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ak74

236 posts

Joined November 2011

ak74 2014-08-08T13:42:05+00:00

射射射，不射还是人？

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-08-09T12:31:34+00:00

好好的一条人

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-08-09T16:01:52+00:00

好好的几条人

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-08-10T16:43:39+00:00

感动人心

Nagato

69 posts

Joined February 2010

Nagato 2014-08-16T14:17:15+00:00

好好的一个人

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2014-08-17T16:19:15+00:00

You told it was pending when it actually wasn't. ;_;

Anyway, just poke me later to check the last unfinished part.

[General]

You're missing a couple of tags. Collab and Collaboration. It might be helpful to use these tags since the diff contains mixed styles. // For the faster and easier search, add start and dash to the tags as well. Please, note, start:dash is a different tag. For some people with terrible memory, those tags may be handy.
The storyboard needs an epilepsy warning.
Countown feels unnecessary, please, disable it. It just does not really make sense here.

[Collab]
Have you considered using a creative name? Something related to the anime/character, that would make the diff a bit more memorable for players?

00:45:270 - drag the break here? It will match better with the change of the song.
Note: 05:37:488 (1) - yeah, same here.
02:28:448 - same as above? This way, the BPM change will get emphasized.
Note: 05:37:488 (1) - and drag the end of the break here for the same reason as above, to emphasize the BPM-change.

examination
1. 00:05:936 (5) - both vocals and the music are audible at 00:06:270 - and finishing the slider later sounds off the song and feels confusing. Finish the slider at 00:06:270 - to follow the music.
2. 00:19:825 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm at this part feels weird due to the heads of the sliders following really minor sounds, which feels unnatural and breaks the polarity. I've tried to simplify your rhythm and here's what I've got: example.
3. 00:29:492 (5) - I believe that it is supposed to be started at the blue tick (1/4). This way, the slider will match waaay better with Maki's brilliant voice.
4. 00:32:158 (4,5) - the switch to 1/6 beats is unexpected and might bug players. Replace the double here with a slider, so, players may feel it and have a higher chance to hit 300 here, and then, also mayl be able to understand that the next double is 1/6.
5. 00:42:603 (6) - add a new combo here, to warn players about the jump. This part is calm and the jump is kinda hard to feel/understand, so, a new combo here will help us to read it.
6. 02:35:038 (4) - either replace it with an 1/2 slider or add a circle at 02:35:266 - to follow the vocals and keep rhythm more natural. I keep getting the feeling that something is missing here, atm.
7. 02:54:470 - listen to the music again, please. I believe that there is a beat here which should be mapped. Try to place a circle here.
8. 07:02:962 (1,2,3) - do not overmap this way. The tails of these sliders follow nothing in music. either replace them with circles or make them end at the red ticks to represent the drums.
  Note: same happens way too often, so, I'm leaving them up to you, since I believe that you've already got what I was trying to say.
Hinsvar
1. 00:58:048 (2) - are you sure about this slider? IT feels relatively boring comapring to the two 1/4s without the repeats. Example. Alternative (vocals are represented slightly better).
  Note: the same will aply to 00:59:938 (3) - and 01:01:827 (3), perhaps.
2. 01:23:087 (1,1,1,1,1) - I am impressed. ♥
3. 01:33:088 (4) - to improve your flow a bit you can Ctrl+G the slider here. It will also make the spacing vary a bit here, which brings some more challenge in this part and matches nicely with the song.
happy623
1. 02:13:308 (1,2) - minor - it might be just me, but the curve feels too agressive, hurts the flow and does not really fit with the song.
2. 04:16:546 (1,2,3) - just like you did it with 04:30:990 (1,2) - try to move a new combo from 04:16:546 (1) - to (2).
Kawaiwkyik
1. A lot of your jumpy patterns like 03:22:504 (3,4,5,6) - feel exaggerated. The BPM is low, yeah, but it just does not correspond with the song, and therefore, gives an unpleasant feeling while playing.
  Note: keep in mind, that it's a marathon map, so, do not drain players too much unless you're sure that the song asks for it.
2. 10:27:276 (1) - you could use two or even fours sliders with the same amount of repeats instead of just one long slider. Holding this slider for so long gets too stressful, a specially for the nearly-finish parts of the marathon.
  
  Please, get more opinions on the jumps they are really bugging me a lot.
yf_bmp
1. 03:51:651 (9) - the sudden spacing change gets really confusing. From compressed streams to 1/4 jumps, it is common to use new combos at such patterns, so playes are warned about DS changes. So, yeah, try to add a new combo to (9), please.
  Note: 06:45:024 (6) - same here.
2. 04:05:873 (1) - minor - mind changing the shape of this slider to something softer and more readable? Example.
3. 06:23:381 (8) - minor - the shape of the slider does not really fit with the music and looks really random to me. Mind changing it to something like [http://puu.sh/aWtZ5.jpg this]?
Xinely
1. 05:00:044 (4) - the circle is slightly overmapped and it is noticeable even while playing. It just feels out of the song's rhythm. Try to remove it, please?
  Note: 05:37:488 (1) - same applies to the repreat of this slider.
2. 05:02:822 (1,3) - I really loved the sound, but they sound a bit lonely in the middle of a marathon map. Either add more of them and to more different parts of the song (discuss it with other mappers) or remove these two. (preferable).
El SolarBeam
1. 08:36:523 (6) - try to avoid overmapping. I have already mentioned it several times to other collabbers. THe map is a marathon and it drains players, therefore, it should have an understandable rhythm, so, the layers won't get confused. Just try to play it and I am sure that you'' understand it as a player.
[_Crystal
1. 09:13:014 (5) - a new como here might warn playrs about sudden 1/4 jumps and reflect the song nicly. Give it a try.
IamKwaN
1. 10:50:693 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern gets really confusing. Take into consideration, that this is the fila part of the marathon, players are exhauset after 10 minues of gameplay and the BPM is high.
2. 11:21:747 (1,2,3) - that was cool.♥
You guys did a really good job. Some parts/patterns might need more attention in the future, but it's still a WiP and it already looks really cool!

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Best of luck!

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Yumeno Himiko 2014-08-17T22:28:01+00:00

haha I just mentioned that it's nearly finished but not totally finished ww
But I think your suggestions are still very helpful here for the completed parts
Really thanks for your fast-coming mod lol

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-18T08:26:24+00:00

@examination: 幫我在10:50:999跟10:51:458的圓圈加NC.
@bakari: I hope adding some NCs can help clarify the rhythm gaps in between.

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-08-18T08:36:54+00:00

@bakari sensei : fixed everything as mentioned!! thankyou! <33

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-08-18T08:50:02+00:00

reply for bakari san~

1) imo there are still have sound on that times altho the sound is kinda faint here. since this is insane diff + calm song, imo that notes are still acceptable here
2) about the hitsound : well i know but each mappers here always have their own style (same goes for me) so that's why i guess these hitsounds are fine >_<

gomene ;w;

@examination : 07:54:715 (1) - please move the head node to 520,224 :3 , nazi bad blanket here =w=

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Yumeno Himiko 2014-08-22T15:08:52+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
[General]

[Collab]
Have you considered using a creative name? Something related to the anime/character, that would make the diff a bit more memorable for players? Considering ;w;
00:45:270 - drag the break here? It will match better with the change of the song. I think the the break should begin after the spin ends instead of waiting for the song ends.
Note: 05:37:488 (1) - yeah, same here. I discussed with Xinely and we think that it also works well if we map a bit more owo
02:28:448 - same as above? This way, the BPM change will get emphasized. Considering tut
Note: 05:37:488 (1) - and drag the end of the break here for the same reason as above, to emphasize the BPM-change. Same as above ._.

examination
00:32:158 (4,5) - the switch to 1/6 beats is unexpected and might bug players. Replace the double here with a slider, so, players may feel it and have a higher chance to hit 300 here, and then, also mayl be able to understand that the next double is 1/6.I feel that it will feel a bit harder to hit 300 if I place a short slider first and the double later,I prefer reserve the present pattern. In fact, players will know it's 1/6 since I placed other 1/6 notes before.
02:35:038 (4) - either replace it with an 1/2 slider or add a circle at 02:35:266 - to follow the vocals and keep rhythm more natural. I keep getting the feeling that something is missing here, atm. I'm just copying the rhythm from Love live! Game soldier game hard diff @_@ Well I may consider change the pattern afterwords since I missed a lot of rhythms.
Note: same happens way too often, so, I'm leaving them up to you, since I believe that you've already got what I was trying to say. Sure >.<

Other suggestions are all accepted owo
I'm so lazy so I don't update with changes by my collabers this time

will update when I come back home TUT

EmingK

341 posts

Joined October 2012

EmingK 2014-08-24T06:26:32+00:00

~~change diff name to Marajithon~~

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2014-08-24T06:49:53+00:00

好好的一群神麻婆
就这样被LL毁了

gorgonzoler

104 posts

Joined March 2013

gorgonzoler 2014-08-24T06:55:48+00:00

HI i m gorgonzoler

examination

1.00:16:158 - 如果跟鼓的话可以考虑在这里加个note啊。

11.07:16:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这样的gap没问题么？

Hinsvar

2.good job.I think it is perfect

3.01:30:490 - if it is a collab song i think you should start it from here.although the part is great……（ignore my wrong grammer）
01:31:435 (4,5,6,7) - i think those note should combine as a beautiful slow slider so that make your part more flexable.
01:33:325 (5,6,7,8,9) - same as ^
01:38:994 (5,6,7,8) - same as ^
well ,this song can mod till now. i d like something different so that won't make a map in one pattern.(and forgive my bad english)

happy623

4.02:18:154 (4) - 这个note摆在这里会不会读图有碍？（为了大多数aji教等人考虑，可无视）

yf_bmp

7.03:36:095 (1,2,3,4) - 把这4个slider都弄成从下往上怎样（当然要缩短一点啦）如果不和风格的话可以无视
另外为什么这首歌让我想起乒乓的op了…………
11.06:41:595 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个部分做的很棒呢

Xinely

9.04:49:266 (3,4,5) - combine to make a simple slider if you wish to follow the original soundtrack.Ignore this if you're on purpose
04:53:488 (4,5,6) - same as ^
13.07:39:028 - this song i think you should start from here……it‘s up to you
your part is great.I just try to make your part is more different.

ZZHBOY

10.06:07:774 (1,1) - 这两个转盘可以考虑换成美型滑条，such as 爱心或者是其他的乱七八糟的东东……

EI Solar Beam

14.08:32:796 (4) - ctrl+g will better to look but hard to play.up to you

regraz

15.08:59:052 (4) - 我知道换个地方会把图的美观性破坏掉，但是这个stack对某些人还是比较难读吧（可以无视）

[box=[_crystal:1337]]
16.09:13:014 (5,6,7,8) - 这个地方换成stream会不会好一些啊？

Kawaiwkyik

17.我觉得没问题
21.抱歉我摸不动(/w\)

IamKwaN

18.感觉出有几个更需要修改但是能看出来是有意而为之的。但是还是给出我的意见吧
10:39:979 (3,4,5) - 这儿的slider需要分开一点以增加flow
10:41:815 (4,1) - 这个急转弯真的大丈夫？
10:41:815 (4,1) - 这两个交换一下NC
11:07:836 (1) - 都到这个地步了貌似不需要nc了吧OwO

19.11:12:001 (1,2,3) - I LIKE THIS PART!!!!!
11:15:351 (1,2) - ctrl+g 柑橘比较好
11:17:636 (4) - 如果跟人声去掉比较好OwO

storyboard

嗯，在每首歌开始之前加上stage数怎么样？毕竟有21首曲子呢！

General
这里是炸摸我就不多述什么了，另外我不怎么听LL的曲子啊。能做到的就是个吐槽众了，头一回摸collab亚历山大。另外请不要吐槽我的英语OwO

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-08-25T01:03:16+00:00

to barkari: all fixed P
to gorgonzoler: 没改啊那样子flow就不太合曲了
thx for modding

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Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-08-25T05:05:57+00:00

gorgonzoler wrote:
HI i m gorgonzoler
regraz
15.08:59:052 (4) - 我知道换个地方会把图的美观性破坏掉，但是这个stack对某些人还是比较难读吧（可以无视）

试了几个地方感觉flow一直不好，所以先这样吧~
Thanks for mod！~

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Yumeno Himiko 2014-08-26T12:47:12+00:00

all updated

jesse1412

1,457 posts

Joined January 2010

jesse1412 2014-08-26T19:33:21+00:00

[examination]

00:42:603 (1,2) - This jump would normally be fine, but with the slow pace of the rest of the song it's really unexpected and always looks like a 1/2 to me.
02:54:811 (2,3) - I dislike this anti jump, make it a jump instead? Not a huge problem though.
07:10:762 (2,3) - Space these to make it clear that this section is going to be 1/2.
07:11:562 (5,6) - ^
07:16:962 (4,5) - Why this jump? Caught me off guard I expected it to be a 1/2 jump but it was 1/4.
07:19:762 (1,2,3) - Space this out, I don't like the anti jumps here, I don't feel that they feel right with the music.
07:23:962 (2,3) - Reduce spacing to make it clear what's going to happen, the ones after should be fine and the player will already understand what's going to happen after an easy introduction to the section.

[happy623]

02:25:078 (1,2) - I would make this jump larger or a slider, timing can be confused right now.

[regraz]

08:46:626 (1,2,3,4) - Increase spacing between all of these to make the 1/4's obvious to the player, at the moment I feel the spacing is so low that the stacks could be confused as 1/2.
08:49:289 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
08:53:194 (4,5,6) - ^
08:54:969 (1,2,3) - ^ (This espcially, going into 1/4 slider jumps is a very dangerous area for the player and it should be totally obvious for them what to do.)
09:04:022 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

[_Crystal]

09:24:838 (8,9,1) - I would HIGHLY suggest that you turn these into a 3 note 1/4 hold slider + a jump. The bpm of this section is considerably higher, it'd be nice to demonstrate to the player that it's no longer slow during 1/4 sections (I 1keyed up until here and didn't notice until the next song that the bpm had increased hence why I had huge problems with these triples).

[kawaiwkyik]

09:56:062 (3,4,5,6) - Please make these 4 notes a hold slider and then continue the stream after, the bpm increased a lot compared to previous maps that used a lot of 1/4 and it could throw people off on such a long map. Show people that the bpm is higher with a free introduction into 1/4.
10:07:854 (1,2) - Increase jump size, looks like 1/2 right now.

[iamkwan]

11:21:670 (11,1) - Why this 1/4 jump? Please remove it seems really random.

Final song is so harsh, it'll ruin a lot of fc's hahaha.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-27T03:44:08+00:00

@GG: 對,你提出的我都是有點想法的,暫時先不改
@jesus: yep, fixed

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Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-08-27T07:28:24+00:00

@Bakari: i've changed that to a stream

also added that nc
@gorgonzoler: yes fixed
@jesus: sorry don't want to fix that now ;w;

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sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-08-27T11:11:52+00:00

萨米来摸一模
[General]
Tag问题，我一个一个查一遍罗马音
红色标记的tag项

u's BIBI TRUE DIVA SECRET PRINCESS Nishikino Maki 愛してるばんざーい！ Aishiteru Banzai! ダイヤモンドプリンセスの憂鬱 Diamond Princess no Yuuutsu Mermaid festa vol.1 WILD STARS soldier game ラブノベルス Love Novels baby maybe 恋のボタン baby maybe Koi no Button 輝夜の城で踊りたい Kaguya no Shiro de Odoritai Oh,Love&Peace! もぎゅっと"love"で接近中！ Mogyutto Love De Sekkin Chu! 友情ノーチェンジ Yuujou no Change START:DASH!! Start Dash Wonder zone きっと青春が聞こえる Kitto Seishun ga Kikoeru Wonderful Rush 夏色えがおで1,2,Jump! Natsuiro Egao de 1, 2, Jump! Snow halation 僕らは今のなかで Bokura wa Ima no Naka de No brand girls 僕らのLIVE 君とのLIFE Bokura no LIVE Kimi to no LIFE これからのSomeday Korekara no Someday Hinsvar happy623 Kawaiwkyik yf_bmp Xinely ZZHBOY El SolarBeam Regraz [_Crystal] IamKwaN Fycho Collab Collaboration

具体解释

红色部分：憂鬱读音是ゆううつ，应该有三个u，所以是Yuuutsu
具体请看最近rank的凉宫春日的忧郁的source，2010年以前罗马音都给错了，具体看下面这个链接里的source，按rank时间排序都是Yuuutsu
(Kotone也写错啦)

click

https://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r=0&q=suzumiya+haruhi+no&g=0&la=0&s=4&o=&r=0&q=suzumiya%20haruhi%20no

[happy623]
02:18:385 (1) - 我不知道这个clap是不是故意漏掉的，但clap突然不见了很不爽
[zzhboy]
06:11:618 - ??? 这段的音效呢
[El SolarBeam]
08:24:250 - where is the audio...?
[Regraz]
09:02:957 (3) - 碰血条
09:07:573 (3) - 滑条尾finish
[Crystal]
09:32:955 (4) - 按照前面下音效的系统来看，这里应该滑条尾也clap
[Kawaiwkyik]
12:28:700 (1) - 和前面节奏一样，滑条尾whistle
12:30:700 (1) - 滑条头whistle
12:56:700 (1) - 滑条头whistle
[Xinely]
07:50:205 (2) - how about rotating this slider a little in order that 07:50:009 (1) - is on the line which 07:50:205 (2) - sits
[Fycho]
11:05:693 (4,2,3,4) - 红线起slider这里不太喜欢，11:56:243 (2,3) - 这个跳也不太合曲的样子....还是希望能把节奏换一下

ShiraKai

534 posts

Joined September 2010

ShiraKai 2014-08-27T20:38:50+00:00

hi :3 from queue!
Love Live

examination

1.

00:05:936 (5) - move to x:223,y:178? stack it rightly
00:15:270 (4) - move to x:312,y:163? Appearance will be better
00:19:936 (9) - add NC?
00:25:103 (2) - i think 1/6 is best sound pick.
00:27:603 (1) - ^
00:29:492 (5) - ^
00:38:436 (2) - ^
00:39:770 (5) - ^
00:40:936 (1) - ^
00:42:770 (2) - ^
00:32:936 (8) - remove finish add clap use addittions Drum with 50% Volume?

5.

02:32:879 - add note?
02:35:266 (5) - delete note? there is no sound here imo
02:41:175 (4,5,6,7) - add whistle on slider head?

12.

07:24:187 (3,3,3,4,5) - why do you use 1/6? it's enough 1/4 imo
07:30:562 (3,3,3) - ^

Hinsvar

2.

00:49:780 (3) - delete note? there is no sound here imo
01:04:426 (1) - ctrl + G?
01:15:292 (4) - add whistle? follow the back sound

3.

01:34:742 (1,1) - add finish on slider head?
01:42:301 (1,1) - ^

happy623

4.

02:27:616 (1) - this NC is necessary?

8.

04:13:435 (1) - add finish?
04:34:768 (4) - ^
04:44:101 (1) - Vocal extends from 04:43:879 - ,try to feel like this?

Kawaiwkyik

6.

03:00:504 (1,2,3,4,1,3) - add whistle? Sound is ringing firmly behind because you should put the sound imo

17&21.nice

yf_bmp

7.

03:44:540 (7) - remove additons normal on slider end? i think it is not fit the song
03:48:540 (1) - add finish?

11.

06:26:810 (2) - add clap on slider head? same as 06:40:310 (1,2) -
06:32:917 (6,7) - add whistle or clap?

Xinely

9.

05:02:377 (1) - remove NC? i think not necessary this...

13.

07:41:773 (3) - move to x:272,y:180? blanket & good stuck
07:54:715 (1) - blanket well?

ZZHBOY

10.
You must put a hit sound

05:46:947 (1) - ctrl + G?
05:57:738 (2) - nice blanket but bad flow imo... move to x:211,y:175?
05:58:386 (4) - ^ move to x:316,y:173?

El SolarBeam

14.
You must put a hit sound

placement is good

Regraz

15.

08:59:939 (2,3) - add whistle on slider head? follow the vocal
09:07:573 (3) - add finish on slider end?
09:08:105 (1) - delete note or remove finish? i think this part ends here(09:07:928 - )

_Crystal

16.

09:16:191 (9,10) - ctrl + G? Flow here(09:16:367 (10,1) - ) is better
09:24:308 (5) - add NC?
09:41:602 (7) - ctrl + G? flow will be better

IamKwaN

18.

10:35:999 (1,2) - ctrl + G?

19.

11:12:001 (1,2,3) - very good

Fycho

awesome diff

good luck!

hehe

1,959 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2014-08-28T06:59:20+00:00

[General]

remove all duplicate tags! like 'no'. 'Someday' 'baby', 'maybe'.

[examination]

00:37:270 (3) - weird slider shape, also the style don't flow with the map. if point to 00:38:270 (1), better
00:41:270 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - make perfect pentagon?
02:32:879 - idk i hear sound here, but its blue tick, up to you to emphasize
06:56:962 - try not to ignore the beat here, i think more important than vocal. subsequent parts as well
07:16:362 (6) - split into 2 1/4s, note here 07:16:562 -
07:26:512 (5,1) - increase spacing here.

[Hinsvar]

01:03:008 (1) - follwing 00:54:268 (1) - would be pretty cool imo
01:08:205 - don't get the rhythm here. if i'm not wrong the larger spacing represents the 'stuttering' sound? if so it starts at this timing. maybe something along the lines of: piclink. maybe NC on 5 too~
01:10:331 (1,2,3,4,1) - not a nazi of spacing, but its too large here imo.
01:29:073 - vocals here more suitable, compared to the blue tick hell that is 01:29:191 (3) -
01:39:939 (1,2,3,4) - loudest vocals 2014, you might wanna emphasize each vocal portion individually? something like this

[happy623]

[kawaiwkyik]

09:55:369 (1,2) - stack or put further? i think its too close, and too far :p confusing

[yf_bmp]

03:37:429 (4) - move up a bit, closer to (1)
06:33:131 (7,8) - 1/4 slider is better

[Xinely]

05:29:488 (1) - curve looks weird
08:03:342 (1,2,3,4) - make square? or at least make good shape lol.

[El SolarBeam]

08:08:978 (1,2,3) - ehh, make neat? rotate each 120 for perfect triangle

[Regraz]

08:59:052 (4) - maybe don't stack? confusing

[_Crystal]

09:30:661 (1,2) - this is too small DS~

[IamKwaN]

10:39:968 (3,4,5) - i think a small spacing is easier to read
11:21:138 (5,6) - slider maybe? take break from the jump o.o

[Fycho]

12:02:519 (4) - can put further imo, good jump.

thats all, ^^

Last edited by hehe 2014-09-02T09:01:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Rirakusu

218 posts

Joined November 2013

Rirakusu 2014-08-28T10:15:32+00:00

啊好久没有用中文模图了……也是第一次看到那么大阵仗的collaboration啊。一向来不太会模marathon图，请见谅……

[examination]
1. 00:39:936 (6) - 我理解你的用意，是为了配合抖音。但是那曲线有点怪怪的。建议让头和尾的y-axis值一样。
2. 02:47:538 (3) - 让这个滑条的尾和02:47:084 (2) - stack在一起。
3. 07:32:562 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 针对这个stream。我会这样弄（如果你坚持要旋转）。因为这种短短的stream要做一个旋转不是一个很好的点子……因为真的，不好看。

建议

[hinsvar]
1. 00:56:630 (3) - 建议弄成两个滑条。可以配合vocal，而且一个滑条来回跑2次或以上有点让人混乱。

[happy623]
1. 02:05:001 (1,2,1,2) - 这些滑条真的太短了。个人觉得这里可以加速滑条（反正音乐也配合）。
2. 02:18:385 (1,2,3) - 不应该和02:18:154 (4) - 黏在一起吧……也可以从02:18:270 (4) - 发出jump，在我看来还是蛮配音乐的。
3. 04:45:435 (1) - 我觉得这里放慢有点奇怪啦……加快应该会比较好（毕竟这是一个有力气的欢呼）。

[kawaiwkyik]
1. 03:13:393 (2,3,4,5) - 正方形应该会比较好看。
2. 03:20:504 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我有点怀疑这是星星跳。还是弄成一个比较好看的星星吧。
……总的来说这一个部分有很多可以形成的比较好看的图形，去尝试找出来吧～
3. 09:56:062 - 建议在这里把hitsounds调低一点，不然09:56:062 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 的钢琴完全听不见。在这个stream之后就可以把hitsounds声量恢复了。
4. 10:27:276 (1) - 这个的Whistle有点恐怖。不需要那么多吧，听了烦人。

[yf_bmp]
1. 03:37:429 (4) - 这个滑条有点……？建议弄成这样……（只是一个建议，我知道这个滑条很难看但是你应该我要表达什么……）

建议（总的来说，就是不要单调的一个圆形滑条就对了）

2. 03:40:540 (3,4,5) - 尝试把它们弄成完美的三角形～
3. 04:05:873 (1,2) - 感觉上有点难看（？）试试一个spiral（旋转）

[ZZHBOY]
1. 05:51:047 (3,4) - 我自己不懂你的想法啦……但是如果是我我就放blanket。
2. 06:07:450 (5,1) - 直接用那个滑条带过那个spinner吧。玩起来spinner在那边有点奇怪（毕竟有点短，spin不到一下就消失了，累手罢了）

[Xinely]
1. 07:54:126 (2) - 如果是我，我会这么做。让它躺在另外一个滑条的怀抱里。

例子

[Regraz]
1. 08:43:431 (4,5) - 为什么不要和08:42:366 (1,2,3) - 弄成一个滑条正方跳？

解决……！（现在才在怀疑用中文到底是不是正确的选择）

请回复哦。

（修改了一点，因为图片没有放在img里面）

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-08-28T12:48:28+00:00

@ShiraKai: 09:16:191 (9,10) - i don't want to change it now since i didn't see any problems here. others are fixed
@sammy: fixed

@小古: 没有改绿线所以不贴timing points了 (另外自行改了一个比较丑的滑条)

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ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-08-28T13:29:41+00:00

from yf's request
Not explained's mod were all flow problems

00:02:603 (3) - not fit
00:36:603 (2,3) - why

01:09:859 (1,2,3,4) - stack by hand

02:18:039 - missed a sound and

02:35:948 (2) - not snapped

04:16:990 (2) - make 1/4 longer
04:31:212 (2) - ^
04:34:768 (4) - slider
04:43:657 (2) - make 1/4 longer

05:05:266 (3) - add a reverse
>05:05:933 (4,5,6) - 236,192

06:05:724 (1) - Ctrl+G 音效呢

06:31:310 (2) - 328.116 这歌在玩ll的时候听到吐
06:34:524 (2) - 20,220

08:17:887 (2) - 512,324

08:52:129 (1,2,3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976025
08:59:052 (4) - 184,332

09:40:720 (2,3) - swap
>09:41:249 (5,6) - ^

10:40:897 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976059
11:02:172 (4) - 400,104

11:12:001 - not fit average difficulty

12:10:815 (1) - bad flow

12:15:700 - not fit average difficulty
13:16:700 (1) - 320,280

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

rinsukir 2014-08-28T16:12:32+00:00

神mod wrote:
如果是我，我会这么做。让它躺在另外一个滑条的怀抱里。

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-08-28T16:14:58+00:00

神mod wrote:
如果是我，我会这么做。让它躺在另外一个滑条的怀抱里。

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-08-29T03:53:47+00:00

@ts8zs: since it breaks the flow i won't change that lol

神mod wrote:
如果是我，我会这么做。让它躺在另外一个滑条的怀抱里。

pw384

2,286 posts

Joined January 2012

pw384 2014-08-29T04:01:40+00:00

神mod wrote:
如果是我，我会这么做。让它躺在另外一个滑条的怀抱里。

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-08-29T04:18:17+00:00

神mod wrote:
如果是我，我会这么做：让它躺在另外一个滑条的怀抱里。

话说xinely能看懂么……
Translation:
If I made this,I will done like this:
let another slider hug it:D

Rirakusu

218 posts

Joined November 2013

Rirakusu 2014-08-29T07:05:50+00:00

啊好翻译翻译哈哈

那句是指：Let the slider fit into the one below it (or above it in HardRock mod)

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-08-29T07:07:10+00:00

jinhang_ang wrote:
啊好翻译翻译哈哈

那句是指：Let the slider fit into the one below it (or above it in HardRock mod)

没情调，o(￣ヘ￣o＃)哼

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Yumeno Himiko 2014-08-30T01:50:51+00:00

all mods checked and fixed some :3
thx for your modding

~

Going to fix other issues in other parts later.

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-08-30T08:20:30+00:00

gorgonzoler

gorgonzoler wrote:
HI i m gorgonzoler
4.02:18:154 (4) - 这个note摆在这里会不会读图有碍？（为了大多数aji教等人考虑，可无视這個我覺得還好, 因為有NC提示

这里是炸摸我就不多述什么了，另外我不怎么听LL的曲子啊。能做到的就是个吐槽众了，头一回摸collab亚历山大。另外请不要吐槽我的英语OwO

jesus1412

jesus1412 wrote:
[happy623]

02:25:078 (1,2) - I would make this jump larger or a slider, timing can be confused right now. sure!

Final song is so harsh, it'll ruin a lot of fc's hahaha.

sammy711

sammy711 wrote:
萨米来摸一模

[happy623]
02:18:385 (1) - 我不知道这个clap是不是故意漏掉的，但clap突然不见了很不爽加回了, 謝

ShiraKai

ShiraKai wrote:
hi :3 from queue!
Love Live
4.
02:27:616 (1) - this NC is necessary? okay removed
8.
04:13:435 (1) - add finish?
04:34:768 (4) - ^
04:44:101 (1) - Vocal extends from 04:43:879 - ,try to feel like this? all fixed, thanks a lot!
good luck!

jinhang_ang

jinhang_ang wrote:
啊好久没有用中文模图了……也是第一次看到那么大阵仗的collaboration啊。一向来不太会模marathon图，请见谅……

[happy623]
1. 02:05:001 (1,2,1,2) - 这些滑条真的太短了。个人觉得这里可以加速滑条（反正音乐也配合）。上了0.75x
2. 02:18:385 (1,2,3) - 不应该和02:18:154 (4) - 黏在一起吧……也可以从02:18:270 (4) - 发出jump，在我看来还是蛮配音乐的。嘛;w; 其實我覺得anti-jump還好, 如果別人再提起我再考慮吧
3. 04:45:435 (1) - 我觉得这里放慢有点奇怪啦……加快应该会比较好（毕竟这是一个有力气的欢呼）。改了

解决……！（现在才在怀疑用中文到底是不是正确的选择）

请回复哦。

（修改了一点，因为图片没有放在img里面）

@包子 : all fixed except 02:18:039 - and 04:34:768 (4) - 感覺不明不白 ;w;
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4. timing point

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80,280,269879,5,8,3:0:0:0:
300,188,270324,1,8,3:0:0:0:
72,276,270768,1,4,3:0:0:0:
300,180,270990,6,0,L|296:136,1,33.7500012874604,8|2,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
64,272,271212,2,0,L|72:232,1,33.7500012874604,8|2,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
409,155,271657,6,0,P|415:101|396:52,1,107.999996704102,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,256,272101,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,328,272324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,256,272546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,216,272768,2,0,L|176:228,1,53.9999983520508
112,200,272990,2,0,P|88:152|100:88,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,140,273435,6,2,P|184:104|216:88,1,67.5000025749208,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,273879,2,2,P|259:199|256:243,1,90,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,237,274324,2,2,L|176:216,1,107.999996704102,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,196,274768,1,6,0:0:0:0:
400,180,274879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,274990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,175,275212,6,0,L|240:160,1,107.999996704102,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,76,275657,1,8,0:0:0:0:
239,160,275879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,60,276101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,84,276324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,84,276435,2,0,L|4:96,1,53.9999983520508,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,228,276768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,320,276990,5,0,0:0:0:0:
156,320,277101,2,0,L|220:304,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,224,277435,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,224,277879,2,0,L|280:168,1,53.9999983520508,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,278101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,278324,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,128,278546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,228,278768,6,0,P|60:288|96:332,1,107.999996704102,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,279212,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,156,279435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,40,279657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,36,279768,1,2,2:0:0:0:
228,32,279879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,156,280101,2,0,L|256:264,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,328,280546,5,4,1:2:0:0:
360,332,280990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,216,281435,5,4,1:2:0:0:
124,212,281879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,184,282323,5,4,1:2:0:0:
212,48,282768,1,4,1:2:0:0:
212,284,283212,1,4,3:0:0:0:
360,184,283435,6,0,L|368:144,1,33.7500012874604,8|2,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
212,48,283657,2,0,L|220:96,1,33.7500012874604,8|2,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
94,284,283879,6,0,P|40:240|140:208,1,215.999993408203,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,48,284546,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,184,284768,6,2,L|216:200,1,135.000005149842,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,148,285435,6,0,P|140:216|204:280,1,161.999995056153,8|2,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
312,308,285879,1,4,0:0:0:0:

thanks o/

Rizia

3,114 posts

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Rizia 2014-08-30T12:46:56+00:00

其實基本上沒什麼想改的地方orz
sorry~
offset change(我那邊聽到有點遲
song18: -11ms
song20: -10ms

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

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Topic Starter

Yumeno Himiko 2014-08-31T11:01:53+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
其實基本上沒什麼想改的地方orz
sorry~
offset change(我那邊聽到有點遲
song18: -11ms
song20: -10ms

offset change fixed

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-09-04T08:33:22+00:00

好图我居然打完了

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

-[Hikari]- 2014-09-06T13:17:57+00:00

Hello. Here's mod from Paper Modding Team. ~~估计摸完就要被众麻婆砍死惹~~

[01]

00:11:270 (1,2) - 我觉得这两个一个stack一个不stack感觉不好
00:15:270 (4,5,6) - 5这个音在1/6上感觉单点读不太出来，容易读成1/4打早，试试把4换成单点，4的末尾拉个滑条
00:26:603 (5,6,7) - 改成一个滑条一个单点吧，问题同上
00:31:936 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^，不过也可以吧4 5和7 8都改成短滑条？

[02&03]

01:09:859 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make a stream with a smaller DS but do not stack them
Well, a great part and I don't have more suggestion;w;

[04]

02:11:231 (7,1) - 分开一点，现在叠在一起了
02:18:154 (4,1,2,3) - 单点和三连稍微远离一点
02:19:308 (2,3) - 这里时间间隔比较长，不要stack把2移动到右下方空地看看

[05]

02:39:698 (2) - 注意下前后的DS
02:40:266 (5) - 可以朝右上方稍微移一点
02:47:993 (4,1,2,3) - 1 2 3都动一下让4stack上去吧

[06]

总体感觉note都在右下角，有些梗换个角摆看看行不行
03:02:282 (1,3) - 靠的太近有点丑
03:18:949 (4) - 摆在6和7之间试试

[07]

04:05:873 (1) - 感觉太丑……
03:58:095 (4,5,6,8) - 三连和单点交换一下位置

[08]

没问题

[09]

04:54:266 (2) - Don't stack here.
05:25:711 (3) - Too far to the next one. Move it to the left a bit.

[10]

05:50:832 (2) - 摆歪了
05:53:206 (4,6) - 都往右下角移一点，现在太挤
05:58:601 (5,1) - stack
06:04:860 (3,4) - 还是沿着3来摆吧

[11]

06:45:881 (3) - 跳到中间来吧

[12]

06:52:962 (6,1,3) - stack
07:09:962 (4) - 和2靠的太近，往中间摆一些
07:19:762 (1,2,3) - 这里stack就好了
07:33:362 (5) - NC

[13]

07:39:617 (3,5) - Stack 3 to the end of 5
07:50:793 (4,1) - Stack
07:52:754 (3,1) - The flow isn't good enough
07:54:126 (2,1) - Not a good blanket
08:03:734 (3,1) - Aim it to 1

[14]

08:07:341 (5,3) - Stack
08:10:614 (3) - Try this one

[15]

08:50:709 (5,6,1) - 没叠好
08:57:277 (3) - 往下一点，让弧线对准note
08:59:052 (4) - 嗯……这个可以不stack吧

[16]

09:14:426 (4,5) - 4多加点弧度对准5，然后5可以移开一点
09:21:132 (7,10) - Stack 位置在这俩中间感觉不错

[17]

09:57:450 (3,1) - Stack
10:12:363 (2,3,4) - 可以对齐
10:17:565 (1,2) - 感觉可以blanket一下

[18&19]

10:43:641 (2) - 滑条变速要NC提醒吧？
10:44:866 (2) - 10:53:437 (2) - 10:54:661 (2) - ^
10:45:325 (3,4,1) - 感觉这条弧线没拉好
11:01:855 (2,3,4) - 2和3都摆开一点吧，现在和滑条挤在一起了
11:07:519 (7) - 试试弄个弧线滑条对准1吧？
11:19:158 (5) - 可以往左摆开一点
11:25:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一组可以向右摆开一点
~~摸了骏喵好多会不会被一圈打包;w;~~

[20]

11:32:376 (2,1) - 没Stack好
11:39:805 (1,3) - ^
12:07:805 (2,3) - 没Blanket好

[21]

~~这段bpm怎么突然就飞升了;w;~~
12:20:075 (2,3,4,5,6) - 摆成一个六边形里五个角的样子试试？
12:24:450 (5,2) - Stack

~~好了要被众麻婆打包惹;w;我赶紧跑~~

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2014-09-11T18:17:34+00:00

JMQ stuff (Sorry for the huge delay, we couldn't figure out what to do with this.)

The metadeta things are all checked out, it's fine as it is now. Probably another staff member will double-check to make sure everything is in order.

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