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TK from Ling tosite sigure - unravel (TV edit)

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smallboat
As Fatfan Kolek request to recheck this map,but still have many issues need to be popped,sorry inconvenience.


Main issue:
  1. 1.Cancel widescreen support in Extra diff.
  2. 2.Have a unsnapped slider need to be fixed : 00:46:990 (4) (Obviously this sound is start at the red line 00:46:962 (4) -here) (In hard diff)
  3. 3.After a discussion with pishifat we found the existing timing seems to be a bit off. Need to more work at this timing. (pishfat will post here)
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    Example (Extra diff) : 00:53:877 (5) - this slider end drum not at the time point there,I don't think it a 1/12 or 1/16 rhythm,sounds like this music not so complicated to me)
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    So,Kenterz's Insane this rhythm 00:53:877 (1,2,3) - Especially the (3) slider end,obviously has no drum sound here,suggest place this rhythm (Looks so poor now),refer to D-kun's map.
Minor issue :

All diff Suggest give 01:21:419 (1) - this spinner set S hitsound set,cuz it is soft quiet part,shouldn't use N drum express this part music I think.

[Extra]

Unsnapped green line : 00:28:194, 00:31:209
And no necessary line: 00:45:970 (5% no need)

[Insane]

Unsnapped green line : 00:31:209
Fatfan Kolek
I'll fix my issues as soon as I'll get to my computer :3 I'm looking forward to pishifat's Timing since this song really has some weird changes there D:
Thanks for the mod so far smallboat :3/

Edit: Here is the fixed version of my difficulty. Applied all! :D

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osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Tokyo Ghoul op.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54988
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:unravel (TV edit)
TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:kristi71111
Version:Fatfan Kolek's Extra
Source:Tokyo Ghoul
Tags:opening 東京喰種 トーキョーグール supernatural Gexigamma Kenterz Fatfan Kolek
BeatmapID:558049
BeatmapSetID:201141

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7.3
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.3
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"tokyghouldopening.avi"
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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AruOtta
Everything fixed
Thanks for the mod :3

Update : http://puu.sh/dOixV.osu
Topic Starter
kristi71111
^^
updated.
#100th post
Gexigamma
Fixed everything
http://puu.sh/dPjWb/ef82ed0dca.rar

00:46:962 (4) - This slider is a problem coz it should end at the red line (00:47:211 -) but idk how.. orz

Maybe if timing is fixed the slider can be solved :?
pishifat

smallboat wrote:

(pishfat will post here)
ayyy

timing is stupid so i flew over to japan and held "TK from Ling tosite sigure" at gunpoint with the demand of re-editing this song so it would work with only one uninherited point. those guys had a fair bit of security, but i just showed them my red name and they all backed down so it was k. use this mp3 with an offset of 8889 and a bpm of 135. if something sounds wrong, tell me and i'll go back to japan to force a re-re-edit

@gex that slider end thing doesn't matter with new timing, but if you wanted to know how to do it still, you could watch this not-very-informative tutorial
Topic Starter
kristi71111
All diffs updated with new timing and mp3 ofc.
Gexigamma
Yay! Thx pishiswag! :)

Still, there are some problems with my diff ;w; 00:48:666 (1,2,3) -

I'll fix that and edit this post when im done

EDIT: http://puu.sh/dR90J/8c3a1ad379.rar
Kyuubikku
Whoa. I don't know what you did, but the timing on your insane map is ridiculously off now. I'm not sure if it's the same for the other maps.

Yeah it's messed up for all your maps.
Fatfan Kolek

Kyuubikku wrote:

Whoa. I don't know what you did, but the timing on your insane map is ridiculously off now. I'm not sure if it's the same for the other maps.

Yeah it's messed up for all your maps.
Step 1: Delete the mapset
Step 2: Redownload
????????
Fixed.
Kyuubikku
Oh didn't see that the mp3 was switched. My bad. Keep the good work up.
smallboat
Okay,still looks fine,reb it.

Btw thanks pishfat to adjust the timing.
smallboat
As mapper request fix issue in insane diff,reb this
Gero
Placeholder
Konei
Ah well, seems as if Gero's gonna do this.
Gero
Yo o/

General

  1. Clean
Easy

  1. 00:46:222 (1) - Maybe it's me but the gap between this slider and the previous note is quite remarkable, therefore, I'd like recommend placing the distance that corresponds.
  2. 00:53:333 (1) - I'm pretty sure that you forgot to add one finish at the head of the slider since if you listen it carefully you can notice that there are a sound like a finish at the background.
  3. 00:56:888 (2,3,4) - If you wanna make a symmetrical pattern, I'd like to suggest you to make them at the middle of the grid,so what about to move them to X: 328 Y: 232 since it looks quite better imo, you should try it.
  4. 01:07:555 (1) - Soft-finish maybe?
Normal

  1. 00:11:111 (3,1) - Same thing that I've mentioned on the easiest difficulty about the spacing.
  2. 01:09:333 (2,3) - It's quite weird that in this part the density of the whole difficulty is significantly lower compared to the other parts so I would like you to try to add some notes here to avoid this huge space.
  3. 01:22:222 (1) - Missing whistle?
Gex's Hard

  1. 00:21:333 (6,7) - I've tested several times this and I've come to the conclusion that the flow and rhythm is a little bit confusing to understand so I would like to suggest to use this rhythm instead to avoid complicated patterns at this part.
Kenterz's Insane

  1. Awesome
Fatfan Sexy Kolek's Extra

  1. 01:03:111 (6) - I think you forgot to add a new combo here since the change of rhythm is quite different at this part.
  2. 01:21:777 (1) - Whistle?

    Call me back when you're done to apply the changes.
Fatfan Kolek

Gero wrote:

Yo o/

Fatfan Sexy Kolek's Extra

  1. 01:03:111 (6) - I think you forgot to add a new combo here since the change of rhythm is quite different at this part. No change since I made a NC every second big white tick. It'd be a bit inaccurate then. :O
  2. 01:21:777 (1) - Whistle? Alright, added! :D
Thanks Gemoe! <3
Code
osu file format v13

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AudioFilename: Tokyo Ghoul op.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55777
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:unravel (TV edit)
TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:kristi71111
Version:Fatfan Kolek's Extra
Source:Tokyo Ghoul
Tags:opening 東京喰種 トーキョーグール supernatural Gexigamma Kenterz Fatfan Kolek
BeatmapID:558049
BeatmapSetID:201141

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7.3
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.3
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Topic Starter
kristi71111

Gero wrote:

Yo o/

Easy

  1. 00:46:222 (1) - Maybe it's me but the gap between this slider and the previous note is quite remarkable, therefore, I'd like recommend placing the distance that corresponds.Its fine for me... No change
  2. 00:53:333 (1) - I'm pretty sure that you forgot to add one finish at the head of the slider since if you listen it carefully you can notice that there are a sound like a finish at the background. Added
  3. 00:56:888 (2,3,4) - If you wanna make a symmetrical pattern, I'd like to suggest you to make them at the middle of the grid,so what about to move them to X: 328 Y: 232 since it looks quite better imo, you should try it. Yep its better thanks!
  4. 01:07:555 (1) - Soft-finish maybe? Added
Normal

  1. 00:11:111 (3,1) - Same thing that I've mentioned on the easiest difficulty about the spacing.
    Asked two qat's about it they said it was acceptable no change...(want to keep it as it is)
  2. 01:09:333 (2,3) - It's quite weird that in this part the density of the whole difficulty is significantly lower compared to the other parts so I would like you to try to add some notes here to avoid this huge space. Changed
  3. 01:22:222 (1) - Missing whistle? Yep Added
Will update everything when baka gex update's his diff
Gexigamma

Gero wrote:

Yo o/

Gex's Hard

  1. 00:21:333 (6,7) - I've tested several times this and I've come to the conclusion that the flow and rhythm is a little bit confusing to understand so I would like to suggest to use this rhythm instead to avoid complicated patterns at this part. Which rhythm? WHICH ONE? oh there's a link... ¬¬ fixed!
Thx Gero~!

fixed gif: http://puu.sh/e5fuz/b0edc033ab.rar
Gero
Everything seems fine for me.

~ Qualified ~
riffy
Congratulations!
AruOtta
Congratz for your first ranked map <3
Kyouren
Gratzz for your first ranked map~ :3


IS AWESOME!!!~~~
Anxient
Yea! Congrats! All this map needs to do now is sit in qualified for a week!
Rakuen
Waoooo

Grats
Myxo
Uh oh eh
Now I have to wait atleast a week hue
Anyway congratz :D
CSLM
gratz~ for your first map ranked :D
-Mo-
Congratulations!
Winnie
Sick stuff congrats :)
Topic Starter
kristi71111
ib4 disqalification :/
Mao

Reason for Disqualification


  1. In Fatfan Kolek's Extra 00:32:888 (5) - should be snapped to 1/6 to follow the sounds you want to properly like in Kenterz's Insane.
  2. The lower difficulties (E/N/H) really need improvements to be ready. I'll explain certain points in the mod below, especially Hard needs much more work if you ask me.
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[ Gex's Hard]
  1. Please use Soft Sampleset for the calm parts. Like this it just feels way too loud and overdone. Also the normal-sliderslide is really weird in these quiet parts.
  2. 00:11:555 (6) - What is on the white tick here? Nothing for me at least. Please consider to use this rhythm to follow the piano properly. (Same applies to 00:14:666 (5,6) - )
  3. 00:16:888 (3) - Why is here a clap? That doesn't really make sense compared to the sounds in the music imo. (Same applies for the following ones)
  4. 00:24:444 (3) - Shorten this by 1/2. Ignoring this strong downbeat by mapping something much more quiet doesn't really fit if you ask me.
  5. 00:25:333 (4,5) - Similiar as above. I'd go for this or the same with an 1/2 slider starting on the same as the old slider.
  6. 00:44:444 (3,4) - Hm, why aren't you following vocals here? o: They are the most dominant and I honestly don't really see why 3 is ending on a a white tick even though there's barely anything. Something like this would work (use soft sampleset for the most objects please). Also 1/1 gaps shouldn't be a bad idea because there's no real connection between the notes.
  7. 00:47:777 (4) - The tick this ends on is very strong, I'd rather substitude this with two circles to keep clickability to both and remove 00:47:555 (3) - .
  8. 00:56:000 (1) - Is that clap intentional? o.o
  9. 01:04:888 (2) - Nothing important on the blue tick. Please either shorten it to 1/2 to follow vocals or extend t to 1/1 to follow drums. (Same suggestion applies to 01:06:666 (6) - )
  10. 01:05:777 (4) - Same here. 1/1 please for vocals and drums.
  11. This definitely needs more improvements.
[ Kenterz's Insane]
  1. The claps at the beginning are too intense for that quiet calm piano section. I'd personally substitude them with the drum-hitnormal to get this kind of "sizzle" sound in the background.
  2. 00:28:444 (1,2) - I think the spacing is intentional here but I feel like it could have been located much better because like this it almost follows the previous kind of line. I'd rather do something like zugzag. Depends on your preference though.
  3. 00:32:666 (3,1) - I'd rather use a circle and then put the 1/6 Slider seperately to avoid making the player click on 1/6.
  4. 00:56:444 (1) - Why 100% Volume? That's really loud q.q
  5. 01:13:777 (1) - Maybe that's just me but it would be really nice to see 1/4 here for the vocals as you followed vocals most of the time.
[ Fatfan Kolek's Extra]
  1. Bitte nenn die Diff Insane, das ist nicht ansatzweise eine Extra.
  2. Das mag vielleicht nur meine Meinung sein, aber ich finde in der Kiai vor allem sind manche Slidershapes wie 01:00:000 (7) - ein wenig "zusammenhanglos" und sehen aus, als wären sie einfach nur da um etwas "speziellere" Slidershapes zu haben :/
  3. 00:14:555 (3) - Wieso ignorierst du auf dem weißen Tick das Piano? Ich würde eher von rot zu weiß ein Triplet machen anstatt den weißen Tick ganz auszulassen.
  4. 00:28:333 (15,1) - Muss ich den Stack hier verstehen? Damit wird ja eine neue Section eingeleitet und deshalb würd ichs eher mit größerem Spacing betonen. Kann aber sein, dass das nur ich bin.
  5. 00:30:222 (1,2,3) - Was folgst du hier? Das ist soeine ruhige Section. Auch die Betonung find ich liegt auf den blauen Ticks und wär deshalb schöner clickable. Example
  6. 00:31:111 (1,2) - Das kommt ein wenig plötzlich und die Symmetry wirkt ein wenig aus dem Stil raus. Spacing verkleinern würde meiner Meinung nach helfen.
  7. 00:32:888 (5) - Siehe Disqualification Reason.
  8. 00:43:000 (3,4,5,6) - Das wirkt total aus der Section raus. Die anderen folgen den blauen Ticks, wo die Vocals sind und hier ist einfach nur 1/4? Was folgst du damit überhaupt? Bitte map es so wie die folgenden auch oder mit einem 3/4 Slider anstatt 2.
  9. 00:47:888 - Note für Piano wäre schön, wenn du mich fragst o:
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So well, the overall set needs much more improvements especially in the lower difficulties. Best you could do is getting more mods from experienced modders to focus on E/N/H more. It's very late here already so I'll continue modding the Normal and Easy tomorrow.
Edit: Physics Exam preperation took too long, will be done tomorrow as I talked to the mapper.
AruOtta

Mao wrote:

[ Kenterz's Insane]
  1. The claps at the beginning are too intense for that quiet calm piano section. I'd personally substitude them with the drum-hitnormal to get this kind of "sizzle" sound in the background.
  2. 00:28:444 (1,2) - I think the spacing is intentional here but I feel like it could have been located much better because like this it almost follows the previous kind of line. I'd rather do something like zugzag. Depends on your preference though.
  3. 00:32:666 (3,1) - I'd rather use a circle and then put the 1/6 Slider seperately to avoid making the player click on 1/6.
  4. 00:56:444 (1) - Why 100% Volume? That's really loud q.q It's here to increase the epicness a bit. Decreased to 80%
  5. 01:13:777 (1) - Maybe that's just me but it would be really nice to see 1/4 here for the vocals as you followed vocals most of the time.
Everything fixed. Hope it'll be reranked soon
Update : http://puu.sh/elV2h.rar
Gexigamma

Mao wrote:

[ Gex's Hard]
  1. Please use Soft Sampleset for the calm parts. Like this it just feels way too loud and overdone. Also the normal-sliderslide is really weird in these quiet parts.
  2. 00:11:555 (6) - What is on the white tick here? Nothing for me at least. Please consider to use this rhythm to follow the piano properly. (Same applies to 00:14:666 (5,6) - ) Disagree, it follows the music well, but i did some changes tho.
  3. 00:16:888 (3) - Why is here a clap? That doesn't really make sense compared to the sounds in the music imo. (Same applies for the following ones) imo these do make sense...
  4. 00:24:444 (3) - Shorten this by 1/2. Ignoring this strong downbeat by mapping something much more quiet doesn't really fit if you ask me.
  5. 00:25:333 (4,5) - Similiar as above. I'd go for this or the same with an 1/2 slider starting on the same as the old slider. Changed stuff.
  6. 00:44:444 (3,4) - Hm, why aren't you following vocals here? o: They are the most dominant and I honestly don't really see why 3 is ending on a a white tick even though there's barely anything. Something like this would work (use soft sampleset for the most objects please). Also 1/1 gaps shouldn't be a bad idea because there's no real connection between the notes.
  7. 00:47:777 (4) - The tick this ends on is very strong, I'd rather substitude this with two circles to keep clickability to both and remove 00:47:555 (3) - .
  8. 00:56:000 (1) - Is that clap intentional? o.o is it?
  9. 01:04:888 (2) - Nothing important on the blue tick. Please either shorten it to 1/2 to follow vocals or extend t to 1/1 to follow drums. (Same suggestion applies to 01:06:666 (6) - ) Drums end in the blue tick, not in the white tick.
  10. 01:05:777 (4) - Same here. 1/1 please for vocals and drums. ^^
  11. This definitely needs more improvements. meh
Fatfan Kolek

Mao wrote:

Reason for Disqualification


  1. In Fatfan Kolek's Extra 00:32:888 (5) - should be snapped to 1/6 to follow the sounds you want to properly like in Kenterz's Insane.
  2. The lower difficulties (E/N/H) really need improvements to be ready. I'll explain certain points in the mod below, especially Hard needs much more work if you ask me.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

[ Fatfan Kolek's Extra]
  1. Bitte nenn die Diff Insane, das ist nicht ansatzweise eine Extra. Ooooooooook. :D
  2. Das mag vielleicht nur meine Meinung sein, aber ich finde in der Kiai vor allem sind manche Slidershapes wie 01:00:000 (7) - ein wenig "zusammenhanglos" und sehen aus, als wären sie einfach nur da um etwas "speziellere" Slidershapes zu haben :/ Bringt für mich persönlich halt ein bisschen variation rein, no change. D:
  3. 00:14:555 (3) - Wieso ignorierst du auf dem weißen Tick das Piano? Ich würde eher von rot zu weiß ein Triplet machen anstatt den weißen Tick ganz auszulassen. Ich followe den stärkeren Pianosounds.
  4. 00:28:333 (15,1) - Muss ich den Stack hier verstehen? Damit wird ja eine neue Section eingeleitet und deshalb würd ichs eher mit größerem Spacing betonen. Kann aber sein, dass das nur ich bin. Mmh, hast eigentlich recht, wurde sogar bevors gemoddet wurde mit mehr spacing gemappt, aber so spielts sich schöner für mich. :c
  5. 00:30:222 (1,2,3) - Was folgst du hier? Das ist soeine ruhige Section. Auch die Betonung find ich liegt auf den blauen Ticks und wär deshalb schöner clickable. Example Ok, changed.
  6. 00:31:111 (1,2) - Das kommt ein wenig plötzlich und die Symmetry wirkt ein wenig aus dem Stil raus. Spacing verkleinern würde meiner Meinung nach helfen. Variation! :D
  7. 00:32:888 (5) - Siehe Disqualification Reason. Fixed.
  8. 00:43:000 (3,4,5,6) - Das wirkt total aus der Section raus. Die anderen folgen den blauen Ticks, wo die Vocals sind und hier ist einfach nur 1/4? Was folgst du damit überhaupt? Bitte map es so wie die folgenden auch oder mit einem 3/4 Slider anstatt 2. Man kann sehr gut jede einzelne Note hören, wenn du diese löschst. :o No change.
  9. 00:47:888 - Note für Piano wäre schön, wenn du mich fragst o: Ich follow der Stimme und deshalb finde ichs so wie es momentan ist besser, sorry. :D
Thanks for looking over it! :D/

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Version:Fatfan Kolek's Insane
Source:Tokyo Ghoul
Tags:opening 東京喰種 トーキョーグール supernatural Gexigamma Kenterz Fatfan Kolek
BeatmapID:558049
BeatmapSetID:201141

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7.3
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.3
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"touka-kirishima.jpg",0,0
Video,790,"tokyghouldopening.avi"
//Break Periods
2,41088,41844
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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68,244,72777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,280,72888,2,2,P|88:312|196:328,1,142.99999345398
276,264,73222,2,2,B|328:264|328:264|368:280|368:280|416:280,1,142.99999345398,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,356,73555,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,148,73777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,356,74000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,192,74222,5,0,0:0:0:0:
453,143,74333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,96,74444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,65,74555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,58,74666,2,2,L|203:58,1,142.99999345398,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,168,75000,2,2,P|208:192|272:168,1,142.99999345398
349,58,75333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,264,75555,2,2,B|388:264|388:264|372:292,1,142.99999345398
260,352,75888,2,2,B|164:352|164:352|116:340,1,142.99999345398
32,244,76222,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,60,76444,6,2,P|160:100|36:60,2,214.49999018097,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,144,77333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,189,77444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,239,77555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
430,285,77666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,319,77777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,335,77888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,333,78000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,310,78111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,273,78222,6,2,B|149:273|149:273|88:236,1,142.99999345398,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,80,78666,2,2,P|87:55|153:79,1,142.99999345398
297,334,79111,1,2,0:0:0:0:
297,76,79333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,199,79555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,334,79777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
402,109,80000,6,2,P|298:189|190:109,1,285.99998690796
189,108,80666,1,2,0:0:0:0:
190,221,81111,1,2,0:0:0:0:
190,337,81555,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81777,12,2,85222,0:0:0:0:
[RhythmSoul]
lol this map has been reached 300 favorite
jorpez
i think the beatmap was perfect before the timing change, now its not on timing
Fatfan Kolek

jorpez wrote:

i think the beatmap was perfect before the timing change, now its not on timing
1: Delete, because there is a new mp3 used
2: Redownload
3: Fixed
Mao
There we go o/

[ Easy]
  1. How about Soft-Sampleset at the beginning with some Normal-Sampleset accents on notes like 00:24:888 - ? That would fit the calm atmosphere much better.
  2. Why is that hitsounding so different from the Normal? The Normal's hitsounding was generally fine but here you have done so much different stuff. I'd rather suggest you to take that hitsounding and put it onto here and a lot will be improved.
  3. Hm, that rhythm in the first section feels kind of odd to play because you have always ignored that rather strong red tick but mapped the white one afterwards whith basically nothing on it. I'd rather substitude rhythms like 00:08:889 (1,2) - by doing this.
  4. 00:26:666 (1) - If you apply the first suggestion, please add Normal-Sampleset instead of a clap to the end. This sounds a bit out of place to me :/
  5. 00:40:888 (1) - How about removing this completely and adding a break like Kenterz did? I feel like the rhythm here is complex and the end on the white tick just sounds off because the actual sounds are on the blue/red ticks here. If you disagree please remove the additions from the tail and place soft-sampleset there.
  6. 00:49:777 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Aaah, these claps sound spammed. Why don't you just use a hitsounding like in the Normal? x.x
  7. 01:07:555 (1) - I think you'll personally prefer it like this but I feel like it's totally out of place especially since the music is normally going on without any change really requiring a spinner. The only logical thing I could explain this to me would be the fade-out of the vocals but the key part of that was actually before the spinner starts if you ask me. Personally, I would substitude it like this.
  8. 01:16:444 (4) - Might be something subjective but for such small sliders a wave may be not the perfect shape especially when it's so strong because it can feel "squeezed". To fix that either make another shape or make the line "thinner". Fine if you keep though.
  9. 01:20:000 (4,5) - Why is this more dense than in Normal? lol Please reduce density to fit Normal.
  10. 01:20:888 (5) - What is that soft-sampleset clap doing on the head?
  11. The Kiai could definitely take some 3/2 Sliders to make it not that boring and bring some variation in. For example 01:00:444 (1,2) - could be a 3/2 Slider to complement the red tick vocals and make it more fun to play for the newer players.
  12. This difficulty has some quite good approaches but it's missing variation and also the rhythm is sometimes not following the music well imo. These points need work.
[ Normal]
  1. See the first suggestion for Easy.
  2. Is there an explanaiton for the 2|4 clap pattern at the beginning? For me at least it feels off from the music since there's basically nothing but vocals, piano and sometimes drums but nothing that loud to be followed by souch "strong" claps imo. The best example to show this is 00:24:888 (5) - where there's basically nothing in the music which makes this clap sound so loud and out of place.
  3. 00:11:777 - This note here kind of belongs to the piano notes followed with 00:11:111 (3) - . It would be pretty nice to see something mapped here.
  4. 00:14:222 (2) - I'm not sure if this relys on my taste, but I'd rather follow the stronger by omitting the blue tick. This could either be done by just using a 3/2 Slider or a 1/1 Slider followed by a circle.
  5. 00:25:555 - A note for the instrument would be nice as it's very strong here.
  6. 00:30:222 (1) - Not sure if you like it but a repeated 3/4 slider here would follow the instrument nicely :b
  7. 00:32:000 (5) - This sounds totally off since everything here is happening on the blue ticks and the red tick afterwards. I'd either extend it by 1/2 to follow the note there or substitude it by a repeated 3/4-Slider.
  8. 01:14:222 (7,8) - Why is this stacked? There was no other 1/2 Stack in the map and all of them were relatively large spaced. Same goes for the following 1/1 stack as well. I think they are a bit sudden but that should not be big of a deal.
  9. 01:18:666 (2) - Mind removing the finish? It feels a bit "overpowered" here.
  10. In my opinion it's kinda said to see the whole first half of the Kiai being just a repetition of 00:56:888 (1,2,3) - even though the song gives you the chance to put some variation into it. Especially the vocals would be a great oppertunity to do so. If we take 01:00:444 (1,2,3) - for example, almost everything here lands on the red ticks so something like this would work just fine to get something more interesting. Also at 01:06:666 (5) - even the background instruments/drums hit the red ticks so that moving the Slider 1/2 back would sound much better.
  11. Similiar stuff as I said for the Easy. All in all I think that you might have some more possibilities what you can do here that would improve the difficulty a lot.
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So, as I've already said before these lower difficulties (E/N/H) should have some more experienced people looking over them as they still need a lot of stuff to improve imo. Also @Gex, that Normal sampleset at the beginning is so loud, can't you at least silence the Sliderslide then? For such a high density in that calm part where you have used so many sliders it just feels wrong.
Topic Starter
kristi71111

Mao wrote:

There we go o/

Easy
  1. How about Soft-Sampleset at the beginning with some Normal-Sampleset accents on notes like 00:24:888 - ? That would fit the calm atmosphere much better.Changed abit
  2. Why is that hitsounding so different from the Normal? The Normal's hitsounding was generally fine but here you have done so much different stuff. I'd rather suggest you to take that hitsounding and put it onto here and a lot will be improved. Did some changes
  3. Hm, that rhythm in the first section feels kind of odd to play because you have always ignored that rather strong red tick but mapped the white one afterwards whith basically nothing on it. I'd rather substitude rhythms like 00:08:889 (1,2) - by doing this.Yep your right changed
  4. 00:26:666 (1) - If you apply the first suggestion, please add Normal-Sampleset instead of a clap to the end. This sounds a bit out of place to me :/Changed
  5. 00:40:888 (1) - How about removing this completely and adding a break like Kenterz did? I feel like the rhythm here is complex and the end on the white tick just sounds off because the actual sounds are on the blue/red ticks here. If you disagree please remove the additions from the tail and place soft-sampleset there.I did disagree but I removed the additions and placed soft sampleset
  6. 00:49:777 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Aaah, these claps sound spammed. Why don't you just use a hitsounding like in the Normal? x.x Changed abit
  7. 01:07:555 (1) - I think you'll personally prefer it like this but I feel like it's totally out of place especially since the music is normally going on without any change really requiring a spinner. The only logical thing I could explain this to me would be the fade-out of the vocals but the key part of that was actually before the spinner starts if you ask me. Personally, I would substitude it like this.Yep I personaly prefer it the way it is right now so sorry no change
  8. 01:16:444 (4) - Might be something subjective but for such small sliders a wave may be not the perfect shape especially when it's so strong because it can feel "squeezed". To fix that either make another shape or make the line "thinner". Fine if you keep though.
    Changed to a 3/2 slider
  9. 01:20:000 (4,5) - Why is this more dense than in Normal? lol Please reduce density to fit Normal.Changed thanks.
  10. 01:20:888 (5) - What is that soft-sampleset clap doing on the head? Fixed
  11. The Kiai could definitely take some 3/2 Sliders to make it not that boring and bring some variation in. For example 01:00:444 (1,2) - could be a 3/2 Slider to complement the red tick vocals and make it more fun to play for the newer players. Changed Thanks.
  12. This difficulty has some quite good approaches but it's missing variation and also the rhythm is sometimes not following the music well imo. These points need work.


Normal
  1. See the first suggestion for Easy.Changed abit
  2. Is there an explanaiton for the 2|4 clap pattern at the beginning? For me at least it feels off from the music since there's basically nothing but vocals, piano and sometimes drums but nothing that loud to be followed by souch "strong" claps imo. The best example to show this is 00:24:888 (5) - where there's basically nothing in the music which makes this clap sound so loud and out of place. Changed abit
  3. 00:11:777 - This note here kind of belongs to the piano notes followed with 00:11:111 (3) - . It would be pretty nice to see something mapped here. I agree. Changed
  4. 00:14:222 (2) - I'm not sure if this relys on my taste, but I'd rather follow the stronger by omitting the blue tick. This could either be done by just using a 3/2 Slider or a 1/1 Slider followed by a circle. I think that the red tick is stronger and it plays just fine so no change :/
  5. 00:25:555 - A note for the instrument would be nice as it's very strong here. I agree. Added
  6. 00:30:222 (1) - Not sure if you like it but a repeated 3/4 slider here would follow the instrument nicely :b
    The rythm is just fine if u ask me and it plays just fine so sadly no change :/ :/
  7. 00:32:000 (5) - This sounds totally off since everything here is happening on the blue ticks and the red tick afterwards. I'd either extend it by 1/2 to follow the note there or substitude it by a repeated 3/4-Slider.
    I would like to keep it the way it is unless I realy have to change in if it comes to that then I will for now no change
  8. 01:14:222 (7,8) - Why is this stacked? There was no other 1/2 Stack in the map and all of them were relatively large spaced. Same goes for the following 1/1 stack as well. I think they are a bit sudden but that should not be big of a deal. I'm going to keep them for now if it comes to the point where its urgent that I change then I will
  9. 01:18:666 (2) - Mind removing the finish? It feels a bit "overpowered" here.Changed /color]
  10. In my opinion it's kinda said to see the whole first half of the Kiai being just a repetition of 00:56:888 (1,2,3) - even though the song gives you the chance to put some variation into it. Especially the vocals would be a great oppertunity to do so. If we take 01:00:444 (1,2,3) - for example, almost everything here lands on the red ticks so something like this would work just fine to get something more interesting. Also at 01:06:666 (5) - even the background instruments/drums hit the red ticks so that moving the Slider 1/2 back would sound much better.
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  11. Similiar stuff as I said for the Easy. All in all I think that you might have some more possibilities what you can do here that would improve the difficulty a lot.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

So, as I've already said before these lower difficulties (E/N/H) should have some more experienced people looking over them as they still need a lot of stuff to improve imo. Also @Gex, that Normal sampleset at the beginning is so loud, can't you at least silence the Sliderslide then? For such a high density in that calm part where you have used so many sliders it just feels wrong.
Topic Starter
kristi71111
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