1. Lamentablemente no se pueden tener nombres personalizados en las dificultades. Debes de renombrarlas con nombres comunes (Normal, Hard, e Insane). Lee esto: t/178700
2. Lamentablemente no tienes una dificultad que se pueda conciderar fácil. Debes de hacer una diff Easy tal que tenga menos de 2.0 en la puntuación de estrellas. (El normal que tienes actualmente es de 2.37 estrellas). Sin esta dificultad no te pueden rankear el mapa.
   Hasta el AiMod lo dice:
3. Por favor, lee detenidamente el ranking Criteria. Algunas cosas que están ahí escritas se te pasaron por alto -> https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
4. En la carpeta del mapa tienes los count.wav, pero en el mapa no estás utilizando el count down para nada. Elimina esos 3 archivos.
5. El background (fondo) que estás usando no cumple el ranking criteria... debería ser de 1024x768, ó de 1366x768. Así que tienes dos opciones: 1)Buscar la misma imagen con esa resolución. 2) buscar otra imagen que le quede bien al mapa, y que cumpla con la resolución.
6. Creo que ya. Aun así, leyendo el ranking criteria es posible que notes alguna cosa qué mejorar que se me haya pasado a mi.

1. Creo que de los stats, deberías poner tanto el HP como el OD en 4.
2. 00:34:150 (4) - NC
3. 00:37:077 (4) - ^
4. 00:40:003 (4) - ^
5. 00:32:503 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - mm... selecciona todos estos, y muevelos de tal forma que 00:34:150 (1,2,3) - quede en el centro:
   
   Patron simétrico

   
   No olvides corregir el espaciado de las notas que hagan falta.
6. 00:38:357 (1,2,3) - algo parecido a lo de antes, haciendo simetría con:
   
7. 00:40:552 - Evita hacer estos sliders que se repiten más de una vez. Son dificiles de leer, y en general, no son aceptados ahora, y menos en dificultades normales o faciles.
   Un ritmo como este quedaría mejor, y cumple bien con la canción:
   
   
   Además, los usaste en todo el mapa, no los nombraré más, pero espero que los cambies
8. 00:52:625 (1) - Same here, quizás algo así funcione mejor:
   
9. 00:54:455 (1,1) - Esto es unrankable. El espacio de una nota después de un spinner depende de la dificultad. Siendo en los niveles fáciles el equivalente a un compas, en los normales a medio compas, y en los hard a 1/4 de compas... Un compas es lo que hay entre un Tick blanco grande al siguiente.
   De esta forma, la nota después del spinner debería empezar en 00:56:650 - y... esto no sigue muy bien la canción.... Pienso que lo mejor sería eliminar el spinner y mapear alguna cosa ahí, como un slider largo o algo así.
10. 00:57:564 (2) - el flow con esta nota es confuso... arreglalo de forma que quede más suave.
11. 01:01:406 (1) - debiste de dejar algo para golpear en la nota fuerte. es decir, al inicio de compas. Esto se sentiría mejor:
    
    
    Esto sucede en muchas partes del mapa. Lo mejor es que les prestes atención y procura siempre tener algo para golpear en las notas fuertes.
12. 01:07:625 (3,1) - Dos sliders irían mejor.
13. Algunas veces te descachas con los blankets, Por ejemplo en 02:30:308 (3) -
    
    
    
    Me da pereza listar todos los lugares, así que fijate en donde puedes mejorar los blankets!
14. 03:10:003 (1,1,2) - Patrones como este son dificiles de leer. Considera cambiarlo (también fijate si hay otros similaes que sean dificiles de leer).

1. Pon el OD en 6.
2. 00:54:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - La mayor queja la tengo con esto. Se hace muy dificil de leer, y aunque sea un hard, deberías procurar acomodarlos de una forma que sea más legible...
3. 01:28:479 (2,4) - En el normal no hable mucho de los stacks, pero, aunque no lo nombré, es algo que es aplicable en todas las diffs.
   Este stack no es perfecto. Para acomodarlo, hazle Ctrl+G a 01:28:479 (2) - , deshabilita el Grid Snap, y mueve 01:29:394 (4) - hasta que quede bien puesto sobre (2), y hazle Ctrl+G de nuevo.
   Finalmente arregla el blanket en de 01:29:028 (3) - .
4. Hay muchos, muchos blankets por pulir... son tantos que no me voy a poner a normbrarlos uno por uno. Pero si espero que los corrijas. Para que te queden perfectos deshabilita el Grid Snap, y con eso podrás moverlos libremente. También cuida que los espaciados queden bien. ejemplo en 02:09:455 (8) - y un laaaargo etc, ehehe
5. 02:13:113 (4) - lo mismo de las notas fuertes... no me fijé mucho en esto para esta dificultad, pero hazlo tú
6. 02:25:918 (7,1) - Stack
7. 03:09:637 (6,8) - ^

1. Puedes subirle el HP a 6 o 7, y OD a 8.
2. En cuanto a consistencia, excelente. Mantuviste el espaciado bien en todo el mapa, y eso es de agradecer, porque el los utimos tiempos todos los novatos creen que los insanes son llenar un mapa de jumps sin sentido xDD
   Obviamente tambien se estraña que no hayas puesto ningun jump, pero, tienes lo fundamental que es la consistencia
3. En cuanto a los jumps, la idea es colocarlos cuando haya una parte intensa de la canción, así por ejemplo en 01:13:479 (1) - pudiste aumentar el espaciado un poco para anticipar que se viene algo grande (el kiai). 02:00:308 (2) - También podría haber uno... con jumps me refiero a un espaciado de 1.5x por ejemplo.
4. Algo en lo que fallas en que los blankets ( xD!! ), y los stacks, aunque seguramente luego de que corrijas las otras dos diffs, quedarás siendo un master en eso >=)

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hola!.

La verdad estoy impresionado con este mapa, aunque tiene cosas por pulir, esta "decente" para ser el primero que subes. Consigue más mods! Gracias :3, por cierto si es el primer mapa completo, antes intente hacer otros y quedaron un poco feos y sin terminar (?))

[general]

1. Lamentablemente no se pueden tener nombres personalizados en las dificultades. Debes de renombrarlas con nombres comunes (Normal, Hard, e Insane). Lee esto: t/178700 Corrección lista :3
2. Lamentablemente no tienes una dificultad que se pueda conciderar fácil. Debes de hacer una diff Easy tal que tenga menos de 2.0 en la puntuación de estrellas. (El normal que tienes actualmente es de 2.37 estrellas). Sin esta dificultad no te pueden rankear el mapa.
   Hasta el AiMod lo dice: Oke, me pondré a crearla en cuanto termine las clases :3
3. Por favor, lee detenidamente el ranking Criteria. Algunas cosas que están ahí escritas se te pasaron por alto -> https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria Oke :3
4. En la carpeta del mapa tienes los count.wav, pero en el mapa no estás utilizando el count down para nada. Elimina esos 3 archivos. Corrección lista
5. El background (fondo) que estás usando no cumple el ranking criteria... debería ser de 1024x768, ó de 1366x768. Así que tienes dos opciones: 1)Buscar la misma imagen con esa resolución. 2) buscar otra imagen que le quede bien al mapa, y que cumpla con la resolución. Todavía no decido que hacer con esto, a si que lo dejare pendiente de momento
6. Creo que ya. Aun así, leyendo el ranking criteria es posible que notes alguna cosa qué mejorar que se me haya pasado a mi.

[StoryBoard]
Es interesante cómo le hiciste el SB al mapa, es sencillo, pero te quedó chevere
Aunque el inicio es aburrido... pasan tantas cosas en el audio, pero dejas solo el fondo negro... si le hicieras algo divertido al inicio, a cualquiera le darían ganas de quedarse a ver qué sucede en vez de darle skip para jugar directamente xDD
El final también es un poco abrupto.. podrías poner algo más destellante . Lo del principio lo pensé en su tiempo, pero todavía no se que poner y tendré en cuenta lo del final también :3



[Normal]

1. Creo que de los stats, deberías poner tanto el HP como el OD en 4. Listo
2. 00:34:150 (4) - NC Corrección lista
3. 00:37:077 (4) - ^ Corrección lista
4. 00:40:003 (4) - ^ Corrección lista
5. 00:32:503 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - mm... selecciona todos estos, y muevelos de tal forma que 00:34:150 (1,2,3) - quede en el centro:
   
   Patron simétrico

   
   listo
   No olvides corregir el espaciado de las notas que hagan falta.
6. 00:38:357 (1,2,3) - algo parecido a lo de antes, haciendo simetría con:
   intente algo parecido, porque no pude lograr hacerlo :c
7. 00:40:552 - Evita hacer estos sliders que se repiten más de una vez. Son dificiles de leer, y en general, no son aceptados ahora, y menos en dificultades normales o faciles.
   Un ritmo como este quedaría mejor, y cumple bien con la canción:
   Listo
   
   Además, los usaste en todo el mapa, no los nombraré más, pero espero que los cambies
8. 00:52:625 (1) - Same here, quizás algo así funcione mejor:
   Listo
9. 00:54:455 (1,1) - Esto es unrankable. El espacio de una nota después de un spinner depende de la dificultad. Siendo en los niveles fáciles el equivalente a un compas, en los normales a medio compas, y en los hard a 1/4 de compas... Un compas es lo que hay entre un Tick blanco grande al siguiente.
   De esta forma, la nota después del spinner debería empezar en 00:56:650 - y... esto no sigue muy bien la canción.... Pienso que lo mejor sería eliminar el spinner y mapear alguna cosa ahí, como un slider largo o algo así. Arreglado, creo que ahora esta mejor (?)
10. 00:57:564 (2) - el flow con esta nota es confuso... arreglalo de forma que quede más suave. Arreglado :3
11. 01:01:406 (1) - debiste de dejar algo para golpear en la nota fuerte. es decir, al inicio de compas. Esto se sentiría mejor:
    Listo
    
    Esto sucede en muchas partes del mapa. Lo mejor es que les prestes atención y procura siempre tener algo para golpear en las notas fuertes.
12. 01:07:625 (3,1) - Dos sliders irían mejor. Oke
13. Algunas veces te descachas con los blankets, Por ejemplo en 02:30:308 (3) -
    
    
    
    No se como te das cuenta tan fácil de esto, creo que solo me doy cuenta que me sali cuando queda muy deforme :c (?)
    Me da pereza listar todos los lugares, así que fijate en donde puedes mejorar los blankets! Oke
14. 03:10:003 (1,1,2) - Patrones como este son dificiles de leer. Considera cambiarlo (también fijate si hay otros similaes que sean dificiles de leer).

De los tres niveles que tienes, este es el que menos listo está. Debes trabajarle a la consistencia, y a hacer las cosas más legibles, todo sin descuidar el espaciado. Encarecidamente te pido que le des una leía a esto: t/208596 Para que tengas más ideas de cómo colocar los sliders... para que queden más bonitos. Trata de hacer patrones simétricos cuando veas que los puedes hacer (hace ver más limpio el mapa), y por supuesto, echale ganas de momento solo tengo las correcciones de esta dificultad, porque el tiempo no me da para más y seguire pensando en que más puedo mejorarlo, luego arreglare las demás >-<

Pd: gracias por modear mi mapa \o/

[Hard]

1. Pon el OD en 6. OD Cambiado a 6
2. 00:54:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - La mayor queja la tengo con esto. Se hace muy dificil de leer, y aunque sea un hard, deberías procurar acomodarlos de una forma que sea más legible... Ami tambien se me hace dificil de leer pero lo dejare pendiente mientras pienso como cambiarlo >-<
3. 01:28:479 (2,4) - En el normal no hable mucho de los stacks, pero, aunque no lo nombré, es algo que es aplicable en todas las diffs.
   Este stack no es perfecto. Para acomodarlo, hazle Ctrl+G a 01:28:479 (2) - , deshabilita el Grid Snap, y mueve 01:29:394 (4) - hasta que quede bien puesto sobre (2), y hazle Ctrl+G de nuevo. lel no sabia esto, lo tendré en cuenta
   Finalmente arregla el blanket en de 01:29:028 (3) - . listo
4. Hay muchos, muchos blankets por pulir... son tantos que no me voy a poner a normbrarlos uno por uno. Pero si espero que los corrijas. Para que te queden perfectos deshabilita el Grid Snap, y con eso podrás moverlos libremente. También cuida que los espaciados queden bien. ejemplo en 02:09:455 (8) - y un laaaargo etc, ehehe intente corregir todos los blankets que pude luego seguiré :3
5. 02:13:113 (4) - lo mismo de las notas fuertes... no me fijé mucho en esto para esta dificultad, pero hazlo tú De momento lo mantube porque la forma en que lo quería cambiar sonaba raro >-<
6. 02:25:918 (7,1) - Stack Corregido
7. 03:09:637 (6,8) - ^

Corregido

Esta es la diff que más me gustó, Es un poco desordenada, y tiene demasiados sliders apeñuscados (sería bueno que los variaras, aveces quedan muy espameados xD), pero me parece que está bastante cool. Obvio necesita más nazi mods, pero no tantos como el normal

[Insane]

1. Puedes subirle el HP a 6 o 7, y OD a 8. OD Cambiado a 8 y Hp a 7
2. En cuanto a consistencia, excelente. Mantuviste el espaciado bien en todo el mapa, y eso es de agradecer, porque el los utimos tiempos todos los novatos creen que los insanes son llenar un mapa de jumps sin sentido xDD
   Obviamente tambien se estraña que no hayas puesto ningun jump, pero, tienes lo fundamental que es la consistencia Ty, no quería agregar jumps porque me quedan feos y en esta canción se me hacen raros (?)
3. En cuanto a los jumps, la idea es colocarlos cuando haya una parte intensa de la canción, así por ejemplo en 01:13:479 (1) - pudiste aumentar el espaciado un poco para anticipar que se viene algo grande (el kiai). 02:00:308 (2) - También podría haber uno... con jumps me refiero a un espaciado de 1.5x por ejemplo. Vere si se me ocurre alguna forma de colocar algún jump que me guste :3
4. Algo en lo que fallas en que los blankets ( xD!! ), y los stacks, aunque seguramente luego de que corrijas las otras dos diffs, quedarás siendo un master en eso >=)

lo se .c


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ufff.. vaya muro hahaha.
Creeme, aunque es muy largo, todo es con la intención de que mejores y el mapa sea rankeado. Me alegra que te este quedando bien en las cosas que normalmente los nuevos se equivocan. Echale ganas, y no te desanimes.

Suerte!

ReallyFastCat wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue

[General]
- Tags are separated with spaces, not commas Fixed
- Remove "Len" and "96Neko" from the tags, since those words already are in the artist and title fields Fix
- Source field should be empty. Use it only for movies, games or similar (https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Metadata) Fixed
- If you want to skin the reverse arrow, then you need to skin the rest of the hitcircles too, since they may look awkward with some skins otherwise. Thanks, Fixed

03:53:723 - Maybe add a flash in the SB here? (like at 02:41:284) Fix

[Kuro Len! Easy]
- In it's current state, this is definetly a Normal and not an Easy. I'd suggest renaming this and making another, easier diff (the spread needs one anyways in my opinion) sorry, but i like my beatmap with 5 difficulty, i can try to make more easy this difficulty
00:30:857 (4,5) - Stacking a note with a sliderend is pretty much unreadable for newer players Fix
02:32:503 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
03:52:808 (4,5) - ^ Fixed
01:20:796 (1,1) - Don't place these on top of each other (doesn't look that good) Fixed
02:14:942 - Add a spinner from here to 02:17:137 Fix
02:24:455 (3) - Sliders like this are probably too confusing for newer players, change them so they don't overlap themselves i like that slider :c, but if another person say change that slider, i will change
02:36:894 (1) - ^ Not Fixed, for the same reason
03:14:942 (1) - ^ Fixed /o/
03:38:357 (1,2,3,1) - DS should be consistent in Easy/Normal, space these farer apart Not Fixed, I like that part. (I don't believe that part go to kill easy players) :c

[Kuro! Normal]
01:04:698 (1,2,3) - Same as in the Easy, DS should be consistent Fixed
01:42:016 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ Not fixed, because i don't believe that change is necessary, the distance snap whit x0.5, feel good for that part
02:40:552 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ Not Fixed, for the same reason

[Len! Hard]
00:54:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part feels off, maybe try something like this? (1/4th sliders without reverse arrows) Fixed /o/


[Romantic Night!]
02:33:967 (1,2,3) - This feels really off, try this instead: Fixed, but i try to use another pattern in that part


Really fun map overall, couldn't find much in the harder diffs. Good luck with the mapset! ^w^

Kocari wrote:

Here is a requested from modding queue, sorry it took long to get back to you

[Hard]

Basically use a distinct DS it ranges from 1.0-1.2 and it throws consistency away. Usually spacing in hard can have a little jumps here and there but when it's notes that follow a continuous pattern like you have, it's always best to stick with 1 DS point; I would prefer using 1.1 since it fits best with how you mapped it
00:30:308 (3) - DS this note Fixed
00:35:064 (8,1) - Move it to something like this for balance with 1.1 Snap http://puu.sh/dpANN/942d539af3.jpg Fix
00:39:455 (3) - Snap Fix
00:43:845 (4) - Whistle isn't necessary, still feels the same with just the sound in the BG being played Fix
00:45:491 (5) - Snap correctly for consistency Fix
00:54:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not sure about all those 1/2 there being on hard. Especially since it's DTable still feels awkward to have that many; my suggestion would be to have repeat sliders followed into the 1/2 that you have because it flows better Not Fixed, I prefer that part whit the slider 1/4 and sound well with the song
01:37:259 (2) - Move slider end a little more to the left for a better blanket Fix
01:41:101 (1) - Move down 1 click to be parallel to the previous slider how can you see that (?) thanks and fix
02:22:076 (4,5) - Create the blanket a little better Fix
02:22:991 (7,8,1,2) - This sequence makes notes hidden from play. I suggest spreading them out but still form the dynamic circle you had when playing it. I Try another pattern for that part
02:37:808 (1,2,3,4) - Same; you can make millimeter adjustments so the notes to don't as much and isn't hidden from play 02:39:272 (5,6,7,8) - Something like this, it forms the necessary things needed but doesn't make it hard for players to read Fixed
02:41:284 (1) - Best to continue pattern and move the note to x284:y240 Fix
03:05:522 (1) - Notes on blue tick, not sure if you realized but the sound being played on blue tick is correct. Move to quite please

Some things are still wrong with the hitsounds. You don't have any hitsounds from the start to the end of the kiai. Then all of a sudden that last kiai has hitsounds. So inconsistency is off there. Also the volume control changes are a bit wack to me. There at everything that ends with a 2. I would suggest rounding them all down or up considering what the volume is. 2% change in volume wouldn't make a difference especially with how the song is playing out. It's only used for hitsound effects or changes in tempo/vocals. For Example soft-slow = low volume so it's not loud and vice versa. Hope I could have been good help to you lad. Hope you have a wonderful time in the beatmap world

Chocox wrote:

Hello~ Hi and thanks for modding

Mod here

[General]
I think this mapset is very nice , storyboard and skin is also very nice ^^ Ty :3

[Normal]
Some are a little hard for Normal difficulty , but I think is fine~
00:50:796 (2) - Maybe this slider similar to 00:49:698 (1) Fix
01:39:820 (4) - Maybe NC this Fix
03:01:772 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make a small shape with this 5? A little boring , maybe a small star ^^ Fixed, but I try a similar pattern with the star

[Hard]
Why not hitsound the same for all 3 kiai instead of the last only? Or maybe save best for the last? ~ I really like the last kiai time, but the hit sound on this part is on all notes for that reason, I dont want to hit sound the others kiai time with the same pattern and for me is boring to listen the same hit sound on all kiai

I think this map is very good , not much mistake for me to spot , keep up the good work and will definitely ranked ^^

VINXIS wrote:

oh boy a beatmap skin
from my modding queue
short mod for this map

General

add eurobeat to the tags Fix
tfw no preview point Sorry, but I didn't understand this x-x
delete ready.wav since u dont have countdown enabled anyway lmao Fix

storyboard

kgood /o/

EZ

01:07:991 (1) - x:124 y:152 Fix
01:36:258 - add circle and place it at the same place as 01:35:064 (2) - I think you write wrong the time, blue tick is too hard for a easy >.<
03:12:747 (2) - stack on slider I prefer stack with circle sound good with the voice
not much to say tbh though it feels like a map from 2009 rip Why (?) :c

normale

00:59:759 (3,1) - pls stack them perfectly Fix
01:08:906 (1) - remove Fix
01:19:333 (1,2) - make them identical Fix
01:42:016 (1,2,3,4,1) - tbh i would make this 2 sliders and 1 circle instead I prefer with 5 circles :c
02:20:247 (1,3) - remove Fix
02:40:552 (1,2,3,4,1) - same with the 2 slider 1 circle thing agen no :c
02:58:845 (1,2) - i wouldn't stack these becuase the circles before were stacked the stack feels good with the voice
03:18:784 (1,3) - remove I like the pattern for the last kiai, If another person say change it, i will change >-<
03:51:528 (1) - Ctrl+J and x:120 y:48 Fix

Hard

00:38:906 (2) - move the end of the slider a little up so it's blanket much more nicely Fix /o/
01:19:333 (1) - x:346 y:134 Fix
01:24:455 (7,1) - x:169 y:177 Fix
01:27:381 (3,1) - perfectly stack pls fix
01:39:637 (2) - x:264 y:280 I change the pattern
02:17:869 (1,1) - idr if this is unrankable but just yea >.<
02:35:064 (8) - x:28 y:312 Fix
03:01:955 (8,10) - stack them perfectly Fix
03:06:711 (4) - x:320 y:164 Not, Fixed
03:26:467 (6) - x:384 y:216 I move the slider to X: 384, Y: 316
03:32:686 (4) - x:220 y:168 Fix

2insane4me

01:02:869 (5) - move tail end to x:216 y:168 Fix
01:03:235 (6) - stack perfectly Fix
01:20:979 (5) - x:304 y:80 Fix
dam the insane is well made ty :3

unromantic mornings

01:01:040 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 2 triple stacks pls Why (?) I like the pattern when I play the beatmap and is not hard too play >-<
01:07:625 (3) - nc I don't think this is necesary
01:07:808 (1) - remove nc I put the new combo here for the change of the rhythm in the beatmap
01:19:698 (2) - x:352 y:184 I don't think this change is necessary, but I keep it in my mind, maybe, I change this later
02:04:698 (3) - x:176 y:312 Fix
02:34:333 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 2 triple stacks pls The same >-<
02:58:479 (7) - stack on slider I think is better in the circle, sorry :c
03:21:619 - add circle Fix /o/

for some reason this took a long time 2 mod because this map on editor made me drop to like 13 fps for some reason rip

good luck! Ty and thanks for your time

1. cause you're using widescreen storyboard, you should try to find 16:9 background image. yours is 4:3 and therefore gets resized.. looks really pixelated. '-'
   here is your current background image - 1366x768px
2. your skin misses some files to be complete, and according to Ranking Criteria you have to skin full sets, so you should add:
   -cursormiddle.png
   -sliderb.png
   -scorebar-marker.png
   -SliderBorderColour value in osu files
   I might have missed some, so make sure to check the list for yourself! > https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning
3. I'd be nice if you could a some kind of glow to sliderfollowcircle.png, cause the brown is kind of hard to see
4. I seriously don't get what 'Kuro' and 'Len' are doing in the difficulty names..?

1. SV changes. beginners can't read them so I'd advise you to remove all SV changes from this diff.
2. stacks like 00:58:845 (2,3,4) - 01:14:942 (1,2) - etc. this is hard to read and makes beginners panic, they'll miss because it's still confusing for them. you should unstack all objects and provide a very clear and obvious path players can follow
3. for the same reason you should avoid overlaps of any kind, like 03:01:406 (1,2,3) -
4. 01:39:455 (1,1) - recovery time for Easy diffs after spinners is ~1500ms / 4 beats. you should shorten the spinner here or remove the circle
   same here 02:14:942 (1,1) - probably best here to remove the spinner and map it instead because a long break feels weird
   and 02:37:991 (1,1) - same as the first one
5. 02:55:918 (1,1) - and 03:03:235 (1) - sliders like this is unreadable for beginners, don't use more than 1 reverse, please
6. you need consistent spacing in Easy (and usually in Normal, too). = turn distance snap on and NEVER turn it off. different spacing makes the diff unreadable
7. AR5 is waaaay too high for an Easy. how should beginner players be able to notice them when they appear that fast? reduce this to 4
   ---
   you might want to take a look here - https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... y_elements
   that should give a good overview about what you can use/should avoid in Easy.
   because you have to restructure your diff for huge parts IM going to leave it at this for now. feel free call me back for a proper mod once you've fixed the above!

1. your NCs should be a little more consistent. what's with all the 1-combos throughout the diff? they're unnecessarily confusing
2. 00:40:918 (3,2,3) - avoid overlaps like this
3. 00:48:601 (2,1) - I wonder why you're using patterns like this constantly to break flow. I mean, it's okay, but it's not comfortable to play
4. 01:00:674 (3,1) - DS should be as consistent as possible in Normal, too. try to stick to 1.4 - 1.5, cause that's the spacing you use most in this diff
   this for example - 01:42:016 (1,2,3,4,1) - is totally unreadable. jumps and anti-jumps aren't suitable for Normal diff, players don't have the skill yet to play this. (minor spacing inconsistencies are fine, but this is too much. it's less than 1/3 of the standard distance). ame for 02:40:552 (1,2,3,4,1) - ofc
5. 02:55:918 (1,2,3) - I don't think you should stack reverse sliders below circles, the reverse is hidden that way und players can drop the combo really easily
   ---
   here, too. once you've fixed tzhe spacing feel free to pm me ~

1. 00:42:747 (1) - don't hide this below 00:41:833 (2) - . even if players can assuem that there's a reverseon this too, it'd be nice if that's visible, example: http://puu.sh/dKwcL/d2baf34c75.png
2. 00:55:735 (7) - imo you could emphasize the downbeat this ends on way better. it's clearly louder than the other sounds, so you should try to make it clickable (eg remove the reverse and add a circleinstead)
3. 01:16:040 (6,2) - also try to avoid 'small' overlaps. they're not as confusing as in E/N, but just don't look good. and they can be easily avoided by moving one of the objects a few pixels
4. 01:24:820 (8,1,2) - this would flow slightly better if you reverse 1+2 like this: http://puu.sh/dKwtH/4106b4186a.png
5. as I said, looks good overall, you could work on your flow a bit, maybe reading https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941 helps you a little?

• Kuro Len! Easy
  
  01:10:552 (1) - Move that slider to X188 Y180 and - 01:11:650 (1) - to X284 Y204 so the spacing between them is correct.
  01:14:576 (2) - Move to X280 Y184 for better blanket with - 01:16:406 (1)

• Kuro! Normal
  
  Please lower the AR to 5 - https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal
  01:28:113 (2) - Move to X224 Y160 so it's symmetrical with the star pattern.
  01:30:308 (2) - Move to X264 Y56 so it blankets better with - 01:28:845 (4)
  02:14:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Could you make this symmetrical, like this?
  
  Picture

  
  02:38:722 (3) - Move to X232 Y176 and - 02:39:088 (4) - to X448 Y168 so it looks better and the spacing is more accurat.

• Len! Hard
  
  Didn't found anything to criticize in this difficulty! Well done!

• Kuro Len! Insane
  
  Didn't found anything to critizice here too! Awesome!

• Romantic Night!
  
  Same as Len! Hard and Kuro Len! Insane!

1. I don't see this kind of mapping style often anymore lol
2. The easy has a slightly higher star rating than 2, but it should be 2 or lower (unrankable issue)

Exote wrote:

Hi! From my queue.

Kuro Len! Easy

00:29:942 (2) - Move this circle three times down, and one time to the left, so it could form a better triangle pattern. I don't understand, but 2 is symmetrical with 4 now :3
00:44:942 (2) - Move this from its current location to x:92 / y:284, it gets easier and looks better imo, it's and easy anyway. Fix
01:25:552 (2,4) - The stacking here might be a bit tough for the new players, I'd rather change it up a bit so there won't a stack. Fix
01:28:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can decrease the spacing here, all they seem again a bit hard for new players. Fix
01:32:503 (4) - Move this circle 3 times to the right ( x:288 ) and also you can move both the circle and the slider closer to the previous ones, like 4 times up. I try but I don't understand this, sorry :c
02:10:552 (3,4) - The stacking here ;// I don't think this stack is a issue for new player :c
Whee this is all I could find, I think it is a little bit hard for an Easy, but it's fine.

Kuro! Normal

03:10:918 (2) - Move this circle a bit to the right top to form a triangle pattern with 1, 4? I prefer this pattern, not fixed
03:17:137 (3) - Ah, this one, I personally think it won't be that easy to read. but, the pattern is cute, I prefer not fixed :c
Welp, couldn't find anything else.

Len! Hard

00:54:637 - Ugh this part is bit, idk confusing? : o yes, but I changed this part 2 or 3 times, and this pattern is not too bad with the rhythm
01:23:723 (5) - Here, if you curve the slider like this, you get a better looking blankets from the top and the left. I can't see the image but I fix the blanket /o/
02:34:698 (7,8) - Ctrl+C slider 7, and place it instead of slider 8, then ctrl+H,J it and move it down there again. Looking better. Fix /o/
03:25:918 (5,6) - To the same as above, copy slider 6, place it instead of 5 and ctrl+H,J so it looks smoother. Fix
This diff is well done!

Kuro Len! Insane

Weeeell, I couldn't find anything here.

Romantic Night!

01:23:357 - It doesn't sound good when the stream starts from here, make it start from 01:23:723 instead, in the empty space you can put a slider or something. not fixed, I prefer the start in 01:23:357 (because len voice start soft and then is more loud) but I keep it in my mind for a future change :3
03:53:723 (4) - NC ? xD I think is not necessary, not fixed

So, I'm sorry if my mod isn't that good, the thing is that I couldn't find any timing etc etc issues, which is actually good , because it means that your map apparently is pretty fine! Good luck!

12345g wrote:

Hi, I want to mod this because you have modded my map. Also, because I like the singer, and the song, and the singer again.

Mod

• 
  Easy

1. Your Easy difficulty is categorized as Normal because the Star Rating is not below 1.5. Try reducing it, maybe by deleting some notes.
2. If you can't bring the Star Rating to below 1.5, at least reduce it to below 2.0 as it is one of the ranking criteria.
3. 01:25:552 (2) - This note gets stacked with 01:26:650 (4) - this is too difficult for an Easy, because the player might think that 01:25:552 (2) - is a slider. You should reposition it. For example, open the easy.osu, and try changing this: Fix
   

   255,200,85918,2,0,P|301:238|365:236,1,125
   344,112,86650,2,0,P|298:74|234:76,1,125
   120,124,87381,1,8,0:0:0:0:

   to this:
   

   256,200,85918,2,0,P|294:246|292:310,1,125
   168,289,86650,2,0,P|130:243|132:179,1,125
   216,88,87381,1,8,0:0:0:0:

4. 02:09:820 (2) - This slider hides 02:11:284 (4) - this is also too difficult for an Easy. You should reposition it. For example, try changing this:
   Not Fixed
   

   448,380,130552,2,0,P|460:332|441:287,1,100
   352,244,131284,1,0,0:0:0:0:

   to this:
   

   448,296,130552,2,0,P|460:248|441:203,1,100
   344,168,131284,1,0,0:0:0:0:

• 
  Normal

1. Your Normal difficulty is categorized as Hard because the Star Rating is not below 2.25. Try reducing it, maybe by deleting some notes, or replacing short sliders with a hit circle.
2. 03:16:406 (1) - This slider hides 03:17:137 (3) - I think this is too difficult for a Normal. Since repositioning it without breaking the distance snapping is difficult, you can replace the slider 03:17:137 (3) - with a hit circle. I try to fixed, but I don't know how >.<

• 
  Storyboard

1. Nice.
2. The "96Neko - Kuro.png" which appears from 02:58:845 to 03:04:698 has the "96" number mirrored on his arm. I suggest to not flip this image horizontally. Make it appear from the right side of the screen and move it to the left. As a consequence, you should make the "Len Kagamine.png" appear on the left side of the screen. Do it by opening the .osb and change this:
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Len Kagamine.png",320,240
    S,0,172991,,1.090839
    F,0,172991,173540,0,1
    M,0,172991,178845,542,253,547,202
    F,0,173540,178479,1
    F,0,178479,178845,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"96Neko - Kuro.png",320,240
    S,0,178845,,0.6118709
    F,0,178845,179576,0,1
    P,0,178845,183235,H
    M,0,178845,184698,-27,271,64,269
    F,0,179576,183235,1
    F,0,183235,184698,1,0
    P,0,183235,184698,H

   to this:
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Len Kagamine.png",320,240
    S,0,172991,,1.090839
    F,0,172991,173540,0,1
    M,0,172991,178845,98,253,93,202
    F,0,173540,178479,1
    F,0,178479,178845,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"96Neko - Kuro.png",320,240
    S,0,178845,,0.6118709
    F,0,178845,179576,0,1
    M,0,178845,184698,667,271,576,269
    F,0,179576,183235,1
    F,0,183235,184698,1,0

• 
  Everthing Else

1. Nice.

• 
  Summary

1. The Easy and Normal are too difficult. Ok, I try to reduce the difficult >.<
2. Nice storyboarding, only one "mirrored" issue. About this you are right, but I thing I can change that issue in the image but if I can't, I change that part in the storyboard. Thanks
3. Nice beatmap. ty :3

Good luck!

mrturtle99 wrote:

Hi from my modding queue~
Also the skin is very beautiful~ Ty

Kuro Len! Easy

1. slider tick rate should be 1, not 2 on easy Why (?) I preffer to use the same tick rate for all difficulties :c
2. 00:48:601 (2) - consider putting a NC here Fix
3. 01:07:625 (1) - take off NC Fix
4. 01:08:357 (2) - NC Fix
5. 02:00:308 (3) - ^ Fix
6. 03:14:942 (3) - ^ Fix
7. 03:39:820 (1) - take off NC Not fixed

Kuro! Normal

1. slider tick rate should be 1, not 2 on normal Why (?) :c
2. 02:57:381 (4) - NC Fix

Len! Hard

1. 01:18:967 (3) - NC Not fixed
2. 03:21:528 (7) - NC Not fixed
3. 03:29:759 (1) - NC Not fixed

Kuro Len! Insane

1. 00:33:967 (7) - NC Not fixed
2. 00:37:077 (8) - ^ Not fixed
3. 00:40:003 (8) - ^ Not fixed
4. 01:29:576 (1) - ^ Fix
5. 01:35:247 (6) - ^ Fix
6. 02:28:479 (8) - ^ Not fixed
7. 03:41:284 (8) - ^ Not fixed
8. 03:53:723 (6) - just a suggestion, maybe put this in the center of the playfield Oke :3

Romantic Night!
Looks Fine Yay /o/

Euny wrote:

your request! came from my queue Hi and thanks

• Easy

1. 01:04:698 (1) - i think need to changing this slider's degree or remodeling cause objects position is too down. Fix
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:13:479 (1) - add hitfinish at the slider's head Fix
3. 01:37:259 (2,3) - fix blanket (place to x184y252 01:37:259 (3) this sliders last point) I make that blankets intentioned because when the hit circle es big, I don't like the blanket, but I fixed a little :3
4. 02:01:406 (4,1) - ^ The same
5. 02:02:503 (2,3) - ^ The same

• Kuro! Normal

1. 03:03:235 (4) - i'm unsure this reverse slider is right. I think the same, but that slider sound good with the song and is not hard to play

• Len! Hard

1. 01:13:113 (9) - add hitfinish at the slider's tail Fix

• Kuro Len! Insane

1. 01:13:479 (1) - add hitfinish at the slider's head. Fix
2. 01:33:418 (7) - add hitfinish at the slider's reverse arrow. Fix
3. 01:36:528 (5) - add hitfinish and changing NC. I don't think that new combo is necessary, Not Fixed
4. 01:39:272 (7) - place this note x340y248 for better triangle flow? Oke :3
5. 02:29:211 (10) - add hitfinish at the slider's head. Not Fiex
6. 03:40:918 (7) - NC Not Fixed

• Romantic Night!

1. 00:45:674 (7) - NC Fix
2. 00:50:064 (1) - add hitfinish at the slider's head. Fix
3. 00:55:185 (7) - NC Not Fixed
4. 00:55:551 (11) - ^ Not Fixed
5. 01:03:235 (6) - ^ Not Fixed
6. 01:13:479 (1) - ^ Fix
7. 01:25:186 (1) - add hitfinish at the slider's head. Not Fixed
8. 02:14:211 (10) - NC Not Fixed
9. 02:20:430 (13) - add hitfinish at the slider's head. Fix

i think your sets are almost perfect!

its very cool and nice map! > < Ty /o/

good luck with it!Thanks for Modding my Map :3!

Osuology wrote:

[Len! Hard]
00:54:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - IMO this is too hard for a hard (Irony?) Well I think this is hard but I like
01:06:345 (4) - This is very hard to read for beginners. Fix
01:28:113 (1) - Same as above. Fix
02:22:991 (7,8,1,2,1) - These sliders coincide with each other too much. I don't think this is a issue >.<
03:14:576 (10) - NC.(New Combo) Why (?)

[Kuro Len! Insane]
01:27:564 (7) - Pretty much unreadable. Fix
01:35:247 (6) - NC. Not Fixed
Other than that, good job on both diffs! On to Romantic Night!

[Romantic Night!]
00:31:955 (5) - Just remove it, it sounds better. Oke :3
02:54:455 (4,5,6) - This is a calm part, so consider removing. Not Fixed
03:00:308 (3,4,5) - Same as above. Not Fixed

OTHER THAN THAT VERY NICE! I HOPE IT GETS RANKED AND REKS EVERYONE!!!

-Nya- wrote:

NM request from my above queue. Please leave me a vote in my queue after applying my mod.
So let's get started~

Note: Everything in bold is highly suggested.
Everything in red is unrankable.

General:

1. This is a new ranking requirement. If you have a custom skin, you have to add this line right under your combo colours in the [colours] section. Just add it right after the last combo colour in your .osu file: Fix and thanks for the information /o/
   

    SliderBorder : 255,255,255

2. Why does your diffs have different names the whole time: Kuro! Normal and Len! Hard? Rather name it just one name. For example: Kuro! Easy, Kuro! Normal, Kuro! Hard, etc. Ok, Fix
3. Add these two soundfiles into your song’s folder to get rid of that annoying sliderslide sound: I don't know what I need to do >.<
   http://puu.sh/gf3nU/49ab1b399b.wav
   http://puu.sh/gf3qs/662f1c3d1d.wav

Kuro Len! Easy:

1. 00:33:601 (2,1) –Try to avoid this overlap please. It’s very unnecessary. Just move 00:35:430 (1) –a bit upwards. Not fixed, because when playing the overlap is a little bit second when the hit burst dissapears
2. 00:39:820 (1) –I don’t really like this wave shape. Maybe try something like this instead: Not, Fixed I don't think this change is necessary and I like the other form
   
   Picture

   
3. 00:43:113 –I think a circle here will work very nicely and will give you a nice flow. Oke, Fix
4. 00:44:211 (1,2) –Hm, I really think a rhythm like this will work better. Fix
   
   Picture

   
   Your current rhythm/pattern just feels like the old mapping style version. ok :c
5. 00:47:137 (1) –Ctrl+G this to improve the flow with 00:48:601 (1,2,3) – Fix
6. 00:48:601 (1) –I suggest rather removing new combo here. Not Fixed, I don't know why tou suggest this
7. 00:48:601 (1,2,3) –Not a fan of this kind of rhythm. This rhythm is much better in my opinion and flows nicely. Fix
   
   Picture

   
8. 00:54:455 (1,2) –Not a good idea for flow purposes. Try to keep the rhythm going. So try something like this: I don't like that pattern I think I preffer to maintance the pattern that the map have for the moment
   
   Picture

   
   Try something similar to my suggestion above. It’s important in an Easy to maintain a nice, stable rhythm to prevent confusion for beginners.
9. 00:58:113 –Keep the flow going by adding a note here please. That current gap is quite awkward and ruins the flow in my opinion. Fix
10. 01:01:772 (1,2) –Similar to my previous suggestions: This isn’t a good rhythm. Try something like this instead: Fix
    
    Picture

    
11. 01:06:894 (1,2,3) –Rather change these three circles into a slider and a single circle since the current rhythm is a bit too difficult for an Easy in my opinion. I don't think that 3 circles going to kill newbie player, not fixed
    
    Picture

    
12. 01:07:991 –Hm, start mapping again from here. Something like this: Fix
    
    Picture

    
13. 01:11:650 –Add a note here to help with flow. The gap is pretty awkward in my opinion. Not fixed
14. 01:16:040 –Add a note. There’s a clear beat here. Not fixed, the slider follow kuro voice >.<
15. 01:19:333 -Oh my! Why did you change the slider velocity here? I suggest never ever changing the slider velocity in any easy diff. Your Easy is already quite hard in my opinion and unrankable because of that too. Please maintain the same slider velocity throughout the entire diff. Don’t make the sliders faster just because it’s the chorus.

but I wan't to be consistent with the slider speed in all the mapset :c

I’m rather gonna stop modding this diff before my mod gets too long. The most important thing you’ll have to fix here is that slider velocity change and definitely a lot of that rhythms. Try to maintain a nice and solid flow throughout the diff. Also try to get mods that will help you with the rhythm and patterns specifically.

Kuro! Normal:

1. 00:29:577 (1,2,3,4,5) –Yikes! This spacing is pretty far apart. Try using a different distance snap please to prevent such big spacings.
   
   Actually, this diff looks so much like a Hard instead of a Normal. You have very big spacings that should never be used in Normals in my opinion. So the first thing you should definitely do, is lower your distance spacing please. Try a DS of 0.7X. I think you maybe made the DS high to prevent these notes from touching: 00:32:503 (1,2,3) – but in a Normal notes like these will always touch. You shouldn’t be afraid of that.

I don't think the distance snap is a big issue, I don't like when the circle make a overlap but maybe I can evaluate a remap for this beatmap >.<

Len! Hard:

1. 00:32:137 –Why not add a note here to emphasize that “Whoa” sound? Because a note here sound a little weird
2. 00:32:503 (1) –Try to use more elegant sliders here please. Something like this: I little fix
   
   Picture

   
3. 00:42:747 (1) –Ctrl+G. Nice pattern in my opinion. Also take note that you may have jumps in Hard. Not everything must be distanced snapped. Not Fixed
4. 00:51:894 (6) –Add new combo here since this combo is quite long when you compare it to previous combos. Fix
5. 00:54:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –I testplayed this part but I couldn’t play it at all. It’s very confusing. Try to use a different pattern or rhythm there please. What about this? mm... I remake this pattern like 6 times and I think this is the better form, maybe I change to this in the future
   
   Picture

   
6. 01:10:186 (3,5) –Hm, maybe make these two sliders look similar? Fix
7. 01:13:479 –Since this is a very important beat please rather add a circle here. So something like this: Fix
   
   Picture

   
8. 01:42:016 (1,2,3,4,1) –Half circle pattern? Oke :3
   
   Picture

   
9. 02:37:991 (6) –Ctrl+H Not Fixed
10. 03:14:942 (11) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 03:15:125 (1) – Yup, fixed my fail
11. 03:16:406 (1,2,1) –Hm, check this spacing again please. It’s not consistent and it looks quite untidy. Fixed, But the pattern don't change >.<
12. 03:26:650 (7) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 03:26:833 (1) – Fix
13. 03:36:528 (7) –Ctrl+J and place it like this: Fix
    
    Picture

    
14. 03:52:808 (4) –Try to place the tail of this slider more in the middle of these two notes: 03:51:893 (2,3) – Fix
15. 03:53:723 –Try to end this strong beat with a circle to emphasize it more. Like this: Not fixed sounds too weird >.<
    
    Picture

    

Overall, all the diffs still require much improving especially your easy diffs (Easy and Normal). Try to lower that star difficulty on the easy and please fix that spacing in the Normal. This map still has a lot of potential though. Please try to get it ranked, cuz I love Len!~
Good Luck!~