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Sound Horizon - Yield

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gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年8月15日 at 8:07:11

Artist: Sound Horizon
Title: Yield
Source: Elysion
Tags: azuki Breeze
BPM: 92
Filesize: 6672kb
Play Time: 04:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4.63 stars, 419 notes)
  2. Easy (1.41 stars, 100 notes)
  3. Normal (3.94 stars, 293 notes)
Download: Sound Horizon - Yield
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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16th Beatmap

storyboard by Breeze <3

~ Collab ~

00:22:234 ~ 02:11:800 (gdeath)

02:11:800 ~ 02:27:452 Break

02:27:452 ~ 04:17:017 (azuki)
Last edited by gdeath , edited 10 times in total.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
dkey
1,276 posts
Joined June 2009
dkey
+Star^^
ft1717492
98 posts
Joined June 2009
ft1717492
:) star~~
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
azuki
i have no idea this same rhythm

Download: Sound Horizon - Yield (gdeath) [Hard].osu
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath
Great Work azukiさん
協力感謝！ ＵＰしました。

PS: changed the offset
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
Jump mapper and kami mapper XD
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze

S i R i R u wrote:

Jump mapper and kami mapper XD
Bakuru forget me ;_;
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
∑(ﾟДﾟ) ouch sorry

i see only name in collab XD
arsrun
84 posts
Joined March 2009
arsrun
awesome :P
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
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Breeze
完成了
久等了 :?

那个sliderslide的声音还是去掉吧,听着是在不好听

[Hard]
  1. 03:13:743 (4) - 我感觉用finish会比clap更好
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Download: Sound Horizon - Yield (gdeath).osb
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
Revived.
O_O-long
22 posts
Joined June 2009
O_O-long
:)
-SiN-
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2008
-SiN-
Breeze asked me to look at the SB

first : <3

00:46:352 till end - black shield?? lol.. its letterbox :) move it down a bit (the bottom letterbox)
02:26:329 - k6.png a bit late then the upper text

nggh i think its enough :)
[Ghost]
124 posts
Joined August 2009
[Ghost]
offset:22215 (?
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
サンホラ :oops:
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze

-SiN- wrote:

Breeze asked me to look at the SB

first : <3

00:46:352 till end - black shield?? lol.. its letterbox :) move it down a bit (the bottom letterbox) :arrow: fixed
02:26:329 - k6.png a bit late then the upper text :arrow: hmm, it seems they are the same?

nggh i think its enough :)
and then, "y" fixed pixel, thanks foe checking

@gdeath : 把"y"的图和osb文件直接下载过去覆盖以前的就好了

Download: Sound Horizon - Yield (gdeath).osb

Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Yuji Tokaji
Hello,

Sorry, i'm sooo late.
I'm busy now.

[Overall]

- Put a preview point on your diffs.

[Easy]

- 01:39:395(4) : Unsnapped ?

[Normal]

- 04:16:352(2) : Finish instead of clap ?

[Collab]

- 00:24:613(6) : New combo ?
- 02:53:308(1) : ^
- 03:16:352(6) : ^


Okay, that's it.
Star.
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath

Slanox wrote:

Hello,

Sorry, i'm sooo late.
I'm busy now.
its okay.i'm also busy lol

[Overall]

- Put a preview point on your diffs
yes.thanks for remainding me!
This must be fixed~

[Easy]

- 01:39:395(4) : Unsnapped ?
its intentional

[Normal]

- 04:16:352(2) : Finish instead of clap ?
it sounds better with clap imo.

[Collab]

- 00:24:613(6) : New combo ?
- 02:53:308(1) : ^
- 03:16:352(6) : ^

no changed on new combo >.<

Okay, that's it.
Star.
Thanks~

@Breeze

Uploaded!
xierbaliti
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999 posts
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xierbaliti
._./
kenji
127 posts
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kenji
star :D
Daiguren
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Joined July 2009
Daiguren
:D
Mogsy
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Here since the beginning
Mogsy
Sorry if this seems like a nazimod. Because, well, it is. Definitely not grabbing at straws though, just trying to help. :P
Just a fair warning, I throw the 'phrase' word around a lot

General:
  1. I think 01:17:004 would be a better preview point.
Easy:
  1. 00:37:874 (1,2,3,4) - Eww. All of these sound disgusting due to them being 1/2. Please replace this with something that sounds better.
  2. 01:27:439 - Maybe add a beat here?
  3. 02:10:482 (5) - Make this end at 02:11:787 somehow. Possibly end with a Finish on that beat, too.
Normal:
SPOILER
  1. 00:36:569 (1) - This, musically, belongs to the same phrase as 00:32:656 (1,2,3). I'd say remove the New Combo mark from this and then try to incorporate it into that phrase.
  2. 00:37:874 (2) - Musically, this belongs to the same phrase as 00:39:178 (1,2). I'd say start the 1.0x here, put a New Combo mark on this, remove the NCM from 00:39:178 (1), and start that phrase here.
  3. 01:26:135 (5) - I saw this slowed down to 0.5x in the collab and I thought that was well-done. Why not do that here while extending it to 01:27:439? That'd make the phrase feel more complete.
  4. 01:44:395 (7,8,9,10) - I feel like what you did with 01:49:613 (7,8) would be more appropriate here, while what you did here would be more appropriate at 01:49:613. Why? End of a phrase should probably be harder than the middle, right?
  5. 02:06:135 (4) - New Combo mark goes here. New phrase, New Combo, right? Unless you'd prefer to start it at 02:07:221 (5), because no matter what, I found both to flow smoothly.
  6. 02:09:178 (8) - New Combo mark.
  7. 02:10:482 (10) - 0.5x plus extending to 02:11:787? How about that?
  8. 03:07:874 (1) - This is part of the previous phrase. I'd suggest making it fit with that because this just felt awkward.
  9. 03:09:178 (2) - If you fix the previous point, New Combo mark here.
  10. 03:35:265 (8) - New Combo mark here.
  11. 03:37:221 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
  12. 03:40:482 (5) - New Combo mark here.
  13. 03:43:091 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.

Collab:
SPOILER
  1. 00:50:048 (6) - This first Whistle sounds strange, out of place, and forced. In all of the phrases like this, please remove this sort of Whistle. Sure, one might think that'd make the map sound boring, but it doesn't. It just sounds less awkward/flows more smoothly.
  2. 01:01:352 (1,2,3,4) - Not fond of this far of a distance snap at such a calm point in the song. It feels out of place. Perhaps lower the distance between each by a tad.
  3. 01:14:395 (1,2,3,4) - This is ridiculous. Lower the distance now.
  4. 01:25:700 (2,3,4) - Move this away from the endpoint of 1.
  5. 01:26:135 (4) - I feel like where this ends is not a good place to end the phrase. Despite the short amount of time between it and the next part, I'd say end the phrase at 01:27:439, whether by extending this or repeating it.
  6. 01:30:048 (1,2,3,4) - This sort of large spacing still feels out of place in this calmer sort of section. But it's a tad manageable, so I'd say to slightly lower the distance.
  7. 01:34:395 (7) - Remember my Whistle issue? It's repeated with these Claps, but sounds a LOT more awkward.
  8. 01:58:743 (1,2) - This transition in particular is awkward. The rest of the phrase flows nicely, but this transition just feels strange.
  9. 02:10:482 (5) - Same complaint as before, except end at 02:11:787.
  10. 03:32:656 (6) - Really? The phrase ends here? That's awkward, sadly. It'd feel right to end at 03:35:265.

Overall, I like the map. Fun to play plus a somewhat eerie storyboard (Mogsy <3s eerie stuff). Starring due to the fact that it is very well put together and just needs some fixing.
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