Genocide wrote:
[tom and Jerry's Oni]
01:09:135 (126) - kat There is no rise in pitch at all here as it maintains the same pitch as 01:08:770 (125) so no change ><
01:15:721 - kat Okay
01:17:733 - don here Okay, I added a don at 01:16:270 as well so that it's consistent
01:18:648 - kat Ok, added extra don at 01:19:196 and 01:19:928 as well so that it is consistent with the others
01:21:574 - kat Added along with a don at 01:22:123 so that it is consistent with your other suggestions
01:23:587 - don I don't hear any extra beats here in the music @@
01:24:501 - kat Added along with a don at 01:25:050 and 01:25:782 so it's consistent with your other suggestions
01:26:696 - don here No add >< This is completely different section from the ones above and I want it to have a very slow and separated feeling with the single notes so that it compliments the vocals for this part
02:14:623 (481) - K The beat goes lower and slower for this part, so I think a D would be more appropriate
qoot8123 wrote:
[ Jerry's Oni]
00:11:513 (35) - try to use k here? the piano's pitch is pretty high Alright
00:23:952 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - try to follow the drum here? this pattern is a bit uncoordinated with former part Okay, made some adjustments so that it follows the drums of the music
00:56:331 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - ^ Done
00:35:111 (171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - reduce some note here? It sounds fine as it is though >< I'll change it if more people point it out but for now I'll keep it as it is.
01:07:306 (109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125) - ^ ^ Same for this
00:50:477 (234) - put notes to replace slider? this slider is a bit weird to me Replaced it with a ddddk
Thanks for the mods! >w<Charlotte wrote:
Jerry's Oni
Add preview point Opps, totally forgotten hahahaha. Added
OD5→6 (be better?) I think the current OD is fine >< No reason to make it so hard
02:07:398 (435) - change d Alright
ddddkkkkd ←This pattern is often. Let's challenge to the pattern of the other おk~changed 01:07:306 - 01:55:599 - and 01:50:477 -
Update : http://puu.sh/aBcsI/1c5c7a5dcb.osu