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Aka

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-09-02T15:51:13+00:00

hey
after reading Shiro's post i testplayed Gu's Insane at first and found some additional stuff:

・00:12:005 (1,2,1) - this part plays VERY awkwardly. i am saying this as a player and it is rhythmically weird itself. mostly because of the 00:12:304 (2) - 's end, which is standing on the downbeat. to aviod that "invisible" pattern which Shiro mentioned before ( 00:11:035 (2,1) - ) and what i mentioned after, you could connect 00:12:005 (1,2) - into one slider, place it down near the incoming (1) and move it be to the downbeat.

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・00:14:095 (7) - the downbeat thing goes there aswell. would really like to see a note-slider instead
・00:35:811 (1,2) - didn't get this rhythm at all, the place where you ended your (1) is completely empty. more logicaly to extend the slider to be full 1/1 or to follow the piano sound, on red 00:36:035 - tick

Mochi's

・00:38:946 (4) - if you were following the piano for the whistles then you should place it there. it felt empty when i played this and there is definitely the piano sound which could be emphasized
・00:59:991 (3,4) - triplet there should fit much better. in addition, the insane diffs has triplet in this place as well. the double feels a bit awkawd due to the vocal part starting right on the next tick 01:00:214 - . if there were no vocals i'd agree with you but not in this case.

Normal

・00:52:826 (1,2) - feels as something inconsistent, considering the NCing and at the end a downbeat issue.
00:52:826 (1) - remove the NC there and do the following

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thats all from me

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-09-03T21:52:43+00:00

Good luck Fumika!

- H i N a -

- H i N a - 2014-09-04T07:41:20+00:00

I hope your map has get requalified again

I want to get FC in insane diff. with HD DT again (in CTB mode)

/me Shoot a

!

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2014-09-05T08:38:02+00:00

Shiro wrote:
Gu's Insane
00:11:035 (2,1) - (1) is invinsible under (2)the time is enough to see there is a short slider with repeats.
00:35:811 (1) - extended for no reason, there is a clear vocal on the red tick right beforeif there is no sound,why I follow this?haha if you delete this and hear you can get it's a slight sound.though slight,but it's in the same part as 00:35:811
00:39:393 (1) - Extended to 1/8 really ? It's confusing and surprising, extend to 1/4 if the mapper really wants, but 1/8 doesn't workwhat I do for 1/4 is no overlaping like 01:03:573 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - .for this one.the piano sound is at 1/8.and the slider itself has a tick in it.why confusing?

Aka wrote:
hey
after reading Shiro's post i testplayed Gu's Insane at first and found some additional stuff:

・00:12:005 (1,2,1) - this part plays VERY awkwardly. i am saying this as a player and it is rhythmically weird itself. mostly because of the 00:12:304 (2) - 's end, which is standing on the downbeat. to aviod that "invisible" pattern which Shiro mentioned before ( 00:11:035 (2,1) - ) and what i mentioned after, you could connect 00:12:005 (1,2) - into one slider, place it down near the incoming (1) and move it be to the downbeat.following the music or mapping with downbeat.which is important?the music here is divided into 2 parts so I place 2 sliders here.why I need to care downbeat?
・00:14:095 (7) - the downbeat thing goes there aswell. would really like to see a note-slider insteadmainly for 00:13:871 (6,7) - 6 and 7's head.it's a part in inst.i just use a slider for the base drum on the white line
・00:35:811 (1,2) - didn't get this rhythm at all, the place where you ended your (1) is completely empty. more logicaly to extend the slider to be full 1/1 or to follow the piano sound, on red 00:36:035 - ticksame in shiro's post

kkk

Momochikun

1,926 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-09-11T13:07:30+00:00

@Aka: i agree about the whistle, but i want to keep the duplet just as it is since somehow it feels more soft to follow during gameplay

Kyouren

5,579 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-09-13T08:39:21+00:00

Why normal diff is so hard (Why you use CS is 4

)

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2014-09-24T13:35:07+00:00

my SS hd dt on insane... oh my..

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-09-29T16:50:37+00:00

Poke me in game if you want to get this back on track.

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-11-14T17:30:13+00:00

Due to a recent move of Beatmap Moderation, we are currently wondering if you have any plan on reviving this beatmap to be re-qualified.

If not we will archive the post made on the management thread after about a week.

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-11-15T01:48:56+00:00

Yes, I will reviving this. It'd be better if I fix it myself...

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2014-11-16T09:49:44+00:00

If konei is still willing to check this afterward, i'll take care of the rest ~

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-11-23T03:57:31+00:00

Edit

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2016-03-04T12:10:22+00:00

RESURRECTION

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Rumia- 2016-03-04T13:48:49+00:00

wb

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2016-08-01T06:18:54+00:00

How many times do I need to resurrect this and wait BN to notice it until it get in to graveyard again ;-;

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2016-08-03T01:37:04+00:00

I don't know. This map just brings me back bad memories as a BAT member >.<

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2016-08-03T03:58:23+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
I don't know. This map just brings me back bad memories as a BAT member >.<

Uhhhhhh, I'm sorry to hear about that Ike... I heard that I need to ask the same BN that gave me a bubble to bring this back, can you help me with this map to get this Re-Qualify after 2 years of DQ'd please. ;w; ?
If you don't want to, I won't bother you again...

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2016-08-06T04:07:56+00:00

Fumika wrote:
BeatofIke wrote:
I don't know. This map just brings me back bad memories as a BAT member >.<
Uhhhhhh, I'm sorry to hear about that Ike... I heard that I need to ask the same BN that gave me a bubble to bring this back, can you help me with this map to get this Re-Qualify after 2 years of DQ'd please. ;w; ?
If you don't want to, I won't bother you again...

You don't need to ask the same BN. You can ask any BN.

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2016-08-06T06:51:55+00:00

Little wrote:
You don't need to ask the same BN. You can ask any BN.

I tried.

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2016-08-07T19:58:19+00:00

[General]

Maybe end the spinner at 01:27:752 for all difficulties since the vocals ends at that spot.
Are you using soft-hitclap2.wav? I don't see any claps added on S:C2. Just whistles and finishes.

[Gu's Insane]

01:16:782 (1,2) - Sudden 1/4 spacing. I didn't see that coming, since the other 1/4 spacing (aside from the sliders and kick sliders) were about 50% smaller._.

Good mapset. To this day, I fail to comprehend why this unrank was considered a severe penalty (or why was it even unranked at all)? Oh Well! There you have it. Call me back @Fumika and maybe I could move this mapset back to a bubbled state!

Moved back to star icon~

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2016-08-09T10:29:42+00:00

Fixed all of those, uploaded!

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2016-08-10T15:38:43+00:00

Okay going to move this mapset back to bubbled state now since I've checked everything by this point (including the metadata).
Good luck Fumika~

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2016-08-10T15:57:21+00:00

This map really back on track again after 2 years of DQ'd, Thank you!!

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-08-11T15:50:12+00:00

Shiro wrote:
Gu's Insane
00:11:035 (2,1) - (1) is invinsible under (2)
00:35:811 (1) - extended for no reason, there is a clear vocal on the red tick right before for me its still fine in 1/4 but no normal-hitnormal sound please, that sounds so loud and weird
00:39:393 (1) - Extended to 1/8 really ? It's confusing and surprising, extend to 1/4 if the mapper really wants, but 1/8 doesn't work

agree with above and didnt fixed yet

Easy : OD can raised to 2, 1,5 is too small for me
00:02:677 - 00:04:468 - 00:07:379 - 00:10:625 - you should not use 10% here, as RC said you can mute both sliderslide and slidertick.. using 10% is veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy hard to hear when play (even 25% speed) that its questionable for me. also 00:07:379 - especially on this part has vocal same as 00:06:931 - so weird to see the 10% volume
00:37:602 (1) - you can try avoid the overlap as possible, it doesnt look really good https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5820832
01:14:319 (4) - fits with whistle imo, it has violin sound there
01:17:901 (4) - ^

Normal :
- 00:00:438 (1) - weird to map here if you dont follow rest vocal at next whiteticks
- 00:12:528 (1) - antijump isnt allowed tbh
- 00:19:692 (1) - inconsistency spacing (1,25x) here, i thought due sv change but you keep 1x like 00:21:483 (1) - so yes 1,25x is weird here
- 00:34:468 (2) - tiny spacing error (1,06x)
- 00:34:020 (1) - 00:36:259 (1) - 00:37:155 (3) - 00:37:602 (1) - 00:39:841 (1) - im pretty confuse with your spacing here, each 1/1 has different spacing.. one is 1,5x other is 1x and last is 1,8x. please keep consistent and personally i prefer 1,3x to keep the same distance with 1x for normal sv speed
- 00:38:946 (4) - 00:40:737 (3) - tiny spacing error (0,94x)
- 00:48:796 (5,1) - this should be swap the rhythm, mo-t-to is 1 vocal so it should map with 1 slider repeat when circle works for emphasis cymbal (01:03:125 (1,1) - like this

)
- 01:01:334 (1) - 00:52:826 (1,1) - remove nc for consistency

Hard :
- 00:23:274 (1) - probably ctrl+g, its meanie if you do 2 jumps in row
- 00:37:043 - possible to map at least emphasis drum more
- 00:58:647 (7,1) - nice blanket mz

Insane :
- a bit weird why not use AR 8? 8,1 looks meaningless here and also gap from 7,3 to 8,1 is a bit too far for me
- 00:36:931 (5) - should be 1/8 if you follow the drum. there are 4 drum sounds

Gu :
- 00:10:065 - 加一个圈，以前跟vocal，在这儿应该继续跟着vocal
- 00:19:580 (2) - i guess 236,212. we need to keep use same spacing for triplet or stream
- 00:27:528 (1) - 去掉nc
- 00:31:558 (4) - 应该改成两个圈，这"ta-ma" vocal都是强的声音
- 00:51:707 (8) - 1,08x inconsistency spacing
- 01:02:901 (2) - 168,288. red tick has very weak sound, jump feels weird really
- 01:13:759 (3,5) - overmap
- 01:21:035 (2) - 我觉得ctrl+g感觉比较好玩

Momochikun

1,926 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2016-08-12T04:41:49+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Hard :
- 00:23:274 (1) - probably ctrl+g, its meanie if you do 2 jumps in row keep kpyjump style, pls
- 00:37:043 - possible to map at least emphasis drum more itu kan ga ada beat di blue tick berhubung 1/6, previous mod sih
- 00:58:647 (7,1) - nice blanket mz ty LUL x))

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Rumia- 2016-08-13T15:44:01+00:00

go go!

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2016-08-14T02:44:25+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Gu :
- 00:10:065 - 加一个圈，以前跟vocal，在这儿应该继续跟着vocal我想在这个combo开始跟inst因为这个combo开头的钢琴要比前面明显重一些
- 00:19:580 (2) - i guess 236,212. we need to keep use same spacing for triplet or streamI tried another position to keep it coincident
- 00:27:528 (1) - 去掉ncyes
- 00:31:558 (4) - 应该改成两个圈，这"ta-ma" vocal都是强的声音k
- 00:51:707 (8) - 1,08x inconsistency spacingk
- 01:02:901 (2) - 168,288. red tick has very weak sound, jump feels weird really动了一点
- 01:13:759 (3,5) - overmap k,my mistake
- 01:21:035 (2) - 我觉得ctrl+g感觉比较好玩这边就是想做这样的下沉的感觉

00:35:811 (1) - 这边是因为背景有音，音量减了点

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thx

Fumika

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Fumika 2016-08-14T19:54:43+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Easy : OD can raised to 2, 1,5 is too small for me k
00:02:677 - 00:04:468 - 00:07:379 - 00:10:625 - you should not use 10% here, as RC said you can mute both sliderslide and slidertick.. using 10% is veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy hard to hear when play (even 25% speed) that its questionable for me. also 00:07:379 - especially on this part has vocal same as 00:06:931 - so weird to see the 10% volume k
00:37:602 (1) - you can try avoid the overlap as possible, it doesnt look really good https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5820832 I change to something else
01:14:319 (4) - fits with whistle imo, it has violin sound there k
01:17:901 (4) - ^ k

Normal :
- 00:00:438 (1) - weird to map here if you dont follow rest vocal at next whiteticks removed
- 00:12:528 (1) - antijump isnt allowed tbh change to stack
- 00:19:692 (1) - inconsistency spacing (1,25x) here, i thought due sv change but you keep 1x like 00:21:483 (1) - so yes 1,25x is weird here Fixed
- 00:34:468 (2) - tiny spacing error (1,06x) ok
- 00:34:020 (1) - 00:36:259 (1) - 00:37:155 (3) - 00:37:602 (1) - 00:39:841 (1) - im pretty confuse with your spacing here, each 1/1 has different spacing.. one is 1,5x other is 1x and last is 1,8x. please keep consistent and personally i prefer 1,3x to keep the same distance with 1x for normal sv speed
How? I didn't see any of those are using 1,8x. I use only 1,0x for 1/2 and 1,5x for 1/1 there
- 00:38:946 (4) - 00:40:737 (3) - tiny spacing error (0,94x) ok
- 00:48:796 (5,1) - this should be swap the rhythm, mo-t-to is 1 vocal so it should map with 1 slider repeat when circle works for emphasis cymbal (01:03:125 (1,1) - like this ) ok, but I want to keep a drum beat here 00:48:796 -, remove reverse and add a circle.
- 01:01:334 (1) - 00:52:826 (1,1) - remove nc for consistency sure

Insane :
- a bit weird why not use AR 8? 8,1 looks meaningless here and also gap from 7,3 to 8,1 is a bit too far for meok
- 00:36:931 (5) - should be 1/8 if you follow the drum. there are 4 drum sounds Actually I change to 1/6 same as Gu's

Thank you very much for your mod, Xinely!

Xinely

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Xinely 2016-08-20T01:06:59+00:00

ugh how to explain.. in short, for easy since begining until 00:11:632 - you should can hear sliderticks sound when you play.. volume 5% for sliderticks are unrankable here

Easy :
- 00:35:811 (3,1) - i think you can make blanket instead to avoid the overlap

Insane : oh yeah i meant that snap should be 1/6. pardon me i was dizzy lol

Gu : 00:39:393 (1,2) - if you insist to keep end in 1/8 ok but the spacing should be reduced imo (if me i prefer to stack (2)'s head to (1)'s tail) i think 1/4 for 268 bpm with high spacing and the song's music is calm totally dont fit

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2016-08-20T02:43:02+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Gu : 00:39:393 (1,2) - if you insist to keep end in 1/8 ok but the spacing should be reduced imo (if me i prefer to stack (2)'s head to (1)'s tail) i think 1/4 for 268 bpm with high spacing and the song's music is calm totally dont fit

@Fumika : help me stack 2's head to 1's tail

Fumika

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Fumika 2016-08-20T02:47:34+00:00

All fixed!!

Xinely

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Xinely 2016-08-20T04:19:47+00:00

okay lets move this again

Rebubbled ~