Hi, i saw your map on #modreqs
[Hard]
00:14:723 (1,2) - This stack interrupts the flow due to the large gap in the timeline in comparison to the previous notes, could this go differently?
00:16:708 (5,1) - The new vocal line starts at the end of the slider making the comboing awkward you could try spliting the slider and add a new combo at 00:17:149 while removing it from (1), or you could try moving the new combo to the slider.
00:22:663 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I like this pattern ^_^
00:23:986 (1) - I think this new combo is unnecessary.
00:34:959 (1) - This slider's way too short and is snapped to a 1/8 while the rest of your map is 1/4, i suggest just placing a note on the white tick instead.
00:53:761 (7,8,9) - Use a Crescendo here? (A crescendo is an increase in volume over time)
00:58:834 (1) - What's the point of this slider if you're gonna transition into a stream anyway, you could change this into a slider stream or into a normal note stream.
[Railgun's Normal]
00:03:705 (1) - Sliders like this trip new players, unless an Easy is planned, i suggest you change these into a normal slider. (Repeat for all other sliders like this)
01:25:311 (3,4) - This is very trippy for new players i suggest remove the stack or the repeat (this short repeat should be fine since it's kiai)
01:32:810 (3,1) - Eh it's better if you dont stack these as there's quite a bunch of difference in the timeline.
Looks okayish for a Normal, but unless an easier difficulty is planned is better to take those suggestions.
Nice map and sweet song overall, I like it, have a star to help you out ^_^
[Hard]
00:14:723 (1,2) - This stack interrupts the flow due to the large gap in the timeline in comparison to the previous notes, could this go differently?
00:16:708 (5,1) - The new vocal line starts at the end of the slider making the comboing awkward you could try spliting the slider and add a new combo at 00:17:149 while removing it from (1), or you could try moving the new combo to the slider.
00:22:663 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I like this pattern ^_^
00:23:986 (1) - I think this new combo is unnecessary.
00:34:959 (1) - This slider's way too short and is snapped to a 1/8 while the rest of your map is 1/4, i suggest just placing a note on the white tick instead.
00:53:761 (7,8,9) - Use a Crescendo here? (A crescendo is an increase in volume over time)
00:58:834 (1) - What's the point of this slider if you're gonna transition into a stream anyway, you could change this into a slider stream or into a normal note stream.
[Railgun's Normal]
00:03:705 (1) - Sliders like this trip new players, unless an Easy is planned, i suggest you change these into a normal slider. (Repeat for all other sliders like this)
01:25:311 (3,4) - This is very trippy for new players i suggest remove the stack or the repeat (this short repeat should be fine since it's kiai)
01:32:810 (3,1) - Eh it's better if you dont stack these as there's quite a bunch of difference in the timeline.
Looks okayish for a Normal, but unless an easier difficulty is planned is better to take those suggestions.
Nice map and sweet song overall, I like it, have a star to help you out ^_^