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[General]
[trammiexo's Easy]
[Minao's Normal]
[Hard]
[Insane]
goodluck~
[General]
- Did you cut the mp3 by yourself? I assume so. If there's no official release of the short ver, then you should delete the '(Short ver.)' from Title
- Why are there two 'Agarest' in Tags? Delete one, it's kinda unnecessary
- It would be better if all diffs end in the same way like in Hard and Insane (with spinner)
[trammiexo's Easy]
- 00:02:144 (3) - lol snap this to 00:02:954 - . currently in my place it's snapped at 00:03:056 -
- 00:05:387 (3,1) - bad flow and it doesn't look good. i'd suggest these patterns 1->2 it requires minimum changes
- 00:09:846 (3,1) - switch nc
- 00:11:873 (1,2,3) - idk tbh i don't really like how it looks. and it doesn't play well. i have a suggestion but it will change some patterns. keep in mind that i switched nc like the above suggestion 1 2 3
- 00:18:765 (4,1) - also the flow and position isn't really good for me. i suggest change slider (4) into a single circle at 00:18:765 - , and then adjust the ds afterward. personally i liked that better, since it accented the song better
- 00:22:819 (3,1) - switch nc. nc should start at big white tick,like 00:19:576 (1) -
- 00:23:225 (1,2) - idk whether you're making a blanket here or not. i'd suggest a better blanket http://puu.sh/cyBuW/ae5af2b35f.jpg
- 00:26:062 (4,1) - switch nc
- 00:34:171 (3,4) - uh weird position. i'd lower the circle a bit http://puu.sh/cyBz9/6f2767997d.jpg
- 00:37:819 (4,1) - also weird position but i kinda liked it and the flow is okay, so meh. i'm just a bit disturbed that these 00:37:819 (4,2) - touch each other a bit. i suggest to re-adjust the position so they won't touch each other http://puu.sh/cyBFT/d9434f448a.jpg
- 00:43:900 (3) - it's kinda common that repeated reverse slider like this is kinda hard for beginners because they're slow to notice the second reverse arrow. so yeah. modders will probably point this out too, so i'd suggest to change the rhythm into two consecutive slider. Pattern Suggestion. this is the best i can made with minimum changes toward pattern afterwards
- 00:51:198 (3,1) - flow isn't really good, and i'm out of suggestions for this
- 00:55:252 (4) - nc
- 01:03:765 (2) - not really fond of this rhythm because you missed the important beat here 01:04:981 - . i'd suggest these patterns 1->2->3 it only requires minimum changes to pattern afterwards
- 01:14:711 (4,1) - switch nc. if you follow, also switch nc 01:17:954 (3) -
some hitsound suggestions because i'm a bit of ocd about it
00:00:117 (1) - adding finish at slider's head seems nice
00:06:603 (1) - ^
00:12:684 (2) - ^, at slider's tail
00:15:522 (5) - ^
00:19:576 (1) - ^, at sider's head
00:26:062 (4) - ^
00:32:549 (1) - ^
00:39:035 (1) - ^
00:48:765 (1) - ^ , same like 00:45:522 (1) -
00:48:360 (4) - clap? since you added some claps before at 00:45:927 (2,3) -
00:53:630 (2) - finish at slider's head
00:55:252 (4) - ^ , also add one at slider's tail
00:58:495 (1) - finish at slider's head. to accent the beginning of chorus
01:01:738 (1) - clap at reverse arrow, because you added one at 01:00:927 -
01:10:657 (3) - finish at slider's tail. there's a legit loud cymbal in the music
01:14:711 (4) - ^, at slider's head
01:17:954 (3) - ^
01:23:630 (5) - ^, at slider's tail
[Minao's Normal]
- 00:26:062 (7,1) - switch nc. nc should start at big white tick
- 00:30:927 (5,7) - lol idk this overlap should be fine if it's in harder diff, but i doubt it's okay in normal. i'd rather place 00:32:144 (7) - elsewhere as long as it's not covered by 00:30:927 (5) - 's slider body. just to be safe
- 00:39:035 (1) - ds is a bit off (too close with previous note)
- 00:55:252 (3) - i'd rather nc this, since it's in a completely different rhythm with 00:52:008 (1,2) -
00:00:117 (1) - finish at slider's head, to accent the beginning of the song (and there's also cymbal noise)
some hitsound suggestion because i'm a huge dick with finish hitsound
00:06:603 (1) - ^, there's a legit cymbal sound in the music
00:16:333 (1) - ^
00:19:576 (1) - ^
00:26:062 (7) - finish
00:32:549 (1) - finish at slider's head
00:39:035 (1) - ^
00:42:279 (1) - ^
00:52:008 (1) - ^
00:53:630 (2) - ^
00:55:252 (3) - finish
00:56:873 (1) - finish at slider's head
00:58:495 (1) - ^
01:04:981 (4) - ^
01:11:468 (1) - ^
01:16:333 (7) - finish
01:17:954 (5) - finish at slider's head
if some of those suggestions overlap with clap, i suggest to remove the clap and add finish. idk it's up to you tho. but it doesn't sound bad when you combine finish and clap
well, overall it's quite neat. blankets and flow are good, but you follow the vocal a lot. not really a big problem since your rhythm is consistent thus making it enjoyable to play, but i feel disturbed at this part 00:45:725 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - because you missed two important beats here 00:45:522 - 00:48:765 - it might not be a big problem for some people, but idk those two beats are followed by loud cymbal noises that makes me want to click something. and when there's nothing to click, it feels a bit weird, but i immediately realized that you were following the vocal lol. well, just pointing it out. it's not a really big deal tho. nice diff btw
[Hard]
- 00:16:333 (1) - how about spinner starts at 00:16:434 - ends at 00:18:360 - and then add a circle at 00:16:333 - ? i think it's good if you'd accented 00:16:333 - by adding something to click
- 00:28:089 (6,7) - i think it's better if you use the usual ds but it's up to you
- 00:47:853 (7) - the vocal actually start at 00:47:954 - , so rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/cyEiI/3d9f597225.jpg
- 01:13:089 - add a note here? there's a loud cymbal noise there, you can make a good accent of it, plus the rhythm will flow better
there are some stacks that are a bit off but meh doesn't really affect the gameplay when i tested it
also some hitsound suggestion
00:00:117 (1) - finish at slider's head
00:06:603 (1) - ^
01:16:333 (4) - finish
01:17:549 (1) - finish at reverse arrow
i like how you use the drum hitsounds btw
[Insane]
- tbh can't find anything major here
- 00:05:792 (6,7) - how about making the distance a bit farther? makes it more interesting to play
- 00:26:468 (3,4,5) - would be better if you fix these stacks
- 00:44:711 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is kinda hard for me lol ignore this
- 00:48:360 (6) - soft-hitfinish at slider's tail
- 01:20:995 - add a note? well idk since this is insane. would be better if you make the overall rhythm a bit dense like the previous pattern
- 01:24:441 (1) - finish?
goodluck~