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TK from Ling Tosite Sigure - unravel (TV edit)

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BluOxy
196 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
BluOxy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年9月17日 at 20:33:03

Artist: TK from Ling Tosite Sigure
Title: unravel (TV edit)
Source: Tokyo Ghoul
Tags: (TV Size) hopperhtkn
BPM: 135
Filesize: 12808kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.17 stars, 220 notes)
  2. hopper's Extra (4.79 stars, 316 notes)
  3. Insane (4.28 stars, 318 notes)
  4. Normal (1.61 stars, 108 notes)
Download: TK from Ling Tosite Sigure - unravel (TV edit)
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For Ranked hopperhtkn for GD and hitsound. Thank you!

Lyrics
教えて　教えてよ　その仕組みを
僕の中に誰がいるの？
壊れた　壊れたよ　この世界で
君が笑う　何も見えずに

壊れた僕なんてさ　息を止めて freeze
壊せる　壊せない　狂える　狂えない
あなたを見つけて　揺れた

歪んだ世界にだんだん僕は透き通って見えなくなって
見つけないで　僕のことを　見つめないで
誰かが描いた世界の中で　あなたを傷つけたくはないよ
覚えていて　僕のことを

Please tell me… tell me how this place is supposed to work;
Just who lies within me? I’m broken, broken in the midst of this world.
But you’re smiling, blind to it all.

I’m broken anyway, so I halt my breath, Freeze.
I’m breakable, unbreakable; going insane, unable to lose my mind:
I’ve found you!

I’m standing here in a twisted, shaking world,
But no one can see my transparent form.
Please don’t find me… don’t look upon me.
In this world that someone else imagined,
I simply don’t want to hurt you.
So please just remember me,
As vivid as I used to be.
Last edited by BluOxy , edited 39 times in total.
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
hopperhtkn
これすき（直球）
BluOxy
196 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
BluOxy

hopperhtkn wrote:

これすき（直球）
わかる
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
hopperhtkn
やっぱりぶるお君の交互譜面を・・最高やな！
BluOxy
196 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
BluOxy

hopperhtkn wrote:

やっぱりぶるお君の交互譜面を・・最高やな！
サンクス！！！
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
hopperhtkn
[General]
titleをunravel (TV edit) に直す　ソース
オフセットを+25くらいに　ちょっと早すぎかな
tagから(TV Size)を消去　Openingと、日本名の東京喰種トーキョーグールと凛として時雨を追加してもいいかも？
Enable countdownを全ての難易度から外す　これは好みなのでそのままでも


[Hard]
00:09:759 - 音を拾いたいのでサークルを追加
00:11:426 (4) - 　00:11:204 - 　ここに移動した方が自然だと思う
00:15:426 (2) - deleteするか、00:15:204 (1) - をこんな感じに伸ばしたほうが気持ちいいAIMが出来そう
00:28:981 - Normal clap
00:33:870 - ここからも４つおきでnormal finishを追加した方が音拾えて良いと思う
00:59:093 - サークルを00:59:204 (5) - の上に追加 and add Normal clap
01:02:648 - ^
01:04:981 (1) - ctrl+Gした上で01:05:537 - にサークルを追加したら良い感じになると思う

[Insane]
00:33:895 - Normal finish
00:56:451 - ^

Rankedまで頑張ろう！ :)

My Update
osu file format v13
[General]
AudioFilename: unravel (TV edit).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56107
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 83093
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.000004

[Metadata]
Title:unravel (TV edit)
TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling Tosite Sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:BluOxy
Version:hopper's Extra
Source:Tokyo Ghoul
Tags:hopperhtkn Opening 東京喰種 トーキョーグール 凛として時雨
BeatmapID:474971
BeatmapSetID:198893

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.919
SliderTickRate:1

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BluOxy
196 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
BluOxy

hopperhtkn wrote:

[General]
titleをunravel (TV edit) に直す　ソース
オフセットを+25くらいに　ちょっと早すぎかな　+20ぐらいがちょうど声に合っていたので変えました。thanks!
tagから(TV Size)を消去　Openingと、日本名の東京喰種トーキョーグールと凛として時雨を追加してもいいかも？
Enable countdownを全ての難易度から外す　これは好みなのでそのままでも
All fixed

[Hard]
00:09:759 - 音を拾いたいのでサークルを追加　fixedスライダーを崩して3連打にした
00:11:426 (4) - 　00:11:204 - 　ここに移動した方が自然だと思う fixed
00:15:426 (2) - deleteするか、00:15:204 (1) - をこんな感じに伸ばしたほうが気持ちいいAIMが出来そう　この配置は気持ちよく叩けるので指摘が多ければ変えてみる
00:28:981 - Normal clap　fixed
00:33:870 - ここからも４つおきでnormal finishを追加した方が音拾えて良いと思う　fixed
00:59:093 - サークルを00:59:204 (5) - の上に追加 and add Normal clap 　fixed
01:02:648 - ^　fixed
01:04:981 (1) - ctrl+Gした上で01:05:537 - にサークルを追加したら良い感じになると思う 連続した二つのスライダーをこうなぞる配置が気持ち良いのですここも指摘されるならば検討します

[Insane]
00:33:895 - Normal finish　fixed
00:56:451 - ^　fixed

Rankedまで頑張ろう！ :)
ありがとう！譜面もアップデートしたよ！
Moeri_old_1
Moeri_old_1
hopper's Extra:
Notes inside the slider at 00:56:113! Please fix!
Slider end on 01:13:724 following circle on 01:13:779 is wierd, maybe intentional but it's confusing and probably annoying.

Did not find major issues on other difficulties.
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
hopperhtkn

A i k a wrote:

hopper's Extra:
Notes inside the slider at 00:56:113! Please fix!
Slider end on 01:13:724 following circle on 01:13:779 is wierd, maybe intentional but it's confusing and probably annoying.

Did not find major issues on other difficulties.
Thank you modding ;)
I've fixed 00:56:113 (1) - here's slider!
In about second mod,I've changed that notes to 2 kick sliders. thank u for your opinion :D

Update~ puush
Plz add new hitsound! (01:16:113 - here's sliderslide)
BluOxy
196 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
BluOxy

hopperhtkn wrote:

Update~ puush
Plz add new hitsound! (01:16:113 - here's sliderslide)
Updated, Check it and I fixed few problems in my diff.
Moo-Chan
408 posts
Joined November 2013
Moo-Chan
b]From my modding queue~[/b]

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:668 (3,1) - This overlap isn't very appealing
  2. 00:07:890 (5) - NC
  3. 00:08:113 (1) - No NC
  4. 00:31:224 (1,2,3) - This overlap isn't very nice
  5. 00:32:113 (5,6) - I'd space these a little more
  6. 00:57:890 (1) - This slider is a kinda weird shape
  7. 00:59:224 (6,1) - Overlap isn't very nice

Good luck with your map
BluOxy
196 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
BluOxy

Moo-Chan wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:668 (3,1) - This overlap isn't very appealing hm,I don't know why these overlap seems bad.
  2. 00:07:890 (5) - NC fixed
  3. 00:08:113 (1) - No NC　fixed
  4. 00:31:224 (1,2,3) - This overlap isn't very nice same reason
  5. 00:32:113 (5,6) - I'd space these a little more fixed I spaced these a little.
  6. 00:57:890 (1) - This slider is a kinda weird shape
  7. 00:59:224 (6,1) - Overlap isn't very nicesame reason

Good luck with your map
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu


Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion
General


  1. Source is supposed to be: 東京喰種 トーキョーグール (you should always use the original source, not translated/romanised. Change source to this and put Tokyo Ghoul to tags.
  2. You have to capitalize E in "edit" (in song title), so it is: unravel (TV Edit) - Limited edition CD of the song which contains even the TV version of song states its name as unravel (TV Edit), not unravel (TV edit)!
  3. Disable the countdown. It doesn't fit the song since it has no effect, because the song starts calmly.
  4. Disable letterbox during breaks, it has no usage in your map.
  5. If you have skinned hitcircle.png and hitcircleoverlay.png, you are obligate to skin even approachcircle.png and you have to put "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" in every .osu file under [Colors] tab. (Just read ranking criteria) It is unrankable, because people who are using their own skin might find it unplayable, because it doesn't take the files from original skin, but from their current skin, so the mix of your and their own skin might make a perfectly ugly mix.
  6. You have to make a better difference between 50, 100 and 300 skin. Their colors are exactly the same, so it is easy to misslook them in gameplay. You have to make them more different, chaning the color is an easiest way to fix this.
  7. You should use another video, this has slightly lower quality that it should have, you might see the squares over whole screen, what's just meh. You can use this one, but don't forget to set video offset to -250 and also remove the original video so it doesn't contain 2, but I think this is obvious: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/653 ... pening.avi
  8. As you have to skin approcahcircle, because you skinned hitcircles (it's part of it), you have to skin spinner-circle and spinner-approachcircle since you skinned other spinner elements. Simply, same reason as hitcircles, else it's unrankable.
  9. Use consistent Preview times and Countdowns (I recommend to disable countdowns and change preview time on hopper's diff.
  10. Tags within diffs are inconsistent, hopper's tag belongs to Source and source belongs to tags as I mentioned at first issue and opening should be in all diffs.

Normal


  1. 00:16:780 (1) - It is very non-appropriate to make ovelaps on Easy/Normal difficulties. These diffs are suppposed to be easy to read and hiding circle under slider is just way to confuse newbies. You should definitely move it away from 00:15:225 (1). It shouldn't be that hard to map it another way.
  2. 00:49:002 (1,2,1) - It is just visual issue, and not even an issue, but just to improve quality of easy normals, it is good to have it perfectly arranged. You might see spacing is same between these sliders, but the gap between 2nd and 3rd slider looks slightly smaller than between 1st and 2nd slider. Just as it is easy/normal diff, consistency helps the player to learn the basics and the perfection makes his experience more pleasant. If you move it for example on 9;208, you will see the gap looks very similar, I can recommend to use this in easy/normal difficulties, if everything fits together, it's always much better than if it's somewhat random placed.
  3. Try to avoid an overlap, as I mentioned it in first issue. OR use the overlap inteligently, so it doesn't hide a part of hitcircles. Like this, it makes blanket with first slider and it is arranged to square.
    SPOILER
  4. 01:21:113 (1) - You should put whistle here, after you put it on 00:29:447 (1,2), it would fit fine in my opinion as it fits here, it is basically the same sound.

Hard


  1. HP+1 so the settings are balanced, you should not have that big gap between AR and HP and it is always best if HP and OD are same.
  2. 00:01:446 (3,2,4) - You should remove these 3 notes, since they are just overmapped, it is much more pleasant to play without them and play what really is in music.
  3. I guess hiding half slider is cool today. Just irony, it's weird. It's always better if you see what you are playing. At least try to make the ending circle visible, since it will be covered by hitburst and it might be a bit confusing, as it is totally out of the flow in current rotation.
  4. 00:21:224 (2,3,4) - Notes are supposed to be just where they are in a song. This is out of the song. It is supposed to be on 00:21:150 and 00:21:298 (in 1/3 beat divisor), you should move it here, because you actually mapped empty places.
  5. 00:43:224 (2,3) - Use at least a bit of the flow in your maps, if you are aiming for rank, you have to put some logic to the map. Not putting them random so it just "looks" cool. Jumps are good, but this just breaks the flow, and that overlap covers the repeat, so it can be considered as unrankable. Make this slider so it has a logical way to 00:43:668 (3) else your jump has no sensibility.
  6. 01:21:113 (1) - Same suggestion as on Normal.

Insane


  1. Use HP 7, not 6.5. Try to balance it with OD and additionally, 7 is in my opinion minimum for Insane map of this kind.
  2. 00:13:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't see a point in new mappers. Why do they want to increase difficulty by overmapping whole song? If it's not in song, it is not supposed to be mapped, easy. What about doing something like this so the rhythm makes a sense?
    SPOILER
  3. 00:32:557 (6) - After I see, the flowin this pattern doesn't make sense, what about rotating the bump on the other side, so the end of the slider turns the flow exactly to 00:33:001 (1)? Like this.
    SPOILER
  4. 01:21:113 (1) - As I suggested in previous diffs.

hopper's Extra


  1. HP 8, OD 8, since it doesn't make sense to have almost the same settings on extra and insane.
  2. 00:00:558 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - I would rather not comment such an overmap. If I count how many sounds from voice appear in song, and then, how many of sounds did your fantasy make. 15 sounds are really in the song, you mapped 31. That's average 2,07x the reality. This count is really incredibly high, more than half of the first part is your own fantasy. Firstly you should set slider tick rate to 1 as it has no other usage than increasing the combo (yes, this is also an overmap), secondly you should definitely reduce the ammount of fantasy you are adding to maps.

Conclusion: Unrankable

Well.. I would say the Normal difficulty is not bad, this one would definitely be able to get rank after some little improvement. Hard would be a bit problematic, but there is always ability to repair these things - Still, after a understanding how to map properly, you could make hard rankable. Insane is already overmapped and there is almost no flow, It would need to remake a really big part of that. About Extra, I don't even want to talk, it is just simple example of blind mapping. I don't know whether he at least listened to that song. I didn't want to tell you something like: "Your map is shit, stop mapping, you cannot rank anything", that's not the point. You just need to improve many things. Flow, less overmapping, consistency and sensibility (following music), not that much randomness as it contains etc. If you want me to explain anything I said, feel free to PM me in-game, I will be there to help you. If you would want me to teach you to map deeper, I'm open for this request too. I don't mod this to critize you, but to help you if you want.
BluOxy
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Topic Starter
BluOxy

Wafu wrote:



Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion
General


  1. Source is supposed to be: 東京喰種 トーキョーグール (you should always use the original source, not translated/romanised. Change source to this and put Tokyo Ghoul to tags. I see, fixed
  2. You have to capitalize E in "edit" (in song title), so it is: unravel (TV Edit) - Limited edition CD of the song which contains even the TV version of song states its name as unravel (TV Edit), not unravel (TV edit)! fixed
  3. Disable the countdown. It doesn't fit the song since it has no effect, because the song starts calmly. fixed
  4. Disable letterbox during breaks, it has no usage in your map. fixed
  5. If you have skinned hitcircle.png and hitcircleoverlay.png, you are obligate to skin even approachcircle.png and you have to put "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" in every .osu file under [Colors] tab. (Just read ranking criteria) It is unrankable, because people who are using their own skin might find it unplayable, because it doesn't take the files from original skin, but from their current skin, so the mix of your and their own skin might make a perfectly ugly mix. fixing now
  6. You have to make a better difference between 50, 100 and 300 skin. Their colors are exactly the same, so it is easy to misslook them in gameplay. You have to make them more different, chaning the color is an easiest way to fix this. same
  7. You should use another video, this has slightly lower quality that it should have, you might see the squares over whole screen, what's just meh. You can use this one, but don't forget to set video offset to -250 and also remove the original video so it doesn't contain 2, but I think this is obvious: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/653 ... pening.avi hm...it's okay but your url is not working
  8. As you have to skin approcahcircle, because you skinned hitcircles (it's part of it), you have to skin spinner-circle and spinner-approachcircle since you skinned other spinner elements. Simply, same reason as hitcircles, else it's unrankable. fixing
  9. Use consistent Preview times and Countdowns (I recommend to disable countdowns and change preview time on hopper's diff. fixing
  10. Tags within diffs are inconsistent, hopper's tag belongs to Source and source belongs to tags as I mentioned at first issue and opening should be in all diffs.
same


Normal


  1. 00:16:780 (1) - It is very non-appropriate to make ovelaps on Easy/Normal difficulties. These diffs are suppposed to be easy to read and hiding circle under slider is just way to confuse newbies. You should definitely move it away from 00:15:225 (1). It shouldn't be that hard to map it another way.[/color] hm,I don't know where this part is hard.
  2. 00:49:002 (1,2,1) - It is just visual issue, and not even an issue, but just to improve quality of easy normals, it is good to have it perfectly arranged. You might see spacing is same between these sliders, but the gap between 2nd and 3rd slider looks slightly smaller than between 1st and 2nd slider. Just as it is easy/normal diff, consistency helps the player to learn the basics and the perfection makes his experience more pleasant. If you move it for example on 9;208, you will see the gap looks very similar, I can recommend to use this in easy/normal difficulties, if everything fits together, it's always much better than if it's somewhat random placed.　
  3. Try to avoid an overlap, as I mentioned it in first issue. OR use the overlap inteligently, so it doesn't hide a part of hitcircles. Like this, it makes blanket with first slider and it is arranged to square. fixed
    SPOILER
  4. 01:21:113 (1) - You should put whistle here, after you put it on 00:29:447 (1,2), it would fit fine in my opinion as it fits here, it is basically the same sound.
fixed


Hard


  1. HP+1 so the settings are balanced, you should not have that big gap between AR and HP and it is always best if HP and OD are same. fixed
  2. 00:01:446 (3,2,4) - You should remove these 3 notes, since they are just overmapped, it is much more pleasant to play without them and play what really is in music. fixed
  3. I guess hiding half slider is cool today. Just irony, it's weird. It's always better if you see what you are playing. At least try to make the ending circle visible, since it will be covered by hitburst and it might be a bit confusing, as it is totally out of the flow in current rotation. hm,I'll consider it.
  4. 00:21:224 (2,3,4) - Notes are supposed to be just where they are in a song. This is out of the song. It is supposed to be on 00:21:150 and 00:21:298 (in 1/3 beat divisor), you should move it here, because you actually mapped empty places. fixed
  5. 00:43:224 (2,3) - Use at least a bit of the flow in your maps, if you are aiming for rank, you have to put some logic to the map. Not putting them random so it just "looks" cool. Jumps are good, but this just breaks the flow, and that overlap covers the repeat, so it can be considered as unrankable. Make this slider so it has a logical way to 00:43:668 (3) else your jump has no sensibility. I see fixed
  6. 01:21:113 (1) - Same suggestion as on Normal.
　fixed


Insane


  1. Use HP 7, not 6.5. Try to balance it with OD and additionally, 7 is in my opinion minimum for Insane map of this kind.
  2. 00:13:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't see a point in new mappers. Why do they want to increase difficulty by overmapping whole song? If it's not in song, it is not supposed to be mapped, easy. What about doing something like this so the rhythm makes a sense?　it feels rhythmical. not fixed
    SPOILER
  3. 00:32:557 (6) - After I see, the flowin this pattern doesn't make sense, what about rotating the bump on the other side, so the end of the slider turns the flow exactly to 00:33:001 (1)? Like this.　uhm, i don't think so not fixed
    SPOILER
  4. 01:21:113 (1) - As I suggested in previous diffs.
　fixed



Well.. I would say the Normal difficulty is not bad, this one would definitely be able to get rank after some little improvement. Hard would be a bit problematic, but there is always ability to repair these things - Still, after a understanding how to map properly, you could make hard rankable. Insane is already overmapped and there is almost no flow, It would need to remake a really big part of that. About Extra, I don't even want to talk, it is just simple example of blind mapping. I don't know whether he at least listened to that song. I didn't want to tell you something like: "Your map is shit, stop mapping, you cannot rank anything", that's not the point. You just need to improve many things. Flow, less overmapping, consistency and sensibility (following music), not that much randomness as it contains etc. If you want me to explain anything I said, feel free to PM me in-game, I will be there to help you. If you would want me to teach you to map deeper, I'm open for this request too. I don't mod this to critize you, but to help you if you want.
it's really glad. i aim to be ranked this map. so i'll consider overmapped point. thanks!
Wafu
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Wafu
Oh? The link is not working? Tried a reupload to mediafire. https://www.mediafire.com/?omf2x8dc3yp90p6
BluOxy
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Topic Starter
BluOxy
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Last edited by BluOxy , edited 1 time in total.
BluOxy
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Topic Starter
BluOxy
your file is bugging... is it only me?

Wafu wrote:

Oh? The link is not working? Tried a reupload to mediafire. https://www.mediafire.com/?omf2x8dc3yp90p6
Wafu
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Wafu
It works fine for me, I don't know what's wrong here.
Kenneph
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Kenneph
L O V E ALL of it. :) Ranked please.
Dex-OW9
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Dex-OW9
:)
Kenneph
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Kenneph
Perfect!
BluOxy
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Topic Starter
BluOxy
Thanks :)
Well I must change something wrong in this beatmap.
Update is coming soon. (If I'm in the mood to make, I'll make continue)
hopperhtkn
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Joined April 2010
hopperhtkn
細かい修正をしたので一緒にアップデートお願いします！

バグってたので再UPしました
Update
自分で言っといてアレだけどoffsetが遅く感じたので-5にしてあります :?

[General]
訂正
オフセットを-5にした上で
１つ目のTiming Pointを 00:00:331に直し、Time Signatureを4/4にして下さい。
２つ目のTiming Pointを 00:00:775に追加。
３つ目のTiming Pointを 00:08:108に追加。
Open AIModを全ての難易度にかけ、１つの難易度と一致させるようにして下さい。
BluOxy
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BluOxy
Updated!

オフセットは放っておいてもいいのだろうか
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