, remove NC of 01:16:544 (1) -

1. 00:08:099 (1,2) - First slider must be follow the voice. Second circle didn't follow anything yet. Fix rhythm: Repeat of slider is at 00:08:766 - . Then put a circle at 00:09:877 -
   
   Example

   
2. 00:11:655 (1,2,3) - The voice didn't spell each words. He sings and "move-long". Fix this rhythm with my way like above:
   
   Example

   
3. 00:39:211 (5,6,7) - Change into 1/2 has repeat. It won't be bored when u used the same rhythm with 00:35:655 (5,6,7) -
4. 00:57:877 (4,1) - JUmp in Normal? I hope it isn't. Fix DS pls. Also remove NC
5. 00:59:655 (3) - NC
6. 01:02:322 (1) - Remove NC
7. 01:03:211 (3) - NC
8. 01:01:433 (6,3) - They are stacked. Quite difficult and bad, ugly for normal diff. Move far, yea, move far pls

1. 00:21:877 (5,1,2) - Let see your DS, this is Easy. Jump? HOpe it isn't
2. 00:41:877 (2) - NC becuase strong drum
3. 00:56:099 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Oh so boring. I hope that you can map more insteresting.
4. 01:20:099 (5,6) - My way is not stack. Easier for newbie. Your current is stack.
   
   Example

   

Oyatsu wrote:

From my queue
[General]

1. Your tittle song isn't completely correct. You need to change "TV edit" into "TV Edit". Tap on "E". ok
   http://vgmdb.net/album/46104 YOu can see here.
   
2. I really still hope you can add hitsound for your map: clap, whistle, sliderslide,.... So I won't mod hitsound of this map.
3. Your plan is current combo color? I think using the combo color is sensible at BG, still better.
4. You can remove []op[/b] in tags because it didn't support for searching and remove tokyo ghoul because it is supported in Source. You can add 東京喰種 トーキョーグール (it is Knaji and Kana of the name of this anime series. Umm ok

[Normal]

1. 00:08:099 (1,2) - First slider must be follow the voice. Second circle didn't follow anything yet. Fix rhythm: Repeat of slider is at 00:08:766 - . Then put a circle at 00:09:877 - Fixed
   
   Example

   
2. 00:11:655 (1,2,3) - The voice didn't spell each words. He sings and "move-long". Fix this rhythm with my way like above: Fixed
   
   Example

   
3. 00:39:211 (5,6,7) - Change into 1/2 has repeat. It won't be bored when u used the same rhythm with 00:35:655 (5,6,7) - Gona keep it as it is
4. 00:57:877 (4,1) - JUmp in Normal? I hope it isn't. Fix DS pls. Also remove NC Fixed
5. 00:59:655 (3) - NC Fixed
6. 01:02:322 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
7. 01:03:211 (3) - NC Fixed
8. 01:01:433 (6,3) - They are stacked. Quite difficult and bad, ugly for normal diff. Move far, yea, move far pls They arent o.o

[Easy]

1. 00:21:877 (5,1,2) - Let see your DS, this is Easy. Jump? HOpe it isn't Fixed
2. 00:41:877 (2) - NC becuase strong drum Fixed
3. 00:56:099 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Oh so boring. I hope that you can map more insteresting. Fixed
4. 01:20:099 (5,6) - My way is not stack. Easier for newbie. Your current is stack. Fixed
   
   Example

   

Oyatsu wrote:

[Gex's Hard]

1. CS 3.5? I still really don't like it. Insane is used 4.5. Hard should be 4; 3.5 is so small hmmphm ok changed
2. You didn't use DS snap, that is thing I was realize. Someplace is 1.2x, someplace 1.02x. I'm agree that I and many mappers "always" use multiple DS but it is a plan. Your current diff isn't. That is my idea. Example like: 00:22:322 (1,2,3) - 00:19:655 (3) - Actually I did use DS, there just were some little mistakes xD
3. 00:36:099 (6) - Ugly slider. I want to more straight. Me too
4. 00:47:877 - Put here a circle. Then let the slider 00:47:877 (1) - start to run. Wut? @.@
5. 00:57:877 (4) - Stack Yes, stack
6. 01:09:877 (8,1,3) - ^ Changed
7. 01:11:655 (4,6) - ^ Changed
8. 01:15:655 (7) - NC, remove NC of 01:16:544 (1) - OK

Oyatsu wrote:

From my queue

[Kenterz's Insane]

1. 00:11:655 (1) - I really still don't like this slider pattern. How about this: Nope, I like it, sorry
   
   Example

   
   

   288,96,11655,6,0,B|280:128|280:128|288:148|288:148|272:184|272:184|284:208|268:240,1,142.500005435944

2. 00:16:766 (1) - This slider isn't sensible for this rhythm. At the big white tick, there is a drum quite loud. I sugguest you changing into 2 circles and creat the jump.
   
   Example

   
   

   1. 00:16:766 (4) - is at 244/292
   2. 00:16:988 (1) - 200/156
3. 00:28:544 - I sugguest putting circle here. Because drum is quite loud. So bad to ignore it. It'll break the break (lol) :c
4. 00:30:766 (4) - I think more blanket wil be nicer with my way. More blanket ? You mean increase the curve ? (fixed btw)
   
   Example

   
   

   256,16,30766,2,0,B|244:56|244:56|256:88|256:88|236:120|248:160,1,142.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 00:34:544 (4) - Move to 264/308 to blanket with 00:33:877 (1,2,3). So if you fix them, move 00:35:877 (2) - to 196/276 not to stack with 00:34:544 (4) - I think it's fine at the moment =/
6. 00:41:877 (2) - Move to 252/240 and 00:42:322 (3) - 125/197, so you can around 00:41:655 (1) - by 00:42:322 (3). Good pattern!
7. 00:44:544 (4) - Remove because this is a ghost not. NOt have any sounds from song.
8. 00:45:099 - I can hear a whistle - "Zig" here. I strongly sugguest for this rhythm. 00:45:211 (6) - Remove it. Put a slider from 00:45:099 - to 00:45:211. Excellent rhythm!
   
   Example

   
   

   372,108,45099,2,0,L|320:100,1,35.625001358986

9. 00:47:877 (3) - This slider ignored the voice here: 00:48:099. My way for this is remove this slider. Put a circle and a slider from 00:48:099 - to 00:48:322 -
   
   Example

   
10. 00:48:544 (5) - Move to 112/40. I really don't see any nice to stack with 00:49:322 (2) -
11. 00:55:211 (2) - This is quite difficult to read. Because usually, you used 1/4 with almost this pattern. some players can understand wrongly for this is "1/4 rhythm". I sugguest moving to 236/268
12. 01:02:322 (1) - Remove NC, it didn't support anything It follow the NC pattern
13. 01:18:988 (4,1) - Quite far with default space for 1/4 in this map. MOve (4) nearer pls, like: 32/264
14. 01:19:211 (1,2) - Change into 1/1 slider and move to 140/208. NO have any breaks in his voice at 01:19:433.
    
    Example

    
    

    140,208,79211,6,0,B|188:184|228:208|228:208|264:196|264:196|296:208|336:184,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

15. 01:20:988 - Put here a circle, then put spin at blue tick afterward.
16. 01:20:322 (4,5) - I prefer my idea for the placement and pattern. Current will be not sensible when you move ur mouse.
    
    Example

    

With you are a newbie in mapping. I think it is enough but still not enough for rank. You need to improve more on yourself style. See other ranked maps by almost famous mappers. I hope i can see your first ranked map soon but not this

1. Disable Widescreen Support in all difficulties as this mapset does not feature a storyboard.
2. Uncheck the "letterbox during breaks" in all difficulties as the mapset features a video.

1. 00:25:877 (1) - Move to x:57 y:81 to stack with the previous 00:23:655 (2) -.
2. 00:51:211 - Here, the slider 4 and next slider 1 overlap. Please fix this by either A) Slightly increasing the AR (which I wouldn't recommend) or B) Slightly adjusting the slider 1 accordingly.
3. 00:56:099 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Try to map different sliders when doing symmetry here to make it more interesting. I see that the other mods have mentioned this pattern as well. Please try for different slider looks completely. Some given more curve and some no curve at all. Remember that you have the whole left/right sides of the grid at your fingertips.

1. 00:16:988 (2,1) - The flow here is somewhat awkward. Please play test it and consider moving the next slider 1 to e.g: flow upwards instead.
2. 00:28:544 (5,1) - The Circle 5 is overlapping the next Slider 1's end. Avoid doing this at all cost in the Normal difficulty.
3. 00:35:655 (5,6,7) -, 00:39:211 (5,6,7) - I personally would not use repetitive 1/2 circles in a Normal, but this is up to you. It is rankable, but somewhat difficult to play, etc. I notice that you use this pattern many times throughout the map. Please consider using different patterns for some places to help diversify the map.
4. 00:42:544 (5,1) - Fix this stack so that the objects stack properly on top of each other.

1. 00:18:766 (1,4) - Please do not overlap circle 4 behind the end of Slider 1. Try moving circle 4 below that of Slider 1's end.
2. 00:35:655 (4,5,6) - The slider 6 can look better in the pattern. Please try slightly adjusting it.
3. 00:51:655 (4,1) - Here Slider 4 overlaps the next Slider 1. You must fix this as it currently stands unrankable. I advise that you check for other overlaps among the map, like e.g: 01:05:877 (7,1) - that need to be fixed.
4. 01:09:433 (6,8) - The sharp curves on these sliders do not flow well from my perspective. Consider changing them.

1. The diff is pretty nice; I FC'd the kiai time first try~

Project Railgun wrote:

Hello from Railgun's Quality Appreciation Queue,

[General]

1. Disable Widescreen Support in all difficulties as this mapset does not feature a storyboard. Fixed
2. Uncheck the "letterbox during breaks" in all difficulties as the mapset features a video. Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:25:877 (1) - Move to x:57 y:81 to stack with the previous 00:23:655 (2) -. Fixed
2. 00:51:211 - Here, the slider 4 and next slider 1 overlap. Please fix this by either A) Slightly increasing the AR (which I wouldn't recommend) or B) Slightly adjusting the slider 1 accordingly. Fixed
3. 00:56:099 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Try to map different sliders when doing symmetry here to make it more interesting. I see that the other mods have mentioned this pattern as well. Please try for different slider looks completely. Some given more curve and some no curve at all. Remember that you have the whole left/right sides of the grid at your fingertips. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:16:988 (2,1) - The flow here is somewhat awkward. Please play test it and consider moving the next slider 1 to e.g: flow upwards instead. Fixed
2. 00:28:544 (5,1) - The Circle 5 is overlapping the next Slider 1's end. Avoid doing this at all cost in the Normal difficulty. Fixed
3. 00:35:655 (5,6,7) -, 00:39:211 (5,6,7) - I personally would not use repetitive 1/2 circles in a Normal, but this is up to you. It is rankable, but somewhat difficult to play, etc. I notice that you use this pattern many times throughout the map. Please consider using different patterns for some places to help diversify the map. Gona keep it as it is ...
4. 00:42:544 (5,1) - Fix this stack so that the objects stack properly on top of each other. Fixed

Good luck.

Thanks for your mod!

Project Railgun wrote:

[Gex]

1. 00:18:766 (1,4) - Please do not overlap circle 4 behind the end of Slider 1. Try moving circle 4 below that of Slider 1's end. Uups my bad. Fixed
2. 00:35:655 (4,5,6) - The slider 6 can look better in the pattern. Please try slightly adjusting it. I tried something different here
3. 00:51:655 (4,1) - Here Slider 4 overlaps the next Slider 1. You must fix this as it currently stands unrankable. I advise that you check for other overlaps among the map, like e.g: 01:05:877 (7,1) - that need to be fixed. I changed some but I'd like to know when an overlap is unrankeable and when not, cuz there are some that look perfectly fine for me :S
4. 01:09:433 (6,8) - The sharp curves on these sliders do not flow well from my perspective. Consider changing them. No change. My idea here is to highlight the rhythm/music change.

skinnyjimmy wrote:

[Gex's Hard]
Hey Gex!! Hi jimmy! Thx for modding <3

00:47:877 (1) - Why is there a SV change here? I twisted the SV a bit to get a better shape. Imo is not a big problem but I'll probably change it if more ppl complain about it

00:46:766 (3) - Move this to 68, 232 Yay! nice placement

00:46:988 (4) - Move this to 80, 168 Done (also rotated a bit >.<)

01:04:433 (3) - Maybe you could move this out a bit more to make it easier to read that it is 1/3 I think is pretty far away :S

1. Your colours are too bright/agressive. They do not work well with the BG/Video and seem to be quite painful for players' eyes. Try to fade them a bit or find a better set of colours?
   
   Example

   [Colours]
   [img]http://puu.sh/buDBX.png[/img]
   Combo1 : 152,169,146
   Combo2 : 112,104,125
   Combo3 : 237,183,249
   Combo4 : 182,33,33

1. Try to drop HP Drain a bit, as there are some gaps that may stress beginners.
2. 00:15:211 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - minor - your spacing looks quite irregular at this part. It is visible even while testing the map, so I'd recommend you to work a bit more on it.
3. 00:20:988 (3) - try to remove the circle, please. It may sound better with the music and will help you to emphasize the beat at 00:21:433.
   Note: agree? You can use some similar rhythm 00:23:655 (2,3) - here. Just give it a try.
4. 00:47:211 (2,1) - as a beginner, I'd surely hit (1)'s tail just because it is closer. To prevent this misunderstanding, please, try to re-arrange the pattern in an intuitvely-understandable way. Something like this would prevent any misunderstanding.
   Note: 01:18:766 (3,5) - a very similar thing happens here, (5) is just too close and it looks a bit tricky/untidy. Mind moving it somewhere else?
5. 00:55:211 - I'd place an 1/1 slider here to emphasize the drums. Give it a try, please.
6. 01:00:988 (2,3) - minor - practically the only stack in the whole diff. That is why it looks a bit random and maybe out of place. Try to do something to avoid the stack, maybe?
   
   Not bad, but could use a couple more mods. You can make the diff even better, even though it's already a nice one.

1. Circle Size 3,5 would make the diff spread better balanced and look prettier. Give it a try.
2. 00:11:655 (1,2) - minor - I won't complain about quality of the blankets, but keep in mind that you can improve them.
3. 00:16:988 (2,3,4) - in terms of flow and visually the placement does not look good. As (4) is too close and creates an awkward feeling while playing. try to move them around like this to improve the pattern.
   Note: 00:28:544 (5,1) - same applies here and for a few more patterns.
4. 00:46:766 (3) - the circle represents nothing. Try to replace it with an 1/1 slider started at 00:46:544. (example)
   Note: the rhythm gets quite tricky, but sliders are quite easy to hit, so it shouldn't be a problem for anyone.
   
   Generally, the diff is fine. I feel like it can get a bit better visually and some more mods for the rhythm won't hurt either.

1. AR feels a bit low. How about AR 7,5 to make this diff look a bit prettier?
2. 00:14:766 (7,1) - a jump here would work just fine. x1.2 DS is not a jump and it looks more like a spacing mistake, if you want a jump, increase the DS here to x1.5 or higher, please.
   Note: 00:16:544 (5,6) - and one more jump here.
3. 00:22:988 (2,3) - a spacing mistake. It is very noticeable even while playing, so I would highly suggest you to fix it.
   Note: unfortunately, you have a few more mistakes. Care to check the diff and fix them, please.
4. 00:25:877 (1,2,3,4) - the velocity change represents nothing and hardly fits with the song. Besides, this is not the hardest diff, so using a pattern like this does not seem like a good idea to me. Try to keep the same Slider Velocity here, please.
5. 00:40:099 - you could set the the distance snap a bit higher to avoid 1/2 overlaps at this part. I am not forcing you to change this part now, but you can kee it in mind for your future maps.
6. 00:55:211 (1) - please, place its tail somewhere else as it gets covered and looks quite tricky. An example
7. 01:00:544 (3) - minor - as the sudden red nod represents nothing and looks quite messy, i would not use this kind of slidershape here. Consider changing it, unless it's a part of your style that you would REALLY like to keep.
   
   The diff needs more work, I think. You can make it better, besides, the diff gap between Normal and Hard is kinda too big, in my opinion. Try to simplify the diff a bit and clean it up a bit, some patterns are untidy and need more attention. Not a bad diff, but it can get better.

1. 00:22:988 (2,3) - how about a jump between these two to stress the vocals? Itworks well with the structure of your diff, I think.
2. 00:32:544 (2) - a slider that changhes polarity from 1/6 to 1/4 should have a new combo. It will be a warning for players and it will make the jump more obvious.
3. 00:45:766 (2) - you can mute the tail since there is pretty much nothing on it. Vocals also fade here, so, the muted tail will fit nicely.
4. 00:51:988 (2,3) - sudden low-DS triplet breaks the patterns and the excitement that those 1/4s gave. An 1/4 slider with x1,6 DS here is a better idea, try it. Test it in action and see if you like my idea or not. Example
5. 01:09:877 (4,5) - I don't feel like the spacing change here represents anything in the song. Try to keep the DS consisstent? Or at least place a new combo to warn people about the spacing change.
   
   Not that much to say. Some patterns were a bit exaggerated, if you ask me, but in general, that was a fine diff.

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested via #modreqs.

[General]

1. Your colours are too bright/agressive. They do not work well with the BG/Video and seem to be quite painful for players' eyes. Try to fade them a bit or find a better set of colours? Fixed thanks for the example
   
   Example

   [Colours]
   [img]http://puu.sh/buDBX.png[/img]
   Combo1 : 152,169,146
   Combo2 : 112,104,125
   Combo3 : 237,183,249
   Combo4 : 182,33,33

[Easy]

1. Try to drop HP Drain a bit, as there are some gaps that may stress beginners. Changed to 1,5
2. 00:15:211 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - minor - your spacing looks quite irregular at this part. It is visible even while testing the map, so I'd recommend you to work a bit more on it. Fixed
3. 00:20:988 (3) - try to remove the circle, please. It may sound better with the music and will help you to emphasize the beat at 00:21:433.
   Note: agree? You can use some similar rhythm 00:23:655 (2,3) - here. Just give it a try. Yep thanks
4. 00:47:211 (2,1) - as a beginner, I'd surely hit (1)'s tail just because it is closer. To prevent this misunderstanding, please, try to re-arrange the pattern in an intuitvely-understandable way. Something like this would prevent any misunderstanding.
   Note: 01:18:766 (3,5) - a very similar thing happens here, (5) is just too close and it looks a bit tricky/untidy. Mind moving it somewhere else? Fixed
5. 00:55:211 - I'd place an 1/1 slider here to emphasize the drums. Give it a try, please. Fixed
6. 01:00:988 (2,3) - minor - practically the only stack in the whole diff. That is why it looks a bit random and maybe out of place. Try to do something to avoid the stack, maybe? Gona keep it as it is for now
   
   Not bad, but could use a couple more mods. You can make the diff even better, even though it's already a nice one.

[Normal]

1. Circle Size 3,5 would make the diff spread better balanced and look prettier. Give it a try. looks better thanks!
2. 00:11:655 (1,2) - minor - I won't complain about quality of the blankets, but keep in mind that you can improve them. Fixed
3. 00:16:988 (2,3,4) - in terms of flow and visually the placement does not look good. As (4) is too close and creates an awkward feeling while playing. try to move them around like this to improve the pattern. [
   Note: 00:28:544 (5,1) - same applies here and for a few more patterns. Fixed thanks for the example
4. 00:46:766 (3) - the circle represents nothing. Try to replace it with an 1/1 slider started at 00:46:544. (example)
   Note: the rhythm gets quite tricky, but sliders are quite easy to hit, so it shouldn't be a problem for anyone. Fixed thanks for the example
   
   Generally, the diff is fine. I feel like it can get a bit better visually and some more mods for the rhythm won't hurt either.

Your mapset might need a few more mods, but it looks promising! Keep up the good work!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Thanks for moding

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested via #modreqs.

[Kenterz's Insane]

1. 00:22:988 (2,3) - how about a jump between these two to stress the vocals? Itworks well with the structure of your diff, I think.
2. 00:32:544 (2) - a slider that changhes polarity from 1/6 to 1/4 should have a new combo. It will be a warning for players and it will make the jump more obvious.
3. 00:45:766 (2) - you can mute the tail since there is pretty much nothing on it. Vocals also fade here, so, the muted tail will fit nicely.
4. 00:51:988 (2,3) - sudden low-DS triplet breaks the patterns and the excitement that those 1/4s gave. An 1/4 slider with x1,6 DS here is a better idea, try it. Test it in action and see if you like my idea or not. Example
5. 01:09:877 (4,5) - I don't feel like the spacing change here represents anything in the song. Try to keep the DS consisstent? Or at least place a new combo to warn people about the spacing change.
   
   Not that much to say. Some patterns were a bit exaggerated, if you ask me, but in general, that was a fine diff.

Everything fixed. I tried to do original patterns, maybe that's why you think they are exaggerated, I'm sorry ._.

Your mapset might need a few more mods, but it looks promising! Keep up the good work!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

-Bakari- wrote:

[Gex's Hard]

1. AR feels a bit low. How about AR 7,5 to make this diff look a bit prettier? Sure! Changed
2. 00:14:766 (7,1) - a jump here would work just fine. x1.2 DS is not a jump and it looks more like a spacing mistake, if you want a jump, increase the DS here to x1.5 or higher, please. Ohok I understand. Fixed
   Note: 00:16:544 (5,6) - and one more jump here. Fixed
3. 00:22:988 (2,3) - a spacing mistake. It is very noticeable even while playing, so I would highly suggest you to fix it. Uggh idk how this ended up like this ;w; Fixed
   Note: unfortunately, you have a few more mistakes. Care to check the diff and fix them, please. I'll try ;w;
4. 00:25:877 (1,2,3,4) - the velocity change represents nothing and hardly fits with the song. Besides, this is not the hardest diff, so using a pattern like this does not seem like a good idea to me. Try to keep the same Slider Velocity here, please. Yeah it was different at the beginning but meeh... Changed.
5. 00:40:099 - you could set the the distance snap a bit higher to avoid 1/2 overlaps at this part. I am not forcing you to change this part now, but you can kee it in mind for your future maps. Ok, changed DS to x1.2
6. 00:55:211 (1) - please, place its tail somewhere else as it gets covered and looks quite tricky. An example Ok changed
7. 01:00:544 (3) - minor - as the sudden red nod represents nothing and looks quite messy, i would not use this kind of slidershape here. Consider changing it, unless it's a part of your style that you would REALLY like to keep. I'd like to keep this >.<
   
   The diff needs more work, I think. You can make it better, besides, the diff gap between Normal and Hard is kinda too big, in my opinion. Try to simplify the diff a bit and clean it up a bit, some patterns are untidy and need more attention. Not a bad diff, but it can get better.
   
   I tried my best to fix and polish everything. About the difficulty gap... idk what to do :S
   Anyways thx for modding

1. 00:37:433 (2) - Although you do this and I would
   
   SPOILER

   spoilerbox]
2. 00:46:655 (3) - Rhythm from the blue line is difficult for beginners　And this type of thing if you follow the rhythm
   [spoilerbox]
3. 00:58:766 (5,6,1) - Bad flow
   
   SPOILER

   
   01:06:766 (3) - How about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:11:211 (2) - Ctrl+G
5. 01:16:322 (5) - Let's change the rhythm a little
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
   
6. 00:27:655 (4) - finish
7. 00:27:655 (4) - ^
8. 00:28:544 (5) - clap
9. 00:40:099 (1) - finish a hed
10. 00:48:988 (1) - ^
11. 01:10:322 (1) - finish a hed
12. 01:13:877 (1) - ^
13. 01:16:322 (5) - finish a tall
14. 01:18:322 (3) - finish a hed
    
    
    00:57:877 (4) -
    
    SPOILER

    
    It will be better to place the slider to think it looks rather than just copying
    I think repeated use is bored also many players
    Please try to imitate the difficulty of other hitsound
    
    • 
      
      
      [Gex's Hard]
      
    1. 00:19:655 (3) - Natural flow made me cry
       
       SPOILER

       
    2. 01:20:099 (7) - Ctrl+G??
       
       
       
    3. 00:27:655 (1) - finish a hed
    4. 00:40:988 (3) - whistle a hed
    5. 00:56:099 (1) - finish a hed
       
       hitsound, please refer to the Mod of normal
       Nice map
    [Kenterz's Insane]
    
    1. 00:32:174 (1) - Same space as here 00:53:877 (1) -
       
       
       
    2. 00:33:877 (1) - finish a hed
    3. 00:34:766 (1) - finish
    4. 00:35:655 (1) - finish a hed
    5. 00:36:099 (3) - finish a hed
    6. 00:37:433 (1) - finish a hed
    7. 00:38:322 (1) - finish
    8. 00:39:099 (4) - finish a tall

1. There are two spaces between these words in your tags: opening 東京喰種 トーキョーグール supernatural

1. 00:41:877 (1,2) - Try to have both sliders blanket each other like http://puu.sh/bEU8i/58eba7ea7d.png

1. 00:46:544 (3,4) - I wouldn't use 3/4 circles at all in easy or normal. It's too hard for them to read this no matter how it's presented. If you must use 3/4 rhythm, go with repeating sliders.
2. 00:58:766 (5,2) - This barely doesn't stack but 00:59:211 (6,3) - does, seems ugly. Make sure both stack

1. HP7 is way too high for a 135 bpm hard diff. HP5 would be better.
2. 00:22:322 (1,2) - these sliders can blanket each other
3. 01:00:322 (2,3) - nowhere in the music indicates there should be a jump here, plus the spacing is very misleading. There is 3/4 beat from the previous object (also you should use less 3/4 circles next to sliders and more 3/4 sliders because the former messes up polarity) but that's spaced smaller than the 1/2 beat jump after the circle.
4. 01:03:211 (1,2,3,4,5) - this distance snap works out, but as I said it's still hard to read because it's 3/4

1. HP8 is way too high for a 135 bpm song because the object density is too low. Should use HP6-7.
2. 00:26:988 (5) - the jump between this and the stream is too hard, please move it closer to the stream.
3. 00:57:211 (2,3,4) - I don't like how vocals are on slider repeat or slider ends. You should map this part to have keypresses on the vocals. Plus, this part is overmapped anyways. There is no reason for a slider to begin here 00:57:211 (2) - because nothing in the music indicates it. This part should emphasize the vocals, maybe something like this with the keypresses on the right spots:
   
4. 01:19:211 (1) - blanket is a bit off, drag end point to 284, 308